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Funtastic Power! - Pachelbel's Canon

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Musty
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Musty
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on mercredi 14 décembre 2011 at 12:49:28

Artist: Funtastic Power!
Title: Pachelbel's Canon
Tags: _LRJ_ LRJ
BPM: 124
Filesize: 2769kb
Play Time: 02:27
Difficulties Available:
  1. Canon (4,94 stars, 594 notes)
  2. Easy (0,58 stars, 69 notes)
  3. Hard (4,7 stars, 263 notes)
  4. LRJ's Canon (4,9 stars, 581 notes)
  5. Normal (3,1 stars, 136 notes)
Download: Funtastic Power! - Pachelbel's Canon
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NOT RANKED YET WHY
Last edited by Musty , edited 46 times in total.
Shana
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Joined June 2010
Shana
Star! first
[Dango]
841 posts
Joined December 2009
[Dango]
good~ lol
star~
Hamuko
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Joined April 2009
Hamuko

Mustaash wrote:

[*]Canon (5 Canons, 298 notes)
[*]Normal (3 Canons, 138 notes)
Canons. Oh you.
Musty
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Musty

Teta wrote:

Mustaash wrote:

[*]Canon (5 Canons, 298 notes)
[*]Normal (3 Canons, 138 notes)
Canons. Oh you.
(*^▽^*)
threenash
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threenash
:P
Ekoro
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Ekoro

Teta wrote:

Mustaash wrote:

[*]Canon (5 Canons, 298 notes)
[*]Normal (3 Canons, 138 notes)
Canons. Oh you.
Ekoro
3,456 posts
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Ekoro
Yo o/

[General]

Tu dois mettre un preview point sur TOUTES les diffs. Je suggère de mettre ce preview point a 01:09:682 ~

[Normal]

00:07:021 (3) - Ajoute moi un finish sur la fin du slider.00:08:231 (4) - New Combo?00:11:618 (8) - ^00:13:069 (1) - Remove New Combo?00:15:973 (5) - (suggestion) New Combo?00:20:811 (1,2,3,4,5) - euh , j'ai l'impression que cette partie est un peu décalée par rapport a 00:19:844 (4). Décale le.00:46:456 (5) - New Combo.01:01:940 (5) - ^01:05:811 (9) - ^01:26:618 (2,1) - WTF IS THAT01:28:554 (2,1) - ^

Bon , j'regarderais ça plus tard , j'dois y aller now~
Oh , et ma diff.

Download: Funtastic Power! - Pachelbel's Canon (Mustaash) [LRJ's Canon].osu
Musty
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Musty
kthx j'ai fixé des triplets stupides et sans intérets

_LRJ_ wrote:

  1. 01:26:618 (2,1) - WTF IS THAT You doesn't know my art?
  2. 01:28:554 (2,1) - ^
LRJ : Sur ta diff ici

02:27:102 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1) - IT'S HORRIBLE *DELETE*
Ekoro
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Joined March 2010
Ekoro

Mustaash wrote:

_LRJ_ wrote:

  1. 01:26:618 (2,1) - WTF IS THAT You doesn't know my art?
  2. 01:28:554 (2,1) - ^
Nan mais c'est absurde ce truc quoi

1 beat d'écart et un GROS GROS spacing entre eux deux o.o
C'est une normal hein , pas une lolroflwat

Mustaash wrote:

02:27:102 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1) - IT'S HORRIBLE *DELETE*
Wut , c'est la fin o.o
J'ai pas le droit de mapper jusqu'ici? D:
Scar
681 posts
Joined January 2009
Scar

Mustaash wrote:

_LRJ_ wrote:

  1. 01:26:618 (2,1) - WTF IS THAT You doesn't know my art?
  2. 01:28:554 (2,1) - ^

_LRJ_ wrote:

Nan mais c'est absurde ce truc quoi

1 beat d'écart et un GROS GROS spacing entre eux deux o.o
C'est une normal hein , pas une lolroflwat
Je suis pas souvent d'accord avec LRJ, mais sur ce coup là, oui c'est de la merde.
Ni plus ni moins.

Ensuite je te l'avais dis sur l'Irc mais le soft-hitnormal silencieux, c'est completement unrankable.
Donc j'en conclu que tu es un débile profond, vu que même Sushi te la dis sur ce coup là
Au lieu de dire "olol c tro d4rk" écoute un peu ce qu'on te dis...
Regarde, LRJ te dis une chose importante et tu lui répond, "You doesn't know my art?" mais wtf quoi...
Musty
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Topic Starter
Musty

scar1410 wrote:

Mustaash wrote:

LRJ:
  1. 01:26:618 (2,1) - WTF IS THAT You doesn't know my art?
  2. 01:28:554 (2,1) - ^
Nan mais c'est absurde ce truc quoi

1 beat d'écart et un GROS GROS spacing entre eux deux o.o
C'est une normal hein , pas une lolroflwat

Je suis pas souvent d'accord avec LRJ, mais sur ce coup là, oui c'est de la merde.
Ni plus ni moins.

