General:
Just gave it a second thought and maybe it would be nice to have each beatmap background different. As it is an anime, a lot of nicely related pictures can be found

Easy:
You said that I don't have to, but haven't said I couldnt so...
- Approach Rate and Overall Difficulty are quite high for an Easy. And is very suprising that Easy is harder than Normal in Accuracy... I would say that middle of those would be for something like Normal+, I would move Overall Difficulty one tick to the left and Approach Rate twice to the left.
- Where this Bpm come from? Well, I think you should lower the Velocity even more because of this BPM. I would use 0,60 for easy.
0:18:461 - Whistle here
0:19:147 - Clap here
0:20:861 - No clap here
0:23:947 (3,4,6) - Whistles here
0:28:061 - Clap here
0:29:432 (4,5) - Whistles here
0:34:918 (4,5,7) - ^
0:39:032 - Clap here
0:40:404 (4,5) - Whistels here
0:47:261 (4,5,7) - ^
0:50:689 - Finish here
0:52:061 - ^
0:54:118 - ^
1:03:032 (1,2,3) - This combo shouldn't be soundless in my opinion...

Normal:
0:15:375 (4,5) - slider instead
0:18:289 (5,6) - ^ and maybe 1/2 beat snap longer
0:52:575 - slider till ...:747
You kind of done Distance Snap mostly throught out the map, so just to pick out some not DSed to see if you sure to leave them like this:
0:12:632 - 1gird to the left
0:29:261 - 2girds up
0:40:747 - 1grid down
0:55:489 - ^
0:58:232 - 1grid to the left
0:58:747 - Spacing
1:00:289 - ^
1:08:689 - ^
1:13:832 (9,10) - ^
..I don't see bigger issues with this difficulty. And maybe you can use my sounds setting what I've done for Easy~


Hard:
Same for sounds I've said for Normal
0:14:347 - Maybe end this slider on 0:14:689?

Insane:
0:36:461 (2,3) - Slider instead
1:07:489 - 5 till the rest of this combo are not on beat, looks only nice aestheticaly...

Extra:
0:02:688 - Random circle - no beat here in Playback rate 25%. Remove pls
0:14:346 - This slider should go only till 0:14:688
0:17:088 (5,6,7) - Make it a repeat slider..?
0:39:031 (4,5) - Slider instead
1:05:774 (1,1,1,1) - Combo Fun-spawn ó.ó, make those four one combo, it is too frustraiting!

Most of above fixed.
The ones that I opted not to change were some suggestions that were made.

Hello!

Easy:
00:44:518 Add finish hitsound
01:06:461 ^
01:27:032 ^

I modded it anyways. ;D

Normal:
00:17:089 Add finish hitsound
00:18:289 ^ REMEMBER!! If you can hear a finish hitsound in the song, then you should add one for the beatmap! It's such a big mistake everywhere.. ;__;

Hard:
00:11:947 Add clap hitsound
00:13:318 ^ REMEMBER!! If you can hear a clap hitsound in the song, then you should add one for the beatmap! It's such a big mistake everywhere.. ;__;
00:44:518 Add finish hitsound
00:55:489 ^
01:17:432 ^

Insane:
00:11:604 Finish
00:14:347 ^
00:14:689 Clap
00:15:547 Finish
00:17:089 ^
00:18:289 ^
00:44:518 ^
01:17:432 ^

Extreme:
Wow.. This is extreme. Let's just hope it's rankable.

STAR!!

[Extra]
00:22:574 (11) - Move this down 2 or 3 ticks down so that it's not touching the HP bar.
00:44:517 (1) - Add finish
00:45:031 (4,5,6) - These claps right next to each other are unfitting. Remove them. Do the same for other parts like this.
01:05:774 - From here things just get messy and it's too hard for me to mod.

- I agree with osuplayer111, this diff seems over mapped and it doesn't fit this song. I also noticed that the combos seem to be inconsistent and change from long combos to short ( Ex. [00:00:974 - 00:03:203] compared to [00:05:946 - 00:10:060] )

[Insane]
00:14:432 (1) - Add finish
00:18:632 (5,7) - Remove clap, sounds much better IMO
01:07:489 (5,8) - Delete these notes, I think it's too much.
01:18:461 (1) - ^

[Normal]
00:20:175 (5) - Move down about 3 ticks.

Starred.

All above:

Mostly fixed.
One or two hitsound suggestions were left out.

aaaa neko-mod ! :3

[D]= Do it
[I]= if you want

General
Recalculate Kiai Time (66,461 - 88,747)

Easy
00:28:061 (2): Moves that circle to make it equal to others [I]
00:37:661 (1): Finish at 00:38:232 [D]
00:50:004 (1,2,3): This not is for easy diff you can make it THIS [I]
00:51:375 (1,2,3): Same ^ [I]
00:52:747 (1,2,3,4,5): Same ^ [D]
01:28:404 (3): Finish at 01:29:089 [D]

Normal
00:20:169 (5): If you replace it with a Spinner ? [I]

Hard
01:08:689 (7): Moves that circle to make it equal to others [I]
01:28:404 (1): Finish at 01:29:089 [D]

Insane
01:28:404 (3): Finish at 01:29:089 [D]

that's all :3
I like that song ! Star !

