1. Easy (0.96 stars, 81 notes)
2. Hard (4.18 stars, 186 notes)
3. Insane (4.87 stars, 319 notes)
4. Normal (3.78 stars, 153 notes)

_Kiva wrote:

OMG
坑了吗

• 
  把我和tsuka加到Tag里

• 
  00:59:829 : 加个Circle
  01:03:695 (3,4,1,2,3): 对于Normal来说稍微有点难
  01:22:097 : 加个Circle
  01:44:365 : ^
  01:49:314 (7): New combo 后面的①去掉New combo
  01:46:221 (3): 把开头的Finish移到前面①的开头
  02:09:726 (1): 转盘在这里结束

• 
  00:36:943 (1,2,3,…): 这里放大间距？没大有必要吧

• 
  00:26:737 (2): 对称一下
  01:12:974 (4,1): 有点近，不过没什么问题
  01:49:159 (2,3,4): 间距有点混乱
  02:26:891 (1): 转盘提前到这里吧 另外结尾最好静音

impossiblexu wrote:

Mod来了~

[General]

• 
  把我和tsuka加到Tag里 刚update完毕XD

[Normal]

• 
  00:59:829 : 加个Circle k.
  01:03:695 (3,4,1,2,3): 对于Normal来说稍微有点难 嗯 看下面反应
  01:22:097 : 加个Circle 现在感觉比较好XD
  01:44:365 : ^
  01:49:314 (7): New combo 后面的①去掉New combo k.
  01:46:221 (3): 把开头的Finish移到前面①的开头 k
  02:09:726 (1): 转盘在这里结束

[Hard]

• 
  00:36:943 (1,2,3,…): 这里放大间距？没大有必要吧

[Insane]

• 
  00:26:737 (2): 对称一下 这两个是不同slider啊OTL
  01:12:974 (4,1): 有点近，不过没什么问题 XD
  01:49:159 (2,3,4): 间距有点混乱 这里特地改的distance
  02:26:891 (1): 转盘提前到这里吧 另外结尾最好静音 k.

  loveFantasy wrote:

  前來膜拜神mapper
  
  [General]
  - Source: Kara no Shoujo 我本来也以为是shoujo但是翻了下video发现写的是shojo所以就改回去了
  
  [Easy]
  <01:29:520> (4) nazi-able spacing
  
  [Normal]
  <00:40:345> (S) 停00:42:510, 00:43:128可以考慮下個circle 唔 暂时保留意见
  <00:45:603> (4) 似乎弄成1.5拍的折返slider(要刪除5)比較配合vocal和鋼琴 各种不合适 先用这个看看（其实感觉是一白线一红线那种
  <01:02:922> (1,2,3,1,2,3) 挺難讀的, 可以略微增加1/2拍間隔的spacing? fixed
  <01:27:355> 下個note? k.
  <02:07:252> (S) 停高白線上 k
  - 後面有隻意義不明的綠線233 删掉了
  
  [Hard]
  - 去掉setup是Hard的設定以外還真不像Hard噗
  <01:17:304> (4,5,6) 這spacing有點那啥啊..
  <01:53:953> (1) 晚1/4開始?
  
  [Insane]
  <00:40:345> (1) same as Normal 同上
  <01:44:984> (1) 下finish 主要我觉得听不出声音。。算了加上吧XD
  
  感覺是很難map的類型..各種被音樂拉去打歪 我做过的最难map的歌 没有之一

Mystica wrote:

[Insane]

[list]
00:26:737 (2): 对称一下 这两个是不同slider啊OTL
这个我指的是②本身对称一下

loveFantasy wrote:

[Easy]
<01:29:520> (4) nazi-able spacing Fixed

LuPiiTa wrote:

Easy
00:23:335 (1) - You can make that slider more delicious ...
00:32:613 (3) - One grid down
00:48:077 (1) - Align with (3)

kokoroanime wrote:

On Easy.

