Rameses B - Neon Rainbow (ft. Anna Yvette)

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This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Sunday, September 11, 2016 at 10:18:21 PM

Artist: Rameses B
Title: Neon Rainbow (ft. Anna Yvette)
Tags: dnb drum and bass cut version milan- marianna cbh come[back]home -Tochi
BPM: 174
Filesize: 17028kb
Play Time: 02:12
Difficulties Available:
  1. CBH's Hard (3.46 stars, 332 notes)
  2. Easy (1.59 stars, 146 notes)
  3. Marianna's Normal (2.02 stars, 175 notes)
  4. Milan-'s Insane (4.37 stars, 508 notes)
  5. Spectrum (5.14 stars, 571 notes)


Download: Rameses B - Neon Rainbow (ft. Anna Yvette)
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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me
Marianna
Come[Back]Home
Milan-
me

SB - -Tochi

Thanks to Milan- for letting me use his hitsounds!
-Tochi
nice map, good luck! <3
RAMESES B THE BEST
Jmega24
naisu *.*
Secretpipe
n i c e
_handholding
hi m4m

  • Easy
  1. 00:38:694 (1) - end spinner at 00:42:660 . This is where the sound ends. Also i prefer a hitsound on the end of it like a drum finish or drum clap but that's up to you
  2. 00:52:143 - This felt empty; add circle?
  3. 01:03:522 (1) - You can NC this if you want. It's part of the pattern and will give the players some more hp to carry on through the gap
  • Normal
  1. 00:50:936 - to me it felt weird how you didnt map any of the red ticks here when you did for 00:46:970 (1,2,3,4,5) and then continued to do so after. It just seem to ruin the flow in rhythm
  2. 01:26:970 (1) - add clap? theres a sound at the end of the spinner so it think a hitsound is needed
  3. 01:51:453 (1) - NC pattern is irregular, is it intended? You started NCing every measure for the first 3 measures and then did it for every 2.
  • Hard
  1. 01:17:315 (1) - I think it would be better to unstack and move the slider down a bit so the approach circle will be easier to see http://puu.sh/oTRBB/261e053c6a.jpg
  2. 02:01:453 (1) - ^
  • Milan
  1. 01:10:074 (1) - I dont think this SV change justifies he NC. To me its barely noticeable at all
  2. 01:51:022 (5,6) - Can you decrease the DS at all just a bit? It's a lot bigger than your other 1/4 spacings
    No kiai time?
  • Insane
  1. 00:54:729 (6) - listening to the music I think this should be part of the stack 00:54:901 (1,1) -
  2. 02:11:108 (3) - NC this for consistency of your 'NC every measure' pattern. Though I guess it doesnt really matter :roll:


Well thats all from me. Really polished set with good flow and structure. GL!!!
Come[Back]Home
  • Hard
  1. 01:17:315 (1) - I think it would be better to unstack and move the slider down a bit so the approach circle will be easier to see http://puu.sh/oTRBB/261e053c6a.jpg yes
  2. 02:01:453 (1) - ^ ok
Marianna

Kisses wrote:

  • Normal
  1. 00:50:936 - to me it felt weird how you didnt map any of the red ticks here when you did for 00:46:970 (1,2,3,4,5) and then continued to do so after. It just seem to ruin the flow in rhythm I do not want to make the very hard pace
  2. 01:26:970 (1) - add clap? theres a sound at the end of the spinner so it think a hitsound is needed Yup
  3. 01:51:453 (1) - NC pattern is irregular, is it intended? You started NCing every measure for the first 3 measures and then did it for every 2. This NC is because of the spinner, it can not be taken
osu file format v14

[General]
AudioFilename: Rameses B - Neon Rainbow (feat. Anna Yvette).mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 43867
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 1
EpilepsyWarning: 1
WidescreenStoryboard: 1

[Editor]
Bookmarks: 86970,132487
DistanceSpacing: 1
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 1

