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  [General]

1. Song Setup & Metadata
   Song setup is fine and also metadata is fine too http://manbow.nothing.sh/dee_news/exlast/course.html
2. Audio & Hitsounds
   192kbps audio is good, but you have tons of delayed keysound :
   "dr_008rsin.wav" & " dr_suzu and also mostly on "pipe" names are you sure for that ?
   also you have unused hitsound "va_r_007.wav" and "va_l_007.wav" because i didn't get that keysound name in your .osu files (all diffs)
   some extra problem (i also fix some for you)
   - "dr_007crap" seems unbalanced L/R volume ==> http://puu.sh/qisoT/d5fb36b033.wav
   - "dr_003" & "dr_004" under 100ms ==> idk how to fix ._.
   - "dr_suzu_s" unbalanced L/R volume ==> http://puu.sh/qisFZ/20f8c57a7f.wav
   - "zen_001" really big difference L/R ==> http://puu.sh/qisUE/ea0b8fd447.wav
3. BPM & Timing
   all fine
4. Background
   1366x768 background (16:9) screen, fine
   
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   [NM]
5. 00:30:869 - i would like suggest you to follow those background instrument sound (with 1/2 snap) since they're more audible as sound and also it's better than put a single LN only without reason here . . . example http://puu.sh/qirvx/5737dfe14f.jpg
6. 00:49:999 - 00:51:739 - 00:53:478 - 00:56:956 - 00:58:695 - you better to change that section with a 1/1 beat LN each for exchange/expressing those 1/4 melody here . . . since you've too much using nonstop 1/2 notes in this time, i think it need some variant mapping style to avoid boring
7. 01:14:347 - add a note here for expressing the big impact sound here, same as you did on other parts too 01:17:826 - 01:21:304 - etc
8. 01:52:173 (112173|2,112173|0,112608|1,112608|3) - LN would be more fit to expressing hose 1/4 sound here
   
   [HD]
9. 00:26:304 - maybe add a note would be make this part more easier to read, because it's almost contains same instrument phase like 00:24:565 -
10. 00:53:260 (53260|3) - move to second column, that's more easier to plays and not give any heavy pressure because it have different column with this 00:53:478 (53478|3) -
11. 01:03:043 - delete a note on here . . . because there is not having any same impact like on this part 01:02:608 - use 2 notes only for following piano instrument is more important
12. 01:39:130 - start on this timing . . . i don't really recommended to use nonstop 1/4 mapping style here, but it's up to you then
    
    [MX]
13. 00:43:586 (43586|0,43695|1) - swap those column, i feel it's really really heavy to press mini jack after pressing double notes + short LN this time
14. 00:43:913 (43913|2,44021|2) - same here, i didn't hear any possibility instrument sound to be given a mini jack this time . . . not like on this case 00:45:217 (45217|3,45326|3) - that actually fine to be given a mini jack
15. 00:46:956 (46956|1,47065|1) - drag 1 column to the right side, reduce some heavy pressure in your left hand 00:46:956 (46956|0,47173|0) - because you left hand pressing this too . . . or you can try this instead http://puu.sh/qitqn/766da81be2.jpg
16. 01:11:956 (71956|0,72065|0,72173|0) - you can see that this time is have a different sound, 2 notes in same column is already maximum here . . . my suggestion http://puu.sh/qitvb/b1a2f689e4.jpg
17. 01:17:391 - 01:19:130 - 01:24:347 - 01:26:086 - 01:27:827 - 01:31:304 - 01:33:043 - well, i must say this . . . same issue like above ^

[ A v a l o n ] wrote:

oh this already bubbled lol
i don't know this map bubbled already ._.
okay then

Qualify Check

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• 
  [General]

1. Song Setup & Metadata
   Song setup is fine and also metadata is fine too http://manbow.nothing.sh/dee_news/exlast/course.html
2. Audio & Hitsounds
   192kbps audio is good, but you have tons of delayed keysound :
   "dr_008rsin.wav" & " dr_suzu and also mostly on "pipe" names are you sure for that ?
   also you have unused hitsound "va_r_007.wav" and "va_l_007.wav" because i didn't get that keysound name in your .osu files (all diffs)
   some extra problem (i also fix some for you)
   - "dr_007crap" seems unbalanced L/R volume ==> http://puu.sh/qisoT/d5fb36b033.wav
   - "dr_003" & "dr_004" under 100ms ==> idk how to fix ._.
   - "dr_suzu_s" unbalanced L/R volume ==> http://puu.sh/qisFZ/20f8c57a7f.wav
   - "zen_001" really big difference L/R ==> http://puu.sh/qisUE/ea0b8fd447.wav
3. BPM & Timing
   all fine
4. Background
   1366x768 background (16:9) screen, fine
   
   all fixed. those 5ms delay are not really 5ms delay, the sounds started before in 5ms exactly. also those sounds which shorter than 100ms were extended to more then 100ms.
   
