Nymph_ wrote:

Try to do a m4m req here~ little suggestions:

Normal:
00:45:648 (4) - nazi: up 1 grid Fixed!
00:50:558 (1,2,3) - nazi:a little ugly...make this slider more beautiful? It looks fine to me X_X any suggestions?
01:18:921 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - still not beautiful.. It's supposed to be slanted like that
01:21:921 (2,3) - nazi: up? Fixed! and moved up the slider and the whole pattern too so spacing isnt screwed up.
02:44:012 (4) - still spacing not beautiful for me. up for a little bit? Changed the slider a bit
I think this diff can improve the spacing,cause the spacing now is not very neat and tidy. Hitsound is good~ nothing to pick out =w=


Insane:
02:11:830 (4,5) - nazi: right for a little bit? x+2 Nice catch! Fixed
02:13:466 (2) - nazi: up 1 grid? Fixed
02:16:466 (1,2,3,4) - this place feel a little weird, although they are trying to follow the vocal.. I suggest like this:

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Not really because the vocal starts on the red tick.
02:31:602 (7) - seems a little uncomfortable for me, maybe move it to 02:31:466? Don't see why, the "ka" from "kokure" it's alining perfectly fine there
And I strongly suggest to use normal hitsound during the last Kial, I think it makes the song more intense lol~ I dont like using normal-hitnormal as a normal hitsound (if that made any sense) which is why im using normal-hitnormal on enphasis places that arent as epic, and on the epic ones, finishes
others fine~

That is all~ star~

Sakura Hana wrote:

Nymph_ wrote:

Try to do a m4m req here~ little suggestions:

Normal:
00:50:558 (1,2,3) - nazi:a little ugly...make this slider more beautiful? It looks fine to me X_X any suggestions? I suggest 1 1grid right, 3 1grid right and 1 grid down, it seems good for me~ also we can change the slider shape, but it is more complicated..
01:18:921 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - still not beautiful.. It's supposed to be slanted like that But I still think changing a little bit is better...for 1357 is not neatly in a line, isn't this better*_*?

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Sakura Hana wrote:

@Dusty: Yeah but you took long, and i decided to unlazy myself to map it since i love the song

Dusty wrote:

[Insane]
00:29:552 (2) - maybe copy+paste (1) then rotate it 180 degrees? this isn't quite symmetrical ugh, this is what happens when you make stuff without c/p and try to make them similar, however the problem is that due to distance snap, it's quite hard to make the 2nd slider start where i want to.
01:15:371 (3,4,5) - this part feels non-intuitive to me That is weird, i find it pretty intuitive with the music, but then again it may be the stacks, still cant find anything that would feel more intuitive for now, i'll keep note of this.
01:26:825 (6) - this slider seems weird, it doesn't have the same beat pattern as the other two before it? You're right, thanks! Changed
01:35:689 (6) - shorten by 1/4? That does sound better yes, also added a finish at the end since it does fit now, Thanks!
02:16:734 (2,3) - ugly overlap imo Distance snap hates meee!!!! but i love you Dusty <3 fixed!
02:24:643 (1,2,3,4,5) - i think moving this combo so that (3,4) is on the center makes the jump more intuitive Hmm, i thought it was pretty intuitive, but it does look prettier in the center so fixed
02:41:007 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - i dont like this pattern, it's confusingAlright, Finally changed this pattern, hope it's better now
02:46:325 (6) - is there a reason you didn't stack this on (3,4,5)? Because of the arrow pattern
03:08:279 (8) - that note on the red tick sounds very weird Changed but, if people prefer the old pattern then i'll bring ti back.

[Normal]
00:20:007 (1) - maybe try to make this look better? Long sliders are always a pain for me to make look good, i tried to change it a bit not sure if it's better or worse now X_X

(and since you're m4ming anyways, could you please mod this? It's not bubble-worthy yet so I'm not looking for one right now, if you're only modding for bubbles right now)

edit: ninja'd

Mystica wrote:

Hi~~
Here comes my mod..


