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SYNC.ART'S - Sword of Valiant

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Saten ruiko
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2011年1月29日 at 上午 09:56:55

Artist: SYNC.ART'S
Title: Sword of Valiant
Source: Touhou
Tags: gojou kai hinanawi tenshi scarlet weather rhapsody nakamura meiko banvi H-boy
BPM: 170
Filesize: 10966kb
Play Time: 04:06
Difficulties Available:
  1. banvi (4.8 stars, 512 notes)
  2. H-Normal (2.78 stars, 239 notes)
  3. Insane (5 stars, 633 notes)
Download: SYNC.ART'S - Sword of Valiant
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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skin by:sherrie__fay H-boy
map by:Saten ruiko banvi H-boy
littlecar3370
新坑開張(ノ゚ω゚)ノ☆
不錯玩
vivicat
:oops:
Menat
95度仰望兼膜拜~
miku
神触加油 0.0/
Snowy Dream
萌图啊=w=/
快点rank ;)
Koube Shio
必须路过=A=
April_old
star
NanaDesu
8-)
Cyril Scarlet
:D
Topic Starter
Saten ruiko
bakaru > < :D
TTTTTTTTTTTT
the .osb file is useless(mod三部曲。。第一部)
恩,不过好像现在也不需要注意这个了- -

第二部。。背景需要1024x768或800x600





circle size。。这样子缩小了一圈啊。。。
原来Shinxyn mod时说"I heard some blank skin images aren't allowed"
不过。。hitcircleoverlay不是空白。。至于这样缩小了一圈可不可以,你还是问问吧

map by:Saten ruiko banvi Sandpig
不加个tags?

Insane

00:58:845(2) - remove finish
00:59:992(1) - finish
00:59:904(8) - move 1 grid down and 1 grid left(lv4)
00:59:992(1) - move 1 grid down(lv4)
01:01:051(1) - remove NC?
01:02:815(3) - finish
01:11:286(1) - ^
02:17:639(1) - ^
02:19:051(1) - ^
02:30:345(1) - ^
03:56:462(7) - ^

01:51:698(6) - move 1 grid right(lv3)

star


Topic Starter
Saten ruiko

H-boy wrote:

the .osb file is useless(mod三部曲。。第一部)
恩,不过好像现在也不需要注意这个了- -

第二部。。背景需要1024x768或800x600

[attachment=2:77f9e]1.png[/attachment:77f9e]
[attachment=1:77f9e]2.png[/attachment:77f9e]
[attachment=0:77f9e]3.png[/attachment:77f9e]

circle size。。这样子缩小了一圈啊。。。
原来Shinxyn mod时说"I heard some blank skin images aren't allowed"
不过。。hitcircleoverlay不是空白。。至于这样缩小了一圈可不可以,你还是问问吧

map by:Saten ruiko banvi Sandpig
不加个tags?

Insane

00:58:845(2) - remove finish
00:59:992(1) - finish
00:59:904(8) - move 1 grid down and 1 grid left(lv4)
00:59:992(1) - move 1 grid down(lv4)
01:01:051(1) - remove NC?
01:02:815(3) - finish
01:11:286(1) - ^
02:17:639(1) - ^
02:19:051(1) - ^
02:30:345(1) - ^
03:56:462(7) - ^

01:51:698(6) - move 1 grid right(lv3)

star
等她們做完再加
Cike
噢~~新作!star!
Sandpig
Kotone
<3
banvi
done

[attachment=0:6522c]SYNC.ART'S - Sword of Valiant (Saten ruiko) [banvi].osu[/attachment:6522c]

SPOILER
I love this song , so I want to make hard diff better than normal , sorry ><
I will become rarely online for a while , so you can fix something by yourself. lol
AngelHoney
Insane

01:46:933 (3) - clap?
02:14:110 (2) - move right?
03:50:815 (1) - end at 03:51:874 ?

banvi

remove countdown?

H-Normal

a little hard ...but its fine~

=~=/
Lovely Crab
[general]
歌曲前面的空白部分好多,有心的话可以尝试截掉前面和后面的部分,这样下载的时候可以小很多
转圈时候的BG不错

[H-Normal]
01:45:874(2,4) - 单独的whistle感觉很吵,换Clap试下?(个人意见)
01:51:521(2,4) - ^
01:56:462(1,2) - slide的末尾处,同上
02:02:109(1,2) - ^
02:38:815 - add a break
03:53:992(1) - 把这个slide缩短成从03:54:345开始,在03:53:992处加circle
04:02:992 - 添加一个2分拍来回的SLIDE至04:03:345 把4删掉,这样和03:59:992(4,5)比较相称

[banvi]
没什么问题...就是感觉有点单调.

