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ATC - Around The World (Nightcore Mix)

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Tony
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This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Friday, April 15, 2011 at 9:16:30 PM

Artist: ATC
Title: Around The World (Nightcore Mix)
Tags: -_S_e_k_a_i__- A Touch of Class
BPM: 157.13
Filesize: 3678kb
Play Time: 02:58
Difficulties Available:
  1. Insane (4.99 stars, 488 notes)
  2. Normal (3.97 stars, 268 notes)
  3. -Sekai-'s Easy (1.39 stars, 153 notes)
Download: ATC - Around The World (Nightcore Mix)
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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2nd beatmap <3
Lalalala!
Last edited by Tony , edited 71 times in total.
miss_dior
miss_dior
done i hope you like it
:)

Download: ATC - Around The World (Tonoicutzu) [miss_dior's Normal].osu
senaya
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senaya
[General]
Preview Points where? Set them in Timing -> Set Current Position as Preview Point.
At all diffs:
00:19:254 - till here form start I think you should put the volume down. Claps are too loud for me..
00:31:472 - till here you should use lowered volume too, but higher than you use at start. Something in-between them.
01:02:016 - from here till 01:08:125 same as above: medium volume.
02:47:393 - starting from here you can notice the unpleasant sound that sliders make. Maybe mute it?
And also I think that you used too much hitsounds, sometimes it's tiering to play through them all D:

[Normal+]
Maybe circle size +1?
02:03:486 - map this space before the spinner or add a break.
02:12:649 (5) - no clap here? why?
02:58:083 (1) - finish him at 02:59:420 so it will end when music stops?

[miss_dior's Easy]
01:18:815 (4) - you use A LOT of finishes, but you don't use one where the song has? why is that?
01:23:015 (5) - clap, 01:23:397 (1) - finish at start and remove at end?
01:37:141 (4) - repeat another time, finish at end and at 01:38:669 (5) ?

[Insane]
If you lower the AR, you can rename it to Hard, because it's not that hard itself. But it's up to you.
01:30:747 (6) - 1 grid up
02:10:740 - imo, compared with the rest of the song (and other diffs) you need more hitsounds from this point till the end.
02:21:145 (6) - 1 grid up
Mastodonio
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Mastodonio
General:
Set Preview Point

miss dior's easy:
00:31:472 - change the shape of this slider a little.
01:10:416 - ^
Don't forget to delete all the unused lines on this diffcilty after: 01:44:778

Tonoicutzu's Normal:
well,it looks like 'Hard' difficulty :) Put the circle size between Large and Normal. and put Approach Rate on 4. But still it has a lot of notes here :/ I think it will be better if you just rename it in: Hard :)
00:28:418 - this repeat slider had to end in: 00:29:181
01:13:088 - change a little the shape of this slider
01:56:995 - O.O Cool!
02:58:083 - end this spinner in: 02:59:420

Insane:
02:58:083 - finish this spinner in: 02:59:420. Awesome diffculty!
And I know this song - I like it ;) Star!
Tony
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Tony
Well, i have changed most of what you two said :)
thanks alot! :o
Hinacle
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Hinacle
star~!!
ReVeNg3r
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ReVeNg3r
;)
Raffey
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Raffey
:)
Puskin
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Puskin
star :D
Sekai
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Sekai
;)
Last edited by Sekai , edited 1 time in total.
wmfchris
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wmfchris
[general]
Tag guest diff maker's name
countdown box are not unique, either close in all diff or on in all diff
lol the .osb is blank, delete and full sub.

[Insane]
00:07:609 (4) - down 1 grid
00:10:664 (5) - up 1 grid
00:15:627 (5) - make this in better shape... http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/59014
00:20:209 (3~8) - clap clap clap is so loud, try to clap (or use whistle instead) in the last note of stream only, same as many coming pattern please check them yourself
[When there's 7-plet (as I see many in your diff), you can try to use clap on the 3rd and 7th beat]
- also, (6,7,8) uneven spacing
00:34:526 (6) - NC, delete the corresponding NC
00:37:852 (2) - ^
00:38:535 (6) - ^
00:40:635 (5) - ^
01:05:643 (3) - whistle, no clap
01:26:451 (6) - NC, delete the corresponding NC
01:40:769 (4) - the pattern is finish in second tick
01:50~01:55 - random clap, use softer hitsound + regular clap, spinner remove clap
02:23:340 (1,2,3) - uneven spacing
02:23- fix the unregular NC pattern

[Normal+]
USE SOFTER HITSOUND, at least reduce 1/3 of the hitsound
softer part: use regular whistle instead of clap?
00:31:472 (6) - NC, delete the corresponding NC
00:34:526 (5) - ^
00:37:581 (3) - ^
00:40:635 (3) - ^
00:53:998 (s) - finish?
01:06:598 (2) - NC, delete the corresponding NC
01:13:088 (3) - ^
01:16:143 (2) - ^
...

