This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Tuesday, June 6, 2017 at 9:36:06 PM

Artist: Suara
Title: Fuantei na Kamisama
Source: うたわれるもの 偽りの仮面
Tags: utawarerumono itsuwari no kamen opening tv size
BPM: 156
Filesize: 3803kb
Play Time: 01:26
Difficulties Available:

1. EZ - 4Key (1.33 stars, 271 notes)
2. HD - 4Key (2.9 stars, 755 notes)
3. NM - 4Key (1.92 stars, 394 notes)

Download: Suara - Fuantei na Kamisama
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Going for ranked

any mod appriciated / looking for BN checks

/still working on juankristal mod~/ (thank you!)

hi hi mod from NM req Ly0 and Syadow's MANiA QUEUE
Feel Free to reject, this mod just my suggestion
Note : For Mania maybe follow the instrument not vocal like std *cmiiw*
I love this song xD
Good luck

Thanks so much for your time and for modding a lot of helpful advice! (i need better colours.. blue is changed, purple is response mostly)

M4M

[General]
vocal mapping, hmm.. i should say you better remap whole stuff where you layer vocal, and layer the instrument properly :<
01:26:855 - make all ln stop here in all diff

[HD]
o, i had to agree with syadow, the vocal layering is kinda too much, while the vocal in BGA is louder, in mania its recommended to map percussion & instruments as main pattern.. i aware the current diff structure will affect BN discretion in future :<
but vocal layering aside, the non-vocal part you mapped is very good, i almost found nothing

00:13:202 - add something, don't follow vocal
00:22:240 (22240|3) - to 3,
00:22:625 (22625|0) - to 3,
00:22:817 (22817|2,22913|1,23009|3,23009|2) - ctrl + h
00:23:202 (23202|0) - to 4,
00:23:394 (23394|3,23586|1) - to 1 & 3 respectively
00:25:125 (25125|2,25317|3) - the percussion-to-vocal transition is very awkward
00:56:086 (56086|2) - add 1
00:59:163 (59163|0) - again, the percussion-to-vocal transition is very awkward



[NM]
generally same problem in HD about vocal

00:08:202 (8202|0) - move to 3, 00:08:394 (8394|0) - add in 2
00:09:163 (9163|0) - add 1 note
00:11:471 (11471|3) - awkward as i mentioned in hd

[EZ]
generally same problem in HD & NM o.o

00:06:855 - add ln until 00:08:394 (8394|0) - ,
00:08:394 (8394|0) - add 1 more note
00:12:625 (12625|2) - to 2, long jack is too hard for EZ diff
00:13:202 - add

01:01:663 (61663|1,62048|1) - to 3, same reason, don't make jack pattern in EZ diff
01:22:240 (82240|0) - fill each 1/1, there's a strong beat, map it C:
01:26:471 (86471|2,86663|1,86855|1) - 1 2 3 respectively

[overall]
had to say this map would be 100% perfect if you layer the percussion & instrument as main pattern, seems you have experience with editor tho..

good luck!

ajeemaniz wrote:

M4M

SPOILER

[General]
vocal mapping, hmm.. i should say you better remap whole stuff where you layer vocal, and layer the instrument properly :<
01:26:855 - make all ln stop here in all diff ok wasn't sure which would feel better. i like no LN

[HD]
o, i had to agree with syadow, the vocal layering is kinda too much, while the vocal in BGA is louder, in mania its recommended to map percussion & instruments as main pattern.. i aware the current diff structure will affect BN discretion in future :<
but vocal layering aside, the non-vocal part you mapped is very good, i almost found nothing made some changes to easier LN to fix, i need to think about the beginning/ piano sections still

