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inb4 this was bubbled =.="

[Cry]
01:02:526 (1) - clap at the end of the sliders
nothing much i guess

[Smile]
00:28:926 (6) - new combo
00:29:226 (1) - remove the new combo
00:42:726 (4) - new combo
01:23:526 (4) - this slider sounds weird O.o

[Dream]
00:26:526 (4) - new combo
nothing i guess o.o

nice map i hope you it get ranked soon >~<
posted
I'm sticking to my guns on the Claps I suggested, since they fit in with the rest of the surrounding hitsounds. The rest is subjective, even if I think they sound ugly otherwise.

Really, the slidertick makes the map sound less empty. It's boring.

Also, find a comboburst.
posted

-Sekai- wrote:

inb4 this was bubbled =.=" Ha! If you knew my luck with these things you wouldn't be saying that lol XD

[Cry]
01:02:526 (1) - clap at the end of the sliders Sorry ... I know you and Mogs said this but I really don't think it fits here >_<
nothing much i guess

[Smile]
00:28:926 (6) - new combo
00:29:226 (1) - remove the new combo Going to keep it this way for consistency (all the other diffs are like that)
00:42:726 (4) - new combo I think then this would be too short ... sorry D:
01:23:526 (4) - this slider sounds weird O.o Eh ... how do you mean? I think it fits OK >_<

[Dream]
00:26:526 (4) - new combo Sorry, this doesn't really feel like a NC to me :S
nothing i guess o.o

nice map i hope you it get ranked soon >~<
Sorry I didn't change anything ... but thank you anyways :P

Mogsworth wrote:

I'm sticking to my guns on the Claps I suggested, since they fit in with the rest of the surrounding hitsounds. The rest is subjective, even if I think they sound ugly otherwise.

Really, the slidertick makes the map sound less empty. It's boring.

Also, find a comboburst.
OK, I'll compromise your claps - I changed the whistles to claps for the first one, but kept whistle on the second. I was going for the "emptiness" actually, I thought it fit in OK. Trying to find a comboburst, but it's harder than I expected - you have to get the chara on a clear BG or else it turns up as a really odd rectangle O_O I tried doing it myself but it just looked really ugly -_-" So I am going to try and ask someone for help :P

EDIT: It appears I've found a way to make it look less ugly :P
posted
Little mod, they are semi-perfect xD :)

Dream:

00:37:926 (4) - Waypoint to create a good blanket: http://puu.sh/4IaS
01:24:126 (6) - New combo
01:24:726 (1) - No new combo

Smile:

00:15:726 (2) - Move it at x:168 y:192?
00:16:926 (4) - New combo?
00:26:526 (3) - ^
00:28:926 (1) - ^
00:29:226 (1) - No new combo
01:04:926 (4) - New combo?
01:07:326 (4) - ^

Cry:

Perfect.

Okay, good maps. I hope it will be ranked soon ~
posted

Chewin wrote:

Little mod, they are semi-perfect xD :)

Dream:

00:37:926 (4) - Waypoint to create a good blanket: http://puu.sh/4IaS Teehee, blankets XD (Read: done. Or at least I tried my best ...)
01:24:126 (6) - New combo
01:24:726 (1) - No new combo Done

Smile:

00:15:726 (2) - Move it at x:168 y:192? Looks cleaner but too far I think, so not changing
00:16:926 (4) - New combo? No
00:26:526 (3) - ^
00:28:926 (1) - ^
00:29:226 (1) - No new combo
01:04:926 (4) - New combo?
01:07:326 (4) - ^ These I want to keep consistent w/ the other diffs

Cry:

Perfect.

