Frim4503 wrote:

Col : 1|2|3|4|5|6|7

Mod request from long time ago

General

1. BG : ok
2. Mp3 : ok
3. Hitsound : ok
4. Difficulty : ok
5. Timing: ok
6. AI Mod : ok

Spring

1. 00:07:678 -try this http://puu.sh/qdFbX/8de6f72296.png cuz i saw something akward for me 
   ^00:07:499 (7499|2,7856|2,8214|2,8571|2,8928|2) - i like your suggestion
2. 00:13:749 (13749|3) -make double. Following piano part 00:13:928 -00:14:642 - i want to focus on kick
3. 00:18:571 (18571|1) -move to 4. To avoid this 00:18:571 (18571|1,18571|0,18928|0,18928|1) -at the same col. Cuz different sound (C and W) it would break the flow though, the current alright imo
4. 00:19:285 -why not make this part same as prev. 00:13:571 -using piano sound ? follow crash/kick sound
5. 00:24:821 -why don’t you make all the parts follow piano ? make this 00:25:178 (25178|1,25535|2,25892|4) -double ^same reason
6. 00:26:071 (26071|1,26071|2) -make triple ? cymbal okay
7. 00:27:142 (27142|2,27142|3,27499|2,27499|3) -rearange. Suggest not put it at the same col. intentional, i want to mirror them
   00:32:856 (32856|3) -remove ? for clap sound ? nope
8. 00:33:392 (33392|3,33749|1) -double ? same with 00:33:214 (33214|1,33214|0,33571|0,33571|4) - kick 1 and crash 2 from the hitsound xd
9. 00:37:053 -add note ?
10. 00:48:839 -add note
11. 00:51:606 -^
12. 00:51:696 -^ all okay
13. 01:41:428 (101428|0,101428|1) -remove 1. Clap nope xd

Sorry, Cuma satu diff. soalnya lagi ga ada movitasi buat mod xD gpp membantu ini modnya ^^
Mod Done

• 
  [General]
  hmm oke
  
  [Normal]

1. 00:10:714 (10714|2) - pindahin ke kolom satu lebih pas dan balance, dan juga supaya nggk ngasih beban berlebih juga pada jempol buat newbie 5K player . . . atau bisa juga begini http://puu.sh/qeNnm/c0d1b8fece.jpg
2. 00:13:749 (13749|4) - sebaiknya dihapus aja, soalnya klo mau ngikut background synth/pianonya seharusnya mulai dari sini 00:13:392 - jadi akan lebih baik klo ngikut kick yg dimulai dari sini 00:13:928 - atau bisa ngikut full synth kayak disini 00:19:106 -
3. 00:39:642 (39642|0,39821|4) - saran saya LN tersebut diganti sama single note aja, agak membingungkan juga buat diff ini untuk mencet 2 short LN sementara kick impact nya lebih berasa keras disini
4. 00:43:214 - sampai 00:45:356 - saya rasa disini lebih pas kalo kamu ngikut piano flowsnya daripada long synth sound nya, soalnya piano disini lebih berasa ==> contoh http://puu.sh/qeNH8/556625fa54.jpg te ne not, te ne not, te ne not neeeet
5. 01:08:928 - delete satu note, soalnya nggk ada loud snare kayak di part ini 01:11:071 -
6. 01:21:964 (81964|0) - sebaiknya ini menjadi single not aja daripada LN, soalny pada bagian piano berikutnya kamu nggk pakai LN 01:22:142 (82142|1,82321|2,82499|4,82678|0,82856|1,83035|3) - supaya nggk confusing aja waktu mencet . . . soalnya klo kamu ngikut suara seperti ini 01:21:428 (81428|2) - harusnya LN berikutnya end disini 01:22:321 -
   alamak berbelit-belit, intinya saya merasa bahwa short LN nggk cocok disini ._.
7. 01:27:678 (87678|2) - 01:33:392 (93392|0) - sama seperti diatas ^
   
   [Hard]
8. 00:20:892 (20892|3,21428|1) - sebenarnya dibagian LN ini masih bisa dimodif buat ngikut repeated synth nya dan juga LN ini terlalu mudah buat hard icon diff hhh, sekedar saran http://puu.sh/qeO2X/ceafe7f421.jpg atau http://puu.sh/qeOby/e81b996db3.jpg sesuai kan aja sama synth nya . . . hmm this gonna be fun to be pressed
9. 00:49:017 (49017|2,49196|1) - masih belum terlalu jelas buat dikasih 1/4 cukup 1/2 aja, mungkin sebaiknya di part ini jangan dikasih 1/4 dulu . . . soalnya bagian piano mulai "audible" pada part ini 00:49:464 -
10. 00:50:267 (50267|3,50356|1,50535|3,50624|1) - suaranya jelas sangat berbeda, jadi mungkin untuk 1/4 ini dikasih kolom yang berbeda juga, contoh http://puu.sh/qeOok/c13462ed93.jpg
11. 01:24:642 (84642|0) - sebenarnya ini habisnya disini loh 01:25:356 - cuman seolah-olah aja habisnya di garis merah, well but it's fine
12. 01:28:392 (88392|4) - kenapa nggk 1/4 aja sekalian buat kick nya ._. kayak di part lainnya 00:39:821 -
    
