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CrystilonZ

Joined January 2013

CrystilonZ 2016-08-12T13:23:43+00:00

Hi there~ from the queue

[General]
I think a 192 kbps one should be easy to find for this song. Just ask ezek for this and I believe he can provide you one in no time
asdf product tie-ins
Double spacebar detected

Tags: ezek Ora (here) Pop

[Lilyanna's Light Insane]

Actually, you can name this "Insane" tho. Light Insane is the thing we use if the spread between Hard and Insane sucks
The flow is pretty questionable, but I will just let it slide
I don't understand the choice you made either. Why did you choose to skip things like 01:17:648 but mapped things like 01:21:911 (2,3,4) - . At least it's consistent, so I think it's fine.
00:25:227 (6) - suddenly normal sample lol
00:25:700 (1,5) - this overlap is not really nice and the flow towards 00:27:595 (6) - is not very good either
00:39:595 (4) - to keep this one coherent with the pattern of 00:38:964 (2,3) - , try something like this. And it will also fit with the spacing you did before like 00:34:542 (4) -
00:53:490 (1) - I know this is the pattern you've made, but this one deserves some more emphasis.
01:23:174 (7,8,9,1) - I will just say these overlap badly. Try something like this
01:23:806 (1) - I don't know if you intended to make a manual stack or just a normal stack. If it's a normal stack, then it's off.
01:26:332 (1) - I thought you were making anti-jumps on these notes, but some variation is fine, i guess.
02:01:385 (3) - point this a bit downwards and it will give you a better sense of reversal on 02:01:700 (4) -
02:01:069 (1,4) - swap nc. there's no need for nc at 02:01:069 (1) -
02:20:332 (5) - I don't know exactly why it is put here, so I'm gonna assume you tried to make a blanket. put this at 464/116 should get rid of the spacing inconsistency.
Also, please check for accidental slider-slide sounds.

[ezek's Hard]

report ezek pls: display too lewd i want to read this ajfneofwe

00:23:174 lol wtf the density is even higher than ~~Ora's~~ Lilyanna's diff
Check this box if you want to reduce the density. If not, skip this.
00:31:542 (2,3) - merge this into 1 2/4 slider
01:42:279 (2,3) - ^
01:54:121 (1,2,3) -
01:14:332 (2,3,4) - can you improve this? The pattern is so curvy
01:22:542 (4) - I think this should be point upwards, but this is also fine
02:44:332 (5) - around 486/82 perhaps? reason is obvious
02:44:648 lazy ezek
well, if you fix anything from the first kiai, fix it too in ^
03:20:016 (1,2,1) - stack'em

[Normal]

01:25:069 check hitsounds
Just stick with the one-big-white-one-nc thing unless the music really calls for a special nc.
01:52:227 (2,2) - wat
I think this map is pretty decent, but for your next map, please don't just flip things. Be imaginative Being consistent is good, but being repetitive isn't

good luck~

Yukiyo

425 posts

Joined June 2014

Yukiyo 2016-08-12T16:13:48+00:00

Hi o/
from my q
Disclaimer: I always sound rude in my mods
Don't let it bother you I don't mean it

Let's see if I can help you

Aru's Easy

00:40:858 (3,1) - improve blanket~
01:52:858 (4,1) - ^ ~
02:01:069 (2,3) - Hmm the angle on how the circle is leading into the slider is weird because the slider choses another flow idk~
02:38:964 (4,1) - blanket

Normal

00:24:437 (3) - Probably said already but ctrl+g would create a nice (kinda) circular flow which plays nicer then such linear
00:32:648 (4) - missing clap?
00:45:911 (1) - NC because downbeat and pause before
00:48:437 (1) - NC downbeat
01:09:279 - missing clap?
01:10:542 - ^?
01:25:069 - hs missing from here on?
01:32:332 (6,8) - dunno aboout stacking these ... could maintain sliderflow by putting 8 in direction the slider is pointing
01:41:174 (4) - delete NC
01:41:490 (1) - NC
01:51:595 - hs
01:54:121 - hs
01:57:911 - hs ... not going to point out hitsounding anymore~
02:35:806 (1) - no need for NC rather NC here 02:37:069 (3) -
02:40:542 (2,3,4,5) - improve blanket~
02:42:121 (5) - could ctrl+g for flow and stuff
02:44:648 (3) - NC
02:45:911 (1) - delete NC
02:49:700 (3) - NC
02:50:964 (4) - delete NC

Be sure to have consitent downbeat NC's pls (because it is mostly the notes which is mostly emphasized)

ezek's Hard

Looks like a decent diff c:

Ora's Light Insane

already noticed hsing something's wrong ... use my normal mod for reference~
Noticed nothing I felt to be odd

Lilyanna

1,918 posts

Joined March 2016

Topic Starter

Lilyanna 2016-08-12T20:43:11+00:00

CrystilonZ wrote:
Hi there~ from the queue

[General]
I think a 192 kbps one should be easy to find for this song. Just ask ezek for this and I believe he can provide you one in no time
asdf product tie-ins
Double spacebar detected oups fixed x)
Tags: ezek Ora (here) Pop
[Normal]
01:25:069 check hitsounds did and did for rest
Just stick with the one-big-white-one-nc thing unless the music really calls for a special nc. ye
01:52:227 (2,2) - wat doesnt seem of big deal of overlap to me tbh ;w;
I think this map is pretty decent, but for your next map, please don't just flip things. Be imaginative Being consistent is good, but being repetitive isn't but i like symmetry patterns and stuff xdd but thx for the tip

good luck~

thx for mod.

Yukiyo wrote:
Hi o/ hello
from my q
Disclaimer: I always sound rude in my mods
Don't let it bother you I don't mean it

Let's see if I can help you

Normal
00:24:437 (3) - Probably said already but ctrl+g would create a nice (kinda) circular flow which plays nicer then such linear true fixed
00:32:648 (4) - missing clap? yes sir i missed
00:45:911 (1) - NC because downbeat and pause before fixed ;w;
00:48:437 (1) - NC downbeat i think the nc choice is fine here
01:09:279 - missing clap? yes fixed and all the rest
01:10:542 - ^?
01:25:069 - hs missing from here on? fixed all ;w;
01:32:332 (6,8) - dunno aboout stacking these ... could maintain sliderflow by putting 8 in direction the slider is pointing okay done
01:41:174 (4) - delete NC ye
01:41:490 (1) - NC i disagree i did nc when he started singing next part
01:51:595 - hs
01:54:121 - hs
01:57:911 - hs ... not going to point out hitsounding anymore~ when through the map for 54351 time and checked all ;w;
02:35:806 (1) - no need for NC rather NC here 02:37:069 (3) - my bad when i copy paste it iforgot to remove the nc x) fixed
02:40:542 (2,3,4,5) - improve blanket~ fixed
02:42:121 (5) - could ctrl+g for flow and stuff wont be needed
02:44:648 (3) - NC
02:45:911 (1) - delete NC
02:49:700 (3) - NC
02:50:964 (4) - delete NC fixed all nc i hope

Be sure to have consitent downbeat NC's pls (because it is mostly the notes which is mostly emphasized)

THX for mod x).

Rieri

906 posts

Joined December 2014

Rieri 2016-08-12T21:05:23+00:00

Hello~ NM from my queue

Easy

00:23:174 (1,2) - I think you can work on the blankets a bit more
00:30:753 (3,1) - Slight blanket error not mentioning any more, fix them on your own please
01:33:911 (1) - Okay, pretty sure we are going to need more recovery time than that. A full measure of recovery time is highly recommended.
02:01:700 (3) - Sorta weird how you mapped with a 4/1 slider here when you used mostly 1/1 sliders and circles before, sorta seems inconsistent with the current section and 02:04:227 (1) - blanket this properly please.
02:26:964 (3,1) - Overlaps will make the players confused, please avoid overlaps on an easy difficulty

Normal

00:23:174 (1,2,3) - Blankets
By looking at the way you set a NC on 00:50:964 (1) - , I think it would be correct to say that 00:45:911 (6) - this should be NCed too.
01:03:595 (1,2,3) - Okay, why is the distance broken here? Just up to 00:53:490 (1) - , the distance was at 1.2x and you should keep it that way.
01:18:121 (5,1) - Fix distance here please. check the rest on your own, don't be lazy
02:21:595 (1) - Okay, there is a similar part of the song and you choose to map that part differently than this? 01:10:858 (5,1) - You mapped the "oh" with a circle here but not on 02:21:595 (1) - which is inconsistent, I recommend you to map both parts the same
Using velocity changes on normal isn't a great idea because the targeted players are still beginners who may find it confusing. Let's try to keep things simple.

Hard diff is nice, Light Insane has a lower SV than the hard diff, you should adjust that so it is higher than 1.9 or there's gonna be some trouble :3

Good luck!

Ora

959 posts

Joined November 2014

Ora 2016-08-12T21:08:16+00:00

[~~Lilyanna's~~ Ora's Light Insane ?? ]
Actually, you can name this "Insane" tho. Light Insane is the thing we use if the spread between Hard and Insane sucks okay
The flow is pretty questionable, but I will just let it slide
I don't understand the choice you made either. Why did you choose to skip things like 01:17:648 but mapped things like 01:21:911 (2,3,4) - . At least it's consistent, so I think it's fine. uhhh if it's fine then okay...
00:25:227 (6) - suddenly normal sample lol fixed
00:25:700 (1,5) - this overlap is not really nice and the flow towards 00:27:595 (6) - is not very good either I fixed it kind of, but it might not flow still. I will probably need to remap this part
00:39:595 (4) - to keep this one coherent with the pattern of 00:38:964 (2,3) - , try something like this. And it will also fit with the spacing you did before like 00:34:542 (4) - fixed
00:53:490 (1) - I know this is the pattern you've made, but this one deserves some more emphasis. what should I do with it? Space 1 out more?
01:23:174 (7,8,9,1) - I will just say these overlap badly. Try something like this fixed but another remap incoming...still looks ugly imo
01:23:806 (1) - I don't know if you intended to make a manual stack or just a normal stack. If it's a normal stack, then it's off. ^
01:26:332 (1) - I thought you were making anti-jumps on these notes, but some variation is fine, i guess. :D
02:01:385 (3) - point this a bit downwards and it will give you a better sense of reversal on 02:01:700 (4) - nice find and fixed
02:01:069 (1,4) - swap nc. there's no need for nc at 02:01:069 (1) - another nice find
02:20:332 (5) - I don't know exactly why it is put here, so I'm gonna assume you tried to make a blanket. put this at 464/116 should get rid of the spacing inconsistency. fixed I guess? I didn't see the problem really
Also, please check for accidental slider-slide sounds. Lily is on it

Thanks a lot for this. Accepted pretty much everything

Underforest

5,895 posts

Joined July 2015

Underforest 2016-08-12T21:10:23+00:00

since there isn't a insane diff, you can rename light insane diff with a custom name like "Forever", "Love" or "Together"
no kudo

Underforest

5,895 posts

Joined July 2015

Underforest 2016-08-12T22:21:18+00:00

at least Ora's Together, lol

Lilyanna

1,918 posts

Joined March 2016

Topic Starter

Lilyanna 2016-08-12T22:22:54+00:00

Underforest wrote:
at least Ora's Together, lol

;w; i knew that its a gd and his name must be there so well come up of something :s "ora's together" sound wierd xD but will see thx for help ^.^

Lilyanna

1,918 posts

Joined March 2016

Topic Starter

Lilyanna 2016-08-12T22:53:47+00:00

ProEzreal wrote:
Hello~ NM from my queue

Normal
00:23:174 (1,2,3) - Blankets fixed
By looking at the way you set a NC on 00:50:964 (1) - , I think it would be correct to say that 00:45:911 (6) - this should be NCed too. guess was late for update xd but fixed already i have it nced
01:03:595 (1,2,3) - Okay, why is the distance broken here? Just up to 00:53:490 (1) - , the distance was at 1.2x and you should keep it that way. fixed
01:18:121 (5,1) - Fix distance here please. check the rest on your own, don't be lazy fixed im not lazy i hate ds ihate it ;s XD
02:21:595 (1) - Okay, there is a similar part of the song and you choose to map that part differently than this? 01:10:858 (5,1) - You mapped the "oh" with a circle here but not on 02:21:595 (1) - which is inconsistent, I recommend you to map both parts the same yes fixed that earlier i added the spinner start from "oh" for both
Using velocity changes on normal isn't a great idea because the targeted players are still beginners who may find it confusing. Let's try to keep things simple. well i thought since its small part and makes sens and i wanted the ds to be small i could do it but ill changes since someone pointed this before

Hard diff is nice, Light Insane has a lower SV than the hard diff, you should adjust that so it is higher than 1.9 or there's gonna be some trouble :3 ora ---> ;w;w;;w;w;;w

Good luck!

THX for mod.

ZekeyHache

3,316 posts

Joined October 2009

ZekeyHache 2016-08-12T23:12:25+00:00

CrystilonZ wrote:
Hi there~ from the queue hi! u wanna be my friend? \:D/

[ezek's Hard]
report ezek pls: display too lewd i want to read this ajfneofwe wanna read it? I can tell you where to read it if you want
00:23:174 lol wtf the density is even higher than ~~Ora's~~ Lilyanna's diff I just did what I believe it suits a hard, so no change here~
Check this box if you want to reduce the density. If not, skip this.
00:31:542 (2,3) - merge this into 1 2/4 slider
01:42:279 (2,3) - ^
01:54:121 (1,2,3) -
01:14:332 (2,3,4) - can you improve this? The pattern is so curvy looks fine for me :c
01:22:542 (4) - I think this should be point upwards, but this is also fine I prefer to keep it parallel with the previous slider for aesthetics and flows cool with the next circle
02:44:332 (5) - around 486/82 perhaps? reason is obvious yep, reason is obvious xDD
02:44:648 lazy ezek hehehe, sometimes I just run out of ideas :3
well, if you fix anything from the first kiai, fix it too in ^ you know nothing to do here :p
03:20:016 (1,2,1) - stack'em I prefer to keep them as that~ I think they have a better emphasis when they're apart~

good luck~

Thank you for the mod! ^^
On a quick search, I couldn't find a better mp3, but I think the one Lily uses sounds pretty decent tho is 128kbps \:D/

this is a box.

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Ora

959 posts

Joined November 2014

Ora 2016-08-12T23:35:27+00:00

Underforest wrote:
at least Ora's Together, lol

I think we decided "Ora's Paradise" :^)

Lilyanna

1,918 posts

Joined March 2016

Topic Starter

Lilyanna 2016-08-12T23:53:47+00:00

Updated changes.

CrystilonZ

1,557 posts

Joined January 2013

CrystilonZ 2016-08-13T04:57:14+00:00

@Ora: yep, space (1) out more, but this is up to you, rly
@ezek: gib me dat link plsssssssss
//adding ezek to friend list

-NanoRIPE-

2,059 posts

Joined October 2013

-NanoRIPE- 2016-08-13T09:46:16+00:00

hi
a noob modder passing by
i hate jb xd

[Easy]
00:25:700 (2,2) - imperfect stacked
00:30:753 (3,1) - imperfect blanket
00:33:279 (1,2) - ds bro
00:35:806 (2,1,2) - maybe blanket (1,2) and stacked (2,2) ?
01:03:595 (1) - finish?
01:18:121 - why you make this blanket? i think in kiai time you must make the pattern little bit harder than outside of kiai time (and also for 01:23:174 - 01:28:227 - 01:33:279
01:33:279 - this green timing looks unnecessary
01:59:174 (1) - move to (448,120_ and ctrl h?
02:01:700 (3,1) - unblanket it (if you try to blanket it,it will ruin the ds)
02:14:332 (1) - idk why you make the reverse slider on blue tick
02:19:385 (1) - ^
02:24:437 until 03:04:227 - same as before (about the blanket part)
03:14:964 (1) - same as before
03:20:016 (1) - ^

GL!

Izzywing

osu! Alumni

2,250 posts

Joined March 2016

Izzywing 2016-08-14T04:02:23+00:00

ive actually never heard this song lol

Not modding the easy because he hasn't responded to the above mod

[Normal]

01:10:858 (1) - Not really sure why you have a spinner here instead of just mapping this out; it doesnt really fit the song there

01:54:121 (1,2,3) - So the blankets are more or less good (although 1 could use some work), this doesnt look good because the space between 2 and 3 and the space between 2 and 1 isnt the same

02:21:595 (1) - Again, I think you should probably just map this out :v

Solid diff, it's a style I like.

[ezek's Hard]

oh hi

This diff uses a lot of 1/4 and the normal doesn't have any in it, so this gives me concerns about the curve :v I think it might be fine but another opinion would probably be helpful.

00:30:753 (1) - This shape would look nicer if it had a bit more of a curve to it, so I suggest moving the middle slider point. Something like this? https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5841409

00:32:016 (4) - Same applies to this one

00:41:016 - Hm, I suggest not ignoring the vocal line here, here's the rhythm I suggest - http://imgur.com/a/deSSB (currently hovering over 00:40:858)

00:44:648 (5) - cool slider!

01:16:227 (1,2) - Cool blanket, but it looks to me like these two aren't properly parallel, I think you have to turn off grid snap to fix it

01:22:542 (4,5) - I know that here you're following a generally consistent rhythm, but the introduction of the drums(?) on 01:22:858 - I think warrants you to break the rhythm and start mapping those instead. So, I suggest removing the reverse from this slider and mapping the sound at 01:23:016. Of course, this would require you to reshape some stuff :v

01:26:332 (1,2,3) - It would look neat if the gap between 1 and 2 and the gap between 2 and 3 were the same. http://imgur.com/a/acDhQ The arrows point to the gaps I'm referring to

01:55:384 (5) - 👌👌👌

02:33:279 (4,5) - same comment before about the drums(?) that get introduced at 02:33:595; ignoring 02:33:753 - is not something I would do.

02:43:385 (4) - Make 02:44:016 - clickable imo; aside from being a drum, it lets the player click all 3 parts of "company"

Really fun diff! I always enjoy your mapping style.

[Ora's Paradise]

this diff shares the name with my second favorite diff in this game :^)

00:39:595 (4,6) - ah, these two are almost touching :V some space between them would be nice

This diff looks pretty good, not much I could really talk about here.

Good luck!

ZekeyHache

3,316 posts

Joined October 2009

ZekeyHache 2016-08-14T05:50:04+00:00

Hobbes2 wrote:
[ezek's Hard]

oh hi You're starting to get everywhere xD

This diff uses a lot of 1/4 and the normal doesn't have any in it, so this gives me concerns about the curve :v I think it might be fine but another opinion would probably be helpful. The song is very slow, so using a lot of 1/4 is not that big deal, even SR knows

00:30:753 (1) - This shape would look nicer if it had a bit more of a curve to it, so I suggest moving the middle slider point. Something like this? https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5841409 I prefer to keep light curves~

00:32:016 (4) - Same applies to this one ^

00:41:016 - Hm, I suggest not ignoring the vocal line here, here's the rhythm I suggest - http://imgur.com/a/deSSB (currently hovering over 00:40:858) I like how my pattern emphasizes the strong instrumental part by ignoring the vocals, besides it gives a small rest for the sudden 1/4 usage~

00:44:648 (5) - cool slider! yee, I spent 5 hours making that slider

01:16:227 (1,2) - Cool blanket, but it looks to me like these two aren't properly parallel, I think you have to turn off grid snap to fix it hmm hmm, what a detail! fixed~ (I think xD)

01:22:542 (4,5) - I know that here you're following a generally consistent rhythm, but the introduction of the drums(?) on 01:22:858 - I think warrants you to break the rhythm and start mapping those instead. So, I suggest removing the reverse from this slider and mapping the sound at 01:23:016. Of course, this would require you to reshape some stuff :v I thought about this when I was mapping it, but I think it would be too dense cuz I already use a lot of 1/4

01:26:332 (1,2,3) - It would look neat if the gap between 1 and 2 and the gap between 2 and 3 were the same. http://imgur.com/a/acDhQ The arrows point to the gaps I'm referring to what an eye you got there! x.x fixed!

