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EphemeralFetish
"The map is ugly, unplayable trash. But its supposed to be that way"

I mean.
Spaghetti
the map is ugly enough with AR 10 are u fried

this is like brute force ez mod i dont think you should but such heavy gameplay issues below aesthetic
Ignite
Stop! Stop Monstrata Upload!!
stryver12
mazztrata???
SnowNiNo_
the preview point just make ppl feels like a 4 star map XD
fk cant even play with HT ;w;
ConsumerOfBean
misleading preview point. D:
jesse1412
ar10. Map killed.
Lince Cosmico_old
Play Time: 5:00

plz monstrata, again?
7ambda

SnowNiNo_ wrote:

the preview point just make ppl feels like a 4 star map XD
Sounds more like 3* to me.
ConsumerOfBean
The more I look at this map the more it makes me pissed off.
The map STARTS at 8*, but at about 60% thru it goes to 3* and stays there for the rest of the song, making the 40% no more than a waste of time.
This is not unrankable. This is just shitty. I don't know anyone who wants to play 8* for 3 minutes then the last 2 minutes is a boring, 2.5-3.5* map.
But still, good luck with ranking.
(And, incase you ask, the way to fix this is make the 60% beginning part a lot easier so the 3* section is actually something that isn't a ridiculous transition.)
P.S: Just add "IMO" after every sentence.
P.P.S, lower AR; the slow part is just fucking weird with ar10.
Aeril

FailureAtOsu wrote:

This is not unrankable. This is just shitty. I don't know anyone who wants to play 8* for 3 minutes then the last 2 minutes is a boring, 2.5-3.5* map.
tbh the ending is nice because you get to relax after 3 minutes of hard jumps and stuff, idk i like it xp
ConsumerOfBean

Aeril wrote:

FailureAtOsu wrote:

This is not unrankable. This is just shitty. I don't know anyone who wants to play 8* for 3 minutes then the last 2 minutes is a boring, 2.5-3.5* map.
tbh the ending is nice because you get to relax after 3 minutes of hard jumps and stuff, idk i like it xp
well, why have those 2 minutes of useless difficulty drop when you could do something else with the same amount of time (like pp farm.. kappa)
Cryptic

FailureAtOsu wrote:

The more I look at this map the more it makes me pissed off.
The map STARTS at 8*, but at about 60% thru it goes to 3* and stays there for the rest of the song, making the 40% no more than a waste of time.
This is not unrankable. This is just shitty. I don't know anyone who wants to play 8* for 3 minutes then the last 2 minutes is a boring, 2.5-3.5* map.
I mean, its mapped properly in accordance with intensity. The first part of the song, the 8* part, is quite intense and heavy while the rest of the song is light and calm. The huge difficulty gap between the two sections accurately represents the huge intensity gap in the song itself.

AR 9.3-9.5 though. AR 10 makes the ending too forced and ruins some of the reading in the harder section.
SnowNiNo_
#blamethesong
ConsumerOfBean

Cryptic wrote:

FailureAtOsu wrote:

The more I look at this map the more it makes me pissed off.
The map STARTS at 8*, but at about 60% thru it goes to 3* and stays there for the rest of the song, making the 40% no more than a waste of time.
This is not unrankable. This is just shitty. I don't know anyone who wants to play 8* for 3 minutes then the last 2 minutes is a boring, 2.5-3.5* map.
I mean, its mapped properly in accordance with intensity. The first part of the song, the 8* part, is quite intense and heavy while the rest of the song is light and calm. The huge difficulty gap between the two sections accurately represents the huge intensity gap in the song itself.

AR 9.3-9.5 though. AR 10 makes the ending too forced and ruins some of the reading in the harder section.
The problem is, is that the hard part is too hard for the easy part to fit whatsoever. If the hard part were 5-6* I'd be perfectly ok with it. In fact, most of the harder part is under 6.5*. Also, ONE jump brings the map from 7.86* to 8.21*, and it's
00:57:721 (3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) -
which DOES NOT fit as the most intense part of the song.
UndeadCapulet
broken sr != most intense part
TehDragonGuy

FailureAtOsu wrote:

The more I look at this map the more it makes me pissed off.
The map STARTS at 8*, but at about 60% thru it goes to 3* and stays there for the rest of the song, making the 40% no more than a waste of time.
This is not unrankable. This is just shitty. I don't know anyone who wants to play 8* for 3 minutes then the last 2 minutes is a boring, 2.5-3.5* map.
But still, good luck with ranking.
(And, incase you ask, the way to fix this is make the 60% beginning part a lot easier so the 3* section is actually something that isn't a ridiculous transition.)
P.S: Just add "IMO" after every sentence.
P.P.S, lower AR; the slow part is just fucking weird with ar10.
What the fuck do you want, deathstreams in the slow relaxed part of the song?... It's not Monstrata's fault the song becomes much more relaxed there.
ConsumerOfBean

TehDragonGuy wrote:

FailureAtOsu wrote:

The more I look at this map the more it makes me pissed off.
The map STARTS at 8*, but at about 60% thru it goes to 3* and stays there for the rest of the song, making the 40% no more than a waste of time.
This is not unrankable. This is just shitty. I don't know anyone who wants to play 8* for 3 minutes then the last 2 minutes is a boring, 2.5-3.5* map.
But still, good luck with ranking.
(And, incase you ask, the way to fix this is make the 60% beginning part a lot easier so the 3* section is actually something that isn't a ridiculous transition.)
P.S: Just add "IMO" after every sentence.
P.P.S, lower AR; the slow part is just fucking weird with ar10.
What the fuck do you want, deathstreams in the slow relaxed part of the song?... It's not Monstrata's fault the song becomes much more relaxed there.
Quite the opposite, actually. My point is that, if you're going to do an 8* map, don't pick a song with the last 40% being impossible to map for anything above 4*.
I feel a 6* map would have fit the song better since the drop in difficulty wouldn't have been nearly as severe. As an 8* map, the 40% is just a waste of time. But, it's not unrankable, and I don't know why i got pissed over this in the first place. One map isn't going to do much to anything.
P.S, yes, it is his fault he chose a song that slows down to this extent.
Topic Starter
Monstrata
T r i g g e r e d

No actually, that's the point of the song. If you don't like it there are other maps for you :). AR doesn't make something unplayable, just annoying to read when it's too low, or feel forced when too high. I'm gonna stick with high AR because more people will complain about low AR's on the 280 bpm section. If you can pass the 8 star section I don't see how AR 10 110 bpm jumps are going to cause you problems.

Also, I like to play 8 star maps for 3 minutes and then have two minutes of 2.5 star mapping. So now you know at least one person who enjoys it :D.
Lince Cosmico_old
xD slow bpm high ar seems hard to do jumps (at least for me)
Liiraye
I love maps that go from really fast to really slow, especially towards the end.

Even though this is too hard for me to enjoy, I think arguing that the easy part would somehow arbitrarily make the map bad is silly. Having your only point being 6* would be better than 8* doesn't help much. That could go for ANY hard map out there, it doesn't say much about the map itself.
Haruto
m4m from your queue m8

tbh this is a free mod. and i dont have any finished map to mod, there is one but you collabed in it xd

[General]
  1. Countdown is intentional? i think it should be disabled lol
  2. like most #modhelp users said, why not use 9.5 or 9.7 for the AR? people seems complaining too much about the AR xD
  3. One More, Combo Colour 5, 7 and 8 could be brighter xP some parts are hard to read cuz they are blend with the BG
    ex
    00:40:172 - the slider
    well atleast for me xd idk what you think but yeah. they can be a bit brighter as most people play in dark background dim.
  4. eh btw, metadata source? and why the tags are blank? ;o also, artist should be "マキシマム ザ ホルモン" instead, i guess
[Winny Upload]
  1. 00:24:200 (3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3) - first, im not an experienced player but once i tested this. i felt like the movement between triplets to 00:24:842 (4) - are hard to read. it maybe because the AR but idk. just my thought
  2. 00:44:016 (5) - i'd ctrl+g this tho, cuz the reading. this cause me a miss here lol
    ~ Jump Section ~
  3. 00:52:766 (3,4) - this can cause a player misread. as you stacked (4) under 00:52:107 (1) - . and this is completely different with other jumps, what will i do is. do something like overlap it rather stacking it which could cause a player miss especially with the High AR you have used
  4. 00:58:900 (8,1) - can be emphasized more? previous cursor movement is bigger while 00:58:900 (8) - to 00:59:022 (1) - isnt big at all, increase the spacing wouldnt hurt i guess lol
  5. 01:00:723 - tbh the jumps here didnt make sense at all :/ well maybe just me
  6. 01:07:259 (1) - definetly looks like a gut, 01:19:288 (1) - yehaj same
  7. 01:30:362 (1,2) - are the stacked slider node here is intentional? seems weird :/
  8. 01:36:505 (2,3) - ew spaced stream xd why dont stack this with 01:36:344 (1) - instead? hard cursor movements here tho :/
  9. 01:36:772 (5,6,7) - slider give me aids. also, stack? same like above
  10. 01:38:058 - 01:40:576 - this parts give me aids. sik
  11. 01:45:552 (3,1) - emphasis more i guess?
  12. 01:53:257 (1,2) - first blanket mod : DDD yeah, blanket seems bad imo
  13. 02:13:049 (4,1) - ew whats with the movements here. player would confuse here tho. as most of the cursor movements in this map is going to left so why not making the movements between 4>1 is left? like, 02:13:164 (1) - ctrl+g this would work
  14. 02:13:776 (3,4,5) - unperfect triangle 8( pls fix thx
  15. 02:15:605 (3,4) - are this intentional to be "ugly blanket" or it isnt?
  16. 02:32:742 (1,1) - ok. this is suprising. are the slow SV on 02:33:171 (1) - is a purpose? i mean, its not really natural when the previous was fast and the next is slowest. raise the SV a bit like 0,15 or 0,17 maybe? xd
  17. 02:34:901 - add a greenline here and set the volume to 20% to give a nice transition to 02:35:017 (1) -
  18. 02:36:401 - this too^
  19. 02:40:674 (4,5) - okay, the jump here is suprising LOL
  20. 02:43:016 (10,1) - dont stack :< can cause a misread especially in high AR also, 02:42:793 (6) - NC here maybe?
  21. 02:46:793 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - this is confusinggggg LOL
  22. 02:55:471 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,1,1) - how to... give me inspiration, sensei
    ~ Slow Part ~
  23. 03:08:850 (3) - remove whistle on the tail? its weird to have a whistle in red tick
  24. 03:16:894 (5,1,2) - the blanket could be nicer :D
  25. 03:28:492 (3,4) - for a reason, i thought 03:28:744 (4) - would appear on right where 03:28:996 (5) - is placed. ctrl+g them maybe? so players wont confused. well for me its a bit confusing tho ^^'
  26. 04:25:225 (6,7,1,2,3) - high ar caused this a bit hard to read xd and btw, lower the placements i guess? maybe because its placed high caused me a misread there lol
  27. 04:33:754 (1,1,1,1) - Creative