00:25:190 (2): Move this and place it on x:256 y:232 grid. Spacing...
00:28:283 until 00:38:489 (1, 2, 3, 1, 2, 3, 4, 1) Needs snapping/spacing... Because it's not snapped well yet...

Well... To be honest, all the notes and sliders are not snapped well yet... It's my opinion.

LuPiiTa wrote:

Hi~
I have already given you the link of my beatmap in your queque so here is mod4mod

Some suggestions

Easy
00:23:335 (1) - You can make that slider more delicious
00:32:613 (3) - One grid down
00:48:077 (1) - Align with (3)

Normal
00:36:943 (1,2,3,4,1) - That doesnt looks good, make them more straight or if you want to form a curve with them 00:36:943 (1) 1 grid down, 00:37:871 (4) 1 grid down and 00:38:180 (1) 3 grids down and 1 right k.

01:03:695 (2) - Redo that slider please k.
01:17:767 (5) - You can make it better k.

Hard
01:07:716 (9) - new combo
01:09:726 (1) - delete new combo
01:10:654 (7) - new combo
01:44:520 (3) - 1 grid left
02:06:636 (3,4,5,6,7) - I dont like how it looks

Insane
00:57:974 (1) - Delete new combo k.
01:00:139 (8) - Add new combo nya
01:00:448 (1) - Delete new combo nya

kokoroanime wrote:

Hello.

--------------------------------

On Easy.

00:25:190 (2): Move this and place it on x:256 y:232 grid.
00:28:283 until 00:38:489 (1, 2, 3, 1, 2, 3, 4, 1) Needs snapping/spacing... Because it's not snapped well yet...

Well... To be honest, all the notes and sliders are not snapped well yet... It's my opinion.

On Normal.

Snapping looks better.

00:25:809 (3): Spacing/Snapping... nya
00:36:633 (Blank): That would be better if you add a new note. (Make that a new combo also...) nya
00:36:943 until 00:40:036: Honestly, it's now snapped well, I think.

On Hard.

01:02:613 until 01:03:231: You spaced this to far, needs snapping.
01:44:984: You forgot to add "Klai time"...

This must to be the same as what you did on Easy...

On Insane.

Nah... I'm good from this...

-------------------------------------

So kudosu me if I'm right.

Thank you, star for you, and good luck modding my map back.

Good beatmap and nice song! ★

Samah wrote:

mod4mod from queue.

[General]
Rather than only crediting guest difficulties in the submission notes, you should probably rename them too.
ie. [impossiblexu's Easy] and [tsuka's Hard]. Of course, leave your own diff names as they are. waiting for their respond.
Remove the audio from the background video file.

[Easy]
00:57:974 (1,2) - This overlapping looks a bit nasty. Maybe flip slider (1) horizontally?
01:17:767 (4,5) - This might look nice if you put a very slight gap between the sliders rather than having them touch.
01:46:840 (3) - Maybe move this down and right just a bit to even the spacing with (2) and (4).

[Normal]
01:02:922 (1,2) - (2) is far too close to (1) here. This is a legit spacing mod, not grid nazi. k.

[Hard]
00:40:345 - Why is this a BPM multiplier change?
01:02:613 (1,2) - Stacked with a different number of repeats is never a good idea.
01:05:242 - From here on, the spacing doesn't match the increased slider speed (x1.50), making the map hard to play.
01:05:396 (3,4,5) - You could probably shuffle these over a bit to make a nicer pentagon shape.
01:16:376 (4,5,6) - Your spacing is really starting to break down here. These are far too close together for distance spacing 1.0x (which is what you've been using up until this point).
01:49:623 (1,2,3,4,5) - This shape could be neater.
02:03:850 (5) - This slider doesn't fit the music at all.

