1. Insane (4.86 stars, 619 notes)
2. Normal (3.08 stars, 204 notes)
3. Rin (4.77 stars, 503 notes)

1. goodbye eveless' .osb file

• good, 以下全nazi

1. 02:28:635...02:33:135 new combo跟的是..?
2. 03:15:435 (1,2) - suggest a re-shape
3. 03:39:735 (1,2,1,2) - 左一格 (lv4), and..
4. 03:42:435 (1) - ..x:200 y:92

1. 70% vol. --> 60%
2. Stack leniency different from others (i think 0.7 works fine too), just mentioning
3. 01:20:835 (3) - clap
4. 03:04:335 (5) - clap
5. 03:14:835 (4) - inconsistent spacing, 完美的重疊點應是x:96 y:328, 維持這個design建議加大(4,5)間距
6. 03:33:735 (2,3) - 由於這兩個音階變動較小, 碰到這個跳有奇怪的感覺

1. 看到1/4讓我好痛苦
2. 00:44:235 (1) - whistle instead?
3. 00:48:435 (4) - 下new combo以及把後面的new combo移到00:50:535 (2)?
4. 01:10:035 (4,1,1) - same combo color?
5. 01:13:935 (1) - finish
6. 01:21:135.. 這裡開始能下音效了吧..?
7. 01:58:785 (T) - 無用綠線
8. 02:39:135 (2) - whistle here
9. 02:43:035 (1) - 我覺得二連finish聽起來不錯
10. 後面的90% vol. 真的不會太大聲嗎Orz

loveFantasy wrote:

[Rin]

1. 70% vol. --> 60% 感觉前面确实强一些,没变
2. Stack leniency different from others (i think 0.7 works fine too), just mentioning 没看到区别...懒得动了
3. 01:20:835 (3) - clap fixed.
4. 03:04:335 (5) - clap fixed.
5. 03:14:835 (4) - inconsistent spacing, 完美的重疊點應是x:96 y:328, 維持這個design建議加大(4,5)間距 叠好了
6. 03:33:735 (2,3) - 由於這兩個音階變動較小, 碰到這個跳有奇怪的感覺 取的是2与3反向(音阶)的意思,又因为要叠,所以只有那里最合适

Kiiwa wrote:

moe

loveFantasy wrote:

[General]

1. goodbye eveless' .osb file

done

[Normal]

• good, 以下全nazi

1. 02:28:635...02:33:135 new combo跟的是..?changed
2. 03:15:435 (1,2) - suggest a re-shapechanged 2
3. 03:39:735 (1,2,1,2) - 左一格 (lv4), and..fixed
4. 03:42:435 (1) - ..x:200 y:92

fixed


[Insane]

1. 看到1/4讓我好痛苦
2. 00:44:235 (1) - whistle instead?O.O习惯开头第一个finish
3. 00:48:435 (4) - 下new combo以及把後面的new combo移到00:50:535 (2)?changed
4. 01:10:035 (4,1,1) - same combo color?done
5. 01:13:935 (1) - finishk
6. 01:21:135.. 這裡開始能下音效了吧..?我有下啊一直o.o clap
7. 01:58:785 (T) - 無用綠線deleted
8. 02:39:135 (2) - whistle herek
9. 02:43:035 (1) - 我覺得二連finish聽起來不錯k
10. 後面的90% vol. 真的不會太大聲嗎Orz

changed

wcx19911123 wrote:

hi
sorry for the delay

[Normal]
01:17:235 (2,1) - not straightwhy must be curved0.0?
01:24:435 (2,1) - spacingk
02:04:035 (2,3) - surround betterk
02:01:635 (4,1) - spacingk
03:21:435 (3) - kinda unreadblewhy?
03:38:835 (3,1) - surround betterk
03:42:435 (1,2) - not straight
03:50:535 (1,2) - ^
03:52:335 (1,2) - ^


awesome map
star 0.0

Garven wrote:

As per your request:

[General]
Offset -20? Mine is probably wrong, but I am hitting really early, so maybe get the timing double-checked.ok i will call Alace check it :3

[Normal]
Maybe HP Drain, AR/OD -1? AR mainly I'd like lower - feels a little fast for the velocity.done
02:43:110 (1) - Start at 02:43:185 - k

[Rin]
When I first played this it felt like a huge jump up in difficulty, but as it went on, it was mostly just that one jump pattern that is used for the drums, so it'll do.
The ending is <3

[Insane]
Reduce stack leniency by 2 so that 03:37:635 (3,6) - doesn't stack.k
02:14:235 (1) - The volume changes during the chorus are kind of strange as it starts kind of quiet then gradually gets louder/softer and peaks in a weird spot. It didn't fit the music to me, but it's a fairly minor thing considering the sound set used.changed :3

Mapping is solid to me; just the timing felt off. Get that checked up~

Garven wrote:

[Insane]
Forget to reduce stack leniency?

Garven wrote:

Soothing song with beautiful maps to go along with it. Great job~

:U

Alace wrote:

<Insane>
04:35:817 (3,4,5,6) - super hard to read XD

Lizzehb wrote:

To this map is terrible. The AR on Rin is way to high. Is insane or Rin harder? I can't tell. All I know if Rin is less difficult than insange the AR should NOT EVER EVER be 8. That's way to high. I cannot pass Rin but I have an S with Normal +doubletime. MAKES NO SENSE.