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Andrea
[General]

Could you find a better mp3? This doesn't sound so good to me. Also, the timing seems to go a bit off on some parts due to that.


Cute song, mapset seems to be pretty good already.
Topic Starter
EvianBubble

Shourinkai wrote:

Love it. ^^

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osuplayer111 wrote:

[General]

Could you find a better mp3? This doesn't sound so good to me. Also, the timing seems to go a bit off on some parts due to that.


Cute song, mapset seems to be pretty good already.
OK, I will try to find a better mp3. As for timing, I've already asked people for help at the beginning, apparently it's a bit weird, so ... I'll ask for recheck after I change the mp3 though :P
kanpakyin
Timing check:
BPM//Offset:
100//126

Not 100% Sure but you can have a try!
Good luck with this!!
Topic Starter
EvianBubble

kanpakyin wrote:

Timing check:
BPM//Offset:
100//126

Not 100% Sure but you can have a try!
Good luck with this!!
Sorry for late reply, but fixed. Thank you :)
Shiirn
General
0.5 tick rate is now unrankable, use 1 or 2, whichever you think sounds better (read: 1)

Cry

omg no issues

Smile
Like, everything is unsnapped.
no issues with patterns

Dream
also unsnapped
ok
Topic Starter
EvianBubble

Shiirn wrote:

General
0.5 tick rate is now unrankable, use 1 or 2, whichever you think sounds better (read: 1)

Cry

omg no issues

Smile
Like, everything is unsnapped.
no issues with patterns

Dream
also unsnapped
ok
Everything fixed ... *insert rage about tick rate here*. Thank you :)
Kenezz
Heeeya o/
Kenezz's Bakamod

General
  1. IMO the combo colour 4 looks better if this were soft yellow because the BG and Video/VideoLyrics have this and double blue is a bit weird~
  2. 01:13:326 - 01:13:776 - This Part sounds cool with normal hitnormal~
  3. 01:16:326 (8) - eerr the finish of this note sounds a bit strong, change for whistle~
Cry
  1. CS -1 to all the difficulties are different in this aspect, and make a cute flow; Cry 3, Smile 4 and Dream 5~
  2. 00:24:126 - Make a slider that start here and end at 00:24:726, the flow of voice you have been made with sliders is cool but here missing~
  3. 00:26:826 - Put a Repeat slider here same as: http://puu.sh/4uaK the teack mark a piano repeat also sounds better with slider~
  4. 01:25:026 (1,2) - Try Crtl+R sounds better? :D if you agree, remove the finish of (1) and put finish at the end of the slider~
  5. Pretty :3
Smile
  1. 00:09:126 (2) - make this slider a repeat slider sounds better imo, or try this http://puu.sh/4ued
  2. 00:49:326 (5) - Add a repeat? imo with repeat the track follow better~
  3. Nice, nothing more to add~
Dream
  1. 01:11:976 (1) - mm this slider sounds a bit weird where it is now, my suggestion: move this 1/4 forward, reduce the lenght 1/4 and add finish at the start also put a stack note here 01:11:976 http://puu.sh/4ufN
  2. 01:19:326 (1) - Try add another repeat, if you agree obviously remove this note 01:20:226 (2)
  3. 01:24:426 - Add a note here? same as above rhythm~
  4. Well Made ^^
Ok, That's all~
Good Luck with the rank : D!!
btw I'm waiting for the cookies
Esupanitix
Anyohaseyo!

Cry
Difficulty issues; I think everything's a little too high, unless it's meant as a Normal. If so, then my apologies.

Nothing serious.

Smile
In short, just follow the distance snap. Since I can't tell through the unabided distance snap, I can't mod this map.

Dream
Very nice. Only problem; For its star level, it's a tad easy.


All in all, this map's very well made if I can't find any major nitpicks with it.
Mogsy
Quite a lot of nitpicking will be going on here, especially in the hitsound department.

Slidertick: 2 (The map feels rather empty otherwise)

I also think you should add a custom comboburst or two, perhaps of the two main characters?

