SapphireGhost wrote:

~ Nicely made ~

jedric wrote:

XD im trying to master the insane mode so i dont fail too much XD so far ive only passed through it twice, but i really cant wait till this gets ranked (i hope it does anyways) thanks again for the awesome map, i love the insane mode!

justnobody wrote:

sorry i can't pick anything.
+star.

yamao0404 wrote:

:)

Astom wrote:

Nice map, nothing to say :> (actually try catch a MAT lol)
Star~

Weezy wrote:

Yay random mod!

Wanted to map this but found this sooo here:

General
- Remove "Full Ver." from the title since this is the normal song. OK Done!

Easy
01:04:492 (4) - Not a pretty overlap Fixed
01:45:108 (1) - Plays better without repeat. Fixed

fine for everything else

Muya wrote:

snap

1. no error found

1. 01:01:718 (3) - remove finish at 2nd point
2. 01:17:410 (x) - add a note
3. 02:26:640 (x) - ^

1. pattern might be confusing in KIAI part since you choose to follow vocal
2. 01:17:295 (T) - unused timing section
3. 01:46:949 (1) - these 2 finishes are too close, suggest remove finish on this
4. 02:26:640 (x) - add a note and move finish on (5) to here
5. 02:59:756 (T) - unused timing section

1. 00:55:257 (3) - new combo
2. 01:50:410 (8) - move up a little to keep spacing
3. 02:04:487 (3) - new combo
4. 02:14:756 (3) - endpoint is offscreen

1. 00:33:564 (4) - use 1/6, repeat 2 times
2. 01:02:180 (7) - endpoint remove finish
3. 02:11:640 (9) - remove finish
4. 03:06:794 (7) - endpoint remove finish

stiss wrote:

がんばってください☆～

loveFantasy wrote:

konnichiwa

[General]

1. no error found

[Easy]

1. 01:01:718 (3) - remove finish at 2nd point
2. 01:17:410 (x) - add a note
3. 02:26:640 (x) - ^

[Insane]

1. 00:33:564 (4) - use 1/6, repeat 2 times
2. 01:02:180 (7) - endpoint remove finish
3. 02:11:640 (9) - remove finish
4. 03:06:794 (7) - endpoint remove finish

star

1. 01:42:795 (4) - koko mo 1/6..

loveFantasy wrote:

[Insane]

1. 01:42:795 (4) - koko mo 1/6..

sorry i miss that

also have a pink star

Sakura Hana wrote:

[Insane]
02:04:026 (2,3,4) - This kind of positioning can really throw the players off, i recommend adding the 3rd note on these sequences into a new combo (repeat for all sequences like this and for example 02:49:025 (1,2,3) this one) since the first and second notes jump, but it can be hard to tell if the 3rd note will also be included in the jump since it's in the same combo, so a player may hit early. okay fixed to normal distance

[Easy]
01:43:256 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Combo too long for an easy difficulty. fixed

KSHR wrote:

>loveFantasy, SakuraHana
I de remake my Normal dif.
I'm sorry for my rudeness..

Muya wrote:

thx mod

Red wrote:

nice map

romchan67 wrote:

nice

1. 02:37:717 (1) - Remove New Combo?

1. 01:32:180 (1) - (nazi) Move the waypoint of this slider 3 grids up
2. 01:50:872 (4) - (nazi) Move the waypoint 3 grids left and up
3. 03:22:025 (1) - Fix the spacing

• Awesome!

• Nothing found here!

-kevincela- wrote:

Yes,I'm modding this because I've already modded the map of scalone

[Easy]

1. 02:37:717 (1) - Remove New Combo?

[KSHR's Normal]

1. 01:32:180 (1) - (nazi) Move the waypoint of this slider 3 grids up
2. 01:50:872 (4) - (nazi) Move the waypoint 3 grids left and up
3. 03:22:025 (1) - Fix the spacing

[Muya's Hard]

• Awesome!

[Insane]]

• Nothing found here!

Really ggod map,my rating is 10/10!
And please,don't give me kds

-Sekai- wrote:

:D

Unformula wrote:

^^

OzzyOzrock wrote:

Randomly made taiko BG lol

[attachment=0:d1bf8]ASGARDSGAHFD.jpg[/attachment:d1bf8]

:3

Komeiji Yuki wrote:

Star

Looks good~

1. All diffs (Taiko excluded) don't start at the same point. I find Muya's starting point to be better; consider changing your diffs.

1. The hitsounds are rather low. I could hear them, but they're somewhat... hidden. You might want to rise the volume.
2. The normal section parts outside of kiai are lacking hitsounds. Except for a few finishes every minute or so, they are made only of the standard hitnormal.
3. 01:59:872 (1,2) - To respect the clap pattern you were using, you should remove the claps on the end of the sliders and only add one on the beginning of (2).
4. 02:15:563 (1) - The last repeat genuinely surprised me - I wasn't expecting it at all.