[Metadata]
Title:Neon Rainbow (feat. Anna Yvette)
TitleUnicode:Neon Rainbow (feat. Anna Yvette)
Artist:Rameses B
ArtistUnicode:Rameses B
Creator:Aia
Version:Marianna's Normal
Source:
Tags:cut version milan- marianna come[back]home
BeatmapID:962398
BeatmapSetID:446332

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:5
CircleSize:3.5
OverallDifficulty:4
ApproachRate:5
SliderMultiplier:1
SliderTickRate:1

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Sotarks
:? hi

[insane]

okay so on this diff seems like theres a lot of weird and random overlaps and underdone stacks, I don't know if it was made on purpose, but when I'm watching it feels really random, even tho this diff plays pretty cool. I'll notice here the main problem of what i call "random".

00:39:557 (4) - that overlap doesn't look so good
00:44:730 (3,4,5) - stack those on 00:44:040 (4) - 's tail, could be cool
00:45:247 (7) - stack this on 00:44:212 (1) - 's tail
00:51:626 (3,4,5) - stack those on 00:50:592 (6) -
00:53:695 (1) - moove this one here x:317 and y:146 and stack those 00:54:385 (3,4,5) - on the slider end, and if you do that change the spacing of this 00:54:730 (6) - could be cool for a beter structure.
00:56:109 (6,1) - can you try smth like this ?

01:00:247 (6) - moove it on the right a little bit more so it doesn't overlap the slider
01:04:557 (3) - this overlap doesn't look good tbh, maybe stack it on the head of the slider or moove it away
01:15:075 (2) - stack it on 01:13:868 (4) - 's end
01:41:970 (10) - not well stacked on 01:40:936 (2) -
02:04:039 (8) - same here

okay so as you can see all of those, and I can notice more, but idk I want to know if they are made on purpose or not. I really think this diff can be more polished.


[milan xd]
01:15:418 (4,5,6) - that overlap seems weird dude xd
01:20:246 (2) - that stack is really hard to play for this kind of diff

milan 2 pro for me, your diff is lov dud

[]

GL~
C00L
hey o/

[General]
  1. The Beautiful background that you have atm isnt in the recommended size of 1366x768 i think thats it :/ its only 925x694
  2. You could consider adding CBH to all of the diff's tags
  3. There is inconsistency in combo colours (check Milan's diff)
    1. - [Milan-'s Insane]
      Combo1 : 219,77,101
      Combo2 : 198,204,149
      Combo3 : 118,108,236
      Combo4 : 105,209,159

    2. All the other diffs :
      Combo1 : 255,85,170
      Combo2 : 113,255,113
      Combo3 : 255,255,102
      Combo4 : 108,255,255
  4. Milan's diff is missing Kiai Times, imo if all the diffs have it then why not keep it constant :P
  5. unused SB element files -
    sb\bg_h.jpg
    sb\c.jpg
    bg.jpg
    sb\5.jpg
  6. Unused image files
    sb\1.jpg
    sb\2.jpg
    sb\3.jpg
    sb\4.jpg
    sb\h.png


[Timing]
  1. Seems fine i would maybe change it to 22,140


[Hitsounds]
  1. In Easy you can continue with the nice hitsounds and the first slider, like you did here 00:22:142 (1) - with the whistle and the finisz, sounds really nice, just continue this for both start and slider end for: 00:24:901 (1) - 00:27:660 (1) - 00:30:418 (1) -
    then for the next part you can add the nice finisz whistle combo to these sliders 00:33:177 (1,1) - ,it sounds really nice imo
  2. In Normal it seems fine
  3. Hard seems fine as well
  4. Insane v1 is k
  5. insane v2 - see i came up with this after i came back, in the beginning you could try and follow that little behind beat with whistles, i made a seperate file for this you can download it and check it out, its just too much explaining so yeno i went the easy way and done it myself, to me it sounds great if you like it you could consider using that format in the beginning for all the beginnings in all diffs. For the hitsounds its from 00:22:142 - to 00:33:177 -



