1. Cancel's Nard (1.68 stars, 93 notes)
2. Easy (1.37 stars, 101 notes)
3. Hard (2.68 stars, 160 notes)

• At the end should gradually reduce the sound. So it will be better heard.

• In principle, everything is good, but it seems to me, it is not necessary to start the sliders with red tick. Start them with white, it would be better.

• Check Ctrl+Shift+A (distance snap)
  I think you need a little boost CS. It's Normal, all the same.

1. 00:30:895 (6) - x340 y40
2. 01:12:462 (6) - x328 y100 (for the best zig-zag)
3. 01:13:028 (1) - If ^ was applied, that x316 y196

• Check Ctrl+Shift+A
  Why 1/16 and circle are so strange? Put them on a white tick.

1. 00:20:671 (1,2) - This contact does not look nice. IMO.

Minifrij wrote:

I really enjoy this song, so may as well try to give some suggestions on how I would make it better. This is my first time, so feel free to disregard anything I say if you see it as wrong.

[Hard]
00:34:857 - Maybe this spinner should be one tick shorter, then add a slider at the start of the vocal line ( 00:36:272 ). Looking like this:

IMO while it sounds decent in the editor as is, the rhythm heard whilst playing the song sounds strange to me.
01:13:028 - This spinner seems a bit out of place to me, I think mapping the vocal line similar to after it be better.
01:29:443 - I don't really think this spinner is needed, since the song has essentially stopped at this point. I found that it was slightly better if you replaced the last note with it.

I also wish that you had mapped the entire song, but that's just a personal thing. I can understand why you wouldn't.

pishifat wrote:

rip $toryboard fla$he$

thi$ $ong i$ probably $o boring to map cuz it i$ u$ing the mo$t ba$ic form of empha$i$ (bigger circle = more empha$i$) throughout the entire map
making e$$entially any offbeat $lider$ not work
on every diff
why

hit$ound$
the way you hit$ounded $tuff when there'$ percu$$ion i$ okayi$h
the fini$he$ you u$e in the piano-only part$ are $o much more inten$e than the actual $ong (not including the one$ with fla$he$)
replacing them with whi$tle$ or $ome more fitting $ample >
the incon$i$tency of your intro hit$ounding al$o hurt$

ea$y
relating to that paragraph thing above, $tuff like 00:02:027 (3) - 00:08:819 (5) - 01:07:934 (6) - are offbeat $lider$ that kinda dont work cuz the $ong i$ u$ing the mo$t ba$ic form of empha$i$ ever
tho$e are ju$t $lider$ ending on actual downbeat$ tho, one$ $tarting on beat 2 are al$o pretty gro$$. $ince mu$ictheorynon$en$e tell$ people
00:26:366 (7,1) - $pacingwhat
00:53:783 (5,1) - antijump i$ not a thing you $hould actually be doing on lowe$t diff lol. map i$ built off of 1/1 $paced object$, $o even a 2/1 $tack would be $ketch. proper $pacing be$t option
01:13:169 (1) - wont be relevant after you fix the timing but tail tho. al$o you may get wrecked about recovery time $ince you mapped thi$ a$ actual 106bpm and not double (where half the recovery time would make $en$e)
andprobably $ame on normal g

normal
ur difficulty settings are so inflated
00:12:215 (5,6) - pl$ i think you know what'$ wrong with thi$. $crub$ follow $liderbodie$ $o $lider$ leading into next object i$ e$$ential
00:37:934 (2,3) - 00:44:726 (5,6) - 00:46:990 (2,3) - con$idering $o much of thi$ u$e$ the $ame rhythm a$ ea$y, mapping out the only 1/2 that actually $tand$ out = $trong$pread

hard
00:00:329 (1,2) - $pacing tho. if you want low movement from 1 to 2, $tacking > introducing $pacing concept that never recurr$
00:33:160 (2,3,4) - if ur not gonna be u$ing $pacing variation to empha$ize anything here, con$i$tent $pacing $uperior
00:34:858 (1) - recoverytimetho 1beat
00:37:935 (3) - told byby in a mod earlier today how to make 1/2 $pam le$$ me$$y maybereadthatok
00:39:066 (1,2,3) -00:43:029 (5,6,1) - al$o $pacing with the$e what i$ the variation $uppo$ed to be indicating cuz it'$ not contemporary empha$i$i$i$ii$i
01:12:463 (4,1) - tbh $ame as the first thing
00:59:161 (2) - $till get triggered by un$upported offbeat $lider$:( 01:10:482 (6) - actually work$ pretty well i think tho

ky$

Cancel wrote:

what even

Cancel wrote:

WHAT EVEN

1. Check his soundcloud. It seems the song title is supposed to be KILL YOURSELF (Part III) rather than Kill Yourself (Part III)
2. Audio quality is not sufficient to me. Spectrogram clearly says the cut-off is pretty retarded and I don't believe that's the "original quality" of the song.
   
   Spectrogram

   
3. Tag "my" is a duplicate, I don't see reason for including it again.
4. ColorGrain.png and Grain.png files are not used in .osu nor .osb of the map.
5. White color is absolutely unreadable in some parts, it needs to be darker, probably some light grey would be fine.

1. 00:36:787 - You cannot have 2 timing points with different volumes on same timestamp. It can lead to an error.
2. I absolutely disagree with spread on this difficulty. Easy and Normal are relatively calm maps, but the difference to Hard is so huge. From almost regular spacing to all-jump map is just a no-go.
3. The difficulty is exceedingly overmapped. Sounds like these are in my opinion not a subject to be mapped: 00:01:178 - 00:03:442 - 00:05:706 - 00:09:102 - 00:11:366 - etc.
4. 00:13:913 (1,2,3,4) - 01:26:598 (1,2,3,4) - Is really overexaggerated pattern. I don't see any logic in jumps on the rhythm. There's almost no sound, so I don't think it should be mapped and especially not as a jump.
5. 00:29:479 (4) - If you already want to overmap the song, please, at least mute the slider ends and definitely don't make these places clickable, it makes no sense to me to make non-existant sound mapped and moreover mapped as a clickable.

1. The same overmap problem as Hard
2. Some patterns are unpolished or misleading, such as 00:03:159 (4,5) - 00:15:612 (4,5) - 00:19:008 (2,3) - 00:21:272 (5,6) - . Especially for normal and low diffs in overall, I would welcome to see more clear patterns and not that many overlaps.

1. There are way too many issues in this difficulty. First of them is the completely inconsistent spacing: 00:00:895 (2,3) - Seems like cool spacing, which probably can be used for easy, 00:02:027 (3,4,5) - Increases spacing (on easy!) and that doesn't even respond to how the music goes at all.
2. Then it calms again and goes to normal, but there we have a jump: 00:09:385 (1,2) - For what reason does Easy use jumps and why in this, very calm place? There's no single indication of increased intensity, so I don't see reason for a jump.
3. This difficulty in my opinion is completely out of Easy standards and many things should be fixed there, above issues repeat throughout the whole difficulty.

Don't spread drama please, issue is being consulted with accounts@ppy.sh and discussion about it doesn't belong in this thread. Thanks everyone for understanding

Wafu wrote:

1. Check his soundcloud. It seems the song title is supposed to be KILL YOURSELF (Part III) rather than Kill Yourself (Part III)

Bakari wrote:

1. Artist is Pierce The Veil (with the T capitalized) Source