    k i think thats all, i dont even know what i am doing lmao also, the slow part. why dont use a normal-hitnormal to replace the claps? fits better with hitnormal imo
im a shitmodder indeed, cancer part gives me aids xd slow part gives me beauty on my maps (~˘▾˘)~
[]
well, i hope it helps you and i dont really know how to mod 8.21* so pardon my mod if its bad xd
good luck sensei :D
Battle
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[S T O P]
AR 9.6 or 9.7 would always work lol, that way the reading isn't too obnoxious with AR 10 while making the 3.8* part less awkward lol
00:24:200 (3,4,5,1,2,3) - You may want to consider repositioning these notes, while you do have patterns during the guitar similar to this, none of them go immediately back and forth from the same positions immediately, the other section of the song similar to this has consistent movement, so it feels kinda off since this is the only time something like this happens
00:32:332 (1,2) - Are you sure you want to sliders here? For the most part it's been single tapping, and I don't really see too much difference in the screaming he's doing in this part compared to the other parts, also it's worth pointing that there isn't really another part similar to it, so having it structured like the other rhythms in this section would work best imo
00:41:339 (5,3) - Could always put 3 in the curve of 5, but I dunno if you want that since you want it to look messy n stuff lol
00:42:941 (3,4,5) - Maybe make these mirror each other? You make the rhythms similar to this like that (00:44:663 (4,5) - and 00:46:484 (3,4,5,6) - )
00:48:623 (1,2,3) - The pause for 00:48:852 - is kind of awkward imo, since you never really emphasize that pause in the vocals as the section goes on
00:51:250 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - I feel like these are somewhat fine, but I feel like this part should be toned down a little, so that way the scaling chaotic-ness on the screen is more apparent, since it's slowly getting more and more scream-y in the song, and I don't feel like the pattern should be as spaced as the part where he's screaming deeply in the song lol
01:43:490 (1,2) - The way you have been spacing things makes these really not seem too emphasized, you might want to make them more emphasized since the guitar feels unique
02:20:338 (3,4,5,1) - 02:24:229 (3,4,5,1) - I feel like for both instances, you might want to break away from the pattern that you are doing, by doing so you differentiate both from stuff like 02:23:262 (3,4,5,1) - , plus the downbeat that both of the 1s pointed out are one have a significant change in the music so ye
02:43:016 (10,1,2,1,2,1,2) - I don't agree with stacking 02:43:239 (1) - on top of 10 since like, you kinda had a flow break for 02:39:463 (10,1) - , so I would suggest doing something similar. You may have done it to differentiate the pitches of the guitar, but imo since the guitar is in a higher pitch for 02:43:016 (10,1) - it should be unique without doing something like stacking
03:07:390 (1) - Maybe give this a unique shape to compliment the vocal being stressed in the song
04:11:819 (2,3) - lol this blanket is slightly off and I need to fulfill my "1 blanket mod" quota xd

mm
Frostings
Decrease your timeline zoom holy f literally unmoddable
Disable countdown

Artist: マキシマムザホルモン
Romanized: Makishimamu Za Horumon
Album: 予襲復讐
Romanized: Yoshū Fukushū, or Yoshu Fukushu
Add "ALIEN" to tags, and other optional tags like screamo or metal, like anyone even searches those tags

Source English
Source Japanese
(It's the band's official English and Japanese site respectively)
[Stop Whatever]
  1. 00:00:838 (1) - prob better to extend it to downbeat. Same with the following spinners (better style because their hitsounds are only on their ends)
  2. 00:17:766 - verify the guitar isn't 1/3. I already can't hear properly in one ear anymore
  3. 00:28:922 (1,2,3,4,5) - Ignoring the fact that this is straight unplayable (let's be honest, no part of the map is playable), I think it's better if you emphasize your kick slider more than your previous 4 notes. The super one-taps make your slider seem like a filler.
  4. 00:34:046 (1,2,3,4,5) - This one isn't too bad because the jump is there
  5. 00:41:771 - Kinda sad you stopped caring about the guitar
  6. 01:41:487 - it's a shame you don't emphasize the drums here further. They're very strong and would make the map actually somewhat coherent. It does get better in the second half though, I guess. I think you should make the solo strings play separately, like antijumps, and only provide movement along the loud guitar/drums, if that makes sense
  7. 02:39:686 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1) - I'd rework the structure here, maybe space them out horizontally more. Specifically, the transition is super awkward here 02:40:244 (2,1) -
  8. 02:57:257 - Wow, I can actually mod this. Uh just about style I think blankets are a complete noob trap, and force bad structure
  9. 03:01:292 - I think the low spacing is supes awkward to play, even considering the slowness of the song. Low spacing does nothing here because your AR is maxed
  10. 03:15:390 - Ugh. Actually turn off DS because it plays like tr. Use large distances strategically to make the notes feel like they're there for a reason, not just as a filler. and stop using blankets
  11. 03:53:600 - same with this whole section
  12. 04:01:581 - Also I dunno if you noticed but there's some dramatic changes in the song here that's not reflective at all in your mapping
  13. 04:45:303 (1) - lol
Sorry that my mod doesn't point out anything really specific, I'd need to be able to actually play the map to do so
eeezzzeee
hi m4m from your queue