[Insane]
The distance spacing changes throughout the whole map, and doesn't fit the slider speed. Distance spacing of 1.8x is ewww.... Well distance changes seems not a big problem.Just a style
00:36:324 (1,2,1,2) - Spacing is whack here. nya
01:12:355 (3,4) - (4) is too far from (3). nya
01:52:871 (2,3) - Too far apart. k.
01:54:726 (5) - This doesn't match the vocals. Delete maybe? k.
02:15:912 (1,2,3,4,5) - Make this match the music?

Very nice maps overall, star.

Sallad4ever wrote:

hi kiva
I like the song so I might as well mod it :3

SPOILER

[General]
- silencing sliderslide and slidertick is unrankable so you should remove them from the folder
- I agree that you probably should add the creator's name on the diff so it'll be easy to recognize
- rather then using a blank sound for spinnerspin, I suggest to use timing section with very low volume on the spinner. This because the spinner bonus is still very audible (the obvious one is in the last spinner) and whether this is intentional or not it still sounds bad. If you don't mind doing another full submission, then add a blank spinnerbonus too

[Easy]
increase the volume in kiai time to 75% or 80%, as of now it still to low compare to the volume of the song
00:38:180 (1) - add finish at the beginning
01:30:139 (1) - finish this too?

[Normal]
00:25:809 (3) - please use 1x spacing here
00:26:737 (4,5) - ctrl + r these notes, it's better to follow the saxophone here
00:36:943 (1) - kinda too far even for normal, I suggest using 1x spacing, if you insist using jump please use around 1,2 or 1,4
00:47:767 (6) - hmm maybe remove this? cause if your following the vocal, this note is unnecessary
01:04:623 (1) - it'll be easier too read if you change these into circles
01:18:850 (2,3) - ctrl + r this too?
02:07:252 (1) - use finish like on the guest diffs

[Hard]
the spacing in the beginning is too inconsistent, even if you can still hit it by listening to the song, honestly it doesn't play and flow very good. Use the same spacing for them please
01:02:613 (1) - uhhh what is the point of this 1/8 repeating slider? this doesn't make sense at all
01:37:561 (5) - this is overlap with 01:36:633 (3) can you move it somewhere else?

[Insane]
AR 8 doesn't not fit the song, use 6 or 7 instead
hmm the spacing is kinda too far for me too, try use 1.3x for the basic distance spacing
01:35:087 (1) - I suggest to follow the vocal and move 01:35:242 (2,3) here

Good Luck getting it ranked
Star

wcx19911123 wrote:

HI
我突然想起来为啥我没mod了，因为当时似乎没发现任何问题。。。
不过这次就仔细点好了

SPOILER

[General]
osb文件似乎没用到吧 0.0

[Easy]
00:30:757 (2,3) - 这种slider包围circle的最好弄好看点 0.0
00:33:231 (1,2) - ^ 这个似乎更明显了
01:09:726 (5) - 这个不如直接弄直。。
01:21:479 (3,4) - 这个包围的感觉就挺好看 0.0
01:45:603 (2,3) - 包围
01:54:881 (1) - 感觉这个slider最好对准上一个slider的末尾成一条直线感觉好看点
01:57:974 (4,5) - 包围
02:02:922 (3) - 弄直？

[Normal]
00:23:335 (1,2,3,4) - 喂喂这spacing很奇怪啊
00:36:015 (4) - 像这个circle，我觉得跟着上一个slider的弧度会好看点，就是说往左点。。
00:40:345 (1) - 停在00:43:128
00:57:974 (1) - 直slider感觉有点违和
01:04:469 (3) - 这个感觉delete掉比较好，这只是normal啊
01:18:695 (1,2,3) - 0.0
01:24:572 (3) - 少一个折返吧。。。
01:33:850 (5,6,7,8,1) - 0.0
01:44:984 - 感觉这里不要全部直接用N音效，normal-hitnormal最好可以当做soft的custom音效然后再需要的地方下就可以了，毕竟Normal而已
然后我有点好奇，为啥你normal不随着歌曲高低改变DS？跟着easy的时间点用1.1x和1.2x感觉不错
01:46:221 (3) - 在01:46:066开始？
02:06:788 - 加个circle？

