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sana - Kotonoha Clinic [OsuMania]

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This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Sunday, May 8, 2016 at 6:00:12 PM

Artist: sana
Title: Kotonoha Clinic
Tags: kotonoha kurinikku vocaloid hatsune miku mezame-p meisa 7@ mztm
BPM: 151
Filesize: 2886kb
Play Time: 01:28
Difficulties Available:
  1. Hard - 4Key (2.37 stars, 548 notes)
  2. Insane - 4Key (3.23 stars, 700 notes)
  3. Normal - 4Key (1.75 stars, 370 notes)
Download: sana - Kotonoha Clinic
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pero pero





CommandoBlack
Looking at Insane.

00:27:274 is missing a note.
00:49:774 should be deleted.
01:01:844 should be moved up an eighth note to 01:01:893
01:14:907 is missing a note.
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CommandoBlack wrote:

Looking at Insane.

00:27:274 is missing a note. - nice catch
00:49:774 should be deleted. - deleted the note
01:01:844 should be moved up an eighth note to 01:01:893 - nice catch again
01:14:907 is missing a note. - thank you :oops:
Thanks a bunch for the mod! I missed a lot of notes :|
Adiopulse
Adiopulse's Random Mod

col= 1-2-3-4

Normal-Insane
Normal
You got the map timmed thats for sure, but i dont know what instrument you are mapping excatlly, you switch from vocals to drums vary randomly, i would try to focus a bit more into figuring that out, then your map will be awesome

Hard
Do what you did in this diff and use it in Normal
Add
ln in any col 00:47:241 -
^ 00:47:638 -
^ 00:48:036 -
ln in col 4 00:55:188 -

Insane
Remove
01:01:844 (61844|0,61893|1,61943|2) - not a roll here
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Adiopulse wrote:

Adiopulse's Random Mod

col= 1-2-3-4

Normal
You got the map timmed thats for sure, but i dont know what instrument you are mapping excatlly, you switch from vocals to drums vary randomly, i would try to focus a bit more into figuring that out, then your map will be awesome - i think some parts are okay, but i changed it around some (expecially within the kiai time)

Hard
Do what you did in this diff and use it in Normal
Add
ln in any col 00:47:241 - no thank you
^ 00:47:638 - ^^^
^ 00:48:036 - ^^^
ln in col 4 00:55:188 - for future modders, it is intentional that there is not any 3 note finishes in this hard difficulty

Insane
Remove01:01:844 (61844|0,61893|1,61943|2) - not a roll here - It is not a roll, but the kick is on an 8th note and it would be awkward to hit if it were a solitary note, so i made it a roll

Thank you for the mod!!
Sies

Mod request from where.

