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This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on den 11 juni 2016 at 17:40:12

Artist: TrySail
Title: Cobalt TV SIZE
Source: Classroom☆Crisis
Tags: Classroom crisis anime jpop クラスルーム☆クライシス
BPM: 170
Filesize: 4432kb
Play Time: 01:27
Difficulties Available:
  1. Easy (1,7 stars, 94 notes)
  2. Hard (3,64 stars, 251 notes)
  3. Insane (4,72 stars, 347 notes)


Download: TrySail - Cobalt TV SIZE
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From #modreqs

In General
You have the rhythm, but you tend to over-map, and you forget to use the beat-snap. Over-map generally leads to low-quality maps, so try to map as closely to the song as possible. Plus although difficult to work around at first, the beat-snap divisor allows you to follow the rhythm of the song, while other players can as well. Plus it increase the quality of the map. Only turn it off when you want to exaggerate a part, or the other way around: to UNDER exaggerate. Of course only exaggerate / under-exaggerate when the song does. You'll know when it does. 90% of the time keep that on, and keep it relevant to the difficulty you plan to map as well.


Insane
00:01:442 (4) - Delete
00:01:266 (3) - Move this note to 00:01:442 -
00:06:913 (4) - Replace this slider with a circle
00:07:266 (1,2) - Delete these 2 notes, and place a slider where the first one was. This prepares the player for the stream.
00:09:119 (3) - Delete this note
00:13:795 (8) - Delete the slider, Place 2 circles on each end. (With beat-snap on)
00:39:383 (9) - Delete, replace with circle.
00:44:942 (4) - Delete
00:45:825 - Place a note here. It will re-create that triplet I noted above.
00:57:119 - A circle can be placed here
01:06:295 (2) - Delete
01:13:266 (1) - Delete, replace with circle
01:22:001 (6) - Delete
01:27:736 (5) - Extend to here 01:28:266 -



That's all I have to say for now, good luck in your mapping journey!
posted
They seem like solid fixes, will change, thanks! Also, you mean distance snap not beat snap divisor :P
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Hello! My end of the M4M
My mods usually consider the beauty of the map, so no hitsounding, meta-data or beatplacement mod >.<

You have a lot of overlaps which doesnt look very pretty imo. Best example is 00:00:384 (1,3) - in insane diff at the very beginning. This kind of overlap looks pretty random, there's like not structure or more like no reason to put note 3 somewhere in the slider 1.
00:02:678 (2) - i dont know many things of hitsounding but you shouldnt do a whistle on the whole slider. mark the first (or the second as u want) circle of the slider and put a whistle there, same for 00:03:560 (4) - 00:16:619 (1,2,3) - and so on, i think you know what i mean (it sounds better that way imo)
00:04:089 (5,1) - another example of a random overlap, it just makes your map untidy (btw, imo slider 1 looks very boring to me, consider a stream or more sliders maybe)
00:17:678 (1,2,3) - ^
00:24:736 (4,1,2) - ^ (use blankets more often for better look)
00:30:031 (5,7) - ^ (i think you get it now, try to fix all of them, here my last example :D 00:32:148 (5,2) - )
00:07:266 (1,2) - this is awkward to read and the following stream doesnt look very innovative, more like straight. I have an example for you how i would map this (and do NC's on streams aswell) You dont have to change if you dont want to, its just my style of modding, like "make things prettier imo" o.O
00:08:678 (1,2,3) - this is a good example for a "flow thing", making it like feels way better imo. Try to look for opportunites making flow, flow is a great thing in mapping! :D
00:14:501 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - make your patterns look cleaner, stack objects and get structure
00:46:442 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - i like how you emphasize the vocal there, keep that through the map, thats your style (in the beggining you did that also)


The advices i gave you in Insane diff fits with the Hard diff too. As your first mod said, keep (especially on easier diffs) a consistent DSing. Use blankets and stack objects to create structure. Some hitsounds arent proper i think, but i cant tell you how to do it right..... :(
Create flow please!!!

Well.... my mod sounds very random tbh (i'm not satisfied with it) but I still hope its useful for you. If you have any questions about some points, feel free to message me.
GL with your map and happy mapping! (:
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Thanks very much man. When i made som of those overlaps i probably got a bit fancy which is weird because i dont actually, like you, enjoy playing maps with overlaps everywhere. Will change them. Totally agree with what you said about the opening stream, i havent been able to get it right. Will try your suggestion. Also yes lmao i suck at hitsounding.