    [Spring]
13. 00:18:214 (18214|4,18303|3,18660|4,18749|3) - mungkin kamu perlu sedikit variasi disini, sama seperti yg kamu lakuin dsini udah bagus sebenarnya 00:12:321 - hmm saran saya http://puu.sh/qeOG7/2786175977.png atau http://puu.sh/qeOHQ/e4d73257cd.png
14. 00:20:892 (20892|4,21428|3) - sama seperti mod saya di hard diff, akan lebih bagus jika kamu ngikut repeated synth nya dibagian ini . . . suara tersebut lebih berasa laaah
15. 00:23:035 (23035|0,23124|0,23303|0) - sayang sekali hal seperti ini kurang bagus kalo dipaksakan, coba ini dulu http://puu.sh/qeOOE/5315d84a94.png 100% lebih enak hhh
16. 00:28:839 (28839|1) - move ke kolom 3 aja udah, gpp kok . . . daripada kamu bela-belain ikut kick, tapi jacknya serasa aneh disini ._.
17. 00:33:928 - dan juga 01:41:785 - nice SR boost here =w=)b hahaha
18. 00:34:731 - 00:34:910 - dan juga 00:35:356 - eyyy berhubung ini last diff, kenapa nggk sekalin aja di map 1/4 pianonya ? sangat jelas banget malah disini suaranya
19. 00:36:964 (36964|4,37053|4) - sumpah ini aneh banget, yang sebelumnya sih mending ada kicknya . . . lah disini malah nggk jelas ada repeated sound atau tidak, jadi mohon sebaiknya jangan dikasih jack . . . hmm coba seperti ini ? http://puu.sh/qeP2Q/fa26b314f9.png
20. 00:40:446 - 00:40:624 - dan 00:40:981 - 00:41:071 - sama disini, suara 1/4 pianonya masih jelas kok . . . mungkin di part berikutnya masih ada yang seperti ini, cek aja lagi ya
21. 00:42:678 (42678|0,42767|0) - nonono
22. 00:47:142 (47142|0) - udah jadi short 1/2 LN disini, sebenarnya suara deep piano tesebut malah start disana loh
23. 00:48:749 (48749|2) - ke kolom 2 aja udah, lebih bagus
24. 00:51:249 - http://puu.sh/qePcD/6f2a5cdc82.jpg
25. okay i'm gonna stop modding pattern here . . . intinya sama aja sih, biar lebih enak dan dapat feels nya :3

• [Spring]

1. 00:18:035 - add note, ada cymbal kayak 00:17:499 - .
2. 00:18:571 - ini juga, malah lebih keras dari 00:17:499 - sound nya.
3. 00:19:106 - ^
4. 00:19:642 - ^
5. 00:23:303 (23303|0) - ga coba mulai dari col 5 aja? biar balance sama 00:23:035 (23035|0,23124|0,23303|0) - kan pas kiri jack, kanan reverse shield.
6. 00:23:749 - kalo mod pertama di apply ini add juga buat cymbal, dll tiap 3/2 beat add note buat cymbal sampai 00:25:356 - .
7. 00:26:071 - ini juga bagus di add aa cymbal, pas awal beat ketukan 4/4 nya lagi ini.
8. 00:28:749 (28749|1,28839|1,28928|0,29017|1) - kayaknya terlalu susah di main, coba mulai 00:29:017 (29017|1) - dari col 3 aja dan logikanya kalo ibu jari main pake tangan kanan mungkin jadi lebih mudah di main, tapi jadi re-map beruntun entar lol.
9. 00:33:392 (33392|3,33749|1) - jadi 2 note aja, konsisten sama 00:32:499 (32499|2,32499|1) - lagian diff paling susah gapapa imo.
10. 00:37:856 - ini harusnya ada LN buat piano kayak 00:37:499 (37499|4,37678|3) - panjangnya sampai 00:38:214 - malah 00:38:035 (38035|3) - mungkin harusnya di hapus.
11. 00:38:392 - ini juga harusnya ada LN 1/2 beat.
12. 00:39:464 - ^
13. 00:43:571 - ada 1/4 long piano sound tapi ga di map juga gapapa sih.
14. 00:44:106 - add 1/2 LN.
15. 00:45:178 - ^
16. 00:47:678 - ^
17. 00:47:856 (47856|4) - panjangin sampai 00:48:214 -
18. 01:29:464 (89464|4) - ini suara kayak thrill nya kenapa di cover LN? kan harusnya sama kayak 01:29:017 (89017|0,89106|4,89196|0,89285|1,89285|3) - .
19. 01:29:999 (89999|0) - ^ atau liat 00:28:928 - itu malah LN + 1/4 stream.
    
    [Hard]
20. 00:28:749 - mungkin add note di sini?
21. 00:29:285 (29285|1) - dll kok tiba2 ada note, padahal part2 sebelumnya kayak 00:18:392 - , 00:24:106 - dll ga ada note, pilih satlah satu, kalo mau add di add semua, kalo hapus berarti hapus semua.
22. 00:29:821 (29821|1) - ^
    ... dll males ngetag satu2 lol.
23. 00:49:464 (49464|0,49553|2,49642|1,49731|4,49821|3) - harusnya ngarah ke kiri kalo secara pitch, karena 00:50:089 (50089|4,50178|2,50267|3,50356|1) - pitch nya lebih tinggi malah di arahin ke kiri.
24. 00:51:071 (51071|1,51160|4,51249|0,51339|3,51428|1) - juga bagus di 31 42 5 patternnya (rip internet ga bisa kirim screenshoot orz).
25. 00:55:178 (55178|1,55267|3,55356|0,55446|4) - ga nyoba variasiin ini? biar beda sama 00:54:731 (54731|1,54821|3,54910|0,54999|4) - .
26. 00:55:803 (55803|4,55892|2,55981|3,56071|1) - secara pitch arah patternnya juga aneh.
27. 01:25:535 (85535|2) - move to col 2 biar feel thrill nya lebih berasa, lagian mulai dari 01:24:999 - ga keliat apa2 di col 2 lol.
    