Neko_Ray wrote:

SPOILER

aaaa neko-mod ! :3

[D]= Do it
[I]= if you want

General
Recalculate Kiai Time (66,461 - 88,747)

Easy
00:28:061 (2): Moves that circle to make it equal to others [I]
00:37:661 (1): Finish at 00:38:232 [D]
00:50:004 (1,2,3): This not is for easy diff you can make it THIS [I]
00:51:375 (1,2,3): Same ^ [I]
00:52:747 (1,2,3,4,5): Same ^ [D]
01:28:404 (3): Finish at 01:29:089 [D]

Normal
00:20:169 (5): If you replace it with a Spinner ? [I]

Hard
01:08:689 (7): Moves that circle to make it equal to others [I]
01:28:404 (1): Finish at 01:29:089 [D]

Insane
01:28:404 (3): Finish at 01:29:089 [D]

that's all :3
I like that song ! Star !

All fixed.

I have no complaints.

❤ = ★★

hi

[D] do it
[IF] if you wanna

[Easy]

00:11:775- ^ and Kiai mode (because song is strong) [IF]
00:11:861- ^

I can´t see wrong so this is fine

[normal]

00:11:261- ^ and Kiai mode (because song is strong) [IF]
00:11:432- ^ [IF]

I can´t see wrong so this is fine

[Hard]


00:11:775- ^ and Kiai mode (because song is strong) [IF]
00:11:861- ^

I can´t see wrong so this is fine

[Insane]

00:11:775- ^ and Kiai mode (because song is strong) [IF]
00:11:861- ^

I can´t see wrong so this is fine

[Extra]


00:11:261- ^ and Kiai mode (because song is strong) [IF]
00:11:432- ^ [IF]

I can´t see wrong so this is fine


that all -.-

so star ^^

mod4mod

[Easy]
0:09:032 (1) - start it 1/2 earlier?
0:26:689 (1,2) - swap new combos
0:33:547 (1,2,3) - spacing
0:37:661 (1) - i don't think this new combo was necessary
0:45:889 (2,4) - spacing, once again
0:55:489 (1,2,3,4) - ^
1:24:632 (2) - this slider is... o_o
1:28:404 (3) - use bpm multiplier 0.5x. also, i'd like you to close kiai section at this point

[Normal]
0:46:570 (1,2,3) - what about putting (2,3) a grid higher?
1:00:284 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - if you want to make it more aesthetic, turn off grid snap and move (2)'s a little bit
1:05:769 (1,2,3,4) - i guess soft hitsounds for all four circles should work better
1:26:684 (1,2,3) - place them like this?

[Hard]
0:09:204 (1) - shouldn't it end 1/2 later?
0:20:175 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - spacing, i'd move (3,4,5,6) a grid lower
0:22:575 (1) - hitfinish?
1:22:747 (7) - try to shape it into something more symmethric, like this
1:28:404 (1) - extend it 'til white tick

[Insane]
0:44:004 (9,1) - uh, spacing. this is WAY too far than it's supposed to be
1:26:689 (1,2,3) - once again take a look at pic @[Normal], and give it a try
1:28:404 (3) - use bpm multiplier 0.5x.

[Extra]
0:24:117 (4,5,6,7) - spacing
1:23:946 (shitloads) - stop using new combos this often, please ;_;
1:28:403 (3) - extend it 'til white tick


[General]
for future use: do NOT start kiai basing on vocals, please :) if i were you, i'd start it at 1:06:461
this spacing is kinda questionable for me, but i like it :)

good job right there, keep working!

• [General]

1. There's two .osb file D: I think you should delete them and then full submit.
2. There's countdown only on the [Normal], remove it?
3. Lulz The offset is 976 on all diff but 975 on the Extra juste 1ms, but it still needs the same offset °° Fix it and don't forget to snap
4. Notes are not snapped on [Normal] :/
5. You have really too much notes like this: http://puu.sh/WH2, it's ugly and not easy to play sometimes.
   All your notes on all the diff should be at least 2 grid (lvl3) from the border up or the border down.

• [Easy]

1. 00:18:461 (4) - You should stack this under the slider with grid lvl 4
2. 00:39:032 (1) - This note is 1 grid (grid lvl3) too far and after this you have a lot of notes that are too close of the up border of the map, so you should select this notes and ALL the notes after this (select them on the timeline) and move them all 1 grid down (still grid lvl3)
3. 01:28:404 - If you want to mute the note you should put Soft instead of Normal, it's really better.

• [Normal]

1. 01:19:655 (2) - 1 grid up and 1 grid left (grid lvl 3)
2. 01:20:004 (3) - 1 up and 1 right
3. 01:20:341 (1,2,3,4) - The slider is really too close, 3 grid up at least.
4. 01:26:004 (7) - Add a note here?