[Easy]
  1. 00:35:591 - why miss a note here btw? theres a nice sound here, i realise its an easy but this still should be shown since its pretty strong, imo it just feels kinfa unticlimatic missing such a strong sound
  2. 01:15:936 (5) - you could add a little curve to the slider to show that additional lyric that you emphasised with the red spots, just a little curve to show the last lyric as well would be nice. I know its not much but its always something :D


[Marianna's Normal]
  1. 00:56:625 (3) - except of this slider do something like this, with this you get the sound on the red ticks
  2. 01:03:522 (1) - end spinner at 01:06:280 - and add a note on the white tick, im pretty confused why you done it like that :/


[CBH]
  1. 00:37:315 (1) - except of this you could do something like this, gets both of the sounds in


[Milan-'s Insane]
  1. May i ask what the reasoning behind not adding any kiai times was? :P
  2. 01:06:108 (10) - you could ctrl+g this if you want could make it easier to hit since both of the hircirclies of the sliders will be facing each other at a straight line rather than at an angle


[Insane]
  1. 00:26:799 (4,5,6,7,8) - see for these kind of streams you could add an angle to this one like you did here 00:29:557 (2,3,4,5,6) - since if you do that you would have one straight stream 00:24:040 (2,3,4,5,6) - one curved 00:26:799 (4,5,6,7,8) - and so on, it would follow a nice pattern imo
  2. 00:40:419 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - speaking about those jumps earlier, they are great keep tchem
  3. 00:54:901 (1,1) - except of these why not try something like this, where the (8) slider nicely overwrites with the note behind and (7) so that the slider end overwrites the slider start of the new one, it just seems better imo than the 2 notes
  4. rest plays/feels great


i guess that's it from me nothing stands out as such all seems great :D

Good Luck with this set !!
Have a start* from me as well

a star* sorry lol
Battle


[General]
Unused files: SB\h.png Lyrics\font.txt
Check the following files to make sure their dimensions aren't over the max dimensions z :
SB\5.jpg (1333x869)
SB\flare4.png (1800x1000)
SB\flare2.png (1800x1000)
SB\flare1.png (1800x1000)
SB\c.jpg (1440x810)
SB\flare3.png (1800x1000)
SB\filter.png (912x914)
cuz according to modding assistant these are all too big
You can turn off letterbox during breaks, because there are no breaks, but either way it doesn't actually affect anything
Considering adding "dnb" "drum and bass" and "monstercat" to the tags

[SB]
00:41:453 - You should try to like, reduce the load around this area cuz it starts to lag sometimes when I'm going thru this section lol

[Easy]
00:22:142 (1,2,3) - lol this is like, real subjective, but you could curve 1 or sth so that way the flow starts out perfectly smooth n stuff
00:45:591 (3) - mm I kinda feel like making this a sharp slider really contrast w/ the sliders of this combo, since 1 and 4 are both non-red anchors
01:13:177 (1,2,3) - Making 1 and 3 symmetrical would really help with aesthetics, it currently looks awkward imo
01:15:936 (5) - Since you have a unique shape here, you mightt want to consider moving the red points a little toward the left, so the rising motion occurs w/ the beat on 01:16:280 - , although it kinda works this way as well since the motion slightly curves after the red points, more of a subjective thing really lol
01:15:936 (5,1) - btw, mind ctrl + j 5 maybe so there's more lead in to 1?