Cry:
  1. 00:18:426 (1) - Remove the Whistle.
  2. 00:18:726 (2) - Only the last point should have a Whistle.
  3. 00:23:526 (3) - The first point should have a Whistle, not the first.
  4. 00:31:326 (1) - Remove the Whistle.
  5. 00:37:326 (2) - ^
  6. 00:37:926 (4) - Add a Whistle.
  7. 00:38:826 (2) - Remove the Whistle.
  8. 00:42:726 (4) - Remove the Whistle from the endpoint.
  9. 00:43:626 (1) - Only the second point of this should have a Whistle.
  10. 00:45:726 (3) - Add a Whistle to the first point.
  11. 00:51:426 (3) - Remove the Whistle.
  12. 00:51:726 (4) - Add a Whistle to the endpoint.
  13. 00:52:926 (1) - Remove the Whistle from the endpoint.
  14. 01:02:526 (1) - Remove the Finish from the starting point, add a Clap to the endpoint.
  15. 01:04:926 (5) - Finishes on both points.
  16. 01:06:426 (1) - Second point should have a Whistle.
  17. 01:12:126 (1) - Remove the Finish, place a Whistle on the endpoint.
  18. 01:14:526 (1,2) - Shorten these both by 1/4 (I think they'll be easy enough for a beginner and they'll sound better). Put Claps on both endpoints instead of Whistles (so each slider is Finish, Clap).
Smile:
  1. 00:18:726 (2) - Remove the Whistle.
  2. 00:22:626 (2) - ^
  3. 00:22:926 (3) - Put a Whistle on the endpoint.
  4. 00:23:826 (4) - Remove the Whistle.
  5. 00:43:026 (5) - ^
  6. 00:43:626 (1) - ^
  7. 00:49:026 (4) - ^
  8. 00:50:526 (2) - Remove the Whistle from the last point.
  9. 01:04:926 (4) - Add a Finish to each point.
  10. 01:06:726 (2) - Replace the Clap with a Whistle.
  11. 01:12:126 (1) - Place a Clap on the endpoint.
  12. 01:14:526 (1,2) - Add Claps to the endpoints of these sliders.
  13. 01:25:626 (2) - Make this perfectly diagonal with 3. It looks ugly otherwise.
Dream:
  1. 00:13:926 (4) - Remove the Whistle. Going right into a second Whistle after this just does not sound aesthetically pleasing.
  2. 00:18:426 (1) - ^. It feels a little too busy for the start of a phrase.
  3. 00:23:826 (5) - ^. See 00:13:926 (4).
  4. 00:31:326 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - This phrase feels just plain wrong. How come? In other phrases you're at least mapping to clear instrumental patterns whereas here it's a mixture of both that is confusing at best and downright wrong at worst. It doesn't feel right in the map's flow, change it.
  5. 00:51:126 (3) - Add a Whistle to the last point.
  6. 00:53:826 (2) - Remove the Whistle from the last point. It creates a nice-sounding delay that's consistent with the previous note.
  7. 01:04:926 (9,10,11) - This sounds too weak for what you're mapping to. Add Finishes to these three beats.
  8. 01:06:726 (2) - Replace the Clap with a Whistle.
  9. 01:14:976 (3,7) - I'd replace the Whistles with Claps, to emphasize the end of the drumkit''s part.
Topic Starter
EvianBubble

Kenezz wrote:

Heeeya o/
Kenezz's Bakamod

General
  1. IMO the combo colour 4 looks better if this were soft yellow because the BG and Video/VideoLyrics have this and double blue is a bit weird~ Eh, well, I think it's OK, I got the colours from the BG :P
  2. 01:13:326 - 01:13:776 - This Part sounds cool with normal hitnormal~ OK done, but lower volume
  3. 01:16:326 (8) - eerr the finish of this note sounds a bit strong, change for whistle~ No, I like this here
Cry
  1. CS -1 to all the difficulties are different in this aspect, and make a cute flow; Cry 3, Smile 4 and Dream 5~ Sorry I don't think I understand, make the circle size smaller?! O_O
  2. 00:24:126 - Make a slider that start here and end at 00:24:726, the flow of voice you have been made with sliders is cool but here missing~ I understand what you want to say I think but I think that the space / gap here fits nicely :3
  3. 00:26:826 - Put a Repeat slider here same as: http://puu.sh/4uaK the teack mark a piano repeat also sounds better with slider~ Sorry, I think this sounds too clustered D:
  4. 01:25:026 (1,2) - Try Crtl+R sounds better? :D if you agree, remove the finish of (1) and put finish at the end of the slider~ Wow this is a good suggestion, I like how it sounds, but I want it to end on its own beat or circle, as it were, so I'm going to keep this, sorry :(
  5. Pretty :3
Smile
  1. 00:09:126 (2) - make this slider a repeat slider sounds better imo, or try this http://puu.sh/4ued Played around with both of your suggestions, but I think that it sounds better if the slider ends on the downbeat
  2. 00:49:326 (5) - Add a repeat? imo with repeat the track follow better~ Does not sound bad, but I think I might be following the vocal more here? I think this gap is OK
  3. Nice, nothing more to add~
Dream
  1. 01:11:976 (1) - mm this slider sounds a bit weird where it is now, my suggestion: move this 1/4 forward, reduce the lenght 1/4 and add finish at the start also put a stack note here 01:11:976 http://puu.sh/4ufN Done. I was struggling with this section, works very well, thanks :D
  2. 01:19:326 (1) - Try add another repeat, if you agree obviously remove this note 01:20:226 (2) This is fine I think, one more feels like too many for me
  3. 01:24:426 - Add a note here? same as above rhythm~ OK
  4. Well Made ^^
Ok, That's all~
Good Luck with the rank : D!!
btw I'm waiting for the cookies
Thanks! Sorry I didn't use some of your suggestions but it was just personal preference :P
Here are your cookies ;3