• [Hard]

1. 00:11:432 - This timing point is useless
2. 01:28:404 - Soft here too

• [Insane]

1. 00:11:432 - Again this timing point, why? D:
2. 00:36:975 (4,5,6,7) - 1 grid right (lvl3)

• [Extra]

1. 00:11:432 - Still the same thing

I don't like to make suggestions because I'm a beginner at mapping and modding but if you want my point of view, I think the spacing is too random sometimes like a normal spacing, then a jump and then a normal spacing again on the same timing... And the sliders could have a better shape.
Also for the [Extra] it is obviously overmapped, and even more at the end. This diff is like "I make some random hard map that only a few people will FC lulz" (if someone can)

footix31 wrote:

• [General]

1. There's two .osb file D: I think you should delete them and then full submit.
2. There's countdown only on the [Normal], remove it?
3. Lulz The offset is 976 on all diff but 975 on the Extra juste 1ms, but it still needs the same offset °° Fix it and don't forget to snap
4. Notes are not snapped on [Normal] :/
5. You have really too much notes like this: http://puu.sh/WH2, it's ugly and not easy to play sometimes.
   All your notes on all the diff should be at least 2 grid (lvl3) from the border up or the border down.

• [Easy]

1. 00:18:461 (4) - You should stack this under the slider with grid lvl 4
2. 00:39:032 (1) - This note is 1 grid (grid lvl3) too far and after this you have a lot of notes that are too close of the up border of the map, so you should select this notes and ALL the notes after this (select them on the timeline) and move them all 1 grid down (still grid lvl3)
3. 01:28:404 - If you want to mute the note you should put Soft instead of Normal, it's really better.

• [Normal]

1. 01:19:655 (2) - 1 grid up and 1 grid left (grid lvl 3)
2. 01:20:004 (3) - 1 up and 1 right
3. 01:20:341 (1,2,3,4) - The slider is really too close, 3 grid up at least.
4. 01:26:004 (7) - Add a note here?

• [Hard]

1. 00:11:432 - This timing point is useless
2. 01:28:404 - Soft here too

• [Insane]

1. 00:11:432 - Again this timing point, why? D:
2. 00:36:975 (4,5,6,7) - 1 grid right (lvl3)

• [Extra]

1. 00:11:432 - Still the same thing

I don't like t o make suggestions because I'm a beginner at mapping and modding but if you want my point of view, I think the spacing is too random sometimes like a normal spacing, then a jump and then a normal spacing again on the same timing... And the sliders could have a better shape.
Also for the [Extra] it is obviously overmapped, and even more at the end. This diff is like "I make some random hard map that only a few people will FC lulz" (if someone can)

Everything fixed. (I can't believe I missed the unsnapped [Normal] notes. )
"I make some random hard map that only a few people will FC lulz" - While I realize it's a difficult map, I made it fairly seriously, not "OVERMAPPED FOR THE LULZ". I thought the song had a "fast and light" feel to it, which is what I tried to map. I know that it may be a bit overmapped, but I didn't tone it down because I liked the challenging feel that came out of it. Note that I can pass the map easily, and I'm only in the #300's.

rEdo wrote:

mod4mod

[Easy]
0:09:032 (1) - start it 1/2 earlier?
0:26:689 (1,2) - swap new combos
0:33:547 (1,2,3) - spacing
0:37:661 (1) - i don't think this new combo was necessary
0:45:889 (2,4) - spacing, once again
0:55:489 (1,2,3,4) - ^
1:24:632 (2) - this slider is... o_o
1:28:404 (3) - use bpm multiplier 0.5x. also, i'd like you to close kiai section at this point

[Normal]
0:46:570 (1,2,3) - what about putting (2,3) a grid higher?
1:00:284 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - if you want to make it more aesthetic, turn off grid snap and move (2)'s a little bit
1:05:769 (1,2,3,4) - i guess soft hitsounds for all four circles should work better
1:26:684 (1,2,3) - place them like this?

[Hard]
0:09:204 (1) - shouldn't it end 1/2 later?
0:20:175 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - spacing, i'd move (3,4,5,6) a grid lower
0:22:575 (1) - hitfinish?
1:22:747 (7) - try to shape it into something more symmethric, like this
1:28:404 (1) - extend it 'til white tick

[Insane]
0:44:004 (9,1) - uh, spacing. this is WAY too far than it's supposed to be
1:26:689 (1,2,3) - once again take a look at pic @[Normal], and give it a try
1:28:404 (3) - use bpm multiplier 0.5x.

[Extra]
0:24:117 (4,5,6,7) - spacing
1:23:946 (shitloads) - stop using new combos this often, please ;_;
1:28:403 (3) - extend it 'til white tick


[General]
for future use: do NOT start kiai basing on vocals, please if i were you, i'd start it at 1:06:461
this spacing is kinda questionable for me, but i like it

good job right there, keep working!

All fixed.

