Hello !,from #modreqs. I enjoyed the song, so I hope I can be helpful here.
General :
Oh, I saw you haven't Place the Kiai Timings. Please to set it here 01:59:999 (4) - ends here 02:16:842 (1) -
Normal (To be honest, making Normal diff is better if you use the same Distance Spacing. But it's your style, so I won't doubt it
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00:12:631 (6) - 00:49:473 (4) - 00:52:105 (5) - 00:54:210 (8) - 01:02:105 (4) - 01:37:894 (6) - 02:06:315 (4) - 02:11:052 (5) - 02:18:947 (5) - 02:21:052 (1) - 02:23:684 (5) - New Combo (Oh my ! Lot of uncontrolled Combos Number. Oh, keep the combo up to around 4 combo. That'll be nice)
00:14:736 (1) - 00:51:052 (1) - 01:38:684 (1) - 02:20:526 (8) - Remove New Combo
00:25:263 (4) - It will be lovelier if this circle changed into you "masterpiece" slider and ended here 00:28:421 (5) -
00:29:473 (4) - Here's too, ended here 00:32:631 (5) -
00:55:789 (1) - 01:51:052 (2) - 02:28:947 (9) - I don't get this slider X'D
01:14:210 (4,5,6) - Take this closer with the slider before
01:59:999 (1) - Separate it a little, like what you did before
Hard :
Nah, on hard diff, better the combo end up to around 8 combos
00:29:210 (2) - Delete this slider ! then do copy mirror from 00:28:684 (1) - by pressing Ctrl+C then Ctrl+H
00:24:999 (2) - 00:29:210 (2) - How about inserting Break Time around here
00:43:684 (2) - 01:41:315 (5) - 02:28:947 (10) - New Combo here !
Oh, if I were you, I won't make those "far" jumps on Hard difficulity
01:12:105 (8) - I don't get this slider X'D
Insane :
Nah, on this Insane diff, better combo end up to around 8-10 combos
00:49:473 (10) - 00:53:684 (10) - 01:12:105 (4) - 02:28:947 (4) - I don't get this slider too X'D
01:16:315 (11) - 01:56:842 (7) - New Combo here !
01:56:842 (7,8,9,10,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - Oh I like stream like this, but can you make it smoother ?
Faded :
Same ! here better combo end up to 8-10 combos
00:19:999 (10) - 02:28:947 (3) - I don't get this slider too X'D
02:14:473 (11) - Too far from the previous circle to be read X'D
01:56:842 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16) - Same ! make it smoother !
01:58:947 (1) - Please reduce this spinner a little ! It's too near with the next circle tempo
Nah, I guess that's all I can give. Keep learning ! Experiences is the best Teacher, and you have to gain Experiences to get Experiences XD . I hope I'm correct and very helpful. Good luck with the map !