alright so lets start by saying i did actually try to playtest this map, once with relax and once with htnf lol. but unfortunately i am a shit tier player so yeah take any suggestions to gameplay with a grain of salt

[diff]
i dont understand the complaints about ar tbh, anyone playing this should be at the level where reading ar 10 is pretty natural. and for the ez part, once again anyone playing this wont mess up there anyway. that being said though i think there are a few parts that are hard read and it has more to do with the map and song than ar
  1. 00:35:361 (2) - check ds
  2. 00:39:638 (5,6,7,8,9,10) - maybe we should use sliders again like before 00:37:929 (4,5) - or like dont stack these triples under the previous notes, or nc or something to make it a little easier to read
  3. 00:43:473 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6) - really awkward to transition between tiny spacing of the first combo into large spacing of the second one. i dont see the need for 00:44:342 (1,2,3,4) - to be so large anyway. also consider changing 00:44:449 (2,3) - into a slider instead, it seems to be similar to 00:44:016 (5) - so it would fit the style of mapping the vocal so far
  4. 00:52:986 (1,2,3) - err this flow man lol. i guess it was intentional but i didnt like playing it
  5. 00:59:022 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - alright... can we not force difficulty on a map thats already going to be one of the hardest ever? this part of the music is basically exactly the same as 00:55:579 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - so i dont see the reason why suddenly its changed into all circles. not to mention all these zig zags are just completely not fun to play imo, compared to the slider patterns you had before which actually had different flows to make the part more interesting
  6. 00:59:867 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - ^
  7. 01:00:723 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - ^ plz
  8. 01:24:577 (2,3,4,1) - would be nice if these four were all part of the same combo instead of that randomly being a part of the next but eh
  9. 01:34:630 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5) - you can try NC'ing it like this i think it would make more sense with the structure of the rhythm here http://puu.sh/pjHgb/7c5201fa03.jpg
  10. 01:36:344 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - ^ if you took that suggestion http://puu.sh/pjHkp/e6d2297dee.jpg
  11. 01:38:058 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5) - hoyl ok i guess its fine but 01:38:380 (4) - this is a kinda unnecessary trap imo, people will expect it to be a lot more to the left
  12. 01:42:186 (4,1) - swap the NC?
  13. 02:13:512 (2,3) - the timing difference is quite significant and this might cause issues during gamplay but what can we do to fix it lel i have no idea sorry. NC? Sliders?
  14. 02:26:570 (3,4) - same thing i said about 01:38:380 (4) - being a trap
  15. 02:27:195 (1,2,3,4) - argh this is just so ridiculously hard to read when its overlapped by the stuff before it
  16. 02:28:885 (1,2,3,4) - ^
  17. 02:29:742 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - can we just try to keep the spacing between them as even as possible like do whatever you want with the shapes but plz spacing
  18. 02:49:895 (4,1) - swap NC
  19. 03:10:874 (5,1) - blanket
  20. 03:45:634 - but monstrata only makes triangles
  21. 04:33:754 (1,1,1,1) - and its so cool how this actually works
ya. i like the contrasting aesthetics of this map btw
Adventure
hi, from your Queue

GENERAL


Artist : マキシマムザホルモン (Maximum the Hormone)
Tags
Sky Records Yoshū Fukushū Album ダイスケはん ナヲ マキシマムザ亮君 上ちゃん Daisuke-han Nao Maximum the Ryo-kun Ue-chan

00:00:838 (1) - y: 196 x: 192
00:03:446 (1) - Spinner to long
00:19:486 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,1,2,3) - This should have been placed in the shape of a star or triangle
00:25:484 (1) - x: 352 x:192
00:39:211 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - This is also the same, put a triangle or star shape
01:04:890 (1) - change the shape of the slider
01:41:058 (3) - straight or crooked
02:36:517 (1) - changing speed, so players can be surprised if suddenly
04:45:303 (1) - x: 268 y: 320
Kawashiro
From your M4M Q