Ensuite je te l'avais dis sur l'Irc mais le soft-hitnormal silencieux, c'est completement unrankable.
Donc j'en conclu que tu es un débile profond, vu que même Sushi te la dis sur ce coup là
Au lieu de dire "olol c tro d4rk" écoute un peu ce qu'on te dis...
Regarde, LRJ te dis une chose importante et tu lui répond, "You doesn't know my art?" mais wtf quoi...
k mais non,
et sushi m'avait dit que c'été rankable , donc tu fail.
j'ai pas dit "olol c tro d4rk" fail x2 ( oopas )
LRJ me dit jamais de trucs important, parceque LRJ est pas important. Fail x3
Scar
681 posts
Joined January 2009
Scar

Mustaash wrote:

k mais non,
et sushi m'avait dit que c'été rankable , donc tu fail.
j'ai pas dit "olol c tro d4rk" fail x2 ( oopas )
LRJ me dit jamais de trucs important, parceque LRJ est pas important. Fail x3
Non, Non, tu fail
mais bon t'es un attardé, donc bon... par contre tu pourras lécher le cul des BATs ça changera pas que c'est pas rankable kthx

btw, j'ai aimé la réponse qui prouve ton niveau de maturité~
Musty
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Musty
rofl,
bon. Je verrait quand j'aurait le temps (oopas) si je peux modifier quelque chose
et c'est rankable, donc fail (thx to james2250)
Ekoro
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Ekoro

scar1410 wrote:

mais bon t'es un attardé, donc bon... par contre tu pourras lécher le cul des BATs ça changera pas que c'est pas rankable kthx
lol'd

Also , je dis souvent de la merde , mais ça a été important sur ce coup-là , car ce jump ZOMGWTF , fallait pas le laisser comme ça.
(btw , je pense aussi que le custom hitsound est unrankable , j'ai jamais vu un truc pareil sur une map °°)
M'enfin , si James2250 dit que c'est rankable , fais péter le screen.
Louis Cyphre
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Joined October 2009
Louis Cyphre
Set Audio Lead-in to 2 seconds, that is enough.
Add _LRJ_ to tags
Remove Countdown

[LRG's Canon]
Set a preview point.
01:55:045 - make it more readable, my suggestion http://puu.sh/17Xe
I like streams, good job

[Canon]
OD -3
HP drain -3

Nice map, what else? Star :3
Musty
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Musty

Louis Cyphre wrote:

Set Audio Lead-in to 2 seconds, that is enough. Fix'd
Add _LRJ_ to tags Fix'd
Remove Countdown Fix'd

[LRG's Canon]
Set a preview point.Fix'd
01:55:045 - make it more readable, my suggestion http://puu.sh/17Xe Fix'd
I like streams, good job :D

[Canon]
OD -3 Fix'd
HP drain -3 Fix'd

Nice map, what else? Star :3 Thanks :D
Fight69
1,639 posts
Joined January 2010
Fight69
Bli~

[General]

Je sais, c'est du nazi, mais vraiment du nazi de chez nazi mais bon : Fait en sorte que ton BG ai une resolution de 1024x768 au lieu de 1023x767

Euh, y a un truc bizarre dans ton fichier .osb o.O
Vire le

Et aussi, essaye de faire en sorte que le kiai time soit le même dans toute les diffs

[Normal]

01:29:037 (1,2,1,2,3) - Toute cette partie a un spacing assez foireux, tu dormais quand tu l'a mappé ou quoi ? :<

[Canon]

02:26:134 (1) - New combo

Bon ben je crois que c'est tout
Pas de problèmes critiques, bien joué !

~Starz'd !
LesTrucsRoses
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LesTrucsRoses
Normal
00:07:021 (3) - Move left by 1 on gridlevel 3
good map.

Cannon
00:45:247 (3,4) - I don't like how these sliders are overlapped.
01:55:892 (8) - Add the finish hitsound to this beat
02:14:521 (7) - I don't like how this beat is under the previous 5 like that.
02:23:473 (1,2) - You never had anything on a blue tick untill this point, it feels weird.

LRJ's Cannon
increase the AR by 1.