[Normal]
00:42:507 seems not so beautiful...How about like this

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Hmm i see what you mean, actually the note was touching the slidertrack a bit, so i moved it a couple grids, it's still fine after this, not using your suggestion exactly, but fixed anyways XD
00:54:371 if you make that notes seems like a cross...this one may think another place to fit it. I dont get what you mean o.o
01:27:643 add finish? Nah the lyric in there isnt epic enough XD
03:04:188 look at 00:42:507's suggestion Made it look better

[Taiko]
I'm not so good at taiko mapping...So here may some places I feel better
00:15:643 big blue? Nope i think Big don is more enphasis than big katsu
01:27:643 big red? Idk, music not enphasized enough in there, however i may consider it if someone else mentions it
01:28:189 ^
01:32:007 ^
01:34:189 ^
01:42:098 blue?

[Insane]
00:05:007 cancen the whistle? It's following the pitch on the instrument so no
00:32:825 add clap? Kiai hitsound pattern is slightly different to make it more "cool"
00:39:371 ^
00:41:962 ^
00:46:325 may reduce the volume by 10%~20%? (if you do so,00:54:916 this time comes gives back May consider it
01:20:416 new combo? (it may confused some people Sorry but i followed a set combo pattern specially during kiai times
01:22:325 how about 0.8 distance to the pre note?i know you use 0.75SV,but a little may make it more beautiful Although i agree, that it is more beautiful, in this case i prefer to keep 1.0x so the in-between notes distance is the same as slider distances if anything i may think of something even lower to make a close up stack or something.
01:24:507 ^ ^
02:49:188 a grid down.. Nice catch! Fixed!
well...May reduce HPD by 1? It has a really high note density reducing hp by 1 would make the map very easy to pass, the high note density makes hp regain quite easy anyways.

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Here is my map that need your mod...
Thanks >W<
Haruka Shimotsuki - Ruri no Tori

And sorry for my poor English >w<

ouranhshc wrote:

Normal
00:35:280 (2) - New combo I didnt really want to use 2 NCs in a row, but i guess it does make sense, so changed.
01:10:189 (2) - ^ ^
02:14:552 (3) - [Nazi] - make symmetrical to (1) Fixed!
02:58:461 (1,2,3,4) - i don't think that this a good idea for a normal Come on! its not like they are Etna sliders D:

Insane
02:11:825 (4,5,1) - is this spacing really neccessary especially in the least intense part of the song Unstacked 5 and put it in between 4 and 1.


Overall
Easy feels lacking.
Normal feels clustered. You should really use grid snap
Hard is fine
Insane - You should definitely use grid snap. it will help clean up the map. Also, it feels like you added notes to create certain patterns sometimes
I actually did use grid snap, but its grid 4 you know...

Samah wrote:

Was my mod too long? <_<
It's not the mod4mod or kudosu I'm interested in, I just wanted to know if it helped you

Charles445 wrote:

General
You're going to want a timing professional to help you time this map. It's a toughie Timing's fine imo, idk why you keep saying that X_X
The hitsounds are loud in comparison to the music. I suggest turning down the volume of the hitsounds. Make sure your own hitsound volume isnt loud as well X_X i even think that they could've been louder specially for kiai sections

Normal
00:11:825 (2) - Move this 1 grid down
00:12:371 (3) - Move this 1 grid left and down
00:14:007 (2) - Move this 1 grid left
00:14:552 (3) - Move this 1 grid down
00:15:098 (4) - Move this 1 grid left and 2 grids down
That should make that part more symmetrical
Fixed!
00:30:098 (4) - Move this up and outta there like this http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/116790 it helps the map not get too cluttered and hard to read.
actually you made me realize that (4) wasnt covering (3)'s curve perfectly
00:33:098 (1) - Add a finish uhh where? there's like 4 possible spots there... but anyways im not taking any finish suggestions i've already explained them to every other modder here.
00:37:462 (1) - ^^ I know why you would think a Finish fits there, but that's not the hitsound pattern im using.
00:41:825 (1) - ^^ really, that's not the hitsound pattern im using here D:
00:52:734 (4) - Avoid having short multiple-repeat sliders on a normal. This can be confusing to the below average player Actually kick sliders are fine on Normal difficulties ._.
00:58:189 (3) - Move this 1 grid down and 1 grid right Fixed!
01:38:825 - This break is indeed in the right place, it just feels too long. Make it as long as RJ's Take in mind RJ has an extra break before this one, while i only have this one right in the middle (and the small one because of the silent part), the break this long was intentional, it's only missing on Taiko because Taiko is not supposed to have breaks.
02:16:734 (1,2) - This is really confusing looking I was actually trying to Elbow (6) but that was hard to do X_X
02:24:370 (4) - New combo so the drain isn't so harsh here If anything that's about 10% hp the player needs at least to pass this part o.o
02:39:097 (1) - Avoid having short multiple-repeat sliders on a normal. This can be confusing to the below average player. Here's an idea for this part http://puu.sh/3wM0 Read comment on the other slider...
02:46:734 (5) - Move this 1 grid left so it isn't touching the 3 and 4 Another not perfect curve i fixed yay.