[UHHH]
  1. 00:34:933 (1) - Move to x48 y124 because of DS with 2
  2. 00:48:737 (2,3) - This part has the change of melody, but this gap is weird to this changing. how about copy 00:49:623 (2) - it to here?
  3. 00:51:346 - Del this timing point and change 00:51:250 - here to 283 bpm. and replace 00:51:346 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - them. i think it is correct bpm
  4. 00:54:828 - ^
  5. 00:56:971 (4,5) - Too close.
  6. 01:34:417 (6,7,8) - Move to x136 y164 because I think to make harmony with this pattern and song, 01:34:523 (8,1) - this gap have to has harder DS than 01:34:311 (5,6) - here.
  7. 01:37:469 (4) - Del this note. i think you should keep same beat in 01:36:344 (1,2,3,4) - here with 01:37:201 (1,2,3,4,5) - here.
  8. 03:08:850 (3) - Change to circle
  9. 04:41:302 (3,1) - NC swap
Akiyama Mizuki
what the actual fuck is this

nice concept though
SnowNiNo_
@Monstrata : why dont make the T like this instead =w=?
Topic Starter
Monstrata
Cuz burai
Incise
Stop! Stop! WINNY UPLOAD!
Zyl
From your queue

(=>w<=)/ M4M \(=>w<=)


[Stop! Stop Winny Upload!!]

Stop! Stop Winny Upload!! diff
00:00:838 (1) - i think here it's better to remove the whistle sound, because in that part of the song the music isn't that strong to add a whistle, only a recommendation, why not to add a Custom Hitsound?.
00:19:486 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,1,2,3) - I think that in this part you can be more creative because this triplets ruin the sthetic of the map at that point so, why not to add more sliders?.
00:30:836 (3) - i think that this can be pretty confusing.
00:59:022 (1) - from this point to 01:02:330 (8) - this point you ignore some sliders it will be easier for me explain this if you see this point of the map 00:57:293 (1,2) - .
01:32:289 (2) - Ctrl+G?.
01:41:058 (3) - its better to add a streamer than this.
01:56:103 (1,2) - its better to make a whole blanket
02:50:353 (1) - change the pattern, no? aww...
02:51:908 (1) - ^
02:53:686 (1) - ^

thats all :)

Really cool song!.
+ 1 Star

:)
DoKito
00:19:486 (1,2,3) - I know you are going for a 'messy' kind of map, but this pattern is just very ugly in my opinion. It reminds me so much of 2009-2011 maps where they just randomly placed circles with DS. It's more of a subjective suggestion.
00:40:172 (3) - I would make this slider 1/2 beat longer, so you start clicking into the jumps on 00:40:172 with the strong beat. It feels better in my opinion.
00:49:623 (2) - This reverse feels kinda out of place.
00:59:022 (1) - I would stick with some sliders in this section, like you did before.
01:37:469 (4) - For me this section sounds exactly the same as all those before, so I'd remove this circle.
01:41:058 (3) - Maybe you could split this slider here 01:41:272.
02:36:517 (1) - Wasn't able to sightread this... Not in the slightest. I don't think this is even possible to sightread. Maybe try to alter the shape into something where you don't have to travel too much to stay in the followcircle.
02:50:353 (1,1,1) - This part is much fun to play. It doesn't really match the rhythm tho. Not sure about this.

I am not sure if our mod4mod agreement is still valid. If not, then just take this as a free mod.
Topic Starter
Monstrata

Haruto wrote:

m4m from your queue m8

tbh this is a free mod. and i dont have any finished map to mod, there is one but you collabed in it xd