Esupanitix wrote:

Anyohaseyo!

Cry
Difficulty issues; I think everything's a little too high, unless it's meant as a Normal. If so, then my apologies.

Nothing serious.

Smile
In short, just follow the distance snap. Since I can't tell through the unabided distance snap, I can't mod this map.

Dream
Very nice. Only problem; For its star level, it's a tad easy.


All in all, this map's very well made if I can't find any major nitpicks with it.
Thanks. I don't think I'll change the diff settings (I think they are easy enough) and distance seems fairly consistent to me in Smile. Thanks for looking :)
Topic Starter
EvianBubble

Mogsworth wrote:

Quite a lot of nitpicking will be going on here, especially in the hitsound department.

Slidertick: 2 (The map feels rather empty otherwise) Sorry, but I really don't like slidertick 2

I also think you should add a custom comboburst or two, perhaps of the two main characters? Lol I always forget about comboburst since I disable them :P I can try finding some pictures though, let's see how that goes :P

Cry:
  1. 00:18:426 (1) - Remove the Whistle.
  2. 00:18:726 (2) - Only the last point should have a Whistle. This combo is fine I think. Otherwise it sounds kind of empty
  3. 00:23:526 (3) - The first point should have a Whistle, not the first. ... Eh?
  4. 00:31:326 (1) - Remove the Whistle. Done
  5. 00:37:326 (2) - ^
  6. 00:37:926 (4) - Add a Whistle. OK
  7. 00:38:826 (2) - Remove the Whistle. Sure
  8. 00:42:726 (4) - Remove the Whistle from the endpoint. Done as well
  9. 00:43:626 (1) - Only the second point of this should have a Whistle. This is fine
  10. 00:45:726 (3) - Add a Whistle to the first point. Doesn't fit with its surrounding hitsounds IMO
  11. 00:51:426 (3) - Remove the Whistle.
  12. 00:51:726 (4) - Add a Whistle to the endpoint. Sounds better as is
  13. 00:52:926 (1) - Remove the Whistle from the endpoint. OK
  14. 01:02:526 (1) - Remove the Finish from the starting point, add a Clap to the endpoint. Originally didn't have the finish but I like it now. Don't think clap fits
  15. 01:04:926 (5) - Finishes on both points. Wow, fits in nicely. Lowered the volume though
  16. 01:06:426 (1) - Second point should have a Whistle. Keeping it on clap (I don't like two hitsounds at once)
  17. 01:12:126 (1) - Remove the Finish, place a Whistle on the endpoint. I'm keeping the finish, but endpoint hitsounds have been changed already (not your suggestion though)
  18. 01:14:526 (1,2) - Shorten these both by 1/4 (I think they'll be easy enough for a beginner and they'll sound better). Put Claps on both endpoints instead of Whistles (so each slider is Finish, Clap). Although the sliders would fit better shorter, it would be the sound as Smile and I think these fit quite well, actually. Sorry, not changing anything here
Smile:
  1. 00:18:726 (2) - Remove the Whistle. No
  2. 00:22:626 (2) - ^
  3. 00:22:926 (3) - Put a Whistle on the endpoint.
  4. 00:23:826 (4) - Remove the Whistle. Did this part. No idea what I was hitsounding to lol
  5. 00:43:026 (5) - ^
  6. 00:43:626 (1) - ^
  7. 00:49:026 (4) - ^ Keeping this one
  8. 00:50:526 (2) - Remove the Whistle from the last point. This too
  9. 01:04:926 (4) - Add a Finish to each point. Kept whistle for the middle, otherwise done
  10. 01:06:726 (2) - Replace the Clap with a Whistle. Don't think it would fit
  11. 01:12:126 (1) - Place a Clap on the endpoint. No
  12. 01:14:526 (1,2) - Add Claps to the endpoints of these sliders. I think whistle sounds better here
  13. 01:25:626 (2) - Make this perfectly diagonal with 3. It looks ugly otherwise. Fixed
Dream:
  1. 00:13:926 (4) - Remove the Whistle. Going right into a second Whistle after this just does not sound aesthetically pleasing. OK
  2. 00:18:426 (1) - ^. It feels a little too busy for the start of a phrase. Sorry, I really do like this pickup whistle :P
  3. 00:23:826 (5) - ^. See 00:13:926 (4). This sounds better to me than the first one, sorry (no clue why though lol)
  4. 00:31:326 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - This phrase feels just plain wrong. How come? In other phrases you're at least mapping to clear instrumental patterns whereas here it's a mixture of both that is confusing at best and downright wrong at worst. It doesn't feel right in the map's flow, change it. All right, I deleted (2) and (4) so it fits more with the piano part. I think the last half is fine, I personally quite like how it flows. Hope that this is better for you
  5. 00:51:126 (3) - Add a Whistle to the last point. I don't like the sound of this, sorry
  6. 00:53:826 (2) - Remove the Whistle from the last point. It creates a nice-sounding delay that's consistent with the previous note. Hmm, OK. I added it 'cus I thought it would be like a build up, but your way works too
  7. 01:04:926 (9,10,11) - This sounds too weak for what you're mapping to. Add Finishes to these three beats. As I did previously, only to the ones on the end.
  8. 01:06:726 (2) - Replace the Clap with a Whistle. No
  9. 01:14:976 (3,7) - I'd replace the Whistles with Claps, to emphasize the end of the drumkit''s part. I don't really like claps here, sorry
Thank you for such a thorough mod :)
Suimya
inb4 this was bubbled =.="

