as your request
[general]
disable widescreen support since you don't have any sb nor video and letterbox during breaks.
[bakari's normal]
00:08:943(4,5)- spacing issue. the objects are too close as i can see so it needs to be fixed.
00:46:814(3,4)- instead of ending on downbeat, why don't you remove the repeat from (3)- and move (4)- to where the downbeat starts from? the downbeat would get more emphasis by being clickable plus that little strong snare would be emphasized by the repeat of (4)-.
http://puu.sh/sDMZD/7e2e8199df.jpg01:10:585(1)- tbh, there's no any new stanza here so the nc would be on 01:10:988(2)-, not on this note.
01:10:988(2,3)- spacing..
01:17:434(1)- don't you think that this slider covers most of beats present in song? it's like a spinner which covers most of beats let's say. i would do something in order to give emphasis to the covered beats like in this picture for instance
http://puu.sh/sDNxd/aec4e5fa82.jpg.
01:29:118(2)- missing clap on repeat?
02:00:140(2)- maybe move (2)- a bit down in order to avoid the overlap with 01:58:528(4)-? i swear it was nearly noticeable when i testplayed it.
02:33:177(1)- that weird slider lol.
02:54:933(2,1)- really weird to see the 6/1 gap empty since there are still some beats present in song. would be better if you will map that 6/1 gap instead of letting it unmapped for no reason.
02:57:350(1)- shouldn't the repeat be on 02:58:961- instead? there's the downbeat and it would fit much better if you'll move the repeat to the downbeat. moreover, that downbeat will get some emphasis tbh. after, you can place an 1/1 slider on 03:00:976- in order to not leave the 3/1 gap empty.
03:19:509(4,1)- that overlap orz.. did you make it on purpose? if not, i think you have to get rid of this overlap.
03:29:588(1)- maybe same issue as i stated at 01:17:434(1)-.
i suggest to check the spacing again because i'm not really sure about your spacing usage tbh
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[hard]
00:43:390(1,2)- the rhythm sounds a bit weird here tbh probably because of the stronger violin. you can try this rhythm out
http://puu.sh/sDPv4/ec915b4f77.jpg in order to end (1)- on downbeat instead ignoring it and give more emphasis to the stronger violin.
00:50:038(1,2)- maybe unstack these notes for the sake of build-up effect? it is obvious that the vocal starts to get more intensified on (2)-.
01:17:434(1,2,3,4)- tbh, i would fill a bit each 1/1 gap from this part since the vocal is pretty stronger. i would do like this let's say
http://puu.sh/sDPL2/288fd3a492.jpg.
01:51:075(1)- i don't think this type of slidershape catches up really well the build-up of the violin. maybe try out a curved slider to catch up better the build-up of the violin.
02:54:933(4,1)- i'm not a fan of these kind of overlaps so better get rid of this overlap.
03:03:796(1,2)- blanket looks somehow off.
03:10:847(1,2,3)- i would better unstack (2)- and (3)- from (1)-'s head since the violin became more stronger there and seeing them all stacked in an one point wouldn't give enough emphasis to the stronger violin. same goes for 03:29:581(1,2,3)- tho.
i saw that at some points where the violin gets stronger and stronger, you're using jump or antijump. tbh, i disagree with antijumps usage on where violin gets stronger and stronger like 00:11:965(3,4,5)-. at 00:31:505 (3,4,5)- you did jumps here but at some of them you didn't. check one more time the spacing to see where should be a jump or not.
that should be all! a neat mapset tbh.
good luck!
