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Lilyanna

1,918 posts

Joined March 2016

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Lilyanna 2016-08-30T16:42:08+00:00

Rizen wrote:
poke me sometime after answering BounceBabe's mod if you would like a mod from me ;;

Ok ty Rizen <3

Ora

959 posts

Joined November 2014

Ora 2016-08-31T00:01:07+00:00

Good guy Rizen

Also thanks BounceBabe ^^ most professional mod I've ever seen.

Lilyanna

1,918 posts

Joined March 2016

Topic Starter

Lilyanna 2016-08-31T00:34:25+00:00

Ora wrote:
Good guy Rizen

Also thanks BounceBabe ^^ most professional mod I've ever seen.

Ty for page 7 xD

BounceBabe

1,626 posts

Joined October 2010

BounceBabe 2016-08-31T08:47:41+00:00

Ora wrote:
Also thanks BounceBabe ^^ most professional mod I've ever seen.

You're welcome. Glad if it helps you ^^

Xiaolin

1,857 posts

Joined April 2013

Xiaolin 2016-09-01T17:02:16+00:00

I'm gonna kill myself if people say that it's hard to rank this because it's JB. Jeez, that's like the stupidest thing I've heard. Don't worry, Lily, you're gonna rank this soon. Good luck! \ o /

Lilyanna

1,918 posts

Joined March 2016

Topic Starter

Lilyanna 2016-09-01T17:27:00+00:00

Lapis Aoki wrote:
I'm gonna kill myself if people say that it's hard to rank this because it's JB. Jeez, that's like the stupidest thing I've heard. Don't worry, Lily, you're gonna rank this soon. Good luck! \ o /

lets hope a bn llike the map/song at least

thank uuu lapis <3

Lilyanna

1,918 posts

Joined March 2016

Topic Starter

Lilyanna 2016-09-02T00:17:10+00:00

ok ill be first to reply but ill update when the gds reply.

BounceBabe wrote:
Request from my NON-Japanese Queue

^ I laughed hard at this :p Ora iis such a meme xD

What I checked in your mapset
Each point from the list below will have a check mark next to it (?/ ?/ ?). This will tell you whether I checked that point or not.
?= I checked this point and everything is okay.
?= I didn't check this point because I think it doesn't need checking.
?= I checked this point but something needs fixing (explained in the mod)
osu!wiki Modding page
osu!wiki Ranking Criteria page

?? General ??
? Mapset difficulty spread (Easy, Normal, Hard, Insane)
? Background design, skin and SB (if available) and combo colouring
? Metadata
> resolution of images, mp3, files,...
> bit rate of song
> hitsounds
> skin (missing elements and resolution checks) and SB (SB load) or video
? Unrankable issues

?? Timing ??
? KIAI time and breaks
? Slider Velocity and changes
? Timing changes
? Timing points
? BPM & Offset
? Preview point
? Unrankable issues

?? Sound ??
? Hitsounds (Do they match the song?)
? Hitsound patterns
? Hitsound volume (Timing points)
? Rhythm of hit objects (Do they match the song?)
? Unrankable issues

?? Object Gameplay ??
? Reasonable spacing patterns, spacing consistency, Jumps, Anti-Jumps, special pattern
? Flow and transition between elements
? Overmapping
? Unrankable issues (In addition to the link at the top)
> objects hitting the accuracy bar, HP bar or are out of playfield with the osu!standard skin
> overlaps and stacking
> unreadable objects

?? Visual Gameplay ??
? Combo patterns, New combos
? Blankets, symmetry
? Variety of different patterns and styles
? Unrankable issues

General

> Really important for a good difficulty spread: Pattern and rhythm wise, ezek's difficulty is more challenging than the Ora's. The only difference is that on ezek's, which I very much appreciate, has consistent spacing and spacing snap. The pattern placement is much more complex tho and requires more thinking about identifying or reading the element's timing placement, than it is with the harder difficulty, which is mostly mapped to the beats only and the element's timings are much easier to read. In short; ezek's mixed vocal and melody (beats), whereas Ora didn't, thus making it more challenging and faster to play.

The spread is really difficult as the two Hard difficulties are nearly the same. The spacing and AR on Ora's difficulty is bigger than on ezek's. ezek's has a couple jumps and stop and go patterns as well. The slider velocity also only has a minor difference of 0,1. Although, ezek's difficulty rhythm patterns are more challenging, the rhythm patterns are kinda simple on Ora's, which kinda makes them the same. Nonetheless the tiny differences, they should be both be graded as "Hard" as the differences are really small and minor.

Furthermore, the players will expect the hardest difficulty to be an Insane, which it isn't. The song doesn't allow an Insane nor does the difficulty show that it is an Insane - Ora's Paradise is a Hard difficulty. The patterns, spacing, star rating and even the osu forum icon says it. Even if you can name the hardest difficulty a different name, they should be graded equally. does the name of the diff show it as insane because we were aiming for light insane and ye it wasnt possible do i have to change it to ora's hard?

> Since I found this on almost all difficulties I'll list it here as well. First, be consistent throughout the map. If you change it, change it for all, which I highly recommend in order for it to be correct. 00:53:490 (1) - "Combos are usually placed to either match the vocal/musical phrases or to indicate the downbeat of each measure. In special cases, combos are used in indicating any discrepancies in spacing or slider velocity." Source: https://osu.ppy.sh/wiki/Modding There is a break. The is no pattern that follows this NC or any of the special cases as listed above in which need a NC, thus making it unnecessary to place one here. Secondly, the hitsounding for this one varys throughout the mapset. There is a normal hitfinish, normal nothingness and nothing at all lol. same reply below i kept the nc but removed finish hitsounding

Although you can have differences in mapping from difficulty to difficulty, since the break times are the same, the pattern conclusion and hitsounding should be as well. There are 3 difficulties with a circle at the beginning of the break, add it to the 4th. Also use the same hitsounding on those concluding elements to be consistent throughout the mapset. It will appear a lot cleaner and less messy.
Use either soft whistle or normal finish to conclude the pattern and to indicate the break time, but with a lowered volume. 45% that is.im trying to make hitsounding consistent i hate hitsounding