Easy
01:28:404 (3) - Spacing issue, Replace with a Curved slider?
Normal
00:25:147 (1) - Make it a little neater, move the middle point closer to the middle of both points
00:26:004 (2) - Wrongly spaced
00:47:261 (3) - One grid right
01:12:804 (6) - New combo?
01:13:833 (9,10) - Im being a bit picky here.. No jumps in normals, right?
Hard
00:15:032 (5) - One grid right, maybe?
01:06:461 (1) - (Move the Kiai starting point to here?)
01:14:518 (3,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - wut O_O (To me its confusing, breaks no rules though so yo ucan keep)
Insane
lots of O_O patterns
00:40:232 (8) - move up one grid?
01:06:118 (3) - move up one grid
01:06:461 (1) - (Start kiai time here?)
Extra
what

Gcode2 wrote:

Easy
01:28:404 (3) - Spacing issue, Replace with a Curved slider?
Normal
00:25:147 (1) - Make it a little neater, move the middle point closer to the middle of both points
00:26:004 (2) - Wrongly spaced
00:47:261 (3) - One grid right
01:12:804 (6) - New combo?
01:13:833 (9,10) - Im being a bit picky here.. No jumps in normals, right?
Hard
00:15:032 (5) - One grid right, maybe?
01:06:461 (1) - (Move the Kiai starting point to here?)
01:14:518 (3,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - wut O_O (To me its confusing, breaks no rules though so yo ucan keep)
Insane
lots of O_O patterns
00:40:232 (8) - move up one grid?
01:06:118 (3) - move up one grid
01:06:461 (1) - (Start kiai time here?)
Extra
what

Updated.

Here we goooooooo
General
- Add "puella" and "magi" to the tags since it's also the other name for the series
- Uncheck "Letterbox during breaks"
- Easy and Extra have different Kiai Time. Please fix
- 3 diffs that can be considered "Insane" good luck getting this ranked :/

Easy
00:16:404 (1,2) Try and avoid beats that are close to each other like here on an easy diff. Just make it one slider
00:26:689 (7) Remove clap on whole slider and put it ONLY on the end of it
00:29:432 (3,4) Add claps
00:30:804 (1,2) Like before, claps only on the end of the sliders
00:33:547 (1) Remove new combo here
00:34:232 New combo
00:43:147 (2) Delete
00:41:775 (1) Remove new combo
00:43:832 Again too hard for an Easy, try making it a slider with a repeat plus new combo
00:51:375 (3,4,5) ^
00:53:432 (take a wild guess )
01:00:289 (1,2,3,1,2,3) ^
01:03:718 (3) Instead a spinner

Normal
01:19:318 (1,2,3) Try to avoid jump?

Hard
Only issue I got are some of the uneven sliders. Play around with that

Insane
/me points to Hard's mod
00:15:204 (6) New combo
00:47:261 New combo o_o
01:07:661 (5,6,7) Spacing, make it a flip from the previous 3

Extra
Not gonna mod this, feel like its just a spam (and i mean SPAM) of beats here >.<

Modding, CrimmiStyle!!

[Easy]

(Mostly i usually see Easies with large hitcircles but yeah..)

00:28:747 - (2) align with (1).
00:53:775 (3,4,5) - align them. (i'm a neat freak, )
01:25:489 (5) - Align with (2).

[Normal]

00:19:489 (2) - Align with (1).
00:37:489 (5) - align with (4).
00:46:918 (2) - move it a grid to the right.
00:47:775 (4) - move it a grid up.
01:02:347 (3) - align with (1).
01:15:032 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - make this symmetrical.

[Hard]

00:34:747 (4) - align with (3).
01:13:832 (1) - align with (2).
00:44:175 (1) - I don't like that jump.

[Insane]

~Nyaaa.

[Extra]

Lower the AR by -1?

*Star*

[Easy]

00:15:032 (3,1) - This change of spacing is a bit too much for an Easy to me.

[Normal]

Disable the unused Countdown.

Rename this difficulty to "Normal+".

01:28:404 (1) - Remove new combo.

[Hard]

01:28:404 (1) - Remove new combo.

[Extra]

Stack leniency is unrankable. Increase it at least by 1 or 2 ticks.

I still don't agree with seeing Extra going for ranked... I still suggest you to delete it and leave the other difficulties, Insane seems good enough to me already for the hardest difficulty. Also, the map is improved a lot so I'll shoot a star here

Mostly everyting above: fixed.

Though, must I rename it as Normal+? I'm not really that fond of the "+" names.

....... it would be nice to put in a NSFW tag. I doubt someone's boss would like seeing a really young [almost fully] nude girl...

[Normal]

I seriously agree with osuplayer about renaming this to Normal+. Its playing much more like a Hard and is misleading to its current difficulty name.

Please disable the unused countdown.

00:07:148 (2,3) - These two notes are apart. (Look at 00:07:662 (1,2).)

[Extra]

DO NOT disable stacking. Its strictly unrankable.