[Hard]
circle size = 4 please
感觉ds和sv有点不搭
00:40:036 (8) - 对准上一个slider的弧度
01:00:139 (5,1,2,3,4) - 弄点弧度
01:07:252 (8) - 挪到01:07:407
01:11:582 (6) - 从01:11:427开始
01:12:200 (7,8) - 合成一个slider
01:17:613 - 本来这里的5和6的spacing就有问题，不过加个circle在6的开头就好一点
01:21:479 (6) - 弄到01:21:324
01:25:809 (2) - 对齐上一个slider不觉得好看点么
01:39:417 (1) - 挪到01:39:572，然后加个circle在01:39:881
最好还是根据歌曲改变下DS
然后可以适当加一切跳，不然有点无聊。。

[Insane]
哭了 insane的circle size比hard还大。。。
这个难度的DS和SV也不搭
00:34:005 (1,2,3,4) - 这里就别管DS了，给我摆好看点
00:40:345 (1) - 还是搞个spinner吧。。。记得结束在00:43:128
00:44:829 (1) - 这里也是，都insane了就不要纠结DS了，不要挨着00:44:211 (4)，多不好看
00:49:932 - 加个circle，位置同00:49:159 (2)
00:50:087 (1,2) - 然后这里就ctrl+r
00:52:716 (5,1) - 这种跳hard也可以来一点点，不过不要太跳就是了
00:55:345 - 加个circle
01:17:767 (1) - 你觉得这个好看么。。。orz
01:24:572 (1,2,3,4) - 这里spacing不用这么小，反正是insane了，大概0.7x就够了
01:35:087 (1,2,3) - 这里最好跟随vocal，不用强求对称
同样的可以改变根据调子改变DS
恩，加长版的insane呢 0.0

在下只是个渣mapper，所以估计帮不到你很多
图挺不错的 0.0

有空的话请帮我看看我那渣图 ： http://osu.ppy.sh/s/28561

NatsumeRin wrote:

[General]
是Kara no Shoujo吧…
按我的印象不允许sliderslider和slidertick都消音了，你保重

[Easy]
fine.

[Normal]
00:24:572 (2,3) - spacing?
00:36:633 - 加音去应一下钢琴？或者简单把下个1拖前1/2？
01:33:850 (5,6,7,8,1) - 虽然bpm不高但你确定normal用1/4 circle吗

[Hard]
HP-1好吗前面那么松掉血就掉死了
可以的话圈也大一号
01:53:953 (1) - 晚1/4开始

[Insane]
间距弄这么大有必要么，我认为这属于故意和歌对着干，没任何意义。
01:03:850 (2) - whistle
01:24:572 (1) - 声太大了

Lesjuh wrote:

There is either a SB file missing or the .osb should be deleted if you don't intend to use a SB in this map. Check that out.

Hard
Add kiai time at the same place as [Insane].

That's it!

Lesjuh wrote:

bubbled!

abalee wrote:

Insane:
Kiai Time的timing section個人認為音量太大了，調到50%較好.

Hard:
Slider tick rate 0.5的話可以少幾個顯得比較不協調的tick音效.

Normal:
上面兩條建議合起來...

Easy:
同 Hard.

jericho2442 wrote:

i agree with what abalee said so fix that obv ;p

also srry gotta pop due to some broken spacing

Normal

01:02:922 (1,2,3,1) - i was not keen on how hard this part is to read for just a Normal diff, maybe make it abit more simple?