>The ending also should have consistent hitsounding. Please adjust those as well once you agreed on one common solution to use for all 4 difficulties!lets hope ezek help me with this lol , thank u for alot of information ;Dl

Normal

> Why did you map the Normal for this set only and not the hardest difficulty too like the creator should imo? I don't understand o.O i dont see a wrong with that

Hitsounds:
00:53:490 (1) - 02:04:227 (1) - The song gets softer and quieter at this part and the normal finish is a tint too much for it. It's really strong on the ears. Add a soft whistle instead to emphasise the beginning of the soft section of the song and break or if you really want to keep it, lower the volume of the finish, for it not to be too loud at least. To 45% would be perfect to emphasise and not to overtake or draw too much attention for no reason because it's not club music or strong bass.what i did its more like the finish of strong beat and start of soft music so i thought the finish fits better if im not wrong and it better to emphasize the soft music with the end of strong beat i hope make sens my point is that strong finish is what differ from the soft one ..but im not so good with hitsounding i migh just remove the finish and leave it normal sampleset

Combos:
Your whole combo patterns are completely random. Sometimes you have a NC every 4 beats, then every 8 beats, then something in between to match the vocals. You need to keep them consistent, even more because it's an easier difficulty, which is mostly played by beginners and they only get confused by such combo placement. In short: 00:30:753 (3) - Add NC, 00:32:648 (1) - Remove NC, 00:33:279 (3) - Add NC, 00:35:174 (1) - Remove NC, 00:35:805 (2) - Add NC, and so on. Or you go for a 8 beat combo pattern. Your choice. If you need help with combo pattern, ask me or one of your GD mappers to help you out. I recommend to use an 8 beat pattern tho, since your patterns are really long. And remember; for combo patterns, never use them to match the vocals or pattern. They are indicators to show the beginning of a new row of beats in the music. Fixed all combos with 4beat combo pattern i feel placing 4 beats combos make more sens of what u saying D:
00:53:490 (1) - 02:04:227 (1) - "Combos are usually placed to either match the vocal/musical phrases or to indicate the downbeat of each measure. In special cases, combos are used in indicating any discrepancies in spacing or slider velocity." Source: https://osu.ppy.sh/wiki/Modding You don't have a pattern that follows this NC or any of the special cases as listed above in which you can use a NC, thus making it unnecessary to place one here, especially before a break. i added nc every downbeat and those notes comes on downbeat i think they make sens since the case here is placing nc in every downbeat and the previous pattern reached 4beats already

Rhythm & Pattern:
03:22:227 - Here should be a circle before the spinner because you mapped the whole last section to the guitar / string instrument (?) melody and vocals. https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5972170 it was like that before xs fixed

There's nothing else to say for this difficulty. The spacing is perfectly fine, the flow is smooth, the patterns match the music, all good.

Overall

After 3 hours and this wall of text of modding this mapset, Im freaking tired. Finishing this for the sake of this mod at 3:40 in the morning lol. Too much repetition ugh. Solid mapset that needs more work on hitsounding, spread setting and consistency and rhythm correctness. Good job everyone.

THANK YOU for the mod!

Please add the question and one of the following options to your feedback on my mod please:
Was the mod helpful?
3. It was good but there is room for improvement. I could apply only a few suggestions. this options i chose goes to only to normal diff mod i could be wrong but i hope everything make sens but ty ty <3

Edited some typos and added paragraphs so you can read this wall of text better lol

ZekeyHache

3,316 posts

Joined October 2009

ZekeyHache 2016-09-02T05:27:03+00:00

BounceBabe wrote:
ezek's Hard

Appearance:
02:40:858 (4) - This slider is hard to read due to the previous slider still being visible when this one appears. I'm not a fan of hidden notes. They just cause confusion and only should be used when they are obvious to read and also are more for Insane difficulties than Hard ones. I don't find this confusing and you're the first one telling me this about this specific note, I may consider a change if more people agree~

Hitsounds:
Imo, your hitsound pattern is pretty random. The soft whistles in particular are overused and dominate the hitsounding completely. They don't support the song, they overtake it and create their own melody. They draw way too much attention to them than they should. Their job is to support and emphasise the song. I suggest to reduce the amount of soft whistle you used or reduce the volume quite a bit for them not to overtake the original song that you mapped to. I tried using 60% volume for all hitsounds and it was a lot better. Either way, it should be changed some way.
02:04:227 (1) - 00:53:490 (1) - 03:22:542 (1) - Without any hitsound, the ending sounds really empty. Add a lower volumed hit finish or soft whistle, like the other difficulties have.

Well, I don't think the whistles are overused and I'm trying to be consistent on their use~ I reduced the 80% volumes to 60 as you suggested since I found that it's true that the hitsounds were a bit loud~ and the 3 notes u mentioned as "empty" just because they have no additional hitsound, I kept them that way since they fit well like that imo~ Adding more feels exaggerated for me~

Combo:
00:53:490 (1) - "Combos are usually placed to either match the vocal/musical phrases or to indicate the downbeat of each measure. In special cases, combos are used in indicating any discrepancies in spacing or slider velocity." Source: https://osu.ppy.sh/wiki/Modding You don't have a pattern that follows this NC or any of the special cases as listed above in which you can use a NC, thus making it unnecessary to place one here, especially before a break.