Just dropping by to say that i disagree with renaming Normal to Normal+ i played all diffs and Normal feels like a fine gap between Easy and Hard, it's just that Easy is harder than usual, but still Easy enough for newbies, renaming it to Normal+ would mean that Normal is way harder than Easy and slightly easier than Hard which is not the case.
Also i agree with Andrea either drop Extra or rename it to Expert or something, didnt do a full mod on the map but checked the mentioned diffs and pointed out my opinion, oh also, I'm still on doubting on letting people watch a video with a naked girl on it, and idc what age is it. See ya~

The more I look back at this map, the more I think about how much it needs that one part censored.....

I'm sorry, but censoring that would be ridiculous.

That's the kind of overzealous censoring that makes things look more suggestive and "mature" than then were before. Note that the sequence in the video is already censored, in that there are no details drawn in, and the scene is not sexually suggestive. By adding censoring (by pixelation or black bar), there is an implied sexual attitude - by putting censors over the chest or crotch, it implies that there were details drawn in, and there clearly aren't any in the video.

It's the same psychological trait that was used by Improv Everywhere in their "No Underwear Subway Ride" April Fool's Day video. Everybody in that video is wearing natural-colored underwear, but by adding censoring, it becomes implied that they are wearing nothing.

By adding censoring, it not only looks like I'm being immature and freaking out over nothing, but it even makes the video even more suggestive.

"That swimsuit is too skimpy - I'll just go ahead and censor it"

Hey, here's some things.

[General]:

1. The official name of the anime is Puella Magi Madoka Magica. I suggest that you rename the source on all diffs to the official name and put Mahou Shoujo into tags instead.

[Easy]:

1. 00:05:089 (2) - (nazi) This slider kinda hits me, you could curve it so the (1) at 00:06:461 fits in the curve. Something like this.
2. 00:28:061 (1,2,3,4) - Spacing between 2-3 is different than 1-2 and 3-4. I understand that you wanted to mirror them and to fit a slider in between, so feel free to ignore this because it doesn't look that confusing, but I would recommend to move (3) and (4) by 1 grid down, just to for the spacing's sake.
3. 00:45:204 (1) - Remove new combo.
4. 00:55:489 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Spacing between (2) and (3) looks kinda critical. Move (3) and (4) by 1 grid to the left to fix.
5. 01:03:032 (1,2) - (nazi) Move these by 1 grid to the right so they are in line with the previous combo.

[Normal]:

1. Looks kinda hard for a 'Normal', but that's ok. Maybe call it Normal+?
2. 00:07:662 (1) - Remove new combo.
3. 00:30:804 (6) - Add new combo.
4. 00:31:490 (1) - Remove new combo.
5. 00:31:490 (1,2,3,4) - (nazi) Move these by 6 grids down and 2 grids to the left, this will create a more linear approach and look nicer.
   If you're worried about the slider (1) on 00:33:890 (spacing), then move it by 2 grids to the right and curve it a bit different to reach the circle (2) at 00:34:404.
6. 00:37:147 (4,5) - (nazi) To make this look a bit better, move (4) by 1 grid to the left and 1 grid up and (5) by 1 grid up.
7. 01:06:461 (5) - New combo.
8. 01:07:318 (3,4,5) - I don't like how this looks. You may leave it as it is if you want, but I suggest something like this to make it look better.
9. 01:08:690 (1) - Remove new combo.
10. 01:10:061 (3) - Same situation as 01:07:318 (3,4,5). Try to curve it from the above instead. Like this. Small repositioning of the whole combo, but the start and end point are the same.

[Hard]:

1. Recommending to reduce the approach rate by 1 and increase the overall difficulty by 1.
2. 00:06:804 (4) - While this note is cleverly placed, I think it would look better if you placed it like this.
3. 00:27:547 (8) - (nazi) This slider looks out of place, move it down by 1 grid to make it stay in line with (6) and (7) and adjust the curve to fit the previous endpoint.
4. 00:28:404 (1) - New combo.
5. 00:28:747 (2) - Remove new combo.
6. 00:30:803 (10) - New combo.
7. 00:31:146 (1) - Remove new combo.

[Insane]:

1. 00:38:518 (1) - (nazi) Move this slider by 1 grid up and 1 to the right. Adjust the circle (2) to be in line with the slider.
2. 00:43:147 (1) - New combo.
3. 00:44:175 (1) - Remove new combo and fix the spacing between (6) and this note (the circle 8 can remain there).
4. 00:47:261 (1) - New combo.
5. 00:56:689 (5) - New combo.
6. 00:57:375 (1) - Remove new combo.
7. 00:58:232 (6) - New combo.
8. 00:59:089 (1) - Remove new combo.