Thank you and good luck to you aswell! :D
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Hey~ form my modq

[General]
your map diffs setting are not good, consider change Easy to Normal and add a EZ diff under 1.5 stars maybe
fot nm and ez diff, you should check DS all the time! don't change it occasionally

[Easy]
00:00:472 - adjust the green line
00:00:384 (1,2) - for nm or ez, ds 2.28 is the nightmare of newbie, fix it~
00:00:913 (2,3) - then ds 0.28? huge change of ds for nm or ez is not good idea
00:03:207 (1,2,3,4) - keep same ds
00:07:266 (5,1) - blanket
00:08:678 (1,2) - 00:09:736 (3,1) - keep same ds
00:12:913 (4,5) - why there ds is 1.0? 00:10:972 (3,4,1,2,3) - ds 1.5? watch out ds and make them be same
00:13:442 (1) - change color
00:14:501 (2) - NC
00:21:560 (4,5) - blanket
00:21:913 (5,6) - ds 3.7.... fix it
00:36:383 (1,2) - these overlap is terrible
00:39:736 (6) - NC
00:40:619 (7,8) - blanket
00:42:031 (2,3) - ds 1.85?
00:43:972 (4,5,6) - from here, your ds keep as 1.1 but before it, you keep ds 1.3? make it same!
00:45:560 (1,2) - ds 2.0 is not good
00:49:089 (1,2,3) - different rhythm but same ds is bad
00:51:031 (4,5) - and 00:52:442 (6,7) - check ds
00:56:854 (3,4) - ds 0.68? is great different from 00:54:736 (1,2,3) - cuz there is 1.2 and why begin this position, ds keep as 1.2?
01:08:854 (6,1) - ds is not same with 01:07:089 (1,2,3,4,5) -
01:13:619 (5) - NC
01:13:972 (6,7,1) - DS
01:15:913 (3,4,5) - different rhythm but same ds is bad
01:23:325 (4,5) - make them closer
01:24:207 (6,7,8) - check ds between 7 and 8
01:27:383 (4,5) - why different ds with 01:26:325 (1,2,3,4) - ? If I play it, I'll think it'll be fast rhythm then I'll click ahead of time them miss it

[Hard]
00:03:736 (6,7) - increase the ds cuz it a little close
00:07:619 (2) - move end point of slide to x:252 y:228 make 00:07:266 (1,2,3,4) - like central symmetric figure
00:08:678 (1,2) - blanket it better
00:25:089 (1,2) - nice jump
00:28:619 (5,1) - too close
00:43:266 (3,4) - blanket it better
00:45:560 (5,1) - 00:46:795 (3,1) - 00:47:501 (3,1) - too close
00:57:736 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - ^
00:57:736 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - has another problem, 00:46:442 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - use NC why there not?
01:09:913 (1,2) - and 01:10:442 (3,4) - make them same ds
01:11:210 - ??? add something?
01:16:442 (5,1) - too close,
01:17:325 (1,2,3) - ds

[Insane]
00:22:442 (7,1) - ds
00:47:148 (4,7) - NC? or player will not fine there has some rhythm change

some DS problems you should check and good luck
posted
Like requested here is a mod for easy and hard! Hope you find it useful.

Easy
DISCLAIMER: Some things I say here pretty much will sound like nagging, I'm sorry in advance but I'm only trying to help :P
People that play on easy are most of the time beginners. Anything misleading is kind of bad. I understand that you find it very hard not to but you should probably let distance snap do everything.
00:01:442 (3) Too close to 2.
00:12:913 (4) Make this a slider to 00:13:266 (and of course remove 5 when you do). Don't forget to distance the slider after accordingly.
00:13:442 (1) Make this part of previous combo and start a new combo at 00:14:501
00:37:442 (2) Should not be placed under the slider before that. I suggest x:168 y:304
00:52:442 (6) This slider should be as long as 4 (00:51:031). Also it should have a follow up slider like 5 is to 4 but on 00:53:325.
00:57:736 (4) Is too close to the end of 3. I suggest x:228 y:56
01:12:383 (4) Should start at 01:12:207 and last till 01:12:736
01:13:089 Since 4 isn't here anymore you place a slider between here and 01:13:266
01:13:972 (7) Should be a slider to 01:14:148
01:14:325 (8) Should be a slider and start at 01:14:501 to 01:14:678
01:14:854 (1) Should start at 01:15:031 Also (2) should be under the end of slider 1 if this change is applied
01:16:442 (5) The start should be placed directly under 4.
01:23:501 (5) ^
01:27:736 (5) Pretty much the opposite of above. Should be a little further away from 4. Let distance snap do the work.