    [Normal]
28. 00:20:178 (20178|0) - ke col 2? pitch nya lebih tinggi dari 00:19:821 (19821|0) - lalu 00:20:356 (20356|1) - ke col 1.
29. 00:53:214 (53214|4,53571|1,53928|4,54285|1) - ini ga kebalik? 00:53:571 (53571|1,54285|1) - pitch nya tinggi bagusan di kanan dan 00:54:285 (54285|1) - pitch nya beda sama 00:53:571 (53571|1) - kalo bisa di bedain col nya.
30. 00:58:214 - di double aja, buat emphasis sound 'pang' nya kayak 00:57:499 (57499|3,57499|4) - ,00:59:642 (59642|3,59642|2) - dll.
31. 00:58:928 - ^
32. 01:01:071 - ^
33. 01:01:785 - ^
34. 01:02:499 - ^
35. 01:11:428 - add note biar konsisten sama 01:11:785 - .
36. 01:17:142 - ^
37. 01:33:571 - sampai 01:37:142 - somehow kerasa kayak pattern itu2 aja mungkin karena 01:34:106 (94106|0,94285|4,94464|1,94642|3,94821|0,94999|4) - , 01:35:356 (95356|1,95535|3,95714|0,95892|4) - , coba di variasiin.

[ A v a l o n ] wrote:

Really nice song choice here =w=)

em empat em

|1|2|3|4|5|

• 
  [General]
  hmm oke
  
  [Normal]

1. 00:10:714 (10714|2) - pindahin ke kolom satu lebih pas dan balance, dan juga supaya nggk ngasih beban berlebih juga pada jempol buat newbie 5K player . . . atau bisa juga begini http://puu.sh/qeNnm/c0d1b8fece.jpg woke
2. 00:13:749 (13749|4) - sebaiknya dihapus aja, soalnya klo mau ngikut background synth/pianonya seharusnya mulai dari sini 00:13:392 - jadi akan lebih baik klo ngikut kick yg dimulai dari sini 00:13:928 - atau bisa ngikut full synth kayak disini 00:19:106 - ane tambah biar konsisten smuanya
3. 00:39:642 (39642|0,39821|4) - saran saya LN tersebut diganti sama single note aja, agak membingungkan juga buat diff ini untuk mencet 2 short LN sementara kick impact nya lebih berasa keras disini oke
4. 00:43:214 - sampai 00:45:356 - saya rasa disini lebih pas kalo kamu ngikut piano flowsnya daripada long synth sound nya, soalnya piano disini lebih berasa ==> contoh http://puu.sh/qeNH8/556625fa54.jpg te ne not, te ne not, te ne not neeeet ane consider dh xd, not too sure
5. 01:08:928 - delete satu note, soalnya nggk ada loud snare kayak di part ini 01:11:071 - ad suara emphasis disitu
6. 01:21:964 (81964|0) - sebaiknya ini menjadi single not aja daripada LN, soalny pada bagian piano berikutnya kamu nggk pakai LN 01:22:142 (82142|1,82321|2,82499|4,82678|0,82856|1,83035|3) - supaya nggk confusing aja waktu mencet . . . soalnya klo kamu ngikut suara seperti ini 01:21:428 (81428|2) - harusnya LN berikutnya end disini 01:22:321 -
   alamak berbelit-belit, intinya saya merasa bahwa short LN nggk cocok disini ._. i know =w= , fixed :3
7. 01:27:678 (87678|2) - 01:33:392 (93392|0) - sama seperti diatas ^ ^
   
   [Hard]
8. 00:20:892 (20892|3,21428|1) - sebenarnya dibagian LN ini masih bisa dimodif buat ngikut repeated synth nya dan juga LN ini terlalu mudah buat hard icon diff hhh, sekedar saran http://puu.sh/qeO2X/ceafe7f421.jpg atau http://puu.sh/qeOby/e81b996db3.jpg sesuai kan aja sama synth nya . . . hmm this gonna be fun to be pressed
9. 00:49:017 (49017|2,49196|1) - masih belum terlalu jelas buat dikasih 1/4 cukup 1/2 aja, mungkin sebaiknya di part ini jangan dikasih 1/4 dulu . . . soalnya bagian piano mulai "audible" pada part ini 00:49:464 -
10. 00:50:267 (50267|3,50356|1,50535|3,50624|1) - suaranya jelas sangat berbeda, jadi mungkin untuk 1/4 ini dikasih kolom yang berbeda juga, contoh http://puu.sh/qeOok/c13462ed93.jpg okeh xd
11. 01:24:642 (84642|0) - sebenarnya ini habisnya disini loh 01:25:356 - cuman seolah-olah aja habisnya di garis merah, well but it's fine ga pa2 dah =w= xd
12. 01:28:392 (88392|4) - kenapa nggk 1/4 aja sekalian buat kick nya ._. kayak di part lainnya 00:39:821 - kick yg sblmny jauh lbih audible imo
    