01:55:384 (5) - 👌👌👌 O3O

02:33:279 (4,5) - same comment before about the drums(?) that get introduced at 02:33:595; ignoring 02:33:753 - is not something I would do. but it's something that I would do

02:43:385 (4) - Make 02:44:016 - clickable imo; aside from being a drum, it lets the player click all 3 parts of "company" Good idea! I like how this gives more emphasis to the main word, I wonder how I didn't get the idea before ;w;

Really fun diff! I always enjoy your mapping style. thanks! ^^

Thank you Hobby!

I'm not Justin Beiber B****

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316,224,176017,2,0,B|316:188|316:188|320:184|320:184|312:184|312:184|316:180|316:180|316:140,2,95,4|2|8,3:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
264,284,176806,1,0,0:0:0:0:
264,284,177280,6,0,B|188:284|188:284|148:336,1,142.5,4|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
81,305,177912,2,0,L|121:253,1,47.5,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
80,184,178227,2,0,L|44:236,1,47.5,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
152,208,178543,2,0,P|164:160|152:116,2,95,4|2|8,3:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
80,184,179333,1,0,0:0:0:0:
284,40,179806,6,0,B|352:24|352:24|424:40,1,142.5,4|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
488,68,180438,2,0,P|492:92|488:116,1,47.5,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
417,169,180754,2,0,P|413:145|417:121,1,47.5,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
464,208,181069,2,0,P|420:196|372:208,2,95,4|2|8,3:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
420,276,181859,1,0,0:0:0:0:
420,276,182333,6,0,B|372:304|372:304|332:324|288:304,1,142.5,4|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
224,264,182964,2,0,P|196:260|168:264,1,47.5,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
124,332,183280,2,0,P|152:336|180:332,1,47.5,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
224,264,183596,2,0,P|236:216|224:172,2,95,4|2|8,3:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
284,304,184385,1,0,0:0:0:0:
344,344,184543,2,0,P|368:348|392:344,1,47.5,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
472,272,184858,6,0,P|484:220|472:168,2,106.875004076958,2|0|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
144,192,186753,1,0,0:0:0:0:
144,192,187069,1,0,0:0:0:0:
144,192,187385,6,0,P|124:124|144:56,1,142.500005435944,0|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
244,28,188332,1,0,0:0:0:0:
244,28,189279,2,0,L|296:32,1,35.625001358986
344,100,189595,2,0,L|292:96,1,35.625001358986
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252,176,192121,1,0,0:0:0:0:
252,176,192437,5,0,3:0:0:0:
308,224,194016,2,0,P|356:212|412:224,1,106.875004076958
208,296,194964,6,0,P|160:308|104:296,2,106.875004076958,2|0|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
368,64,196858,1,0,0:0:0:0:
368,64,197174,1,0,0:0:0:0:
368,64,197490,6,0,L|428:200,1,142.500005435944,0|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
472,292,198437,1,0,0:0:0:0:
168,192,199385,2,0,L|156:152,1,35.625001358986
240,200,199700,2,0,L|252:240,1,35.625001358986
224,128,200016,6,0,L|200:24,2,106.875004076958,2|0|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
304,192,202227,1,0,0:0:0:0:
304,192,202542,5,0,3:0:0:0:
256,192,202700,12,0,205069,0:0:0:0:

Ora

959 posts

Joined November 2014

Ora 2016-08-14T06:17:11+00:00

Sorry hobbes they couldn't help themselves ( ͡° ͜ʖ ͡°)

I separated them for you bby

Lilyanna

1,918 posts

Joined March 2016

Topic Starter

Lilyanna 2016-08-14T06:50:46+00:00

Hobbes2 wrote:
ive actually never heard this song lol

Not modding the easy because he hasn't responded to the above mod

[Normal]

01:10:858 (1) - Not really sure why you have a spinner here instead of just mapping this out; it doesnt really fit the song there kinda fits for and for the diff so its fine imo at least for now ill change if someone else point it out

01:54:121 (1,2,3) - So the blankets are more or less good (although 1 could use some work), this doesnt look good because the space between 2 and 3 and the space between 2 and 1 isnt the same o.o oups fixed blanket and spacing

02:21:595 (1) - Again, I think you should probably just map this out :v ^

Solid diff, it's a style I like.

Good luck!

THX for mod.

Exa

446 posts

Joined January 2015

Exa 2016-08-14T13:18:41+00:00

NORMAL DIFF IRC

15:25 Exa: Okay np your map
15:26 *Lilyanna is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1035561 Justin Bieber - Company [Normal]]
15:26 Exa: Oh boy 12 mins of justin bieber
15:26 Exa: lets go
15:26 *Exa is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1047823 Justin Bieber - Company [Aru's Easy]]
15:26 Exa: Oh right that's not yours
15:27 Exa: 00:23:174 (1,2) - Just, this blanket is off
15:27 Exa: Okay onto the normal
15:27 Lilyanna: ..
15:27 Exa: 00:20:648 (1) - Oh yeah no, that's waaay too small for normal
15:27 Exa: You can't do anything else but remove it
15:28 Lilyanna: but if i remove it
15:28 Lilyanna: the hard gd will have more drain than me
15:28 Lilyanna: which make in unrankable
15:28 Exa: You can replace it with a slider
15:29 Lilyanna: btw its not small iv test it in auto if it hits 1000 than ure fine
15:29 Exa: Yeah, normals are different
15:29 Exa: It doesn't matter if it hits 1000 in normal
15:29 Exa: That rule is for insane+
15:29 Lilyanna: well its actually 3000
15:29 Lilyanna: okay
15:29 Exa: 2 beats long is too small lily
15:30 Lilyanna: ;w; ill make slider
15:30 Exa: Ask a beatmap nominator if you are not convinced, this is waay too small
15:30 Exa: Also, the easy GD has nothing on the start
15:30 Exa: Nor does Ora's diff
15:31 Lilyanna: 00:20:648 (1) -
15:31 Lilyanna: the hard :s
15:31 Lilyanna: he has more drain than me now
15:31 Exa: How does he have more drain..
15:31 Lilyanna: like with 2 sec
15:31 Exa: Where does the hard start?
15:31 Lilyanna: that spin takes 2 secs
15:31 Lilyanna: LOL
15:31 Exa: Yeah, that's why you should add a slider
15:31 Exa: And no other diff starts so early anyway
15:32 Lilyanna: i hope slider wil fit
15:32 Exa: I think you should add nothing
15:32 Exa: And just ask the GD person to remove their spinner
15:33 Lilyanna: ye
15:33 Lilyanna: okay
15:33 Exa: 00:38:332 (1,2) - Okay that's a nono
15:33 Exa: Because the player might leave early from 00:38:332 (1) - to go to 00:39:595 (2) -
15:33 Exa: And break their combo
15:33 Exa: Because 00:39:595 (2) - is on the opposite direction
15:34 Lilyanna: its same ds ..
15:34 Exa: I never mentioned the DS
15:34 Exa: The ds is fine
15:34 Exa: It's the placement that's the problem
15:34 Lilyanna: but its ds..
15:34 Lilyanna: lol i cant
15:34 Lilyanna: move it more
15:35 Exa: [http://puu.sh/qAWgq/101b01cac3.jpg this] might happen
15:35 Exa: Which is something you should try to avoid
15:35 Lilyanna: 00:39:595 (2) - ill ctrl g this
15:35 Lilyanna: and place it down and
15:35 Lilyanna: ye true
15:35 Exa: Yeah if you ctrl+g this and move it down then it should be fine
15:36 Lilyanna: ye and will fix rest
15:36 Lilyanna: so ds stay consistent
15:36 Exa: 00:42:753 (1,2,3,4) - Also this pattern is...
15:36 Exa: So unorganized
15:36 Exa: The angles you have don't make sense
15:36 Lilyanna: ill remap
15:36 Exa: 00:42:753 (1,3) - Like, these 2 have different angled
15:36 Exa: angles*
15:37 Exa: 00:43:385 (2) - And this is kind of random being so angled
15:37 Lilyanna: lol
15:37 Lilyanna: xdi think ill remap that part
15:37 Exa: Okay then I'll skip past the break
15:38 Lilyanna: well ok
15:38 Exa: 01:10:858 (1) - This also probably too small
15:38 Exa: 01:11:806 - not to mention there is a beat here
15:38 Lilyanna: seems fine ;w;
15:38 Exa: How does it seem fine lily...
15:38 Exa: It's 2.5 beats long
15:38 Lilyanna: its a clap
15:38 Exa: Did you even get any testplays?
15:38 Exa: Yeah there is a clap there
15:38 Lilyanna: yes
15:38 Exa: That you don't represent at all
15:39 Exa: Did you get any testplays from new people?
15:39 Lilyanna: u can skip upbeats in normal
15:39 Lilyanna: yes lol
15:39 Exa: Yeah my point is
15:39 Exa: You can remove the spinner which is too small
15:39 Exa: And to compensate for that removal, you can add a note on the clap
15:40 Lilyanna: what
15:40 Exa: Remove spinner -> Add note there
15:40 Lilyanna: just one note .
15:40 Exa: There is just one beat
15:41 Exa: Where else are you going to add a note?
15:41 Lilyanna: 01:11:174 -
15:41 Exa: Sure, you can do that
15:41 Lilyanna: but rly seem fine to me :w:
15:41 Exa: I thought you wanted this section to be calm
15:41 Exa: Ok ask a beatmap nominator if it seems fine to you
15:42 Exa: 01:16:227 (1) - Okay these are clearly asymmetrical
15:42 Lilyanna: u keep saying as a bn ;w;
15:42 Exa: I say ask a BN to which ever you "think" is fine
15:42 Exa: I've pointed out many stuff without mentioning bns
15:42 Exa: 01:16:227 (1,3) - These look like they fell and broke their leg
15:42 Lilyanna: ....
15:42 Lilyanna: thats mean Exaa
15:43 Lilyanna: whats wrong with those
15:43 Exa: [http://puu.sh/qAWyK/657fd05383.jpg Do you see] how the one wave is bugger than the other?
15:43 Exa: The first wave is much bigger
15:43 Exa: They look like they have a hump on their back
15:43 Exa: You know, like old people do
15:43 Lilyanna: ...
15:44 Lilyanna: u not helping xd
15:44 Lilyanna: i dont get it
15:44 Lilyanna: its copy paste
15:44 Exa: ..............
15:44 Lilyanna: u dont like the shape !?
15:44 Exa: http://puu.sh/qAWBi/f0a961f34f.jpg
15:45 Lilyanna: ill make less wavy
15:45 Exa: http://puu.sh/qAWCy/17230893fe.jpg
15:45 Exa: Which one looks better to you?
15:45 Exa: [http://puu.sh/qAWCZ/c4cd6a0ff1.jpg look] how nice and symmetrical the anchors are here
15:45 Lilyanna: i think second
15:45 Lilyanna: but they slightly look same
15:45 Exa: Lily..
15:45 Exa: They are not the same
15:45 Exa: Find me one map
15:45 Lilyanna: LOL
15:45 Exa: Where it doesn't have symmetrical wavy sliders
15:46 Exa: Only 1
15:46 Exa: There is none
15:46 Lilyanna: tsubaki by HW
15:46 Exa: Okay np and show me exactly
15:46 Lilyanna: xD
15:46 Exa: Noone has asymmetrical sliders lily..
15:46 Exa: They look really bad
15:46 *Lilyanna is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/815252 Ocelot - TSUBAKI [ZZH's Advanced]]
15:47 Exa: Yeah?
15:47 Exa: This is CTB btw
15:47 *Exa is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/815252 Ocelot - TSUBAKI [ZZH's Advanced]]
15:47 Exa: This is a ctb map lily...
15:47 Exa: Wait no
15:48 Exa: Nvm I was looking at something else
15:48 Lilyanna: XD
15:48 Exa: Okay yeah where are the asymmetrical sliders?
15:48 Lilyanna: ehm
15:48 Lilyanna: u said wavy
15:48 Exa: yeah
15:48 Exa: where are they?
15:48 Exa: asymmetrical wavy sliders
15:48 Lilyanna: idk
15:48 Exa: ...
15:48 Exa: Then why did you mention this map?
15:49 Lilyanna: idk
15:49 Lilyanna: lets keep modding
15:49 Lilyanna: ;w;
15:49 Exa: Do you want to do this another time?
15:49 Exa: 01:16:227 (1) - [http://puu.sh/qAWOJ/7063656647.jpg Again] this
15:49 Exa: Do you know how to make symmetrical sliders?
15:49 Exa: If not I'll show ya
15:50 Lilyanna: http://puu.sh/qAWPP/acf3c2a03e.jpg
15:50 Lilyanna: is this better?
15:50 Exa: Much better
15:50 Exa: You can move the 2 middle anchors further appart to make the wave bigger
15:50 Exa: But don't make it too big
15:51 Lilyanna: i think i like it like that
15:51 Exa: Okay then
15:52 Exa: http://puu.sh/qAWVH/c6d8fa60c3.jpg
15:52 Exa: 01:20:016 (3) -
15:52 Exa: Add another small anchor to make it flow in better
15:53 Exa: 01:27:595 (3) - Move the second anchor at 120 168 to make a nicer circular blanket
15:53 Exa: Careful cause the snap might get messed up
15:54 Exa: 01:41:490 (5) - Okay a friendly advice
15:54 Exa: Never angle wavy sliders
15:54 Exa: Either keep them horizontal or vertical
15:54 Exa: Wavy sliders are the most awkward thing to play to
15:55 Lilyanna: u mean repeat sliders
15:55 Exa: No I mean wavy sliders
15:55 Exa: 01:41:490 (5) - I specificaly pointed this out
15:55 Lilyanna: ohh
15:55 Lilyanna: i get it
15:55 Exa: This is a wavy slider
15:55 Lilyanna: ii got u
15:56 Lilyanna: ill take of the wavyness
15:56 Exa: No you don't need to take off the wavyness...
15:56 Exa: Although you could do that
15:56 Exa: 01:43:385 (1,2,3) - Also the flow here is...
15:56 Exa: Egh
15:56 Lilyanna: ehm
15:57 Exa: http://puu.sh/qAX6A/ae00b7aa00.jpg
15:57 Exa: Blue is suggestive flow
15:57 Lilyanna: ill remap
15:57 Exa: Purple is actual flow
15:57 Exa: LILY
15:57 Exa: You will remap
15:57 Exa: But you mut first hear me out
15:57 Exa: You can't just "remap"
15:57 Lilyanna: yes
15:57 Exa: You must learn your mistakes
15:57 Exa: So you never do them again
15:58 Lilyanna: yes sir ,;w;
15:58 Exa: The first time we made the map, I told you not to do big angles
15:58 Exa: And you did big angled 4 times more
15:58 Exa: That's because you "just remaped"
15:58 Exa: You didn't learn your mistake

15:58 Exa: So first let me finish modding
15:58 Exa: And then you wil remapo
15:58 Exa: Okay?
15:58 Lilyanna: i learn at 4th time ,;<;
15:58 Lilyanna: yes i dont mean now
15:59 Lilyanna: x)
15:59 Exa: Yeah because I yelled at you and told you I'll get angry if you do it again
15:59 Exa: You could have learned on the first time you remaped
15:59 Lilyanna: im slow
15:59 Lilyanna: okay
15:59 Lilyanna: is suggested
15:59 Lilyanna: flow
15:59 Lilyanna: blue
15:59 Exa: No... you are too fast
15:59 Exa: You are impatient
15:59 Exa: Mapping and learning needs patience
15:59 Lilyanna: okay
16:00 Exa: So you see how the blue is so much different than the purple?
16:00 Exa: That's not good, apparently
16:00 Lilyanna: yes
16:00 Exa: 01:45:911 (1,2,3) - Same weird flow is here basicaly
16:00 Exa: 01:48:437 (5,1) - And here...
16:00 Exa: You see how 5 looks down?
16:01 Exa: and you make the player go up?
16:01 Lilyanna: okay
16:01 Exa: 01:52:858 (3) - Eeeegh okay lemme show you something
16:03 Exa: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=oL3az8FhlB4
16:03 Exa: 4th minute
16:03 Exa: take a look at it and let me know if you understood about 01:52:858 (3) - this slider
16:03 Lilyanna: oh god pishi not a fan anymore
16:03 Exa: He know's what he's talking about though
16:03 Exa: Nevermind that he's pishi
16:03 Exa: Listen to what he says
16:04 Lilyanna: iv seen this ;w;
16:04 Exa: Go to the 4th minute
16:04 Exa: Watch it again
16:04 Exa: 01:52:858 (3) - then look at this slider
16:04 Exa: And tell me if you understand
16:05 Lilyanna: it looks dumb
16:05 Lilyanna: LOL
16:05 Exa: It looks weird because there's no other slider like it in the whole diff
16:05 Lilyanna: im laughing so hard atm
16:05 Exa: It's so different, it doesn't fit in
16:05 Lilyanna: there is in the next kiai LOL
16:06 Lilyanna: more dumbness
16:06 Exa: We are 2 minutes into the song
16:06 Exa: I haven't seen a slider like this so far
16:06 Exa: Anyay you got my point
16:06 Lilyanna: yes
16:06 Exa: 01:56:648 (5,6) - Angles
16:06 Lilyanna: another remap soon
16:07 Lilyanna: okay
16:07 Exa: 01:59:174 (2,3,4) - Too much linear flow
16:07 Exa: It'd be nice if you could change direction on 01:59:806 (4) -
16:07 Exa: 02:21:595 (1) - too small
16:08 Lilyanna: im gonna remap that part i dont want change one slider and keep struggling with ds ;w;
16:08 Lilyanna: ill map it ;w;
16:09 Exa: http://puu.sh/qAWBi/f0a961f34f.jpg
16:09 Exa: 02:35:806 (3) - o.o
16:09 Exa: what happened with the anchors there
16:11 Lilyanna: idk what u mean
16:11 Lilyanna: is it bad shape?
16:11 Exa: I mean the anchors
16:11 Exa: http://puu.sh/qAXG5/756b5e5012.jpg
16:11 Exa: why are they like this?
16:11 Exa: 02:34:542 (1) - Why didn't you just copy-paste this?
16:11 Lilyanna: i am retarted
16:11 Lilyanna: i did
16:11 Lilyanna: i swear
16:11 Exa: Then why is it different..
16:12 Lilyanna: idk
16:12 Lilyanna: osu hates me
16:12 Exa: ...
16:12 Exa: osu didn't change the anchors lily..
16:12 Exa: just fix et
16:12 Lilyanna: xddd
16:12 Lilyanna: i did
16:12 Exa: 02:35:806 (3,3) - And btw these don't stack
16:13 Exa: 02:44:648 (1) - Same asymmetrical slider as before
16:13 Exa: 02:49:700 (1) - And same
16:13 Exa: 02:54:753 (1) - Oh god
16:13 Exa: 02:59:806 (1,2,3,4,5) - The stacks here are probably too hard to properly read by newbies
16:13 Lilyanna: okay
16:14 Exa: 03:14:016 (2,3) - The blanket could be much better
16:14 Exa: 03:19:385 (1,2) - I don't get it why you make these kinds of patterns
16:14 Exa: [http://puu.sh/qAXOe/dd39a9dbcf.jpg Why not do something like this instead]
16:14 Exa: Don't break the flow always
16:14 Lilyanna: okay
16:15 Exa: Aaaand that's it for now
16:15 Exa: I want you to read through the mod 2 more times
16:15 Exa: And learn your mistakes
16:15 Exa: I really don't want to see weird flow like I showed you
16:15 Exa: Or asymmetrical wavy sliders again
16:15 Exa: Okay? :3
16:15 Lilyanna: okay
16:15 Lilyanna: and besides those is the rest at least decent mapping?
16:16 Exa: It's "decent"
16:16 Exa: But we are not aiming for "decent"
16:16 Lilyanna: LOL
16:16 Exa: Because "decent" mapping with justin bieber will not get you many chances to rank this
16:16 Lilyanna: i like how u said "decent"
16:16 Lilyanna: ;w;
16:16 Exa: It's "ok"
16:16 Exa: But it can be much better
16:16 Lilyanna: i want rank dis ;w;
16:16 Exa: Then try hard!
16:16 Exa: Learn your mistakes
16:17 Lilyanna: i amm xd
16:17 Exa: And work on them
16:17 Lilyanna: yes okay
16:17 Exa: Okay imma post this on the thread

If any of the GD mappers would like me to mod their map, poke me in-game or with pm.

