00:41:678 (41678|1,42075|0) - ctrl G then move 00:42:274 (42274|1) - to 1 for balance
00:44:460 (44460|3,44857|3,45254|3,45652|3,46049|3,46446|3,46844|3,47241|3,47638|3) - your notes are stacking on 4th col. I suggest 00:45:850 (45850|1,46049|0) - ctrl G then 00:46:049 (46049|3) - move to 3. If you applied this, 00:46:248 (46248|1,46347|0) - ctrl G
00:47:638 (47638|1,47837|2) - move 1x to left, then 00:48:036 (48036|1) - move to 3
00:54:989 (54989|0,55089|1) - ctrl G.
I love stairs :3 better and playable.
for this 00:56:181 (56181|3,56181|2,56380|0,56380|1) - i think that's not suitable with the pitch. I suggest
http://puu.sh/oKvWt/699d13f8fa.jpg00:56:777 (56777|2) - move to 4, 00:56:976 (56976|3,57075|2) - ctrl G. More balance and enjoy when you playing this.
Just suggestion, move 00:58:168 (58168|3,58367|1,58367|2) - 1x to left. Because I think this 00:58:168 (58168|3,58367|1,58367|2,58565|3,58764|0,58764|2) - isn't balance because this 00:58:168 (58168|3,58367|2,58565|3,58764|2) - 4 on right and 2 on left.
I hope this isn't my mistake but i see too many note like this 00:59:161 (59161|0,59161|3,59360|2,59360|1,59559|0,59559|3) - . Try to search another pattern for example at here 00:59:161 -
http://puu.sh/oKwiQ/a0d1d68748.jpg01:02:340 (62340|1) - move to 01:02:241 - but still at 2
for balance and avoid this 01:06:314 (66314|3,66711|3,67109|3,67506|3,67903|3,68301|3,68698|3,69095|3,69493|3,69890|3) - , try this
http://puu.sh/oKwur/745bcdb46d.jpg at 01:06:910 - and this
http://puu.sh/oKwFv/8c10643d96.png at 01:09:095 -
01:15:254 (75254|1,75453|2) - ctrl G
01:17:440 (77440|0,77638|3) - ^
01:18:234 (78234|3,78334|2) - ^
01:21:016 (81016|0,81214|2) - ^
01:21:413 (81413|0) - move to 3
01:21:810 (81810|2,82009|1,82208|2) - ctrl H
01:26:579 (86579|2,86976|1) - ctrl G, it's because 01:26:181 (86181|3,86181|2,86579|2) - is too hard to play, you can put this pattern on insane
01:27:175 (87175|2,87572|1,87771|2) - ctrl H for balance