00:13:202 - add something, don't follow vocal changed, lmk what u think
00:22:240 (22240|3) - to 3,
00:22:625 (22625|0) - to 3,
00:22:817 (22817|2,22913|1,23009|3,23009|2) - ctrl + h ^x3 love it!
00:23:202 (23202|0) - to 4,
00:23:394 (23394|3,23586|1) - to 1 & 3 respectively mm okay feels good
00:25:125 (25125|2,25317|3) - the percussion-to-vocal transition is very awkward i think its better for now (still reworking section)
00:56:086 (56086|2) - add 1 should be fine where i added one
00:59:163 (59163|0) - again, the percussion-to-vocal transition is very awkward fix :3



[NM]
generally same problem in HD about vocal

00:08:202 (8202|0) - move to 3, 00:08:394 (8394|0) - add in 2
00:09:163 (9163|0) - add 1 note
00:11:471 (11471|3) - awkward as i mentioned in hd all fix, and should transition way better now

[EZ]
generally same problem in HD & NM o.o

00:06:855 - add ln until 00:08:394 (8394|0) - ,
00:08:394 (8394|0) - add 1 more note
00:12:625 (12625|2) - to 2, long jack is too hard for EZ diff i moved it to 3
00:13:202 - add

01:01:663 (61663|1,62048|1) - to 3, same reason, don't make jack pattern in EZ diff
01:22:240 (82240|0) - fill each 1/1, there's a strong beat, map it C: :3 fix all
01:26:471 (86471|2,86663|1,86855|1) - 1 2 3 respectively

[overall]
had to say this map would be 100% perfect if you layer the percussion & instrument as main pattern, seems you have experience with editor tho..

good luck!

Thanks so much for modding, reworking vocal based sectionsc:
Alright, changed things around a bit, should be a lot less focus on vocals.

Hi ho,

note thoose are only suggestion feel free


Good Luck :3
cooly song

Eternalie wrote:

Hi ho,

note thoose are only suggestion feel free

dadon

key=1/2/3/4
[HD]
00:04:548 (4548|1) - remove there is no sound here (unless it was meant for vocal but else you would have to add note to the other parts aswell)
^to be fair I know ajee just told you to less focus on vocals and more on drum but hey , imo here vocals would make a super cool impact on the song
I would have map it like this well the choice is up to you , the point is there is no drum sound at this place
tldr: vocal mapping is probably more ''efficient'' at this specific part of the song i hear a sound there, but tbh i like vocal mapping. if more people like vocal mapping i might switch back to what i had be4.. i remember all the patterns i used before so it will be ok :3. we will see what more peopel think, for now will stay with instuments. I love vocals myself~ and it is a huge part of this song inparticular

00:06:086 (6086|2) - this one however is also a instru sound , or you can do like above and map additional vocal sounds , or you can make a LN from this note
and make the said LN end here : 00:06:855 (6855|2) - i change for both hd/nm. i think i like with LN.

00:14:067 (14067|1,14163|3) - Ctrl+J for pattern , I'd also say pitch but i'm not really sure so =w=a
00:15:605 (15605|0,15702|1) - Ctrl+J ^ same suggestion i will keep these same. i do like the idea though. I like the jack emphasis for the sound

00:25:317 (25317|3,25317|0) - Two timming point exist here (check ai mod) Press F6 then delete one of them
^this have to be change in all diff no wonder it changed the hitsounds sometimes. thanks. my aimod doesnt show it. but i see it

oh boy , I noticed the piano hitsounds , well this song dosn't have only two piano notes that's just not possible
maybe you forget about thoose hitsounds but their pitch dosn't accord to the song since some of them plays on notes that isn't on that pitch such as
00:26:855 (26855|0,26855|3,27240|1,27625|0) - and more , well I don't recommand the piano hitsounds unless you find all the pitch and perfectly match them OK yes i want piano sounds. I will find better piano hitsounds. Maybe ask someone whos better at piano then myself.. It's so hard not knowing all the pitches and what not, so i have to go through them all. I will be changing this, i ned time for hitsounding though. It's pretty hard for me lol

00:47:192 (47192|2) - I don't really understand what this note is mapped to (but ayy in the flow it goes actually well so up to you there) umm haha i think this sound is on this timestamp but the one before it is off. I wanted to keep it in rhythm and keep fast feeling with playing to emphasize part. but idk, i love it. I guess remove if people dislike it later on xd

