jinjin's extra00:56:349 - i love that part thanks~
fixed everything according to your suggestions up to this part
01:16:607 (76607|3,77844|4,78153|4) - and so on, the way triples are layered is very weird and unnatural to me because snares, which are much louder, are doubles. I would switch the triple layering to snares here.
01:20:550 - this would become a double if you applied the thing above since there wouldn't be a triple on the red tick
01:21:865 (81865|3) - to 6? feels more fluent
01:25:189 (85189|3,85267|0,85267|2) - would be fitting if it was the same as 01:24:957 (84957|2,85035|1,85035|0) - since it's the same sound
01:25:769 (85769|0,85808|2,85847|4,85885|1,85924|3,85963|5,86001|2,86040|0,86040|4,86040|6) - this is mean, technically okay but people will hate you for that
01:27:818 - possible note to be added
01:33:926 - i don't understand the random 4-chord here.
01:34:854 (94854|6,94932|3,94932|1,95086|2,95164|3,95164|5) - same thing as before, would be cool if it was on the same columns for repeated sound
01:40:731 - why 4-chord?
01:42:586 - same here
01:50:009 - ^, these feel very random, i also feel there's no consistency with them between the sections
02:00:138 - i think a double should be here, not on the red tick, same with 02:07:560 -
02:03:153 (123153|5) - feels more aesthetically pleasing on 4
02:08:256 - double? sound feels quite strong
02:10:035 - same as before, also double for 02:10:189 - ?
02:24:107 (144107|4) - delete, since the sound is too weak for a double. Also move 02:24:030 (144030|3) - 5 if you apply.
02:25:885 - the 4-chord feels very random here
02:26:890 (146890|1) - ghost note
02:57:432 (177432|3) - move this to blue tick after since 3-2-4 is more sensible than 4-1-4 in this case (musically)
02:59:519 - I would rather want the note to be here and not 02:59:674 (179674|2) - here
03:02:380 (182380|3) - reduce it to 3-chord? 03:07:329 - similar
03:03:772 (183772|3,183772|2,183772|0,183772|1,183926|3,183926|0,183926|1,183926|2,184081|1,184081|2,184236|0,184236|2,184236|1,184236|3,184390|0,184390|3,184545|1,184545|2) - left thumb players will HATE you for this, please rearrange it (more symmetrically maybe?).
03:14:442 (194442|1,194442|3,194519|6,194519|5,194597|0,194597|1,194597|3,194597|4,194635|5,194674|6,194713|0,194751|1,194790|2,194829|3,194867|4) - this doesn't feel too good, maybe reduce the 4-chord and rearrange it without anchoring the burst?
03:17:225 - wow it's even stronger now
03:21:246 - why is this stronger than 03:21:401 - this? I understand the layering but it feels so unnatural...
03:22:174 - feels too strong
04:13:978 - feels like a spike right at the ending, nerf this
from here on onwards, i'm probably going to be self modding and make the patterns more fluent / easy for the hands. Gonna take some time doing this