good beatmap!

-Easy-
resnap all notes plz.

-Gatsu-
00:54:442 - an unused green line. remove it.
02:27:178 - you miss a red line here. don't forget to resnap all notes.


-Hard-
00:54:442 - 没用绿线
00:04:343 (2) - 既然不愿意动(3)的话把这个往右放一些怎么样? 我感觉是能好看一些
01:44:329 (2) - 不知道为什么听不到这个note的声音D:
02:27:188 - 这条绿线没什么用

fix this and call me back.

all fixed.

time to go!

改offset之后有几根绿线延后了 修正了一下

Download: Kozato snow - Rengetsu Ouka (_Kiva) [Yuki YukI].osu

Rank! Rank! GO GO GO
kiva加油了 0.0 胜利

Yumeko Yuki wrote:

改offset之后有几根绿线延后了 修正了一下

updated

ok

找111要个rank不错啊
正好star数111

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<snowy>
01:54:479 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,1,2,3,4) - 這一段normalhit真的是不太好聽,我認為改成外加音效好聽很多, 或是減少一些來回數?

<Hard>
02:00:690 (1) - 這一段太鼓音效都帶了normalhit的底音,聽起來不是很美,換成原本的外加音效好聽點??

不pop了 小小建議

老师的建议 一定要改 0v0

Download: Kozato snow - Rengetsu Ouka (_Kiva) [Snowy].osu

sounds good now
bubbled

Full-submitted.

MisakaMikoto wrote:

Ranked!

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~star

MisakaMikoto wrote:

Ranked!

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_Kiva wrote:

MisakaMikoto wrote:

Ranked!

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Congrats ~

卧槽老板都给star了

嗯

（　´∀｀） star

star :3...

老板是咋给星的啊～神图一定要star啊～

star

我看到这星没法吐槽了.
无语

star

-On the taiko difficulty the 107,441 timing section has a BPM of 144.90 while all of the other difficulties have a BPM of 144.91. Make sure all of the timing sections are the same. (The timing section after that also has a different BPM on taiko compared to the rest)
-You currently have 2 osb files in your folder, you might as well delete at least 1 of them
-I would expect a pause-overlay to go with the other skinned elements but ok
-The other ranked map has 'snow' capitalized but I think this one is correct..
-Try and keep letterboxing consistent on every difficulty

Haku's Easy:
-Don't have stack leniency set all the way to the left unless it is really needed
-OD isn't needed to be on the minimum setting, do at least +1
00:32:912 (3,2) - stack these to look neater?
00:41:193 (1,1,1) - I don't recommend changing the spacing at places like this as it can confuse beginners
00:54:436 (1,1,2,1,1,2,3,1,1,1) - ^
01:16:794 (1) - hitsound on the slider tick doesn't fit here
01:27:560 (3,4) - odd changing the combo pattern used before
03:06:517 (1,1) - not the best place for an anti jump, space them out more if possible

Gatsu:
-Those 2 breaks at the start are pretty long combined with only a few notes between them, either shorten them or remove 1 -- Same for every difficulty that does this
01:29:630 (2,3,1) - keep spacing equal
02:12:076 - kind of an odd place to stop the kiai time

Hard:
-Starting the kiai at 02:13:940 seems to fit more (same as the other difficulties)
-Start the last kiai at 03:06:931

Taiko Collab:
-Make sure kiai is snapped to the right ticks

Snowy:
-The first kiai fountain fits better starting at 02:00:690
-Start the second kiai at 02:13:940? (and I would end it at 02:27:178)

Yuki YukI:
-You don't really need the small break at the start
-Start kiai on the white tick at 03:06:931?
00:30:635 (6) - try to avoid hidden repeats (by the previous hitbursts)
00:40:779 (1) - ^
01:35:426 (5,1) - avoid anti jumps when possible

Call me back after fixes and I will rebubble

James2250 wrote:

Yuki YukI:
-You don't really need the small break at the start Fixed
-Start kiai on the white tick at 03:06:931? Fixed
00:30:635 (6) - try to avoid hidden repeats (by the previous hitbursts) Fixed
00:40:779 (1) - ^ Thank you for suggestion
01:35:426 (5,1) - avoid anti jumps when possible Fixed and it's reasonable now i think

Download: Kozato snow - Rengetsu Ouka (_Kiva) [Yuki YukI].osu

Haku's Easy:
-Don't have stack leniency set all the way to the left unless it is really needed it's needed as said before, i had unwanted stacking in playing
-OD isn't needed to be on the minimum setting, do at least +1 higher difficulty setting in general
00:32:912 (3,2) - stack these to look neater?
00:41:193 (1,1,1) - I don't recommend changing the spacing at places like this as it can confuse beginners AR+1 should correct in this case, plus antijump it's not that hard to read in this case
00:54:436 (1,1,2,1,1,2,3,1,1,1) - ^^
01:16:794 (1) - hitsound on the slider tick doesn't fit here
01:27:560 (3,4) - odd changing the combo pattern used before
03:06:517 (1,1) - not the best place for an anti jump, space them out more if possible changed a little the placement fro here, the AR + 1 took care of making it more readable

Download: Kozato snow - Rengetsu Ouka (_Kiva) [Haku's Easy].osu

All fixed and re-submitted.

the first break didn't fixed yet
i'm so sorry

Download: Kozato snow - Rengetsu Ouka (_Kiva) [Yuki YukI].osu

star

這星夠長

made some further sound changes in Gatsu diff.
Waiting for rebubble
OMG already 2 weeks O.o

看你的了0.0

yes +127!

taiko diff is streamyy

kiva别放弃啊0.0

Zetta-slow -.-