Lilyanna

1,918 posts

Joined March 2016

Topic Starter

Lilyanna 2016-08-14T16:02:07+00:00

Exa wrote:
NORMAL DIFF IRC
15:25 Exa: Okay np your map
15:26 *Lilyanna is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1035561 Justin Bieber - Company [Normal]]
15:26 Exa: Oh boy 12 mins of justin bieber
15:26 Exa: lets go
15:26 *Exa is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1047823 Justin Bieber - Company [Aru's Easy]]
15:26 Exa: Oh right that's not yours
15:27 Exa: 00:23:174 (1,2) - Just, this blanket is off
15:27 Exa: Okay onto the normal
15:27 Lilyanna: ..
15:27 Exa: 00:20:648 (1) - Oh yeah no, that's waaay too small for normal
15:27 Exa: You can't do anything else but remove it
15:28 Lilyanna: but if i remove it
15:28 Lilyanna: the hard gd will have more drain than me
15:28 Lilyanna: which make in unrankable
15:28 Exa: You can replace it with a slider
15:29 Lilyanna: btw its not small iv test it in auto if it hits 1000 than ure fine
15:29 Exa: Yeah, normals are different
15:29 Exa: It doesn't matter if it hits 1000 in normal
15:29 Exa: That rule is for insane+
15:29 Lilyanna: well its actually 3000
15:29 Lilyanna: okay
15:29 Exa: 2 beats long is too small lily
15:30 Lilyanna: ;w; ill make slider
15:30 Exa: Ask a beatmap nominator if you are not convinced, this is waay too small
15:30 Exa: Also, the easy GD has nothing on the start
15:30 Exa: Nor does Ora's diff
15:31 Lilyanna: 00:20:648 (1) -
15:31 Lilyanna: the hard :s
15:31 Lilyanna: he has more drain than me now
15:31 Exa: How does he have more drain..
15:31 Lilyanna: like with 2 sec
15:31 Exa: Where does the hard start?
15:31 Lilyanna: that spin takes 2 secs
15:31 Lilyanna: LOL
15:31 Exa: Yeah, that's why you should add a slider
15:31 Exa: And no other diff starts so early anyway
15:32 Lilyanna: i hope slider wil fit
15:32 Exa: I think you should add nothing
15:32 Exa: And just ask the GD person to remove their spinner
15:33 Lilyanna: ye
15:33 Lilyanna: okay
15:33 Exa: 00:38:332 (1,2) - Okay that's a nono
15:33 Exa: Because the player might leave early from 00:38:332 (1) - to go to 00:39:595 (2) -
15:33 Exa: And break their combo
15:33 Exa: Because 00:39:595 (2) - is on the opposite direction
15:34 Lilyanna: its same ds ..
15:34 Exa: I never mentioned the DS
15:34 Exa: The ds is fine
15:34 Exa: It's the placement that's the problem
15:34 Lilyanna: but its ds..
15:34 Lilyanna: lol i cant
15:34 Lilyanna: move it more
15:35 Exa: [http://puu.sh/qAWgq/101b01cac3.jpg this] might happen
15:35 Exa: Which is something you should try to avoid
15:35 Lilyanna: 00:39:595 (2) - ill ctrl g this
15:35 Lilyanna: and place it down and
15:35 Lilyanna: ye true
15:35 Exa: Yeah if you ctrl+g this and move it down then it should be fine
15:36 Lilyanna: ye and will fix rest
15:36 Lilyanna: so ds stay consistent
15:36 Exa: 00:42:753 (1,2,3,4) - Also this pattern is...
15:36 Exa: So unorganized
15:36 Exa: The angles you have don't make sense
15:36 Lilyanna: ill remap
15:36 Exa: 00:42:753 (1,3) - Like, these 2 have different angled
15:36 Exa: angles*
15:37 Exa: 00:43:385 (2) - And this is kind of random being so angled
15:37 Lilyanna: lol
15:37 Lilyanna: xdi think ill remap that part
15:37 Exa: Okay then I'll skip past the break
15:38 Lilyanna: well ok
15:38 Exa: 01:10:858 (1) - This also probably too small
15:38 Exa: 01:11:806 - not to mention there is a beat here
15:38 Lilyanna: seems fine ;w;
15:38 Exa: How does it seem fine lily...
15:38 Exa: It's 2.5 beats long
15:38 Lilyanna: its a clap
15:38 Exa: Did you even get any testplays?
15:38 Exa: Yeah there is a clap there
15:38 Lilyanna: yes
15:38 Exa: That you don't represent at all
15:39 Exa: Did you get any testplays from new people?
15:39 Lilyanna: u can skip upbeats in normal
15:39 Lilyanna: yes lol
15:39 Exa: Yeah my point is
15:39 Exa: You can remove the spinner which is too small
15:39 Exa: And to compensate for that removal, you can add a note on the clap
15:40 Lilyanna: what
15:40 Exa: Remove spinner -> Add note there
15:40 Lilyanna: just one note .
15:40 Exa: There is just one beat
15:41 Exa: Where else are you going to add a note?
15:41 Lilyanna: 01:11:174 -
15:41 Exa: Sure, you can do that
15:41 Lilyanna: but rly seem fine to me :w:
15:41 Exa: I thought you wanted this section to be calm
15:41 Exa: Ok ask a beatmap nominator if it seems fine to you
15:42 Exa: 01:16:227 (1) - Okay these are clearly asymmetrical
15:42 Lilyanna: u keep saying as a bn ;w;
15:42 Exa: I say ask a BN to which ever you "think" is fine
15:42 Exa: I've pointed out many stuff without mentioning bns
15:42 Exa: 01:16:227 (1,3) - These look like they fell and broke their leg
15:42 Lilyanna: ....
15:42 Lilyanna: thats mean Exaa
15:43 Lilyanna: whats wrong with those
15:43 Exa: [http://puu.sh/qAWyK/657fd05383.jpg Do you see] how the one wave is bugger than the other?
15:43 Exa: The first wave is much bigger
15:43 Exa: They look like they have a hump on their back
15:43 Exa: You know, like old people do
15:43 Lilyanna: ...
15:44 Lilyanna: u not helping xd
15:44 Lilyanna: i dont get it
15:44 Lilyanna: its copy paste
15:44 Exa: ..............
15:44 Lilyanna: u dont like the shape !?
15:44 Exa: http://puu.sh/qAWBi/f0a961f34f.jpg
15:45 Lilyanna: ill make less wavy
15:45 Exa: http://puu.sh/qAWCy/17230893fe.jpg
15:45 Exa: Which one looks better to you?
15:45 Exa: [http://puu.sh/qAWCZ/c4cd6a0ff1.jpg look] how nice and symmetrical the anchors are here
15:45 Lilyanna: i think second
15:45 Lilyanna: but they slightly look same
15:45 Exa: Lily..
15:45 Exa: They are not the same
15:45 Exa: Find me one map
15:45 Lilyanna: LOL
15:45 Exa: Where it doesn't have symmetrical wavy sliders
15:46 Exa: Only 1
15:46 Exa: There is none
15:46 Lilyanna: tsubaki by HW
15:46 Exa: Okay np and show me exactly
15:46 Lilyanna: xD
15:46 Exa: Noone has asymmetrical sliders lily..
15:46 Exa: They look really bad
15:46 *Lilyanna is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/815252 Ocelot - TSUBAKI [ZZH's Advanced]]
15:47 Exa: Yeah?
15:47 Exa: This is CTB btw
15:47 *Exa is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/815252 Ocelot - TSUBAKI [ZZH's Advanced]]
15:47 Exa: This is a ctb map lily...
15:47 Exa: Wait no
15:48 Exa: Nvm I was looking at something else
15:48 Lilyanna: XD
15:48 Exa: Okay yeah where are the asymmetrical sliders?
15:48 Lilyanna: ehm
15:48 Lilyanna: u said wavy
15:48 Exa: yeah
15:48 Exa: where are they?
15:48 Exa: asymmetrical wavy sliders
15:48 Lilyanna: idk
15:48 Exa: ...
15:48 Exa: Then why did you mention this map?
15:49 Lilyanna: idk
15:49 Lilyanna: lets keep modding
15:49 Lilyanna: ;w;
15:49 Exa: Do you want to do this another time?
15:49 Exa: 01:16:227 (1) - [http://puu.sh/qAWOJ/7063656647.jpg Again] this
15:49 Exa: Do you know how to make symmetrical sliders?
15:49 Exa: If not I'll show ya
15:50 Lilyanna: http://puu.sh/qAWPP/acf3c2a03e.jpg
15:50 Lilyanna: is this better?
15:50 Exa: Much better
15:50 Exa: You can move the 2 middle anchors further appart to make the wave bigger
15:50 Exa: But don't make it too big
15:51 Lilyanna: i think i like it like that
15:51 Exa: Okay then
15:52 Exa: http://puu.sh/qAWVH/c6d8fa60c3.jpg
15:52 Exa: 01:20:016 (3) -
15:52 Exa: Add another small anchor to make it flow in better
15:53 Exa: 01:27:595 (3) - Move the second anchor at 120 168 to make a nicer circular blanket
15:53 Exa: Careful cause the snap might get messed up
15:54 Exa: 01:41:490 (5) - Okay a friendly advice
15:54 Exa: Never angle wavy sliders
15:54 Exa: Either keep them horizontal or vertical
15:54 Exa: Wavy sliders are the most awkward thing to play to
15:55 Lilyanna: u mean repeat sliders
15:55 Exa: No I mean wavy sliders
15:55 Exa: 01:41:490 (5) - I specificaly pointed this out
15:55 Lilyanna: ohh
15:55 Lilyanna: i get it
15:55 Exa: This is a wavy slider
15:55 Lilyanna: ii got u
15:56 Lilyanna: ill take of the wavyness
15:56 Exa: No you don't need to take off the wavyness...
15:56 Exa: Although you could do that
15:56 Exa: 01:43:385 (1,2,3) - Also the flow here is...
15:56 Exa: Egh
15:56 Lilyanna: ehm
15:57 Exa: http://puu.sh/qAX6A/ae00b7aa00.jpg
15:57 Exa: Blue is suggestive flow
15:57 Lilyanna: ill remap
15:57 Exa: Purple is actual flow
15:57 Exa: LILY
15:57 Exa: You will remap
15:57 Exa: But you mut first hear me out
15:57 Exa: You can't just "remap"
15:57 Lilyanna: yes
15:57 Exa: You must learn your mistakes
15:57 Exa: So you never do them again
15:58 Lilyanna: yes sir ,;w;
15:58 Exa: The first time we made the map, I told you not to do big angles
15:58 Exa: And you did big angled 4 times more
15:58 Exa: That's because you "just remaped"
15:58 Exa: You didn't learn your mistake
15:58 Exa: So first let me finish modding
15:58 Exa: And then you wil remapo
15:58 Exa: Okay?
15:58 Lilyanna: i learn at 4th time ,;<;
15:58 Lilyanna: yes i dont mean now
15:59 Lilyanna: x)
15:59 Exa: Yeah because I yelled at you and told you I'll get angry if you do it again
15:59 Exa: You could have learned on the first time you remaped
15:59 Lilyanna: im slow
15:59 Lilyanna: okay
15:59 Lilyanna: is suggested
15:59 Lilyanna: flow
15:59 Lilyanna: blue
15:59 Exa: No... you are too fast
15:59 Exa: You are impatient
15:59 Exa: Mapping and learning needs patience
15:59 Lilyanna: okay
16:00 Exa: So you see how the blue is so much different than the purple?
16:00 Exa: That's not good, apparently
16:00 Lilyanna: yes
16:00 Exa: 01:45:911 (1,2,3) - Same weird flow is here basicaly
16:00 Exa: 01:48:437 (5,1) - And here...
16:00 Exa: You see how 5 looks down?
16:01 Exa: and you make the player go up?
16:01 Lilyanna: okay
16:01 Exa: 01:52:858 (3) - Eeeegh okay lemme show you something
16:03 Exa: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=oL3az8FhlB4
16:03 Exa: 4th minute
16:03 Exa: take a look at it and let me know if you understood about 01:52:858 (3) - this slider
16:03 Lilyanna: oh god pishi not a fan anymore
16:03 Exa: He know's what he's talking about though
16:03 Exa: Nevermind that he's pishi
16:03 Exa: Listen to what he says
16:04 Lilyanna: iv seen this ;w;
16:04 Exa: Go to the 4th minute
16:04 Exa: Watch it again
16:04 Exa: 01:52:858 (3) - then look at this slider
16:04 Exa: And tell me if you understand
16:05 Lilyanna: it looks dumb
16:05 Lilyanna: LOL
16:05 Exa: It looks weird because there's no other slider like it in the whole diff
16:05 Lilyanna: im laughing so hard atm
16:05 Exa: It's so different, it doesn't fit in
16:05 Lilyanna: there is in the next kiai LOL
16:06 Lilyanna: more dumbness
16:06 Exa: We are 2 minutes into the song
16:06 Exa: I haven't seen a slider like this so far
16:06 Exa: Anyay you got my point
16:06 Lilyanna: yes
16:06 Exa: 01:56:648 (5,6) - Angles
16:06 Lilyanna: another remap soon
16:07 Lilyanna: okay
16:07 Exa: 01:59:174 (2,3,4) - Too much linear flow
16:07 Exa: It'd be nice if you could change direction on 01:59:806 (4) -
16:07 Exa: 02:21:595 (1) - too small
16:08 Lilyanna: im gonna remap that part i dont want change one slider and keep struggling with ds ;w;
16:08 Lilyanna: ill map it ;w;
16:09 Exa: http://puu.sh/qAWBi/f0a961f34f.jpg
16:09 Exa: 02:35:806 (3) - o.o
16:09 Exa: what happened with the anchors there
16:11 Lilyanna: idk what u mean
16:11 Lilyanna: is it bad shape?
16:11 Exa: I mean the anchors
16:11 Exa: http://puu.sh/qAXG5/756b5e5012.jpg
16:11 Exa: why are they like this?
16:11 Exa: 02:34:542 (1) - Why didn't you just copy-paste this?
16:11 Lilyanna: i am retarted
16:11 Lilyanna: i did
16:11 Lilyanna: i swear
16:11 Exa: Then why is it different..
16:12 Lilyanna: idk
16:12 Lilyanna: osu hates me
16:12 Exa: ...
16:12 Exa: osu didn't change the anchors lily..
16:12 Exa: just fix et
16:12 Lilyanna: xddd
16:12 Lilyanna: i did
16:12 Exa: 02:35:806 (3,3) - And btw these don't stack
16:13 Exa: 02:44:648 (1) - Same asymmetrical slider as before
16:13 Exa: 02:49:700 (1) - And same
16:13 Exa: 02:54:753 (1) - Oh god
16:13 Exa: 02:59:806 (1,2,3,4,5) - The stacks here are probably too hard to properly read by newbies
16:13 Lilyanna: okay
16:14 Exa: 03:14:016 (2,3) - The blanket could be much better
16:14 Exa: 03:19:385 (1,2) - I don't get it why you make these kinds of patterns
16:14 Exa: [http://puu.sh/qAXOe/dd39a9dbcf.jpg Why not do something like this instead]
16:14 Exa: Don't break the flow always
16:14 Lilyanna: okay
16:15 Exa: Aaaand that's it for now
16:15 Exa: I want you to read through the mod 2 more times
16:15 Exa: And learn your mistakes
16:15 Exa: I really don't want to see weird flow like I showed you
16:15 Exa: Or asymmetrical wavy sliders again
16:15 Exa: Okay? :3
16:15 Lilyanna: okay
16:15 Lilyanna: and besides those is the rest at least decent mapping?
16:16 Exa: It's "decent"
16:16 Exa: But we are not aiming for "decent"
16:16 Lilyanna: LOL
16:16 Exa: Because "decent" mapping with justin bieber will not get you many chances to rank this
16:16 Lilyanna: i like how u said "decent"
16:16 Lilyanna: ;w;
16:16 Exa: It's "ok"
16:16 Exa: But it can be much better
16:16 Lilyanna: i want rank dis ;w;
16:16 Exa: Then try hard!
16:16 Exa: Learn your mistakes
16:17 Lilyanna: i amm xd
16:17 Exa: And work on them
16:17 Lilyanna: yes okay
16:17 Exa: Okay imma post this on the thread
If any of the GD mappers would like me to mod their map, poke me in-game or with pm.

THX for mod <3.
Updated.

kanor

925 posts

Joined August 2013

kanor 2016-08-15T05:57:51+00:00

Hi! From my Q

[Easy]
nothing
[Normal]
00:32:648 (4,4) - why you clap the first one but ignore the next ? i think it should be same<3
03:14:016 (2,3) - there is a DS problem plz fix it!

[Hard]
01:30:911 (5,1) - stack may better
i think the ds may be too narrow.....1.8 may be better to read

[Paradise]
00:32:648 (6,7) - better blanket

GL!

ZekeyHache

3,316 posts

Joined October 2009

ZekeyHache 2016-08-15T06:11:28+00:00

kanor wrote:
[Hard]
01:30:911 (5,1) - stack may better since the slider is stacked to the right (which is the way it goes) it should be a rational stack~
i think the ds may be too narrow.....1.8 may be better to read I believe my spacing is just enough for a hard and as long as the 1/4 spacing doesn't make the notes overlap when they're next to each other is easy to read~

No changes, but thanks for the mod! ^^

Lilyanna

1,918 posts

Joined March 2016

Topic Starter

Lilyanna 2016-08-15T09:31:24+00:00

kanor wrote:
Hi! From my Q

[Easy]
nothing
[Normal]
00:32:648 (4,4) - why you clap the first one but ignore the next ? i think it should be same<3 fixed
03:14:016 (2,3) - there is a DS problem plz fix it! i know about that the gap space wont allow me to fix it and cant get the slider out of the grid i dont think its big problem for now

[Paradise]
00:32:648 (6,7) - better blanket since its just this fixed for him x)))

GL!