[Insane]
整个图没有break点?那样对耐力要求真的太高了,MAT BAT可能也会找你麻烦..尽可能还是设置一个吧
01:10:580(3,4) - 距离可以拉得再远点,太近打起来反而不是很爽..
01:41:639(2) - 节奏点是到01:41:815的,这个SLIDE长了半拍,可以缩短SLIDE长度或者索性换成2个circle
02:24:521(1) - 间距太大
03:45:168(7) - 拉长半拍
03:50:815(1) - 多了半拍
04:00:168(X) - add a note
04:02:639(9) - 缩短半拍,然后在04:02:992加1个NOTE

STAR
banvi

Lovely Crab wrote:

[banvi]
没什么问题...就是感觉有点单调.
because this is hard diff , so I won't add big jumps , technical jumps and steram... :P

*I used google translation
TTTTTTTTTTTT
Pokie
General
  • - 320kbps啊, 換碼率順便裁一下開頭結尾?...沒map的地方有點長
    - 把03:28:139 - 這一段的normal-sliderslide靜音
    - Tags要嘛全小寫...要嘛全大寫嘛XD
    - Tags加個 Nakamura Meiko. 或者像kiddly那樣直接寫在Title

    - 刪approachcircle4.png, cursor.png, cursortail.png, star.png
    - section-fail不加字嗎?
    - sliderfollowcircle不是我的味, 顏色太重了, 而且幀數少, 轉起來不自然
    - scorebar同理, 不喜歡顏色
    - 仔細看hitcircleoverlay 其實位置不對...最好修一下? 或者直接刪了, 還可以免補默認approachcircle
    *edit: 不看還真不知道circle小一圈了...這得刪啊, 人工把note弄小不人道XD


Ecchi
  • - AR-1? 現在有點快, 但維持現狀也沒什麼問題
00:39:521 (4) - 結尾沒clap麼@.@
01:50:815 (1) - 位置不太好 試試放在x:280 y:344 再把後面(2,3)移一下@@ 像這樣
01:59:286 (1,2) - 取其中一個然後copy吧
03:01:404 (1,3) - 小建議: (1)開頭取消whistle, 加在(3)開頭 或者也可以加在折返上

01:19:757 (T) - 改成S音效
01:22:492 (T) - 刪
02:38:815, 02:41:551 (T) - ^ (這邊要降15音量)
03:27:874 (T) - 刪
03:28:315 ~ 03:36:609 (T) - 刪


Normal不錯啊XD



banvi
  • - AR+1
00:47:462 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - place like this?
00:56:462 (2) - finish at the end of slider instead, remove it from the beginning
01:09:521 (6) - remove finish
01:17:462 (4) - remove finish at the beginning
01:18:698 (2,3,5) - remove finishs too
02:06:521 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - same with 00:47:462
02:15:520 (2) - same with 00:56:462 (2)
02:28:580 (3) - remove finish
02:36:521 (4) - same as 01:17:462 (4)
02:37:404 (1,2,3,4,5) - same with 01:18:698, too XD
02:40:227 (1,2,3,4,5) - place as a star shape? I tired to arrange for you, but I'm not good at it XD
link
256,296,160227,5,0
208,148,160580,1,0
336,240,160933,1,0
176,240,161286,1,0
308,148,161639,1,4
03:31:757 - add a circle, use whistle and remove whistle from 03:32:109 (1) -
03:59:639 (2,3) - remove finish -w-
04:00:521 - add a circle too?
04:02:462 (2) - remove finish ;w;


Don't like those finishs. But if you want to keep it then ignore my sentence.
Otherwise pretty nice for a Hard. Good job XD