[Cry]
01:02:526 (1) - clap at the end of the sliders
nothing much i guess

[Smile]
00:28:926 (6) - new combo
00:29:226 (1) - remove the new combo
00:42:726 (4) - new combo
01:23:526 (4) - this slider sounds weird O.o

[Dream]
00:26:526 (4) - new combo
nothing i guess o.o

nice map i hope you it get ranked soon >~<
Mogsy
I'm sticking to my guns on the Claps I suggested, since they fit in with the rest of the surrounding hitsounds. The rest is subjective, even if I think they sound ugly otherwise.

Really, the slidertick makes the map sound less empty. It's boring.

Also, find a comboburst.
Topic Starter
EvianBubble

-Sekai- wrote:

inb4 this was bubbled =.=" Ha! If you knew my luck with these things you wouldn't be saying that lol XD

[Cry]
01:02:526 (1) - clap at the end of the sliders Sorry ... I know you and Mogs said this but I really don't think it fits here >_<
nothing much i guess

[Smile]
00:28:926 (6) - new combo
00:29:226 (1) - remove the new combo Going to keep it this way for consistency (all the other diffs are like that)
00:42:726 (4) - new combo I think then this would be too short ... sorry D:
01:23:526 (4) - this slider sounds weird O.o Eh ... how do you mean? I think it fits OK >_<

[Dream]
00:26:526 (4) - new combo Sorry, this doesn't really feel like a NC to me :S
nothing i guess o.o

nice map i hope you it get ranked soon >~<
Sorry I didn't change anything ... but thank you anyways :P

Mogsworth wrote:

I'm sticking to my guns on the Claps I suggested, since they fit in with the rest of the surrounding hitsounds. The rest is subjective, even if I think they sound ugly otherwise.

Really, the slidertick makes the map sound less empty. It's boring.

Also, find a comboburst.
OK, I'll compromise your claps - I changed the whistles to claps for the first one, but kept whistle on the second. I was going for the "emptiness" actually, I thought it fit in OK. Trying to find a comboburst, but it's harder than I expected - you have to get the chara on a clear BG or else it turns up as a really odd rectangle O_O I tried doing it myself but it just looked really ugly -_-" So I am going to try and ask someone for help :P

EDIT: It appears I've found a way to make it look less ugly :P
Chewin
Little mod, they are semi-perfect xD :)

Dream:

00:37:926 (4) - Waypoint to create a good blanket: http://puu.sh/4IaS
01:24:126 (6) - New combo
01:24:726 (1) - No new combo

Smile:

00:15:726 (2) - Move it at x:168 y:192?
00:16:926 (4) - New combo?
00:26:526 (3) - ^
00:28:926 (1) - ^
00:29:226 (1) - No new combo
01:04:926 (4) - New combo?
01:07:326 (4) - ^

Cry:

Perfect.