[Normal]
00:26:453 (4,5) - Is there any reason in particular why you stopped the motion here? Going along w/ that w/e electric sound had motion, so I don't see why you wouldn't include motion here as well (it's structured so w/e but maybe keep it in mind)
00:48:694 (5,1) - I kinda noticed that you put a 1/2 slider every time the vocal momentarily appeared, you could make it consistent by adding a note on the red tick in between these two, if you do this make sure you do it to 00:59:729 (4,1) - as well. It's a slight bit of variance I suppose, but all the other vocals are clickable / mapped so I don't see why this wouldn't be either
01:56:625 (2,3) - This blanket is p off
02:03:522 (4,1) - not as bad but could be better lo

[Hard]
00:22:487 (3,4) - I don't really get this because sure, there's like, light 1/4 on 00:23:005 (4) - , but the more noticeable 1/4 are on 00:22:918 - and 00:23:005 - so I don't really see why you chose the less prominent 1/4. probably gonna get denied since it's all structured n stuff, but I dunno, it just sounds awk
00:53:522 (3) - Maybe consider changing this into single taps, since the pitch of the electronic thing on the slider end is p high and strong, so having it clickable is always a good thing
01:04:556 (5) - I find this kinda awk since like, it's on the downbeat, it's pretty noticeable for a downbeat
01:05:246 (2,3) - Also like, I feel that 3 should get slightly more spacing, since 01:05:246 (2,3,4) - are all pretty strong notes
01:22:660 (4) - Maybe choose not to follow vocals here, while I do agree with mapping vocals over all else, the downbeat is pretty prominent compared to like 01:19:901 (4) - since addition to the dnb there's an additional sound added, making ignoring the downbeat all the more awk

[Milan]
00:26:453 (2,4,5,6) - mayb manual stack?
01:03:522 (1,3) - could always mak it parallel but it's irrelevant lo
01:39:039 (7) - not too sure about this 3/4 since something is pretty clear on the red tick

[Insane]
00:46:626 (7) - Mayb consider making all the 1/2 sliders in this sections on the vocals like this single taps, since all of the second section has the "ha" clicked (no 1/2 sliders) so ye (an alternative to this is making it structured for the second section)
01:11:454 (7,8,1) - I dunno, this feels awkward since the strong beat is on 7, yet it really feels like 8 is getting more emphasis due to spacing being high combined the sharp angle of 8, maybe tone it down a bit and accentuate 7 a bit more so it feels distinctive

solid
Milan-

Kisses wrote:

  • Milan
  1. 01:10:074 (1) - I dont think this SV change justifies he NC. To me its barely noticeable at all uhm lets keep it for the fancies lo
  2. 01:51:022 (5,6) - Can you decrease the DS at all just a bit? It's a lot bigger than your other 1/4 spacings it's just a little bigger i'd say o
    No kiai time? added

Well thats all from me. Really polished set with good flow and structure. GL!!!

Sotarks wrote:

:? hi
[milan xd]
01:15:418 (4,5,6) - that overlap seems weird dude xd ur weird dude xd
01:20:246 (2) - that stack is really hard to play for this kind of diff get good xd

milan 2 pro for me, your diff is lov dud

[]

GL~

C00L wrote:

[Milan-'s Insane]
  1. May i ask what the reasoning behind not adding any kiai times was? :Padded
  2. 01:06:108 (10) - you could ctrl+g this if you want could make it easier to hit since both of the hircirclies of the sliders will be facing each other at a straight line rather than at an angle that's harder to play owo, right now these follow the same circular line, which is easier

Battle wrote:

[Milan]
00:26:453 (2,4,5,6) - mayb manual stack? true
01:03:522 (1,3) - could always mak it parallel but it's irrelevant lo arent they already
01:39:039 (7) - not too sure about this 3/4 since something is pretty clear on the red tick no mapping that sound tho
solid
osu file format v14