Sir, u don't have to give me that explanation since I'm not a beginner~ The reasons why I put nc there are 1) There's a remarkable/noticeable change in the music and placing nc is a good way to emphasize this and 2) I think is a good way to introduce the break here~ Breaking nc consistency is not bad if it's for a reasonable reason

Spacing:
00:44:490 (4,5) - 00:49:542 (4,5) - 01:55:226 (4,5) - 02:00:279 (4,5) - This jump, or more like spacing accident, i don't understand. I pretty much already explained everything below and would only repeat myself again. These are totally intentional~ I wanna emphasize the last word of that specific parts and the strong beats give me enough support for that too~
01:19:385 (2,3,4) - Inconsistent spacing > 01:21:911 (2,3,4) - Consistent spacing, ugh. Yes, I noticed this one in particular. (4) was the only one supposed to be a jump on the second pattern, so I fixed that~
1. 02:24:121 (7,1) - 2. 02:27:911 (3,4) - Rest: 02:31:700 (6,1) - 02:34:227 (6,1) - 02:54:437 (6,1) - 03:04:543 (6,1) - This tiny jump is really unnecessary and only disturbes the consistency of your spacing. For the first one: Even with the beginning of the chorus, the spacing change (it's not even a jump really) is wrong here. Especially because there is no drastic musical change that would support a jump. Although I can accept "the emphasis of the chorus" as an answer, but take it into consideration either way. For the second one: 02:27:595 (2,3,4) - the music is not changing at this point, it doesn't call for any changes. Maybe adjust 02:27:911 (3) - to have consistent spacing between 2 to 3 and 3 to 4. https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5972276 (I only mean the spacing, not the pattern placement). You did some copy paste there, so fix that on the patterns you copy pasted as well and any other spacing inconsistencies you can find (inb4 you'll just skip looking through them).

I did all my tiny jumps on the last part of the bass-like rhythm that plays before every downbeat to emphasize the end of every section even tho there's no drastic change in the music, it fits imo, and I kept my consistency over that~ Also plays well and adds more fun~

Rhythm & Pattern:
01:36:437 (1,2,3,4,5) - This is mapped to the drum sounds in the music but this 01:38:332 (6) - is mapped to the "Ahh" vocal in the BG, which goes until 01:38:806 - so you should extend the slider a little. It would also create a much better transition between those elements. https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5972320 Here I just replaced the slider with a circle, I realized a slider doesn't fit for my likes~

Your spacing changes that cause spacing inconsistencies drive me nuts on this one lol. The spacing is really linear and then you mess it up with tiny spacing changes (not even jumps) that seem not reasonable to me. The rest plays nice though. Good job. spacing doesn't have to be absolutely perfect~ thanks!

Thanks for the ~~Holy Bible~~ mod!

Update~

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- Frontier -

1,854 posts

Joined April 2014

- Frontier - 2016-09-02T12:49:32+00:00

cuz i saw the Holy Bible mod. So i'll make some very very short mod instead.

[Aru's Easy]

00:53:490 - Shouldn't it break here?
01:11:174 (1) - You shouldn't nc this for consistency with the previous one.
01:13:700 (3) - and you should nc this instead cuz it starts kiai time here.
02:04:227 - I think you know what to do now.

This isn't helpful I know. Don't give me kd.

Arusamour

424 posts

Joined April 2014

Arusamour 2016-09-02T16:53:45+00:00

BounceBabe wrote:
Aru's Easy

Hitsounds:
00:28:227 (1) - The normal whistle you chose to use, does not fit to the song, at all. The song is way too calm and soft for it to fit. Use soft whistles instead to emphasise the song better and not to overtake the song with noisy, not suitable hitsounds. Besides, you only used normal whistle on this slider 00:28:227 (1) - . Why? Accident? Remove it. fixed

Combo:
Your combo pattern isn't consistent here 01:08:648 (1,1) - You used a NC every 8 and ever 4 beats. Please check them and choose either of them, not both! fixed

Appearance, Flow & Transition:
00:27:595 (4) - If you'd lower this circle by a few grids, it would create a better transition and flow between those elements 00:25:700 (3,4,1) - fixed

Rhythm & Pattern:
00:53:490 - There really should be a circle to conclude this verse and previous pattern, otherwise it will play odd. Either that or move the beginning of the break to 00:53:490 - . Same goes for 02:04:227 - fixed

Possible Unrankable Issues:
00:33:279 (1) - 01:58:542 (4) - Careful with such high element placement as it may be unrankable if it hits the HP bar. It would be considered as element out of the playfield area that overlaps with the interface. fixed

Unrankable Issues:
02:21:911 (3) - 03:17:490 (2) - This slider overlaps with the accuracy bar when it's turned on while playing. It's also nearly out of playfield area. You have to move the slider a bit higher to fix this issue. https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5971964 https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5971986
02:48:437 (4) - 03:12:437 (2) - These elements hit the HP drain bar with the osu!standard skin and they have to be lowered in order for it to be rankable. https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5971974 https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5971976 You placed your elements really high in general. Try to be more cautious in the future and don't overlap them with interface elements. fixed

There is nothing else that is mentionable.

- frontier - wrote:
Aru's Easy
00:53:490 - Shouldn't it break here? not sure what you mean by this?
01:11:174 (1) - You shouldn't nc this for consistency with the previous one. fixed
01:13:700 (3) - and you should nc this instead cuz it starts kiai time here. fixed
02:04:227 - I think you know what to do now. fixed

Ora

959 posts

Joined November 2014

Ora 2016-09-02T17:42:16+00:00

Ora's Paradise

> You barely mapped to the vocals, if not at all (to escape JB's reputation and voice ahaha, jk)

Hitsounds:
00:53:490 (1) - 02:04:227 (1) - The song gets softer and quieter at this part and the normal finish is a tint too much for it. It's really strong on the ears. Add a soft whistle instead to emphasise the beginning of the soft section of the song and break or if you really want to keep it, lower the volume of the finish, for it not to be too loud at least. To 45% would be perfect to emphasise and not to overtake or draw too much attention for no reason because it's not club music or strong bass. Fixed all of this. I completely agree these parts should be softer as the music closes at the break