Okay, good maps. I hope it will be ranked soon ~
Topic Starter
EvianBubble

Chewin wrote:

Little mod, they are semi-perfect xD :)

Dream:

00:37:926 (4) - Waypoint to create a good blanket: http://puu.sh/4IaS Teehee, blankets XD (Read: done. Or at least I tried my best ...)
01:24:126 (6) - New combo
01:24:726 (1) - No new combo Done

Smile:

00:15:726 (2) - Move it at x:168 y:192? Looks cleaner but too far I think, so not changing
00:16:926 (4) - New combo? No
00:26:526 (3) - ^
00:28:926 (1) - ^
00:29:226 (1) - No new combo
01:04:926 (4) - New combo?
01:07:326 (4) - ^ These I want to keep consistent w/ the other diffs

Cry:

Perfect.

Okay, good maps. I hope it will be ranked soon ~
Thank you very much :) I hope so too haha XD
Sandpig
Dream

01:00:726 - it would be better to follow the vocal here like:



01:03:126 - try rhythm like this:



01:04:926 (9,10,11) - you can increase the distance for them
01:09:426 (1,2) - stack?
01:16:326 (8,9,10) - these three notes play really bad, I'd recommand a spinner(01:16:026 - 01:17:226) here instead


Smile

looks fine


Cry

fine
Topic Starter
EvianBubble

Sandpig wrote:

Dream

01:00:726 - it would be better to follow the vocal here like: While this doesn't sound bad, I like following the beat more here (someone else said that the vocals switch to 1/6 beat, so I'd prefer not to map exactly that for most of it)



01:03:126 - try rhythm like this: This doesn't sound half bad actually, but I'd prefer it the way it is



01:04:926 (9,10,11) - you can increase the distance for them I'm pretty bad with jumps but OK, let's see how this works out XD
01:09:426 (1,2) - stack? OK
01:16:326 (8,9,10) - these three notes play really bad, I'd recommand a spinner(01:16:026 - 01:17:226) here instead I actually quite like these, would you mind telling me why you don't like them? Maybe I can change them or something


Smile

looks fine


Cry

fine
Thanks! Sorry for the late reply >_<
Shadow
4th Mod! :)

Cant find anything really wrong! Good job :)

[General]

All diffs use 100bpm + 126 offset (Timing is good)
All diffs have a preview point.
All diffs are snapped properly.
Background is correct size.
MP3 is 196 bit-rate.
Looking good! :)

[Cry]

00:55:326 (1,2,3,4,5) - See screenshot :3


[Smile]

00:26:526 (1) - New Combo, to follow vocals?
00:47:826 (2) - whistle on end maybe?

Love the clap hitsounds on the end, it fits, good job :)

[Dream]
00:16:326 (2) - whistle maybe?
00:16:626 (x) - new hit circle + whistle maybe? (stack with 2)
Topic Starter
EvianBubble

ShadowLord wrote:

4th Mod! :)

Cant find anything really wrong! Good job :)

[General]

All diffs use 100bpm + 126 offset (Timing is good)
All diffs have a preview point.
All diffs are snapped properly.
Background is correct size.
MP3 is 196 bit-rate.
Looking good! :)

[Cry]

00:55:326 (1,2,3,4,5) - See screenshot :3 Changed


[Smile]

00:26:526 (1) - New Combo, to follow vocals? Gonna keep this since it's the same in Cry
00:47:826 (2) - whistle on end maybe? I don't really like this here, sorry

Love the clap hitsounds on the end, it fits, good job :)

[Dream]
00:16:326 (2) - whistle maybe? Hmm, I think that'd be too much whistle :P
00:16:626 (x) - new hit circle + whistle maybe? (stack with 2) OK, added
Thanks! Finally, another mod! Haha XD
HellDawn
Cry
00:19:326- finish.
Nice diff

Smile
00:59:226- Spacing Dont forget preview note
01:26:526- ^

Dream
00:19:326- Finish.
01:00:726- Remove clap put whistle
01:01:026- Add a note

Good luck,Nice mapset
Topic Starter
EvianBubble

HellDawn wrote:

Cry
00:19:326- finish. Don't think this fits sorry
Nice diff

Smile
00:59:226- Spacing Dont forget preview note Spacing looks fine here? Not too sure what you mean by "preview note" sorry ...
01:26:526- ^

Dream
00:19:326- Finish.
01:00:726- Remove clap put whistle I think clap sounds better
01:01:026- Add a note OK

Good luck,Nice mapset
Thanks for your mod :)
Tanmak
Good job~! Kona chan.