01:00:852 (x) - Add a beat here.
02:18:392 (1) - If anybody asks you to remove this, don't.
Musty
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Musty

LesTrucsRose wrote:

Normal
00:07:021 (3) - Move left by 1 on gridlevel 3
good map.

Cannon
00:45:247 (3,4) - I don't like how these sliders are overlapped.
01:55:892 (8) - Add the finish hitsound to this beat
02:14:521 (7) - I don't like how this beat is under the previous 5 like that.
02:23:473 (1,2) - You never had anything on a blue tick untill this point, it feels weird.

LRJ's Cannon
increase the AR by 1.

01:00:852 (x) - Add a beat here.
02:18:392 (1) - If anybody asks you to remove this, don't.
Thanks, all fixed
OzzyOzrock
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Joined August 2010
OzzyOzrock
J-Je ne parle pas francais TRES bien... mais... je... euuh D:

[Normal]
C'est bon. :3

[Canon]
00:24:924 (4,5) - Pourquoi le difference entre 4 et 5? C'est... bizarre.
02:15:247 (9,1) - ^

C'est bon aussi.
[LRJ's Canon]
02:10:650 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - C'est bon, mais c'est petite et un peux dificile a lire avec le nouveux combo apres...

C'est beau... bon travaille.
Musty
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Musty

OzzyOzrock wrote:

J-Je ne parle pas français TRES bien... mais... je... euuh D:

[Normal]
C'est bon. :3

[Canon]
00:24:924 (4,5) - Pourquoi la différence entre 4 et 5? C'est... bizarre Minijumps :D
02:15:247 (9,1) - ^

C'est bon aussi.
[LRJ's Canon]
02:10:650 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - C'est bon, mais c'est petit et un peu difficile a lire avec le nouveau combo après...

C'est beau... bon travail.
Merci Beaucoup,
J'ai corrigé tes erreurs :)
Sinon, bravo pour essayer le français car langue très dur ! :'D
OzzyOzrock
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OzzyOzrock
C'est facile poir moi parce-que je sais l'espagnol :3
YGOkid8
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YGOkid8
General:
- Add a spinner or two (or three) to both [Normal] and [Canon], otherwise we'll all be getting the same scores

LRJ's Canon:
00:00:005 (1,3) - The only two sliders in the diff. to have sharp corners. Can you change them so no it's just smooth? A small change that will make this diff. look soo much better :)
02:18:392 (1,1,2) - That's a reeally short spinner, and it doesn't really play well into (1). imo, delete (1), extend the spinner so it ends where (1) starts, and just leave (2) as it is. A bit easy, maybe, but I think it plays better :D
02:25:166 (1,1) - Pretty much the same thing here, it doesn't really play well. Same thing as before, delete (1) and then extend the spinner so it ends where (1) starts.
Musty
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Musty

YGOkid8 wrote:

General:
- Add a spinner or two (or three) to both [Normal] and [Canon], otherwise we'll all be getting the same scores Fixed
Ok, i wait if LRJ will fix his mod :D
Ekoro
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Ekoro

YGOkid8 wrote:

LRJ's Canon:
00:00:005 (1,3) - The only two sliders in the diff. to have sharp corners. Can you change them so no it's just smooth? A small change that will make this diff. look soo much better :) Done ~
02:18:392 (1,1,2) - That's a reeally short spinner, and it doesn't really play well into (1). imo, delete (1), extend the spinner so it ends where (1) starts, and just leave (2) as it is. A bit easy, maybe, but I think it plays better :D Done ~
02:25:166 (1,1) - Pretty much the same thing here, it doesn't really play well. Same thing as before, delete (1) and then extend the spinner so it ends where (1) starts. Done + add 2 circles before (2)
Thank you very much for mod ! :)

Download: Funtastic Power! - Pachelbel's Canon (Mustaash) [LRJ's Canon].osu
YGOkid8
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YGOkid8
Normal:
00:06:779 (1,1) - Spinner way too short + not enough spin recovery time. 00:05:811 (1) - Delete this, and start the spinner where this starts, but finishing it at the same place. Next, 00:08:231 (1) - Delete this and put a hitcircle where it finishes.

Canon:
00:37:747 (1,1) - ...delete 00:38:715 (1) - and then extend spinner to where (1) starts.
xierbaliti
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xierbaliti
-General-
leadin:3000? 2000 is a bit short imo.

-Normal & Hard-
using 70% or higher volume? I can scarcely hear the hitsounds ~_~

-LRJ-
00:55:650 (4,5) - 1 grid up?
01:25:166 (1) - using finish instead.
01:25:166~01:32:908 70% vol.? i can't hear the hitsounds clearly.
01:32:908 (1) - +finish
01:32:908 - 80%~85% vol. this part.

the stream's spacing seems bad. you'd better turn off the grid snap or using lv4 grid and reposition them ;)
Musty
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Musty

xierbaliti wrote:

-General-
leadin:3000? 2000 is a bit short imo.

