General- - 320kbps啊, 換碼率順便裁一下開頭結尾?...沒map的地方有點長
- 把03:28:139 - 這一段的normal-sliderslide靜音
- Tags要嘛全小寫...要嘛全大寫嘛XD
- Tags加個 Nakamura Meiko. 或者像kiddly那樣直接寫在Title
- 刪approachcircle4.png, cursor.png, cursortail.png, star.png
- section-fail不加字嗎?
- sliderfollowcircle不是我的味, 顏色太重了, 而且幀數少, 轉起來不自然
- scorebar同理, 不喜歡顏色
- 仔細看hitcircleoverlay 其實位置不對...最好修一下? 或者直接刪了, 還可以免補默認approachcircle
*edit: 不看還真不知道circle小一圈了...這得刪啊, 人工把note弄小不人道XD
Ecchi- - AR-1? 現在有點快, 但維持現狀也沒什麼問題
00:39:521 (4) - 結尾沒clap麼@.@
01:50:815 (1) - 位置不太好 試試放在x:280 y:344 再把後面(2,3)移一下@@ 像
這樣01:59:286 (1,2) - 取其中一個然後copy吧
03:01:404 (1,3) - 小建議: (1)開頭取消whistle, 加在(3)開頭 或者也可以加在折返上
01:19:757 (T) - 改成S音效
01:22:492 (T) - 刪
02:38:815, 02:41:551 (T) - ^ (這邊要降15音量)
03:27:874 (T) - 刪
03:28:315 ~ 03:36:609 (T) - 刪
Normal不錯啊XD
banvi00:47:462 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - place like
this?
00:56:462 (2) - finish at the end of slider instead, remove it from the beginning
01:09:521 (6) - remove finish
01:17:462 (4) - remove finish at the beginning
01:18:698 (2,3,5) - remove finishs too
02:06:521 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - same with 00:47:462
02:15:520 (2) - same with 00:56:462 (2)
02:28:580 (3) - remove finish
02:36:521 (4) - same as 01:17:462 (4)
02:37:404 (1,2,3,4,5) - same with 01:18:698, too XD
02:40:227 (1,2,3,4,5) - place as a star shape? I tired to arrange for you, but I'm not good at it XD
link256,296,160227,5,0
208,148,160580,1,0
336,240,160933,1,0
176,240,161286,1,0
308,148,161639,1,4
03:31:757 - add a circle, use whistle and remove whistle from 03:32:109 (1) -
03:59:639 (2,3) - remove finish -w-
04:00:521 - add a circle too?
04:02:462 (2) - remove finish ;w;
Don't like those finishs. But if you want to keep it then ignore my sentence.
Otherwise pretty nice for a Hard. Good job XD
ㄨㄛˋˋˋ ㄘㄠˋ 00:27:521 (7,8) - 排成
這樣?
00:35:286 (3,4) - 貼這段東西替代在osu文件[Objects]下的35286跟35815
152,64,35286,2,0,B|88:128|152:216,1,140,0|8
200,144,35815,2,0,B|258:213|186:295,1,140,0|0
00:56:462 (5) - new combo
01:09:874 (1,2,3,4) - 比較一下
....(4)左+下移一格
01:15:521 (4,5,6,7,8) - 這裡違和的...把在1/4上的note刪了吧
01:20:992 - 這裡加個note比較好啊
01:24:345 - 補note上clap
01:25:668 (5) - 刪, 這三連太違和了
01:27:874 (5) - new combo?
01:33:168 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - 五連足夠
01:41:639 (2) - 縮短1/2拍, 結尾去clap
01:42:168 (1,2,3) - 這三連的停頓太神了, 接受不能, 01:42:521 - 補circle
01:46:227 (1) - 有個建議啊, 既然還是跟01:45:168 (1,2,3,4,5) - 一句歌詞不要開大間距加new combo XD
01:54:874 (5) - 用綠線mute這slidertick或把slidertick調成0.5
02:20:992 (7,1) - 間距有點大了, 把(7)下移兩格左右
02:23:992 (7,1) - 也是一下跳太多, 歌也沒有需要弄個跳的感覺
02:38:815 - 這一拍好多餘
02:40:227 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - 1/4音是一直延續到(8)的吧? 但你硬塞了個(7)在中間就好違和...怕1/4太多會爆分就換成1/4slider吧
02:55:051 (1) - 不帶你這樣偷懶啊, 1是你從02:52:933 - 這裡開始break, 2是你把那spinner map掉
03:02:462 (4) - 不比較了, 直接右+上移一格
03:28:227 (2) - 像這種...1是去掉finish, 2是把03:28:139 - 音量降低15~20左右。後面有相同的話也同樣做法
03:43:580 (4) - 刪
03:43:757 (4) - 去whistle
03:44:462 (5) - 只留開頭whistle
03:45:168 (7) - 去whistle, 加長1/2拍, 結尾加whistle
03:58:757 (3,4,5,6) - 錯了吧...全部後移1/2, 再在03:58:757 - 補circle。記得修音效
04:02:639 (9) - 縮短1/2, 04:02:992 - 補circle
SPOILER00:50:110 (3) - 不用finish
00:52:933 (3) - ^
01:08:992 (2) - 這裡整個下finish了...
01:19:227 (2) - 不用finish
01:23:992 (4) - ^
01:28:933 (7) - ^
01:29:639 (1) - ^
01:31:580 (2) - ^
01:32:815 (2) - ^
01:35:286 (3) - 你多喜歡finish啊Q_Q 這裡也刪吧
01:37:227 (6) - ^
01:46:933 (3) - 換成clap?
01:57:874 (2,3) - finish去掉
02:02:815 (3,5) - ;_;
02:31:757 (7,8) - ;_;
02:35:286 (11) - ;_;
02:37:051 (5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - ;_;
03:10:580 (4) - ;_;
03:56:462 (7) - ;_;
04:04:051 (2) - ;_;
進步不少, 很好
但看起來像一個排列接一個排列, 而各排列之間並沒有好好連串起來
例子: 03:47:815 (6,1) - 這裡中間間距就太大了
可能你會說..Insane嘛, 跳點好 之類的話
但整張圖你原本就不多跳了, 來這種突然的大間距其實沒什麼意思XD
另外就是finish有點累贅, 聽起來不舒服
當然你可以選擇無視, 畢竟你都下那麼多了~
整體來說很不錯 真的
只是我挑了點..