Combo:
00:53:490 (1) - 02:04:227 (1) - "Combos are usually placed to either match the vocal/musical phrases or to indicate the downbeat of each measure. In special cases, combos are used in indicating any discrepancies in spacing or slider velocity." Source: https://osu.ppy.sh/wiki/Modding You don't have a pattern that follows this NC or any of the special cases as listed above in which you can use a NC, thus making it unnecessary to place one here, especially before a break. Ok I will change. In a lot of maps I have seen people adding a NC on the last beat before a break just for some emphasis, but I will trust you
03:04:858 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4) - This whole section has wrong combo placement. The whole difficulty has a NC every 4 beats or white bars. Even if you mapped to the vocals here, the combo pattern should be consistent throughout the map unless you have, again, any special cases like from above to justify them. I think they are fixed now, I wasn't too sure where you thought the NCs should be
01:38:332 (4) - Since you have a slider velocity change here, you can justify a NC at this point for easier readability. You should add one because of the slider velocity change, for it to be more noticeable. "In special cases, combos are used in indicating any discrepancies in spacing or slider velocity." Source: https://osu.ppy.sh/wiki/Modding Even more since the slider length between 1,0 and 0,8 IS hardly noticeable while playing. 01:38:332 (4,1) - If you have any more of these, change them as well. That's the only one, fixed

Appearance, Flow & Transition:
02:40:227 (2) - 02:47:806 (2) - 02:52:858 (2) - these almost look like circles and are hard to read due to the overlap with the previous slider. Space them out a bit more (or smth similar) so they are not too close to each other to make it more readable. Suggestion: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5971606 , https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5971614 , https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5971622 < much more readable and flows good too. You did that on the first chorus as well 01:21:279 (1,2) - 01:26:332 (1,2) - why not here too? (Not sure if it's up to date but such overlaps were unrankable a few years ago lol) I don't agree that it is hard to read. The flow is there and it really doesn't look bad. To answer why I have the overlap pattern here and not in the first kiai. It's because the atmosphere is different. JB is singing at the "climax" of the song and his singing brings out the music to be not only louder, but more active (I think that's the right word

maybe you can reply to this if you still disagree or just so I can have closure with this issue).
03:07:069 (4) - 01:17:490 (5) - Such sliders are not only weird looking, they also play weird because the tails are so tight together it feels clustered. Arch them a bit further apart for better appearance. Try to do this with all kinds of slider like this. https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5971632 Okay, I agree. Fixed
00:26:964 (5) - The ending point should be 2 grids lower for it to be perfectly linear with 00:26:332 (2) -, unless you didn't intend that. I wanted it to blanket nicer with 00:25:700 (1) - but it's hard to do that without making it ugly and not linear with 00:26:332 (2) - . I will change it to what you suggested, but I might just end up remapping that small part
00:33:911 (2,3,4) - Since the tiny jump from 2 to 3 is rather small, easy to play and flows good too, the jump from 3 to 4 is rather big and hard to play, it doesn't flow good either. First of all, the player has to harshly move direction of the cursor to reach the start of the slider. The two small sliders are better to play, as they are closer together and have a circular playing motion. 3 to 4 plays really awkward. Try finding a better way of placement for this pattern to flow and play better. I also noticed that most of your patterns are circular and flow much better, so this one stands out a lot. 100% agree and remapped. I'm having trouble finding a good pattern to use here that flows into the next section. If you have any suggestions, please let me know

02:30:753 (4,5) - The transition and flow from 4 to 5 is a little harsh, not much but a bit. It would play better if the circle was a bit lower in order for the player to not having to move his cursor too far away from the area that is suited for it's placement, according to the slider's shape 02:30:753 (4) - . Something like this: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5971886

Possible Unrankable Issues:
00:26:332 (2) - Careful with such high element placement. If it touches the HP bar it can or is unrankable, as it's out of playfield area and overlapping with the interface. Yeah, so....same as above, going to remap this part because it has multiple issues with it. I'll need some time to figure out what I will do with it.

Thanks for noticing this.

Rhythm & Pattern:
02:44:648 (1,2,3,4,5) - 02:49:700 (1,2,3,4,5) - 02:54:753 (1,2,3,4,5) - 02:59:806 (1,2,3,4,5) - Not to disappoint you, but this literally follows nothing. Not the beats in the song, not the melody, not the vocals. They are on white and red bars to fill imo. Maybe you ran out of pattern ideas? The whole map is almost mapped completely to the melody or beats. This pattern doesn't follow that structure and is out of line. Additionally, such rhythm patterns, that don't follow anything, are considered as overmapping and should be avoided. Look at this screen: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5974748 < according to your previous rhythm that you mapped which are 80% of the map, this kind of rhythm is somewhat close to what there should be at this point. I only took the rhythm into account. I didn't bother with pattern in the screen. That's up to you! This was a change that I made to the map with Yale's Mod. I believe he sees the music having more intensity here and you see he says that it wouldn't even be "overmapped". From what I've seen, it plays fine now but I do see what you're saying. Before that change, I had a 1/2 slider I believe for each of those parts. Would love for you to reply to this before I change any further. What are your thoughts about Yale's mod?.

Other than that, it's a nice difficulty that flows pretty nicely. You helped out a lot and I appreciate it.

Overall Amazing mod and I hope to work with you in the future. You spent a lot of time on the mapset and we all appreciate it

After 3 hours and this wall of text of modding this mapset, Im freaking tired. Finishing this for the sake of this mod at 3:40 in the morning lol. Too much repetition ugh. Solid mapset that needs more work on hitsounding, spread setting and consistency and rhythm correctness. Good job everyone.