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   [NM]
5. 00:30:869 - i would like suggest you to follow those background instrument sound (with 1/2 snap) since they're more audible as sound and also it's better than put a single LN only without reason here . . . example http://puu.sh/qirvx/5737dfe14f.jpg i think this part is quiet soft so i just want to use ln to fill there
6. 00:49:999 - 00:51:739 - 00:53:478 - 00:56:956 - 00:58:695 - you better to change that section with a 1/1 beat LN each for exchange/expressing those 1/4 melody here . . . since you've too much using nonstop 1/2 notes in this time, i think it need some variant mapping style to avoid boring emm i think it's fine is the lowest diff o.o
7. 01:14:347 - add a note here for expressing the big impact sound here, same as you did on other parts too 01:17:826 - 01:21:304 - etc added
8. 01:52:173 (112173|2,112173|0,112608|1,112608|3) - LN would be more fit to expressing hose 1/4 sound here okey
   
   [HD]
9. 00:26:304 - maybe add a note would be make this part more easier to read, because it's almost contains same instrument phase like 00:24:565 - i just followed the melody so i want to keep there empty
10. 00:53:260 (53260|3) - move to second column, that's more easier to plays and not give any heavy pressure because it have different column with this 00:53:478 (53478|3) - moved
11. 01:03:043 - delete a note on here . . . because there is not having any same impact like on this part 01:02:608 - use 2 notes only for following piano instrument is more important yea, removed
12. 01:39:130 - start on this timing . . . i don't really recommended to use nonstop 1/4 mapping style here, but it's up to you then lol seems those 1/4 isn't too hard due to it's low bpm
    
    [MX]
13. 00:43:586 (43586|0,43695|1) - swap those column, i feel it's really really heavy to press mini jack after pressing double notes + short LN this time
14. 00:43:913 (43913|2,44021|2) - same here, i didn't hear any possibility instrument sound to be given a mini jack this time . . . not like on this case 00:45:217 (45217|3,45326|3) - that actually fine to be given a mini jack
15. 00:46:956 (46956|1,47065|1) - drag 1 column to the right side, reduce some heavy pressure in your left hand 00:46:956 (46956|0,47173|0) - because you left hand pressing this too . . . or you can try this instead http://puu.sh/qitqn/766da81be2.jpg
16. 01:11:956 (71956|0,72065|0,72173|0) - you can see that this time is have a different sound, 2 notes in same column is already maximum here . . . my suggestion http://puu.sh/qitvb/b1a2f689e4.jpg
17. 01:17:391 - 01:19:130 - 01:24:347 - 01:26:086 - 01:27:827 - 01:31:304 - 01:33:043 - well, i must say this . . . same issue like above ^
    all fixed

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Feerum wrote:

Hello ZZHBOY.

Grats to Qualify!

I did take a look into your Mapset and it looks pretty cool but i think we have here an unrankable issue which needs to get fixed.
I found some keysounds which have a delay at the beginn which is longer than the allowed 5ms.

As the RC says:

Hitsounds must have an acceptable range of delay under 5ms. Every hitsound file should start in time, preferrably at 0ms. This is to ensure that every map doesn't sound mistimed, and therefore could provide acceptably synchronized rhythm feedback to players.

I did pick randomly one hitsound and saw this here:


So here is the list of all keysounds where i think they are against the RC:

All are posted without Screenshot, otherwise this post would get pretty long

bass_05
bass_06
bass_07
bass_08
bass_09
bass_10
bass_11

Beside of these i saw the "pipe" keysounds.
Most of them look like this:


I am not actually sure if this already count's as delay and would like to hear an second opinion. When i mark this section in Audacity and press play there is absolute nothing to hear, please re-check these too.

All other are fine, have no delay and are above 100ms

lol as your image shows that those 5ms delay are not really 5ms delay, they have a fade-in effect and fit the song well, if remove the beginning part of them will caused wrong offset during playing :3

Alright, that's all for hitsounds.
Some additonal things:

[HD]
01:14:782 (74782|3) - I saw this LN here. It has the same keysound like in the MX difficult so i think you follow with the LN the same sound, but it has a different length to the MX, i would recommend to make it same length.

Screen

I think the LN in the MX is 1/2 Beat too long, according to how all other LN's are mapped with a "vasl_" keysound. I think 1/1 beat ln fit this diff more, also other place haven't follow the vas sound fully, it's unnecessary imo

Also for all difficulty's:
Please enable this point in the Song Setup -> Audio


This is especially for full hitsounded/keysounded Beatmaps. If you enable this, all keysounds will have the same playback rate like the Map is played.

This function is really weird, the main aim of that is change sound's length to fit the song when player playing with dt or ht, but it changed the pitch at the same time, i think it almost destroy the song lol, so I don't think it's worth to check this function

Oki that's all from my side!
Let me know what you think about my points listed above.

Feerum wrote:

i don't really sure this included in delay issues or not, since it's actually have little clear wave on that