00:16:405 (3) - NC?
00:20:041 (3) - Rotate this slider slightly so that the sliderend is at the same height as the sliderstart. I think this would look better. Also NC?
00:35:269 (3,4,5) - Spacing is off here.
00:38:110 (1,2) - NC on 2 instead of 1. Also try adjusting the placement a bit so that 7, 1 and 2 line up better.
00:39:928 (1,2) - NC on 2 instead of 1.
00:41:746 (1,2) - ^
00:43:678 (1,2,3) - The placement of these sliders could be better i think. The distance and height difference between 1 and 3 looks a bit weird
Maybe move 3 a bit to the left and down?
00:49:132 (7,1) - NC on 7 instead of 1.
00:52:769 (1,2) - ctrl+G 1 and 2? Plays better in my opinion.
01:12:769 (4) - NC?
01:17:541 (7,8) - The slider needs some adjustment to blanket 7 properly.
01:21:405 (1,2) - Blanket here also needs adjustment. Also I would probably ctrl+G the slider and change it into a reverse slider half the size of the current slider.
01:23:223 (6,1) - Blanket needs adjustment.
01:25:269 (5,1) - This blanket could also be slightly better.
01:43:905 (1,2) - ^
02:30:950 (5,6) - I would change 5 into a slider and 6 into a circle (where the current slider ends). Fits the music better and also plays better in my opinion (maybe do the same for 7 and 8).
02:39:360 (7,8) - Same thing here. Change 7 to a slider and 8 to a circle.
02:46:860 (8,1) - Blanket needs adjustment.
02:50:496 (7,8) - ^
03:24:360 (5,6,7,1,2,3,4) - Are the sliders supposed to be blankets? If so, they need some adjustment I think.
03:27:541 (1,2,3) - Fix spacing here.
03:34:814 (1,2,3) - Spacing is also slighty off here.
03:36:632 (1,2,3) - Spacing.
03:41:860 (6,1) - NC on 6 instead of 1?
03:43:678 (5,1) - NC on 5 instead of 1?
03:45:496 (5,1) - NC on 5 instead of 1?
03:49:132 (6,1) - NC on 6 instead of 1?
03:50:269 (3,4) - I think this would look better if 3 is moved slightly to the left (or 4 slightly to the right) so that they have the same position on the x-axis.
03:54:814 (1,2,3) - Spacing.
04:13:905 (6,7) - The slider needs some adjustment to blanket 6 properly.
04:17:541 (7,8) - ^
04:18:678 (1,2,3) - I think the spacing is slightly off here as well.
04:20:950 (6,7) - 7 need some adjustment to blanket the sliderend of 6 properly.
04:25:269 (5,6,7) - Spacing.
04:32:996 (1,2,3) - Spacing.
04:43:678 (5,1) - NC on 5 instead of 1?
04:46:405 (3) - In my opinion this part would play better if 3 is moved to the left and down like this:
(This creates an overlap with 1 though)
05:03:450 (5,6) - The slider needs adjustment to blanket 5 properly.
04:17:541 (7,8) - ^
05:32:087 (3,4) - I would rotate 4 slightly so that it lines up with 3 in a straight line.
05:40:041 (7,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5) - I don't think a stream fits the music here.
05:43:450 (6,7,1) - Spacing.
05:44:360 (3,4,5) - Spacing.
06:16:405 (1) - I think you can start the spinner earlier.