Please add the question and one of the following options to your feedback on my mod please:
Code:
Was the mod helpful?
1. Yes, it helped me a lot! The advice was really useful. I will definitely come back for more. I would also like a reply from you for some of the things you mentioned

Last edited by Ora 2016-09-02T17:45:54+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

Ora

959 posts

Joined November 2014

Ora 2016-09-02T17:44:48+00:00

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388,109,173174,1,0,0:0:0:0:
454,184,173332,1,0,0:0:0:0:
431,282,173490,6,0,L|414:348,1,50,0|0,1:0|0:0,1:0:0:0:
343,263,173806,2,0,L|331:213,1,50
454,184,174121,2,0,L|429:288,1,100,8|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
288,343,174753,6,0,L|239:335,1,50,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
217,236,175069,2,0,L|166:247,1,50
69,268,175385,2,0,L|53:219,1,50,8|0,1:0|0:0,1:0:0:0:
23,125,175700,1,0,0:0:0:0:
94,55,175858,1,0,0:0:0:0:
94,55,176016,2,0,B|144:40|144:40|215:52,1,100,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
410,87,176648,1,8,1:0:0:0:
336,129,176806,2,0,P|320:186|330:242,1,100
334,269,177279,6,0,P|274:285|185:245,1,150,4|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
161,223,177911,2,0,L|143:172,1,50,8|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
114,90,178227,1,0,0:0:0:0:
212,75,178385,1,0,0:0:0:0:
276,150,178542,2,0,L|268:202,1,50,0|0,1:0|0:0,1:0:0:0:
212,75,178858,2,0,L|203:25,1,50
309,80,179174,2,0,P|345:118|344:187,1,100,8|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
335,325,179806,6,0,P|373:332|400:331,1,50,0|0,1:0|0:0,1:0:0:0:
398,249,180121,2,0,P|360:242|332:243,1,50
471,283,180437,2,0,P|478:245|473:217,1,50,8|0,1:0|0:0,1:0:0:0:
472,133,180753,1,0,0:0:0:0:
412,52,180911,1,0,0:0:0:0:
412,52,181069,2,0,P|351:34|292:60,1,100,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
284,258,181700,1,8,1:0:0:0:
342,202,181858,2,0,P|362:156|356:104,1,100
341,65,182332,6,0,B|299:83|299:83|180:54,1,150,4|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
154,45,182964,2,0,L|99:31,1,50,8|0,1:0|0:0,1:0:0:0:
66,138,183279,2,0,L|121:123,1,50
186,194,183595,2,0,B|232:206|232:206|308:187,1,100,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
94,317,184227,1,8,1:0:0:0:
52,242,184385,2,0,L|65:141,1,100
73,98,184858,6,0,L|224:79,1,150,0|0,1:0|2:0,0:0:0:0:
383,60,185806,1,0,0:0:0:0:
383,60,186753,5,0,0:0:0:0:
327,202,187069,2,0,B|302:105|302:105|404:160,1,200
176,282,188016,1,0,0:0:0:0:
232,133,188332,2,0,B|257:230|257:230|155:175,1,200
169,182,189279,6,0,P|125:168|109:160,1,50,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
186,89,189595,2,0,P|164:47|160:29,1,50,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
266,50,189911,2,0,P|321:58|396:121,2,150,0|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
392,115,192121,1,0,0:0:0:0:
380,97,194016,5,0,0:0:0:0:
369,133,194490,1,0,0:0:0:0:
360,170,194964,2,0,P|357:250|402:309,2,150,0|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
420,275,196858,5,0,0:0:0:0:
267,292,197174,2,0,P|222:269|220:130,1,200,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
280,199,198121,1,0,0:0:0:0:
160,320,198437,2,0,P|111:335|6:243,1,200,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
160,320,199385,6,0,P|177:362|177:380,1,50,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
176,231,199700,2,0,P|216:248|230:259,1,50,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
111,170,200016,2,0,P|163:145|246:175,2,150,0|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
176,231,202227,5,0,0:0:0:0:
299,283,202542,2,0,B|332:137|400:295|491:69|343:73|343:73|258:-29|122:142|299:166|243:224,1,592.000014453125,0|0,2:0|2:0,2:0:0:0:

Lilyanna

1,918 posts

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Topic Starter

Lilyanna 2016-09-02T18:30:59+00:00

- Frontier - wrote:
cuz i saw the Holy Bible mod. So i'll make some very very short mod instead.
[Aru's Easy]
00:53:490 - Shouldn't it break here?
01:11:174 (1) - You shouldn't nc this for consistency with the previous one.
01:13:700 (3) - and you should nc this instead cuz it starts kiai time here.
02:04:227 - I think you know what to do now.
This isn't helpful I know. Don't give me kd.

since it helped him to make changes im gonna have to give u kds xD

Set Updated.

Electoz

1,886 posts

Joined May 2015

Electoz 2016-09-03T10:27:28+00:00

Since Ora requested me via userpage a few days ago so I decided to post here to remind that I'm still monitoring this set every once in a while.
Back to the topic, Aru's Easy and Ora's Paradise can still be polished up more, try focusing on that, also difficulty settings among the spread are a bit messed up, recheck that again.
Keep up the good work!

Lilyanna

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Topic Starter

Lilyanna 2016-09-03T11:41:09+00:00

Electoz wrote:
Since Ora requested me via userpage a few days ago so I decided to post here to remind that I'm still monitoring this set every once in a while.
Back to the topic, Aru's Easy and Ora's Paradise can still be polished up more, try focusing on that, also difficulty settings among the spread are a bit messed up, recheck that again.
Keep up the good work!

Okay working on it thank you!

Lilyanna

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Topic Starter

Lilyanna 2016-09-05T14:31:47+00:00

Updated ora's paradise fixed stuff also fixed settings, further mods incoming xd !