[General]
  1. Countdown is intentional? i think it should be disabled lol ok
  2. like most #modhelp users said, why not use 9.5 or 9.7 for the AR? people seems complaining too much about the AR xD probably
  3. One More, Combo Colour 5, 7 and 8 could be brighter xP some parts are hard to read cuz they are blend with the BG
    ex
    00:40:172 - the slider
    well atleast for me xd idk what you think but yeah. they can be a bit brighter as most people play in dark background dim. they look fine for me
  4. eh btw, metadata source? and why the tags are blank? ;o also, artist should be "マキシマム ザ ホルモン" instead, i guess ok
[Winny Upload]
  1. 00:24:200 (3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3) - first, im not an experienced player but once i tested this. i felt like the movement between triplets to 00:24:842 (4) - are hard to read. it maybe because the AR but idk. just my thought ok
  2. 00:44:016 (5) - i'd ctrl+g this tho, cuz the reading. this cause me a miss here lol did it on purpose xD
    ~ Jump Section ~
  3. 00:52:766 (3,4) - this can cause a player misread. as you stacked (4) under 00:52:107 (1) - . and this is completely different with other jumps, what will i do is. do something like overlap it rather stacking it which could cause a player miss especially with the High AR you have used I think it'll be fine when i reduce ar
  4. 00:58:900 (8,1) - can be emphasized more? previous cursor movement is bigger while 00:58:900 (8) - to 00:59:022 (1) - isnt big at all, increase the spacing wouldnt hurt i guess lol fixed
  5. 01:00:723 - tbh the jumps here didnt make sense at all :/ well maybe just me just you xd
  6. 01:07:259 (1) - definetly looks like a gut, 01:19:288 (1) - yehaj same yea
  7. 01:30:362 (1,2) - are the stacked slider node here is intentional? seems weird :/ good
  8. 01:36:505 (2,3) - ew spaced stream xd why dont stack this with 01:36:344 (1) - instead? hard cursor movements here tho :/ to make it ugly lol
  9. 01:36:772 (5,6,7) - slider give me aids. also, stack? same like above im evil
  10. 01:38:058 - 01:40:576 - this parts give me aids. sik yes
  11. 01:45:552 (3,1) - emphasis more i guess? ok
  12. 01:53:257 (1,2) - first blanket mod : DDD yeah, blanket seems bad imo i made it worse
  13. 02:13:049 (4,1) - ew whats with the movements here. player would confuse here tho. as most of the cursor movements in this map is going to left so why not making the movements between 4>1 is left? like, 02:13:164 (1) - ctrl+g this would work this actually flows pretty well for me. the flwbreak is kinda slight, and works with the music
  14. 02:13:776 (3,4,5) - unperfect triangle 8( pls fix thx o well
  15. 02:15:605 (3,4) - are this intentional to be "ugly blanket" or it isnt? intentinal
  16. 02:32:742 (1,1) - ok. this is suprising. are the slow SV on 02:33:171 (1) - is a purpose? i mean, its not really natural when the previous was fast and the next is slowest. raise the SV a bit like 0,15 or 0,17 maybe? xd nah, this is cool i think
  17. 02:34:901 - add a greenline here and set the volume to 20% to give a nice transition to 02:35:017 (1) - k
  18. 02:36:401 - this too^ okay
  19. 02:40:674 (4,5) - okay, the jump here is suprising LOL seems straightforward
  20. 02:43:016 (10,1) - dont stack :< can cause a misread especially in high AR also, 02:42:793 (6) - NC here maybe? hmm i think its fine. ppl can misread :D
  21. 02:46:793 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - this is confusinggggg LOL yaaaa
  22. 02:55:471 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,1,1) - how to... give me inspiration, sensei xD
    ~ Slow Part ~
  23. 03:08:850 (3) - remove whistle on the tail? its weird to have a whistle in red tick vocal tho
  24. 03:16:894 (5,1,2) - the blanket could be nicer :D ok
  25. 03:28:492 (3,4) - for a reason, i thought 03:28:744 (4) - would appear on right where 03:28:996 (5) - is placed. ctrl+g them maybe? so players wont confused. well for me its a bit confusing tho ^^' might be ar. this is straightforward for me
  26. 04:25:225 (6,7,1,2,3) - high ar caused this a bit hard to read xd and btw, lower the placements i guess? maybe because its placed high caused me a misread there lol too much structure, cant change
  27. 04:33:754 (1,1,1,1) - Creative :D

    k i think thats all, i dont even know what i am doing lmao also, the slow part. why dont use a normal-hitnormal to replace the claps? fits better with hitnormal imo
im a shitmodder indeed, cancer part gives me aids xd slow part gives me beauty on my maps (~˘▾˘)~
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well, i hope it helps you and i dont really know how to mod 8.21* so pardon my mod if its bad xd
good luck sensei :D

Thanks for the mod Haruto!
Topic Starter
Monstrata

Battle wrote:

aaaaaa

[S T O P]
AR 9.6 or 9.7 would always work lol, that way the reading isn't too obnoxious with AR 10 while making the 3.8* part less awkward lol yea
00:24:200 (3,4,5,1,2,3) - You may want to consider repositioning these notes, while you do have patterns during the guitar similar to this, none of them go immediately back and forth from the same positions immediately, the other section of the song similar to this has consistent movement, so it feels kinda off since this is the only time something like this happens yea
00:32:332 (1,2) - Are you sure you want to sliders here? For the most part it's been single tapping, and I don't really see too much difference in the screaming he's doing in this part compared to the other parts, also it's worth pointing that there isn't really another part similar to it, so having it structured like the other rhythms in this section would work best imo the vocals just fit well there especially for me, but i see your point. i think its okay to break consistency here though
00:41:339 (5,3) - Could always put 3 in the curve of 5, but I dunno if you want that since you want it to look messy n stuff lol messy
00:42:941 (3,4,5) - Maybe make these mirror each other? You make the rhythms similar to this like that (00:44:663 (4,5) - and 00:46:484 (3,4,5,6) - ) Fixed by making them all assymetrical
00:48:623 (1,2,3) - The pause for 00:48:852 - is kind of awkward imo, since you never really emphasize that pause in the vocals as the section goes on fixed
00:51:250 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - I feel like these are somewhat fine, but I feel like this part should be toned down a little, so that way the scaling chaotic-ness on the screen is more apparent, since it's slowly getting more and more scream-y in the song, and I don't feel like the pattern should be as spaced as the part where he's screaming deeply in the song lol didnt do it here, but i took your suggestion for the later part
01:43:490 (1,2) - The way you have been spacing things makes these really not seem too emphasized, you might want to make them more emphasized since the guitar feels unique yea
02:20:338 (3,4,5,1) - 02:24:229 (3,4,5,1) - I feel like for both instances, you might want to break away from the pattern that you are doing, by doing so you differentiate both from stuff like 02:23:262 (3,4,5,1) - , plus the downbeat that both of the 1s pointed out are one have a significant change in the music so ye
02:43:016 (10,1,2,1,2,1,2) - I don't agree with stacking 02:43:239 (1) - on top of 10 since like, you kinda had a flow break for 02:39:463 (10,1) - , so I would suggest doing something similar. You may have done it to differentiate the pitches of the guitar, but imo since the guitar is in a higher pitch for 02:43:016 The idea is to give ppl the opportunity to alternate like its a stream, and then abruptly force them to play those streams as 1/2's again. Basically its laughing at players for not singletapping xD.(10,1) - it should be unique without doing something like stacking
03:07:390 (1) - Maybe give this a unique shape to compliment the vocal being stressed in the song did something. not a lot of length to work with but tried something :D
04:11:819 (2,3) - lol this blanket is slightly off and I need to fulfill my "1 blanket mod" quota xd ok