Okay, good maps. I hope it will be ranked soon ~
Thank you very much :) I hope so too haha XD
posted
Dream

01:00:726 - it would be better to follow the vocal here like:



01:03:126 - try rhythm like this:



01:04:926 (9,10,11) - you can increase the distance for them
01:09:426 (1,2) - stack?
01:16:326 (8,9,10) - these three notes play really bad, I'd recommand a spinner(01:16:026 - 01:17:226) here instead


Smile

looks fine


Cry

fine
posted

Sandpig wrote:

Dream

01:00:726 - it would be better to follow the vocal here like: While this doesn't sound bad, I like following the beat more here (someone else said that the vocals switch to 1/6 beat, so I'd prefer not to map exactly that for most of it)



01:03:126 - try rhythm like this: This doesn't sound half bad actually, but I'd prefer it the way it is



01:04:926 (9,10,11) - you can increase the distance for them I'm pretty bad with jumps but OK, let's see how this works out XD
01:09:426 (1,2) - stack? OK
01:16:326 (8,9,10) - these three notes play really bad, I'd recommand a spinner(01:16:026 - 01:17:226) here instead I actually quite like these, would you mind telling me why you don't like them? Maybe I can change them or something


Smile

looks fine


Cry

fine
Thanks! Sorry for the late reply >_<
posted
4th Mod! :)

Cant find anything really wrong! Good job :)

[General]

All diffs use 100bpm + 126 offset (Timing is good)
All diffs have a preview point.
All diffs are snapped properly.
Background is correct size.
MP3 is 196 bit-rate.
Looking good! :)

[Cry]

00:55:326 (1,2,3,4,5) - See screenshot :3



[Smile]

00:26:526 (1) - New Combo, to follow vocals?
00:47:826 (2) - whistle on end maybe?

Love the clap hitsounds on the end, it fits, good job :)

[Dream]
00:16:326 (2) - whistle maybe?
00:16:626 (x) - new hit circle + whistle maybe? (stack with 2)
posted

ShadowLord wrote:

4th Mod! :)

Cant find anything really wrong! Good job :)

[General]

All diffs use 100bpm + 126 offset (Timing is good)
All diffs have a preview point.
All diffs are snapped properly.
Background is correct size.
MP3 is 196 bit-rate.
Looking good! :)

[Cry]

00:55:326 (1,2,3,4,5) - See screenshot :3 Changed



[Smile]

00:26:526 (1) - New Combo, to follow vocals? Gonna keep this since it's the same in Cry
00:47:826 (2) - whistle on end maybe? I don't really like this here, sorry

Love the clap hitsounds on the end, it fits, good job :)

[Dream]
00:16:326 (2) - whistle maybe? Hmm, I think that'd be too much whistle :P
00:16:626 (x) - new hit circle + whistle maybe? (stack with 2) OK, added
Thanks! Finally, another mod! Haha XD
posted
Cry
00:19:326- finish.
Nice diff

Smile
00:59:226- Spacing Dont forget preview note
01:26:526- ^

Dream
00:19:326- Finish.
01:00:726- Remove clap put whistle
01:01:026- Add a note

Good luck,Nice mapset
posted

HellDawn wrote:

Cry
00:19:326- finish. Don't think this fits sorry
Nice diff

Smile
00:59:226- Spacing Dont forget preview note Spacing looks fine here? Not too sure what you mean by "preview note" sorry ...
01:26:526- ^

Dream
00:19:326- Finish.
01:00:726- Remove clap put whistle I think clap sounds better
01:01:026- Add a note OK

Good luck,Nice mapset
Thanks for your mod :)
posted
Good job~! Kona chan.

I looked that, but there is no modding.

:roll:

Your message is too short.
posted
General:
Offset: 143?

Dream
Did you check the spacing?

00:38:226 (T) - Move this to 00:38:526 -
01:13:776 (T) - Delete that
01:13:793 (x) - Add a note
01:13:926 (6) - Delete the clap
01:14:093 (x) - Add a note

Smile:
Please check the spacing

00:15:726 (2) - Make this slider like this

01:13:326 (2) - Delete the clap ( 01:13:926 - )

Cry:
AR -1
Check the spacing

Fine
posted

Tanmak wrote:

Good job~! Kona chan.

I looked that, but there is no modding.

:roll:

Your message is too short.
Haha OK, thanks for looking :)

Verdisphena wrote:

General:
Offset: 143? I am not very good with timing, so I am going to leave it as is so I don't mess anything up

Dream
Did you check the spacing?