ㄨㄛˋˋˋ ㄘㄠˋ
  • - OA+1
00:27:521 (7,8) - 排成這樣?
00:35:286 (3,4) - 貼這段東西替代在osu文件[Objects]下的35286跟35815
152,64,35286,2,0,B|88:128|152:216,1,140,0|8
200,144,35815,2,0,B|258:213|186:295,1,140,0|0
00:56:462 (5) - new combo
01:09:874 (1,2,3,4) - 比較一下 ....(4)左+下移一格
01:15:521 (4,5,6,7,8) - 這裡違和的...把在1/4上的note刪了吧
01:20:992 - 這裡加個note比較好啊
01:24:345 - 補note上clap
01:25:668 (5) - 刪, 這三連太違和了
01:27:874 (5) - new combo?
01:33:168 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - 五連足夠
01:41:639 (2) - 縮短1/2拍, 結尾去clap
01:42:168 (1,2,3) - 這三連的停頓太神了, 接受不能, 01:42:521 - 補circle
01:46:227 (1) - 有個建議啊, 既然還是跟01:45:168 (1,2,3,4,5) - 一句歌詞不要開大間距加new combo XD
01:54:874 (5) - 用綠線mute這slidertick或把slidertick調成0.5
02:20:992 (7,1) - 間距有點大了, 把(7)下移兩格左右
02:23:992 (7,1) - 也是一下跳太多, 歌也沒有需要弄個跳的感覺
02:38:815 - 這一拍好多餘
02:40:227 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - 1/4音是一直延續到(8)的吧? 但你硬塞了個(7)在中間就好違和...怕1/4太多會爆分就換成1/4slider吧
02:55:051 (1) - 不帶你這樣偷懶啊, 1是你從02:52:933 - 這裡開始break, 2是你把那spinner map掉
03:02:462 (4) - 不比較了, 直接右+上移一格
03:28:227 (2) - 像這種...1是去掉finish, 2是把03:28:139 - 音量降低15~20左右。後面有相同的話也同樣做法
03:43:580 (4) - 刪
03:43:757 (4) - 去whistle
03:44:462 (5) - 只留開頭whistle
03:45:168 (7) - 去whistle, 加長1/2拍, 結尾加whistle
03:58:757 (3,4,5,6) - 錯了吧...全部後移1/2, 再在03:58:757 - 補circle。記得修音效
04:02:639 (9) - 縮短1/2, 04:02:992 - 補circle
SPOILER
00:50:110 (3) - 不用finish
00:52:933 (3) - ^
01:08:992 (2) - 這裡整個下finish了...
01:19:227 (2) - 不用finish
01:23:992 (4) - ^
01:28:933 (7) - ^
01:29:639 (1) - ^
01:31:580 (2) - ^
01:32:815 (2) - ^
01:35:286 (3) - 你多喜歡finish啊Q_Q 這裡也刪吧
01:37:227 (6) - ^
01:46:933 (3) - 換成clap?
01:57:874 (2,3) - finish去掉
02:02:815 (3,5) - ;_;
02:31:757 (7,8) - ;_;
02:35:286 (11) - ;_;
02:37:051 (5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - ;_;
03:10:580 (4) - ;_;
03:56:462 (7) - ;_;
04:04:051 (2) - ;_;


進步不少, 很好
但看起來像一個排列接一個排列, 而各排列之間並沒有好好連串起來
例子: 03:47:815 (6,1) - 這裡中間間距就太大了
可能你會說..Insane嘛, 跳點好 之類的話
但整張圖你原本就不多跳了, 來這種突然的大間距其實沒什麼意思XD

另外就是finish有點累贅, 聽起來不舒服
當然你可以選擇無視, 畢竟你都下那麼多了~



整體來說很不錯 真的
只是我挑了點.. :cry:
NatsumeRin
我看了楼上以后觉得不管我怎么写都是在骗kud。
那么开始好了……

[General]
假定approachcircle4是approachcircle。。。其他见楼上
这hitcircleoverlay好神奇。

[H-Normal]
00:39:521 (4) - 尾clap问题同po
00:45:874 (4) - 全程finish
00:48:698 (1) - 这个和下个1感觉最好有某种形式上的重复
01:08:462 (1,2) - whistle? 2的头可以不要
01:14:110 (1) - whistle
02:13:404 (1) - 尾whistle
02:32:463 (3) - 尾clap漏了?
03:23:639 (3) - whistle
04:03:169 (4) - 换成从1/2拍前起的一个1/2折返slider(和前面的段落照应)

[banvi]
agree with Pokie, AR+1 plz~
00:59:286 (4) - change to soft hitsound?
01:08:815 (3,6) - claps still should be there.
01:29:992 (2,4) - clap
02:18:345 (4) - same as 00:59:286
02:28:051 (2,3,4,5) - maybe change a bit to let these notes curve more smoothly
03:03:168 (2,4) - clap
03:43:757 (5) - remove whistle at the beginning

[Insane]
non-stop 大丈夫?
00:37:404 (1) - finish
00:50:110 (3) - remove finish, 或者学banvi把这里换soft
00:51:703 (3)- ^
01:08:992 (2) - 这个尾巴的finish扔到3头上去
01:15:168 (3) - 没对称好
01:23:992 (4,1) - 有点空,加点啥
01:33:609 (8,9) - 奇妙的左偏了一格
02:07:404 (3,1) - 我想说这之间插个1/4不过这排列= =
03:02:815 (5) - 去掉尾那拍clap,和前面的空拍对应

