13:23 Touhou: hey
13:23 Touhou: i'll take a look at it if you like
13:23 Touhou: send map
13:24 *Skellen is listening to [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/980061 Celldweller - End of an Empire]
13:24 Skellen: thanks
13:31 Touhou: try 274 offset
13:31 Touhou: seems better
13:31 Touhou: ok let's start at the intro
13:31 Touhou: slider art is nice
13:32 Touhou: the point of slider art is to be unique and nice to look at
13:32 Touhou: while establishing a smooth connection with each slider
13:32 Touhou: if you take a look at the first 2 sliders you can see an overlap
13:32 Touhou:
http://puu.sh/p4xcD/1a9a57b9c7.jpg13:33 Touhou: pretty much all sliders overlapp with each other
13:33 Skellen: I was going to fix those sliders but never really got into it
13:33 Touhou: when you make turns in your long sliders, make it so that they're rational
13:33 Touhou: meaning, only make turns when the music changes
13:34 Touhou: or atleast on slider ticks etc
13:34 Touhou: this slider turn here is pretty random
13:34 Touhou: it's after the slider tick
13:34 Touhou: and feels out of place
13:34 Touhou:
http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/523375313:34 Touhou: the previous sliders had that too
13:34 Touhou: also, make their endings consistent
13:35 Touhou: some end earlier than others
13:35 Touhou: that's annoying
13:35 Touhou: 00:23:245 (3) - why is this slider not snapped?
13:36 Touhou: 00:25:302 (2) - could be a nice long slider FIREEEEE
13:36 Touhou: 00:33:531 (1,2,3,4,5) - this is good imo
13:36 Touhou: 00:44:159 (1) - if you want to make this intro a bit more dramatic
13:36 Touhou: make it single circles with CLOSE spacing, almost stacked
13:37 Touhou: 00:44:159 (1) - < jump
13:37 Touhou: 00:46:902 (1) - < almost stacked again
13:37 Touhou: 00:57:874 (4) - you have a lot of unsnapped slider endings
13:38 Touhou: sliders are two connected circles, the start should have more weigth but the second shouldn't be ignored
13:39 Touhou: 01:43:651 (5,6) - slider starts on blue tick
13:39 Touhou: listen to the song at 25% carefully
13:39 Touhou: you miss a lot of triplets
13:40 Touhou: 01:45:537 (3,4,5,6) - the streams are not 1/6
13:40 Touhou: they're 1/8
13:40 Touhou: (map on the yellow tick)
13:40 Touhou: press the top at the left side of the screen afew times
13:40 Touhou: then play at 25% speed
13:40 Touhou: to see the exact timing
13:41 Touhou: 06:10:565 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - make the first 4 circles slow and close
13:41 Touhou: then slowly increase the distance for the loud part
13:42 Touhou: it needs to build up and not to be at maximum
13:42 Touhou: the builup is for 06:13:308 (1) -
13:42 Touhou: 02:45:537 (1) - clickable object
13:43 Touhou: the slider end it too loud, needs to be clickable
13:43 Touhou: 02:46:222 (4,5,6) - stream mistake again, not 1/6 but 1/8
13:44 Touhou: a thing about the kiai: the kiai should be at the most intense parts of the song
13:44 Touhou: 03:50:680 (1) - this should be a kiai start
13:44 Touhou: 03:23:337 (6) - this isn't really worth having as kiai compared to the next part
13:45 Touhou: the kiai highlights a part of the map
13:45 Touhou: and i think it fits the best on the louder part
13:46 Touhou: btw: set the BPM to 175 and not 87.50
13:46 Touhou: that makes everything easier
13:46 Touhou: and the streams can be in 1/4 instead of 1/8
13:47 Touhou: 07:18:451 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - streams too spaced
13:47 Touhou: 02:51:137 (2,3,4,5) - listen at 25% and fix please
13:48 Touhou: the mistakes keep repeating now, I'll stop here and mod further once you fixed all that
13:48 Skellen: oke
13:49 Touhou: General advice: try to map to the song
13:49 Touhou: and not for difficulty
13:50 Touhou: difficulty should be the result of a well executed visualization of the song