Shiranai

2,186 posts

Joined August 2012

Shiranai 2016-09-06T03:20:13+00:00

I love jb once
Sugestion,

General

Combo colors yellow and orange-ish seems blend too much with bg, please have mercy to our eyes

Easy

02:33:279 (4) - Move to x:133 y:212? I think it can make the movement on 02:32:016 (3,4,1) - less sharp and more comfortable https://puu.sh/r1pMU/5fa9c9cf4b.png
02:23:806 - Add circle there for consistency with 01:13:069 (4) -
02:42:121 (3) - Missing clap on tail
02:53:490 (4) - Same regarding placement, I think you can flip and move that to x:264 y:294 https://puu.sh/r1pIh/5e7c632852.png ? I think it will move more natural that way

Normal

00:23:174 (1,3) - Somehow that circular flow could be improve more and I think the shape could be more like 01:38:964 (1,3) - to improve the flow
00:50:964 (1) - Missing clap on tail
02:47:174 (1) - Missing clap on tail
03:12:121 (2) - The polarity seems weird, if you try to aim to highlight the vocal, the the reverse should be on red tick here 03:12:753 - . So I think you should change the rhythm on that part into somewhat like https://puu.sh/r1qV5/a6caabb30d.png or https://puu.sh/r1qKm/2e8a5b116b.png

Hard

Half of your kiai is copy paste, 02:44:648 - Copy paste pattern with 01:13:700 - until 01:33:595 - not sure why lol. I know the song is quite repetitive but at least I think your patterning should be more variate to make it more fun to play, you know what to do if you care with the overall quality on your diff

My concern just that, the rest seems great

Paradise

00:42:911 (7) - and 01:53:648 (7) - Due to the vocal, I think a slower sv could be good on that slider to make a build up on next part 00:43:385 - . You can use 0.8 sv on 00:42:911 - and back again to 1.0 sv on 00:43:385 - https://puu.sh/r1scO/4ac4d13837.png
01:02:332 - and 02:13:069 - Not sure why the break time seems diffrent with the rest diff https://puu.sh/r1smK/0859603061.png. If that intentional, at least you can make the break snapped properly on either tick there
01:19:700 (3) - You might want to ctrl+g that, so you have a jump on 01:19:700 (3,4) - somewhat same as you did on this one 01:14:648 (3,4) -
01:23:174 (7) - and 02:33:911 (7) - Seems overmapped, I don't really think there is a 1/8 on that part. Try to hear more closer on 50% playback, the sound you probably hear might be a long synth clap sound that make there is no beat on 01:23:253 - . In this case, you should be use a single circle for the triangle jump imo
01:24:437 (2,3) - Can be rotate -20 degree for a better flow on 01:23:806 (1,2,3,4) - https://puu.sh/r1sUh/2c2ee8b528.png
01:52:542 (3,7) - Try to avoid that small overlap, looks not neat
02:23:174 (2) - Try to be more paralel with the previous one 02:21:911 (1) - I think that will looks better
02:40:227 (2) - 02:47:174 (1,2) - and 02:52:858 (2) - Looks too forced and actually not neat. I think you should try this https://puu.sh/r1tlB/5a143a687e.png
03:14:016 (3,4,1) - Why a sudden anti jump? also maybe try to indicate the anti jump better like adding nc or something

The second half could be clean up more, rather untidy in some parts

Good luck

Lilyanna

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Lilyanna 2016-09-06T09:12:06+00:00

Mako Sakata wrote:
I love jb once
Sugestion,

General
Combo colors yellow and orange-ish seems blend too much with bg, please have mercy to our eyes
seem like i hurt people's ears i dont want hurt their eyes too LOL

Normal
00:23:174 (1,3) - Somehow that circular flow could be improve more and I think the shape could be more like 01:38:964 (1,3) - to improve the flow fixed
00:50:964 (1) - Missing clap on tail oups add clap
02:47:174 (1) - Missing clap on tail ^
03:12:121 (2) - The polarity seems weird, if you try to aim to highlight the vocal, the the reverse should be on red tick here 03:12:753 - . So I think you should change the rhythm on that part into somewhat like https://puu.sh/r1qV5/a6caabb30d.png or https://puu.sh/r1qKm/2e8a5b116b.png
changed revers slider on red

Good luck

thank you!

ZekeyHache

3,316 posts

Joined October 2009

ZekeyHache 2016-09-07T18:09:58+00:00

Mako Sakata wrote:
Hard
Half of your kiai is copy paste, 02:44:648 - Copy paste pattern with 01:13:700 - until 01:33:595 - not sure why lol. I know the song is quite repetitive but at least I think your patterning should be more variate to make it more fun to play, you know what to do if you care with the overall quality on your diff

My concern just that, the rest seems great
I did that because ~~I'm lazy~~ I ran out of mapping ideas for my patterns and I got afraid of going out of the style I was mapping uwu, I don't think that part would be an issue~

Lilyanna

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Topic Starter

Lilyanna 2016-09-07T22:18:53+00:00

Ora's paradise will be removed.
removed by ora's request.

CyberX

494 posts

Joined December 2012

CyberX 2016-09-08T13:17:15+00:00

NM for Lilyana

General

-Aru's easy enable the widescreen storyboard when Normal and ezek's Hard doesnt
-ezek's Hard have different Kiais time than the others

Normal

00:32:648 (2,1) - NC should be at (2) instead of (1)
00:34:858 - probably nice if you had circle here
00:42:121 (3,1) - can be blanket
00:43:385 (1,2,3) - personally i dislike this pattern, the (1) break the flow tho
00:47:806 (4,1) - NC should be at (4) instead of (1)
01:06:121 (1) - RNC
01:23:806 (1,2) - can be blanket
02:38:016 (2,3) - blanket can be improve
03:12:121 (2) - shouldnt reverse imo, since there is no vocal at the middle of the slider, prefer long slider
now i realize all the red tick volume is just too much imo, consider lowering it

Electoz

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Joined May 2015

Electoz 2016-09-08T13:28:25+00:00

lol I'm curious why he decided to take his diff out

Stjpa

886 posts

Joined July 2013

Stjpa 2016-09-08T14:25:57+00:00

Electoz wrote:
lol I'm curious why he decided to take his diff out

Same. It wasn't that bad, just repetetive.