I looked that, but there is no modding.

:roll:

Your message is too short.
Verdisphena
General:
Offset: 143?

Dream
Did you check the spacing?

00:38:226 (T) - Move this to 00:38:526 -
01:13:776 (T) - Delete that
01:13:793 (x) - Add a note
01:13:926 (6) - Delete the clap
01:14:093 (x) - Add a note

Smile:
Please check the spacing

00:15:726 (2) - Make this slider like this
01:13:326 (2) - Delete the clap ( 01:13:926 - )

Cry:
AR -1
Check the spacing

Fine
Topic Starter
EvianBubble

Tanmak wrote:

Good job~! Kona chan.

I looked that, but there is no modding.

:roll:

Your message is too short.
Haha OK, thanks for looking :)

Verdisphena wrote:

General:
Offset: 143? I am not very good with timing, so I am going to leave it as is so I don't mess anything up

Dream
Did you check the spacing?

00:38:226 (T) - Move this to 00:38:526 - Sorry ... what's T? O_O
01:13:776 (T) - Delete that
01:13:793 (x) - Add a note Done
01:13:926 (6) - Delete the clap No
01:14:093 (x) - Add a note OK

Smile:
Please check the spacing

00:15:726 (2) - Make this slider like this I'm not entirely sure if I did what you thought but I changed the slider point slightly
01:13:326 (2) - Delete the clap ( 01:13:926 - ) I think this is OK

Cry:
AR -1 OK
Check the spacing

Fine
Thank you :D
mochi
[Dream]
I don't know why the spacing for streams are different from everything else... but whatever
01:01:926 - add note... i think it would play better

Looks good.
Topic Starter
EvianBubble

qilliam wrote:

[Dream]
I don't know why the spacing for streams are different from everything else... but whatever Lol that's 'cus ... I don't like having notes too close together, it looks bad IMO ;P
01:01:926 - add note... i think it would play better Erm, there's already a note here ... O_O

Looks good.
Thanks for looking but I didn't change anything, sorry :(
net45291
As per your Request
Mod ( ' w ')/

General


Nothing :P

Cry

00:16:926 (3) - New Combo
00:18:726 (2) - Finish at end ?
00:24:126 (4) - Finish instead Whistle ?
00:27:426 (4) - New Combo
00:47:226 (x) - Add note ? , I heard Finish sound here. Orz

Smile

00:19:326 (4) - Finish ?
00:47:226 (x) - Orz Orz

Dream

00:19:326 (3) - Finish...... ?
That's all I can find a mistake for you.

If this Mod not Helpful , Don't KUDOS This
mochi

EvianBubble wrote:

qilliam wrote:

[Dream]
I don't know why the spacing for streams are different from everything else... but whatever Lol that's 'cus ... I don't like having notes too close together, it looks bad IMO ;P
01:01:926 - add note... i think it would play better Erm, there's already a note here ... O_O

Looks good.
Thanks for looking but I didn't change anything, sorry :(
lol i copy pasted time wrong

01:04:026 - add note
YTYuyu
Wow didn't expect this many stars lol

Cry:
00:09:126(1) - 2 grids down for the end point
00:12:126(1) - 1 grid up for the end point
00:27:726(5) - Aline it with (4)
00:40:926(1) - 2 grids up for the end point
00:58:926(2) - 1 grid left for the end point.
01:01:326(3) - 1-2 grids right for the end point
01:04:626(4) - Aline it between (3) and (5)

Smile:
00:10:926(3) - 1 grid up for the end point
00:20:526(5) - 2 grids right for the end point
00:52:926(1) - 1 grid right for the end point
01:00:126(2) - 2 grids up
01:23:526(4) - 2 grids up for the end point

Dream:
00:12:126(1) - 1 grid up for the end point
00:19:326(3) - 1 grid right for the 2nd point and 2 grids up for the end point.
00:20:526(5) - 1 grid down for the end point
00:31:926(3) - x:232 y:8 for the 2nd point and x:312 y:32 for the end point
00:37:926(4) - 1 grid left for the end point
00:42:126(3) - 1 grid up
00:51:126(3) - x:64 y:80 for the end point

Alright this is the best i can do. GL :D
Topic Starter
EvianBubble

net45291 wrote:

As per your Request
Mod ( ' w ')/

General


Nothing :P

Cry

00:16:926 (3) - New Combo No for consistency's sake
00:18:726 (2) - Finish at end ? Added but softer
00:24:126 (4) - Finish instead Whistle ? I think whistle fits better here
00:27:426 (4) - New Combo No
00:47:226 (x) - Add note ? , I heard Finish sound here. Orz I think ... you are right O_O Although ... I don't think a note would fit here, sorry

Smile

00:19:326 (4) - Finish ? Yea
00:47:226 (x) - Orz Orz I added note here with quiet finish and deleted the next one

Dream

00:19:326 (3) - Finish...... ? Done
That's all I can find a mistake for you.

