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00:02:974 - pretty sure theres a synth here the same tone as 00:02:824 - i hear nothing
00:08:374 - SVs dont seem to sync up with the beats here my bad hehe. removed anyway
00:17:524 (17524|3,17574|0,17624|3,17674|0) - right now these notes play like jacks and i dont think that reflects the piano well - you can do a [34]23[14] here if you want on 1/6s. applies to similar sections alright. trying to ignore PR, rearranged
00:20:224 (20224|0,20299|1) - maybe invert these - mini LNs are really hard to handle so better to simplify them imma keep them:>
00:21:424 (21424|1,21424|0) - are you sure this warrants a double yes. it's kick
00:21:724 (21724|2,21724|0,21799|1,21799|3,21874|2,21874|0) - would be better if you could have a less awkward pattern here - something like [12][34] or [14][23] keep. uncommon patterns are the best *slapped
00:24:724 - not sure if it bares to ignore the drum beats here by overwhelming the player with LNs but your call hehe
00:26:224 (26224|0) - why force a shield for this LN? what if it doesn't use shield? i can't make two doubles afterward 00:26:224 (26224|0,26224|3,26449|3,26449|2,26524|0,26524|1) -
00:27:724 (27724|1,27774|0,27874|1) - this bunch isnt as smooth as 00:18:124 - whatever you did here so id suggest having a variant of what you did at the 18 second mark here ikr. let's see what i can
00:30:124 (30124|1) - dont think theres a noticeable sound here hihat
00:33:124 (33124|1,33124|3,33199|2,33199|0,33274|3,33274|1) - again, dont really recommend split oh jumptrills keep
00:33:199 - also i dont think this beat really warrants a double too those are kick
00:35:824 (35824|0,36124|0) - same columns? moved
00:37:024 (37024|1) - a fallback of these minilns is how you tend to miss out on the pitch changes - this one is the most obvious one, pitch changes pretty clearly at 00:37:324 - yes. i noticed. but i really confused how to layer those instruments; synth and the jarring one 00:37:474 (37474|2,37924|2) - thanks. noted
00:38:374 - a light hihat here - which i guess is what youre following for these 00:37:774 (37774|0,38524|2) - notes it's covered with previous instrument which is not hearable enough, imo
00:39:574 (39574|2,39574|3,39674|1,39674|2,39774|0,39774|1,39874|0) - dont think jacks represent the csk csk sound well - if anything you should be using LNs for this part i don't think so. it'll easier if i use LN, probably. and it's not csk csk imo, it's wub wub lmao
00:41:074 (41074|3) - not sure what this miniln is following since 00:40:324 (40324|0,40474|3) - other sections seem to show something else yes, it's show something else as well
00:46:774 - you werent consistent with the jacks though - see 00:39:574 - if i use ctrl + h it'll make no variant
just noticed you have SVs for these sections -are you certain you want to do that since there are on different snappings those are on same snappings based on my opinion, let's see what others says. thanks
00:52:624 (52624|0,52624|1,52699|2,52699|3,52774|1,52774|0,52849|2,52849|3) - the drum beat doesnt only gets prominent only past 00:52:924 - so its odd how you chose to represent 00:52:774 - beats like these with the same intensity as 00:53:149 - beats like these really nice catch. rearranged
00:53:524 (53524|3,53524|2,53524|0,53524|1,53974|3,53974|0,53974|2,53974|1) - maybe make the gap a little wider keep. intended to make shield more tightly to make intense effect idk how to say ugh (2)
00:55:474 (55474|3,55624|3,55774|3) - i kinda see a format/structure you were trying to do here but comparing it to other sections like 00:56:299 - the effect seems to be lost on me - another nice catch, rearranged
00:58:924 (58924|1,58924|0,58999|1,58999|2,59074|2,59074|3) - really really dont recommend breaking the flow of the piano streams here with jacks keep
01:01:624 (61624|1,61849|2) - would recommend to delete these notes to put further focus on the piano here - which in this case is the jacks okay
01:07:174 (67174|0,67249|1,67324|0,67474|1,67549|0,67624|1) - these arent really tasteful to play rearranged
01:13:074 (73074|3,73174|3) - dont sacrifice playbility just to have a hand here - jack is jarring to hit after all those jumptrills and 1/6s i'll apply this on exh. thanks
01:17:224 - to 01:17:674 - why ignore the piano sounds here focusing on synth
01:22:474 (82474|2,82549|1,82624|2,82699|1) - 1/8s here though aight
01:22:699 (82699|1,82774|0,82849|1,82999|0,83074|1,83149|0,83299|1,83374|0,83449|1,83524|0) - 01:25:399 (85399|3,85474|2,85549|3,85699|2,85774|3,85849|2,85924|3) - dont see why you couldnt make similar patterns but on both hands here for variety(?)
01:24:724 (84724|2,84724|3,84874|2,84874|3) - better to use different columns - they have different pitches and also theres 01:24:574 (84574|2,84724|2,84874|2,85024|2,85174|2) rearranged
01:26:174 (86174|1,86224|0,86274|3,86474|0,86524|3,86574|1) - i didnt even know these were 1/6s in the editor until i gave it a closer look - why spread these out so much until their snaps are unrecognizable? changed the whole section
01:27:274 - why didnt you use a jumptrill here then rearranged based your previous mod
01:31:624 (91624|2,91774|2,91924|2,92074|2,92224|2,92374|2,92524|2,92674|2,92824|2,92974|2,93124|2,93274|2,93387|2,93537|2) - not sure if you noticed this puppy uwu. rearranged anyway
01:32:974 (92974|3,92974|2,93049|1,93049|0,93124|3,93124|2,93199|0,93199|1,93274|2,93274|3,93349|1,93349|0) - dont get why youre suddenly resorting to doubles for piano sounds here those are kick
01:33:349 (93349|0,93462|0,93574|0) - jumptrill does not accommodate for this keep
01:29:824 (89824|0) - not sure why you want to limit yorself to 3k here even when the music is a drum bass boom thing that should follow with chord spams uncommon patterns are the best *slapper (2)
01:34:474 - why did you ignore the pitch shift here there is no pitch shift, just like intro
01:36:349 - suddenly an LN wall? LNs are pretty restrictive in their nature and you chose to have a [13][24] thing 01:36:724 (96724|2,96724|0,96874|1,96874|3,97024|2,97024|0) - here which is pretty ehh i'm not going to give players rest time on this part
01:44:524 - 01:44:599 - how about these beats? focusing on wub wub
01:48:724 (108724|2,108724|1,108774|0,108774|3,108824|2,108824|1) - these are far from comfortable there is no jacking like you've said before, i think it's fine - also why the sudden change in layering representation? little difficulty spike at the end hehe
01:56:674 (116674|1,116674|2,117799|1,117874|2) - this is the kind of LN play i can get behind oops