1. Remove the unnecessary audio lead-in. Also see the suggestion in the General section about the starting point.
2. Here again, the hitsounds are too low. It's possible to hear them, but it'd be better to make them a bit louder.
3. As far as hitsounds are concerned, there is the same problem as in Normal: hitnormal all over the place and very few other hitsounds.
4. 00:06:334 (1,2) - Starting with a stack is rather harsh for the beginning of a Normal diff, since stacks make the rhythm harder to read. I suggest you unstack them to give the player a chance to understand the rhythm of the song.
5. 02:04:487 (1) - This slider is partially hidden by the text after completing the spinner: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/103054

1. This plays more like an Insane to me due to all the 1/4 and small circles. Besides, the difficulty and score gap between this and Normal is too high.
2. Due to the circle size and the many 1/4s in the diff, I suggest you reduce OD to 6 so that the Hard becomes less... like an Insane.
3. Hitsounds are quite low... and sometimes missing (the end of kiai times for instance)
4. 00:15:103 (5) - For a Hard I'd avoid these sliders. Although they do match the song, the sudden 1/6 will throw off players and make them miss the timing of the next note. (I honestly had to delete the slider to hear what it was mapped on)
5. 00:33:564 (3) - Same
6. 01:42:795 (3) - Same
7. 02:03:564 (1) - Same
8. 02:58:948 (3,4) - I understand why you did that, but I seriously think it's out of place in a Hard. First of all, it sounds rather bad (would have sounded better with soft hitsounds perhaps), the 1/6 is once again confusing, and I'm not sure players who start playing Hard diffs would be able to click the second repeat slider with the correct timing.

1. Hitsounds are rather low once again.
2. There were lots of added beats that seriously confused me...
3. Some parts are missing hitsounds.
4. 00:10:949 (6,7) - Why the added 1/4 here ? It's confusing and completely unexpected...
5. 00:18:334 (4,5) - Same.
6. 00:22:487 (8) - Confusing, unwarned and unexpected slowdown. I don't even understand why it's here.
7. 00:54:334 (1,2,3) - Unexpected jumps. They make the rhythm look like 1/1 when it's actually 1/2.
8. 01:31:026 (5,6,7,8) - Why this very irregular spacing when you used normally spaced patterns for this part of the song before ?
9. 01:53:180 (3,4) - Same jump issue.
10. 02:04:026 (2,3,4) - Should you make jumps, at least make the spacing within consistent...
11. 02:49:025 (1,2,3) - Same spacing problem

Odaril wrote:

Request taken from #modreqs.

Please reply to this mod saying what you didn't fix (and what you did) and why. Remember these are all suggestions.
Also, if you have any question, feel free to ask me in-game

General

1. All diffs (Taiko excluded) don't start at the same point. I find Muya's starting point to be better; consider changing your diffs. changed starting point

Easy

1. The hitsounds are rather low. I could hear them, but they're somewhat... hidden. You might want to rise the volume. okay, risen volume
2. The normal section parts outside of kiai are lacking hitsounds. Except for a few finishes every minute or so, they are made only of the standard hitnormal. added clap to normal section
3. 01:59:872 (1,2) - To respect the clap pattern you were using, you should remove the claps on the end of the sliders and only add one on the beginning of (2). changed :3 and same 00:50:641 (1,2)
4. 02:15:563 (1) - The last repeat genuinely surprised me - I wasn't expecting it at all. it's other modder's suggestion okay changed 1 repeat only.

Insane

1. Hitsounds are rather low once again. :3
2. There were lots of added beats that seriously confused me... uhm?
3. Some parts are missing hitsounds.Which? fixed some at soft section
4. 00:10:949 (6,7) - Why the added 1/4 here ? It's confusing and completely unexpected... changed
5. 00:18:334 (4,5) - Same. ok
6. 00:22:487 (8) - Confusing, unwarned and unexpected slowdown. I don't even understand why it's here.fixed
7. 00:54:334 (1,2,3) - Unexpected jumps. They make the rhythm look like 1/1 when it's actually 1/2.remade cute jumps
8. 01:31:026 (5,6,7,8) - Why this very irregular spacing when you used normally spaced patterns for this part of the song before ? I see, fixed
9. 01:53:180 (3,4) - Same jump issue. :3
10. 02:04:026 (2,3,4) - Should you make jumps, at least make the spacing within consistent...fixed
11. 02:49:025 (1,2,3) - Same spacing problem ok fixed

Odaril wrote:

KHSR's Normal <--- KSHR's Normal desu...

1. Remove the unnecessary audio lead-in. Also see the suggestion in the General section about the starting point.
   >fixed. deleted Lead-in, and changed start point
2. Here again, the hitsounds are too low. It's possible to hear them, but it'd be better to make them a bit louder.
   >fixed. volume: a bit louder
3. As far as hitsounds are concerned, there is the same problem as in Normal: hitnormal all over the place and very few other hitsounds.
   >fixed. added hitsounds
4. 00:06:334 (1,2) - Starting with a stack is rather harsh for the beginning of a Normal diff, since stacks make the rhythm harder to read. I suggest you unstack them to give the player a chance to understand the rhythm of the song.
   >changed start point, and deleted notes which are written here. so I couldnt fix...
5. 02:04:487 (1) - This slider is partially hidden by the text after completing the spinner: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/103054
   >fixed. rised 02:04:487 (1). your supinner skin is cute, so I want...

KSHR wrote:

Odaril wrote:

KHSR's Normal <--- KSHR's Normal desu... D: ごめんなさい

• 
  >fixed. rised 02:04:487 (1). your supinner skin is cute, so I want... Hakurei Reimu skin by MLGom

thank you for modding, Odaril sensei!! np