Hard
00:34:619 - 00:35:325 (1,2,3,4,5) Distance between each note here should be the same. 1 and 2 clearly overlap while 4 and 5 don't.
00:36:031 Put this not not on the end of 1 but at the start of 3. Feels way more natural in the way you mapped the entire map.
00:54:736 I think this note is too hard. Put it at about x:240 y:296
00:59:854 (1,2) Too confusing for this difficulty. Either make the 1 part of previous combo or Change the setting of 1 and 2 (second option preferable).
01:08:501 - 01:09:383 (1,2,3,4,5,6) These are very hard placed and out of line (difficulty wise) to the rest of the beatmap. Also it is very hard that these are only hit circles and no sliders are involved. I suggest that you make 3 sliders here instead of 1,2,3,4,5,6.
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_Stan wrote:

Hey~ form my modq

[General]
your map diffs setting are not good, consider change Easy to Normal and add a EZ diff under 1.5 stars maybe
fot nm and ez diff, you should check DS all the time! don't change it occasionally

[Easy]
00:00:472 - adjust the green line
00:00:384 (1,2) - for nm or ez, ds 2.28 is the nightmare of newbie, fix it~
00:00:913 (2,3) - then ds 0.28? huge change of ds for nm or ez is not good idea
00:03:207 (1,2,3,4) - keep same ds
00:07:266 (5,1) - blanket
00:08:678 (1,2) - 00:09:736 (3,1) - keep same ds
00:12:913 (4,5) - why there ds is 1.0? 00:10:972 (3,4,1,2,3) - ds 1.5? watch out ds and make them be same
00:13:442 (1) - change color
00:14:501 (2) - NC
00:21:560 (4,5) - blanket
00:21:913 (5,6) - ds 3.7.... fix it
00:36:383 (1,2) - these overlap is terrible
00:39:736 (6) - NC
00:40:619 (7,8) - blanket
00:42:031 (2,3) - ds 1.85?
00:43:972 (4,5,6) - from here, your ds keep as 1.1 but before it, you keep ds 1.3? make it same!
00:45:560 (1,2) - ds 2.0 is not good
00:49:089 (1,2,3) - different rhythm but same ds is bad
00:51:031 (4,5) - and 00:52:442 (6,7) - check ds
00:56:854 (3,4) - ds 0.68? is great different from 00:54:736 (1,2,3) - cuz there is 1.2 and why begin this position, ds keep as 1.2?
01:08:854 (6,1) - ds is not same with 01:07:089 (1,2,3,4,5) -
01:13:619 (5) - NC
01:13:972 (6,7,1) - DS
01:15:913 (3,4,5) - different rhythm but same ds is bad
01:23:325 (4,5) - make them closer
01:24:207 (6,7,8) - check ds between 7 and 8
01:27:383 (4,5) - why different ds with 01:26:325 (1,2,3,4) - ? If I play it, I'll think it'll be fast rhythm then I'll click ahead of time them miss it
[Hard]
00:03:736 (6,7) - increase the ds cuz it a little close
00:07:619 (2) - move end point of slide to x:252 y:228 make 00:07:266 (1,2,3,4) - like central symmetric figure
00:08:678 (1,2) - blanket it better
00:25:089 (1,2) - nice jump
00:28:619 (5,1) - too close
00:43:266 (3,4) - blanket it better
00:45:560 (5,1) - 00:46:795 (3,1) - 00:47:501 (3,1) - too close
00:57:736 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - ^
00:57:736 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - has another problem, 00:46:442 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - use NC why there not?
01:09:913 (1,2) - and 01:10:442 (3,4) - make them same ds
01:11:210 - ??? add something?
01:16:442 (5,1) - too close,
01:17:325 (1,2,3) - ds
[Insane]
00:22:442 (7,1) - ds
00:47:148 (4,7) - NC? or player will not fine there has some rhythm change


some DS problems you should check and good luck
Thanks a lot, i really needed help with the lower diffs as you could tell. Will fix/have fixed pretty much everything you said.
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Morgar wrote:

Like requested here is a mod for easy and hard! Hope you find it useful.