[NM]
00:04:548 (4548|1) - same suggest as HD hmm i hear smthing here
00:06:086 (6086|2) - ^ changed to ln/moved sutff around to acoomadate for LN
00:13:394 (13394|1) - add note to 2 for flow hm not to sure about this one/ ill play aroudn with it though. only one jack patern was intended here
00:13:202 (13202|2) - this should be a double according to : 00:16:086 (16086|1,16086|0,16278|0,16278|1) - same sounds
00:45:125 (45125|0,45125|1) - should be one note only , there is not a really loud sound here imho agree, moved 00:45:317 (45317|1) - to c4 to make better play then :3

[EZ]
00:49:163 (49163|0,49355|0,49548|3,49740|3) - jacks is maybe abit tricky for newcomer I'd suggest something like i try to do something like his for now. i like the alt pattern plus it makes a good follow up on the next pattern. but you are right maybe too close together for jacksthis
01:14:932 (74932|1) - move to 3 or 1 to make a pattern with : 01:15:317 (75317|3,75509|2) - ok moved to 3. should feel perfect now
01:21:855 (81855|3) - add one more note according to : 01:20:317 (80317|2,80317|0) - added

Good Luck :3
cooly song

fix the rest later
Looking for better piano hitsounds, i miss the vocal mapping :C
thanks so much for modding (:

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Staravia wrote:

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HD
00:13:009 (13009|3) - i would make this hold and 00:13:202 (13202|0) - this tap it does feel rather weird, i'll try rearranging it a bit lol
01:00:990 - forgot what i changed, but this feels better to play https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5889256 the original felt off the first try, then it felt nice every other time, but ill keep this in mind, thanks
01:01:663 (61663|3,61855|3,62048|3) - ctrl+left feels better playing with diff different fingers instead of middle fingers hmm i think both on outer columns feels better
01:02:240 - I would do this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5889359 feels more better to play i see how it could feel better, but i think this feels same too. also this pattern emphasizes 01:02:625 (62625|3,62625|0) - much better, and just brings the whole section together
01:03:202 - add dot at 1 for drum and 01:03:586 - add dot at 2 I would have done that if i didn't feel the 2 note jack pattern was a huge part of the rhythm. http://puu.sh/qHLZj/95a125f392.jpg (orginal) compared to http://puu.sh/qHM1L/f25e045493.png (changed) now the jacks are off balance, and one is 3 in a row
01:13:971 - add dot at 1 ill add if a lot more people suggest it, right now its supposed to compliment 01:14:452 (74452|2,74548|0,74548|1,74548|3) -
01:14:355 -
I would 01:14:548 (74548|3) - remove and add at 1 and 3 to emphasize the drum like what you did @ 01:15:317 - this is a weird section, but it feels nice for me. the note 01:14:740 (74740|2) - is supposed to make 01:14:548 (74548|0,74548|1,74548|3) - this still powerful for cymbal crash and then emphasize drum and prepare for next pattern also
01:26:663 (86663|1) - i would move to 3 and 01:26:855 (86855|2,86855|3) - ctrl+left it is nice, but the jack pattern for the vocal closes out the song really nice

NM is fine to me

EZ
00:45:317 (45317|0,45702|1,46086|2,46471|0,46663|1,46855|2) - i wouldn't go 0-1-2 0-1-2 because pitch good idea, it worked both ways but i like the pitch idea lol changed to 210-321

purple - thinking w/ comment

You got me thinking about tons of stuff lol Thanks for helpful mod~
Thnks for stars also staravia, shrukaghn

hi ~


NM | M4M | GDs

|1|2|3|4|

- Ly0572 - wrote:

hi ~


NM | M4M | GDs

|1|2|3|4|

easy

00:08:778 (8778|1,9163|2) - ctrl+h better flow
00:13:009 - from here i suggest this = http://puu.sh/qHK3H/b977ec7c72.png i added note here 00:13:202 - coz i hear something xD
00:19:163 - try this pattern~ its more comfortable imo http://puu.sh/qHKfT/7d051fc497.png
00:22:240 - and this http://puu.sh/qHKmd/8998807554.png
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00:34:932 (34932|0,35317|1,35702|2) - eyy u folling the vocals? heres my suggestion for that :
from here 00:32:240 -
http://puu.sh/qHKws/4df6dc6907.png
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00:37:240 (37240|2) - delete ghost note
00:43:586 (43586|2) - maybe move this here 00:43:778 -
00:56:471 (56471|3) - move to |3|
01:03:009 (63009|0,63394|3) - delete~ note the same sound as 01:03:778 (63778|2,63778|0) -
01:09:355 (69355|1,69740|1) - delete coz its just a ez diff, no need to make it that hard
01:11:086 (71086|2,71086|3) - delete one of them
01:12:625 (72625|1,72625|2) - delete one of them
01:20:317 (80317|2,80317|0) - delete one of them
01:22:048 (82048|2) - delete also
01:23:009 (83009|2,83394|1,83778|2) - ctrl+h
01:26:278 (86278|2) - move this here 01:26:086 -
01:26:471 (86471|0,86663|1) - delete
01:26:855 (86855|3,86855|2) - y nat Ln ends here 01:29:932 -

normal

00:08:202 (8202|2) - ayy ghost note, delete
00:11:663 (11663|2) - ^^
00:12:048 (12048|3) - ^^
00:13:971 (13971|1,14163|0) - ctrl+j
00:29:932 - y nat do it like this 00:26:855 (26855|0,27240|3,27625|1,28009|3,28394|0) -
00:37:240 (37240|3) - delete
then extend this LN 00:36:855 (36855|0) - up to here 00:37:625 -
00:39:452 (39452|2,39548|3,39836|1,39932|0) - pls change this like 00:42:625 (42625|1,42625|0,43009|3,43009|2) - same with the others
00:45:125 (45125|0,45317|0) - i dont think this is a gud idea maybe move this 00:45:125 (45125|0) - to |2|
00:52:528 (52528|2) - move to the next white line
00:59:932 - suggestion = http://puu.sh/qHMfH/4972517fca.png
01:15:125 (75125|3,75125|0) - delete
01:26:855 (86855|3,86855|0) - Ln again up to here 01:29:932 -

hard

00:06:086 (6086|0) - this Ln ends here 00:06:471 -
then add another Ln here 00:06:471 - |3|
00:10:894 (10894|2) - move to|4|
00:10:990 - add to |3|
00:18:778 (18778|2,18875|0,18971|2) - make this doubles
00:25:125 - add two notes coz this is same as 00:24:548 (24548|1,24548|3,24548|0,24740|3,24740|0,24740|2,24932|3,24932|0,24932|1) -
00:51:086 - should be 3 notes?
00:52:625 - ^^
00:54:163 - ^^
00:55:702 - ^^
00:57:240 - ^^
00:58:778 - ^^
00:59:163 (59163|1,59355|2,59452|1) - ctrl+h
01:00:317 - triple notes
01:00:509 (60509|2) - move to |2|
01:01:663 (61663|0,61663|3,61855|0,61855|3,62048|3,62048|0) - triple notes
01:04:163 - ^^
01:04:932 - ^^
01:05:702 - ^^
01:06:471 - ^^
01:07:240 - ^^
01:08:009 - ^^
01:08:778 - ^^
01:09:355 (69355|1) - move this here 01:09:452 -
01:10:317 - triple
01:11:086 - ^^
01:11:855 - ^^
01:12:625 - ^^
01:12:240 (72240|1,72240|0,72240|3) - delete one note
01:12:625 - triple
01:14:067 (74067|2,74067|0) - delete
01:14:163 - triple
01:16:471 - ^^
01:17:240 - ^^
01:18:009 - ^^
01:18:778 - ^^
01:19:548 - ^^
01:21:086 - ^^
01:23:394 - ^^
01:24:932 - ^^
01:26:855 (86855|0,86855|3,86855|2) - Ln up to here 01:29:932 -

The reply i had deleted for unknown reason, but if you prefer me to go through the mod and reply let me know. Sorry it took so long. I did change about 75% of the suggestions (: (most of the 3) i felt it helped bring out the music more. thansk again for the mod and sorry late !