    [Spring]
13. 00:18:214 (18214|4,18303|3,18660|4,18749|3) - mungkin kamu perlu sedikit variasi disini, sama seperti yg kamu lakuin dsini udah bagus sebenarnya 00:12:321 - hmm saran saya http://puu.sh/qeOG7/2786175977.png atau http://puu.sh/qeOHQ/e4d73257cd.png
14. 00:20:892 (20892|4,21428|3) - sama seperti mod saya di hard diff, akan lebih bagus jika kamu ngikut repeated synth nya dibagian ini . . . suara tersebut lebih berasa laaah ok tmpt laen jg xd
15. 00:23:035 (23035|0,23124|0,23303|0) - sayang sekali hal seperti ini kurang bagus kalo dipaksakan, coba ini dulu http://puu.sh/qeOOE/5315d84a94.png 100% lebih enak hhh
16. 00:28:839 (28839|1) - move ke kolom 3 aja udah, gpp kok . . . daripada kamu bela-belain ikut kick, tapi jacknya serasa aneh disini ._. ok ide jack dipatahkan dlu xd
17. 00:33:928 - dan juga 01:41:785 - nice SR boost here =w=)b hahaha ga pa2 lah di jdi pp map dikit =w=
18. 00:34:731 - 00:34:910 - dan juga 00:35:356 - eyyy berhubung ini last diff, kenapa nggk sekalin aja di map 1/4 pianonya ? sangat jelas banget malah disini suaranya ok smuanya
19. 00:36:964 (36964|4,37053|4) - sumpah ini aneh banget, yang sebelumnya sih mending ada kicknya . . . lah disini malah nggk jelas ada repeated sound atau tidak, jadi mohon sebaiknya jangan dikasih jack . . . hmm coba seperti ini ? http://puu.sh/qeP2Q/fa26b314f9.png oke
20. 00:40:446 - 00:40:624 - dan 00:40:981 - 00:41:071 - sama disini, suara 1/4 pianonya masih jelas kok . . . mungkin di part berikutnya masih ada yang seperti ini, cek aja lagi ya oke dicek
21. 00:42:678 (42678|0,42767|0) - nonono whyyy xd
22. 00:47:142 (47142|0) - udah jadi short 1/2 LN disini, sebenarnya suara deep piano tesebut malah start disana loh oh ya lupa yg ini
23. 00:48:749 (48749|2) - ke kolom 2 aja udah, lebih bagus bole bole bole xd
24. 00:51:249 - http://puu.sh/qePcD/6f2a5cdc82.jpg
25. okay i'm gonna stop modding pattern here . . . intinya sama aja sih, biar lebih enak dan dapat feels nya :3

Good luck ya, kayak nya map ini menarik . . . panggil aja lagi saya klo nantinya map ini udah siap
oke sekarang saya tunggu giliran mu hehehe

Dellvangel wrote:

Hi, mod requested from Line.yayy :3

1|2|3|4|5

• [Spring]

1. 00:18:035 - add note, ada cymbal kayak 00:17:499 - .
2. 00:18:571 - ini juga, malah lebih keras dari 00:17:499 - sound nya.
3. 00:19:106 - ^
4. 00:19:642 - ^ itu kyk cymbal lembut smua.. ane ga bner2 emphasis suara itu kcuali klo cymbal kyk 00:20:356 - dsbny
5. 00:23:303 (23303|0) - ga coba mulai dari col 5 aja? biar balance sama 00:23:035 (23035|0,23124|0,23303|0) - kan pas kiri jack, kanan reverse shield. dirubah lewat mod sblmny xd
6. 00:23:749 - kalo mod pertama di apply ini add juga buat cymbal, dll tiap 3/2 beat add note buat cymbal sampai 00:25:356 - . ane keep dlu
7. 00:26:071 - ini juga bagus di add aa cymbal, pas awal beat ketukan 4/4 nya lagi ini. ini iya
8. 00:28:749 (28749|1,28839|1,28928|0,29017|1) - kayaknya terlalu susah di main, coba mulai 00:29:017 (29017|1) - dari col 3 aja dan logikanya kalo ibu jari main pake tangan kanan mungkin jadi lebih mudah di main, tapi jadi re-map beruntun entar lol. ini hanya pindah 1 note wkwk :p
9. 00:33:392 (33392|3,33749|1) - jadi 2 note aja, konsisten sama 00:32:499 (32499|2,32499|1) - lagian diff paling susah gapapa imo. woke xd
10. 00:37:856 - ini harusnya ada LN buat piano kayak 00:37:499 (37499|4,37678|3) - panjangnya sampai 00:38:214 - malah 00:38:035 (38035|3) - mungkin harusnya di hapus. disini piano yg ad tiba2 brhenti suarany , beda ama 00:37:499 (37499|4,37678|3) - yang synthny tetep jalan terus selama 1/2 beat, jdi ane sngaja bkin LN nya brhenti kyk gitu :3
11. 00:38:392 - ini juga harusnya ada LN 1/2 beat.
12. 00:39:464 - ^
13. 00:43:571 - ada 1/4 long piano sound tapi ga di map juga gapapa sih.
14. 00:44:106 - add 1/2 LN.
15. 00:45:178 - ^
16. 00:47:678 - ^ gomen sama smua D:
17. 00:47:856 (47856|4) - panjangin sampai 00:48:214 - tp itu bner 1/2 beat ;w;
18. 01:29:464 (89464|4) - ini suara kayak thrill nya kenapa di cover LN? kan harusnya sama kayak 01:29:017 (89017|0,89106|4,89196|0,89285|1,89285|3) - . dirubah smua
19. 01:29:999 (89999|0) - ^ atau liat 00:28:928 - itu malah LN + 1/4 stream. 01:29:464 - ini samanya ama yg 00:20:892 - , but still changed
    