Easy
DISCLAIMER: Some things I say here pretty much will sound like nagging, I'm sorry in advance but I'm only trying to help :P
People that play on easy are most of the time beginners. Anything misleading is kind of bad. I understand that you find it very hard not to but you should probably let distance snap do everything.
00:01:442 (3) Too close to 2.
00:12:913 (4) Make this a slider to 00:13:266 (and of course remove 5 when you do). Don't forget to distance the slider after accordingly.
00:13:442 (1) Make this part of previous combo and start a new combo at 00:14:501
00:37:442 (2) Should not be placed under the slider before that. I suggest x:168 y:304
00:52:442 (6) This slider should be as long as 4 (00:51:031). Also it should have a follow up slider like 5 is to 4 but on 00:53:325.
00:57:736 (4) Is too close to the end of 3. I suggest x:228 y:56
01:12:383 (4) Should start at 01:12:207 and last till 01:12:736
01:13:089 Since 4 isn't here anymore you place a slider between here and 01:13:266
01:13:972 (7) Should be a slider to 01:14:148
01:14:325 (8) Should be a slider and start at 01:14:501 to 01:14:678
01:14:854 (1) Should start at 01:15:031 Also (2) should be under the end of slider 1 if this change is applied
01:16:442 (5) The start should be placed directly under 4.
01:23:501 (5) ^
01:27:736 (5) Pretty much the opposite of above. Should be a little further away from 4. Let distance snap do the work.

Hard
00:34:619 - 00:35:325 (1,2,3,4,5) Distance between each note here should be the same. 1 and 2 clearly overlap while 4 and 5 don't.
00:36:031 Put this not not on the end of 1 but at the start of 3. Feels way more natural in the way you mapped the entire map.
00:54:736 I think this note is too hard. Put it at about x:240 y:296
00:59:854 (1,2) Too confusing for this difficulty. Either make the 1 part of previous combo or Change the setting of 1 and 2 (second option preferable).
01:08:501 - 01:09:383 (1,2,3,4,5,6) These are very hard placed and out of line (difficulty wise) to the rest of the beatmap. Also it is very hard that these are only hit circles and no sliders are involved. I suggest that you make 3 sliders here instead of 1,2,3,4,5,6.
Hey reddit guy! :3. Thanks a lot. I changed pretty much everything you said except the final thing on the hard diff. I kinda want them to be single notes because it is meant to be the most difficult part of the map but i decreased the distance of the jumps.
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In Easy and Normal, you must keep same Distance for all notes

And my tip, turn on Distance snap when you make a beatmap and try to make some shape in notes

your beat is good now, you just need more experience

GL

(No kds)
posted

UnLock- wrote:

In Easy and Normal, you must keep same Distance for all notes

And my tip, turn on Distance snap when you make a beatmap and try to make some shape in notes

your beat is good now, you just need more experience

GL

(No kds)
Yeah i definitely underused DS for the lower diffs, something i will keep in my for the future!
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NM request from my queue

[General]

Change source to Classroom☆Crisis
Add クラスルーム☆クライシス to tags
Remove 'tv' 'size' from tags, these are already in your source/title and are unncessesary
I suggest getting a good metadata source, I got this information from http://www.classroom-crisis.com/music/op.html and http://myanimelist.net/anime/30383/Clas ... 8%86Crisis

Didn't check anything in song folder

[Easy]

This difficulty is certainly more like a normal diff, but i'll mod it as an easy to help you improve, if this is intended to be a normal difficulty, please rename it. The majority of the comments below are applicable to easy difficulties.

Always use distance spacing, this makes it easy for new players to read and understand the map, here you have a lot of objects that are too close or too far from each other. Also try and avoid changing the slider velocity, this can be extremely confusing for new players unless it is done in an extremely obvious manner, and in my opinion this is not done here. I won't pick up on distance spacing issues, but here is a screenshot showcasing what needs fixing DS wise.