THX for mod.
updated.

Yamicchi

1,175 posts

Joined May 2015

Yamicchi 2016-08-15T12:02:22+00:00

Hi :3 M4M
[Aru's]
00:28:858 - I think a clap here is not necessary, eventho it needs a clap. Most of the first part is long slider, so clap for every 4 white ticks is perfect enough. It sounds a bit annoying that clap. Remove clap at 00:38:964 - 00:44:016 - 00:49:069 - too
00:37:700 - add a clap here
00:50:964 (3) - the slider end is not so good looking to me, plus sliders that overlap itself are quite not nice in Easy/Normal diffs imo.
01:39:595 (1) - if you intend to make this slider balance, you might wanna move the red dot 1 grid to the right
02:01:700 (3) - Idk but I think this is better

[Normal]
00:23:174 (1,2,3) - Hmm, Idk make these 2 sliders symmetrical?

00:30:121 (2,4) - stack them?
00:42:753 - from this to the first break, why isn't there any clap?
01:23:806 (1) - I would change the slider shape a bit, then remake the (3) again too since you copy paste it from (1)

02:30:121 - clap?
02:32:016 - this clap here is different and it sounds so weird tbh ;w; not sure what you're doing here
[ezek's]
00:45:279 - can this place be clickable?
01:08:016 (7) - NC this instead of (1) since the echo ends and this object starts a different sentence
00:53:490 (1) - you didn't stack, but 02:04:227 (1) - you did, so I think you should just do it 1 way
02:43:385 (4) - nice, but easy choke. I won't do this if I were you

I'm busy of some business irl, so I might skip Ora's. Pm me again in a few days if you need mod okay? Good luck :3 good song, good map!

Lilyanna

1,918 posts

Joined March 2016

Topic Starter

Lilyanna 2016-08-15T13:23:21+00:00

Yamicchi wrote:
Hi :3 M4M

[Normal]
00:23:174 (1,2,3) - Hmm, Idk make these 2 sliders symmetrical? fixed

00:30:121 (2,4) - stack them? oups done
00:42:753 - from this to the first break, why isn't there any clap? because i always reemap and forget to redo hitsounds lol
01:23:806 (1) - I would change the slider shape a bit, then remake the (3) again too since you copy paste it from (1) i like how i shaped them gonna keep

02:30:121 - clap? done
02:32:016 - this clap here is different and it sounds so weird tbh ;w; not sure what you're doing here omg my bad i ment to click finish maybe i clicked the clap by mistake ;w; fixed

I'm busy of some business irl, so I might skip Ora's. Pm me again in a few days if you need mod okay? Good luck :3 good song, good map!

thx for mod x)

Weriko

182 posts

Joined December 2015

Weriko 2016-08-15T19:50:17+00:00

Hey :p

Mod from queue

Normal

- I think you can map the beggining

00:47:174 (7,1) - this might be confusing for new players

01:31:385 (1,2,3) - OCD attacks... please center this so it looks even better :p

01:57:911 (7,1) - again

02:50:648 (2,3,4,1,2) - OCD

Everything else is perfect :p

Sorry for not helping more ;-;

Good luck!

Lilyanna

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Joined March 2016

Topic Starter

Lilyanna 2016-08-15T21:54:53+00:00

Weriko wrote:
Hey :p

Mod from queue

Normal
- I think you can map the beggining yes i might add something

00:47:174 (7,1) - this might be confusing for new players if it make sens its not big problem for now

01:31:385 (1,2,3) - OCD attacks... please center this so it looks even better :p i love symmetrycal patterns ;w; but fixed to the center

01:57:911 (7,1) - again ^

02:50:648 (2,3,4,1,2) - OCD ^

Everything else is perfect :p

Sorry for not helping more ;-;

Good luck!

thx for the mod.

Namki

1,281 posts

Joined November 2014

Namki 2016-08-16T19:00:18+00:00

yo.
[Easy]

Rhythm is really-really boring and monotonous which isn't good though it's an Easy:
1. 1st kiai:
three 1/1 sliders and a circle. And... that's all!
2. non-kiai:
4/1 sliders mostly.
Make rhythm more various.
02:01:700 (3,1) - make curve a bit bigger and make a blanket.

[Normal]

I honestly can't understand how did you pick rhythm for this diff between the kiai parts. Did you accord to vocals or music, or both:
Here for example you have two patterns:
00:23:174 (1,2,3,4) - and 00:32:648 (4,1) - .
There's no vocals here 00:24:753 - , so it's better to make break like you did here 01:45:595 - .
The second, 01:43:385 (1) - this fits better than this blank beat 00:32:964 - .
00:34:227 (2,3,4) - the same here.
00:42:753 (4) - and here, compare with the same sounds after the kiai 01:58:542 (1,2,3) - .
You should map for the entire playing area. Select all objects (ctrl+A), you see they're mapped mostly on the center.
01:22:542 (3,4,1,2,3) - this isn't good idea to make this circle flow. 01:22:542 (3,3) - they overlapping, so it's better make something like this:
owo
The rest looks fine.

[Hard]

00:32:964 (6,7) - inconsistent, make circle-slider pattern as you did others for this music part.
02:43:385 (4) - nazi, but it looks boring. Make two kick-sliders instead.
Nothing much to say, really decent diff.

[Paradise]

00:45:279 (1,3) - something went wrong and you put NC wrongly. Swap it.
01:09:911 (3,4,1) - is there any reason to change the spacing between those objects. As I can see, there's no. So 1.3x spacing fits great here.
02:20:016 (4,5,6) - same as above. No any reason to change the spacing, make it 1.5x.
02:39:595 (1,2) - meh, this overlap looks ugly. If this is blanket then make it more accurate.
02:44:016 (7) - sounds weird. Better accord to the music. Cuz it's really bad thing if you were mapping to the music and then changed it to the vocals. So, make 2 kick-sliders instead. Or 1/4 reverse. As you wish.

Good luck~
Hope it's understandable.

Lilyanna

1,918 posts

Joined March 2016

Topic Starter

Lilyanna 2016-08-16T21:13:11+00:00

Namki wrote:
yo. o/

[Normal]
I honestly can't understand how did you pick rhythm for this diff between the kiai parts. Did you accord to vocals or music, or both:
Here for example you have two patterns:
00:23:174 (1,2,3,4) - and 00:32:648 (4,1) - .
There's no vocals here 00:24:753 - , so it's better to make break like you did here 01:45:595 - .
The second, 01:43:385 (1) - this fits better than this blank beat 00:32:964 - .
00:34:227 (2,3,4) - the same here. thx for explaining more in in game chat i changed the same which fits better the rythm as i said i tried to do different patterns but u were right so fixed
00:42:753 (4) - and here, compare with the same sounds after the kiai 01:58:542 (1,2,3) - . im not sure i like how it is now i dont think its big deal but ill change if someone else mention all as more about it
You should map for the entire playing area. Select all objects (ctrl+A), you see they're mapped mostly on the center. as im remapping i tried to use the most areas that i could ;w;
01:22:542 (3,4,1,2,3) - this isn't good idea to make this circle flow. 01:22:542 (3,3) - they overlapping, so it's better make something like this: i stopped the circle flow and remapped ye i always was anoyed by it and waited till someone mention xd
owo
The rest looks fine.
Good luck~
Hope it's understandable.

thank you for mod. <3

Ora

959 posts

Joined November 2014

Ora 2016-08-17T02:25:20+00:00

Namki wrote:
[Paradise]
00:45:279 (1,3) - something went wrong and you put NC wrongly. Swap it. Fixed, nice find
01:09:911 (3,4,1) - is there any reason to change the spacing between those objects. As I can see, there's no. So 1.3x spacing fits great here. I think this is fine because it's a slower part and easy to read. This part is all about flow, but I do see what you're saying
02:20:016 (4,5,6) - same as above. No any reason to change the spacing, make it 1.5x. agree for this one. Fixed
02:39:595 (1,2) - meh, this overlap looks ugly. If this is blanket then make it more accurate. Yes....it's obviously a blanket xD. Idk why everyone thinks this is ugly. It flows well and is fun to play...Fixed the blanket a little bit.
02:44:016 (7) - sounds weird. Better accord to the music. Cuz it's really bad thing if you were mapping to the music and then changed it to the vocals. So, make 2 kick-sliders instead. Or 1/4 reverse. As you wish. I get what you mean and agree with you that music and vocals shouldn't be switched in maps too often, but this part just works for the song. The part repeats and it easy to follow the way I have it now. I won't change unless a BN says the same
Good luck~
Hope it's understandable.

Thanks a lot for this mod ! Thanks for mentioning that last concern of yours but it will stay for now

Ora

959 posts

Joined November 2014

Ora 2016-08-17T02:36:23+00:00

kanor wrote:
Hi! From my Q

[Paradise]
00:32:648 (6,7) - better blanket Pretty sure it's fine
blanket...don't be a nazi

GL!

Xiaolin

1,857 posts

Joined April 2013

Xiaolin 2016-08-17T13:04:19+00:00

As you request. o/

Aru's Easy

00:25:700 (2) - I see that you're trying to stack 00:30:121 (2) with 00:25:700 (2)'s end? Well, the stack here isn't perfect. Move 00:30:121 (2) to x:480 y:144 to get a perfect stack here.
00:44:648 (2,3) - This is a minor blanket issue, it can't be seen from afar. But, if you look closely, the blanket here between (2)'s end and (3)'s slider is a bit off. Move the red tick on (3) to x:78 y:178.
00:50:964 (3) - This is my opinion. This slider's end could be a bit confusing, because the end is touching the slider. https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5866990 Maybe you could try that.
01:03:595 (1,2) - I'm not quite sure.. But, are overlaps like this allowed in easy? IMO, I don't think it is. Maybe you could try avoiding this overlap?
01:52:858 (4,1) - Minor blanket issue here.
02:01:700 (3,1) - Is there supposed to be a blanket here? Well.. I know you can't make a blanket here because of DS. But, would be better if you moved (1) to x:298 y:25 it could avoid this issue.
02:14:332 (1) - The reserve here is off. There's a beat at 02:14:964 would be better if you moved the reserve here instead of putting it on the blue tick.
02:19:385 (1) - ^
02:26:964 (3,1) - WOAH, OP overlap. I don't think this kind of overlap is allowed in easy, since it's pretty much confusing. It would be a good thing if you tried to avoid this overlap.

Normal

00:44:332 (2,3) - A minor blanket issue here as well. Move the end of (3) to x:68 y:293 to avoid this blanket issue.
00:47:174 (7,1) - How about decreasing the stack leniency? It would improve the stack here.
01:18:437 (4,1) - Minor blanket issue here as well. Move the end of (1) to x:144 y:160.
01:28:542 (4,1) - ^ x:232 y:22
02:31:700 (4,1) - ^ x:174 y:202

ezek's Hard

01:30:121 (4,5) - Blanket here could be improved.
02:01:385 (6,1) - I don't think you need to increase the spacing here. Maybe using DS here would be better. Because, in a previous part like this, you used DS.. But, here, why would you use increase the spacing? I think DS would be better.
03:01:069 (4,5) - Blanket here could be improved.
03:18:437 (2) - I don't think a note here is indeed. Because, in a similar part like this (03:21:595) you didn't add a note.
I think decreasing stack leniency would be better. So, you could improve stacks like this: 01:20:806 (5,1)

Everything else is fine, sorry if I didn't help much. ^^; Good luck!

Lilyanna

1,918 posts

Joined March 2016

Topic Starter

Lilyanna 2016-08-17T13:58:19+00:00

Lapis Aoki wrote:
As you request. o/

Normal
00:44:332 (2,3) - A minor blanket issue here as well. Move the end of (3) to x:68 y:293 to avoid this blanket issue. fixed the blanket without moving it took it way far xd
00:47:174 (7,1) - How about decreasing the stack leniency? It would improve the stack here. ok its fine
01:18:437 (4,1) - Minor blanket issue here as well. Move the end of (1) to x:144 y:160. fixed
01:28:542 (4,1) - ^ x:232 y:22 ^
02:31:700 (4,1) - ^ x:174 y:202 fixxed all the blankets ty

Everything else is fine, sorry if I didn't help much. ^^; Good luck!

THX for mod <3 .

Arusamour

424 posts

Joined April 2014

Arusamour 2016-08-17T17:50:34+00:00

REMAPPING "Aru's Easy" SO PLEASE DO NOT MOD IT IF YOU SEE THIS.

Shiratoi wrote:
nm from q
Aru's Easy
~
00:33:279 (1) - no more slider art? :c just got kinda lazy~
00:40:858 (3,1) - fix blanket ¯\_(ツ)_/¯, doesn't really matter
00:50:964 (3) - this might be too hard to read for easy. as much as it looks good the sliders overlapping makes it hard to read for beginners maybe this mod was submitted before the new changes? because right now, it's fine looking to me
01:03:595 (1,2) - this would be a perfect change for blanket. no overlap in easy anyways y not??
01:18:121 - why skip this beat when you didnt here 01:16:227 (3) - hmm. not quite sure what's you're speaking sounds fine
01:23:174 - ^ you get the idea
01:27:595 (4,1) - maybe bad flow since it feels very angley maybe rotate it so its flowing downwards
01:33:911 (1) - this spinner is kind of unnecessary imo since its not like the instruments or vocals are holding down a note. map pls yup! i will be mapping what should
02:16:858 (3) - same issue as last timenewbies can still understand overlaps
02:21:911 (3) - ^newbies can still understand overlaps
02:26:964 (3,1) - this is a bad overlap. the player just went up and its going back down. + the slider is hiding behind the first which makes it hard to read fixed
02:35:806 (2,3) - another overlap in easy? nah
02:38:964 (4,1) - fix blanket nah
02:52:858 (4,5) - maybe blanketnah

Yukiyo wrote:
Hi o/
Aru's Easy
00:40:858 (3,1) - improve blanket~ idc about blankets
01:52:858 (4,1) - ^ ~ idc about blankets
02:01:069 (2,3) - Hmm the angle on how the circle is leading into the slider is weird because the slider choses another flow idk~ o ya this kinda bothers me but i'm not sure
02:38:964 (4,1) - blanket idc about blankets

ProEzreal wrote:
Hello~ NM from my queue

Easy
00:23:174 (1,2) - I think you can work on the blankets a bit more idc about blankets
00:30:753 (3,1) - Slight blanket error not mentioning any more, fix them on your own please idc about blankets
01:33:911 (1) - Okay, pretty sure we are going to need more recovery time than that. A full measure of recovery time is highly recommended. fixed
02:01:700 (3) - Sorta weird how you mapped with a 4/1 slider here when you used mostly 1/1 sliders and circles before, sorta seems inconsistent with the current section and 02:04:227 (1) - blanket this properly please. fixed
02:26:964 (3,1) - Overlaps will make the players confused, please avoid overlaps on an easy difficulty fixed

-NanoRIPE- wrote:
hi
a noob modder passing by
i hate jb xd

[Easy]
00:25:700 (2,2) - imperfect stacked fixed
00:30:753 (3,1) - imperfect blanket idc about blankets
00:33:279 (1,2) - ds bro doesn't matter
00:35:806 (2,1,2) - maybe blanket (1,2) and stacked (2,2) ? idc about blankets
01:03:595 (1) - finish? nah
01:18:121 - why you make this blanket? i think in kiai time you must make the pattern little bit harder than outside of kiai time (and also for 01:23:174 - 01:28:227 - 01:33:279 it is little mroe dense
01:33:279 - this green timing looks unnecessary
01:59:174 (1) - move to (448,120_ and ctrl h? yeah, something like that looks nicer
02:01:700 (3,1) - unblanket it (if you try to blanket it,it will ruin the ds) idc about blankets
02:14:332 (1) - idk why you make the reverse slider on blue tick not sure on changing. though probably.
02:19:385 (1) - ^ ^
02:24:437 until 03:04:227 - same as before (about the blanket part) idc about blankets
03:14:964 (1) - same as before idc same as before
03:20:016 (1) - ^ ^

GL!

Yamicchi wrote:
Hi :3 M4M
[Aru's]
00:28:858 - I think a clap here is not necessary, eventho it needs a clap. Most of the first part is long slider, so clap for every 4 white ticks is perfect enough. It sounds a bit annoying that clap. Remove clap at 00:38:964 - 00:44:016 - 00:49:069 - too ok
00:37:700 - add a clap here ok
00:50:964 (3) - the slider end is not so good looking to me, plus sliders that overlap itself are quite not nice in Easy/Normal diffs imo. o k im starting to think this slider is actually bad, not because of overlap, because of shape.
01:39:595 (1) - if you intend to make this slider balance, you might wanna move the red dot 1 grid to the right eeeeh, whatever
02:01:700 (3) - Idk but I think this is better it does, but mine works too.

Namki wrote:
yo.
[Easy]
Rhythm is really-really boring and monotonous which isn't good though it's an Easy: it honestly wouldn't even be considered "easy". this is some-what in-between beginner and easy.
1. 1st kiai:
three 1/1 sliders and a circle. And... that's all!
2. non-kiai:
4/1 sliders mostly.
Make rhythm more various.
02:01:700 (3,1) - make curve a bit bigger and make a blanket. meh, prob not changing

Lapis Aoki wrote:
As you request. o/

[notice]
Aru's Easy
00:25:700 (2) - I see that you're trying to stack 00:30:121 (2) with 00:25:700 (2)'s end? Well, the stack here isn't perfect. Move 00:30:121 (2) to x:480 y:144 to get a perfect stack here. fixed
00:44:648 (2,3) - This is a minor blanket issue, it can't be seen from afar. But, if you look closely, the blanket here between (2)'s end and (3)'s slider is a bit off. Move the red tick on (3) to x:78 y:178. idc about blankets
00:50:964 (3) - This is my opinion. This slider's end could be a bit confusing, because the end is touching the slider. https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5866990 Maybe you could try that. okay, ye the example is fine but i will be remaking the slider since it's so heavily requested
01:03:595 (1,2) - I'm not quite sure.. But, are overlaps like this allowed in easy? IMO, I don't think it is. Maybe you could try avoiding this overlap? don't think it matters. i hope im not wrong
01:52:858 (4,1) - Minor blanket issue here. idc about blankets
02:01:700 (3,1) - Is there supposed to be a blanket here? Well.. I know you can't make a blanket here because of DS. But, would be better if you moved (1) to x:298 y:25 it could avoid this issue. purposely done so, so i can piss people off. i know that i will be remapping the diff tho
02:14:332 (1) - The reserve here is off. There's a beat at 02:14:964 would be better if you moved the reserve here instead of putting it on the blue tick. i can understand that, but on 02:19:385 (1) the 3/4 is louder than the 1/2 reverse you mentioned. i think i will favour over your choice tho
02:19:385 (1) - ^
02:26:964 (3,1) - WOAH, OP overlap. I don't think this kind of overlap is allowed in easy, since it's pretty much confusing. It would be a good thing if you tried to avoid this overlap. was indeed an op overlap.

thanks for all the mods!