    [Hard]
20. 00:28:749 - mungkin add note di sini? consider dlu
21. 00:29:285 (29285|1) - dll kok tiba2 ada note, padahal part2 sebelumnya kayak 00:18:392 - , 00:24:106 - dll ga ada note, pilih satlah satu, kalo mau add di add semua, kalo hapus berarti hapus semua.
22. 00:29:821 (29821|1) - ^
    ... dll males ngetag satu2 lol. oke2
23. 00:49:464 (49464|0,49553|2,49642|1,49731|4,49821|3) - harusnya ngarah ke kiri kalo secara pitch, karena 00:50:089 (50089|4,50178|2,50267|3,50356|1) - pitch nya lebih tinggi malah di arahin ke kiri. tp itu dpt flowny klo diliat scra 1 grup notes itu D:
24. 00:51:071 (51071|1,51160|4,51249|0,51339|3,51428|1) - juga bagus di 31 42 5 patternnya (rip internet ga bisa kirim screenshoot orz). ane rearrange
25. 00:55:178 (55178|1,55267|3,55356|0,55446|4) - ga nyoba variasiin ini? biar beda sama 00:54:731 (54731|1,54821|3,54910|0,54999|4) - . rearrange
26. 00:55:803 (55803|4,55892|2,55981|3,56071|1) - secara pitch arah patternnya juga aneh. scra pitch hrusny LN di col 3, tp ane variasiin dikit xd
27. 01:25:535 (85535|2) - move to col 2 biar feel thrill nya lebih berasa, lagian mulai dari 01:24:999 - ga keliat apa2 di col 2 lol. oke
    
    [Normal]
28. 00:20:178 (20178|0) - ke col 2? pitch nya lebih tinggi dari 00:19:821 (19821|0) - lalu 00:20:356 (20356|1) - ke col 1. oke
29. 00:53:214 (53214|4,53571|1,53928|4,54285|1) - ini ga kebalik? 00:53:571 (53571|1,54285|1) - pitch nya tinggi bagusan di kanan dan 00:54:285 (54285|1) - pitch nya beda sama 00:53:571 (53571|1) - kalo bisa di bedain col nya. iya
30. 00:58:214 - di double aja, buat emphasis sound 'pang' nya kayak 00:57:499 (57499|3,57499|4) - ,00:59:642 (59642|3,59642|2) - dll.
31. 00:58:928 - ^
32. 01:01:071 - ^
33. 01:01:785 - ^
34. 01:02:499 - ^ itu pangny ane emphasis yg bner2 gede , kliatan kok alur pang yg ane bkin double scra konsisten
35. 01:11:428 - add note biar konsisten sama 01:11:785 - . oke
36. 01:17:142 - ^ oke
37. 01:33:571 - sampai 01:37:142 - somehow kerasa kayak pattern itu2 aja mungkin karena 01:34:106 (94106|0,94285|4,94464|1,94642|3,94821|0,94999|4) - , 01:35:356 (95356|1,95535|3,95714|0,95892|4) - , coba di variasiin. rearrange

Good luck!

Critical_Star wrote:

halo, mod as requested =w=

column 1 2 3 4 5

Normal
00:18:035 (18035|3,19106|3) - i think u can ignore these snare sound and focus on the piano and loud kick instead. try catching the cymbal here to make a bit difference
00:20:714 - i guess it won't hurt so much to add a note here
00:21:785 - there is piano sound here, add?
00:23:749 (23749|4,24821|2) - like before if u accept same as before
00:31:249 (31249|1) - move to 4 and 00:31:428 (31428|2) - move to 2 look neater here for PR ok
00:46:428 - here not only kick but has the same chord like 00:46:606 (46606|0,46785|4,46964|2) - , better not to miss it here
00:47:142 - here too ^ can't really hear any difference sound here i'm following the main melody here for the transition
00:52:142 - add a note like before and so on here if u accept same
00:53:571 (53571|1,53928|4) - CTRL+H seens better for PR rearrange
01:29:464 (89464|3,89999|1) - not sure but it play odds too me, u try to catch the 1/4 sound here? maybe try http://puu.sh/qh2zg/08ce711fae.jpg start 01:28:928 - rearrange


Spring
00:18:660 (18660|4,18749|3,18839|2,18928|1,18928|0) - maybe make it left to right pattern variation here already rearrange this before
00:33:392 (33392|3,33749|1) - could use double for all these drum sound here too already added
00:34:731 - 00:34:910 - why not map the 1/4 sound here, these sound are really obvious here. also already xd
00:35:356 - here u can add a note too for the main chord sound oke 'w'
00:40:356 - same goes to this part like before ^ it is recommended to add for all these sound. sure
00:46:071 - i not sure if this is your intention to make it simple but u missed a lot of these 1/4 sound. if u accept, u may want to check other part too idk too xd, added anyway

good luck~

-SoraGami- wrote:

Hi Dixon! :3 hello sora =w=)

here's my love mod requested from my queueueueue~ yayy
oke let's start...