If this Mod not Helpful , Don't KUDOS This
Thanks, your mod was helpful :)

qilliam wrote:

lol i copy pasted time wrong

01:04:026 - add note
Oh OK XD I added it :P
Topic Starter
EvianBubble

Byakugan249 wrote:

Wow didn't expect this many stars lol

Cry:
00:09:126(1) - 2 grids down for the end point OK
00:12:126(1) - 1 grid up for the end point Done
00:27:726(5) - Aline it with (4) No, purposely not aligned
00:40:926(1) - 2 grids up for the end point Kind of looks funny and messed up spacing so keeping this
00:58:926(2) - 1 grid left for the end point. Yep
01:01:326(3) - 1-2 grids right for the end point Moved one grid right
01:04:626(4) - Aline it between (3) and (5) Nah, I kinda like the not alignedness here

Smile:
00:10:926(3) - 1 grid up for the end point Looks better as is
00:20:526(5) - 2 grids right for the end point OK
00:52:926(1) - 1 grid right for the end point Done
01:00:126(2) - 2 grids up I think you have the wrong note / timing here? At any rate, I think this part is fine
01:23:526(4) - 2 grids up for the end point Sure

Dream:
00:12:126(1) - 1 grid up for the end point I think the spacing is better untouched
00:19:326(3) - 1 grid right for the 2nd point and 2 grids up for the end point. Did the middle one but keeping the end
00:20:526(5) - 1 grid down for the end point OK
00:31:926(3) - x:232 y:8 for the 2nd point and x:312 y:32 for the end point Think this looks better as is
00:37:926(4) - 1 grid left for the end point It curves around better without changes
00:42:126(3) - 1 grid up Gonna keep this since it's not really grid snapped atm (for spacing)
00:51:126(3) - x:64 y:80 for the end point I like it better as is

Alright this is the best i can do. GL :D
Thanks a lot! :)
S h i o n
Hi,EvianBubble~
So many stars!! (so you won't care about me not giving one because I don't have many) :P


[General]
fine (offset fine to me)

[Cry]
00:09:126 (1) - Try this.You start beats from 00:08:826 in the other two diffs and it also sounds better.

00:21:726 (1) - Curve more.

01:06:426 (1) - Curve it.

[Smile]
00:34:026 (1) - remove NC (New Combo)
00:34:926 (3) - NC
00:36:726 (1) - remove NC
00:56:526 (3) - 2 grids down & 2girs right to the end point
01:25:626 (2) - Using one slider(without reverse) instead and remove (3) since 2nd & 3rd beats are awkward.

[Dream]
00:26:826 (5,6,7) -Using slider(with reverse) instead beacause three notes play quite bad here.
00:56:826 (6) - Remove finish from the first beat and add to the third.
01:25:926 (5,6) - Use a slider instead.Here vocal slows down so it is hard to follow ,and a slider might be easier to do this.

Nice song and good map.

Good luck for ranking~~
Topic Starter
EvianBubble

S h i o n wrote:

Hi,EvianBubble~
So many stars!! (so you won't care about me not giving one because I don't have many) :P LOL that's fine haha XD


[General]
fine (offset fine to me)

[Cry]
00:09:126 (1) - Try this.You start beats from 00:08:826 in the other two diffs and it also sounds better. I think the current starting point sounds better, sorry

00:21:726 (1) - Curve more. OK

01:06:426 (1) - Curve it. This looks better straight IMO

[Smile]
00:34:026 (1) - remove NC (New Combo)
00:34:926 (3) - NC
00:36:726 (1) - remove NC I think my original combos fit better, sorry
00:56:526 (3) - 2 grids down & 2girs right to the end point Done
01:25:626 (2) - Using one slider(without reverse) instead and remove (3) since 2nd & 3rd beats are awkward. Sorry I like having the last note by itself

[Dream]
00:26:826 (5,6,7) -Using slider(with reverse) instead beacause three notes play quite bad here. OK, changed
00:56:826 (6) - Remove finish from the first beat and add to the third. Er, there is no finish here XD I don't think I will add to the last bit though I think it clashes with the whistle on (1) of the next beat
01:25:926 (5,6) - Use a slider instead.Here vocal slows down so it is hard to follow ,and a slider might be easier to do this. Yea, sorry I think notes fit better here

Nice song and good map.