Lilyanna

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Lilyanna 2016-09-08T14:42:15+00:00

CyberX wrote:
NM for Lilyana

General
-Aru's easy enable the widescreen storyboard when Normal and ezek's Hard doesnt disabled widescreen in aru's easy
-ezek's Hard have different Kiais time than the others fixed same now

Normal
00:32:648 (2,1) - NC should be at (2) instead of (1) i new combo ever downbeat so that work fine
00:34:858 - probably nice if you had circle herei think its fine it flow well with vocals since i left it empty in the pattern before
00:42:121 (3,1) - can be blanket will ruin the symmetry pattern
00:43:385 (1,2,3) - personally i dislike this pattern, the (1) break the flow tho i intended to break flow since its new lyrics/music start
00:47:806 (4,1) - NC should be at (4) instead of (1) dont want break the nc on one downbeat consistency
01:06:121 (1) - RNC
01:23:806 (1,2) - can be blanket i want to move around the area with the patterns so if i blanket ill stuck in one place
02:38:016 (2,3) - blanket can be improve okay fixed slider to another shape
03:12:121 (2) - shouldnt reverse imo, since there is no vocal at the middle of the slider, prefer long slider i think its fine since his rythm vocals changes while sayinh "ohh"
now i realize all the red tick volume is just too much imo, consider lowering it

thank you for mod!!and star!!!

Electoz wrote:
lol I'm curious why he decided to take his diff out

he said he can't do it anymore, maybe he will be busy or something idk he told me to remove it and other private reasons maybe i say in privet :s :s
rip ora's paradise.

Ora

959 posts

Joined November 2014

Ora 2016-09-08T20:02:29+00:00

Electoz wrote:
lol I'm curious why he decided to take his diff out

Hello electoz and all of the modders, just replying to clear things up. For now I need to deal with some personal stuff and I feel that me dropping out will give the mappers a better chance to get ranked. Thanks to everyone for the mods and support, I had fun with this.

Ayyri

Ayyri 2016-09-11T18:42:51+00:00

yo

this song tho zz

[General]

Have the break lead-ins be consistent through all difficulties.

[Aru's Easy]

00:33:279 - Blanket could be improved.
01:33:911 - to 01:36:437 - I would suggest just having these as 3 separate reverse sliders, rather than just one slider with two reverses and one with one reverse. Because that can be a bit confusing for a newer player to read / play.
03:04:858 - Blanket could be improved.

[Normal]

00:47:174 - and 00:47:806 - Wouldn't recommend a stack here if you're going to leave a break inbetween the two patterns. This might be a bit hard for a newer player to read.
01:13:069 - Don't really recommend skipping this snapping sound. It's a pretty prominent sound here. ;w;
01:33:911 - to 01:37:700 - This spinner really doesn't fit here. There's nothing held out for it to follow. Even in Easy it was mapped, so consider mapping this part too.
01:57:911 - and 01:58:542 - Same issue as 00:47:174 - .

please don't ask me to look this again

Lilyanna

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Lilyanna 2016-09-11T18:48:54+00:00

Ayyri wrote:
please don't ask me to look this again

I didnt ask u to look this its an m4m u do what u had to do u could have told me from start i realy wish people stop this !

Ayyri

Ayyri 2016-09-11T19:38:28+00:00

Lilyanna wrote:
I didnt ask u to look this its an m4m u do what u had to do u could have told me from start i realy wish people stop this !

How much of a choice do I have? ;___;

Lilyanna

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Topic Starter

Lilyanna 2016-09-11T20:20:19+00:00

Mako Sakata wrote:
I love jb once
Sugestion,

General
Combo colors yellow and orange-ish seems blend too much with bg, please have mercy to our eyes
Easy arus let me do the reply
02:33:279 (4) - Move to x:133 y:212? I think it can make the movement on 02:32:016 (3,4,1) - less sharp and more comfortable changed https://puu.sh/r1pMU/5fa9c9cf4b.png
02:23:806 - Add circle there for consistency with 01:13:069 (4) - added
02:42:121 (3) - Missing clap on tail fixed
02:53:490 (4) - Same regarding placement, I think you can flip and move that to x:264 y:294 https://puu.sh/r1pIh/5e7c632852.png ? I think it will move more natural that way agree done

Good luck

Ayyri wrote:
yo

this song tho zz

[General]
Have the break lead-ins be consistent through all difficulties.fixed
[Aru's Easy]
00:33:279 - Blanket could be improved. its clearly not meant to be blanket
01:33:911 - to 01:36:437 - I would suggest just having these as 3 separate reverse sliders, rather than just one slider with two reverses and one with one reverse. Because that can be a bit confusing for a newer player to read / play. ok fixed
03:04:858 - Blanket could be improved.fixed
[Normal]
00:47:174 - and 00:47:806 - Wouldn't recommend a stack here if you're going to leave a break inbetween the two patterns. This might be a bit hard for a newer player to read. no one mentioned its problem so far so if someone else say ill change
01:13:069 - Don't really recommend skipping this snapping sound. It's a pretty prominent sound here. ;w; i think its fine
01:33:911 - to 01:37:700 - This spinner really doesn't fit here. There's nothing held out for it to follow. Even in Easy it was mapped, so consider mapping this part too. removed the spinner and mapped
01:57:911 - and 01:58:542 - Same issue as 00:47:174 - . same reply
please don't ask me to look this again

thx for mod.

Lilyanna

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Topic Starter

Lilyanna 2016-09-12T04:55:53+00:00

sorry ayyri forgot to give kds got distracted, pls be nice on my song choice, its making me struggle i rly like the song hope some other people like it too updated map.

Electoz

1,886 posts

Joined May 2015

Electoz 2016-09-12T10:56:04+00:00

[General]

Tags should be purpose instead of purpose: since colon isn't necessary when you're searching for tags.

[Aru's Easy]

02:23:806 (4,1) - 03:04:858 (1,2) - DS
03:20:016 (1) - Was expecting a 3/2 repeat slider like 03:09:911 (1) - 03:14:964 (1) for consistency and to make it more friendly towards players, I feel like you made this 3/4 for the sake of 03:22:227 (2) which plays alright since the bpm is low but still I wouldn't recommend it.