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Metadata
Artist: 鎖那
Romanised Artist: sana
Title: 言の葉クリニック
Romanised Title: Kotonoha Clinic
Source: -
Tags: kotonoha kurinikku vocaloid hatsune miku mezame-p meisa 7@ mztm
Insane
00:22:804 - and 00:23:003 - add note here. It's because this' insane. You can see the reference from 00:23:400 (23400|3,23400|0,23599|1,23599|2,23797|1,23797|3) - or maybe 00:21:811 (21811|2,21811|0,22009|1,22009|3,22208|1,22208|0) - .Also, if you compare with Hard diff, the patterns are similar.
00:24:393 - add note too here. Same reason as I explained above.
00:26:181 (26181|1,26380|3) - ctrl G to avoid stacking at col 2.
00:27:274 - add note here. For reference, the pattern had same sound like 00:24:989 (24989|2,24989|3,25685|2,25685|3,25784|0,25784|1) - etc.
00:33:632 - missing note here. Add 1 note. Also the reason same as i explained above.
00:33:930 - add note^
00:44:658 (44658|3) - delete
00:46:248 (46248|0) - ^
00:51:214 - add note at 4, same sound like 00:50:420 (50420|2,50420|3,50420|0,50817|1,50817|2,50817|0) -
01:01:844 (61844|0) - delete. It's ghost note. Then add 01:01:893 - at 1, and move 01:01:943 (61943|2) - to 4 for balance.
01:23:003 - add note.
Hard
00:41:678 (41678|1,42075|0) - ctrl G then move 00:42:274 (42274|1) - to 1 for balance
00:44:460 (44460|3,44857|3,45254|3,45652|3,46049|3,46446|3,46844|3,47241|3,47638|3) - your notes are stacking on 4th col. I suggest 00:45:850 (45850|1,46049|0) - ctrl G then 00:46:049 (46049|3) - move to 3. If you applied this, 00:46:248 (46248|1,46347|0) - ctrl G
00:47:638 (47638|1,47837|2) - move 1x to left, then 00:48:036 (48036|1) - move to 3
00:54:989 (54989|0,55089|1) - ctrl G. I love stairs :3 better and playable.
for this 00:56:181 (56181|3,56181|2,56380|0,56380|1) - i think that's not suitable with the pitch. I suggest http://puu.sh/oKvWt/699d13f8fa.jpg
00:56:777 (56777|2) - move to 4, 00:56:976 (56976|3,57075|2) - ctrl G. More balance and enjoy when you playing this.
Just suggestion, move 00:58:168 (58168|3,58367|1,58367|2) - 1x to left. Because I think this 00:58:168 (58168|3,58367|1,58367|2,58565|3,58764|0,58764|2) - isn't balance because this 00:58:168 (58168|3,58367|2,58565|3,58764|2) - 4 on right and 2 on left.
I hope this isn't my mistake but i see too many note like this 00:59:161 (59161|0,59161|3,59360|2,59360|1,59559|0,59559|3) - . Try to search another pattern for example at here 00:59:161 - http://puu.sh/oKwiQ/a0d1d68748.jpg
01:02:340 (62340|1) - move to 01:02:241 - but still at 2
for balance and avoid this 01:06:314 (66314|3,66711|3,67109|3,67506|3,67903|3,68301|3,68698|3,69095|3,69493|3,69890|3) - , try this http://puu.sh/oKwur/745bcdb46d.jpg at 01:06:910 - and this http://puu.sh/oKwFv/8c10643d96.png at 01:09:095 -
01:15:254 (75254|1,75453|2) - ctrl G
01:17:440 (77440|0,77638|3) - ^
01:18:234 (78234|3,78334|2) - ^
01:21:016 (81016|0,81214|2) - ^
01:21:413 (81413|0) - move to 3
01:21:810 (81810|2,82009|1,82208|2) - ctrl H
01:26:579 (86579|2,86976|1) - ctrl G, it's because 01:26:181 (86181|3,86181|2,86579|2) - is too hard to play, you can put this pattern on insane
01:27:175 (87175|2,87572|1,87771|2) - ctrl H for balance
Normal
Move 00:27:373 (27373|3,27572|1) - 1x to left for better pattern
00:32:340 (32340|1,32539|0) - ctrl G
00:33:731 (33731|2,34128|0) - ^ if you applied this, then 00:33:930 (33930|3,34128|2) - ctrl G too
Emm.. i think for normal only this but, try to reduce this diff. There's too many 1/4 snap on NM, like 01:17:638 (77638|2,77738|1,77837|0,78036|3,78135|2,78234|1,78334|2,78433|3) - or 00:56:181 (56181|3,56281|2,56380|1,56579|2,56678|1) - . You can use 1/4 but i suggest don't always use 1/4 because it will be looks like HD for me.
I love the song! I love sana>< emm.. for the mapset, overall is good. But some of pattern aren't on the right place. Fill free to reject my mod, also thanks for make sana's mania mapset:3
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hikikuman wrote:


Mod request from where.

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[Metadata]
Artist: 鎖那
Romanised Artist: sana
Title: 言の葉クリニック
Romanised Title: Kotonoha Clinic
Source: -
Tags: kotonoha kurinikku vocaloid hatsune miku mezame-p meisa 7@ mztm - Thank you for the tags!

[Insane]
00:22:804 - and 00:23:003 - add note here. It's because this' insane. You can see the reference from 00:23:400 (23400|3,23400|0,23599|1,23599|2,23797|1,23797|3) - or maybe 00:21:811 (21811|2,21811|0,22009|1,22009|3,22208|1,22208|0) - .Also, if you compare with Hard diff, the patterns are similar. - all applied
00:24:393 - add note too here. Same reason as I explained above. - ^
00:26:181 (26181|1,26380|3) - ctrl G to avoid stacking at col 2. - okay
00:27:274 - add note here. For reference, the pattern had same sound like 00:24:989 (24989|2,24989|3,25685|2,25685|3,25784|0,25784|1) - etc. - must have forgotten to place a note here, nice catch
00:33:632 - missing note here. Add 1 note. Also the reason same as i explained above. - i left this a single note on purpose cause i didnt want such a harsh stack on a 3.2* map (even if it is insane)
00:33:930 - add note^ - okay
00:44:658 (44658|3) - delete - even though its a kick sound, i agree!
00:46:248 (46248|0) - ^ - ^^^^
00:51:214 - add note at 4, same sound like 00:50:420 (50420|2,50420|3,50420|0,50817|1,50817|2,50817|0) - again, i understand that it's a crash sound and i should have 3 notes for consistancy, but i want to avoid such close stacks
01:01:844 (61844|0) - delete. It's ghost note. Then add 01:01:893 - at 1, and move 01:01:943 (61943|2) - to 4 for balance. - good idea, the ghost note was to avoid confusion but this idea is a lot better!
01:23:003 - add note. - no thank you