Another general comment is try to avoid using so much 1/2, these rhythms are hard for new players to pick up on

00:07:266 (5) - New combo (I'll call these NC's from now on)

00:09:560 (2,3) - This is really difficult for new players, not only is it two 1/2 single notes, but they're also stacked ontop of each other, consider revising this, maybe replacing it with a 1/2 slider

00:17:325 (5,6) - Swap these notes around, at the start of the combo you do a good job of following the music, but here it goes a little bit strange and switches what you're following and feels strange to play, switching these so the slider starts where (5) follows what you were following before, and the (6) will give emphasis on the vocal rising in pitch between (6) and (7).

00:17:325 (5) - Whilst i'm here, this should be NC'd

00:19:795 (1) - This can be changed into two circles imo, these are really strong beats, and having a slider end on the second of these beats means that you lose emphasis on the downbeat

00:25:089 (1,2) - Same comment as 00:09:560 (2,3) -

00:26:854 (4) - Consider moving the start point of this slider to 00:27:031 - and end the slider on 00:27:913 - This is a better rhythm for what you're currently following, and also allows for better emphasis on the next two notes.

I'll stop on this difficulty here, but if you take a look at the general comments, you can improve this a lot :)

[Hard]

Slider velocity is a bit too high imo

Another general comment, the section starting here 00:14:501 - is more overmapped than the part before, which is much more intensive?? Also, from what I can see, I don't know what you're following in the music at times, and it feels like you're trying to do everything at once, focus on one part of the music, for examples drums, melody or vocals. This will give you a much better sense of rhythm and direction in this map. I don't really know how to mod this difficulty so i'm gonna have to leave this one here.

00:23:678 (9) - Although this can be turned into a spinner

[Insane]

Similar comments to the hard difficulty

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Sorry I couldn't be more useful :/ Hope this helps!
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Log Off Now wrote:

NM request from my queue

[General]

Change source to Classroom☆Crisis
Add クラスルーム☆クライシス to tags
Remove 'tv' 'size' from tags, these are already in your source/title and are unncessesary
I suggest getting a good metadata source, I got this information from http://www.classroom-crisis.com/music/op.html and http://myanimelist.net/anime/30383/Clas ... 8%86Crisis

Didn't check anything in song folder

[Easy]

This difficulty is certainly more like a normal diff, but i'll mod it as an easy to help you improve, if this is intended to be a normal difficulty, please rename it. The majority of the comments below are applicable to easy difficulties.

Always use distance spacing, this makes it easy for new players to read and understand the map, here you have a lot of objects that are too close or too far from each other. Also try and avoid changing the slider velocity, this can be extremely confusing for new players unless it is done in an extremely obvious manner, and in my opinion this is not done here. I won't pick up on distance spacing issues, but here is a screenshot showcasing what needs fixing DS wise.

Another general comment is try to avoid using so much 1/2, these rhythms are hard for new players to pick up on

00:07:266 (5) - New combo (I'll call these NC's from now on)

00:09:560 (2,3) - This is really difficult for new players, not only is it two 1/2 single notes, but they're also stacked ontop of each other, consider revising this, maybe replacing it with a 1/2 slider

00:17:325 (5,6) - Swap these notes around, at the start of the combo you do a good job of following the music, but here it goes a little bit strange and switches what you're following and feels strange to play, switching these so the slider starts where (5) follows what you were following before, and the (6) will give emphasis on the vocal rising in pitch between (6) and (7).

00:17:325 (5) - Whilst i'm here, this should be NC'd

00:19:795 (1) - This can be changed into two circles imo, these are really strong beats, and having a slider end on the second of these beats means that you lose emphasis on the downbeat

00:25:089 (1,2) - Same comment as 00:09:560 (2,3) -

00:26:854 (4) - Consider moving the start point of this slider to 00:27:031 - and end the slider on 00:27:913 - This is a better rhythm for what you're currently following, and also allows for better emphasis on the next two notes.

I'll stop on this difficulty here, but if you take a look at the general comments, you can improve this a lot :)

[Hard]

Slider velocity is a bit too high imo

Another general comment, the section starting here 00:14:501 - is more overmapped than the part before, which is much more intensive?? Also, from what I can see, I don't know what you're following in the music at times, and it feels like you're trying to do everything at once, focus on one part of the music, for examples drums, melody or vocals. This will give you a much better sense of rhythm and direction in this map. I don't really know how to mod this difficulty so i'm gonna have to leave this one here.

