Odaril wrote:

Please reply to this mod saying what you didn't fix (and what you fixed) and why. okay =)
Also, if you have any question, feel free to ask me in-game

General
Add "impossiblexu" and "Zorlok" to the tags of all difficulties. (maybe "after" too) done

Normal
I like what you did with the slideticks at the end a lot. <3 thanks, some people say that it's not good though

Hard
Seems fine, although I don't like that almost stacked sliders like 01:56:052 (1,2,3) - because it's hard to read and confusing to play. simplified all 3 places, where they were used

impossiblexu's Easy
01:37:602 (1) - This slider's second repeat is hidden under hitbursts. i will say him about this problem :S

Zorlok's Taiko
I don't like it much because these streams don't make sense to me, but it's just me. it can't be helped i think =(

Odaril wrote:

impossiblexu's Easy
01:37:602 (1) - This slider's second repeat is hidden under hitbursts. Fixed Thanks a lot~

Sandpig wrote:

I have made some mod then I realize that it is bubbled.

just take a look:

SPOILER

Hard

00:34:452 (6) - end it 1/4 earlier maybe i'll change it if the bubble gets popped (though it sounds ok on the blue tick before note, so i don't think it have to be shorten)
00:38:802 - add a note here? the head of 00:38:952 (1) is hard to catch, and it feels not good by playing. no
00:55:602 - add a note and for the same reason. single circle on blue tick is always a little confusing, people who never heard the song before can hardly recognize that they are on blue tick. with another note before or following plays better. no
01:36:252 (1,2) - try 5-note-slider and 3-note-slider this version is harder to play


Normal

same problem like that in hard (notes on blue tick), but it seems hard to make any change in this diff, so let it be o.o


Xu's Easy

nice

神easy o.o

some issues imo but they are not serious and the mapset is overall good

what else I'd like to mention is that I personally don't think this BG fit here..... although it's one of Tomoyo's CG. this one reminds me of the song "Ana" and brings me a feel of warm and harmony , what is opposite to your song's style.

have a star. Thanks :3

Sallad4ever wrote:

ouch it's bubble :o it's Super Slow Sallad modding queue :D

I think that some stack and 1/2 sliders in impossiblexu's Easy are kinda Hard for an Easy diff, but it's not downright impossible so it's fine~

I agree with Sandpig about the BG. I want a bright theme BG that fit the song :P I disagree with you guys, BG fits the song. It's strongly individually

Good Luck, hope this get ranked soon~
Star Thank you :3

James2250 wrote:

Normal:
-I don't see the slider ticks that are right at the end of the sliders while on test, quickly look into that they just hide when they're at the 1/4 beat distance from the end of the slider
01:04:002 (3) - seems like a random finish as its the only one used in this part of the map fixed

Zorlok's Taiko:
-Looks ok but it would be nice to get a taiko modder to look over it too arien666 already modded it~ ok will find someone else
-2.0 SV even if its a slow song...hummm fixed
00:16:902 (8,1) - it is strongly recommend spinners stay 1/2 apart from any other notes fixed
01:18:402 (1,1,1) - seems pretty uncreative to me (even for taiko) mapped other way =)
01:53:952 (7,8) - normally isn't a good idea to have finishes so close fixed

also changed 01:44:802 (1)'s shape in hard

wmfchris wrote:

mod

arien666 wrote:

Since onion chip was made from somewhere, remodding about Taiko ;_;

[Zorlok's Taiko]
00:49:002 (1) - I think it would be better if this is slider ;_;
01:41:952 (39,40) - ka don
01:46:752 (59,60) - ^

Whatever orz...
Good luck :3

Snowy Dream wrote:

OK,so perfect.
Nothing to mod.
Star~☆

Kite wrote:

[Timing]
Offset seems too early for me; +10 ms IMO (1.612) no, seems ok for me

[impossiblexu's Easy]
01:18:402 - Why don't you map this break? Seeing as it is the kiai in the other difficulties and the song length is only 2 minutes. easy should have break, and next part is almost similar to this, i think it's ok

[Normal]
Tickrate 0.5? no
00:55:752 (1) - This feels a bit weird while playing; change 00:55:302 (3) into a slider ending at 00:55:752? Ok

[Overall]
Great mapset; the difficulty spread couldn't be better, good job! thanks :3

1. I've a question about the BG :3 (I'm a super fan of CLANNAD :D) as we all know, '彼女の本気' is the background music for scenes of school or daily life. so this is BG is not fitting the song well OTL. and can I ask you for selecting another CG for the background image of this song? if you cannot, I think I can give assistance to you
2. Tags: 'Tomoyo after Zorlok' remove this, this song is not from Tomoyo after and we won't get anything by searching zorlok

1. 00:20:052 (9) - not fitting music well, try to end this slider at 00:20:352 and add note at 00:20:652. of course plz rearrange the placement
2. 00:26:502 (3) - this slowdown is a bit painful for playing, consider keep the x1.0 speed here. you can try to change the way 00:25:002 (6,7,8,1,2) are placed and make room for a x1.0 slider :3
3. 00:34:302 (5) - new combo
4. 00:55:602 (T) - 1 note here?
5. 01:14:502 (1) - 1 nore here and star the spinner at 01:14:652.
6. 01:39:552 (7,8) - exchange whistle
7. 01:41:952 (6) - ^
8. 01:41:952 (6) - ^
9. 01:46:752 (6,7) - ^
10. 01:48:852 (5,6) - move the whistle to 01:49:152
11. 01:51:252 (5,6) - ^
12. 01:56:052 (1) - whistle at 01:56:352
13. 01:56:802 (2) - finish

1. 01:56:802 (4) - finish

Colin Hou wrote:

I'm a super fan of CLANNAD

Tenshi-nyan wrote:

Tomo-pyon <3

A couple of missed claps here and there, but the map seems good so gratz on ra-ahnk :3

NatsumeRin wrote:

congrats~

Sallad4ever wrote:

congratz for the rank~