REMAPPING "Aru's Easy" SO PLEASE DO NOT MOD IT IF YOU SEE THIS.

YellowManul

429 posts

Joined December 2010

YellowManul 2016-08-20T12:31:12+00:00

hello from my queue

Easy

02:01:700 (3,1) - you can blanket there
02:26:964 (3,1) - this overlap looks bad
02:32:016 (3) - http://puu.sh/qHWmo/90bee31466.jpg

Normal

why is there unused green lines in the beginning? ;w;
01:07:385 (6) - maybe note here?
01:45:911 (1,2) - fix blanket
02:18:121 (6) - note?
02:56:016 (3,1) - not stacked

Hard

00:30:753 (1) - fix blanket
02:43:385 (4) - feels really bad, i'd do smth like this http://puu.sh/qHWVc/e7089c1e66.jpg
03:09:911 (1,2) - stack them

sorry there's no much to mod

Paradise

00:34:227 (3,4) - make them looking parallel http://puu.sh/qHX2X/c1752b6205.jpg
01:22:542 (5) - fix blanket
01:38:332 (4) - nc on this because slider velocity is changing

sorry for a little mod, good luck with the map!

ZekeyHache

3,316 posts

Joined October 2009

ZekeyHache 2016-08-21T00:41:55+00:00

Yamicchi wrote:
[ezek's]
00:45:279 - can this place be clickable? why? it fits well as it is~
01:08:016 (7) - NC this instead of (1) since the echo ends and this object starts a different sentence I'm focusing on consistence and rhythm, not vocals~
00:53:490 (1) - you didn't stack, but 02:04:227 (1) - you did, so I think you should just do it 1 way Stacked~
02:43:385 (4) - nice, but easy choke. I won't do this if I were you well, you're not me

Namki wrote:
[Hard]
00:32:964 (6,7) - inconsistent, make circle-slider pattern as you did others for this music part. what a catch!
02:43:385 (4) - nazi, but it looks boring. Make two kick-sliders instead. I just did two 1/4 sliders and a circle since I don't want more people telling me to change this~
Nothing much to say, really decent diff.

Lapis Aoki wrote:
ezek's Hard
01:30:121 (4,5) - Blanket here could be improved. oki
02:01:385 (6,1) - I don't think you need to increase the spacing here. Maybe using DS here would be better. Because, in a previous part like this, you used DS.. But, here, why would you use increase the spacing? I think DS would be better. idk what happened here, I don't remember placing the notes like that, fixed~
03:01:069 (4,5) - Blanket here could be improved. oki
03:18:437 (2) - I don't think a note here is indeed. Because, in a similar part like this (03:21:595) you didn't add a note. The vocal is obvious in this specific part, so no change~
I think decreasing stack leniency would be better. So, you could improve stacks like this: 01:20:806 (5,1) meh, I never move that thing ;w;

YellowManul wrote:
Hard

00:30:753 (1) - fix blanket I can't do much since there's a stack and that alters the objects' position~
02:43:385 (4) - feels really bad, i'd do smth like this http://puu.sh/qHWVc/e7089c1e66.jpg changed on a previous mod~
03:09:911 (1,2) - stack them uh? they're already stacked .-.

Thanks for the mods!

update lalala

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Electoz

Beatmap Nominator

1,893 posts

Joined May 2015

Electoz 2016-08-25T12:09:40+00:00

Easy really needs a higher SV tho, I would recommend around 1.20-1.30
And I'm not a fan of the song(singer aside) so I might mod it if Easy was fixed idk

Lilyanna

1,918 posts

Joined March 2016

Topic Starter

Lilyanna 2016-08-25T19:49:34+00:00

Electoz wrote:
Easy really needs a higher SV tho, I would recommend around 1.20-1.30
And I'm not a fan of the song(singer aside) so I might mod it if Easy was fixed idk

Ty for consideration, an update will come soon with easy remap/fixed and other changes.

Arusamour

424 posts

Joined April 2014

Arusamour 2016-08-27T06:17:50+00:00

alright, here's the remap

osu file format v14

[General]
AudioFilename: audio.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 73069
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 1

[Editor]
Bookmarks: 23174
DistanceSpacing: 1
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 8
TimelineZoom: 1.2

[Metadata]
Title:Company
TitleUnicode:Company
Artist:Justin Bieber
ArtistUnicode:Justin Bieber
Creator:Lilyanna
Version:easy remake
Source:
Tags:ezek Ora Pop Arusamour PURPOSE:The Movement
BeatmapID:0
BeatmapSetID:-1

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:2
CircleSize:3
OverallDifficulty:2
ApproachRate:3
SliderMultiplier:1.2
SliderTickRate:1

[Events]
//Background and Video events
0,0,"Hug.jpg",0,0
Video,98,"VerizonWireless.avi"
//Break Periods
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples

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Lilyanna

1,918 posts

Joined March 2016

Topic Starter

Lilyanna 2016-08-27T10:13:46+00:00

YellowManul wrote:
hello from my queue

Normal

why is there unused green lines in the beginning? ;w; removed there was a spinner lol i put them to reduce the volume
01:07:385 (6) - maybe note here? i think 1/2 slider is fine kinda following the vocals
01:45:911 (1,2) - fix blanket fixed more
02:18:121 (6) - note? ^
02:56:016 (3,1) - not stacked fixed

sorry for a little mod, good luck with the map!

thx for mod.Updated all diff rdy.

Behon

Elite Mapper

1,380 posts

Here since the beginning

Behon 2016-08-28T00:07:18+00:00

From my mod queue. Sorry for the delay!

Easy:

02:14:332 (1): Consider making this a longer, non-repeating slider that still ends at the same point.

Normal:

00:45:911 (5): New combo?
01:51:595 (5): Same here.
03:12:121 (1): I'd say make this a long or repeating slider to fill in the extended dead air afterward and correspond with the held sung note.
03:22:227 (1): Get rid of the hitcircle and start the spinner here instead.

Hard:

01:10:858 (5): Maybe make this a new combo and get rid of the new combo on the slider right after it?
01:31:385 (1): Really wonky slider design, as in a way that doesn't fit with the others.

Hope this helps!

ZekeyHache

3,316 posts

Joined October 2009

ZekeyHache 2016-08-28T00:16:41+00:00

Behonkiss wrote:
Hard:

01:10:858 (5): Maybe make this a new combo and get rid of the new combo on the slider right after it? I'm placing nc every downbeat and any change in nc would break my consistency, and it follows the rhythm~ I see you probably gave me this suggestion based on the vocals~ If you notice in the slider with nc, there's a strong piano sound, which is the instrumental/rhythm part in which I'm basing to place my ncs~
01:31:385 (1): Really wonky slider design, as in a way that doesn't fit with the others. It's pretty for me ;w;

Thanks for the mod! Be...Be...Behonkiss! O_O

Lilyanna

1,918 posts

Joined March 2016

Topic Starter

Lilyanna 2016-08-28T07:07:49+00:00

Behonkiss wrote:
From my mod queue. Sorry for the delay!

Normal:

00:45:911 (5): New combo?fixed oups
01:51:595 (5): Same here.^
03:12:121 (1): I'd say make this a long or repeating slider to fill in the extended dead air afterward and correspond with the held sung note. ok changed
03:22:227 (1): Get rid of the hitcircle and start the spinner here instead.well since its more simple changed

Hope this helps!

thx for mod

BounceBabe

1,626 posts

Joined October 2010

BounceBabe 2016-08-30T01:43:22+00:00

Request from my NON-Japanese Queue

From this Queue

Lilyanna wrote:

Artist/Title: Justin Bieber - Company
BPM: 95
Genre: pop
Song Length: 2.41
Number of difficulties: 4
Okidoki
I hope this correct time to post

Ora wrote:
ByBy wrote:
#1 slot winner: Rizen
#2 slot winner: FlameLancer
#3 slot winner Flezlin

And the winner of the #4 and last slot is: Lilyanna!!

Thanks everyone for participating! Closed.
WTF she cheated....why can I never find good modders

I quit

^ I laughed hard at this :p

What I checked in your mapset

Each point from the list below will have a check mark next to it (✓/ ✕/ ✫). This will tell you whether I checked that point or not.
✓= I checked this point and everything is okay.
✕= I didn't check this point because I think it doesn't need checking.
✫= I checked this point but something needs fixing (explained in the mod)
osu!wiki Modding page
osu!wiki Ranking Criteria page

📖 General 📖
✕ Mapset difficulty spread (Easy, Normal, Hard, Insane)
✕ Background design, skin and SB (if available) and combo colouring
✓ Metadata
> resolution of images, mp3, files,...
> bit rate of song
> hitsounds
> skin (missing elements and resolution checks) and SB (SB load) or video
✕ Unrankable issues

🕗 Timing 🕗
✕ KIAI time and breaks
✫ Slider Velocity and changes
✫ Timing changes
✫ Timing points
✕ BPM & Offset
✓ Preview point
✓ Unrankable issues

🎧 Sound 🎧
✫ Hitsounds (Do they match the song?)
✫ Hitsound patterns
✫ Hitsound volume (Timing points)
✫ Rhythm of hit objects (Do they match the song?)
✓ Unrankable issues

🖰 Object Gameplay 🖰
✫ Reasonable spacing patterns, spacing consistency, Jumps, Anti-Jumps, special pattern
✫ Flow and transition between elements
✫ Overmapping
✫ Unrankable issues (In addition to the link at the top)
> objects hitting the accuracy bar, HP bar or are out of playfield with the osu!standard skin
> overlaps and stacking
> unreadable objects

👀 Visual Gameplay 👀
✫ Combo patterns, New combos
✫ Blankets, symmetry
✫ Variety of different patterns and styles
✫ Unrankable issues

General

> Really important for a good difficulty spread: Pattern and rhythm wise, ezek's difficulty is more challenging than the Ora's. The only difference is that on ezek's, which I very much appreciate, has consistent spacing and spacing snap. The pattern placement is much more complex tho and requires more thinking about identifying or reading the element's timing placement, than it is with the harder difficulty, which is mostly mapped to the beats only and the element's timings are much easier to read. In short; ezek's mixed vocal and melody (beats), whereas Ora didn't, thus making it more challenging and faster to play.

The spread is really difficult as the two Hard difficulties are nearly the same. The spacing and AR on Ora's difficulty is bigger than on ezek's. ezek's has a couple jumps and stop and go patterns as well. The slider velocity also only has a minor difference of 0,1. Although, ezek's difficulty rhythm patterns are more challenging, the rhythm patterns are kinda simple on Ora's, which kinda makes them the same. Nonetheless the tiny differences, they should be both be graded as "Hard" as the differences are really small and minor.

Furthermore, the players will expect the hardest difficulty to be an Insane, which it isn't. The song doesn't allow an Insane nor does the difficulty show that it is an Insane - Ora's Paradise is a Hard difficulty. The patterns, spacing, star rating and even the osu forum icon says it. Even if you can name the hardest difficulty a different name, they should be graded equally.

> Since I found this on almost all difficulties I'll list it here as well. First, be consistent throughout the map. If you change it, change it for all, which I highly recommend in order for it to be correct. 00:53:490 (1) - "Combos are usually placed to either match the vocal/musical phrases or to indicate the downbeat of each measure. In special cases, combos are used in indicating any discrepancies in spacing or slider velocity." Source: https://osu.ppy.sh/wiki/Modding There is a break. The is no pattern that follows this NC or any of the special cases as listed above in which need a NC, thus making it unnecessary to place one here. Secondly, the hitsounding for this one varys throughout the mapset. There is a normal hitfinish, normal nothingness and nothing at all lol.

Although you can have differences in mapping from difficulty to difficulty, since the break times are the same, the pattern conclusion and hitsounding should be as well. There are 3 difficulties with a circle at the beginning of the break, add it to the 4th. Also use the same hitsounding on those concluding elements to be consistent throughout the mapset. It will appear a lot cleaner and less messy.
Use either soft whistle or normal finish to conclude the pattern and to indicate the break time, but with a lowered volume. 45% that is.

>The ending also should have consistent hitsounding. Please adjust those as well once you agreed on one common solution to use for all 4 difficulties!

Aru's Easy

Hitsounds:
00:28:227 (1) - The normal whistle you chose to use, does not fit to the song, at all. The song is way too calm and soft for it to fit. Use soft whistles instead to emphasise the song better and not to overtake the song with noisy, not suitable hitsounds. Besides, you only used normal whistle on this slider 00:28:227 (1) - . Why? Accident? Remove it.

Combo:
Your combo pattern isn't consistent here 01:08:648 (1,1) - You used a NC every 8 and ever 4 beats. Please check them and choose either of them, not both!

Appearance, Flow & Transition:
00:27:595 (4) - If you'd lower this circle by a few grids, it would create a better transition and flow between those elements 00:25:700 (3,4,1) -

Rhythm & Pattern:
00:53:490 - There really should be a circle to conclude this verse and previous pattern, otherwise it will play odd. Either that or move the beginning of the break to 00:53:490 - . Same goes for 02:04:227 -

Possible Unrankable Issues:
00:33:279 (1) - 01:58:542 (4) - Careful with such high element placement as it may be unrankable if it hits the HP bar. It would be considered as element out of the playfield area that overlaps with the interface.

Unrankable Issues:
02:21:911 (3) - 03:17:490 (2) - This slider overlaps with the accuracy bar when it's turned on while playing. It's also nearly out of playfield area. You have to move the slider a bit higher to fix this issue. https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5971964 https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5971986
02:48:437 (4) - 03:12:437 (2) - These elements hit the HP drain bar with the osu!standard skin and they have to be lowered in order for it to be rankable. https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5971974 https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5971976 You placed your elements really high in general. Try to be more cautious in the future and don't overlap them with interface elements.

There is nothing else that is mentionable.

Normal

> Why did you map the Normal for this set only and not the hardest difficulty too like the creator should imo? I don't understand o.O

Hitsounds:
00:53:490 (1) - 02:04:227 (1) - The song gets softer and quieter at this part and the normal finish is a tint too much for it. It's really strong on the ears. Add a soft whistle instead to emphasise the beginning of the soft section of the song and break or if you really want to keep it, lower the volume of the finish, for it not to be too loud at least. To 45% would be perfect to emphasise and not to overtake or draw too much attention for no reason because it's not club music or strong bass.

Combos:
Your whole combo patterns are completely random. Sometimes you have a NC every 4 beats, then every 8 beats, then something in between to match the vocals. You need to keep them consistent, even more because it's an easier difficulty, which is mostly played by beginners and they only get confused by such combo placement. In short: 00:30:753 (3) - Add NC, 00:32:648 (1) - Remove NC, 00:33:279 (3) - Add NC, 00:35:174 (1) - Remove NC, 00:35:805 (2) - Add NC, and so on. Or you go for a 8 beat combo pattern. Your choice. If you need help with combo pattern, ask me or one of your GD mappers to help you out. I recommend to use an 8 beat pattern tho, since your patterns are really long. And remember; for combo patterns, never use them to match the vocals or pattern. They are indicators to show the beginning of a new row of beats in the music.
00:53:490 (1) - 02:04:227 (1) - "Combos are usually placed to either match the vocal/musical phrases or to indicate the downbeat of each measure. In special cases, combos are used in indicating any discrepancies in spacing or slider velocity." Source: https://osu.ppy.sh/wiki/Modding You don't have a pattern that follows this NC or any of the special cases as listed above in which you can use a NC, thus making it unnecessary to place one here, especially before a break.

Rhythm & Pattern:
03:22:227 - Here should be a circle before the spinner because you mapped the whole last section to the guitar / string instrument (?) melody and vocals. https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5972170

There's nothing else to say for this difficulty. The spacing is perfectly fine, the flow is smooth, the patterns match the music, all good.

ezek's Hard

Appearance:
02:40:858 (4) - This slider is hard to read due to the previous slider still being visible when this one appears. I'm not a fan of hidden notes. They just cause confusion and only should be used when they are obvious to read and also are more for Insane difficulties than Hard ones.

Hitsounds:
Imo, your hitsound pattern is pretty random. The soft whistles in particular are overused and dominate the hitsounding completely. They don't support the song, they overtake it and create their own melody. They draw way too much attention to them than they should. Their job is to support and emphasise the song. I suggest to reduce the amount of soft whistle you used or reduce the volume quite a bit for them not to overtake the original song that you mapped to. I tried using 60% volume for all hitsounds and it was a lot better. Either way, it should be changed some way.
02:04:227 (1) - 00:53:490 (1) - 03:22:542 (1) - Without any hitsound, the ending sounds really empty. Add a lower volumed hit finish or soft whistle, like the other difficulties have.

Combo:
00:53:490 (1) - "Combos are usually placed to either match the vocal/musical phrases or to indicate the downbeat of each measure. In special cases, combos are used in indicating any discrepancies in spacing or slider velocity." Source: https://osu.ppy.sh/wiki/Modding You don't have a pattern that follows this NC or any of the special cases as listed above in which you can use a NC, thus making it unnecessary to place one here, especially before a break.

Spacing:
00:44:490 (4,5) - 00:49:542 (4,5) - 01:55:226 (4,5) - 02:00:279 (4,5) - This jump, or more like spacing accident, i don't understand. I pretty much already explained everything below and would only repeat myself again.
01:19:385 (2,3,4) - Inconsistent spacing > 01:21:911 (2,3,4) - Consistent spacing, ugh. Yes, I noticed this one in particular.
1. 02:24:121 (7,1) - 2. 02:27:911 (3,4) - Rest: 02:31:700 (6,1) - 02:34:227 (6,1) - 02:54:437 (6,1) - 03:04:543 (6,1) - This tiny jump is really unnecessary and only disturbes the consistency of your spacing. For the first one: Even with the beginning of the chorus, the spacing change (it's not even a jump really) is wrong here. Especially because there is no drastic musical change that would support a jump. Although I can accept "the emphasis of the chorus" as an answer, but take it into consideration either way. For the second one: 02:27:595 (2,3,4) - the music is not changing at this point, it doesn't call for any changes. Maybe adjust 02:27:911 (3) - to have consistent spacing between 2 to 3 and 3 to 4. https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5972276 (I only mean the spacing, not the pattern placement). You did some copy paste there, so fix that on the patterns you copy pasted as well and any other spacing inconsistencies you can find (inb4 you'll just skip looking through them).

Rhythm & Pattern:
01:36:437 (1,2,3,4,5) - This is mapped to the drum sounds in the music but this 01:38:332 (6) - is mapped to the "Ahh" vocal in the BG, which goes until 01:38:806 - so you should extend the slider a little. It would also create a much better transition between those elements. https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5972320

Your spacing changes that cause spacing inconsistencies drive me nuts on this one lol. The spacing is really linear and then you mess it up with tiny spacing changes (not even jumps) that seem not reasonable to me. The rest plays nice though. Good job.

Ora's Paradise

> You barely mapped to the vocals, if not at all (to escape JB's reputation and voice ahaha, jk)

Hitsounds:
00:53:490 (1) - 02:04:227 (1) - The song gets softer and quieter at this part and the normal finish is a tint too much for it. It's really strong on the ears. Add a soft whistle instead to emphasise the beginning of the soft section of the song and break or if you really want to keep it, lower the volume of the finish, for it not to be too loud at least. To 45% would be perfect to emphasise and not to overtake or draw too much attention for no reason because it's not club music or strong bass.