Two things to do:
-claps are too loud for this, I strongly recommend you to try soft whistle, or you can greatly reduce the hitsound. Add some variation, like greater sound in the kiai part.
-regular new combo arrangement, especially during the "la la la" part

[Easy]
ok.

star~
Tony
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Tony
All fixed~ :) ;)
vladutz65
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vladutz65
star
eveless
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eveless
Add -Sekai- Tonoicutzu in tags

[Insane]
let all green lines in line (means Volume's line)
maybe need more hitsounds...
maybe some stream's distance is too hard :x
hp and od are both high for me :<

other seems fine to me

[Normal]
AR+2 OD-1 or 2 HP-1
00:45:997 (4,5) - to use clap instead of finish
00:49:051 (4,5) - ^
same with others

01:26:470 (1,2) - too jump for a normal i think


[Easy]
AR+1

01:24:943 (2) - spacing
Tony
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Tony
SOME ISSUES FIXED :) THANKS :)
Infinity_old
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Infinity_old
star
Hushu_old
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Hushu_old
Hii, sorry for late reply/mod,... Anyways, it is scary how this song firstly is like nightcore but then I hear the difference lol. And thanks for making this song, i heard it before and i like/d it :]

General:
Slider ticks can't be silenced.
You changed the timing and therefore where you were starting other timing sections (e.g Kiai), it does not start on a note. Place all of the timing section on notes please.
I feel multiple speed sections here, it is especially weird at the beginning of Easy, yet all difficulties would feel better with a some timing sections. Maybe do x0.75 till kiai time (put x1 speed back then)~

Easy:
I think the hitsounds volume should be lower by 3 or 4~ (Song Setup --> Audio), like in Normal+

Normal:
0:14:305 - I don't really like how this sounds... put triple circles there instead
0:16:214 - This is where New Combo should start, not on note after
1:42:125 - New combo?
2:19:926 - This is where New combo should start, not on note after.
2:35:199 - ^
2:38:253 - New combo
2:39:781 - Remove New combo
2:40:163 - New combo

...and I did not find anything to poke at in Insane, well done~ :)
Tony
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Tony
updated~
:)
_Kiva
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_Kiva
[insane]

Clap sounds to add(y add clap , sound not bad to me):
00:22:705 (2)-
00:24:614 (3,5)-
00:40:842 (1) -
01:11:579 (2) -
01:14:443 (1) -
01:17:688 (2) -
01:23:797 (2) - put clap on and remove clap from 01:24:179 (5) -
01:26:852 (2) -
01:29:907 (1) -
02:17:253 (2) -
02:20:307 (1)



00:18:123 (2,3,4,5,6) - move 2 grids looks nicer
00:19:460 (1) - put it closer to slider end will be better .. i tryed few times but easy to break slider here
00:40:842 (1) - 01:11:579 (2) - 01:14:443 (1) - 01:17:688 (2) - 01:26:852 (2) - 01:29:907 (1) - 02:17:253 (2) -02:20:307 (1) - clap
02:01:216 (3) - how about rotate slider by 180 (CTRL+< 2TIMES) , if you did dont forget spacing for 02:01:980 (4) -
02:02:744 (5) - finish
02:44:553 (1) - spacing?
02:53:335 (1) - left 1 grid
02:55:435 (1) - right 1 grid
02:56:390 (4) - up 1
Tony
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Tony
thanks! spacing fixed~ i think the hitsounds are good the way they are :)
MathiasXII
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MathiasXII
Omg I lovez you ~

1st for this song
2nd for having the most useful pokemon I ever owned in a pokemon game in your avatar.

Star *
HellDawn
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HellDawn
Great!
threenash
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threenash
:lol:
Hushu_old
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Hushu_old
Something is wrong with the name. The name of the topic is ATC - Around The World (Nightcore mix) but in info of the topic and scoreboard there is no (Nightcore mix). Fix it by changing name and full submitting I quess... (so that is why I though it was Nightcore...)
Also, put Nightcore Mix not Nightcore mix (caps lock m).
IceBeam
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IceBeam
You don't need to put your nickname in Tags,remove it.

Source: Nightcore? I believe Nightcore can't be in Source..as long as Nightcore mentioned in title,remove it from Source.

[Easy]
Could you find some custom clap?

