GARNiDELiA - ambiguous (TV Size ver.) · forum

Shishou

Joined November 2014

Topic Starter

Shishou 2016-04-11T01:13:42+00:00

This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Friday, October 14, 2016 at 4:15:40 PM

Artist: GARNiDELiA
Title: ambiguous (TV Size ver.)
Source: キルラキル
Tags: kill la kill op 2 akitoshi matoi ryuko yamicchi MARiA, toku, 水橋舞, メイリア, 阿部尚徳,
BPM: 178
Filesize: 5094kb
Play Time: 01:28
Difficulties Available:

Akitoshi's Extra (5.4 stars, 334 notes)
Hard (3.12 stars, 245 notes)
Insane (4.42 stars, 348 notes)
Nitrous' Easy (1.53 stars, 83 notes)
Normal (1.9 stars, 133 notes)
Yami's Insane (4.83 stars, 363 notes)

Download: GARNiDELiA - ambiguous (TV Size ver.)
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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Ready for mod
dont click me,pls

IamKwan for teh metadata check

Metadata

Mapset
Easy - -Nitrous
Normal - Me
Hard - Me
Insane - Me
Yami's Insane - Shana Yami
Akitoshi's Extra - Akitoshi

Last edited by Shishou 2016-10-14T08:17:43+00:00, edited 238 times in total.

Dstorv

247 posts

Joined November 2013

Dstorv 2016-04-12T14:37:06+00:00

Hi from #modreqs

General

Disable Countdown, Widescreen Support
Check your AImod, you have some problem with "2 timing point in the same time"
This is just suggestion, but you would probably want to change those combo color

Easy

00:03:156 (4) - NC
00:12:594 (1,2) - blanket this or dont blanket at all
00:24:729 (3) - NC
00:30:459 (3) - NC
00:38:212 (5) - NC
00:43:437 (5) - NC
00:46:134 (2) - NC here instead of 00:44:785 (1) - (I'll stop it here, im sure by know you'll already get the idea of NCing)
00:50:179 (1) - Thats a really short spinner for Easy, I would probably slider art (I see you got skill using slider) this part since making the spinner longer would make the reaction time really short for Easy
01:08:549 (4,5) - This blanket could be a bit better

I dont have anything to comment on the pattern, it looks good for me

Normal

Again, look for any NC problem

00:04:336 (3) - cut this into 1/1 slider and move 00:05:179 (4) - to 00:05:010
00:10:740 (5) - Inconsistent DS
00:38:044 (8,1) - you stacked all of them before, why not this one too? (theres alot of stacking on this diff. It make me slightly uncomfrotable)

Hard

I would suggest to make OD : 7 -> 6 or 6.5 (huge jump of OD from normal to hard), HP 6 -> 5 or 5.5 (Also huge jump of HP drain)

00:01:471 (3) - remove this, make 00:00:965 (2) - 3/2 slider
00:01:639 (4) - remove reverse, 00:02:482 (5,6) - pull to 00:02:313
00:04:504 (3,4,5) - everything should have been pulled back by 1/2 beat
00:33:156 (5,6) - this stack is very misleading, because you use a lot of this stack before with 1/4 beat
00:51:021 (7,8) - whats this reverse serve to? please just make it circle
00:53:381 (6,7,8) - make the slider end, and circle + slider beginning in one straight line
Some of the reverse slider seems like overmapped (I've given an example above, also like 01:17:988 (1,2) - I dont get why there's 1/4 slider here)
I think you kinda overmapped this diff, you might want to remove some beat that feel overmapped for Hard (You already got light Insane, to even your spread)

Overall, thats my mod

Also, youre still accepting Extra GD?