[Hard]
00:41:678 (41678|1,42075|0) - ctrl G then move 00:42:274 (42274|1) - to 1 for balance - okay
00:44:460 (44460|3,44857|3,45254|3,45652|3,46049|3,46446|3,46844|3,47241|3,47638|3) - your notes are stacking on 4th col. I suggest 00:45:850 (45850|1,46049|0) - ctrl G then 00:46:049 (46049|3) - move to 3. If you applied this, 00:46:248 (46248|1,46347|0) - ctrl G
00:47:638 (47638|1,47837|2) - move 1x to left, then 00:48:036 (48036|1) - move to 3 - rearranged 00:44:460 ~ 00:48:830 and fixed the stacking
00:54:989 (54989|0,55089|1) - ctrl G. I love stairs :3 better and playable. - x333 okay
for this 00:56:181 (56181|3,56181|2,56380|0,56380|1) - i think that's not suitable with the pitch. I suggest http://puu.sh/oKvWt/699d13f8fa.jpg - nice suggestion, fixed!
00:56:777 (56777|2) - move to 4, 00:56:976 (56976|3,57075|2) - ctrl G. More balance and enjoy when you playing this. - okay
Just suggestion, move 00:58:168 (58168|3,58367|1,58367|2) - 1x to left. Because I think this 00:58:168 (58168|3,58367|1,58367|2,58565|3,58764|0,58764|2) - isn't balance because this 00:58:168 (58168|3,58367|2,58565|3,58764|2) - 4 on right and 2 on left. - rearranged the sections you mentioned but in my own way
I hope this isn't my mistake but i see too many note like this 00:59:161 (59161|0,59161|3,59360|2,59360|1,59559|0,59559|3) - . Try to search another pattern for example at here 00:59:161 - http://puu.sh/oKwiQ/a0d1d68748.jpg - im noticing it a lot too, i think i wanted to keep it simple and just do slow jacks but i'll make them more fun and such :) thanks for noticing
01:02:340 (62340|1) - move to 01:02:241 - but still at 2 - was confused for a minute but i figured what you meant and did it x)
for balance and avoid this 01:06:314 (66314|3,66711|3,67109|3,67506|3,67903|3,68301|3,68698|3,69095|3,69493|3,69890|3) - , try this http://puu.sh/oKwur/745bcdb46d.jpg at 01:06:910 - and this http://puu.sh/oKwFv/8c10643d96.png at 01:09:095 - I went through my map at this point and rearranged all notes that were stacked like that and tried to fix them as best as i could
01:15:254 (75254|1,75453|2) - ctrl G - rearranged the notes in my own way, but thanks for pointing out these sections! :)
01:17:440 (77440|0,77638|3) - ^ - ^^^
01:18:234 (78234|3,78334|2) - ^ - ^^^
01:21:016 (81016|0,81214|2) - ^ - ^^^
01:21:413 (81413|0) - move to 3 - ^^^
01:21:810 (81810|2,82009|1,82208|2) - ctrl H - ^^^
01:26:579 (86579|2,86976|1) - ctrl G, it's because 01:26:181 (86181|3,86181|2,86579|2) - is too hard to play, you can put this pattern on insane - fixed
01:27:175 (87175|2,87572|1,87771|2) - ctrl H for balance - yuppers

[Normal]
Move 00:27:373 (27373|3,27572|1) - 1x to left for better pattern
00:32:340 (32340|1,32539|0) - ctrl G
00:33:731 (33731|2,34128|0) - ^ if you applied this, then 00:33:930 (33930|3,34128|2) - ctrl G too
Emm.. i think for normal only this but, try to reduce this diff. There's too many 1/4 snap on NM, like 01:17:638 (77638|2,77738|1,77837|0,78036|3,78135|2,78234|1,78334|2,78433|3) - or 00:56:181 (56181|3,56281|2,56380|1,56579|2,56678|1) - . You can use 1/4 but i suggest don't always use 1/4 because it will be looks like HD for me.

For the normal difficulty i took everything you said and im trying to reduce the amount of 1/4 notes in it while still making it fun and unique so thank you for the mod



I love the song! I love sana>< emm.. for the mapset, overall is good. But some of pattern aren't on the right place. Fill free to reject my mod, also thanks for make sana's mania mapset:3
Im glad you like it! and thank you very much for the mod! it was very helpful :)
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