-Normal & Hard-
using 70% or higher volume? I can scarcely hear the hitsounds ~_~
Every Fixed

Thanks a lot ;)
Ekoro
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Ekoro

xierbaliti wrote:

-LRJ-
00:55:650 (4,5) - 1 grid up? Done ~
01:25:166 (1) - using finish instead. Done ~
01:25:166~01:32:908 70% vol.? i can't hear the hitsounds clearly. Done ~
01:32:908 (1) - +finish Done ~
01:32:908 - 80%~85% vol. this part. Done ~

the stream's spacing seems bad. you'd better turn off the grid snap or using lv4 grid and reposition them ;) Meh , looks good :<
Thanks for mod ~ :3

Download: Funtastic Power! - Pachelbel's Canon (Mustaash) [LRJ's Canon].osu
OnosakiHito
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OnosakiHito
☆
Yuzeyun
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Yuzeyun
IRC mod (Les 3 diffs, c'était des problèmes de x/y) + star
Ekoro
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Ekoro

_Gezo_ wrote:

IRC mod (Les 3 diffs, c'était des problèmes de x/y) + star
Merci pour le mini-mod ~ :)

Download: Funtastic Power! - Pachelbel's Canon (Mustaash) [LRJ's Canon].osu
wanhyrzh
376 posts
Joined December 2009
wanhyrzh
sorry for so late due to my school works...:(
I think the map is rankable, so just give some suggestions~
just feel free to follow some or not XD.
SPOILER
General:
1. no source?
2. why your tags has two lrj? shouldn't it be "_LRJ_" but not "_LRJ_LRJ"?
3. the bg is 1024*780...I think it should be 800*600 or 1024*768.

Normal:
A nice normal/easy diff imo.
But I don't know if the easiest diff can be above 3.00 star(yours is 3.15 now)...
AR-3 or -2, I think it's too fast now, though people can still play, I think it may be a little strange.
00:51:295(3) delete this one and do the same thing as 00:50:327(1,2)?
01:06:295(2,3,4,5,6) this part, why not make it more differ from the part before? I just give an example:

01:55:166(8) I suggest you to make this slider into two short sliders + a note, cuz I think we'd better hit a note when the KIAI begins, not just follow a slider XD.

P' Canon
lol this diff is normal XD
I think this diff is somehow repeatable...

HP+1 OD+1 will be better imo.
00:07:747~00:23:231 why not make bigger spacings and more jumps in this part? I think in this part, music is active, and bigger spacings and more circles will make a speedy feeling, and the long sliders will just slow down the speed.
00:54:198~01:09:682 same as above?
01:09:198(8) change to 5 notes?
02:15:489(1) I think this jump is a bit strange.

LRJ's Canon
lol the streams
I suggest you to add a break somewhere;_;
HP+1?
others are fine imo~

Star and goodluck!
Kurai
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Kurai
General
  1. Essaye de full-submit pour mettre à jour le thumbnail ?
  2. Ne prend pas le sliderborder de la même couleur qu'un combo (ici combo 2), cela les sliders de ce combo assez moche et plus dure à lire.
  3. Essaye d'avoir le même nombre de break dans chaque difficulté, et qu'ils soient au même endroit. Du moins, fait les même breaks pour Normal et Hard et n'en met pas pour les Canon. Je pense que ce sera bien comme ça.
  4. fond_ecran_wallpaper_saint_valentin_148[1].jpg => Ahah j'ai ris.
Normal
  1. 00:48:392 (4) - La forme de ce slider est mal faite, essaye de la rendre plus beau en mettant le carré du milieu plus au milieu du slider, un peu comme ça :
    SPOILER
  2. 01:35:811 (6) - Un peu trop proche de la HPbar je trouve
  3. 01:36:779 (7) - New combo ici, ça se sent avec la musique.
Hard
  • 00:03:876 (1) - Pourquoi un finish au début de ce slider ? Tu devrais rien avoir ici, Vire le please ~
  1. 00:32:908 (6) - New combo, la musique le suggère ici.
LRJ's Canon
  1. 00:38:352 (8,9,10,1) - Met des Soft:Custom 1 claps sur ce stream, mais garde le clap normal sur la première note. Ou alors tu mets des hitnormal comme tu as fait pour les autres stream.
  2. 01:01:215 (6,1) - C'est bien proche de la HPbar tout ça :/
  3. 02:19:602 - Reprendre un stream 1/2 après un spinner omg.
Canon
  1. 00:19:118 (5) - Dû au changement de spacing, et parceque cela ferait plus beau, met un new combo ici.
  2. 00:52:263 (9) - Pour prévenir le jump et faire plus beau, met un new combo. (Rimes ftw)
  3. 00:56:134 (5) - La musique suggère un new combo ici ~
  4. 01:55:650 (3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4) - Le stream qui se mange sur lui-même, non merci, c'est illisible moche et tout ce que tu veux, change ça !
  5. 02:19:360 (1,2,3,4) - Ne me dit pas que t'es sérieux là, nan mais les slider plus rapide 2.0x en plein milieu d'un stream qui dure depuis j'ne sais pas combien de temps, c'est juste bon à faire combobreaker le joueur. Franchement change le, beaucoup de gens vont te haïr si tu le garde.
  6. 02:29:037 (5) - New combo !
  7. Pas vraiment sur que ce soit une bonne idée de terminer la diff comme ça, essaye de rajouter un spinner silencé à la fin pour conclure.
Plutôt pas mal dans l'ensemble, j'aime bien :D
Ekoro
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Joined March 2010
Ekoro