[Extra]:

1. Consider reducing approach rate by 1 and increasing overall difficulty by 1. I know this is supposed to be really hard since it's extra, but I feel that current approach rate is a bit too high. Feel free to ignore this one though, since I am not skilled enough yet to pass this diff (although I can read it with current AR).
2. 00:01:831 (1) - Remove new combo.
3. 00:02:860 (1) - Remove new combo.
4. 00:04:917 (5,6,7,8,9) - New combo on (5). (nazi) Move all 5 notes by 1 grid to the left for them to be centered.
5. 00:08:346 (10) - New combo.
6. 00:10:231 (1) - Remove new combo.
7. 00:12:460 (1) - Remove new combo.
8. 00:12:803 (4) - Add new combo.
9. 00:37:660 (1,2,3) - I guess this may be okay since it's extra, but consider moving (3) a bit closer to (2) (or vice versa).
10. 00:39:374 (1) - Remove new combo.
11. 01:02:003 (1) - Suggesting to remove new combo. Doesn't really have any real purpose, but it doesn't look off, so feel free to ignore this if you wish.
12. 01:03:374 (1) - Remove new combo.
13. 01:28:403 (3) - (nazi) I am not fond of shapes like this, they are ... suggestive. Make it a wave instead.

Nice map and extra is really hard, which is nice (I can't even pass it lol). I would suggest that you revamp most of the sliders in all diffs, they kinda look shabby, make them more curvy or wavy.

Daru!

Revived!

Updated.

[Extra] removed, mods applied.

Easy:

-I think soft whistles would fit much better than soft claps here
-I think the slider velocity is too fast compared to the spacing, and because this is an Easy...

00:19:832 (1) - Too far from (5)
00:28:061 (1,2,3,4) - Uneven
00:30:804 (1) - Too close to (4)
00:33:547 (3,1,2) - Uneven, also I'd recommend unstacking (3)
00:36:289 (4) - New combo, remove NC from 00:37:661 (1)
00:39:032 (1) - Too far from (1)
00:45:204 (1) - Remove NC
00:47:261 (4) - NC
00:50:689 (2) - Too close to (1)
00:56:861 (3) - Too close to (2)
00:58:232 (5) - Too close to (4)
01:09:204 (5) - New combo
01:13:318 (3) - Looks odd, make it more symmetrical
01:14:690 (5) - New combo
01:17:432 (3) - Too far from (2), also new combo?
01:18:804 (5) - New combo
01:23:604 (1) - Looks odd, make it more symmetrical
01:25:489 (5) - End it 1 beat later?

Difficult:

-Same thing about the claps

00:42:804 (8) - Too far from (7)
00:52:747 - Add a note?
00:54:804 (4) - Move 1 beat later
00:53:261 (1) - Move 1/2 later?
00:58:233 (3) - Too far from (2)
01:08:690 (1) - Remove NC?
01:15:033 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - oh wow... with all these notes this seems more like a Hard than a hard Normal.
01:25:147 (6) - End it 1/2 earlier?
01:17:433 (5) - Make this symmetrical?

Hard:

-Same thing about the claps, though they sound a little better here

00:14:347 (4) - Align with (3)
00:27:547 (8) - Align with (7)
00:28:404 (9) - Align with (8). Also, NC and remove it from (1)
00:41:432 (8) - Too close to (7)
00:50:004 (6) - New combo
01:13:832 (1,2,3) - Move these so (3) is stacked under (9), and then (1) is mirrored from (3)
01:15:547 (6) - NC because of jump?
01:19:318 (1,2,3) - Put a jump here?
01:23:604 (1,2,3,4) - Make this symmetrical?
01:25:575 - Maybe add a spinner here or put a slider? It seems odd how this is mapped to nothing

Insane:

-I think adding more whistles would make this sound better

00:19:832 (1) - I'm not sure I like this slider, I think a slow slider would fit better
00:29:261 (1) - End it 1/2 earlier and put a note where it ends? Also, I'm not sure I like how (2) is stacked
00:32:860 (4) - Remove the whistle from the body of this slider
00:34:747 (5) - Too close to (4)
00:47:261 (9) - New combo and remove it from
01:00:975 (5) - Too close to (4)
01:05:089 (8) - Too close to (7)
01:05:775 (1,2,3,4,1) - Move (1) down 1 level 3 grid, (2) down 2, (3) down 3, (4) left 2, and (1) down 2...that way it's entirely symmetrical
01:17:432 (5) - Looks odd, make it more symmetrical
01:24:804 (1) - ^
01:25:489 ~ 01:26:689 - Put a spinner or a slow slider here

Nice map, nothing really major. ( ^_^)ノ☆

I want to create a taiko map!~ can you put it? XD

Moe Moe Madoka

Alright.

Easy: Felt a tad above easy but still doable.

Normal: The beat seemed to follow the singer and suddenly changed to one of the instruments when it got near the chorus. It felt odd and confusing. I'd add another couple notes.

Hard: The same can be said here along with some odd note placement.

Insane: Notes felt too far from each other in certain spots but otherwise it looked great.

You've done a great job on this. I don't know what else to really say about it. A star for you.