Column = 1|2|3|4|5

~~~ open me ~~~

[Spring]

wooo owo i like the bg xD xie xie :3

- in here 00:03:392 - how about something like this? https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5789086
something like the sweet bell sound here 00:03:214 (3214|4,3214|3) correspond on the same flow as the echo bell sound in 00:03:928 and for the single notes to have same flow like the beginning but more intacted and reversed I like it

- 00:03:749 (3749|2) - i think this one should be the same as this one 00:19:106 according to your pattern structure and it has same sound you mean the 1/4? but i only focus on 1/2 piano for this section, the other section already have different structure.

- 00:25:892 (25892|4) - i think this LN should be 1/4 notes instead, so i suggest to change those, there's a 1/4 sound behind it wokay

- i suggest have some consistent variety of flow here 00:27:142 (27142|2,27142|3,27499|3,27499|2) to break that spacebar usage on those doubles, it is not that bad but i think it would be a lot more better, something like this i suppose? https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5789272 incase you dont change your pattern here 00:26:071 in my mod above... something like a mirror of 00:26:071 (26071|0,26071|1,26160|3,26249|0,26339|4,26428|1,26428|2) in my suggested pattern since the next pattern after this 00:26:606 is also a mirror pattern of 00:27:678 (sorry maybe my explanation is a bit messy hehe) i understand here xd, applied :3

- 00:39:642 - i think this one should be triple or maybe intentional? nice catch

- 00:54:285 - in this part, there's a stack of too much strain on the right side, how about something like this? https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5789394 to balance well the pressure both sides excellent , idk how to fix it before xd

nice diff >w< i enjoyed it

thank you
[Difficult]

- 00:13:214 - has different density with 00:18:928 and 00:24:642 - but they are the same, remove the other one? since it is only single note too in the 2nd kiai you're very good owo

- 00:14:642 - maybe add note here? since the other cymbals are triple hmm the other cymbal actually 2 notes+LN, i didn't really count the LN there xd

- 00:28:749 - add note, i hear a 1/4 sound here but i think 1 note here is enough for this difficulty, just for the tap tap tap feeling xD sure

- 00:36:428 (36428|2,36606|0) - maybe swap places? so this 00:36:428 (36428|2,36606|0) will be more easier to release the LN for players at this level naisuu

- 00:36:606 (36606|2) - add note too? for the tap tap tap feeling also hehe i think 1 LN + 1 note is enough? xdd

- btw... 01:03:392 (63392|0) - what is this note for? omgg xd, fixed

- 01:34:642 - add note? how can i overlook that xdd

[Basic]

- 00:14:285 - add for snare hmm okay will add

- 00:16:249 - add note too, since you map this 00:16:606 (16606|4) i guess it is for the melody bundle, and 00:16:249 is actually included in the bundle sure

- there should be a 1/1 LN here 00:39:642 or maybe this 00:39:999 (39999|1) should start here 00:39:642 for the consistency of the long synth you mapped you're correct :3

- 01:14:285 - i think there's a should be another note here since this is the same with 01:11:428 and 01:17:142 naisuu

- 01:22:856 - add for snare okay

- 01:28:571 - add too,i think 2nd kiai should be more climatic than the 1st one yeahh xdd

- 01:34:285 - ^ suree

oke done....
Cool song dixon! xD another qrispy joybox <3
Such a awesome map too...
Goodluck~

nowsmart wrote:

Hii sorry for lately.
|1|2|3|4|5|

[Basic]
00:16:964 (16964|2) - change to normal note? the 1/4 thingy have big sound, LN seems more fit to emphasize it
00:18:035 (18035|3) - add note for cymbal?
00:19:106 (19106|3) - ^
00:23:749 (23749|4) - ^
00:24:821 (24821|2) - ^
00:49:464 - ^
00:55:178 - ^ sorry, i felt 1 note is enough for that, bcause it is light cymbal instead of actually cymbal with crash
01:25:535 (85535|1) - change to normal note?
01:27:678 (87678|2) - add note for cymbal? same^

[Spring]
00:08:571 (8571|3,8749|2) - ctrl + j for better pattern?
00:15:356 (15356|1) - move to 4 for pitch
00:15:356 (15356|3) - move to 5
00:15:535 (15535|2) - move to 2
00:15:714 (15714|3,15714|4) - move left 1 column.
00:16:071 (16071|2,16071|1) - switch column for pitch.
00:16:428 (16428|4) - move to 2
00:16:606 (16606|1) - move to 4
00:16:785 (16785|3) - move to 3
it will be like this http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5828598 more beautiful i did some rearrangement here too
00:18:035 (18035|2) - i suggest you to emphasize cymbal sound, you should make double note on cymbal sound.
00:19:106 (19106|1) - ^
00:23:749 (23749|2) - ^
00:49:464 (49464|2) - ^
00:55:178 (55178|0) - ^
01:27:678 (87678|0) - ^
01:33:392 (93392|3) - ^ sorry , i don't want to add for the light cymbal, a bit awkward imo

it's good enough, ready for bn check

Verniy_Chan wrote:

Hi Dixon

Mod Via ♡ Верный Mania Queue ♡

5K = |1|2|3|4|5|

(Focus : Pattern , Pitch, Hitsounds)

General

1. Look Good~

Basic

OD : 7
HP : 7

1. 00:03:928 - dan 00:04:642 - oh.. disini sengaja ya~ gak pasang note untuk suara bell seperti 00:02:499 - 00:02:856 - ? berhubung pitchnya lebih rendah, ok.. gpp sekali kali gak konsisten ane psangny yg suaranya lbih gede buat diemphasis -w-