KuraiPettan wrote:

LRJ's Canon
  1. 00:38:352 (8,9,10,1) - Met des Soft:Custom 1 claps sur ce stream, mais garde le clap normal sur la première note. Ou alors tu mets des hitnormal comme tu as fait pour les autres stream. will be done by Mustaash
  2. 01:01:215 (6,1) - C'est bien proche de la HPbar tout ça :/ Je pouvais pas faire mieux D:
  3. 02:19:602 - Reprendre un stream 1/2 après un spinner omg. A la base ça reprenait en 1/4 donc j'ai fix en 1/2 ~
Kurai
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Kurai
Ok re-modded via IRC, minor changes so don't need to be kudosed.
The whole mapset is very well-made and I enjoyed playing it, great job :D

Te la pète pas parceque tu as eu ma première bubble fr hein :D
(Et ce deathstream *.*)

Bulle pour la moustache ~
Andrea
Beatmap Nominator
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Joined August 2008
Andrea
[General]

Your Normal difficulty has some tricky patterns for beginners and its star rating is also a bit too high. Please make an Easy difficulty.

[Normal]

01:44:521 (6) - New combo.
01:52:747 (5) - ^

[Hard]

01:47:182 (6) - New combo.
01:47:545 (1) - Remove new combo.
02:21:295 (5,6,7,8) - This sudden spacing change into this combo feels really weird to play.
02:22:505 (9) - You forgot to add your custom clap at the end of this slider.
02:26:134 (1,2,3,4,5) - Don't really like this pattern, to be honest.

[LRJ's Canon]

01:01:456 (1) - Remove new combo.
01:03:150 (6) - This slider repeat is kinda hidden.
01:06:779 (1) - Remove new combo.
02:11:618 (1) - The finish at the begin of this slider sounds too powerful to me. What about reducing the volume a bit? Would be better.
02:15:489 (1) - ^
02:18:392 (1) - Same for this spinner, sounds too powerful.
02:23:231 (1) - And same for this circle.

[Canon]

Approach Rate +1? 7 Seems really low to me.

00:23:231 (5) - Add a finish at the begin of this slider.
01:54:440 (9) - New combo.
01:54:924 (1) - Remove new combo.
01:56:013 (6,1,2,3) - The spacing here looks really terrible.
02:11:618 (1) - Same as LRJ's difficulty.
02:15:489 (1) - ^
02:19:360 (14) - New combo and also same as above, plus there's an additional timing section that shouldn't be here, please get rid of that.
02:23:231 (1) - Why not using Normal finish like you did on the others? Would be better, it's weird to hear that sudden change from Normal finish to Soft finish.
02:27:102 (1) - ^ And also, waaay too loud.

This map isn't ready at all for ranking, please get some more mods and then ask me back for a recheck.
krysyS
65 posts
Joined January 2011
krysyS
Ohio o/

[Easy]

• 01:05:811 (7) – New combo ?
• 01:32:908 (6) – New combo + add finish?
• 02:03:876 (4) – New combo?

[Normal]

• 00:21:295 (3) – add finish?
• 02:16:456 (7) – New combo?

[Hard] + [LRJ’s Canon] : rien en particulier j'aime bien.

[Canon]
•01:55:892 (1): >.<

Pas sûr que ça t'aide beaucoup. + +
Andrea
Beatmap Nominator
16,650 posts
Joined August 2008
Andrea
[Easy]

Lower the difficulty settings. Right now they are the same as Normal, which is not good at all.

