dkun wrote:

Hard
00:32:239 (11) - Align with 8, looks better.
00:33:176 (5) - Make this align with 1? Looks like you were going for a shape here.
00:41:047 (1,2,3) - 3 is off.
00:48:168 (8) - Align with 5.
02:18:311 (8,9,10) - What the hell? Align.
02:22:059 (6) - This slider looks a bit, eh.
02:24:308 (14) - Align with 12
02:59:352 (10) - Off from 9, re-align.
^ - Fix the rest according with snap.
03:25:589 (2,3,4,5) - Re-align.
03:28:213 (1,2,3,4) - You could go with making this a square. Just a suggestion.

Normal
00:32:426 (4) - Out of alignment with 1,2,3.
00:48 (4,5,6,7,8) - Re-align 8, maybe in a form like this? http://puu.sh/Sa0
02:01:444 (1-10) - I'm pretty sure 1-4/7-10 could be aligned better to look prettier. But this is just me. EX: http://puu.sh/Sa4
02:33:397 (4,5,6) - Re-align. http://puu.sh/Sa6
03:11:159 (3) - Align with 1.

I have no problems with the Easy/Taiko.

To end this overall, good job!
☆got all that done haha

Charles445 wrote:

Normal
A lot of the map is boxy, I.E. going straight left up right and down.
Add some more curves in their placement, right angles are ok in mdoeration.i'll fix those when i have more time
01:10:095 Make the 5 not touch the 4
01:41:766 (2,3,4) These are noticably not straight, and even if they were meant to be curvy it's inconsistent
03:08:535 The 11 should be under the 8, would look nice
03:37:209 This combo is confusing as poopfixed all those

Hard
00:32:239 Put that 11 under the 8's reverse point and reposition the 1done
00:59:225 4 touching 6 is ooglayfixed
01:00:537 Those 3 are under the slider, doesn't look that gooddone
01:42:891 A bit weirdonly a bit
01:47:388 Make this slider not touch the otherdone
03:07:036 The 1 shouldn't touch the 3fixed
03:19:218 That 5 would look nice in the middlekept that the way it was

IceBeam wrote:

Kay let's see.

Tags in Hard diff are completely different to others,moreover,you should add nicknames of guest mappers.Please,fix it.

[SG's Easy]
00:39:922 - Whistle fits really well here.
00:40:297 (1) - Finish?
00:55:290 (1) - ^
01:01:287 (1) - ^
01:07:284 (1) - ^
01:13:281 (1) - ^
01:19:278 (1) - ^
Oh well..you really should add more hitsounds,not just only finishes,but others too,it's ranking criteria.
01:58:258 (1,1,1,1) - It's combo spamming,please,fix.
02:34:427 (1) - Awesome,but..it's Easy,I'm not sure if it's rankable stuff..moreover,(2)-nd is just out of any rhytm.If you still want to keep this slider,continue it to 02:36:864,and (2)-nd must be placed at 02:37:239.
02:48:858 (1) - Remove NC?
03:48:828 - Nah,uggly,please silence it.leaving this to SG

[Normal]
00:38:423 (9,10) - Stack it properly?fixed
01:04:098 - Prolly it'd be hard for Normal diff,but I'd add a note,sounds much better.
01:17:966 - Add a note?decided against those
01:51:137 - Sounds bad,silence/use soft sampleset here?should be fixed
Hey,not bad,just the only thing that bugs me is flow.Anti-direction plays not that good,really.will work on the flow later lol

[Hard]
00:39:547 - Silence/use soft sampleset/finish hitsound.fixed
00:51:541 - Why not to add a note here?added
02:04:255 - Add finish/whistle?done
02:28:056 (1) - Oh,it's too close to previous object,please place it farther or at least stack with 02:27:306 (6).stacked
03:47:703 - Whistle?whistle it is

Quite solid for the first map.
Also,song is just awesome.
Good luck and have my star.

I_Tatsuo_I wrote:

Recheck.

[Easy]
02:34:427 (1) - You like messing with new players, don't you? Lol.

[Normal]
00:48:918 (8) - Align with 4,5.fixed
It's better, I'll give you that. But it's so linear. You need to add some patterns.
However this difficulty is ok the way it is.ty <3

[Hard]
00:51:916 - Personally I would extend this to 00:54:915. It sounds better that way.extended....hawt
Eh, it's okay.thanks?

Well... yeah okay. Star.

SapphireGhost wrote:

And kill kill kill the stupid .osb

RandomJibberish wrote:

Hi
General
Set tick rate 2 on all diffs I never really likes Slider tick 2

Hard
00:31:302 (1) - It's a bit awkward how this points over the rest of the combo. Point it towards the top right?did that
03:07:598 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - looks pretty clustered - something this might be better? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/57177
03:19:405 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - This also seems a bit like it's all in one place i like those two combos lol

Normal
This diff gets a bit square at times - try using some more interesting patterns?you are now the third person to say that and a MAT so i'll fix it XD
02:04:068 (1) - End 1/2 laterdone
02:22:996 (1,2,3,4) - This rhythm doesn't seem to be following much :/fixed
03:46:204 (1) - End 1/1 earlierdone

Saphireghost's Easy
You shouldn't be so scared of using red ticks in easy diffs - You're probably making it more confusing than it would be if you followed the vocals properly
01:10:282 (1) - random spinner out of nowhere much
02:31:242 (1) - Maybe end 1/2 earlier?i'll let SG take that one

Good map.

SapphireGhost wrote:

To add some flavor to this otherwise completely boring post, I made a star.png that lets me score songs out of ten.
By the way, anyone who is about to write

"omg this is gumi star"

Was just saved around half a minute by me.

<- you know this is epic

Larto wrote:

Overall:
Your preview times are all different. Most of them anyways. Fix that!fixed

This is the laziest video I've ever seen. You could just make a storyboard that is smaller in filesize, does the same, AND looks prettier. Get S i r i r u or someone like that.help me get in touch with someone please larto

MM's Taiko:
Add a lead-in.
You also have unsnapped notes!not too sure how to do these so i'll let MMzz take that

Easy:
03:46:391 (1) - That finish at the end sounds so dumb. SO DUMB D=removed the sound

Sakura Hana wrote:

[General]
Why is Hatsune Miku and Kagamine Len on the tags?

Sakura Hana wrote:

Source should be Vocaloid, it makes more sense to put the composer of the vocaloid in the tags instead.

Sakura Hana wrote:

[General]
The audio in the video is using up unnecessary space in the song folder, please remove the audio from the video.I got that done
Why is Hatsune Miku and Kagamine Len on the tags?
Source should be Vocaloid, it makes more sense to put the composer of the vocaloid in the tags instead.The tags and Source were told to me by someone who is knowledgeable in this (can't remember the name right now though >.<)

[MM's Taiko]
Audio lead-in should be 1,5 seconds.did that

Not bad actually, really nice map when fixed you could ask me for a recheck

blissfulyoshi wrote:

Also, the bg doesn't seem to be working correctly for this diff. Here is what appears on my screen: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/60686

Krisom wrote:

blissfulyoshi wrote:

Also, the bg doesn't seem to be working correctly for this diff. Here is what appears on my screen: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/60686

Afaik, if there's a storyboard, the BG moves all way up, so normal taiko templates won't work. Making another template might solve this
*goes back to lurking yoshi*

SapphireGhost wrote:

Okay so that part is fixed now and I'm happy and stuff <3
EDIT: Download again please thanks