vincerio wrote:

hi hi
here my suggestions~

[General]
It would be nice if you mute the video'a audio to reduce file size
( don't forget to change BG name next time xD ) I will think about it ><
tag : opening tears of the blue sky fixed
why kiai time in Kino's Hard end at 01:14:10?? make it all the same.. ok 2 people said..fixed

[Normal]
00:10:863 - 0.5x here? 0.75 is enough....( 0.5x is fine but you need to manage its spacing it's too near =w='' ) no change for now ><
00:24:745 - add clap fixed
00:25:431 - add clap fixed
00:28:859 - add clap fixed
00:44;969 - add finish fixed
01:00:394 - add clap fixed
01:19:590 - add clap fixed
01:21:989 - end spinner at 01:26:103 fixed

[Insane]
00:22:003 - the drum end here.... if you follow the drum, delete slider before the points and extend short repeat slider here no change ><
00:25:431 - add clap fixed
00:26:116 - add clap fixed
00:26:802 - add clap fixed
02:28:173 00:28:173? lol - add clap fixed

Nice map
good luck~ Thanks~

senaya wrote:

Claps between 0:20 and 0:31 are kinda random, but it goes fine before and after this segment =/
Also, I see that someone before me already mentioned it.

Didn't notice anything else that needs to be fixed. Hard and Insane are fine D:
So jsut a star.. sorry no kudos, not helpful >< But thanks for the star :>

ZLOdeuka wrote:

[Normal]

00:42:570 (5) - new combo fixed

00:59:366 (4,2) - horrible sliders. so it better? fixed




[Insane]

00:27:145 (1) - delete new combo fixed

S T A R ~

thanks

chamelepeace710 wrote:

By Mod Request:

[Normal]
00:26:459 (2,3,4) - spacing is a bit too tight... Consider this formation?
no change ><

00:28:859 - and for here, follow this?


00:34:343 (2) - add clap fixed
00:55:595 (1) - ^ fixed
01:00:051 (5) - ^ at the end of the slider [fixed]

Thanks :>

Weezy wrote:

Done:
and I noticed that there's 2 video files...
nvm im seeing things @_@

KanaRin wrote:

Yeah>w< Here some mod~

[Normal]
Suggestion:
00:45:312 (x) - Add a spin , End at 00:47:026 fixed
Then
00:47:711 (x) - Add a spin , End at 00:49:768 fixed
After that *w*
00:50:454 (x) - Try this fixed
http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/53863
Yeah, other is good>w<

[Insane]
00:14:462 (6) - New combo fixed
00:14:805 (1) - Remove new combo fixed
Not bad~

That's all *w*
Good luck for you>w<
Star

ErufenRito wrote:

Insane:

00:15:147 (4) - This slider definitely should be 1/2 shorter. I tried to follow ther rythimn at this slider, so no change ><
00:37:428 (1) - Mind moving this away? Althought it technically is a jump, it doesn't looks like a jump, but more like an antijump. for me no jump necassary, no change
00:48:911 (1) - The whistle is out of place imo. fixed
01:02:622 (7) - Consider extending this slider by a 1/2. Although doing this, will require you to repattern this part.
I don't know yet how to redo this pattern... so i will not change yet ><
The rest is good for me!

KanaRin wrote:

[kino's Hard]
00:25:088 (1) - New combo?
00:25:774 (3) - Remove new combo
01:21:989 (1,2,3,4) - Huh.. I think it doesn't fit this part. Well.. Just my opinion

ErufenRito wrote:

Kino's Hard:

00:20:289 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2) - I really recommend you to tone down the jumps in this part. This part is easily the hardest part in the whole mapset, and there is already an insane to fill that. Sure~
01:23:360 - Consider adding a circle + finish here, and start spinner 1/4 later. Oh..I'll just let it go.

-maJu wrote:

updated :>

And btw... HAPPY CHINESE NEW YEAR! >w<

kino77 wrote:

-maJu wrote:

updated :>

And btw... HAPPY CHINESE NEW YEAR! >w<

Oh what a surprise~Thank you very much~ Happy chinese new year to you too~~

theowest wrote:

HELLO GERMAN GUY! I LOVE YOU COZ YOU'RE GERMAN!! GERMANY FTW!! Sweden's also goodt, ja.
WTF... what is so special about germany? nothing for me xD
For me Sweden is much cooler

Normal:
00:22:517 Lengthen the spinner to this point. fixed
01:02:622 Add finish hitsound. fixed
01:04:165 ^ fixed
01:13:591 ^ fixed

That's about it. I couldn't find many problems with the beatmap other than that. ;D

Insane:
00:22:517 Add finish hitsound. fixed
Ah my gash. That's it. D: Well that was short. :'C

Overall, this is a very good beatmap. Very much rankable and I think many people will love it!
o_O

STAR!!