[General]
- Keep Tick Rate consistent between all difficulties. I advise 2.
- I'm not sure what to say on difficulty names. I think that this would work better:
[Easy] -> [Easy]
[Difficult] -> [Hard]
[Hard] -> [Insane]
[Insane] -> [Something Awesome Goes Here]


[Easy]
00:19:832 (1) - Make the slider one white tick longer. Right now it doesn't fit the music very well. Here is the code for a better slider:
00:30:804 (1) - I would rather this not overlap with (3) and (4).
01:03:718 (1) - Spinner is kind of short, but okay...

[Difficult]
- It seems like you could go through this difficulty and make sure no notes overlap. It would look a lot cleaner and wouldn't take too much work.
00:13:661 (1) - It would be nice to have this not overlap with (5).
00:26:004 (2,3) - This isn't very confusing, but confusing enough to point out.

[Hard]
00:16:747 (1,2,3,4,5) - These are the only 1/4 notes in the difficulty. It seems better to replace them with a repeating slider.
00:33:547 (7) - This is the only note under a slider in the difficulty. Move it somewhere else.

[Insane]
01:24:804 (1) - Remove New Combo.


But cool map, Daru. I even made a troll difficulty for you. You can't use it, but it's possible!

Download: ClariS - Connect (TV Size) (Daru) [Stupid].osu

All above - fixed/heeded.

Also, I'm gonna keep this here for safekeeping:

Download: ClariS - Connect (TV Size) (Daru) [Extra].osu

Okay, here we go~

[Easy]
00:21:032 I didnt like the clap here. remove it.
00:22:575 (1) - this is like a jump, just so you know, I would make it closer to the slider.
00:33:547 (3) - new combo?
00:34:232 (1) - and then new combo here aswell so it is 2 instead of 1
00:45:204 (1) - new combo.
01:24:632 (2,3) - make slider instead of two notes here.. remember this is easy not hard.


[Difficult]
01:08:690 (10) - remove new combo.


[Hard]
00:27:547 (1) - I would have new combo here, but you dont need to.
00:27:547 (1) - new combo.



[Insane]
You use the hitsounds "clap" alittle wrong sometime.. I think.
Like.. try to add clap here 00:15:032 (5) - and remove it here 00:15:032 (5) -
Some exaples:
00:17:432 (6) - add whistle
00:17:432 (6) - add clap
00:18:289 (4) - add clap
00:26:689 (5) - add finish
00:27:032 (6) - remove clap ... and I hope you can see some more yourself.. otherwise, this beatmap is
very good and it was hard to mod it (^_^)/ S
Staaaar ! ^^

Finished all above.

I didn't make the two notes into a slider in [Easy] because I had it like that before; looked bad and played worse.

T.T

2 difficulty was created.


Would put both of them, but if you're not, please put the wood's taiko.

BG to offer tomorrow XD.


star!

Normal : according to the lyrics. However, unlike Ura
Ura : the idea of ​​making a new rhythm



A little bit more improve in the future...
I do not like it Taiko T.T

Download: ClariS - Connect (TV Size) (Daru) [wood's taiko].osu

Download: ClariS - Connect (TV Size) (Daru) [wood's taiko ura].osu

remapping, Please put this one...



uum... and, 0,0,"bg.jpg" delete plz~ from osb file



Download: ClariS - Connect (TV Size) (Daru) [wood's taiko].osu

Taiko added.

This was a difficult mod for me to do. Why? Because your mapping differs from mine so much that I almost felt like Nazi modding. I'm a super perfectionist.

Anyway, enough about me, onto the mod!

~Easy~
01:03:032 (1,2) - Scoot one space to the left.

~Difficult~
This Difficulty's name is very confusing. I'd almost recommend using Normal+ over this. ALMOST. Try Normal, maybe.
00:10:233 (4,5) - Fix the spacing here. It looks kind of bad as is.
00:16:404 (8,1) - Straighten these two notes with 00:16:061 (7).
00:19:833 (4) - Remove note and start (5) here.

~Hard~
00:14:347 (4) - Scoot this slider down one space and adjust.
That's all I really have to say.

~Insane~
...Not touching this one with a 30 foot pole.

Despite our mapping differences, your map is very good and fun to play. Star.

General
Offset +5
I'm not a fan of how rectangular this set is.
I would recommend not using gray as a combo color.
In multiplayer coop, gray circles are ones you are not supposed to hit.
Having gray circles in your map can confuse people playing multi (and considering this is an extremely popular song, people will play it in multi)
Easy and Hard have different kiai than Normal and Insane. They need to be the same

Easy
Approach Rate +2
00:17:775 - New combo
00:25:318 - ^^
00:36:289 - New combo
00:37:661 - Remove new combo
00:47:261 - New combo
00:58:232 - ^^
01:09:204 - ^^
01:14:689 - ^^
01:17:432 - ^^
01:26:689 (1,2,3) - Very bad spacing
01:28:404 - Unrankable Silenced slider. Make it a Soft inheriting section with 10% volume.
01:28:404 - Pretty Much Unrankable Slider is half as slow as the previous slider in the combo.
Nice Easy!