00:23:678 (9) - Although this can be turned into a spinner

[Insane]

Similar comments to the hard difficulty

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Sorry I couldn't be more useful :/ Hope this helps!
Thanks a lot! I looked through the easy suggestions and they seem good but at this point, im honestly considering just scrapping the entire easy diff and remaking it. I am obv new to mapping and didnt use DS at all for the easy diff, i've just edited it in later which turns chaotic.

When it comes to what i mapped in the music i tried to map mostly after the lyrics (the triple triangles in hard and insane for example), but making it clearer is definitely something i need to improve on. The metadeta changes make sense aswell, will go through with those.
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Hello! I'm from my mod queue. :)

General
  1. I think you can change the title to "Cobalt (TV Size)" because it separates the song title and the type of song (or whatever lel).
  2. I don't know the anime, but you should put the character names from the bg to the tags. (for an example: "mizuki sera kaito shirasaki iris" correct them if I'm not right.)


Insane
  1. 00:22:795 - Here you are missing a note. I think this is better because of the previous sliders: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5344326.
  2. 00:30:031 (5,7) - If you want here to highlight the singer, then its ok, but you are missing 2 drum hits.
  3. 00:33:913 (1,2) - These are just bad. This should be like this I think: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5344373.
  4. 00:42:031 (3,2) - If these are highlighting the singer, than these two: 00:42:560 (5,1) should be swaped (ctrl + G), because it gives the map more flow.
  5. 01:00:913 (4,5,6) - I don't like these, because there the song its too good for a slider jump part, like this: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5344422.
  6. 01:16:442 (7,8) - Swap these (ctrl + G).
  7. 01:17:854 (6,7,8,9) - Imo this is a slider jump part. https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5344451.


Hard
  1. I'm not a hard diff expert, but I think the SV its too much.
  2. That's for now :V


Ok, so I hope this helped, don't forget to mod my map. Peace! 8-)
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Lorkee wrote:

Hello! I'm from my mod queue. :)

General
  1. I think you can change the title to "Cobalt (TV Size)" because it separates the song title and the type of song (or whatever lel).
  2. I don't know the anime, but you should put the character names from the bg to the tags. (for an example: "mizuki sera kaito shirasaki iris" correct them if I'm not right.)


Insane
  1. 00:22:795 - Here you are missing a note. I think this is better because of the previous sliders: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5344326.
  2. 00:30:031 (5,7) - If you want here to highlight the singer, then its ok, but you are missing 2 drum hits.
  3. 00:33:913 (1,2) - These are just bad. This should be like this I think: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5344373.
  4. 00:42:031 (3,2) - If these are highlighting the singer, than these two: 00:42:560 (5,1) should be swaped (ctrl + G), because it gives the map more flow.
  5. 01:00:913 (4,5,6) - I don't like these, because there the song its too good for a slider jump part, like this: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5344422.
  6. 01:16:442 (7,8) - Swap these (ctrl + G).
  7. 01:17:854 (6,7,8,9) - Imo this is a slider jump part. https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5344451.


Hard
  1. I'm not a hard diff expert, but I think the SV its too much.
  2. That's for now :V


Ok, so I hope this helped, don't forget to mod my map. Peace! 8-)
Thanks a lot!

Many good catches and things i hadnt considered, changed all except "01:00:913 (4,5,6) - I don't like these, because there the song its too good for a slider jump part, " because i dont know what to put there yet but i will figure something out i hope.

"Ok, so I hope this helped, don't forget to mod my map. Peace!"

Done an hour ago 8-):P
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aaa

dat m4m thingy

00:00:384 (1) - give it a shape like 00:03:207 (2) -
00:04:619 (1) - whats that weird ending? end here 00:05:854 -
00:07:178 (1) - doesnt fit at all. and so long reversals aren't allowed i guess. make this a long slider or a spinner
00:14:501 (1) - datshape pls. fix it and give it a shape like 00:15:913 (3) - . sliderart is hard. keep practicing.
00:19:795 (2) - better place it right after the end of the slider.. if you know what i mean. not in the timing thingy.
when fixed ^ 00:20:148 (3,4,5) - give dem a new placing ~
00:27:560 (5) - give it a better shape that it fits to (4). something like that looks just ugly uwu
00:31:442 (1) - unrankable slider. you have to see where u have tu go.
00:32:678 (2) - ew overlap. don't even try to have such overlap constant.. thats just... no. .w.
00:46:972 (1) - fix snapping
the whole kiai feels so.. offbeat. D:
01:25:795 (3) - dun do sliders like that.