1. Combo Colours: White looks too brighty during kiai and it hurts my eyes , Try using light grey.

1. I suggest to reduce HP Drain 1 Tick
2. 00:12:062 (1,2,1,2) - Notice spacing inconsistencies between notes in patterns (1 & 2) make sure spacing is the same because those patterns look exactly alike in the timeline..
3. 00:50:625 - This break it's too short and unnecessary (The song is 1:30 long), please remove it or put some notes there.

1. 00:25:431 (1,2,3,4) - This pattern looks messy and (4) overlaps with (1) and (2) at the same time. Try this to make it more clean and easier to read.
2. 01:21:989 (1) - This spinner feels weird, You should place it here: 01:23:360 - otherwise it sounds pretty odd and doesn't not suit the song, Also add some notes after you move it.

1. The Hp Drain is too low increase it by 1 or 2 ticks.
2. 00:22:346 (1,2) - I would reduce the spacing between these notes, I feel that using normal spacing suits better for these notes.
3. 00:36:914 (2) - The start of this slider sounds off because it's not following the vocals correctly, This slider should start 1/2 forward like this.
4. 01:21:989 (1,2,3,4) - This seems more like a Insane-ish pattern, just reduce spacing a bit and It's ok for me.
5. 01:23:360 (1) - You should add a "Finish" at the end of the spinner with lower volume to keep consistency with the other diffs and because it sounds nice.

1. 00:21:660 (4) - This slider doesn't suit this part, all I can hear here are the drums so you should keep following that, The next slider sounds ok because It also follows the guitar rhythm.
2. 00:39:485 (1,2,3) - You need to move these notes away, Those are too close to the last sliders so it's confusing while playing.
3. 00:42:913 (3,4,5) - I find this pattern really hard to hit. I suggest to change it for a single repeating slider, otherwise that really breaks the flow.
4. 01:23:703 (1) - This spinner feels weird ending there, It sounds better if you make it end here: 01:26:103 - Plus the current ending time breaks the consistency between diffs.
5. I like this diff, Good Job.

Gonzvlo wrote:

Easy

1. I suggest to reduce HP Drain 1 Tick Done
2. 00:12:062 (1,2,1,2) - Notice spacing inconsistencies between notes in patterns (1 & 2) make sure spacing is the same because those patterns look exactly alike in the timeline.. Done
3. 00:50:625 - This break it's too short and unnecessary (The song is 1:30 long), please remove it or put some notes there.

Nope, I see nothing wrong with putting a break here. I got a break on my own map and its not even a minute long

Gonzvlo wrote:

General

1. Combo Colours: White looks too brighty during kiai and it hurts my eyes , Try using light grey.
   fixed

Normal

1. 00:25:431 (1,2,3,4) - This pattern looks messy and (4) overlaps with (1) and (2) at the same time. Try this to make it more clean and easier to read. fixed
2. 01:21:989 (1) - This spinner feels weird, You should place it here: 01:23:360 - otherwise it sounds pretty odd and doesn't not suit the song, Also add some notes after you move it. fixed

Insane

1. 00:21:660 (4) - This slider doesn't suit this part, all I can hear here are the drums so you should keep following that, The next slider sounds ok because It also follows the guitar rhythm. for me it is ok.. :/
2. 00:39:485 (1,2,3) - You need to move these notes away, Those are too close to the last sliders so it's confusing while playing. fixed
3. 00:42:913 (3,4,5) - I find this pattern really hard to hit. I suggest to change it for a single repeating slider, otherwise that really breaks the flow. fixed
4. 01:23:703 (1) - This spinner feels weird ending there, It sounds better if you make it end here: 01:26:103 - Plus the current ending time breaks the consistency between diffs. fixed the spinner
5. I like this diff, Good Job.

OK

theowest wrote:

Weezy's Easy:
00:22:517 Lengthen the spinner to this point and add a finish hitsound to it. Nope to the extending the spinner Added finish
00:32:629 Add finish hitsound. Clap sounds even better
00:50:454 Remove the finish hitsound on the spinner. Nope
00:58:680 Add finish hitsound. Already done
01:12:391 ^
01:21:989 ^

That was a very good easy indeed!

SamiPale wrote:

Easy's spacing larger than Normal...?