[Normal]

01:37:700 (2) - If you're trying to differentiate this from 01:33:911 (1,2,1) by hitsounding the sliderslide then might as well use a different shape lol
01:59:174 (1,2) - Circles don't really play well imo when cuz they're next to each other but clickable on different elements from the song, a 1/2 slider like 00:48:437 (1) fits better.
03:02:332 (5) - NC.
03:02:332 (5,6) - Should be mapped tbh, the intensity is about to reach the climax but the rhythm density at this point is just opposite, adding a 1/1 slider on 03:03:279 would work too if you're following vocal.
03:12:121 (2) - The repeat sounds off cuz there isn't really obvious beat to land if you're following vocal, how about a circle + 1/1 slider instead?

[ezek's Hard]

00:38:016 (5) - How about a 1/4 slider instead so you won't miss the vocal on 00:38:174 ?
01:06:121 (5) - NC.
01:48:595 (5,6,1,2,3,4) - aaa why a sudden dense rhythm+linear flow? I was expecting a less dense rhythm like 01:51:595 (1,2) instead of 01:49:069 (1,2,3) . If you're saying you made the rhythm on 01:49:069 (1,2,3) denser cuz vocal then 01:51:595 (1,2) should be dense as 01:49:069 (1,2,3) .
02:14:332 - Is there any particular reason for having different SV from 01:03:595 - 03:04:858 ? The intensity on these places are pretty much same though.

Call me when you're ready.

Lilyanna

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Joined March 2016

Topic Starter

Lilyanna 2016-09-12T14:07:15+00:00

Electoz wrote:
[General]

Tags should be purpose instead of purpose: since colon isn't necessary when you're searching for tags. fixed

[Normal]

01:37:700 (2) - If you're trying to differentiate this from 01:33:911 (1,2,1) by hitsounding the sliderslide then might as well use a different shape lol i accidently hitsounded the sliderslide while remaping so i fixed the hitsound and kept the shape
01:59:174 (1,2) - Circles don't really play well imo when cuz they're next to each other but clickable on different elements from the song, a 1/2 slider like 00:48:437 (1) fits better. fixed
03:02:332 (5) - NC. oups fixed
03:02:332 (5,6) - Should be mapped tbh, the intensity is about to reach the climax but the rhythm density at this point is just opposite, adding a 1/1 slider on 03:03:279 would work too if you're following vocal. feels better fixed thx
03:12:121 (2) - The repeat sounds off cuz there isn't really obvious beat to land if you're following vocal, how about a circle + 1/1 slider instead?done sounds fair since there is beat on downbeat that i already mapped for rest >/<
Call me when you're ready.

thank you for mod

ZekeyHache

3,316 posts

Joined October 2009

ZekeyHache 2016-09-12T17:45:44+00:00

Electoz wrote:
[ezek's Hard]

00:38:016 (5) - How about a 1/4 slider instead so you won't miss the vocal on 00:38:174 ? oki doki
01:06:121 (5) - NC. omg how did I miss that one lol
01:48:595 (5,6,1,2,3,4) - aaa why a sudden dense rhythm+linear flow? I was expecting a less dense rhythm like 01:51:595 (1,2) instead of 01:49:069 (1,2,3) . If you're saying you made the rhythm on 01:49:069 (1,2,3) denser cuz vocal then 01:51:595 (1,2) should be dense as 01:49:069 (1,2,3) . I made the rhythm less dense~
02:14:332 - Is there any particular reason for having different SV from 01:03:595 - 03:04:858 ? The intensity on these places are pretty much same though. Yes~ That part is the closest to the last kiai, so I wanted to make it a bit more challenging~
Call me when you're ready. ring ring

Thanks for the mod! ^^

update me plz

osu file format v14

[General]
AudioFilename: audio.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 73069
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 0

[Editor]
Bookmarks: 23174,53490,63595,124227,134332
DistanceSpacing: 1.5
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 1

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TitleUnicode:Company
Artist:Justin Bieber
ArtistUnicode:Justin Bieber
Creator:Lilyanna
Version:ezek's Hard
Source:
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BeatmapID:1035560
BeatmapSetID:485619

[Difficulty]
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CircleSize:4
OverallDifficulty:6
ApproachRate:7
SliderMultiplier:1.9
SliderTickRate:1

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//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples

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CrystilonZ

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Joined January 2013

CrystilonZ 2016-09-12T17:49:44+00:00

no I won't update you >:C
~~this is so random lolol~~

Good luck !

ZekeyHache

3,316 posts

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ZekeyHache 2016-09-12T17:53:26+00:00

CrystilonZ wrote:
no I won't update you >:C
~~this is so random lolol~~

Good luck !

/me feels outdated uwu

Arusamour

424 posts

Joined April 2014

Arusamour 2016-09-12T20:08:31+00:00

Electoz wrote:
[Aru's Easy]

02:23:806 (4,1) - 03:04:858 (1,2) - DS 1.07 -> 1.05. does it really matter? i think as long as it doesn't occur inconsistently, it should be fine.
03:20:016 (1) - Was expecting a 3/2 repeat slider like 03:09:911 (1) - 03:14:964 (1) for consistency and to make it more friendly towards players, I feel like you made this 3/4 for the sake of 03:22:227 (2) which plays alright since the bpm is low but still I wouldn't recommend it. yup! i thought it would be better to finish on a circle but it does have its cost.

Lilyanna

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Lilyanna 2016-09-12T21:25:41+00:00

Updated map. >//<

Electoz

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Electoz 2016-09-13T00:15:58+00:00

Bubbled!

ZekeyHache

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ZekeyHache 2016-09-13T00:17:40+00:00

Bubblyanna~

Lilyanna

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Lilyanna 2016-09-13T00:22:40+00:00

thx Electoz *w*

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