骗完收工
LKs
其实看到楼上两位我才是骗kud的

approachcircle4
背景图改名叫BG

ECCHI-Normal

[00:33:168] 选中slider 左起第3个point 向下一格
[01:03:874] 这个结尾的Whistle小点声
[01:06:698] 同
[01:12:698] 不要Whistle
[01:47:992] 偷工减料 后面你还复制
[02:19:051] 同
复制的部分以上相同。。
[03:02:815] 全Whistle

banvi

这难度真的有问题吗..
ranked

Insane

[00:35:815] 这个slider有点纠结 选中 第二个point 向下一格
[00:48:345] 不Whistle
[02:18:698] 不clap


;)
banvi
almost fixed
updated plz~

[attachment=0:a93f7]SYNC.ART'S - Sword of Valiant (Saten ruiko) [banvi].osu[/attachment:a93f7]
TTTTTTTTTTTT
看了你们的mod....我想把我第一页的mod给edit掉了

mod的基本全部fixed

04:03:168(4) -- 这部分暂不做修改了。。

Download: SYNC.ART'S - Sword of Valiant (Saten ruiko) [H-Normal].osu
bakabaka
C觸不要我的難度 :(
傳上來留做紀念(音效沒完成
:)

Download: SYNC.ART'S - Sword of Valiant (Saten ruiko) [BK's Ins].osu
Topic Starter
Saten ruiko

bakabaka wrote:

C觸不要我的難度 :(
傳上來留做紀念(音效沒完成
:)
不是不要 APP我做不來˙ 要找3個BAT耶....
Selee
C触你太懒了(指

._. 等会mod好了..
Mystica
All suggestion.
[H-boy]
00:38:528 add clap?
01:19:823 breaktime?
01:13:823 add clap?
02:32:881 ^
02:38:881 breaktime?
03:45:234 1grid down?
[Banvi]
Fine
[Insane]
Fine

唔。看起来是修改过offset所以最好修正下各种绿线?当然不修正貌似没问题 但是看上至少不舒服
剩下做的很棒了 star
Mei_coN
好歌,star~ 8-)
ignorethis
哇天子好萌(大雾
offset -7ms?

<H-Normal>
AR+2
00:34:293 (4) - 对齐
00:48:764 (1) - 这个重新拉一个,不太好看
01:00:058 (1) - ^
01:02:881 (1) - ^
01:19:823 - break
01:42:411 - ^
02:21:940 (1) - 重新拉
02:30:411 (1) - ^,很明显歪了
04:06:234 (1) - finish

<Insane>
01:39:940 (3,4,5,6,7) - 这几个间距不一样。后面还有几处
ouranhshc
Insane
00:26:881 (5) - is this supposed to be symmetrical to (1), since (2,3,4) are symmetrical?
00:28:117 (8) - spacing?
00:43:293 (2) - make the spacing even between (1,3) by moving (2) 1 grid to the right?
01:04:999 (2) - spacing?
01:42:234 (1) - remove new combo?
01:56:528 (3) - new combo?
01:57:587 (1) - remove new combo so that the combo is the same as the combo here => 01:50:881 (1) -
02:28:117 (2,3,4) - make spacing even?
03:03:411 (6) - was the spacing here done on purpose?
04:01:646 (4,5,6) - make spacing even?

Banvi
03:15:146 (8) - is the slider end supposed to have the normal whistle?
03:24:411 (2,3,5,6) - you might what to manually place these because ingame, (2,5) stack to where they are kinda under the sliders

H-boy
01:23:705 (2,3) - try this instead

01:29:352 (2,3) - ^
01:42:234 (4,1,2) - line up with (4) of the previous combo?
02:41:705 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - although there is technically nothing wrong, it could be better organized.
03:15:587 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - put finishes on the beginning of these notes?
04:04:999 (2) - place this where (4) is of the previous combo
xierbaliti
太2了 改了offset不resnap

-Overall-
仔细观察的话会发现每个难度TAG是不一样的 统一一下吧._.

-H-boy-
resnap all notes please D:
01:00:058 (1) - 结束在白线上啊 D:

-banvi-
resnap all notes D:
02:28:992 (5) - 1 grid right

其他挺好 就是太2了 :D
TTTTTTTTTTTT
Topic Starter
Saten ruiko

xierbaliti wrote:

太2了 改了offset不resnap

-Overall-
仔细观察的话会发现每个难度TAG是不一样的 统一一下吧._.

-H-boy-
resnap all notes please D:
01:00:058 (1) - 结束在白线上啊 D:

-banvi-
resnap all notes D:
02:28:992 (5) - 1 grid right

其他挺好 就是太2了 :D
done~
xierbaliti
卧槽你连kd都不给我

bubbled!
Mafiamaster
You need an approachcircle.png in the folder.

That's about it.
Topic Starter
Saten ruiko
done~
Mafiamaster
Ranked.
ouranhshc
YAY
banvi
o.o/
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