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107,299,105418,2,0,B|120:247|120:247|95:154,1,136,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
35,105,105935,2,0,P|17:133|9:166,1,68,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
119,79,106280,6,0,L|254:83,2,136,2|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
35,105,107142,1,0,0:0:0:0:
35,105,107229,1,0,0:0:0:0:
35,105,107315,1,8,0:0:0:0:
97,166,107487,1,0,0:0:0:0:
185,172,107660,6,0,P|212:172|237:173,3,34,2|0|0|0,1:2|0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
301,93,108005,2,0,P|282:102|256:123,3,34,8|0|0|0,0:2|0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,246,108349,5,2,1:2:0:0:
272,241,108436,1,0,0:0:0:0:
286,232,108522,1,0,0:0:0:0:
296,218,108608,1,0,0:0:0:0:
301,201,108694,5,8,0:2:0:0:
314,228,108780,1,0,0:0:0:0:
337,247,108867,1,0,0:0:0:0:
366,255,108953,1,0,0:0:0:0:
396,250,109039,5,2,1:0:0:0:
376,120,109211,1,2,1:0:0:0:
223,168,109384,5,2,1:0:0:0:
243,38,109556,1,2,1:0:0:0:
223,168,109729,6,0,P|187:198|165:208,1,63.75,2|0,1:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
109,193,110074,6,0,P|134:194|159:200,1,50.9999984436036
243,258,110246,1,2,0:0:0:0:
93,300,110418,5,4,0:1:0:0:
221,356,110591,1,2,0:1:0:0:
221,356,110677,2,0,P|260:340|302:337,1,85
366,284,110936,1,2,0:1:0:0:
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302,337,111280,1,0,0:0:0:0:
272,185,111453,1,10,0:1:0:0:
262,177,111539,2,0,P|246:211|244:268,1,85
292,328,111798,5,2,0:1:0:0:
368,184,111970,2,0,L|409:175,1,42.5,2|0,0:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
488,157,112142,1,8,0:1:0:0:
375,95,112315,1,2,0:1:0:0:
375,95,112401,2,0,P|336:80|280:77,1,85
220,96,112660,1,0,0:0:0:0:
118,30,112832,1,10,0:1:0:0:
118,30,112918,2,0,L|142:133,1,85
132,187,113177,5,4,0:0:0:0:
266,163,113349,2,0,L|253:227,1,42.5,2|0,0:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
231,280,113522,1,8,0:0:0:0:
363,340,113694,1,2,0:1:0:0:
363,340,113780,2,0,P|317:344|259:361,1,85
199,357,114039,1,0,0:0:0:0:
333,253,114211,2,0,P|360:251|395:251,2,42.5,10|0|0,0:1|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
199,357,114556,5,2,0:1:0:0:
222,255,114729,1,2,0:1:0:0:
222,255,114815,2,0,P|226:195|209:151,1,85
166,107,115074,1,2,0:1:0:0:
152,102,115160,2,0,P|183:73|223:62,1,85
303,78,115418,2,0,P|308:101|323:131,1,42.5,2|0,0:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
387,158,115591,2,0,P|394:138|399:117,1,42.5,10|0,0:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
470,71,115763,2,0,P|478:90|482:111,1,42.5,2|0,0:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
470,196,115936,5,6,0:1:0:0:
373,162,116108,2,0,P|366:187|365:227,1,42.5,2|0,0:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
385,277,116280,1,8,0:0:0:0:
269,179,116453,1,2,0:1:0:0:
269,178,116539,2,0,P|262:218|271:262,1,85
317,328,116798,1,0,0:0:0:0:
193,298,116970,1,10,0:1:0:0:
193,298,117056,2,0,P|151:288|109:290,1,85
35,319,117315,5,2,0:1:0:0:
116,207,117487,1,2,0:1:0:0:
116,207,117574,2,0,P|138:157|137:114,1,85
59,147,117832,1,2,0:1:0:0:
59,147,117918,2,0,P|37:97|38:54,1,85
93,17,118177,1,0,0:0:0:0:
233,30,118349,2,0,L|212:34|191:38,2,42.5,10|0|0,0:1|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
93,17,118694,5,4,0:0:0:0:
139,127,118867,2,0,P|159:122|180:118,1,42.5,2|0,0:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
262,127,119039,1,8,0:0:0:0:
138,215,119211,1,2,0:1:0:0:
138,215,119298,2,0,P|138:252|157:313,1,85
216,344,119556,1,0,0:0:0:0:
369,250,119729,1,10,0:1:0:0:
369,250,119816,2,0,P|369:287|350:348,1,85
291,379,120074,5,2,0:1:0:0:
247,229,120246,2,0,P|253:247|258:273,1,42.5,2|0,0:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
216,344,120418,1,8,0:0:0:0:
138,215,120591,5,2,0:1:0:0:
138,215,120677,2,0,P|150:243|161:301,1,68,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
148,296,120936,2,0,P|124:291|98:292,1,34,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
40,320,121108,5,8,1:0:0:0:
45,328,121194,1,0,1:0:0:0:
50,336,121280,1,8,1:0:0:0:
56,343,121366,1,0,1:0:0:0:
63,353,121453,6,0,B|71:304|71:304|65:270|46:225,1,127.5,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
0,169,121798,1,8,0:0:0:0:
65,90,121970,2,0,B|117:91|117:91|148:79|148:79|200:82,1,127.5,2|0,0:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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321,184,122487,2,0,P|334:211|346:288,1,85,10|0,0:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
247,384,122832,5,2,0:1:0:0:
247,281,123005,2,0,P|239:262|218:237,1,42.5,2|0,0:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
184,328,123177,1,8,0:0:0:0:
315,333,123349,2,0,P|377:324|435:297,1,127.5,2|0,0:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
480,228,123694,2,0,P|476:200|465:176,1,42.5
392,128,123867,2,0,P|379:168|379:211,1,85,10|0,0:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
487,93,124211,5,4,0:0:0:0:
392,128,124384,1,2,0:1:0:0:
392,128,124470,2,0,P|360:123|288:122,1,85
243,78,124729,2,0,P|267:139|265:235,1,127.5,2|0,0:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
214,262,125074,2,0,P|194:258|156:257,1,42.5
253,339,125246,2,0,P|221:340|161:366,1,85,10|0,0:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
13,334,125591,5,2,0:1:0:0:
50,224,125763,2,0,P|60:246|66:283,1,42.5,2|0,0:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
13,334,125936,1,8,0:0:0:0:
152,259,126108,2,0,P|149:283|136:319,2,42.5,2|0|2,0:1|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
80,128,126453,1,2,0:0:0:0:
201,154,126625,2,0,P|181:162|160:164,1,42.5,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
80,128,126798,2,0,P|60:119|39:117,1,42.5,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
154,77,126970,5,0,0:0:0:0:
86,215,127142,1,0,0:0:0:0:
201,153,127315,1,8,0:0:0:0:
77,220,127487,5,0,0:0:0:0:
213,243,127660,1,0,0:0:0:0:
80,332,127832,1,0,0:0:0:0:
225,240,128005,6,0,P|240:270|252:333,1,85,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
83,315,128349,5,0,0:0:0:0:
87,298,128435,1,0,0:0:0:0:
91,282,128521,1,0,0:0:0:0:
95,265,128607,1,0,0:0:0:0:
99,249,128694,1,8,0:0:0:0:
103,232,128780,1,0,0:0:0:0:
107,216,128866,1,0,0:0:0:0:
111,199,128952,1,0,0:0:0:0:
115,183,129039,6,0,P|133:166|165:150,3,42.5
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308,128,129729,5,0,0:0:0:0:
308,128,131108,6,0,P|304:183|318:240,1,109.285714285714
329,249,131970,5,8,1:0:0:0:
235,289,132142,1,8,1:0:0:0:
234,277,132229,1,8,1:0:0:0:
232,265,132315,1,8,1:0:0:0:
321,343,132487,5,6,0:0:0:0:



also a little mod

as i've told you before tittle should be "Neon Rainbow (ft. Anna Yvette)" ;; pretty sure we should use artist's source instead of label (mostercat) sources.. https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=hDBwe0oOCPU https://soundcloud.com/ramesesb/rameses ... nna-yvette

insane
-00:43:694 (2) - deleting this note would fit a lot the long slider you have right before and the melody itself
-also i told you that on the last section (from 01:50:418 - ) you'll be missing some claps because my rhythms are different 01:50:763 - 01:54:901 (2) - 01:57:660 (2) - maybe there are others

hard
-00:55:074 (4,1) - i really expected this to have alittle jump or even removing (4) would be cool as a way of emphasizing
-01:14:556 (1,2) - you could lower the distance between these a bit, so it's less hard to catch as you just keep your cursor in the same place. same 01:15:246 (3,4) -
-01:22:832 - even the sb has a effect for this downbeat xd

normal
-higher hp than od is so unbalanced... you'll die more for the hp drain rather for than misstiming notes. also hp 4 would be good for spread i guess
Akitoshi
hi
just some cute mod unlike me irl



Easy
  1. 01:13:177 (1,3) - Symmetrical sliders looks more sexy than current one
  2. 01:55:936 (3) - idk lower down the slidertail to y:14 for somewhat they saying almost touching hpbar
  3. I prefer start the spinner on 02:09:729 - since there's still strong beat on 02:06:970 - but yup it's your choice anyway


Marianna's Normal
  1. HP = 4? Same as OD would be nice
  2. 01:13:177 (3,4,5) - idk you can use another variation from 01:10:418 (4) - aside from plain 1/1 beats here imo,
  3. 01:41:453 (4,5) - this is pretty surprising to the average-new player, you used to stack when it's 1/2 but you stacked 1/1 only here for the first time from the song was started. And next slider is 1/2 unlike on 01:51:453 (1,2) - so yea maybe don't stack here yet.


CBH's Hard
  1. 01:16:625 (3) - you don't want to split it to two kickreverse how 00:41:453 (1,2) - was?
  2. 02:01:453 (1) - this shouldn't be on bottom of 02:01:108 (5) - ? may misread 02:01:108 (5) - as triples.
  3. 02:09:039 (3) - NC since you put on 00:42:143 (1) -


omg milan
big fan
op af

Insane
  1. 00:40:763 (1,2,1,2) - scale down it for a little bit? Seems overdone since song isn't really getting stronger as is
  2. 01:15:075 (2) - stack on tail of 01:13:867 (4) - ?
  3. 01:16:971 (5) - NC for boosted stream distance?
  4. 01:25:936 (2,3,5) - maybe make them triangle would looks better for jumping
  5. 01:49:729 (5) - make it near with 01:49:556 (4) - since the song going to quiet, not to louder. You can still perform a blanket even you scaled down so whynot
  6. 02:11:108 (3) - NC for rainbows


good map with good song~
Take my star, hoping to see this ranked asap~
-Tochi

Battle wrote:

[General]
Unused files: SB\h.png Lyrics\font.txt
Check the following files to make sure their dimensions aren't over the max dimensions z :
SB\5.jpg (1333x869)
SB\flare4.png (1800x1000)
SB\flare2.png (1800x1000)
SB\flare1.png (1800x1000)
SB\c.jpg (1440x810)
SB\flare3.png (1800x1000)
SB\filter.png (912x914)
cuz according to modding assistant these are all too big
I'm pretty sure it doesn't affect the SB load so badly that it's over 5. I will keep it in mind tho.
[SB]
00:41:453 - You should try to like, reduce the load around this area cuz it starts to lag sometimes when I'm going thru this section lol It's under 5x SB load which is acceptable in the ranking criteria.
Come[Back]Home
Fixed all mentioned by Milan-

Cheesecake
Hi from #modreqs

[Storyboard]

  1. Battle said you should reduce at the section after 00:41:453 - and you said it's under 5x load, but uh if that's the case then what's this lol
  2. 00:55:246 - The EQ after this point doesn't have the colour loop like the previous section. Why? It's still kiai like the previous section and there's no difference in the song for these two