00:38:226 (T) - Move this to 00:38:526 - Sorry ... what's T? O_O
01:13:776 (T) - Delete that
01:13:793 (x) - Add a note Done
01:13:926 (6) - Delete the clap No
01:14:093 (x) - Add a note OK

Smile:
Please check the spacing

00:15:726 (2) - Make this slider like this I'm not entirely sure if I did what you thought but I changed the slider point slightly

01:13:326 (2) - Delete the clap ( 01:13:926 - ) I think this is OK

Cry:
AR -1 OK
Check the spacing

Fine
Thank you :D
posted
[Dream]
I don't know why the spacing for streams are different from everything else... but whatever
01:01:926 - add note... i think it would play better

Looks good.
posted

qilliam wrote:

[Dream]
I don't know why the spacing for streams are different from everything else... but whatever Lol that's 'cus ... I don't like having notes too close together, it looks bad IMO ;P
01:01:926 - add note... i think it would play better Erm, there's already a note here ... O_O

Looks good.
Thanks for looking but I didn't change anything, sorry :(
posted
As per your Request

General


Nothing :P

Cry

00:16:926 (3) - New Combo
00:18:726 (2) - Finish at end ?
00:24:126 (4) - Finish instead Whistle ?
00:27:426 (4) - New Combo
00:47:226 (x) - Add note ? , I heard Finish sound here. Orz

Smile

00:19:326 (4) - Finish ?
00:47:226 (x) - Orz Orz

Dream

00:19:326 (3) - Finish...... ?

That's all I can find a mistake for you.

If this Mod not Helpful , Don't KUDOS This
posted

EvianBubble wrote:

qilliam wrote:

[Dream]
I don't know why the spacing for streams are different from everything else... but whatever Lol that's 'cus ... I don't like having notes too close together, it looks bad IMO ;P
01:01:926 - add note... i think it would play better Erm, there's already a note here ... O_O

Looks good.
Thanks for looking but I didn't change anything, sorry :(
lol i copy pasted time wrong

01:04:026 - add note
posted
Wow didn't expect this many stars lol

Cry:
00:09:126(1) - 2 grids down for the end point
00:12:126(1) - 1 grid up for the end point
00:27:726(5) - Aline it with (4)
00:40:926(1) - 2 grids up for the end point
00:58:926(2) - 1 grid left for the end point.
01:01:326(3) - 1-2 grids right for the end point
01:04:626(4) - Aline it between (3) and (5)

Smile:
00:10:926(3) - 1 grid up for the end point
00:20:526(5) - 2 grids right for the end point
00:52:926(1) - 1 grid right for the end point
01:00:126(2) - 2 grids up
01:23:526(4) - 2 grids up for the end point

Dream:
00:12:126(1) - 1 grid up for the end point
00:19:326(3) - 1 grid right for the 2nd point and 2 grids up for the end point.
00:20:526(5) - 1 grid down for the end point
00:31:926(3) - x:232 y:8 for the 2nd point and x:312 y:32 for the end point
00:37:926(4) - 1 grid left for the end point
00:42:126(3) - 1 grid up
00:51:126(3) - x:64 y:80 for the end point

Alright this is the best i can do. GL :D
posted

net45291 wrote:

As per your Request

General


Nothing :P

Cry

00:16:926 (3) - New Combo No for consistency's sake
00:18:726 (2) - Finish at end ? Added but softer
00:24:126 (4) - Finish instead Whistle ? I think whistle fits better here
00:27:426 (4) - New Combo No
00:47:226 (x) - Add note ? , I heard Finish sound here. Orz I think ... you are right O_O Although ... I don't think a note would fit here, sorry

Smile

00:19:326 (4) - Finish ? Yea
00:47:226 (x) - Orz Orz I added note here with quiet finish and deleted the next one

Dream

00:19:326 (3) - Finish...... ? Done

That's all I can find a mistake for you.

If this Mod not Helpful , Don't KUDOS This
Thanks, your mod was helpful :)

qilliam wrote:

lol i copy pasted time wrong

01:04:026 - add note
Oh OK XD I added it :P
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