Difficult
Call this Normal.
Approach Rate +1
00:09:033 (3,4,5) - Bad spacing
00:59:433 (2,1) - This jump is way too big.
01:28:404 - Unrankable Silenced slider. Make it a Soft inheriting section with 10% volume.
It's a strange difficulty.

Hard
00:09:204 (1) - Add finish
00:27:547 (8) - Make this symmetrical.
01:11:947 (4) - Add finish
01:17:432 (1) - Add finish
01:28:404 - Make this inheriting section Soft.
Nice hard

Insane
   Missing a timing section at 976
00:15:032 (5) - Move this 3 grids down (Grid 3)
00:15:547 (8) - Move this 3 grids up (Grid 3)
00:25:147 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - This spacing is strange. I would recommend changing it.
000:30:289 (2) - This is a badly placed antijump
00:33:718 (2) - Remove finish
00:37:489 (6,7,8) - This is pretty bad spacing. Placing a new combo at 00:37:661 would technically fix it.
00:39:032 (2) - You should put this under the endpoint of the 1
01:03:718 (5) - Add finish
01:07:489 (5) - Remove this circle, it feels overmapped
01:11:604 (2) - Remove finish
01:11:946 (4) - Add finish
01:17:432 (5) - Add finish, remove clap
01:28:404 - Unrankable Silenced slider. Make it a Soft inheriting section with 10% volume. Also, why does the slider have finishes if it is meant to be quiet?
I'm not so sure about this Insane.

Nice taiko diffs; I played both and enjoyed them.

su ta-

I was really bored.

Not fully hitsounded though.

Download: ClariS - Connect (TV Size) (Daru) [Lily].osu

1. That offset sounds a tad early to me. Try adding +20 to it? (I got Offset: 996 for it)
2. Also, every diff has 2 timing sections, one at Offset 976, and one at Offset: 11,604, apart from Insane which has only one. You'll only need one timing section for this (the Offset: 976/996 section).
3. Tiny thing, but perhaps you could set the Stack Leniency on Easy and Difficult to the same as those on Hard and Insane? Makes sense to set that the same across the board to me.
4. Also, the filenames for both wood taiko difficulties are full of symbols and code. They still work fine, but rename those?

[EASY]

I quite like how the map changes when it reaches the chorus, but the part before the chorus is a bit bland, since it's stuck on white ticks mostly, breaking off of them for the odd slider. (things like 00:43:147 (2,3,1,2,3,4,5,6) - ). the chorus part is more interesting though, if a bit of a difficulty jump, but no biggie, it works kinda well.

[DIFFICULT]

Fun stuff. Quite a difficulty jump between this and easy, but well, it is "Easy" and "Difficult" after all (haha). Still could use something in-between them though but it wouldn't be practical with 4 osu!standard difficulties already. That's your call.

00:26:518 (x) - Put a note here, to finish this vocal phrase? Since you mapped to the vocals but missed the last note. It goes onto a nice double there too with (4).

[HARD]

Seems as though a lot of this map is stuck on vertical and horizontal lines, even going back on itself. With the other difficulties been a little bit more free-flowing this felt a bit odd. It plays okay, but it's a little bland layout-wise. The rhythms and such are nice and varied though.

01:21:204 (4) - Remove this note? feels a bit smoother that way I think


[INSANE]

I'm not too keen on the wider spacing here, but it plays fine. It's quick but it's readable. Nothing really bugged me in this one, Just one spacing hitch that I think could be patched up:

00:37:489 (6,7) - Budge (7) closer to (6)? (and you could move (8) too so it's level). Tiny thing, but smoohing out the spacing would be best here methinks.
00:39:032 (2) - and stack this on the end of that slider maybe?

[WOOD'S TAIKO]
Perhaps, i'm not good enough at taiko to really evaluate this one. I'm alright and I see what's going on, but yeah. It's technically sound. some nice sound rhythms going on even though it is a bit random at times,

[WOOD'S TAIKO URA]

I much prefer this one (probably because I can play this one, har har). Again, technically fine, and some nice rhythms going on. Looking like a TnT Taiko oni rather than an osu! taiko oni if you know what I mean.

Whee ~

Really bored... I finished the hitsounds.

Download: ClariS - Connect (TV Size) (Daru) [Lily].osu

cool

Revived!

All above: Fixed.
Remapped the chorus of [Insane].

ALL Diff

00:11:604 - Timing offset 11626 >> 11604

Easy

Hmm... In almost every part seems to distance snap out of. Check and fix the overall need. ( ' _ ' )

Hard

00:01:832 (1) - Remove Combo
00:05:947 (6) - ^
00:13:334 (1) - Remove Combo ?
00:14:363 (4) - New Combo ?

That's very old map. But overall, saw two does not make sense for distance snap has been confirmed. My own feeling is it may be.
Once all the difficulty, check the look of the distance snap.

p.s. Not speak English translation was used. Please note this point. ; _ ;
Good Luck ( ' ~ ' )

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