2. 00:14:285 - lupa C untuk snare disini woke
3. 00:17:142 (17142|4) - disini ada cymbal/hat-synth.. seharusnya add F sama seperti anda memasangnya disini 00:19:642 -, ada beberapa spot juga yang terlupakan :
   00:18:035 -
   00:18:571 -
   00:19:106 -
   00:23:749 -
   00:24:285 -
   00:24:821 -
   00:49:999 -
   00:55:714 -
   dan cek juga kiai yang kedua all accepted and checked for remaining missed hs
4. mulai 00:23:571 - sampai 00:25:356 - agak kurang nyaman dimainin, berhubung ini diff normal gak semua player pemula bisa ahli menekan kolom |3| beruntun, coba seperti ini :
   
   
   Pattern ini lebih mudah dimainin, bahkan lebih mudah dibandingkan dengan part sebelumnya 00:18:928 - sampai 00:20:356 - nice pattern -w-
5. 00:28:571 (28571|2) - lebih cocok normal note deh, karena suara beat/instument utamanya lebih keras dibandinkan long sound/synth? (aku gak tau juga LNnya ngikutin apa). Jika setuju, maka jangan lupa add note sebagai kick disini 00:28:749 - suara panjang disini ttp prlu diemphasis imo , tapi ane add note dsini
6. 00:31:785 (31785|2) - LN yang mengikuti suara ini (long bass) kurang audible sepertinya berbeda dengan 00:32:321 (32321|4,32856|0) - yang lebih jelas didengar, dan layering patternnya agak sedikit sulit, saranku mungkin jadiin normal note? mnurut ane msih prlu yg buat long bassnya.
7. 00:36:428 - add note untuk suara snare seperti 00:35:714 - tapi jika ini disengaja karena ngikutin main instrument synth (red tick) maka harusnya hapus juga 00:35:714 - up to you, sama halnya bagian ini :
   00:42:142 - tapi yg di 00:35:714 - juga ada suara main instrumentny, cuma dsini kecampur aja ama snareny, mkany ksannya kyk ane jg ikut snare, tp sbnrny bner2 pure main instrument , klo di 00:36:428 - pure snare tnpa synth.
8. 00:39:821 (39821|4) - add W untuk suara kicknya woke
9. 01:28:214 (88214|2) - overlap HSnya, agak aneh aja XD, ini juga leh 01:33:928 (93928|2) - difixed
10. 01:31:249 - disini juga add W untuk kick fixed
11. 01:39:642 (99642|3,99821|0,99999|4,100178|2) - wah.. HSnya ini~ kok tiba2 masang W untuk suara synthnya? remove HSnya biar lebih konsisten ane consider dlu xd
12. 01:40:714 (100714|2,101071|1) - HSnya kabur? coba lapor di kantor polisi~ XD diusir saya wktu lapor ;w;
13. 01:41:785 (101785|3) - HSnya berhianat dengan 00:33:928 (33928|4) - padahal mereka seperjuangan? coba rangkul mereka biar menjadi satu hati jodoh pasti betemu owo)/

Notes : Patternya udah lumayan solid, mungkin coba lebih teliti lagi ngecek HSnya, ada beberapa yang missing dan gak konsisten

Difficult

OD : 7,5
HP : 7,5

1. 00:16:964 - Sebenarnya disini ada cymbal, pitchnya mirip dengan 00:17:142 - coba dengar dengan baik2, sama halnya dengan ini 01:25:535 - iya, tapi buat suara satu kesatuan yg nyambung ke 1/4, ane prefer bgitu buat hard diff.
2. 00:24:999 (24999|2,25356|2,25714|2,26071|2) - untuk anchor di kolom |3| seperti ini mungkin bisa dikurangin panggunaannya, soalnya agak sulit dihit kecuali bagian streaming pattern, saran saya seperti ini :
   00:24:999 (24999|2) - pindah ke |5|, 00:25:178 (25178|4) - pindah ke |3|, 00:25:356 (25356|2) - pindah ke |1| atau |2|, 00:25:535 (25535|0) - pindah ke |5|, 00:25:714 (25714|2) - pindah ke |1|. very nice -w-
3. 00:28:928 (28928|2,29464|0,29999|4,30535|3) - jika kalau LN ini diganti jadi normal, SV enak dipasang XD, nvm just kidding weee ane jlek bkin sv xdd
4. 01:21:785 - sampai 01:23:214 - agak sedikit canggung patternmu dimainin karena pitch 01:22:856 (82856|1,83035|1) - sangat beda dan kurang balanced, coba seperti ini :
   
   

ok dan ane rearranged dikit :3
Notes : Pattern untuk diff ini hampir sangat solid, cuma ada beberapa spot yang mungkin bisa dipertimbangkan penggunaan anchornya di kolom |3| kalau bisa diminimalisir jika memungkinkan. Dan jangan lupa HSnya dicek karena sama seperti penjelasan di diff BASIC

Spring

OD : 8
HP : 8

1. 00:16:964 (16964|0) - add F untuk, cymbal sipp
2. mulai dari 00:19:642 - sampai 00:20:356 - biar lebih balance dan menghindari anchor kolom |3|, saran :
   00:19:642 (19642|4) - pindah ke |4|, 00:19:999 (19999|3,20178|2) - geser kekanan 1x
3. mulai 00:23:035 - sampai 00:23:571 - gimana ya mau jelasinnya ya... sekedar saran sih biar lebih bervariasi
   
   
4. 00:46:071 - gak add note disni untuk suara cymbal yg keras? seperti di diff sebelumnya? ane consider dlu
5. 01:28:392 (88392|1,88481|2) - missing hitsound disini
6. 01:31:160 (91160|1,91249|2,91339|3) - ini juga
7. 01:34:374 (94374|4) - sama seperti diatas
8. 01:37:142 (97142|3,97231|1,97321|2) - missing HS
9. mulai dari 01:41:785 - sampai 01:43:124 - lebih cocok C, karena kerumunan ini adalah snare sisany accept all owo

Notes : Disini, patternya sudah terlihat sangat solid, mungkin cuma HSnya aja perlu dibenah

Verniy_Chan wrote:

Score

86

87+82+89=258/3

just for fun only, don’t take it seriously

Very Nice 5K Mapset
Berharap bisa ranked <3
Dan ini mungkin Official mod pertamaku (kodosu pertama), setelah 3 bulan vacum modding
Хорошо~ Good Luck..

• 
  [General]

1. Seems all okay for me
   
   [Basic]
2. 00:47:321 (47321|1,47499|3) - actually i feel they're have same instrument sound this time . . . try to make it same with single note too, cuz the instrument itself was different type with 00:47:856 (47856|4,48214|2,48571|1) -