00:17:742 (1) - Change to finish?
00:20:033 (1) - Change to clap?
01:38:689 (5,1) - ^ Same,change clap to finish / finish to clap.
Hitsounds placed a bit randomly,but they fit mostly.
Also,technically map is fine to me,good job.


[Normal +]
00:16:214 (1) - Whistle?
00:34:542 (1) - Stack with 00:33:397 (4).
01:14:252 (4) - Finish?
01:26:470 (1) - ^
01:32:580 (1) - ^
01:38:689 (4) - ^
01:57:016 (1) - Nice slider art.
02:10:762 (1) - Finish? By the way,you changed spacing here?
02:22:980 (1) - Finish?
02:35:199 (8) - ^

[Insane]
Woah,so slight difficulty jump.

02:10:762 - Why not to use Normal sampleset from here? If fits better.

Don't have much to say about it..if you apply finish suggestions from Normal+ - use them here too.

Great song,so nostalgically.
Star.
Tony
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Tony
omg, great mod! thanks :)
Kasen
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Kasen
Only i mod insane, idk how to mod easy and normal because never i player easy or normal maps...

Insane

00:22:133 (3) - space
00:40:078 (3) - ^ or new combo
01:14:061 (6) - start the new combo here
01:17:307 (6) - ^
02:31:572 (3) - space or new combo
02:50:281 (4) - space

I didnt checked hitsounds but i think is good.
Star
Armin
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Armin
~Catchy song

[General]

~Offset: +5ms, then Resnal All Notes
~Add to Tags: "A Touch of Class" (<-complete name of the band)
~[Storyboard] I don't like how you placed that keyframes. I'd like to see that message at the start, plus the dark background ruins the "Break effect". Btw, if you want to keep this, at least remove the opition "Letterbox during breaks" [Song Setup > Storyboarding]

[-Sekai-'s Easy]


00:54:397 (1) - This clap sounds really bad at the end. Consider to add a whistle instead. You may switch the next hitsound-pattern btw (which would be better)
01:24:943 (2,3,4) - I usually don't reccomend little jumps like this in an easy, especially after one of the "harder" part [01:21:888 (2,3,4,5,1)] of the song. Consider to move (2) and (4) closer to (3)

[Normal+]

01:57:016 (1) - Why don't you make something like this? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/61329 or like this? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/61331 If you want to add this slider just paste this code in your .osu and then if you want to rotate the start use the option [Edit...> Rotate by....15°]

192,144,117016,6,0,L|83:198|187:248|203:358|282:279|396:296|342:198|396:98|283:117|201:31|192:135,1,1120,0|0

[Insane]

00:49:815 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4) - Consider to add some hitsounds in this part please, plus I'd sugges to delete the clap at slider's end

Nothing else to say, this difficulty is just fantastic. I really enjoyed it.

Starred.
Tony
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Tony
thanks for modding, i like that slider :o it looks meravigliosa!
florianu
florianu
Very nice map
ille_florian
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ille_florian
The notes is good but you should work at sb.
Pereira006
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Pereira006
OMG !!!

I ... i .. I relally love this song ever :):)

STAR ! NOW i wanna this going to be rank
April_old
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April_old
good ;)
Louis Cyphre
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Louis Cyphre
[Easy]
Map a difficulty fully, let newbie players enjoy the whole song.
Move up "scris sekai" image to make it more visible
00:08:583 (2) - move 1/1 right and 00:10:110 (3) - delete
00:11:637 (5,1) - ^
00:14:692 (3,4) - ^
00:43:711 - Kiai section is not perfectly on tick
01:08:148 - ^
01:20:366 - ^
01:06:620 (1) - add finish

[Insane]
Distance spacing -0.3x and respace ALL notes
Tony
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Tony

Louis Cyphre wrote:

[Easy]
Map a difficulty fully, let newbie players enjoy the whole song.
Move up "scris sekai" image to make it more visible
00:08:583 (2) - move 1/1 right and 00:10:110 (3) - delete
00:11:637 (5,1) - ^
00:14:692 (3,4) - ^
00:43:711 - Kiai section is not perfectly on tick
01:08:148 - ^
01:20:366 - ^
01:06:620 (1) - add finish
ALL FIXED~

[Insane]
Distance spacing -0.3x and respace ALL notes
no, thanks. I think it's good the way it is

Thank you
val0108
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val0108
ya o/

[General]
I think BPM157.15
Offset 7,046?