Good luck for ranking~~
Thanks a lot for your mod :)
Lidan
Hey :3

[Dream]
  1. 01:11:076 (6) - Add clap?
[Cry]
  1. Circle Size+1?
Couldn't find more, nice map :)
narakucrimson
Heyya Evian!

[General]
  1. Can you make the pink combo colour a little bit stronger? It's kind of hard to distinguish in some parts of the song because of how it blends with the video~
  2. What is HM.flv doing in the folder? After a quick check in the .osu files, it looks like you don't use it for anything. You should remove it. Sorry if you have to FS. Also:
    SPOILER
    13 MB, WTF? Something must be wrong here specially because the map weights 11 MB when downloaded...
  3. Since the english version of the source anime is "Wandering Son", you should remove the from the tags.
  4. About the timing:
    The timing felt off in some parts. I tried timing it correctly and got these three sections:
    SPOILER
    1. BPM: 100,00 Offset: 128
    2. BPM: 100,00 Offset: 55318
    3. BPM: 96,00 Offset: 85318
    I'll try to get someone to check it. In the meanwhile, you do the same.
[Smile]
  1. It would feel nicer to play if it had OD 4 imo :3
Fix those things, and all that will remain is doing a timing check~
Oh and if you change the timing now, remember to resnap everything in every difficulty. Don't forget about resnapping the kiais!

Good luck!
Topic Starter
EvianBubble

L i d a N wrote:

Hey :3

[Dream]
  1. 01:11:076 (6) - Add clap? Don't really like how it sounds there, sorry
[Cry]
  1. Circle Size+1? You mean bigger? No ... I don't like the largest size, sorry
Couldn't find more, nice map :)
Thanks for looking but I didn't change anything :P

narakucrimson wrote:

Heyya Evian!

[General]
  1. Can you make the pink combo colour a little bit stronger? It's kind of hard to distinguish in some parts of the song because of how it blends with the video~ Hmm OK, I hope the new one is better
  2. What is HM.flv doing in the folder? After a quick check in the .osu files, it looks like you don't use it for anything. You should remove it. Sorry if you have to FS. Also: Weird ... you must have an old version of the map. This is what you should be getting. I've full submitted just in case, though
    SPOILER
    13 MB, WTF? Something must be wrong here specially because the map weights 11 MB when downloaded...
  3. Since the english version of the source anime is "Wandering Son", you should remove the from the tags. OK
  4. About the timing:
    The timing felt off in some parts. I tried timing it correctly and got these three sections: I'm not sure about timing either, so I'm not going to change anything for now. I'll try to ask a BAT or someone to check it, since I'm not too good at stuff like this :S
    SPOILER
    1. BPM: 100,00 Offset: 128
    2. BPM: 100,00 Offset: 55318
    3. BPM: 96,00 Offset: 85318
    I'll try to get someone to check it. In the meanwhile, you do the same.
[Smile]
  1. It would feel nicer to play if it had OD 4 imo :3 Changed
Fix those things, and all that will remain is doing a timing check~
Oh and if you change the timing now, remember to resnap everything in every difficulty. Don't forget about resnapping the kiais!

Good luck!
Thanks a lot. I will try to get someone to check the timing :P
Lol and you said you would have to take a while ... XD

EDIT: I asked lolcubes and he said that the timing was great. Will ask around for more opinions but I think the current one is OK :O
narakucrimson
I don't know, 00:55:326 (1) sounds off to me, and 01:26:526 (6) feels too early. Please get someone else to confirm that :O
Shiro
Was asked for timing help.

Timing very accurately this map would be extremely difficult as the piano goes faster or slower at times, but this timing should be good enough to be played:

offset 136 || BPM 100,010
offset 85978 || BPM 99,000
Topic Starter
EvianBubble

Odaril wrote:

Was asked for timing help.

Timing very accurately this map would be extremely difficult as the piano goes faster or slower at times, but this timing should be good enough to be played:

offset 136 || BPM 100,010
offset 85978 || BPM 99,000
Fixed. Ending updated appropriately to avoid sliders awkwardly in the middle of the beat change and stuff :P
Combo colours also updated
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