NieN - Leave me Alone [Osu|Taiko] · forum

MoonFragrance

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MoonFragrance 2011-02-03T12:09:52+00:00

This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2011년 4월 19일 화요일 at 오전 2:17:58

Artist: NieN
Title: Leave me Alone
Source: DJMAX
Tags: Portable Jaywave Jay Z_B ykcarrot
BPM: 236
Filesize: 12305kb
Play Time: 01:57
Difficulties Available:

Maximum (5 stars, 319 notes)
Normal (3.19 stars, 151 notes)
Taiko (4.83 stars, 631 notes)
ykcarrot's Hard (4.96 stars, 284 notes)

Download: NieN - Leave me Alone
Download: NieN - Leave me Alone (no video)
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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48th Map

Warning for BPM 236!!!

Hardcore Song in DJMAX Portable 3

Composed and Arranged by NieN
Visualized by Jay (Jaywave), Z_B
Lyric & Vocal by NieN

Mar. 6th 2010 : Video has been updated.

Last edited by MoonFragrance 2011-04-18T17:17:56+00:00, edited 40 times in total.

KRZY

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KRZY 2011-02-03T23:25:23+00:00

First!

Good Maximum as usual, Taiko is somewhat fresh :3

Leave my fingers alone :<

Sure

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Sure 2011-02-20T11:56:58+00:00

Cyril Scarlet

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Cyril Scarlet 2011-03-05T01:02:19+00:00

Sure

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Sure 2011-03-05T17:49:47+00:00

Let's go, MoeFragrance.

Download: NieN - Leave me Alone (MoonFragrance) [ykcarrot's Hard].osu

MoonFragrance

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MoonFragrance 2011-03-05T20:29:28+00:00

Thanks ykcarrot for nice diff like always XD

and thank you KRZY, S i R i R u

Daiguren

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Daiguren 2011-03-06T02:43:52+00:00

Charles445

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Charles445 2011-03-06T04:44:27+00:00

Normal
01:27:059 - Move this to the left a grid so it lines up with the U slider?

ykcarrot's Hard
01:10:279 - I'd shorten this a repeat
Crazy.

Maximum
MY MIND!
That drain is murder - oh wait I'm just bad
MOONSTYLEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE

NO KDS because this mod is crap

Tony

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Tony 2011-03-06T09:01:12+00:00

hello, here's my mod

[General]
Omg, nice sounding!!!!!
love the song

[Normal]
00:05:703 (6) - add clap
00:18:415 -from here volume is too loud imo. reduce it a little bit and move that timing point here 00:18:669

[ykcarrot's Hard]
very well mapped diff, good job

[Maximum]
AR +1

good job ;p Star!

Sure

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Sure 2011-03-06T17:28:02+00:00

Added some whistles.

Download: NieN - Leave me Alone (MoonFragrance) [ykcarrot's Hard].osu

[Exit]

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Joined February 2009

[Exit] 2011-03-06T17:41:18+00:00

I always thx to you

because you map is suit for me

here you are

1 STAR

Neko_Ray

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Joined July 2010

Neko_Ray 2011-03-06T22:13:05+00:00

ykcarrot's Hard
01:22:864 (7): Add whistle in the end

its all, good song lml

loveFantasy

526 posts

Joined August 2008

loveFantasy 2011-03-07T00:56:53+00:00

Hi~

thank you for using my modding queue, since you're a way too experienced mapper than me, i'll only testplay all the diffs and give my feedbacks

[Normal]
<00:05:703> was expecting hitsound
<01:06:720> make it a slider that start at 01:06:593?

[Hard]
is a comfortable diff

[Maximum]
is a comfortable diff

star

Kuzino

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Kuzino 2011-03-10T15:01:49+00:00

rrtyui

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rrtyui 2011-03-19T17:14:50+00:00

MoonFragrance(*´ω`*)

3rd Coast

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3rd Coast 2011-04-02T03:56:03+00:00

Nice work once again

Tanmak

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Tanmak 2011-04-02T05:26:35+00:00

jericho2442

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jericho2442 2011-04-04T23:20:30+00:00

rescale your BG to a 4:3 resolution, its pretty pointless having a widescreen BG on osu! since its scales it to 4:3 anyway, and by scaling it yourself you can make a MUCH better job of it

Normal
01:09:262 (4,1) - put the new combo on the (4) it flows with your pattern much better
(suggestion) 01:19:940 (1,2,3,4,5) - its abit messy how the spacing is different on all these, maybe a tiny cleanup? ;p

ykcarrot's Hard
just 2 suggestion what you could please take a look at

01:14:728 (7) - this didnt seem right and dont really suit the song much imo, tbh if you use a 1/2 pattern (maybe 2 stacked circles?) it flows hugely better with the song
01:22:864 (7) - same here

loved the map

Maximum
00:21:338 (3,4) - maybe put the repeat on the (3) rather than the (4)? it helps to let the player notice the next pattern more and feels to flow better tbh, so the timing would be like this, as it is it just felt extremely odd when playing, i cant fully pinpoint "why" it plays odd though :/