[-Sekai-'s Easy]
02:28:331 (3) - add finish.last slider

[Normal+]
02:53:531 (1,2,3) - volume down.About 30~40

[Insane]
01:06:037 - add note?
01:06:228 - ^

:3
Tony
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Tony

val0108 wrote:

ya o/

[General]
I think BPM157.15 Fixed. Thanks
Offset 7,046? Changed to 7,044. Thanks

[-Sekai-'s Easy]
02:28:331 (3) - add finish.last slider my fault. Fixed

[Normal+]
02:53:531 (1,2,3) - volume down.About 30~40Good idea. it sounds great to 40

[Insane]
01:06:037 - add note? no way :S
01:06:228 - ^ no way :S

:3
helpful mod. thank you
ZLOdeuka-
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ZLOdeuka-
nice x)

[Easy]

00:10:098 (3) - new combo

00:25:370 (5) - ^

00:26:134 (1) - delete new combo

00:28:424 (3) - new combo

00:30:715 (1) - delete new combo

00:31:479 (2) - new combo

00:58:968 (4) - ^

01:00:877 (1) - delete new combo

01:02:023 (2) - new combo

01:02:786 (1) - delete new combo

01:20:349 (5) - new combo

01:21:113 (1) - delete new combo

01:29:512 (4) - new combo

star
:3
Tony
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Tony
all fixed~ thank you
lolcubes
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lolcubes
Hey, here's my mod. Feel free to ignore the green stuff completely if you wish, mostly design opinions and minor nazi stuff.

[-Sekai-'s Easy]:
  1. 00:26:897 (3) - Remove clap on 00:27:279 from this slider, add it to 00:27:661 instead.
  2. 00:39:115 (2) - Add clap. (so it's the same just like 00:33:006 (1))
  3. 01:05:077 (5) - You should remove this clap.
  4. 01:05:841 (7) - Remove finish and add clap instead.
  5. 01:40:203 (3) - Remove clap from 01:40:585 and remove finish from 01:40:967. Instead, just add a clap where finish used to be.
  6. 02:53:509 (1,2,3) - Having a whistle on these makes them really loud while you're sliding them. Remove whistle from them and add whistles to the start, middle and end of each slider instead.
[Normal+]:
  1. This diff seems fine for a normal. There is no need to add "+" because it's not exactly hard.
  2. 01:18:440 (1) - Remove whistle from this spinner, it doesn't fit.
  3. 02:06:165 (1) - Add finish on this spinner, this would fit really nicely.
  4. 02:19:528 (3) - Why not add clap here?
  5. 02:19:910 (5) - Instead of a clap use finish here.
  6. 02:28:692 (2) - Add clap at the end of the slider.
  7. 02:29:455 (4) - Remove clap from this note.
  8. 02:31:746 (4) - Add clap at the end of the slider.
  9. 02:32:510 (6) - Remove clap from this note.
  10. 02:47:400 (1,2,3,4) - This is a quiet part of the song, having whistles on the whole slider doesn't fit really well. Remove the whistles and add them to the start and end of each slider instead.
  11. 02:53:509 (1,2) - ^
[Insane]:
  1. 01:41:730 (4) - New combo. Also, remove new combo from the next note.
  2. 01:42:112 (2) - Too close to the previous note. Use distance snap.
  3. 01:42:780 (6) - Remove this note.
  4. 01:42:876 (6,7,8,9,10) - Instead of a "Z shape", why not make this stream a straight angled line? Like this. The picture shows an idea how to place this combo in whole as well.
  5. 01:55:475 (1) - Remove finish from this spinner.
  6. 01:57:002 (1) - Add finish at the start of the slider only.
  7. 02:02:729 (5) - Remove finish from this note, it doesn't fit.
  8. 02:47:400 (1,2,3,4) - They don't make a proper square. Move (2) by 1 grid to the right, move (4) by 1 grid down and 1 to the left.
  9. 02:48:736 (4,5,6) - Spacing. Fix that.
  10. 02:49:500 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Irregular spacing in the combo. Use distance snap.
I guess that's it. Sorry for the wait but I had other stuff to do. Good luck. :3
Tony
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Tony
all fixed~ thanks :)
Card N'FoRcE
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Here since the beginning
Card N'FoRcE
Timing help as requested.

BPM: 157,13
Offset: 7047

This works way better.
Tony
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Tony
thank you for timing. i really wanted to give kudos because you really deserve :D
Mastodonio
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Mastodonio
Hi.

-Sekai's- Easy:
Hp Drain - 3?
This diff looks fine

Normal:
It is ok.

Insane:
Hp Drain - 5?
01:26:089 - a bit ugly slider :/
01:31:435 - start this spinner in : - 01:31:244. And end it as it was.
02:16:493 - I don't like this slider too

Well,I already gave a star here,so I just can say - nice map and song!
Tony
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Tony
updated.
thanks
ZLOdeuka-
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ZLOdeuka-
Recheck ~

You said that you need help with hitsounds?