Combo:
00:53:490 (1) - 02:04:227 (1) - "Combos are usually placed to either match the vocal/musical phrases or to indicate the downbeat of each measure. In special cases, combos are used in indicating any discrepancies in spacing or slider velocity." Source: https://osu.ppy.sh/wiki/Modding You don't have a pattern that follows this NC or any of the special cases as listed above in which you can use a NC, thus making it unnecessary to place one here, especially before a break.
03:04:858 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4) - This whole section has wrong combo placement. The whole difficulty has a NC every 4 beats or white bars. Even if you mapped to the vocals here, the combo pattern should be consistent throughout the map unless you have, again, any special cases like from above to justify them.
01:38:332 (4) - Since you have a slider velocity change here, you can justify a NC at this point for easier readability. You should add one because of the slider velocity change, for it to be more noticeable. "In special cases, combos are used in indicating any discrepancies in spacing or slider velocity." Source: https://osu.ppy.sh/wiki/Modding Even more since the slider length between 1,0 and 0,8 IS hardly noticeable while playing. 01:38:332 (4,1) - If you have any more of these, change them as well.

Appearance, Flow & Transition:
02:40:227 (2) - 02:47:806 (2) - 02:52:858 (2) - these almost look like circles and are hard to read due to the overlap with the previous slider. Space them out a bit more (or smth similar) so they are not too close to each other to make it more readable. Suggestion: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5971606 , https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5971614 , https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5971622 < much more readable and flows good too. You did that on the first chorus as well 01:21:279 (1,2) - 01:26:332 (1,2) - why not here too? (Not sure if it's up to date but such overlaps were unrankable a few years ago lol)
03:07:069 (4) - 01:17:490 (5) - Such sliders are not only weird looking, they also play weird because the tails are so tight together it feels clustered. Arch them a bit further apart for better appearance. Try to do this with all kinds of slider like this. https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5971632
00:26:964 (5) - The ending point should be 2 grids lower for it to be perfectly linear with 00:26:332 (2) -, unless you didn't intend that.
00:33:911 (2,3,4) - Since the tiny jump from 2 to 3 is rather small, easy to play and flows good too, the jump from 3 to 4 is rather big and hard to play, it doesn't flow good either. First of all, the player has to harshly move direction of the cursor to reach the start of the slider. The two small sliders are better to play, as they are closer together and have a circular playing motion. 3 to 4 plays really awkward. Try finding a better way of placement for this pattern to flow and play better. I also noticed that most of your patterns are circular and flow much better, so this one stands out a lot.
02:30:753 (4,5) - The transition and flow from 4 to 5 is a little harsh, not much but a bit. It would play better if the circle was a bit lower in order for the player to not having to move his cursor too far away from the area that is suited for it's placement, according to the slider's shape 02:30:753 (4) - . Something like this: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5971886

Possible Unrankable Issues:
00:26:332 (2) - Careful with such high element placement. If it touches the HP bar it can or is unrankable, as it's out of playfield area and overlapping with the interface.

Rhythm & Pattern:
02:44:648 (1,2,3,4,5) - 02:49:700 (1,2,3,4,5) - 02:54:753 (1,2,3,4,5) - 02:59:806 (1,2,3,4,5) - Not to disappoint you, but this literally follows nothing. Not the beats in the song, not the melody, not the vocals. They are on white and red bars to fill imo. Maybe you ran out of pattern ideas? The whole map is almost mapped completely to the melody or beats. This pattern doesn't follow that structure and is out of line. Additionally, such rhythm patterns, that don't follow anything, are considered as overmapping and should be avoided. Look at this screen: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5974748 < according to your previous rhythm that you mapped which are 80% of the map, this kind of rhythm is somewhat close to what there should be at this point. I only took the rhythm into account. I didn't bother with pattern in the screen. That's up to you!

Other than that, it's a nice difficulty that flows pretty nicely.

Overall

After 3 hours and this wall of text of modding this mapset, Im freaking tired. Finishing this for the sake of this mod at 3:40 in the morning lol. Too much repetition ugh. Solid mapset that needs more work on hitsounding, spread setting and consistency and rhythm correctness. Good job everyone.

Please add the question and one of the following options to your feedback on my mod please:

[u]Was the mod helpful?[/u]
1. Yes, it helped me a lot! The advice was really useful. I will definitely come back for more.
2. The mod was helpful! Most suggestions were useful to me.
3. It was good but there is room for improvement. I could apply only a few suggestions.
4. The suggestions and advice weren't explained properly. I appreciated the effort but it didn't help me to improve my map, sadly.
5. Awful! I won't visit this queue again. It didn't help me at all.

Edited some typos and added paragraphs so you can read this wall of text better lol

Last edited by BounceBabe 2016-08-30T12:16:32+00:00, edited 4 times in total.

ZekeyHache

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ZekeyHache 2016-08-30T03:01:09+00:00

Holy molly! I'm gonna reply to this on Friday, thanks for the mod ^^

Ora

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Ora 2016-08-30T05:17:47+00:00

I have no words

Lilyanna

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Lilyanna 2016-08-30T10:34:34+00:00

Thx for the mod this should be sooo helpful

i guess ill reply on friday as well 😄 ayyy

Ora wrote:
I have no words

I guess its because bouncebabe used them all xD jk u just gotta go Ora ora ora!!! And apply the mod xd

BounceBabe

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BounceBabe 2016-08-30T11:55:41+00:00

Alright ^^ I'll check back for your replies on Saturday

Rizen

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Rizen 2016-08-30T15:37:35+00:00

poke me sometime after answering BounceBabe's mod if you would like a mod from me ;;

Lilyanna

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Lilyanna 2016-08-30T16:42:08+00:00

Rizen wrote:
poke me sometime after answering BounceBabe's mod if you would like a mod from me ;;

Ok ty Rizen <3

Ora

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Ora 2016-08-31T00:01:07+00:00

Good guy Rizen

Also thanks BounceBabe ^^ most professional mod I've ever seen.

Lilyanna

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Lilyanna 2016-08-31T00:34:25+00:00

Ora wrote:
Good guy Rizen

Also thanks BounceBabe ^^ most professional mod I've ever seen.

Ty for page 7 xD

BounceBabe

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BounceBabe 2016-08-31T08:47:41+00:00

Ora wrote:
Also thanks BounceBabe ^^ most professional mod I've ever seen.

You're welcome. Glad if it helps you ^^

Xiaolin

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Xiaolin 2016-09-01T17:02:16+00:00

I'm gonna kill myself if people say that it's hard to rank this because it's JB. Jeez, that's like the stupidest thing I've heard. Don't worry, Lily, you're gonna rank this soon. Good luck! \ o /

Lilyanna

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Lilyanna 2016-09-01T17:27:00+00:00

Lapis Aoki wrote:
I'm gonna kill myself if people say that it's hard to rank this because it's JB. Jeez, that's like the stupidest thing I've heard. Don't worry, Lily, you're gonna rank this soon. Good luck! \ o /

lets hope a bn llike the map/song at least

thank uuu lapis <3

Lilyanna

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Lilyanna 2016-09-02T00:17:10+00:00

ok ill be first to reply but ill update when the gds reply.

BounceBabe wrote:
Request from my NON-Japanese Queue

^ I laughed hard at this :p Ora iis such a meme xD

What I checked in your mapset
Each point from the list below will have a check mark next to it (?/ ?/ ?). This will tell you whether I checked that point or not.
?= I checked this point and everything is okay.
?= I didn't check this point because I think it doesn't need checking.
?= I checked this point but something needs fixing (explained in the mod)
osu!wiki Modding page
osu!wiki Ranking Criteria page

?? General ??
? Mapset difficulty spread (Easy, Normal, Hard, Insane)
? Background design, skin and SB (if available) and combo colouring
? Metadata
> resolution of images, mp3, files,...
> bit rate of song
> hitsounds
> skin (missing elements and resolution checks) and SB (SB load) or video
? Unrankable issues

?? Timing ??
? KIAI time and breaks
? Slider Velocity and changes
? Timing changes
? Timing points
? BPM & Offset
? Preview point
? Unrankable issues

?? Sound ??
? Hitsounds (Do they match the song?)
? Hitsound patterns
? Hitsound volume (Timing points)
? Rhythm of hit objects (Do they match the song?)
? Unrankable issues

?? Object Gameplay ??
? Reasonable spacing patterns, spacing consistency, Jumps, Anti-Jumps, special pattern
? Flow and transition between elements
? Overmapping
? Unrankable issues (In addition to the link at the top)
> objects hitting the accuracy bar, HP bar or are out of playfield with the osu!standard skin
> overlaps and stacking
> unreadable objects

?? Visual Gameplay ??
? Combo patterns, New combos
? Blankets, symmetry
? Variety of different patterns and styles
? Unrankable issues

General

> Really important for a good difficulty spread: Pattern and rhythm wise, ezek's difficulty is more challenging than the Ora's. The only difference is that on ezek's, which I very much appreciate, has consistent spacing and spacing snap. The pattern placement is much more complex tho and requires more thinking about identifying or reading the element's timing placement, than it is with the harder difficulty, which is mostly mapped to the beats only and the element's timings are much easier to read. In short; ezek's mixed vocal and melody (beats), whereas Ora didn't, thus making it more challenging and faster to play.

The spread is really difficult as the two Hard difficulties are nearly the same. The spacing and AR on Ora's difficulty is bigger than on ezek's. ezek's has a couple jumps and stop and go patterns as well. The slider velocity also only has a minor difference of 0,1. Although, ezek's difficulty rhythm patterns are more challenging, the rhythm patterns are kinda simple on Ora's, which kinda makes them the same. Nonetheless the tiny differences, they should be both be graded as "Hard" as the differences are really small and minor.

Furthermore, the players will expect the hardest difficulty to be an Insane, which it isn't. The song doesn't allow an Insane nor does the difficulty show that it is an Insane - Ora's Paradise is a Hard difficulty. The patterns, spacing, star rating and even the osu forum icon says it. Even if you can name the hardest difficulty a different name, they should be graded equally. does the name of the diff show it as insane because we were aiming for light insane and ye it wasnt possible do i have to change it to ora's hard?

> Since I found this on almost all difficulties I'll list it here as well. First, be consistent throughout the map. If you change it, change it for all, which I highly recommend in order for it to be correct. 00:53:490 (1) - "Combos are usually placed to either match the vocal/musical phrases or to indicate the downbeat of each measure. In special cases, combos are used in indicating any discrepancies in spacing or slider velocity." Source: https://osu.ppy.sh/wiki/Modding There is a break. The is no pattern that follows this NC or any of the special cases as listed above in which need a NC, thus making it unnecessary to place one here. Secondly, the hitsounding for this one varys throughout the mapset. There is a normal hitfinish, normal nothingness and nothing at all lol. same reply below i kept the nc but removed finish hitsounding

Although you can have differences in mapping from difficulty to difficulty, since the break times are the same, the pattern conclusion and hitsounding should be as well. There are 3 difficulties with a circle at the beginning of the break, add it to the 4th. Also use the same hitsounding on those concluding elements to be consistent throughout the mapset. It will appear a lot cleaner and less messy.
Use either soft whistle or normal finish to conclude the pattern and to indicate the break time, but with a lowered volume. 45% that is.im trying to make hitsounding consistent i hate hitsounding

>The ending also should have consistent hitsounding. Please adjust those as well once you agreed on one common solution to use for all 4 difficulties!lets hope ezek help me with this lol , thank u for alot of information ;Dl

Normal

> Why did you map the Normal for this set only and not the hardest difficulty too like the creator should imo? I don't understand o.O i dont see a wrong with that

Hitsounds:
00:53:490 (1) - 02:04:227 (1) - The song gets softer and quieter at this part and the normal finish is a tint too much for it. It's really strong on the ears. Add a soft whistle instead to emphasise the beginning of the soft section of the song and break or if you really want to keep it, lower the volume of the finish, for it not to be too loud at least. To 45% would be perfect to emphasise and not to overtake or draw too much attention for no reason because it's not club music or strong bass.what i did its more like the finish of strong beat and start of soft music so i thought the finish fits better if im not wrong and it better to emphasize the soft music with the end of strong beat i hope make sens my point is that strong finish is what differ from the soft one ..but im not so good with hitsounding i migh just remove the finish and leave it normal sampleset

Combos:
Your whole combo patterns are completely random. Sometimes you have a NC every 4 beats, then every 8 beats, then something in between to match the vocals. You need to keep them consistent, even more because it's an easier difficulty, which is mostly played by beginners and they only get confused by such combo placement. In short: 00:30:753 (3) - Add NC, 00:32:648 (1) - Remove NC, 00:33:279 (3) - Add NC, 00:35:174 (1) - Remove NC, 00:35:805 (2) - Add NC, and so on. Or you go for a 8 beat combo pattern. Your choice. If you need help with combo pattern, ask me or one of your GD mappers to help you out. I recommend to use an 8 beat pattern tho, since your patterns are really long. And remember; for combo patterns, never use them to match the vocals or pattern. They are indicators to show the beginning of a new row of beats in the music. Fixed all combos with 4beat combo pattern i feel placing 4 beats combos make more sens of what u saying D:
00:53:490 (1) - 02:04:227 (1) - "Combos are usually placed to either match the vocal/musical phrases or to indicate the downbeat of each measure. In special cases, combos are used in indicating any discrepancies in spacing or slider velocity." Source: https://osu.ppy.sh/wiki/Modding You don't have a pattern that follows this NC or any of the special cases as listed above in which you can use a NC, thus making it unnecessary to place one here, especially before a break. i added nc every downbeat and those notes comes on downbeat i think they make sens since the case here is placing nc in every downbeat and the previous pattern reached 4beats already

Rhythm & Pattern:
03:22:227 - Here should be a circle before the spinner because you mapped the whole last section to the guitar / string instrument (?) melody and vocals. https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5972170 it was like that before xs fixed

There's nothing else to say for this difficulty. The spacing is perfectly fine, the flow is smooth, the patterns match the music, all good.

Overall

After 3 hours and this wall of text of modding this mapset, Im freaking tired. Finishing this for the sake of this mod at 3:40 in the morning lol. Too much repetition ugh. Solid mapset that needs more work on hitsounding, spread setting and consistency and rhythm correctness. Good job everyone.

THANK YOU for the mod!

Please add the question and one of the following options to your feedback on my mod please:
Was the mod helpful?
3. It was good but there is room for improvement. I could apply only a few suggestions. this options i chose goes to only to normal diff mod i could be wrong but i hope everything make sens but ty ty <3

Edited some typos and added paragraphs so you can read this wall of text better lol

ZekeyHache

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ZekeyHache 2016-09-02T05:27:03+00:00

BounceBabe wrote:
ezek's Hard

Appearance:
02:40:858 (4) - This slider is hard to read due to the previous slider still being visible when this one appears. I'm not a fan of hidden notes. They just cause confusion and only should be used when they are obvious to read and also are more for Insane difficulties than Hard ones. I don't find this confusing and you're the first one telling me this about this specific note, I may consider a change if more people agree~

Hitsounds:
Imo, your hitsound pattern is pretty random. The soft whistles in particular are overused and dominate the hitsounding completely. They don't support the song, they overtake it and create their own melody. They draw way too much attention to them than they should. Their job is to support and emphasise the song. I suggest to reduce the amount of soft whistle you used or reduce the volume quite a bit for them not to overtake the original song that you mapped to. I tried using 60% volume for all hitsounds and it was a lot better. Either way, it should be changed some way.
02:04:227 (1) - 00:53:490 (1) - 03:22:542 (1) - Without any hitsound, the ending sounds really empty. Add a lower volumed hit finish or soft whistle, like the other difficulties have.

Well, I don't think the whistles are overused and I'm trying to be consistent on their use~ I reduced the 80% volumes to 60 as you suggested since I found that it's true that the hitsounds were a bit loud~ and the 3 notes u mentioned as "empty" just because they have no additional hitsound, I kept them that way since they fit well like that imo~ Adding more feels exaggerated for me~

Combo:
00:53:490 (1) - "Combos are usually placed to either match the vocal/musical phrases or to indicate the downbeat of each measure. In special cases, combos are used in indicating any discrepancies in spacing or slider velocity." Source: https://osu.ppy.sh/wiki/Modding You don't have a pattern that follows this NC or any of the special cases as listed above in which you can use a NC, thus making it unnecessary to place one here, especially before a break.

Sir, u don't have to give me that explanation since I'm not a beginner~ The reasons why I put nc there are 1) There's a remarkable/noticeable change in the music and placing nc is a good way to emphasize this and 2) I think is a good way to introduce the break here~ Breaking nc consistency is not bad if it's for a reasonable reason

Spacing:
00:44:490 (4,5) - 00:49:542 (4,5) - 01:55:226 (4,5) - 02:00:279 (4,5) - This jump, or more like spacing accident, i don't understand. I pretty much already explained everything below and would only repeat myself again. These are totally intentional~ I wanna emphasize the last word of that specific parts and the strong beats give me enough support for that too~
01:19:385 (2,3,4) - Inconsistent spacing > 01:21:911 (2,3,4) - Consistent spacing, ugh. Yes, I noticed this one in particular. (4) was the only one supposed to be a jump on the second pattern, so I fixed that~
1. 02:24:121 (7,1) - 2. 02:27:911 (3,4) - Rest: 02:31:700 (6,1) - 02:34:227 (6,1) - 02:54:437 (6,1) - 03:04:543 (6,1) - This tiny jump is really unnecessary and only disturbes the consistency of your spacing. For the first one: Even with the beginning of the chorus, the spacing change (it's not even a jump really) is wrong here. Especially because there is no drastic musical change that would support a jump. Although I can accept "the emphasis of the chorus" as an answer, but take it into consideration either way. For the second one: 02:27:595 (2,3,4) - the music is not changing at this point, it doesn't call for any changes. Maybe adjust 02:27:911 (3) - to have consistent spacing between 2 to 3 and 3 to 4. https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5972276 (I only mean the spacing, not the pattern placement). You did some copy paste there, so fix that on the patterns you copy pasted as well and any other spacing inconsistencies you can find (inb4 you'll just skip looking through them).

I did all my tiny jumps on the last part of the bass-like rhythm that plays before every downbeat to emphasize the end of every section even tho there's no drastic change in the music, it fits imo, and I kept my consistency over that~ Also plays well and adds more fun~

Rhythm & Pattern:
01:36:437 (1,2,3,4,5) - This is mapped to the drum sounds in the music but this 01:38:332 (6) - is mapped to the "Ahh" vocal in the BG, which goes until 01:38:806 - so you should extend the slider a little. It would also create a much better transition between those elements. https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5972320 Here I just replaced the slider with a circle, I realized a slider doesn't fit for my likes~

Your spacing changes that cause spacing inconsistencies drive me nuts on this one lol. The spacing is really linear and then you mess it up with tiny spacing changes (not even jumps) that seem not reasonable to me. The rest plays nice though. Good job. spacing doesn't have to be absolutely perfect~ thanks!

Thanks for the ~~Holy Bible~~ mod!