This difficulty doesn't have hitsounds at all. Add them.

00:06:779 (1) - Finish at the end of this slider.
00:38:715 (1) - Finish at the begin of this slider.
00:52:263 (2) - Finish at the end of this slider.
00:54:682 (3) - New combo.
01:01:940 (6) - ^
01:32:908 (6) - ^
01:56:134 (1) - Finish at the begin of this slider.
02:03:876 (4) - New combo.
02:17:424 (3) - ^
02:23:231 (5) - ^

[Canon]

01:56:013 (6,1,2,3) - The spacing here still looks really bad.

Here you go.
Andrea
Beatmap Nominator
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Andrea
[Easy]

01:32:908 (6) - This is still missing a New combo.

Fix and I can finally repair your bubble.
Kurai
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Kurai
Rechecked via IRC

Log
14:21 <KuraiPettan> : Bli
14:21 <KuraiPettan> : IRC mod
14:21 <KuraiPettan> : Easy :
14:21 <Mustaash> : rooj
14:21 <Mustaash> : k
14:21 <KuraiPettan> : 00:03:876 (3) - new combo
14:21 <Mustaash> : j'espère qu'Andrea va pas repop après. ._.
14:21 <KuraiPettan> : Je ferais en sorte que non
14:22 <Mustaash> : *.*
14:23 <KuraiPettan> : 00:18:876 (2,3,4,5) - Ce pattern est pas très cohérent
14:23 <KuraiPettan> : Je veux dire :
14:23 <KuraiPettan> : (2) suit les claps de la musique
14:23 <Mustaash> : je vois ce que tu veux dire
14:24 <KuraiPettan> : tandis que les cercle qui suivent sont décalé par rapport à ce rythme, en conséquence c'est bizarre
14:24 <Mustaash> : fixed
14:24 <KuraiPettan> : Décale (3, 4, 5) de 1/1
14:24 <KuraiPettan> : ok
14:24 <KuraiPettan> : attend
14:25 <KuraiPettan> : je pense que un truc de ce style va mieux : http://puu.sh/7229
14:26 <KuraiPettan> : 00:41:618 (3) - 2 whistle à la suite comme ça ça sonne pas très bien, supprime celui sur ce cercle.
14:26 <KuraiPettan> : 00:52:263 - Supprime ce whistle qui ne va vraiment pas avec la musique
14:28 <KuraiPettan> : 00:54:682 (1) - Un peu trop collé avec le slider, dans ce cas, tu as le droit de désactiver le grid snap pour
14:28 <KuraiPettan> : faire quelque chose de plus jolis et lisible (les note collées aux sliders sont parfois dure à lire pour les
14:28 <KuraiPettan> : noobs) Tu peux faire quelque chose comme ça : http://puu.sh/722A
14:30 <KuraiPettan> : 00:58:069 - Finish
14:31 <KuraiPettan> : 01:01:940 - Finish
14:31 <KuraiPettan> : 01:05:811 - Finish
14:32 <KuraiPettan> : 01:30:973 (5) - Ce slider est quand même assez caché par l'autre slider, essaye de faire un pattern plus
14:32 <KuraiPettan> : lisible
14:33 <KuraiPettan> : 01:29:037 (4) - New combo
14:33 <KuraiPettan> : 01:32:908 (6) - New combo
14:33 <KuraiPettan> : 01:57:102 - Whistle
14:34 <KuraiPettan> : 01:58:069 - Supprime le whistle
14:34 <KuraiPettan> : 02:17:424 - Whistle
14:35 <KuraiPettan> : AR+1 HP drain +1
14:36 <KuraiPettan> : Pourquoi tu as pas utilisé de clap dans cette diff ?
14:36 <KuraiPettan> : Comme dans normal et Hard ?
14:37 <Mustaash> : je sais pas
14:37 <Mustaash> : allfixed
14:37 <KuraiPettan> : k
14:37 <Mustaash> : j'up?
14:37 <Mustaash> : ou c'est pas tout?
14:37 <KuraiPettan> : Je mod les autres avant *-*
14:38 <Mustaash> : ..
14:38 <Mustaash> : ;((
14:38 <KuraiPettan> : quoi
14:38 <Mustaash> : en plus Andrea veut pas rank
14:38 <KuraiPettan> : j'ai pas le droit de rebubble si je recheck pas tout
14:38 <Mustaash> : il me sort "ouais, j'voulais bubble après ce fix mais j'veux pas rank. Trouve un autre BAT"
14:39 <Mustaash> : .. .__.
14:39 <KuraiPettan> : Ahah
14:39 <KuraiPettan> : Bah c'est a lui que tu doit redemander pour rebubble
14:39 <Mustaash> : j'en connais pas d'autres a spammer
14:39 <Mustaash> : bah ouai
14:39 <Mustaash> : s
14:39 <Mustaash> : m'enfin
14:39 <Mustaash> : au pire
14:40 <Mustaash> : je lui demande de rebubble maintenant
14:40 <KuraiPettan> : Non, laisse moi recheck
14:40 <Mustaash> : ou ok
14:42 <KuraiPettan> : Hard :
14:42 <KuraiPettan> : 01:55:892 (8) - Supprime cet horrible finish .__.
14:43 <Mustaash> : omg, j'avais jamais remarqué

