You know, if you just applied what I proposed, you would have the exact same map, only rankable. :PAlace wrote:
i got +10ms to offset
hmm i really hope we can have X 0.25 green lines
generally, using red lines to change slider speed is unrankable now
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Choucho - When the First Love Ends
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the mp3 is 256kbps, that's unrankable T_T
<Collab>
I suggest adding claps for the whole song to keep consistency @.@
01:22:218 (3) - looks bad
03:16:496 (3) - i know you're following the drum in the background, but you may lower the volume for this to make it sound better
nice
<Collab>
I suggest adding claps for the whole song to keep consistency @.@
01:22:218 (3) - looks bad
03:16:496 (3) - i know you're following the drum in the background, but you may lower the volume for this to make it sound better
nice
sorry i'm too late. T_T
Hi ~
Here is my taiko mod ~
Mod request by kanpakyin
Blue~ Critical issues, you must fix this
Purple~ I think you should fix this
Pink~ Suggestions only
[Overall]
The current offset sounds too early for me. Maybe try 15060 in all diffs ? Remember to resnap all notes after changing offset ~
[[Shalon]'s Taiko]
I don't suggest changing BPM for the slow slider at 02:39:051. The speed is also too slow imo. I suggset using BPM x 0.5 instead ( Or x 0.25 for effects of BPM 45 )~
No errors found. Nice job ~
Next time you can use more different types of patterns and hitsounds ~
btw I like the song ~
Star and good luck ~
Here is my taiko mod ~
Mod request by kanpakyin
Blue~ Critical issues, you must fix this
Purple~ I think you should fix this
Pink~ Suggestions only
[Overall]
The current offset sounds too early for me. Maybe try 15060 in all diffs ? Remember to resnap all notes after changing offset ~
[[Shalon]'s Taiko]
I don't suggest changing BPM for the slow slider at 02:39:051. The speed is also too slow imo. I suggset using BPM x 0.5 instead ( Or x 0.25 for effects of BPM 45 )~
Suggested patterns
These are all suggestions only. Change them if you want to ~
00:37:051 ( 54 ) Blue note ?
00:42:885 ( x ) Add a red note ?
00:45:051 ( x ) ^
00:47:718 ( x, 98 ) Change both to blue notes ? ( Change both 00:45:051 and 00:47:718 )
00:57:051 ( 138 ~ 147 ) ooo ooooooo ?
01:00:051 ( 151, 154 ~ 155, 157 ~ 159, 161 ~ 164 ) All blue notes ? ( Pattern of oooo oooo oooo )
01:16:385 ( 222 ) Blue note ?
01:40:218 ( 356 ) ^
01:46:135 ( 382, 388 ) Delete both notes ? ( Divide the stream into 5, 5, 3 plets )
02:16:385 ( 47, 50, 53 ) All blue notes ?
02:19:051 ( 64 ~ 82 ) Add some blue hitsounds. You may use the patterns I mentioned above ( 01:00:051 ) or your own patterns.
02:26:385 ( 88, 89 ) Change both to blue notes ?
02:29:385 ( 105 ) Blue note ?
02:36:385 ( 138 ) ^
03:06:718 ( 155 ) ^
03:19:051 ( 212 ~ 215 ) Use blue note for 212, and delete 213 ~ 215 ?
03:22:718 ( 229 ) Blue note ?
03:24:051 ( 235 ~ 238 ) All blue notes ?
03:27:384 ( 259, 260 ) Use both red notes ?
00:37:051 ( 54 ) Blue note ?
00:42:885 ( x ) Add a red note ?
00:45:051 ( x ) ^
00:47:718 ( x, 98 ) Change both to blue notes ? ( Change both 00:45:051 and 00:47:718 )
00:57:051 ( 138 ~ 147 ) ooo ooooooo ?
01:00:051 ( 151, 154 ~ 155, 157 ~ 159, 161 ~ 164 ) All blue notes ? ( Pattern of oooo oooo oooo )
01:16:385 ( 222 ) Blue note ?
01:40:218 ( 356 ) ^
01:46:135 ( 382, 388 ) Delete both notes ? ( Divide the stream into 5, 5, 3 plets )
02:16:385 ( 47, 50, 53 ) All blue notes ?
02:19:051 ( 64 ~ 82 ) Add some blue hitsounds. You may use the patterns I mentioned above ( 01:00:051 ) or your own patterns.
02:26:385 ( 88, 89 ) Change both to blue notes ?
02:29:385 ( 105 ) Blue note ?
02:36:385 ( 138 ) ^
03:06:718 ( 155 ) ^
03:19:051 ( 212 ~ 215 ) Use blue note for 212, and delete 213 ~ 215 ?
03:22:718 ( 229 ) Blue note ?
03:24:051 ( 235 ~ 238 ) All blue notes ?
03:27:384 ( 259, 260 ) Use both red notes ?
No errors found. Nice job ~
Next time you can use more different types of patterns and hitsounds ~
btw I like the song ~
Star and good luck ~
Fixed
I have no idea with timing, I'll follow MeLLoN's decision.
Download: Chocho - When the First Love Ends (MeLLoN) [[Shalon]'s Taiko].osu
I have no idea with timing, I'll follow MeLLoN's decision.
Download: Chocho - When the First Love Ends (MeLLoN) [[Shalon]'s Taiko].osu
wow, good map
Star
Star
star!!!
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my love!!!!!
MakJang ♡ Noobita
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my love!!!!!
MakJang ♡ Noobita
Topic Starter
upload~ ><[Shalon] wrote:
hey, why don't you update my map
sorry,I'm so busy everyday
IRCで話したら、ArtistはChocho－＞Choucho
[5item's Normal]
00:38:051 (1) - Way too soon after a spinner for the easiest difficulty. It may be best to map through the spinner.
