Hi there :3
Modsu , hope it can help
Good Luck :3 (awnsered the strawpool aswell)
Modsu , hope it can help
Da don
Collumn = 1/2/3/4/5/6/7
[Scar]
00:20:964 (20964|4) - you should add a note here , it feels easier to catch up imo
00:22:214 (22214|4) - add one more note ? same sound as : 00:21:767 (21767|4,21767|6) - , 00:21:499 (21499|2,21499|0) -
00:29:624 (29624|5) - add a note here ? so you keep following the instru
00:49:535 (49535|3) - this note should be here : 00:49:446 - (the drum crash is here)
01:03:642 (63642|6) - move to 2 for pitch same sound as previous note (imo)
01:06:857 (66857|0) - add another note for cymbal
01:18:106 (78106|2) - add note ?
01:25:071 (85071|6) - this LN should end here : 01:26:142 (86142|5) -
02:10:963 (130963|3) - move down to the blue line : 02:10:873 (130873|3) -
02:20:070 (140070|4) - this LN starts 1/3 late, it should starts at the same time you press this note : 02:19:951 (139951|0) - then re extend the end by 1/3 for the missing length
[Injury]
00:02:749 (2749|5) - I suggest adding a note here, this gap feels really tricky imo , since you are following the main bass and main instru at same time (suggest in 6 , but like avoid trills here)
00:03:821 (3821|4) - so on for this aswell ^
00:04:357 (4357|6) - from here you stop following the bass thingys , such as here : 00:05:249 (5249|0) - or here : 00:06:321 (6321|6) - , both parts are kind of simillar and should be the same in term of density (layering)
00:18:285 (18285|4) - move to 6 , this is the end of the 2 4 6 pattern and it feels weird to put it on 5 imo , also it plays nicely
00:31:321 (31321|3) - here you suddenly dosn't follow the instru anymore , I suggest moving the note to 6 then moving it to : 00:31:410 (31410|3) - (the instru sound is on the blue line)
[Pain]
01:41:499 (101499|2) - I'd suggest add another note in 3 here, it feels abit weird to make a double stair and then end up with a single press LN .
01:47:302 (107302|6,107361|4,107421|6,107481|4) - I think this should be only 1/4 s
01:53:016 (113016|3,113076|2,113106|0,113135|5,113195|4) - ^ same , this is really hard and tricky to play there is a sound here , but like this sound isn't so loud and this isn't yet the hardest diff , probably should consider nerfing that part abit
[Scar]
00:20:964 (20964|4) - you should add a note here , it feels easier to catch up imo
00:22:214 (22214|4) - add one more note ? same sound as : 00:21:767 (21767|4,21767|6) - , 00:21:499 (21499|2,21499|0) -
00:29:624 (29624|5) - add a note here ? so you keep following the instru
00:49:535 (49535|3) - this note should be here : 00:49:446 - (the drum crash is here)
01:03:642 (63642|6) - move to 2 for pitch same sound as previous note (imo)
01:06:857 (66857|0) - add another note for cymbal
01:18:106 (78106|2) - add note ?
01:25:071 (85071|6) - this LN should end here : 01:26:142 (86142|5) -
02:10:963 (130963|3) - move down to the blue line : 02:10:873 (130873|3) -
02:20:070 (140070|4) - this LN starts 1/3 late, it should starts at the same time you press this note : 02:19:951 (139951|0) - then re extend the end by 1/3 for the missing length
[Injury]
00:02:749 (2749|5) - I suggest adding a note here, this gap feels really tricky imo , since you are following the main bass and main instru at same time (suggest in 6 , but like avoid trills here)
00:03:821 (3821|4) - so on for this aswell ^
00:04:357 (4357|6) - from here you stop following the bass thingys , such as here : 00:05:249 (5249|0) - or here : 00:06:321 (6321|6) - , both parts are kind of simillar and should be the same in term of density (layering)
00:18:285 (18285|4) - move to 6 , this is the end of the 2 4 6 pattern and it feels weird to put it on 5 imo , also it plays nicely
00:31:321 (31321|3) - here you suddenly dosn't follow the instru anymore , I suggest moving the note to 6 then moving it to : 00:31:410 (31410|3) - (the instru sound is on the blue line)
[Pain]
01:41:499 (101499|2) - I'd suggest add another note in 3 here, it feels abit weird to make a double stair and then end up with a single press LN .
01:47:302 (107302|6,107361|4,107421|6,107481|4) - I think this should be only 1/4 s
01:53:016 (113016|3,113076|2,113106|0,113135|5,113195|4) - ^ same , this is really hard and tricky to play there is a sound here , but like this sound isn't so loud and this isn't yet the hardest diff , probably should consider nerfing that part abit
Good Luck :3 (awnsered the strawpool aswell)