00:33:923 (5) - this note is totally blind because of the hitburst before it, i found it 100% impossible to notice untill i missed it once, please make this pattern so this note is visible
01:06:593 (3) - new combo to help due to the break in playing? ;p

liked the map but wow them hitsounds play tricks on your mind xD

Taiko
looked fine to me
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ok i really loved the maps, just them tiny few things i found could of been better, if them up (if you agree) and get a few more mods, then call me back

Sure

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Sure 2011-04-05T04:27:16+00:00

jericho2442 wrote:
ykcarrot's Hard
just 2 suggestion what you could please take a look at

01:14:728 (7) - this didnt seem right and dont really suit the song much imo, tbh if you use a 1/2 pattern (maybe 2 stacked circles?) it flows hugely better with the song // In fact, I don't think it doesn't fit at music due to there are 1/4 drums. But as you told, I used 1/2 patterns in whole of map, so I fixed it.
01:22:864 (7) - same here // Fixed

loved the map

Thanks for mod.

Download: NieN - Leave me Alone (MoonFragrance) [ykcarrot's Hard].osu

MoonFragrance

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MoonFragrance 2011-04-05T07:51:44+00:00

jericho2442 wrote:
Normal
01:09:262 (4,1) - put the new combo on the (4) it flows with your pattern much better
i'd like to tell slider's speed change by new combo, so i replace new combo on vibrating slider :3

others all fixed, thank you for modding

haha5957

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haha5957 2011-04-06T08:28:20+00:00

감히 손대려고 해도 손댈수가 없네요 제 눈엔 너무도 완벽한 맵 [........]

그냥 별이라도 받아주세요!ㅠㅠ

Garven

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Garven 2011-04-18T06:59:50+00:00

As per your request:

[General]
The light grey combo color gets somewhat difficult to see against the video for the hard/maximum difficulties.

[Normal]
Trick rate 1 sounds pretty good on this
00:02:652 (1) - Rather soon after a spinner for the introduction to the easiest difficulty of the map set. There's one or two others there too, if you are going to address it.
01:14:093 (5) - Maybe down a Grid 4? Gives a smoother curve
That last kiai burst doesn't fit to me. The one at 01:56:042 - is good though.

[Taiko]
nom

[ykcarrot's Hard]
Maybe HP drain -1? Seems a bit high for a hard
01:48:796 (2) - This section where you start using 3, 4, and 5 repeat sliders... it felt kind of inconsistent in use to me. It felt more that you just needed to fit that many repeats in to fit your pattern instead of something that played well for the music. What you did still works fine, but it just didn't have that good feeling that the rest of the map had for me.
Good map otherwise, though~

[Maximum]
00:27:440 (3) - Every time I start this map up, I want this hit this slider where the end is instead of where it's supposed to start. arrggghh ;_;
01:19:432 (1,2,3) - Forget some htisounds?
01:22:991 (3) - This could be a lot more symmetrical
That last kiai burst doesn't fit to me. The one at 01:56:042 - is good though.

Sure

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Sure 2011-04-18T11:49:14+00:00

Garven wrote:
[ykcarrot's Hard]
Maybe HP drain -1? Seems a bit high for a hard // Fixed
01:48:796 (2) - This section where you start using 3, 4, and 5 repeat sliders... it felt kind of inconsistent in use to me. It felt more that you just needed to fit that many repeats in to fit your pattern instead of something that played well for the music. What you did still works fine, but it just didn't have that good feeling that the rest of the map had for me. // Fixed to 2 circles + a 3 repeat slider.
Good map otherwise, though~

Thanks for mod.

회색 콤보컬러는 문님이 제것까지 적당히 바꿔주세요.

Download: NieN - Leave me Alone (MoonFragrance) [ykcarrot's Hard].osu

Faust

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Faust 2011-04-18T11:50:38+00:00

IS THAT YOOOUUUUUUUUUU ~

MoonFragrance

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MoonFragrance 2011-04-18T13:26:30+00:00

Garven wrote:
[Normal]
00:02:652 (1) - Rather soon after a spinner for the introduction to the easiest difficulty of the map set. There's one or two others there too, if you are going to address it.
- i don't think it's unreadable :3

[Maximum]
01:19:432 (1,2,3) - Forget some htisounds?
- they're fine

otherse all fixed, thank you Garven
and thankyou haha and Faust for star 8D

Garven

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Garven 2011-04-18T19:04:12+00:00

Looks great now - good job, you two!