keep practicing on easy's. its not that good but a good beginning! there's sum talent in u. :3
and fix thoose errors i told u in the whole map ~


wub. c:
i hope it isn't that bad that i just modded the easy lol

*hides* noone mods easys, so i do.
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CookieKivi wrote:

aaa

dat m4m thingy

00:00:384 (1) - give it a shape like 00:03:207 (2) -
00:04:619 (1) - whats that weird ending? end here 00:05:854 -
00:07:178 (1) - doesnt fit at all. and so long reversals aren't allowed i guess. make this a long slider or a spinner
00:14:501 (1) - datshape pls. fix it and give it a shape like 00:15:913 (3) - . sliderart is hard. keep practicing.
00:19:795 (2) - better place it right after the end of the slider.. if you know what i mean. not in the timing thingy.
when fixed ^ 00:20:148 (3,4,5) - give dem a new placing ~
00:27:560 (5) - give it a better shape that it fits to (4). something like that looks just ugly uwu
00:31:442 (1) - unrankable slider. you have to see where u have tu go.
00:32:678 (2) - ew overlap. don't even try to have such overlap constant.. thats just... no. .w.
00:46:972 (1) - fix snapping
the whole kiai feels so.. offbeat. D:
01:25:795 (3) - dun do sliders like that.

keep practicing on easy's. its not that good but a good beginning! there's sum talent in u. :3
and fix thoose errors i told u in the whole map ~


wub. c:
i hope it isn't that bad that i just modded the easy lol

*hides* noone mods easys, so i do.
Thanks a lot. It's actually best that you modded easy since that is the diff that i struggle with the most when making maps! I went through with all the changes suggested.
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👌👌 NM from queue 👌👌

[Easy]

You have distance snap errors everywhere (use AI-mod to spot and fix them)

This diff is more like a Normal than an Easy, but if it's your only difficulty below 2.00 stars, it can still be a Normal, it just has to act as the "Easy" map of the set. Because of this, rename your map to Normal.

00:05:854 - End spinner here, it's so weird to keep spinning when the vocals start

00:07:178 (1) - Don't use kicksliders in easys, regardless of how slow they may be. These are very confusing for new players. Just use a regular slider IMO.

00:11:501 (3,4) - Lessen the overlap here

00:14:501 (1) - This slider could be more visually appealing, just use a regular curve here

00:26:501 (4,5) - Somewhat weird flow, 5 could be moved to the right

00:31:442 (1) - Sliders going in on themselves like this is unrankable, let alone in a Normal. Just extend it out.

00:32:678 (2,3) - The overlap these sliders have just kinda looks bad, I'd work on these a bit

00:37:089 (5) - Ugly slider, the point at 00:37:883 looks bad

00:43:972 (7) - NC here

01:08:148 (1,2) - bad flow move 2 to end of 1, right now the players are forced to take a sharp turn left which can't be expected of beginners

01:25:795 (3) - The dip at the end of this slider looks bad

[Hard]

00:01:795 (4) - In the modern mapping style, long sliders like this usually look nice and aren't just bends. Check out other ranked maps to see how they shape their long sliders and try to emulate them until you can work on designing your own unique sliders.

00:04:619 (8) - ^Same as above, but for now just move 00:04:266 (7) - so it's equidistant from all sides of the slider

00:08:678 (1) - Claps on everything from this and beyond in this part is kinda too much, tone it down

00:20:501 (5,2) - Blanket these two together (blanket = shaping the slider so it is shaped around another object so that neither object touch)

00:21:913 (5,8) - Stack these two

00:25:266 (2) - Don't overlap with the long slider

00:25:089 (1,2,3) - Dont overlap

00:29:854 (3) - This area is kinda messy, things are overlapping left and right. When this happens the map just looks convoluted and bunched up, you could free up space visually by moving things so they aren't on top of each other

00:43:972 (1,2) - This overlap is unnecessary, even if it's intentional, it would just look way better if 2 wasn't directly under 1. Even if you want the overlap, try blanketing 2 around the start of 1 or something.

00:46:442 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - Nice pattern!