[HD]
00:00:702 - unused green line, remove.
00:12:432 (12432|1) - i feel like this note should be chorded too because pretty much they're the same sound with 00:12:625 (12625|1,12625|0,12817|1,12817|0) -
00:13:009 (13009|3,13202|0) - same sound as 00:16:086 (16086|1,16086|3,16086|0,16278|1,16278|0,16278|3) - but different density? you also have double notes in NM here lol
00:25:125 (25125|2) - this one feels a lil bit weird for me. should be a double chord or something here
00:47:192 (47192|2) - really questionable 1/8 here. it goes very well with the song but I don't think blocko would like this :v
00:55:509 (55509|3,55702|2) - i think you missed a 1/4 here judging on how you map previous pattern
01:14:067 (74067|0,74067|2,74163|1) - ctrl+J
[NM]
00:52:528 (52528|2) - should be on the white tick tbh
00:59:163 (59163|1) - double chord, there's a crash
01:00:702 (60702|3) - same
01:15:125 (75125|3,75125|0) - there's nothing here to emphasis, remove one of them
[EZ]
seems fine for me :3

puxtu wrote:

[HD]
00:00:702 - unused green line, remove. removed on all diff
00:12:432 (12432|1) - i feel like this note should be chorded too because pretty much they're the same sound with 00:12:625 i have no idea what to do with this part, ill add it lol(12625|1,12625|0,12817|1,12817|0) -]ok i changed the section around a bit, cause i felt it didnt flow, but now i think it does
00:13:009 (13009|3,13202|0) - same sound as 00:16:086 (16086|1,16086|3,16086|0,16278|1,16278|0,16278|3) - but different density? you also have double notes in NM here lol lmao oops, i made the first a triple and 2nd a double, and on normal its double/ single now
00:25:125 (25125|2) - this one feels a lil bit weird for me. should be a double chord or something here done
00:47:192 (47192|2) - really questionable 1/8 here. it goes very well with the song but I don't think blocko would like this :v ill hold on to it for now i think its okay but i will see
00:55:509 (55509|3,55702|2) - i think you missed a 1/4 here judging on how you map previous pattern i left it out to emphasize the next pattern and i think it faes out to much and can be left out and still flow, if more ppl want it i will add
01:14:067 (74067|0,74067|2,74163|1) - ctrl+J ok and i moved c3 to c4
[NM]
00:52:528 (52528|2) - should be on the white tick tbh llol yea ur right
00:59:163 (59163|1) - double chord, there's a crash added
01:00:702 (60702|3) - same
01:15:125 (75125|3,75125|0) - there's nothing here to emphasis, remove one of them removed 1, i think it was the better one to remove hmm lol
[EZ]
seems fine for me :3

Thanks for modding helpful(:

WE MAY BE STRANGERS BUT WE ARE BOUND WITH KUDOSU

let's go ^o^

Kruzon wrote:

WE MAY BE STRANGERS BUT WE ARE BOUND WITH KUDOSU

let's go ^o^

NM

00:49:932 (49932|1,49932|0) - the crash sound felt underwhelming the moment you used dual notes on upcoming section 00:51:086 (51086|2,51086|3) - , either widened the gap to accentuate the crash properly, or do something about the latter dual notes c: i don't understand,i am sorry. I tried to hitsound this well but i am not sure