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Thanks for the mod!!
Topic Starter
Monstrata

Frostings wrote:

Decrease your timeline zoom holy f literally unmoddable
Disable countdown

Artist: マキシマムザホルモン ok
Romanized: Makishimamu Za Horumon uhh/color]
Album: 予襲復讐
Romanized: Yoshū Fukushū, or Yoshu Fukushu ^
Add "ALIEN" to tags, and other optional tags like screamo or metal, like anyone even searches those tags added

Source English
Source Japanese
(It's the band's official English and Japanese site respectively)
[Stop Whatever]
  1. 00:00:838 (1) - prob better to extend it to downbeat. Same with the following spinners (better style because their hitsounds are only on their ends) o yea my bad
  2. 00:17:766 - verify the guitar isn't 1/3. I already can't hear properly in one ear anymore its 1/4
  3. 00:28:922 (1,2,3,4,5) - Ignoring the fact that this is straight unplayable (let's be honest, no part of the map is playable), I think it's better if you emphasize your kick slider more than your previous 4 notes. The super one-taps make your slider seem like a filler. ok
  4. 00:34:046 (1,2,3,4,5) - This one isn't too bad because the jump is there yea
  5. 00:41:771 - Kinda sad you stopped caring about the guitar sadlyfe
  6. 01:41:487 - it's a shame you don't emphasize the drums here further. They're very strong and would make the map actually somewhat coherent. It does get better in the second half though, I guess. I think you should make the solo strings play separately, like antijumps, and only provide movement along the loud guitar/drums, if that makes sense i like the guitar better
  7. 02:39:686 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1) - I'd rework the structure here, maybe space them out horizontally more. Specifically, the transition is super awkward here 02:40:244 (2,1) - theyre structurally arranged tho. just not horitzontally, more vertically and spatially
  8. 02:57:257 - Wow, I can actually mod this. Uh just about style I think blankets are a complete noob trap, and force bad structure the idea is blankets look clean and nice so yea xD. noob traps? meh :D im noob mapper so this fits me
  9. 03:01:292 - I think the low spacing is supes awkward to play, even considering the slowness of the song. Low spacing does nothing here because your AR is maxed maybe
  10. 03:15:390 - Ugh. Actually turn off DS because it plays like tr. Use large distances strategically to make the notes feel like they're there for a reason, not just as a filler. and stop using blankets
  11. 03:53:600 - same with this whole section maybe next time maybe
  12. 04:01:581 - Also I dunno if you noticed but there's some dramatic changes in the song here that's not reflective at all in your mapping SV :D
  13. 04:45:303 (1) - lol xD
Sorry that my mod doesn't point out anything really specific, I'd need to be able to actually play the map to do so
Thanks for the mod Frostings!!
Topic Starter
Monstrata

eeezzzeee wrote:

hi m4m from your queue

alright so lets start by saying i did actually try to playtest this map, once with relax and once with htnf lol. but unfortunately i am a shit tier player so yeah take any suggestions to gameplay with a grain of salt