Update~

osu file format v14

[General]
AudioFilename: audio.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 73069
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 0

[Editor]
Bookmarks: 23174,53490,63595,124227,134332
DistanceSpacing: 1.5
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 1

[Metadata]
Title:Company
TitleUnicode:Company
Artist:Justin Bieber
ArtistUnicode:Justin Bieber
Creator:Lilyanna
Version:ezek's Hard
Source:
Tags:ezek Ora Pop Arusamour PURPOSE:The Movement
BeatmapID:1035560
BeatmapSetID:485619

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:6
CircleSize:4
OverallDifficulty:6
ApproachRate:7
SliderMultiplier:1.9
SliderTickRate:1

[Events]
//Background and Video events
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Video,98,"VerizonWireless.avi"
//Break Periods
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//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples

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- Frontier -

1,854 posts

Joined April 2014

- Frontier - 2016-09-02T12:49:32+00:00

cuz i saw the Holy Bible mod. So i'll make some very very short mod instead.

[Aru's Easy]

00:53:490 - Shouldn't it break here?
01:11:174 (1) - You shouldn't nc this for consistency with the previous one.
01:13:700 (3) - and you should nc this instead cuz it starts kiai time here.
02:04:227 - I think you know what to do now.

This isn't helpful I know. Don't give me kd.

Arusamour

424 posts

Joined April 2014

Arusamour 2016-09-02T16:53:45+00:00

BounceBabe wrote:
Aru's Easy

Hitsounds:
00:28:227 (1) - The normal whistle you chose to use, does not fit to the song, at all. The song is way too calm and soft for it to fit. Use soft whistles instead to emphasise the song better and not to overtake the song with noisy, not suitable hitsounds. Besides, you only used normal whistle on this slider 00:28:227 (1) - . Why? Accident? Remove it. fixed

Combo:
Your combo pattern isn't consistent here 01:08:648 (1,1) - You used a NC every 8 and ever 4 beats. Please check them and choose either of them, not both! fixed

Appearance, Flow & Transition:
00:27:595 (4) - If you'd lower this circle by a few grids, it would create a better transition and flow between those elements 00:25:700 (3,4,1) - fixed

Rhythm & Pattern:
00:53:490 - There really should be a circle to conclude this verse and previous pattern, otherwise it will play odd. Either that or move the beginning of the break to 00:53:490 - . Same goes for 02:04:227 - fixed

Possible Unrankable Issues:
00:33:279 (1) - 01:58:542 (4) - Careful with such high element placement as it may be unrankable if it hits the HP bar. It would be considered as element out of the playfield area that overlaps with the interface. fixed

Unrankable Issues:
02:21:911 (3) - 03:17:490 (2) - This slider overlaps with the accuracy bar when it's turned on while playing. It's also nearly out of playfield area. You have to move the slider a bit higher to fix this issue. https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5971964 https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5971986
02:48:437 (4) - 03:12:437 (2) - These elements hit the HP drain bar with the osu!standard skin and they have to be lowered in order for it to be rankable. https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5971974 https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5971976 You placed your elements really high in general. Try to be more cautious in the future and don't overlap them with interface elements. fixed

There is nothing else that is mentionable.

- frontier - wrote:
Aru's Easy
00:53:490 - Shouldn't it break here? not sure what you mean by this?
01:11:174 (1) - You shouldn't nc this for consistency with the previous one. fixed
01:13:700 (3) - and you should nc this instead cuz it starts kiai time here. fixed
02:04:227 - I think you know what to do now. fixed

Ora

959 posts

Joined November 2014

Ora 2016-09-02T17:42:16+00:00

Ora's Paradise

> You barely mapped to the vocals, if not at all (to escape JB's reputation and voice ahaha, jk)

Hitsounds:
00:53:490 (1) - 02:04:227 (1) - The song gets softer and quieter at this part and the normal finish is a tint too much for it. It's really strong on the ears. Add a soft whistle instead to emphasise the beginning of the soft section of the song and break or if you really want to keep it, lower the volume of the finish, for it not to be too loud at least. To 45% would be perfect to emphasise and not to overtake or draw too much attention for no reason because it's not club music or strong bass. Fixed all of this. I completely agree these parts should be softer as the music closes at the break

Combo:
00:53:490 (1) - 02:04:227 (1) - "Combos are usually placed to either match the vocal/musical phrases or to indicate the downbeat of each measure. In special cases, combos are used in indicating any discrepancies in spacing or slider velocity." Source: https://osu.ppy.sh/wiki/Modding You don't have a pattern that follows this NC or any of the special cases as listed above in which you can use a NC, thus making it unnecessary to place one here, especially before a break. Ok I will change. In a lot of maps I have seen people adding a NC on the last beat before a break just for some emphasis, but I will trust you
03:04:858 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4) - This whole section has wrong combo placement. The whole difficulty has a NC every 4 beats or white bars. Even if you mapped to the vocals here, the combo pattern should be consistent throughout the map unless you have, again, any special cases like from above to justify them. I think they are fixed now, I wasn't too sure where you thought the NCs should be
01:38:332 (4) - Since you have a slider velocity change here, you can justify a NC at this point for easier readability. You should add one because of the slider velocity change, for it to be more noticeable. "In special cases, combos are used in indicating any discrepancies in spacing or slider velocity." Source: https://osu.ppy.sh/wiki/Modding Even more since the slider length between 1,0 and 0,8 IS hardly noticeable while playing. 01:38:332 (4,1) - If you have any more of these, change them as well. That's the only one, fixed

Appearance, Flow & Transition:
02:40:227 (2) - 02:47:806 (2) - 02:52:858 (2) - these almost look like circles and are hard to read due to the overlap with the previous slider. Space them out a bit more (or smth similar) so they are not too close to each other to make it more readable. Suggestion: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5971606 , https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5971614 , https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5971622 < much more readable and flows good too. You did that on the first chorus as well 01:21:279 (1,2) - 01:26:332 (1,2) - why not here too? (Not sure if it's up to date but such overlaps were unrankable a few years ago lol) I don't agree that it is hard to read. The flow is there and it really doesn't look bad. To answer why I have the overlap pattern here and not in the first kiai. It's because the atmosphere is different. JB is singing at the "climax" of the song and his singing brings out the music to be not only louder, but more active (I think that's the right word

maybe you can reply to this if you still disagree or just so I can have closure with this issue).
03:07:069 (4) - 01:17:490 (5) - Such sliders are not only weird looking, they also play weird because the tails are so tight together it feels clustered. Arch them a bit further apart for better appearance. Try to do this with all kinds of slider like this. https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5971632 Okay, I agree. Fixed
00:26:964 (5) - The ending point should be 2 grids lower for it to be perfectly linear with 00:26:332 (2) -, unless you didn't intend that. I wanted it to blanket nicer with 00:25:700 (1) - but it's hard to do that without making it ugly and not linear with 00:26:332 (2) - . I will change it to what you suggested, but I might just end up remapping that small part
00:33:911 (2,3,4) - Since the tiny jump from 2 to 3 is rather small, easy to play and flows good too, the jump from 3 to 4 is rather big and hard to play, it doesn't flow good either. First of all, the player has to harshly move direction of the cursor to reach the start of the slider. The two small sliders are better to play, as they are closer together and have a circular playing motion. 3 to 4 plays really awkward. Try finding a better way of placement for this pattern to flow and play better. I also noticed that most of your patterns are circular and flow much better, so this one stands out a lot. 100% agree and remapped. I'm having trouble finding a good pattern to use here that flows into the next section. If you have any suggestions, please let me know

02:30:753 (4,5) - The transition and flow from 4 to 5 is a little harsh, not much but a bit. It would play better if the circle was a bit lower in order for the player to not having to move his cursor too far away from the area that is suited for it's placement, according to the slider's shape 02:30:753 (4) - . Something like this: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5971886

Possible Unrankable Issues:
00:26:332 (2) - Careful with such high element placement. If it touches the HP bar it can or is unrankable, as it's out of playfield area and overlapping with the interface. Yeah, so....same as above, going to remap this part because it has multiple issues with it. I'll need some time to figure out what I will do with it.

Thanks for noticing this.

Rhythm & Pattern:
02:44:648 (1,2,3,4,5) - 02:49:700 (1,2,3,4,5) - 02:54:753 (1,2,3,4,5) - 02:59:806 (1,2,3,4,5) - Not to disappoint you, but this literally follows nothing. Not the beats in the song, not the melody, not the vocals. They are on white and red bars to fill imo. Maybe you ran out of pattern ideas? The whole map is almost mapped completely to the melody or beats. This pattern doesn't follow that structure and is out of line. Additionally, such rhythm patterns, that don't follow anything, are considered as overmapping and should be avoided. Look at this screen: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5974748 < according to your previous rhythm that you mapped which are 80% of the map, this kind of rhythm is somewhat close to what there should be at this point. I only took the rhythm into account. I didn't bother with pattern in the screen. That's up to you! This was a change that I made to the map with Yale's Mod. I believe he sees the music having more intensity here and you see he says that it wouldn't even be "overmapped". From what I've seen, it plays fine now but I do see what you're saying. Before that change, I had a 1/2 slider I believe for each of those parts. Would love for you to reply to this before I change any further. What are your thoughts about Yale's mod?.

Other than that, it's a nice difficulty that flows pretty nicely. You helped out a lot and I appreciate it.

Overall Amazing mod and I hope to work with you in the future. You spent a lot of time on the mapset and we all appreciate it

After 3 hours and this wall of text of modding this mapset, Im freaking tired. Finishing this for the sake of this mod at 3:40 in the morning lol. Too much repetition ugh. Solid mapset that needs more work on hitsounding, spread setting and consistency and rhythm correctness. Good job everyone.

Please add the question and one of the following options to your feedback on my mod please:
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Was the mod helpful?
1. Yes, it helped me a lot! The advice was really useful. I will definitely come back for more. I would also like a reply from you for some of the things you mentioned

Last edited by Ora 2016-09-02T17:45:54+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

Ora

959 posts

Joined November 2014

Ora 2016-09-02T17:44:48+00:00

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71,158,122806,1,0,0:0:0:0:
71,158,122964,2,0,P|120:139|197:141,1,100,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
348,83,123595,1,8,1:0:0:0:
337,167,123753,2,0,L|321:267,1,100
314,305,124227,1,2,1:2:0:0:
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65,51,134964,1,8,0:0:0:0:
65,51,135279,1,0,0:0:0:0:
208,153,135595,2,0,L|302:143,1,89.9999972534181,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
371,37,136227,1,8,0:0:0:0:
371,37,136542,6,0,P|400:115|378:216,1,179.999994506836,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
281,298,137490,1,8,0:0:0:0:
281,298,137806,1,0,0:0:0:0:
182,206,138121,2,0,P|221:197|274:196,1,89.9999972534181,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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357,175,139385,2,0,P|345:117|368:45,1,134.999995880127
392,19,140016,1,8,0:0:0:0:
480,121,140332,1,0,0:0:0:0:
357,175,140648,2,0,P|297:168|259:151,1,89.9999972534181
164,90,141279,1,8,0:0:0:0:
164,90,141595,1,0,0:0:0:0:
164,90,141911,6,0,B|125:173|125:173|86:72,1,179.999994506836,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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165,138,145069,2,0,P|171:114|190:83,1,50,8|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
272,99,145385,2,0,P|266:123|246:154,1,50
303,220,145700,2,0,P|367:217|421:191,1,100,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
201,241,146332,1,8,1:0:0:0:
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240,54,147911,1,0,0:0:0:0:
176,131,148069,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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297,86,148858,1,8,1:0:0:0:
325,166,149016,2,0,P|332:227|326:270,1,100
314,308,149490,6,0,B|265:325|265:325|170:300,1,150,4|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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188,352,151385,1,8,1:0:0:0:
283,323,151542,2,0,P|247:274|228:223,1,100
194,208,152016,6,0,P|133:217|53:181,1,150,4|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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114,78,153121,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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295,20,154385,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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260,189,155490,2,0,L|315:160,1,50
176,225,155806,2,0,L|56:190,1,100,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
6,354,156437,1,8,1:0:0:0:
83,331,156595,2,0,L|203:294,1,100
220,285,157069,6,0,P|236:223|191:148,1,150,4|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
154,133,157700,2,0,L|101:126,1,50,8|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
110,25,158016,1,0,0:0:0:0:
203,60,158174,1,0,0:0:0:0:
203,60,158332,2,0,B|246:47|246:47|322:66,1,100,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
425,254,158964,1,8,1:0:0:0:
349,216,159121,2,0,P|391:177|435:171,1,100
476,171,159595,6,0,P|421:136|423:37,1,150,4|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
488,89,160227,2,0,P|442:100|428:99,1,50,8|0,1:0|0:0,1:0:0:0:
335,94,160542,1,0,0:0:0:0:
244,135,160700,1,0,0:0:0:0:
244,135,160858,2,0,L|259:258,1,100,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
152,100,161490,1,8,1:0:0:0:
141,184,161648,2,0,L|123:310,1,100
120,327,162121,6,0,P|173:340|263:309,1,150,4|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
320,248,162753,2,0,P|347:206|353:189,1,50,8|0,1:0|0:0,1:0:0:0:
260,180,163069,1,0,0:0:0:0:
183,227,163227,1,0,0:0:0:0:
119,163,163385,2,0,P|109:122|110:83,1,50,0|0,1:0|0:0,1:0:0:0:
185,67,163700,2,0,P|195:108|194:142,1,50
260,180,164016,2,0,P|308:181|356:160,1,100,8|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
148,104,164648,6,0,L|161:162,1,50,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
76,203,164964,2,0,L|63:263,1,50
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302,254,165595,1,0,0:0:0:0:
366,177,165753,1,0,0:0:0:0:
366,177,165911,2,0,P|400:240|394:292,1,100,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
204,200,166542,1,8,1:0:0:0:
162,274,166700,2,0,P|209:285|258:270,1,100
295,245,167174,6,0,P|341:226|428:284,1,150,4|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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383,166,168121,1,0,0:0:0:0:
355,80,168279,1,0,0:0:0:0:
281,27,168437,2,0,P|250:27|218:35,1,50,0|0,1:0|0:0,1:0:0:0:
184,108,168753,2,0,P|206:109|236:103,1,50
134,43,169069,2,0,P|107:89|117:153,1,100,8|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
224,181,169700,6,0,P|237:223|239:261,1,50,0|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
294,301,170016,2,0,P|336:314|371:316,1,50
206,305,170332,2,0,P|173:334|155:366,1,50,8|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
75,303,170648,1,0,0:0:0:0:
96,205,170806,1,0,0:0:0:0:
96,205,170964,2,0,L|207:208,1,100,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
376,213,171595,1,8,1:0:0:0:
323,279,171753,2,0,P|295:239|295:188,1,100
307,145,172227,6,0,P|320:93|264:19,1,150,4|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
244,96,172858,2,0,P|271:86|299:82,1,50,8|0,1:0|0:0,1:0:0:0:
388,109,173174,1,0,0:0:0:0:
454,184,173332,1,0,0:0:0:0:
431,282,173490,6,0,L|414:348,1,50,0|0,1:0|0:0,1:0:0:0:
343,263,173806,2,0,L|331:213,1,50
454,184,174121,2,0,L|429:288,1,100,8|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
288,343,174753,6,0,L|239:335,1,50,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
217,236,175069,2,0,L|166:247,1,50
69,268,175385,2,0,L|53:219,1,50,8|0,1:0|0:0,1:0:0:0:
23,125,175700,1,0,0:0:0:0:
94,55,175858,1,0,0:0:0:0:
94,55,176016,2,0,B|144:40|144:40|215:52,1,100,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
410,87,176648,1,8,1:0:0:0:
336,129,176806,2,0,P|320:186|330:242,1,100
334,269,177279,6,0,P|274:285|185:245,1,150,4|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
161,223,177911,2,0,L|143:172,1,50,8|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
114,90,178227,1,0,0:0:0:0:
212,75,178385,1,0,0:0:0:0:
276,150,178542,2,0,L|268:202,1,50,0|0,1:0|0:0,1:0:0:0:
212,75,178858,2,0,L|203:25,1,50
309,80,179174,2,0,P|345:118|344:187,1,100,8|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
335,325,179806,6,0,P|373:332|400:331,1,50,0|0,1:0|0:0,1:0:0:0:
398,249,180121,2,0,P|360:242|332:243,1,50
471,283,180437,2,0,P|478:245|473:217,1,50,8|0,1:0|0:0,1:0:0:0:
472,133,180753,1,0,0:0:0:0:
412,52,180911,1,0,0:0:0:0:
412,52,181069,2,0,P|351:34|292:60,1,100,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
284,258,181700,1,8,1:0:0:0:
342,202,181858,2,0,P|362:156|356:104,1,100
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Lilyanna

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Joined March 2016

Topic Starter

Lilyanna 2016-09-02T18:30:59+00:00

- Frontier - wrote:
cuz i saw the Holy Bible mod. So i'll make some very very short mod instead.
[Aru's Easy]
00:53:490 - Shouldn't it break here?
01:11:174 (1) - You shouldn't nc this for consistency with the previous one.
01:13:700 (3) - and you should nc this instead cuz it starts kiai time here.
02:04:227 - I think you know what to do now.
This isn't helpful I know. Don't give me kd.

since it helped him to make changes im gonna have to give u kds xD

Set Updated.

Electoz

Beatmap Nominator

1,893 posts

Joined May 2015

Electoz 2016-09-03T10:27:28+00:00

Since Ora requested me via userpage a few days ago so I decided to post here to remind that I'm still monitoring this set every once in a while.
Back to the topic, Aru's Easy and Ora's Paradise can still be polished up more, try focusing on that, also difficulty settings among the spread are a bit messed up, recheck that again.
Keep up the good work!

Lilyanna

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Joined March 2016

Topic Starter

Lilyanna 2016-09-03T11:41:09+00:00

Electoz wrote:
Since Ora requested me via userpage a few days ago so I decided to post here to remind that I'm still monitoring this set every once in a while.
Back to the topic, Aru's Easy and Ora's Paradise can still be polished up more, try focusing on that, also difficulty settings among the spread are a bit messed up, recheck that again.
Keep up the good work!

Okay working on it thank you!

Lilyanna

1,918 posts

Joined March 2016

Topic Starter

Lilyanna 2016-09-05T14:31:47+00:00

Updated ora's paradise fixed stuff also fixed settings, further mods incoming xd !