00:59:051 - Extend the start of the break to here? Either that or add a note here to go with that cymbal crash.
01:09:718 (1) - Also too soon. And again probably best to map through the spinner. Maybe with something like this?
02:19:051 - Extend the start of the break to here? Either that or add a note here to go with that cymbal crash.
02:29:718 (1) - Same as the last spinner, along with same suggestion of slider replacement.
[[Shalon]'s Tiako]
Add quintitem and [Shalon] to tags
00:17:052 - Yahoo! Maybe just delete the break?
Apply the same timing suggestion from the other difficulties and apply it to this one as well so you can have the similar slowdown effect though honestly, it doesn't work very well in taiko mode. I'd just get rid of it. :x
[Collab]
The normal-hitwhistles sounded really loud compared to the rest of the parts. x_x Think you can introduce a custom one with a lower dB rate? Otherwise the map looks good to me~
Actually: 03:16:561 (3) - could be more synced to the music by reducing one repeat and starting at 03:16:478 -
[5item's Normal]
00:38:051 (1) - Way too soon after a spinner for the easiest difficulty. It may be best to map through the spinner.
00:59:051 - Extend the start of the break to here? Either that or add a note here to go with that cymbal crash.
01:09:718 (1) - Also too soon. And again probably best to map through the spinner. Maybe with something like this?
02:19:051 - Extend the start of the break to here? Either that or add a note here to go with that cymbal crash.
02:29:718 (1) - Same as the last spinner, along with same suggestion of slider replacement.
[[Shalon]'s Tiako]
Add quintitem and [Shalon] to tags
00:17:052 - Yahoo! Maybe just delete the break?
Apply the same timing suggestion from the other difficulties and apply it to this one as well so you can have the similar slowdown effect though honestly, it doesn't work very well in taiko mode. I'd just get rid of it. :x
[Collab]
The normal-hitwhistles sounded really loud compared to the rest of the parts. x_x Think you can introduce a custom one with a lower dB rate? Otherwise the map looks good to me~
Actually: 03:16:561 (3) - could be more synced to the music by reducing one repeat and starting at 03:16:478 -
[Shalon]'s taiko: remove the letter box during breaks
great map, star~
great map, star~
oh ok, all nice suggestions >w< so all fixed~ thank you~ :3Garven wrote:
[5item's Normal]
00:38:051 (1) - Way too soon after a spinner for the easiest difficulty. It may be best to map through the spinner.
00:59:051 - Extend the start of the break to here? Either that or add a note here to go with that cymbal crash.
01:09:718 (1) - Also too soon. And again probably best to map through the spinner. Maybe with something like this?
02:19:051 - Extend the start of the break to here? Either that or add a note here to go with that cymbal crash.
02:29:718 (1) - Same as the last spinner, along with same suggestion of slider replacement.
then mellon sorry for let you need to upload again for me >_<
I'm already all fixed so just put this to map document then submit is ok, thank you ></
Download: Choucho - When the First Love Ends (MeLLoN) [5item's Normal].osu
Fixed a couple hitsounds that were missing in Collab.
Bubbled!
:U
Bubbled!
:U
Topic Starter
thanks Mod~Garven wrote:
Fixed a couple hitsounds that were missing in Collab.
Bubbled!
:U
go-
My map seems small weird..
well, 00:26:385 (7,8,9,10) - this part was 1/3, but snapped 1/4 on now.
03:16:395 (196,197,198,199,200,201,202,203,204,205,206) - same with here
Well, if my map get mod about that part by BAT, plz change it with this file.
sorry to bother you.
Download: Choucho - When the First Love Ends (MeLLoN) [[Shalon]'s Taiko].osu
well, 00:26:385 (7,8,9,10) - this part was 1/3, but snapped 1/4 on now.
03:16:395 (196,197,198,199,200,201,202,203,204,205,206) - same with here
Well, if my map get mod about that part by BAT, plz change it with this file.
sorry to bother you.
Download: Choucho - When the First Love Ends (MeLLoN) [[Shalon]'s Taiko].osu
Ack, go ahead and update that real quick, MeLLoN, and let me know so I can rebubble.
Topic Starter
update~ :3[Shalon] wrote:
My map seems small weird..
well, 00:26:385 (7,8,9,10) - this part was 1/3, but snapped 1/4 on now.
03:16:395 (196,197,198,199,200,201,202,203,204,205,206) - same with here
Well, if my map get mod about that part by BAT, plz change it with this file.
sorry to bother you.
Nom
[Collab]
02:11:895 (3,1) - I find this extremely confusing, maybe it could be easier to read if you switch the New combo or if you'll try to do something else.
02:37:728 (2) - New combo.
I guess I can rank when the fixes are applied.
EDIT: Ranked~
02:11:895 (3,1) - I find this extremely confusing, maybe it could be easier to read if you switch the New combo or if you'll try to do something else.
02:37:728 (2) - New combo.
I guess I can rank when the fixes are applied.
EDIT: Ranked~
Topic Starter
Thanks osuplayer~osuplayer111 wrote:
[Collab]
02:11:895 (3,1) - I find this extremely confusing, maybe it could be easier to read if you switch the New combo or if you'll try to do something else.
02:37:728 (2) - New combo.
I guess I can rank when the fixes are applied.
EDIT: Ranked~
\o/
***ヾ(≧∇≦)ﾉ"***ぴゃぁああああ♪
ARRRRGH
The whistles in the KIAI parts are no fun, they're WAY too loud. I wanna hear the damn song, not a fuckload of whistles D:
Very nice map besides that, GZ on rank.
The whistles in the KIAI parts are no fun, they're WAY too loud. I wanna hear the damn song, not a fuckload of whistles D:
Very nice map besides that, GZ on rank.
omedetouuuu