00:49:089 (6,1) - Move these two notes so it stacks with the end of 00:49:972 (3) -

00:51:031 (1) - Ugly slider, bends are bad in sliders this short, especially super sharp bends

00:56:854 (2,3) - blanket needs improvement

01:00:383 (2) - Ugly slider, bends are bad in sliders this short, with 90 degree angles being no exception. They work if the bend is shorter.

01:01:619 (3,5) - You could probably just stack these

01:03:031 (1,3,4,5,6) - if you stack 6 on 1 you get a pentagon pattern here which is perfectly fine. I'd do that instead of what you have.

01:09:207 (5,6) - Move these so the distance between 5,6 and 3,4 is the same as the distance between 3,4 and 1,2

01:09:383 (6,2,3) - Avoid this overlap

01:11:325 (5) - Ugly slider

01:13:619 (1,2) - Weird flow, move 2 a bit away from 1

01:16:089 (4,5) - Make 4 and the start of 5 parallel

01:25:089 (4,1,2) - bad overlap

[Insane]

00:04:619 (1) - It's an insane! Consider a stream here.

00:07:971 (8) - NC here as the music changes from low to high starting here

00:15:736 (5,7,8,1) - Messy area, see my comment in hard about unnecessary overlaps. You could def free up some space here

00:17:678 (1) - Yucky slider

00:21:736 (5) - Make this the same shape as 00:22:089 (6) for symmetry

00:23:325 (2) - Just make it a regular curve

00:24:383 (3) - Stacking this with 00:23:678 (3) is kinda ugly just dont make em overlap

00:40:089 (2,5,7) - Overlap

00:56:325 (2) - See comment about short sliders with bends

01:08:501 (4,7) - Overlap

01:10:089 (3,6) - Blanket these

01:10:972 (7) - Ugly slider

01:14:148 (4,8) - Stack

I hope my mod helped :)

Good luck!
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Dayum thanks a lot, certainly helped. Have only read through easy so far (prob my shittiest diff) and am implenting the changes!
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Hey! NM from my Queue :D

General

  1. There are alot of spacing inconsistencies throughout the map, i haven't included most of them because the mod would be just full of me repeating myself
    (An example is at 00:16:619 (1,2,3) on insane diff)
  2. Reduce the amount of whistles used in hard diff (sounds really bad on default skin)
  3. Alot of things that don't exactly follow rhythm (pointed out majority in easy and will probably apply to other diffs)
  4. Use my mod of easy as a template of the other diffs as same things will apply to some sections
  5. Switch up the sound sets you use to match the song
00:00:384 - I think this part sounds better with soft hitsounds (Also i would have the volume at around 50% because song is quiet here)
00:00:490 - unnecessary timing point as you can just change the red timing point's volume
00:11:501 (3) - This should match the length of previous 2 sliders (End on previous red tick)
00:12:913 (4) - End on previous white tick
00:13:795 (5) - Not necessary but to properly follow music end this on previous red tick
00:15:560 (2) - Make this have an equal distance from the 2 sliders around it
00:25:089 (2,3) - This pattern (Timing wise) should be repeated (Starting at 00:26:501)
00:27:913 - A 1/2 repeat slider should go here (ends on next white tick)
00:28:619 (7) - Reduce to previous white tick
00:29:325 - Another 1/2 repeat slider
00:31:442 (1) - End on next white tick
00:34:266 (3) - Delete this and make 2 note sliders (one at 00:34:266 and 00:34:972 )
00:37:089 (6) - Ugly slider
00:39:736 (2) - End on next red tick
00:40:972 (3) - Delete note
00:42:560 (5) - End on next red tick
00:43:972 (1) - Follow this rhythm

00:46:619 (5,1) - I don't know what pattern would work best here but the red ticks should be used
00:48:736 (2) -
00:51:031 (4) - NC and also reduce to white tick
00:52:089 (5) - Change to slider that starts on previous white tick and ends where it is currently
01:00:383 (4) - End on previous red tick
01:01:442 (5) - Move back by 2 ticks
01:02:325 (1) - Move back 2 ticks but still end where it does currently
01:03:736 (2) - Increase to next white tick
01:12:383 (1) - End on next red tick (I think the change in SV messed this up)
01:13:619 - Is where the timing point should be (kiai time can also be turned back on)
01:14:854 (3,4) - Move back 2 ticks but still have the slider end where it currently does
01:23:501 (1) - End on next red tick
01:24:913 (2) - Reduce two ticks from the start


GL with map :)
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