Shiranai

2,186 posts

Joined August 2012

Shiranai 2016-09-06T03:20:13+00:00

I love jb once
Sugestion,

General

Combo colors yellow and orange-ish seems blend too much with bg, please have mercy to our eyes

Easy

02:33:279 (4) - Move to x:133 y:212? I think it can make the movement on 02:32:016 (3,4,1) - less sharp and more comfortable https://puu.sh/r1pMU/5fa9c9cf4b.png
02:23:806 - Add circle there for consistency with 01:13:069 (4) -
02:42:121 (3) - Missing clap on tail
02:53:490 (4) - Same regarding placement, I think you can flip and move that to x:264 y:294 https://puu.sh/r1pIh/5e7c632852.png ? I think it will move more natural that way

Normal

00:23:174 (1,3) - Somehow that circular flow could be improve more and I think the shape could be more like 01:38:964 (1,3) - to improve the flow
00:50:964 (1) - Missing clap on tail
02:47:174 (1) - Missing clap on tail
03:12:121 (2) - The polarity seems weird, if you try to aim to highlight the vocal, the the reverse should be on red tick here 03:12:753 - . So I think you should change the rhythm on that part into somewhat like https://puu.sh/r1qV5/a6caabb30d.png or https://puu.sh/r1qKm/2e8a5b116b.png

Hard

Half of your kiai is copy paste, 02:44:648 - Copy paste pattern with 01:13:700 - until 01:33:595 - not sure why lol. I know the song is quite repetitive but at least I think your patterning should be more variate to make it more fun to play, you know what to do if you care with the overall quality on your diff

My concern just that, the rest seems great

Paradise

00:42:911 (7) - and 01:53:648 (7) - Due to the vocal, I think a slower sv could be good on that slider to make a build up on next part 00:43:385 - . You can use 0.8 sv on 00:42:911 - and back again to 1.0 sv on 00:43:385 - https://puu.sh/r1scO/4ac4d13837.png
01:02:332 - and 02:13:069 - Not sure why the break time seems diffrent with the rest diff https://puu.sh/r1smK/0859603061.png. If that intentional, at least you can make the break snapped properly on either tick there
01:19:700 (3) - You might want to ctrl+g that, so you have a jump on 01:19:700 (3,4) - somewhat same as you did on this one 01:14:648 (3,4) -
01:23:174 (7) - and 02:33:911 (7) - Seems overmapped, I don't really think there is a 1/8 on that part. Try to hear more closer on 50% playback, the sound you probably hear might be a long synth clap sound that make there is no beat on 01:23:253 - . In this case, you should be use a single circle for the triangle jump imo
01:24:437 (2,3) - Can be rotate -20 degree for a better flow on 01:23:806 (1,2,3,4) - https://puu.sh/r1sUh/2c2ee8b528.png
01:52:542 (3,7) - Try to avoid that small overlap, looks not neat
02:23:174 (2) - Try to be more paralel with the previous one 02:21:911 (1) - I think that will looks better
02:40:227 (2) - 02:47:174 (1,2) - and 02:52:858 (2) - Looks too forced and actually not neat. I think you should try this https://puu.sh/r1tlB/5a143a687e.png
03:14:016 (3,4,1) - Why a sudden anti jump? also maybe try to indicate the anti jump better like adding nc or something

The second half could be clean up more, rather untidy in some parts

Good luck

Lilyanna

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Joined March 2016

Topic Starter

Lilyanna 2016-09-06T09:12:06+00:00

Mako Sakata wrote:
I love jb once
Sugestion,

General
Combo colors yellow and orange-ish seems blend too much with bg, please have mercy to our eyes
seem like i hurt people's ears i dont want hurt their eyes too LOL

Normal
00:23:174 (1,3) - Somehow that circular flow could be improve more and I think the shape could be more like 01:38:964 (1,3) - to improve the flow fixed
00:50:964 (1) - Missing clap on tail oups add clap
02:47:174 (1) - Missing clap on tail ^
03:12:121 (2) - The polarity seems weird, if you try to aim to highlight the vocal, the the reverse should be on red tick here 03:12:753 - . So I think you should change the rhythm on that part into somewhat like https://puu.sh/r1qV5/a6caabb30d.png or https://puu.sh/r1qKm/2e8a5b116b.png
changed revers slider on red

Good luck

thank you!

ZekeyHache

3,316 posts

Joined October 2009

ZekeyHache 2016-09-07T18:09:58+00:00

Mako Sakata wrote:
Hard
Half of your kiai is copy paste, 02:44:648 - Copy paste pattern with 01:13:700 - until 01:33:595 - not sure why lol. I know the song is quite repetitive but at least I think your patterning should be more variate to make it more fun to play, you know what to do if you care with the overall quality on your diff

My concern just that, the rest seems great
I did that because ~~I'm lazy~~ I ran out of mapping ideas for my patterns and I got afraid of going out of the style I was mapping uwu, I don't think that part would be an issue~

Lilyanna

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Joined March 2016

Topic Starter

Lilyanna 2016-09-07T22:18:53+00:00

Ora's paradise will be removed.
removed by ora's request.

CyberX

494 posts

Joined December 2012

CyberX 2016-09-08T13:17:15+00:00

NM for Lilyana

General

-Aru's easy enable the widescreen storyboard when Normal and ezek's Hard doesnt
-ezek's Hard have different Kiais time than the others

Normal

00:32:648 (2,1) - NC should be at (2) instead of (1)
00:34:858 - probably nice if you had circle here
00:42:121 (3,1) - can be blanket
00:43:385 (1,2,3) - personally i dislike this pattern, the (1) break the flow tho
00:47:806 (4,1) - NC should be at (4) instead of (1)
01:06:121 (1) - RNC
01:23:806 (1,2) - can be blanket
02:38:016 (2,3) - blanket can be improve
03:12:121 (2) - shouldnt reverse imo, since there is no vocal at the middle of the slider, prefer long slider
now i realize all the red tick volume is just too much imo, consider lowering it

Electoz

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Joined May 2015

Electoz 2016-09-08T13:28:25+00:00

lol I'm curious why he decided to take his diff out

Stjpa

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Joined July 2013

Stjpa 2016-09-08T14:25:57+00:00

Electoz wrote:
lol I'm curious why he decided to take his diff out

Same. It wasn't that bad, just repetetive.

Lilyanna

1,918 posts

Joined March 2016

Topic Starter

Lilyanna 2016-09-08T14:42:15+00:00

CyberX wrote:
NM for Lilyana

General
-Aru's easy enable the widescreen storyboard when Normal and ezek's Hard doesnt disabled widescreen in aru's easy
-ezek's Hard have different Kiais time than the others fixed same now

Normal
00:32:648 (2,1) - NC should be at (2) instead of (1) i new combo ever downbeat so that work fine
00:34:858 - probably nice if you had circle herei think its fine it flow well with vocals since i left it empty in the pattern before
00:42:121 (3,1) - can be blanket will ruin the symmetry pattern
00:43:385 (1,2,3) - personally i dislike this pattern, the (1) break the flow tho i intended to break flow since its new lyrics/music start
00:47:806 (4,1) - NC should be at (4) instead of (1) dont want break the nc on one downbeat consistency
01:06:121 (1) - RNC
01:23:806 (1,2) - can be blanket i want to move around the area with the patterns so if i blanket ill stuck in one place
02:38:016 (2,3) - blanket can be improve okay fixed slider to another shape
03:12:121 (2) - shouldnt reverse imo, since there is no vocal at the middle of the slider, prefer long slider i think its fine since his rythm vocals changes while sayinh "ohh"
now i realize all the red tick volume is just too much imo, consider lowering it

thank you for mod!!and star!!!

Electoz wrote:
lol I'm curious why he decided to take his diff out

he said he can't do it anymore, maybe he will be busy or something idk he told me to remove it and other private reasons maybe i say in privet :s :s
rip ora's paradise.

Ora

959 posts

Joined November 2014

Ora 2016-09-08T20:02:29+00:00

Electoz wrote:
lol I'm curious why he decided to take his diff out

Hello electoz and all of the modders, just replying to clear things up. For now I need to deal with some personal stuff and I feel that me dropping out will give the mappers a better chance to get ranked. Thanks to everyone for the mods and support, I had fun with this.

Ayyri

Ayyri 2016-09-11T18:42:51+00:00

yo

this song tho zz

[General]

Have the break lead-ins be consistent through all difficulties.

[Aru's Easy]

00:33:279 - Blanket could be improved.
01:33:911 - to 01:36:437 - I would suggest just having these as 3 separate reverse sliders, rather than just one slider with two reverses and one with one reverse. Because that can be a bit confusing for a newer player to read / play.
03:04:858 - Blanket could be improved.

[Normal]

00:47:174 - and 00:47:806 - Wouldn't recommend a stack here if you're going to leave a break inbetween the two patterns. This might be a bit hard for a newer player to read.
01:13:069 - Don't really recommend skipping this snapping sound. It's a pretty prominent sound here. ;w;
01:33:911 - to 01:37:700 - This spinner really doesn't fit here. There's nothing held out for it to follow. Even in Easy it was mapped, so consider mapping this part too.
01:57:911 - and 01:58:542 - Same issue as 00:47:174 - .

please don't ask me to look this again

Lilyanna

1,918 posts

Joined March 2016

Topic Starter

Lilyanna 2016-09-11T18:48:54+00:00

Ayyri wrote:
please don't ask me to look this again

I didnt ask u to look this its an m4m u do what u had to do u could have told me from start i realy wish people stop this !

Ayyri

Ayyri 2016-09-11T19:38:28+00:00

Lilyanna wrote:
I didnt ask u to look this its an m4m u do what u had to do u could have told me from start i realy wish people stop this !

How much of a choice do I have? ;___;

Lilyanna

1,918 posts

Joined March 2016

Topic Starter

Lilyanna 2016-09-11T20:20:19+00:00

Mako Sakata wrote:
I love jb once
Sugestion,

General
Combo colors yellow and orange-ish seems blend too much with bg, please have mercy to our eyes
Easy arus let me do the reply
02:33:279 (4) - Move to x:133 y:212? I think it can make the movement on 02:32:016 (3,4,1) - less sharp and more comfortable changed https://puu.sh/r1pMU/5fa9c9cf4b.png
02:23:806 - Add circle there for consistency with 01:13:069 (4) - added
02:42:121 (3) - Missing clap on tail fixed
02:53:490 (4) - Same regarding placement, I think you can flip and move that to x:264 y:294 https://puu.sh/r1pIh/5e7c632852.png ? I think it will move more natural that way agree done

Good luck

Ayyri wrote:
yo

this song tho zz

[General]
Have the break lead-ins be consistent through all difficulties.fixed
[Aru's Easy]
00:33:279 - Blanket could be improved. its clearly not meant to be blanket
01:33:911 - to 01:36:437 - I would suggest just having these as 3 separate reverse sliders, rather than just one slider with two reverses and one with one reverse. Because that can be a bit confusing for a newer player to read / play. ok fixed
03:04:858 - Blanket could be improved.fixed
[Normal]
00:47:174 - and 00:47:806 - Wouldn't recommend a stack here if you're going to leave a break inbetween the two patterns. This might be a bit hard for a newer player to read. no one mentioned its problem so far so if someone else say ill change
01:13:069 - Don't really recommend skipping this snapping sound. It's a pretty prominent sound here. ;w; i think its fine
01:33:911 - to 01:37:700 - This spinner really doesn't fit here. There's nothing held out for it to follow. Even in Easy it was mapped, so consider mapping this part too. removed the spinner and mapped
01:57:911 - and 01:58:542 - Same issue as 00:47:174 - . same reply
please don't ask me to look this again

thx for mod.

Lilyanna

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Joined March 2016

Topic Starter

Lilyanna 2016-09-12T04:55:53+00:00

sorry ayyri forgot to give kds got distracted, pls be nice on my song choice, its making me struggle i rly like the song hope some other people like it too updated map.

Electoz

Beatmap Nominator

1,893 posts

Joined May 2015

Electoz 2016-09-12T10:56:04+00:00

[General]

Tags should be purpose instead of purpose: since colon isn't necessary when you're searching for tags.

[Aru's Easy]

02:23:806 (4,1) - 03:04:858 (1,2) - DS
03:20:016 (1) - Was expecting a 3/2 repeat slider like 03:09:911 (1) - 03:14:964 (1) for consistency and to make it more friendly towards players, I feel like you made this 3/4 for the sake of 03:22:227 (2) which plays alright since the bpm is low but still I wouldn't recommend it.

[Normal]

01:37:700 (2) - If you're trying to differentiate this from 01:33:911 (1,2,1) by hitsounding the sliderslide then might as well use a different shape lol
01:59:174 (1,2) - Circles don't really play well imo when cuz they're next to each other but clickable on different elements from the song, a 1/2 slider like 00:48:437 (1) fits better.
03:02:332 (5) - NC.
03:02:332 (5,6) - Should be mapped tbh, the intensity is about to reach the climax but the rhythm density at this point is just opposite, adding a 1/1 slider on 03:03:279 would work too if you're following vocal.
03:12:121 (2) - The repeat sounds off cuz there isn't really obvious beat to land if you're following vocal, how about a circle + 1/1 slider instead?

[ezek's Hard]

00:38:016 (5) - How about a 1/4 slider instead so you won't miss the vocal on 00:38:174 ?
01:06:121 (5) - NC.
01:48:595 (5,6,1,2,3,4) - aaa why a sudden dense rhythm+linear flow? I was expecting a less dense rhythm like 01:51:595 (1,2) instead of 01:49:069 (1,2,3) . If you're saying you made the rhythm on 01:49:069 (1,2,3) denser cuz vocal then 01:51:595 (1,2) should be dense as 01:49:069 (1,2,3) .
02:14:332 - Is there any particular reason for having different SV from 01:03:595 - 03:04:858 ? The intensity on these places are pretty much same though.

Call me when you're ready.

Lilyanna

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Joined March 2016

Topic Starter

Lilyanna 2016-09-12T14:07:15+00:00

Electoz wrote:
[General]

Tags should be purpose instead of purpose: since colon isn't necessary when you're searching for tags. fixed

[Normal]

01:37:700 (2) - If you're trying to differentiate this from 01:33:911 (1,2,1) by hitsounding the sliderslide then might as well use a different shape lol i accidently hitsounded the sliderslide while remaping so i fixed the hitsound and kept the shape
01:59:174 (1,2) - Circles don't really play well imo when cuz they're next to each other but clickable on different elements from the song, a 1/2 slider like 00:48:437 (1) fits better. fixed
03:02:332 (5) - NC. oups fixed
03:02:332 (5,6) - Should be mapped tbh, the intensity is about to reach the climax but the rhythm density at this point is just opposite, adding a 1/1 slider on 03:03:279 would work too if you're following vocal. feels better fixed thx
03:12:121 (2) - The repeat sounds off cuz there isn't really obvious beat to land if you're following vocal, how about a circle + 1/1 slider instead?done sounds fair since there is beat on downbeat that i already mapped for rest >/<
Call me when you're ready.

thank you for mod

ZekeyHache

3,316 posts

Joined October 2009

ZekeyHache 2016-09-12T17:45:44+00:00

Electoz wrote:
[ezek's Hard]

00:38:016 (5) - How about a 1/4 slider instead so you won't miss the vocal on 00:38:174 ? oki doki
01:06:121 (5) - NC. omg how did I miss that one lol
01:48:595 (5,6,1,2,3,4) - aaa why a sudden dense rhythm+linear flow? I was expecting a less dense rhythm like 01:51:595 (1,2) instead of 01:49:069 (1,2,3) . If you're saying you made the rhythm on 01:49:069 (1,2,3) denser cuz vocal then 01:51:595 (1,2) should be dense as 01:49:069 (1,2,3) . I made the rhythm less dense~
02:14:332 - Is there any particular reason for having different SV from 01:03:595 - 03:04:858 ? The intensity on these places are pretty much same though. Yes~ That part is the closest to the last kiai, so I wanted to make it a bit more challenging~
Call me when you're ready. ring ring

Thanks for the mod! ^^

update me plz

osu file format v14

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344,100,189595,2,0,L|292:96,1,35.625001358986
248,170,189911,6,0,L|356:176,2,106.875004076958,2|0|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
252,176,192121,1,0,0:0:0:0:
252,176,192437,5,0,3:0:0:0:
308,224,194016,2,0,P|356:212|412:224,1,106.875004076958
208,296,194964,6,0,P|160:308|104:296,2,106.875004076958,2|0|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
368,64,196858,1,0,0:0:0:0:
368,64,197174,1,0,0:0:0:0:
368,64,197490,6,0,L|428:200,1,142.500005435944,0|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
472,292,198437,1,0,0:0:0:0:
168,192,199385,2,0,L|156:152,1,35.625001358986
240,200,199700,2,0,L|252:240,1,35.625001358986
224,128,200016,6,0,L|200:24,2,106.875004076958,2|0|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
304,192,202227,1,0,0:0:0:0:
304,192,202542,5,0,3:0:0:0:
256,192,202700,12,0,205069,0:0:0:0:

CrystilonZ

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CrystilonZ 2016-09-12T17:49:44+00:00

no I won't update you >:C
~~this is so random lolol~~

Good luck !

ZekeyHache

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ZekeyHache 2016-09-12T17:53:26+00:00

CrystilonZ wrote:
no I won't update you >:C
~~this is so random lolol~~

Good luck !

/me feels outdated uwu

Arusamour

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Arusamour 2016-09-12T20:08:31+00:00

Electoz wrote:
[Aru's Easy]

02:23:806 (4,1) - 03:04:858 (1,2) - DS 1.07 -> 1.05. does it really matter? i think as long as it doesn't occur inconsistently, it should be fine.
03:20:016 (1) - Was expecting a 3/2 repeat slider like 03:09:911 (1) - 03:14:964 (1) for consistency and to make it more friendly towards players, I feel like you made this 3/4 for the sake of 03:22:227 (2) which plays alright since the bpm is low but still I wouldn't recommend it. yup! i thought it would be better to finish on a circle but it does have its cost.

Lilyanna

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Lilyanna 2016-09-12T21:25:41+00:00

Updated map. >//<

Electoz

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Electoz 2016-09-13T00:15:58+00:00

Bubbled!

ZekeyHache

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ZekeyHache 2016-09-13T00:17:40+00:00

Bubblyanna~

Lilyanna

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Lilyanna 2016-09-13T00:22:40+00:00

thx Electoz *w*

Underforest

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Underforest 2016-09-13T00:31:12+00:00

congratz, you really deserve it
just want to mention that "pop" in tags isn't really needed since a QAT can put this as a song genre. No need to pop the bubble, you can fix it among with the BN who will qualify owo

Shiranai

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Shiranai 2016-09-13T01:33:23+00:00

Great

Cerulean Veyron

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Cerulean Veyron 2016-09-13T03:43:25+00:00

Hi, just passing by~

Aru's Easy,
02:23:806 (4,1) - & 02:29:490 (1,2) - These notes are spaced out by 1.1x by the looks of it :^)

If you're going to apply this, no need to kds this or update immediately. Do that after you found a BN for qualifying. Nice and solid map btw! GL

Nao Tomori

Nomination Assessment Team

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Nao Tomori 2016-09-13T04:50:02+00:00

lol rip

Lilyanna

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Lilyanna 2016-09-13T15:16:05+00:00

thx Underforest and Cerulean Veyron ill fix with the next bn

Xiaolin

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Xiaolin 2016-09-13T15:27:28+00:00

Oml, gogogo~ \ o /

Rizen

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Rizen 2016-09-15T03:53:09+00:00

so sorry Lilyanna, University has been clawing at my back

But congratulations with the bubble!

there are like two unimportant spacing issues in the easy that can easily be waved off as insignificant at 02:23:806 - (1.09x) and 02:30:753 - (1.07x)
Also the break ends at 01:02:174 - for normal and hard could be dragged all the way to the right unless ending there was intentional

lookin sweet!

sahuang

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sahuang 2016-09-15T15:15:16+00:00

Nice song, hope it can be ranked soon

Lilyanna

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Lilyanna 2016-09-15T16:20:09+00:00

sahuang wrote:
Nice song, hope it can be ranked soon

thx,
How about you help rank it?

Exa

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Exa 2016-09-15T16:25:23+00:00

Lilyanna wrote:
sahuang wrote:
Nice song, hope it can be ranked soon
thx,
How about you help rank it?

Yes please :3

sahuang

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sahuang 2016-09-16T02:25:53+00:00

Let someone else do it ^^

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