3. 00:53:035 (53035|0,53214|2) - same reason as above ^
   
   [Difficult]
4. 00:47:321 (47321|1,47499|2) - 00:53:035 (53035|4,53214|1) - honestly it have same issues with Basic diff
   
   [Spring]
5. 00:28:571 (28571|0,28749|1,28839|2) - missing hitsound here
6. 00:54:464 (54464|0,54553|1) - there is no kick sound on that . . . delete those whistle
7. 01:22:767 (82767|0) - add whistle for a kick sound here, just like you did on here 01:28:481 (88481|2) -
   
   [Hitsound for all diffs]
8. 00:06:428 - until 00:11:071 - i think you should remove all of your whistle hitsound on there, it just really weird on that because there is not contains any kick sound on the background music itself . . . if you still need to add some hitsound, i would like to suggest to add one more hitsound file for sample (like "hihat" hitsound or anything else)
9. 01:03:571 - until 01:08:214 - same reason as above ^
10. 00:31:071 - till 00:31:606 - not contains any kick sound too . . . delete those whistle
11. 01:17:856 - 01:18:571 - same ^
12. 01:39:642 - till 01:40:178 - same too ^

Fresh Chicken wrote:

wa

2016-10-08 23:20 Fresh Chicken: np your map
2016-10-08 23:20 Fresh Chicken: o/
2016-10-08 23:20 Fresh Chicken: i';m kinda sleepy now
2016-10-08 23:20 Fresh Chicken: quickly quickly gogo
2016-10-08 23:20 DixonBlackwing: ACTION is listening to [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/965599 Qrispy Joybox - printemps]
2016-10-08 23:21 Fresh Chicken: ACTION is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1020837 Qrispy Joybox - printemps [Basic]]
2016-10-08 23:22 DixonBlackwing: ACTION is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1020837 Qrispy Joybox - printemps [Basic]]
2016-10-08 23:23 Fresh Chicken: 00:26:071 - suddenly became too easy, I think there should be 2 note where has snare
2016-10-08 23:23 DixonBlackwing: 2 notes every C sound?
2016-10-08 23:24 Fresh Chicken: that will be good for consistency, check below patterns toh
2016-10-08 23:25 DixonBlackwing: already done all :3
2016-10-08 23:25 Fresh Chicken: yaaa
2016-10-08 23:26 DixonBlackwing: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6274656 xd
2016-10-08 23:26 Fresh Chicken: 01:25:535 - what about to add one more note? seems not bad
2016-10-08 23:27 Fresh Chicken: ok normal is fine
2016-10-08 23:27 DixonBlackwing: the current one is fine imo, in hard i also only add one note
2016-10-08 23:27 Fresh Chicken: hmm oki
2016-10-08 23:28 Fresh Chicken: ACTION is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1019987 Qrispy Joybox - printemps [Difficult]]
2016-10-08 23:30 Fresh Chicken: ahh
2016-10-08 23:30 Fresh Chicken: sleepy
2016-10-08 23:30 Fresh Chicken: i will check just unrankable things
2016-10-08 23:30 DixonBlackwing: work so night o.o
2016-10-08 23:30 Fresh Chicken: I have cold
2016-10-08 23:30 Fresh Chicken: now
2016-10-08 23:30 Fresh Chicken: @>@>
2016-10-08 23:31 DixonBlackwing: already drink medicine? D:
2016-10-08 23:31 Fresh Chicken: yap
2016-10-08 23:33 Fresh Chicken: turn off widescreen support in easy and normal
2016-10-08 23:34 DixonBlackwing: done :3
2016-10-08 23:34 Fresh Chicken: ok update plzz
2016-10-08 23:35 DixonBlackwing: okay already update

hikikuman wrote:

anjay gratz dixon

[ A v a l o n ] wrote:

Since i've already checked and modded this map long ago p/5348076 and i feel it's good enough . . . maybe i'll do a light check only for now

• 
  [General]

1. Seems all okay for me
   
   [Basic]
2. 00:47:321 (47321|1,47499|3) - actually i feel they're have same instrument sound this time . . . try to make it same with single note too, cuz the instrument itself was different type with 00:47:856 (47856|4,48214|2,48571|1) -
3. 00:53:035 (53035|0,53214|2) - same reason as above ^
   
   [Difficult]
4. 00:47:321 (47321|1,47499|2) - 00:53:035 (53035|4,53214|1) - honestly it have same issues with Basic diff
   
   [Spring]
5. 00:28:571 (28571|0,28749|1,28839|2) - missing hitsound here
6. 00:54:464 (54464|0,54553|1) - there is no kick sound on that . . . delete those whistle
7. 01:22:767 (82767|0) - add whistle for a kick sound here, just like you did on here 01:28:481 (88481|2) -
   
   [Hitsound for all diffs]
8. 00:06:428 - until 00:11:071 - i think you should remove all of your whistle hitsound on there, it just really weird on that because there is not contains any kick sound on the background music itself . . . if you still need to add some hitsound, i would like to suggest to add one more hitsound file for sample (like "hihat" hitsound or anything else) will delete it i guess, and change it to hithat hs.
9. 01:03:571 - until 01:08:214 - same reason as above ^
10. 00:31:071 - till 00:31:606 - not contains any kick sound too . . . delete those whistle
11. 01:17:856 - 01:18:571 - same ^
12. 01:39:642 - till 01:40:178 - same too ^

Call me back ~

[ A v a l o n ] wrote:

Qualified congratulations !
osu!mania needs more 5K mapset

erlinadewi- wrote:

selamat dixon map nya quali lagi

-[ AmiShici ]- wrote:

Congru kouhai

Dellvangel wrote:

Gratz Dixon!
lmao kemaren masih sempet irc mod ini map xd

-SoraGami- wrote:

\:D/
grats dixon~ xD
really love this map