Shishou

512 posts

Joined November 2014

Topic Starter

Shishou 2016-04-12T14:55:21+00:00

sullywally wrote:
Hi from #modreqs

General
Disable Countdown, Widescreen Support
Check your AImod, you have some problem with "2 timing point in the same time"
This is just suggestion, but you would probably want to change those combo color
Easy
00:03:156 (4) - NC
00:12:594 (1,2) - blanket this or dont blanket at all
00:24:729 (3) - NC
00:30:459 (3) - NC
00:38:212 (5) - NC
00:43:437 (5) - NC
00:46:134 (2) - NC here instead of 00:44:785 (1) - (I'll stop it here, im sure by know you'll already get the idea of NCing)
00:50:179 (1) - Thats a really short spinner for Easy, I would probably slider art (I see you got skill using slider) this part since making the spinner longer would make the reaction time really short for Easy
01:08:549 (4,5) - This blanket could be a bit better
I dont have anything to comment on the pattern, it looks good for me
Normal
Again, look for any NC problem
00:04:336 (3) - cut this into 1/1 slider and move 00:05:179 (4) - to 00:05:010
00:10:740 (5) - Inconsistent DS
00:38:044 (8,1) - you stacked all of them before, why not this one too? (theres alot of stacking on this diff. It make me slightly uncomfrotable)
Hard

I would suggest to make OD : 7 -> 6 or 6.5 (huge jump of OD from normal to hard), HP 6 -> 5 or 5.5 (Also huge jump of HP drain)
00:01:471 (3) - remove this, make 00:00:965 (2) - 3/2 slider
00:01:639 (4) - remove reverse, 00:02:482 (5,6) - pull to 00:02:313
00:04:504 (3,4,5) - everything should have been pulled back by 1/2 beat
00:33:156 (5,6) - this stack is very misleading, because you use a lot of this stack before with 1/4 beat
00:51:021 (7,8) - whats this reverse serve to? please just make it circle
00:53:381 (6,7,8) - make the slider end, and circle + slider beginning in one straight line
Some of the reverse slider seems like overmapped (I've given an example above, also like 01:17:988 (1,2) - I dont get why there's 1/4 slider here)
I think you kinda overmapped this diff, you might want to remove some beat that feel overmapped for Hard (You already got light Insane, to even your spread)
Overall, thats my mod
Also, youre still accepting Extra GD?

Sorry I already have found one

Seto Kousuke

osu! Alumni

610 posts

Joined June 2013

Seto Kousuke 2016-04-12T23:41:44+00:00

Hiya

[General]

Combo colours: Choose appropriate combo colours based on the bg of your map xD
Rythm: Try listening more to the music itself, there are several moments where you overmap and other moments where you undermap, also, IMO there are many problems with intensity pointed some below

[easy]

00:04:167 (2,3) - If I'm not wrong, you can't use overlaps on easiest difficulties, you have to make it on the simplest way you can
00:09:898 (3) - I highly suggest you redo this giant slider and put a clickable note at 00:11:246
00:13:606 (2,3) - overlap issue again
00:17:651 (2,3) - ^
00:50:179 (1) - I'm not an expert on easies, but I have a slight doubt that this spinner is too fast hmmm, keep an eye on it

[normal]

00:08:212 (1,2) - Since it's not the easiet diff, I think overlaps are ''okay'', but this is a 1/1 overlap, maybe increase their DS so it's a bit better to read?

[hard]

00:14:954 (5,6) - - It's pretty clear already that you love using this kind of stacks, to the point of over abuse xD the thing is that you always use it mostly on transitions too, and they need at least some emphasiz, my suggestion is that you leave the stacking thing ONLY for the 1/4 patterns(example: 00:16:302 (9,10,1) - ), moments like these you could use a normal DS since transitions have intensity....and stacking doesn't actually give intensity, for insanes+ it's okay, but on hards(and lower diffs) you need to make the play move around the playfield whenever possible, less stacks = better...other places for example : 00:23:381 (5,6,1) - and 00:31:471 (7,8,1) - ....anyway, you got the idea xD
00:16:302 (9,10,1) - this one looks a bit clutched, maybe rotate 10 and 1 a bit more clockwise so looks a bit cleaner?
00:43:437 (4) - why not stack it already? on hard(and lower diffs), more aesthetics = better xD you're not using any blankets at all (and I suppose it's intentional so I won't mention any....but tin case it's not intentional, you should fix them because moments like 00:46:134 (2,3) - they REALLY look like a blanket but it's crooked and not looking any good), so at least stack stuff like these for a better look won't actually hurt huh? another examples: 00:46:639 (3,5) - and 00:47:482 (5,7) - ...it's 99% stacked, it doesn't really look ''nice'', just looks like you forgot to do it xD
00:51:021 (7,1) - fix DS, it's way lower than the regular 1/2 (example 00:50:684 (6,7) - ) but it's a 1/1 AND a transition to the kiai
01:23:044 (2,4) - I know I mentioned already but....omg, pls, just stack it already ;w;