As Andrea said he won't rebubble :

Rebubbled ~
SuperMIC
420 posts
Joined July 2011
SuperMIC
Est-ce que tu parles français? Je suis canadien... alors, je dois apprendre des classes de français dans l'école. Je connais un petit peu de français, alors, je suis désolé pour tout les erreurs dans mon phrases...

But if you don't mind, I'll Mod the map in English. XD

Easy

[0:23:231] I think there should be a "Finish" hitsound to stress this part more. I don't think a Whistle cuts it.
[1:59:037] Hm, I'm not sure i it's just preference or not, but I don't like that the next few sliders fall on unstressed beats. You might want to set the sliders back a beat.

Normal

Didn't find anything to report here. :D

Hard

Again I didn't really find anything. :P

LRJ's Canon

This is actually my second-ever Mod, so I'm not sure how things really work. So I'm not sure if I Mod this map here or somehwere else, but I'll Mod it here for now. :P

[1:35:690] I'm not sure if this is counted as Nazi modding, but that hitcircle is out of place. :P
[1:49:844] This hitcircle (7) is out of place too.
[1:53:715 - 1:53:956] I think hitcircles 7, 8, and 9 should each be moved 1 pixel to the right.
[2:16:819] Move hitcircle 6 down 1 pixel?

Canon

This one was spotless as well.

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Overall, I really enjoy this map, and I need to figure out how to give stars. :<

-SMIC
Doomsday
Featured Artist
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Doomsday
Hmm, not the best choice of song for a map, in my opinion, since it's quite repetitive making it a tough song to map. But oh well, doesn't hurt to try I guess :P

  1. Timing looks fine to me
[EASY]

Its a functional easy, certainly good for beginners, but I think it could follow the music a little better. Right now it seems to go on it's own rhythm, throwing in sliders which don't fit all that well with the music in my opinion.

Parts like at 01:32:908 (1,2,3) - The sliders felt randomly placed, and didn't go with the song that well. Granted, the song is repetitive so it's hard to map to, but either way, it doesn't work that well. It works as an easy, but not the best unfortunately.

[NORMAL]

Feels more coherent than the easy does, and does follow the music fairly competently. It has a few cool rhythms too, which is nice. That said, it does get a little dull as the song goes on, due to lots of sliders, all constantly 1/4 away from each other on the same rhythm, with the odd rhythm, or set of 1/2 notes to break it up.

It's repetitive, but there are still some little things in the song you could map to, here's some ugly speedmapping to show what I mean:
Download: Funtastic Power! - Pachelbel's Canon (Mustaash) [DoomNormal].osu

Sometimes you can make your own little rhythms, as long as they compliment the song. It isn't easy though, and this song doesn't help :o

[HARD]

This one was alright actually. Still gets a bit dull since much of the map are constant short sliders, but it's got enough variety to be fun to play. Not much really bothered me on this one.

[LRJ'S CANON]

This one was alright too. I'm not keen on the intro bit (00:23:231 - 00:54:198), since I'm not keen on all those jumps in that bit of the song, but that's just me. I played it alright and it felt okay so no big deal. I liked the streams though, those were well done.

[CANON]

Hmm, I'm not sure about this one. Looks like it was going for a jumpy insane difficulty, but on a song this slow, it doesn't really work in my opinion. It's got some erratic spacing though, goes from normal spacing for a bit, then jumps, then tiny spacing, then goes to wide spacing again etc. It's playable, but It didn't feel too great. I don't really like this difficulty to be honest.

Main things that got me were the things like this:
00:10:650 (2,3,4) -
00:15:247 (4,5,6) -
00:20:811 (6,1,2) -
00:33:150 (9,1,2) - etc. there are others but these are just a few examples

How it goes from jumps, then a single beat with short spacing, then goes back to wide spacing is what I'm refering to. It's a small thing, but it adds up, and it looked rather messy. (by the way, I'm not saying you have to use distance snap all the time, just saying that inconsistent spacing looks ugly :P)

For example, this is the 00:10:650 (2,3,4) - bit
Nay :(
Yay :)

Even in a jumpy map like this one, fixing little inconsistent notes like that goes a long way in making it a pretty map. Even if you don't do anything else to this difficulty, I think it would be handy to look through the diff and fix things like that.