Hard
01:16:376 (4,5,6) - Broken spacing, (5,6) need more space due to having an larger timing, this dont feel like an anti and feels purely like a mistake :/
01:44:365 (2,3,4) - make these atleast overlap a little bit, so the 1/4 timing is easier to read, its too close to your 1/2 spacing atm and plays bad due to it

Insane
00:39:417 (3) - due to the notes before it this note is left very blind and hard to notice, i advise to move it somewhere more visible tbh
01:07:871 (2,3) - this jump didnt really work good, i advise to give it normal spacing
01:49:159 (2,3) - again feels muuuch better without this jump, give normal spacing and its great

------------------------------
fix "atleast" the red criteria before you go to get a bubble back on this please

HakuNoKaemi wrote:

[Easy]
00:23:335 (1,2) - do this to follow music better ?
00:30:757 (2) - do this
00:43:128 (1) - Make it end in 00:44:056 ?

[Normal]
Make spacing sharper with grid 4 ( short spacing need higher grids )
00:24:572 (2,3) - Spacing, You can move it like this
01:33:850 (5,6) - the Spacing of this is 0,58x... make it nearer to 0.5x ? (you could use a grid 4 for sharper spacing)
01:52:097 (6) - (to make it more even, jus' nazi, it's with grid 4) 2 grid down and 1 left

[Hard]
00:35:087 (3) - Stack with (2) like how (2) is stacked with (1) ?
00:36:015 (x) - Add a notes stacked at the end of (3)

Starred :3

HakuNoKaemi wrote:

Well, you didn't follow anything at all of my mod... and is the second time i do not feel i gained the kudosu .-.
At least follow 00:24:572 (2,3) - in the Normal ( it make graphic better plus it correct a spacing error ) and 00:36:015 (x) in the Hard because i'm sure many do expect something here ...

Sakura Hana wrote:

[General]
Make all your diffs consistent please. ur....I prefer [Insane] to complete finished..other not...because the Saxophone's part may a little hard to make for easy diff?
02:09:726 - This spinner is silenced on Insane and Normal, but it's not on Hard and Easy... what we all have different think...that's a collab beatmap ...Well I fix some parts

[Insane]
00:40:345 (1) - Dont combine 1/2 speed and wiggle slider! this makes the slider extremely slow and is breaking the slider speed limit. use 1.0 instead.
01:01:376 (3) - Due to the light video i cant even see this sliderbody, specially because a hitbursts is blocking the first part of the sliderbody. yeah..change a new colour
01:17:767 (1) - Unrankable! Slider path cannot be seen correctly http://puu.sh/3wpr (with mmsliders: http://puu.sh/3wvq ) yeah...instead with another slider
02:28:902 - Move this timing section later so spinner bonus cant be heard at all. did it..


[Hard]
I seriously recommend you remap the beginning, it doesnt fit a hard at all, that's even easier than an Easy and has too much draining for no reason. I think he is just following the piano?.
01:50:860 (5) - [Nazi] 1 grid left to make a better pentagon. k

[Normal]
00:47:767 (6) - The "ku" sound comes earlier than the note, i'd recommend using a slider between 5 and 6 so 6 isnt getting hit early. ok..I use slider instead.
01:33:850 (5,6,7,8) - a 1/4 stream on a Normal? fixed it

Faust wrote:

Hi Mystica. I do hope you don't feel like I am intruding but since it's related I'd like to write this down here instead of a PM

I'll propose a collaboration for the full version of Ruri no Tori. I had planned to map this sometime in the future but seeing your map spurred me to hasten it.

That is, if you feel like making rhythms for the song again.

SamiPale wrote:

[hard]
卡爷摇身一变成为夏威夷风光美少女，还是异瞳的

[insane]
00:33:231 - (3)(1)(2)同一种颜色比较好?
01:02:922 - 减点音量
01:22:407 - remove nc?不re也行

这样骗行不？

Mystica wrote:

Faust wrote:

Hi Mystica. I do hope you don't feel like I am intruding but since it's related I'd like to write this down here instead of a PM

I'll propose a collaboration for the full version of Ruri no Tori. I had planned to map this sometime in the future but seeing your map spurred me to hasten it.

That is, if you feel like making rhythms for the song again.

Well...That's right....If you begin to do this project,Just call me .I will try my best to help you,All for the love >w<