00:52:625 (52625|2,52625|0,53009|3,53009|1) - imo, the vocal rhythm sound like it's pushing inward? perhaps rearrange your current pattern, maybe like 1 l 4 ~ 2 l 3 ? on the bright side, i like how you map the vocals around here 01:19:548 (79548|3,79740|2,79932|3,80125|1,80317|2,80509|0) - i rearranged things to make everything fit better w it cause i like it. there is a few part i need to balance flow. so i will see,i change more than parts. but i did map to music so if can capture both i will try~

01:21:855 (81855|0) - quite loud, perhaps add another note i think it will be ok as is, the stream emphasize it enough to leave it out. if more people suggest i will add, but think flows and feels fine

01:22:240 (82240|1,82240|2,82625|3,82625|0,83009|2,83009|1,83394|3,83394|0) - these vocal notes arrangement could be better! let's see.. how about https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6298070 - i changed to balance out better

01:24:932 (84932|1,84932|3,85317|2,85317|0) - i've explained my reasoning regarding this situation, hence for the sake of consistency, you might want to rearrange them w-wait scratch that! i ended up remapping a chunk out of them, check em out https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6298100 ok ill try for now see what people say. i like it, it does job fine

Okay, that's it! Good luck with your map

thanks for surprise mod haha x) some good thinking

Hi.

Just a random mod

1 l 2 l 3 l 4

[EZ]

-ZaHiL wrote:

Hi.

Just a random mod

1 l 2 l 3 l 4

[EZ]

00:05:317 (5317|2) - move to 1st col for hand balance
00:12:240 (12240|1,12432|2,12625|1,12817|2,13009|1,13009|0) - Ctrl + H and move 00:13:394 (13394|2) - to 1st col hmm i think its fine as is, ill keep this in mind howevr
00:16:086 (16086|3,16278|3,24548|3,24740|3,24932|0,25125|0) - avoid mini jack in EZ diff what do you thik about moving 00:16:471 (16471|2) - to c2 and moving 00:25:317 (25317|1) - to c3? so it takes stress off one hand? i think jacks are important for the set here so thinking of other ways
00:26:278 (26278|2) - del
00:29:355 (29355|1) - ^hm ok to both, watched a few ppl play think its better to delete now
00:28:009 (28009|1) - you can move this up to the red tick going to leave this one be
00:40:702 (40702|0,40702|1) - del 1 note (00:40:702 (40702|0) - in my opinion) i changed it to mirror better from previous part like so: http://puu.sh/rHQWr/ff49c508c6.jpg wanted to leave double chord cause of loud noise and previous one at00:37:625 (37625|0,37625|1) -
01:02:625 (62625|3) - del i think there should be a note there, how about removing LN and making 1/2 jack pattern into dbl chords?
01:03:009 (63009|0,63009|2,63394|3,63394|1) - del 1 note in each tick. (This part can be like this http://puu.sh/rHji5/9b44e11471.jpg&#41;
01:04:163 lol wow this feels nice, move next note to 3 also~(64163|3,64932|1,64932|2,65702|1,66471|1,66471|0,67240|0,68009|3,68009|0,68778|3,70317|2,71086|3,71086|2,71855|2,72625|1,72625|2,73394|2,74163|2) - (and many more) same sound but why 1 note and 2 notes ? just a pattern to follow the music, and introduce it, dont want it to be all single note, or all double note
01:22:240 (82240|1) - move to col 3 to avoid mini jack and then move 01:22:625 (82625|1) - to col 2 ok to all below this, been looking for a solution for this for a bit, good idea.
01:23:009 (83009|1,83778|1,84548|1) - del (no need 2 notes)
01:24:163 (84163|2) - move to col 2

Thank you for surprise mod<3 such a nice EZ modding ( i really need to pick better colors lol)

Mod from: CommandoBlack's [4k Mania] queue - t/511195
Rule 1. The song must not be anime (Your lucky this is one of the very few anime that I didn't hate)

CommandoBlack wrote:

Mod from: CommandoBlack's [4k Mania] queue - t/511195
Rule 1. The song must not be anime (Your lucky this is one of the very few anime that I didn't hate)