SamiPale wrote:

mod by request

[General]
The timing after 01:19:933 it sounds a little bit off, perhaps add an extra timing section to fix it is better
I really need to find someone T_T

The PreviewTime 52425 is better fixed

[Insane]
00:22:517(5) - Remove the finish sound since 00:23:031's finish cannot be heard clearly fixed
00:33:315(3) - Clap fixed
00:35:371(3) - Remove this clap and add clap on 00:35:029 and 00:35:714 fixed
00:37:428(1) - Move it few grids up since it's too close to (4) and it's x0.75 fixed
00:42:227(6) - Remove this clap and add clap on 00:42:913... and so on some long white tick clap fixed
00:58:680(6) - Newcombo here fixed

From 00:44:969 to 00:48:740 if you catch the music flowing, the notes should be tighter than 00:34:000 to 00:37:085 or 00:39:485 to 00:44:284. But now just all 1/1 and few 1/2 at the beginning, feels the rhythm down, just mention it. ><

And adding claps on the long white tick isn't a good way to go unless you have your own thought, try to avoid it. Claps on second and fourth white tick is more and more better then clap on the long white tick. :o

Other diff good for me, but timing is annoying @_@ I know D:

Louis Cyphre wrote:

A little suggestion about Kiai mod.
I suggest to end Kiai there 01:02:794 and start it again there 01:04:165. Will be really good :3 fixed
BPM: 175.120. Offset is good I will not change now, maybe useless

[Normal]

I don't suggest to use different velocities on normal difficulty too. can I skip this?
Slider speed is high =/ Next time use more slower. I just didn't want it to be too close to a easy difficulty ><
rest is ok.

About Insane i said you in IRC :>

Louis Cyphre wrote:

[Weezy's Easy]
I don't suggest to use different velocities on easy difficulty Don't even remember putting that :S fixed
01:12:391 (1) - add finish
00:32:629 (5) - add finish at start
00:43:598 (5) - add finish at end
00:50:625 (1) - 3 second break is not good. Fill this place with notes. My suggestion http://puu.sh/S1X. If you follow it, silence spinner end.
Keeping this, don't see anything wrong with a break here and the spinner suggestion doesn't really fit
00:58:680 (1) - do not use finish as a slider slide, and add finish at the start of the slider.
01:12:391 (1) - add finish
01:23:360 (1) - remove finish

Louis Cyphre wrote:

[kino77's Hard]

00:44:969 (1) - add finish

kino77 wrote:

Louis Cyphre wrote:

[kino77's Hard]

00:44:969 (1) - add finish

Could you fix that for me maJu?
Thanks a lot~

1. Delete osb
2. Titel: Aozora no Namida (TV Size)

1. 00:18:232 (2) - Spacing
2. 00:29:887 (3) - reduce one time of repeat?
3. 00:32:629 (5) - 1grid right (Grid Level 4)

1. HP AR OD +1
2. 00:15:147 (2,3) - something wrong stack
3. 00:31:258 (6) - 1grid right move and 00:31:601 (7,8,1) - Please Spacing Check
4. 01:21:647 (5) - Why next Spacing 0.91...

1. 00:14:805 (1) - Remove Newcombo
2. 00:15:147 (2) - Add new combo
3. 01:07:250 (2) - 1grid left(Grid Level 3)
4. 01:11:706 (4) - Spacing

1. 00:24:402 (6) - New combo
2. 00:59:880 (4) - stack funny Distance snap x0.0 Grid snap off put

S o r d a wrote:

thanks reqs~

[overall]:

1. Delete osb
2. Titel: Aozora no Namida (TV Size)

[Normal]:

1. HP AR OD +1 I leave this for now.. D:
2. 00:15:147 (2,3) - something wrong stack fixed
3. 00:31:258 (6) - 1grid right move and 00:31:601 (7,8,1) - Please Spacing Check fixed
4. 01:21:647 (5) - Why next Spacing 0.91...oh, fixed

[Insane]:

1. 00:24:402 (6) - New combo no D:
2. 00:59:880 (4) - stack funny Distance snap x0.0 Grid snap off put oups... thanks for noticing this lol

All Diff nice<3
Star~

1. Delete .osb file and full submit if you're not going to make a SB.

1. 00:12:062 (1,2) - Ctrl + J them to make something different.

1. 00:13:776 (4,1,2,3,4) - Mmmm... try this:

176,232,13776,2,0,B|239:263|290:230,1,120
480,176,14805,5,2
456,80,15147,1,0
368,48,15490,1,0
280,80,15833,1,0

1. 00:37:428 (7) - 5 slider points instead of 4 to make the curve smoother?
2. 00:55:938 (2) - Nazi: 1 grid left.
3. 01:08:964 (1) - Try to not overlap with the previous slider (if possible).

1. 00:16:004 (6) - Symmetrical slider:

32,168,16004,2,0,B|16:88|64:48|128:32|192:96,1,250,0|2

R a f E L wrote:

:)