Taiko Oni
Man that speedup freaked me out lol
It's pretty darn solid

Insane
I think the main problem with the diff is the many antijumps under sliders
For example, right at the beginning 00:03:098 (3,4) - Is a simple circle under a slider
that you hit quickly. However 00:19:189 (7,8) - Is an antijump circle under a slider. Playing both one after another may confuse the player because they don't know what to expect. There's nothing technically wrong with having them, it's just something that might trip up the player.

00:16:462 (4,5,6,7,8) - Move these a grid to the right so it looks better with the 00:15:371 (6) Fixed!
00:18:098 (1,2,3) - This stream could be more straight lolwhat o.o
00:18:643 (4,5,6) - ^^
00:30:098 (3) - Move this 1 grid to the left so it's under the 1 I blame distance snap! <3
00:33:916 (5) - I'd change this slider into hitcircles. It's not a good idea to have a random 1/4 slider in a stream of circles
00:42:643 (5) - ^^ If you can explain to me why is not a good idea then i'll gladly think about it
00:47:553 (5,6,7,8) - Fix the spacing on these I blame dat one modder... lol
00:52:871 - Add a circle here. Makes more sense and plays better What is this i dont even, what the heck is supposed to go there according to you guys D: the stream is mapped to the lyrics and i dont hear any lyric there.
01:08:689 (4) - Change this slider into hitcircles. I still dont see why? i find it more fun to play that way than simple click spamming.
01:09:234 (7,8) - Try arranging these two like this http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/116777 , sounds and plays great Actually i noticed i needed to make the timing sections more close together instead...
01:15:780 (5) - Make this 5 not touch the 3. The problem here is it creates the illusion that 6 will be where 3 is. There's nothing not even remotely close to an approach circle near (3)
01:17:007 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - This is a good example of the antijumps becoming a problem. This is frustrating to read But Etna sliders are fun D:
01:38:825 - This break is indeed in the right place, it just feels too long. Make it as long as RJ's
Gets pretty nice, love the beat here
02:40:052 (6) - I'd replace this with circles again. Sure a large portion of the stream is sliders but it should only transition once from sliders to circles, not slider circle slider circle =/ sorry but nope (i've already explained it both of the previous times)
Nice ending


Good mapset for someone coming back to mapping, well done!
EDIT: Putting my map in here for m4m http://osu.ppy.sh/s/33197

val0108 wrote:

[Crimmi's Easy]
HP AR OD 2? <--- Hmm, ok.
02:12:370 (5,6) - I think soft sounds good.
02:21:097 (1) - ^
03:06:916 - delete timimg line? <-=--= Ok.
03:07:052 - ^

SapphireGhost wrote:

Yeah feel free to ignore this, I'm late.

[General]
- Add CrimmiSkye to the tags on all difficulties because he has ranked maps under that name. Added
- (Change the offset to 371 on all difficulties?) No, that's the pre-stanza, the first stanza is on the first downbeat, it wouldnt make any sense for the osu! cookie to start pulsing before the real beat starts.

[Normal]
01:36:643 (1) - I don't really like this spinner being near-silenced, I'd rather have it audible. Changed to 40% volume

[RJ's Hard]
I LOVE YOU

[Taiko Oni]
I don't know why the kiai ends at a different spot but alright.

[Insane]
01:28:734 (3,4,5,6) - I'm not exactly sure why you changed your 1/4 spacing here, but I can live. Because i dont want to make big 1/4 jumps
01:59:007 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - I got confused here, everything seemed so clumped together, but I mostly got confused by the spacing of (5,6,7,8) Changed a bit

I should have gotten to this earlier.

Sakura Hana wrote:

Edit: well guess people dont like it :<

p3n wrote:

My favourite map of 2007!



wait...what?

(don't let the ratings get you down...classic maps are classic and haters gonna hate)