EZ

Move 00:28:009 (28009|1) - to 00:28:202

NM

Remove 00:37:240 (37240|3) - Add a note at 00:37:432

Hard (Hitsound request)

00:02:240 (2240|3) - Finish
00:03:009 (3009|3) - Clap (Remove Finish) i kept the finish cause its the sound im looking for
00:05:317 (5317|1) - Remove Finish
00:05:317 (5317|1) - Remove Finish kept
00:08:778 (8778|0) - Clap (Do the same for similar sounds in the song (Mostly found on the 1/4 sections of the chart)) okiedokes
00:12:432 (12432|2,12625|2,12817|2) - Remove the Finish
00:40:509 (40509|2,40702|3) - Add Clap
00:43:394 (43394|0) - Remove Clap decided for whistle cause not the same as others.. i think
01:12:240 (72240|0) - Remove a Finish here

Hard

00:02:817 add a note
00;03:394 ^
00:03:586 ^
00:16:567 (16567|1) - Move to 00:16:471 (error)i left the note the same, it was intended to be there.. also kept Hard the samestructure wise.. im pretty satisfied with it except maybe.. 2 sections which is ALRIGHT but.. maybe better? its fine for me i suppose.. so i wont write anything out of question u know [also just went on a tangent in this answer sorry]

Hey this response is very late.. but ive been busy, but thank you VERY much for checking out my chart and looking at hitsounds as well. I really do appriciate it.

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00:05:317 (5317|1) - Split that hitsound, make it F-C instead of F and C in the same note.
00:08:394 (8394|0) - ^
00:11:471 (11471|0) - ^ overall just everywhere


00:22:240 (22240|2) - Move this one to 4, avoid that 3 note anchor in slot 3.

00:23:394 (23394|1,23586|2) - I think its more suitable to have jacks in this sounds as the song repeats instruments on there and not in 00:23:586 (23586|2,23778|2) - here. You probably should keep that jack consistent on the whole section.

00:20:221 (20221|2,21759|1,23298|2,24452|2) - I find those 1/4s quite not intuitive. Even while they are consistent so you can -see them coming- the sound that you are following (given the accentuation you use on the doubles pointed previously) is the (i dont know how that instrument is called so I am just going to call it weird guitar) weird guitar. So deleting those 1/4s would be a good idea in my eyes. Even doing accentuation on the previous notes in red snaps as doubles would work well too.

00:38:490 (38490|2) - I am wondering if there is a sound over there or if they are just triplets. I think you have to delete this one.

00:39:836 (39836|0) - I also believe this one is a bit not intuitive since it promotes you repetition on a pattern that its not working the same way as the previous one (1[34]) so I would probably delete that one and keep that break as a clear sign of the longer stream that is coming.
00:44:067 (44067|0) - kinda similar

00:49:452 - I would add one here on 4 just for the sake of ending it cooler.

00:53:490 (53490|1) - Preeetty sure you have to delete one, really not intuitive stream over there and the break suits it better. Plus I dont even know if there is a strong enough sound there.
00:55:605 - add here, same reason but opposite.

00:57:048 (57048|0) - Move this one to 3rd column to balance the pattern a bit better between both hands and creating that trill motion that supports the instrument as it goes back and forth a bit.

01:04:548 (64548|3,64740|2,64932|3,65125|2,65317|3,65509|2,65702|3,65894|2,66086|3) - Well, thats a long trill.

01:07:144 (67144|0) - I would delete that one, again, it breaks the flow a little bit.

01:09:259 - 01:09:452 - I am sad you didnt mapped this ones :c

overall I find the kiai a bit mesy still, I am not really doing well trying to figure out what exactly are you trying to follow and it sometimes feels like you are ignoring stuff you shouldnt or focusing on stuff you are not doing on the whole ending. I suggest you to try and get me someday on IRC to check those things and make it easier for both of us. I would also advice to get more mods to get that kiai a bit more consistent before pushing this forward. Get a couple, you should be fine.

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