[diff]
i dont understand the complaints about ar tbh, anyone playing this should be at the level where reading ar 10 is pretty natural. and for the ez part, once again anyone playing this wont mess up there anyway. that being said though i think there are a few parts that are hard read and it has more to do with the map and song than ar
  1. 00:35:361 (2) - check ds this was kinda intentional. i'll see if more ppl point it out, but i did it to be obnoxious xd
  2. 00:39:638 (5,6,7,8,9,10) - maybe we should use sliders again like before 00:37:929 (4,5) - or like dont stack these triples under the previous notes, or nc or something to make it a little easier to read okay i agree. changed.
  3. 00:43:473 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6) - really awkward to transition between tiny spacing of the first combo into large spacing of the second one. i dont see the need for 00:44:342 (1,2,3,4) - to be so large anyway. also consider changing 00:44:449 (2,3) - into a slider instead, it seems to be similar to 00:44:016 (5) - so it would fit the style of mapping the vocal so far did some adjustments here. fixed
  4. 00:52:986 (1,2,3) - err this flow man lol. i guess it was intentional but i didnt like playing it thats what i like to hear :D
  5. 00:59:022 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - alright... can we not force difficulty on a map thats already going to be one of the hardest ever? this part of the music is basically exactly the same as 00:55:579 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - so i dont see the reason why suddenly its changed into all circles. not to mention all these zig zags are just completely not fun to play imo, compared to the slider patterns you had before which actually had different flows to make the part more interesting true. I nerfed some parts, and buffed others to create a better difficulty increase. applies to others below
  6. 00:59:867 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - ^
  7. 01:00:723 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - ^ plz
  8. 01:24:577 (2,3,4,1) - would be nice if these four were all part of the same combo instead of that randomly being a part of the next but eh o god ur right. redid the nc rhythm for everything in this section
  9. 01:34:630 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5) - you can try NC'ing it like this i think it would make more sense with the structure of the rhythm here no i prefer my wayhttp://puu.sh/pjHgb/7c5201fa03.jpg
  10. 01:36:344 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - ^ if you took that suggestion http://puu.sh/pjHkp/e6d2297dee.jpg ^
  11. 01:38:058 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5) - hoyl ok i guess its fine but 01:38:380 (4) - this is a kinda unnecessary trap imo, people will expect it to be a lot more to the left seems predictable enough for me
  12. 01:42:186 (4,1) - swap the NC?
  13. 02:13:512 (2,3) - the timing difference is quite significant and this might cause issues during gamplay but what can we do to fix it lel i have no idea sorry. NC? Sliders? fixed this and others
  14. 02:26:570 (3,4) - same thing i said about 01:38:380 (4) - being a trap you just activated my trap card
  15. 02:27:195 (1,2,3,4) - argh this is just so ridiculously hard to read when its overlapped by the stuff before it yea
  16. 02:28:885 (1,2,3,4) - ^ yea
  17. 02:29:742 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - can we just try to keep the spacing between them as even as possible like do whatever you want with the shapes but plz spacing no sry xP
  18. 02:49:895 (4,1) - swap NC ok
  19. 03:10:874 (5,1) - blanket ok
  20. 03:45:634 - but monstrata only makes triangles
  21. 04:33:754 (1,1,1,1) - and its so cool how this actually works
ya. i like the contrasting aesthetics of this map btw
Thanks for the mod!!
Topic Starter
Monstrata

arnoldusj wrote:

hi, from your Queue Uh....

GENERAL


Artist : マキシマムザホルモン (Maximum the Hormone)
Tags
Sky Records Yoshū Fukushū Album ダイスケはん ナヲ マキシマムザ亮君 上ちゃん Daisuke-han Nao Maximum the Ryo-kun Ue-chan
added some tags

00:00:838 (1) - y: 196 x: 192 no...
00:03:446 (1) - Spinner to long no...
00:19:486 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,1,2,3) - This should have been placed in the shape of a star or triangle maybe
00:25:484 (1) - x: 352 x:192 no...
00:39:211 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - This is also the same, put a triangle or star shape no...
01:04:890 (1) - change the shape of the slider why
01:41:058 (3) - straight or crooked curved
02:36:517 (1) - changing speed, so players can be surprised if suddenly no..
04:45:303 (1) - x: 268 y: 320 at least give me some reason xP
Thanks for the mod!!
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Monstrata

UnLock- wrote:

From your M4M Q

[UHHH]
  1. 00:34:933 (1) - Move to x48 y124 because of DS with 2 ehh enough ppl point it out, i'll fix
  2. 00:48:737 (2,3) - This part has the change of melody, but this gap is weird to this changing. how about copy 00:49:623 (2) - it to here? fixed
  3. 00:51:346 - Del this timing point and change 00:51:250 - here to 283 bpm. and replace 00:51:346 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - them. i think it is correct bpm I disagree
  4. 00:54:828 - ^ ^
  5. 00:56:971 (4,5) - Too close. ehh why not change it to linear flow
  6. 01:34:417 (6,7,8) - Move to x136 y164 because I think to make harmony with this pattern and song, 01:34:523 (8,1) - this gap have to has harder DS than 01:34:311 (5,6) - here. i prefer no harmony xP
  7. 01:37:469 (4) - Del this note. i think you should keep same beat in 01:36:344 (1,2,3,4) - here with 01:37:201 (1,2,3,4,5) - here. i think it fits here tho
  8. 03:08:850 (3) - Change to circle slider is better
  9. 04:41:302 (3,1) - NC swap huh no :P
Thanks for the mod!!
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Monstrata

Trent83 wrote:

From your queue [/color]

(=>w<=)/ M4M \(=>w<=)


[Stop! Stop Winny Upload!!]

Stop! Stop Winny Upload!! diff
00:00:838 (1) - i think here it's better to remove the whistle sound, because in that part of the song the music isn't that strong to add a whistle, only a recommendation, why not to add a Custom Hitsound?. sure why not.
00:19:486 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,1,2,3) - I think that in this part you can be more creative because this triplets ruin the sthetic of the map at that point so, why not to add more sliders?. No... this is better imo.
00:30:836 (3) - i think that this can be pretty confusing. I think so too.
00:59:022 (1) - from this point to 01:02:330 (8) - this point you ignore some sliders it will be easier for me explain this if you see this point of the map 00:57:293 (1,2) - . Yea. I want to focus more on the drums now, creating a transition out of the vocals.
01:32:289 (2) - Ctrl+G?. Better not to
01:41:058 (3) - its better to add a streamer than this. I prefer this to a stream xP.
01:56:103 (1,2) - its better to make a whole blanket Not here.
02:50:353 (1) - change the pattern, no? aww... No
02:51:908 (1) - ^ ^
02:53:686 (1) - ^^

thats all :)

Really cool song!.
+ 1 Star

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