I won't pop the bubble since technically. this is fine, so if a BAT disagrees with me, go ahead and rank or whatnot. I feel that a little work and a little improvement would be handy for this map though. Not hating on it, just a few suggestions :)


Musty
2,252 posts
Joined February 2010
Topic Starter
Musty
Thanks Dooms, fixed the much things i think will be better, btw, there's something in your mod i don't agree (likes things in Normal because i think it'll be too hard with my mapping ;_; ). sorry :'(
Doomsday
Featured Artist
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Joined July 2008
Doomsday
For most of the stuff I can let it slide anyway, since they were more trivial things. The only thing that bug me though are those odd inconsistent spaced beats in [Canon]. I don't really wanna bubble this until I'm happy with those, since I think it plays a bit sloppy with them as they are.

If you're looking for a bubble, here's the list of parts where the spacing bugged me. Once these are fixed, I should be happy enough to rebubble.

00:15:247 (4,1,2) -
00:20:811 (6,1,2) -
00:28:553 (4,5,6) -
00:30:489 (2,3,4) -
00:33:150 (9,1,2) -
00:40:166 (9,1,2) -
00:54:077 (6,1) -
00:54:682 (2,3) -
00:57:344 (9,1,2) -
01:27:585 (3,4,5) -
01:36:537 (8,9,1) -
01:38:956 (6,7,8) -
01:55:166 (1,2,3) -

If you're not sure how to go about fixing them, gimme a shout and I'll help you out 8-)
Doomsday
Featured Artist
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Doomsday
I'll take that. Rebubbled!
Garven
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Joined January 2010
Garven
[General]
Tick rate 2 feels better - especially on the higher-end difficulties
First break in the Easy/Normal/Hard felt forced. I'd just map through 'em.

[Easy]
00:46:940 (1) - You have a really long combo right before this, then a 1 slider combo right afterward. :/
01:41:134 - Just map through this break to keep it in line with your other difficulties. Those breaks are really long anyway. Having three is kinda boring.
It'd be cool if you could add a spinner so that there can be some score variation.

[Normal]
00:08:231 (1) - Kinda soon after a spinner for a Normal.

[Hard]
01:47:182 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - This was quite the difficulty spike. Might work better as a stack or a series of ki
02:15:247 (9,1) - Although it's fine, it was uncharacteristic compared to the rest of the entire map to have a jump here but not in this part of the song anywhere else. Consistency is key.

[LRJ's Canon]
Raise stack leniency to 10 so that 00:32:908 (1,2,3) - stacks correctly.
00:46:456 (1) - This pattern felt really similar to the one just before it.
01:12:344 (3) - Considering how the phrase of the music flows, I really don't feel that having a slider at the beginning of these streams fits the best. Feels better just mapping all circles for the entire stream.
01:14:279 (3) - ^
01:16:215 (5) - ^ This one might work with just a no repeat slider
01:16:215 (5) - ^
etc. I figure you'll get the gist of what I'm saying. Right now having the same pattern on them all just doesn't fit the phrase very well.
02:07:747 (1,2,3,4) - This stack -> not stack to triple stack played kind of weird. I was expecting something more like what happened at 02:09:682 (1,2,3,4) -
02:19:844 (3) - This repeat is pretty tough to see after the spinner hit burst.
SPOILER

[Canon]
00:11:618 (5,6,7,8) - Considering the huge spacing you use, the little overlaps on these was kinda eh
Garven
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Garven
Rebub~
Breeze
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Breeze
Hope I can end this pop-rebubble circle lol

Red : Unrankable/error staff
Blue : Important things that I think you'd better fix
Black : Just suggestions

General

  1. Hmm, [Canon] diff. has an extra combo color than other diff., it's allowed though. Just point out to make sure whether it's done on purpose or just accident?

Hard

  1. 00:06:787 (T) - This timing section is later than the note you suppose to start effect with, it should at 00:06:779
  2. 00:07:770 (T) - ^, should at 00:07:747, fix those just in case.

LRJ's Canon

  1. 02:12:102 (2) - 1 grid donw (lv4) to make spacing the same so that looked more neat
  2. 02:12:344 (4) - i grid right (lv4)
  3. 02:13:069 (7) - ^

Fix those you want for a sweet heat ヾ(๑╹ω╹๑)ノ
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