[Insane]

  1. 00:40:764 (1,2,1,2) - I'd rather you just kept the circular motion with the triangles, these sudden ladders feel kinda out of place since you just break the flow you've been building up with 00:38:695 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2) - like why don't you just carry on that motion it'll feel better to play
  2. 00:40:247 (2,1) - Give these the same hitsound since they're the same drum
  3. 00:42:144 (3) - Make this normal sampleset since you have for 00:42:315 (5,7,9) - as they're the same drum also
  4. 00:56:971 (2,6,7,8) - These would look a lot neater if you gave them the same overlap
  5. 01:04:557 (5,6) - There's a kick on the (5) but a hat on (6) so why do you give the (5) greater spacing (you do this a lot but this one in particular bothers me because the (6) is so weak)
  6. 01:15:075 (2) - You typically do bigger overlaps than this so either increase the overlap or stack it completely
  7. 01:31:108 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - I feel like there's not a whole lot of weight in the song right now to justify big jump spam, I think it would fit a lot better for bits like these if you just used sliders to represent the synth or whatever you call it, -Tochi has the right idea by using the bars to bring more attention to them (applies to all of the parts like these)
  8. 02:01:108 (1,2) - Two sliders really doesn't fit here, on (1) you have a strong beat on the head and a weaker beat on the tail so it's ok to use a kickslider here, but then on (2) both beats are identical and quite prominent so they both deserve to be clickable



I did look at all the other diffs but nothing stood out to me so uh lazy looking mod lol
Stjpa
[Storyboard]
Wouldn't it make sense to use a proper picture for the clouds at the end rather than using a normal picture and zoom in really far? Except it was your intention for it being pixelated.

[]
As the previous mod already said, the lower diffs aber definitely fine. I couldn't find anything there either.

[CBH's Hard]
00:46:970 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,1,2,3,4) - Ich muss ja schon sagen, dass du hier definitiv sehr kreativ mit dem Flow warst...das könnte schon fast Copy Paste sein. :D
00:54:556 (3) - Evtl. eher einen 1/2 Slider verwenden damit du den strong Sound dort highlightest? Hast du 00:49:039 (3,4,5) - 00:51:453 (3,4,5) - hier ja zum Beispiel auch gemacht mit 1/2 Patterns.
01:04:384 (4) - Find ich persönlich besser wenn er stacked mit dem Slider wäre da man für gewöhnlich 2 Circles benutzt um nen Drum Sound zu emphasizen, hast du wenn ich mich nicht irre auch schon vorher getan in der Map, was dann wohl auch für Verwirrung sorgen könnte hier. Und der Sound auf dem Circle ist sowieso mit dem Slider related. :p
01:06:108 (5) - Um den Part besser zu emphasizen könntest du eigtl den Flow breaken indem du den Circle weiter oben platzierst, musst dann nur ggf. (1) rotaten.
01:13:177 (1,2) - Warum verwendest du hier keine extended Slider aber im folgenden Measure? ;o
01:16:625 (3) - Vllt 2 Slider verwenden damit die Slider so lang sind wie 00:41:453 (1,2,1,2) - hier?
01:39:211 (6,1) - Quasi das gleiche wie oben.

[]
Milan's Insane is fine either, but it's questionable that the drain is higher than the other Insanes drain even though it has more complex patterns.

[Insane]
00:58:006 (1,3,4,5) - Almost touching, if you enable stacking in editor you will be able to see it. Useful option, I explained that to CBH too 2 days ago. :p
01:04:125 (3,4) - It's cooler if they don't overlap with the previous slider imo. The outro should have anything outstanding like you had 00:54:901 (1,1,1) - here as a transition between both kiais.
01:05:418 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - Would feel more natural if you would play a bit with the spacing here since the pitch in the music changes and you also did that later on.
01:52:143 (2) - Kinda boring since you always used kickslider afterwards that give way more emphasis.
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