I will not watch Easy.

[Normal]
00:42:940 (4,5,6) and 02:13:057 (6,7,8) and 02:24:130 (3,4,5) - make such a combination at one spacing

00:13:347 - delete whistle
00:13:729 - ^
00:17:356 - ^
00:24:612 - clap
00:25:375 - finish
00:31:485 - delete whistle and add finish

00:51:341 (5) - new combo
00:51:723 (1) - delete new combo

00:54:014 (1) - move here 00:54:396 to 00:55:923

01:02:415 (2,4) - whistle
01:03:942 - ^
01:04:706 (2) - ^
01:05:469 ^
01:06:233 (5,7) - ^

01:11:197 (7) - new combo
01:11:961 (1) - delete new combo
01:35:254 (1) - ^
01:36:017 (2) - new combo
01:37:545 (1) - delete new combo
01:38:690 (4) - new combo
01:39:836 (1) - delete new combo
01:41:745 (4) - new combo
01:57:019 (1) - Need a warning sign. or do so to make it clear in which direction to move

I hope you know how to clean up the sound? by soft sounds

and slow slider. that it ended here 02:03:129 (will slightly increase.after slowing down)


02:19:930 (5) - new combo
02:20:312 (1) - delete new combo

[Insane]

00:09:719 (1) - delete new combo
00:10:101 (2) - new combo
00:22:320 (4) - ^
00:22:511 (1) - delete new combo
01:11:197 (7) - new combo
01:11:388 (1) - delete new combo
01:17:307 (6) - new combo
01:17:498 (1) - delete new combo
01:25:135 (1) - its hidden slider :(
01:26:471 (6) - new combo
01:26:662 (1) - delete new combo
01:27:999 (10) - new combo
01:28:190 (1) - delete new combo
01:29:526 (6) - new combo
01:29:908 (1) - delete new combo
01:57:019 (1) - S?why is it?)
02:16:875 (6) - new combo
02:17:066 (1) - delete new combo
02:19:930 (6) - new combo
02:20:312 (1) - delete new combo
02:26:040 (7) - new combo
02:26:231 (1) - delete new combo

with the sounds all right )
Tony
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Topic Starter
Tony
thanks for rechecking
01:57:019 (1) - S because : The kisses of the Sun :D
jericho2442
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jericho2442
-Sekai-'s Easy
00:16:211 (4) - new combo to follow your pattern
00:33:012 (1) - remove new combo
01:05:088 (5) - new combo
01:33:344 (2,3) - spacing, these notes are too far apart move them closer so they are the same as the rest of the combo, as it is it feels like broken spacing
01:41:745 (4) - new combo
02:19:930 (4,1) - put the new combo on the (4) insted

im not keen on all of the tiny spinners on this tbh

Normal
00:53:632 (5,1) - tbh having a spinner here didnt suit, it would be much better to map the spinner by making the pattern you are using before it continue, flow would be much better then
01:14:252 (5) - new combo
01:15:398 (1) - remove new combo
01:17:689 (4) - new combo
01:41:745 (1,2) - move the new combo onto the (2) to follow your pattern
01:57:019 (1) - make this on the soft soundset, the normal sliding sound is very ugly at this point

02:22:985 - from here on your combo pattern gets very messy, i either advise a new combo every 8 white stanza's or every 4 white stanza for this whole section

02:38:259 (4) - new combo
02:39:786 (1) - remove new combo

Insane
Resnap all notes

01:18:261 (6) - V flip this, atm its off screen, and thats not allowed ;)

ok bit of messed up combos here. so fix like this ;p
02:50:478 (5) - new combo
02:51:242 (1) - remove new combo
02:52:578 (5) - new combo
02:53:342 (1) - remove this new combo and put it on the note after
02:55:442 (1) - ok same as above here
02:56:588 (4) - and finally after all that put a new combo here


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nice maps, just abit of combo probs ;) you get my star though
Tony
1,510 posts
Joined July 2010
Topic Starter
Tony
thanks for modding~
I always had combo pattern problems~
thanks a lot
nicktoons
174 posts
Joined June 2010
nicktoons
dude... twice watched every diff in your map. Didn't find enything wrong. And also i don't have any suggestions, seems so perfect =)

5. If i can't say anything about your map, then sry me it is or too perfect for me, or I just don't like it(that never happened yet, cause i like everything)
sory but it is really good. and i liked your insane very much. So star for insane.
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