[Light Insane]

00:13:269 (3,4,5,6,7,1) - really bad overlap for a 4,00 stars diff, not intuitive nor fun at all >.<
00:26:078 (6,7,8,9) - at least NC them to make a bit easier to read
00:31:134 (5,6) - DS pls, easily mistake as 2 1/2 sliders
00:32:819 (1,2) - same as above
00:34:167 (8,9) - same
00:34:842 (1,2,3) - That triplet starting in the white tick doesn't really feel nice while playing neither rythmically >.<
01:07:201 (2,3,4,5,6) - kay, now it was a bit too far xD too much overmap for a 4,00 stars >.<
01:07:538 (6) - I highly suggest you make a clickable note on that big white tick
01:09:898 (6) - instead of that overmap i mentioned few points above, this slider could actually be a stream btw

I skipped the last insane

gl gl <3

Last edited by Seto Kousuke 2016-04-13T11:52:29+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

Shishou

512 posts

Joined November 2014

Topic Starter

Shishou 2016-04-13T02:12:39+00:00

Seto Kousuke wrote:
(placeholder for mod, I didn't forget xDD )

kek

Flowey

101 posts

Joined August 2012

Flowey 2016-04-13T03:52:09+00:00

Hi! I'm from #modreqs.

Here's a mod for insane.

Replay: http://puu.sh/ogjIP/f99236833f.osr
General Thoughts: Good song choice, and really nice map too! It was a bit on the easy side, but I'm looking forward to the extra GD.
Combo colors would be nice, and there are some shapes that can be adjusted.

00:00:965 (2,3,4,5,6) - Doesn't match the vocals well. Something like this works better (sliders start on red ticks):

00:01:808 (3,4,5) - Too much noise from these sliders (part of above combo).

00:04:842 (3) - A bit overmapped, at least for the slow intro part of the music.

00:08:549 - Possibly Kiai?

00:13:437 (5) - Move to (344, 88) for better shape:

Comparison

Current:

Suggested:

00:24:729 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - There might be too many hitsounds on these.

00:33:830 (9) - Possibly 2 circles instead.

00:34:167 (1,2) - The double hitsounds at 00:34:420 and 00:34:504 might be a mistake.

01:01:134 (1,2,3,4,5) - A straight line would look better.

01:06:190 (2) - Might as well stack this on the end of 01:06:358 (3).

01:07:201 (4,5,6,7,8) - The almost straight but slightly off arrangement of circles bothers me more than it should.

01:24:729 (8,9,10) - I personally prefer a jump that matches the melody.

Shishou

512 posts

Joined November 2014

Topic Starter

Shishou 2016-04-13T04:18:42+00:00

Nephroid wrote:
Hi! I'm from #modreqs.

Here's a mod for insane.

Replay: http://puu.sh/ogjIP/f99236833f.osr
General Thoughts: Good song choice, and really nice map too! It was a bit on the easy side, but I'm looking forward to the extra GD.
Combo colors would be nice, and there are some shapes that can be adjusted.

00:00:965 (2,3,4,5,6) - Doesn't match the vocals well. Something like this works better (sliders start on red ticks):

00:01:808 (3,4,5) - Too much noise from these sliders (part of above combo).

00:04:842 (3) - A bit overmapped, at least for the slow intro part of the music.

00:08:549 - Possibly Kiai?

00:13:437 (5) - Move to (344, 88) for better shape:
Comparison
Current: Suggested:

00:24:729 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - There might be too many hitsounds on these.

00:33:830 (9) - Possibly 2 circles instead.

00:34:167 (1,2) - The double hitsounds at 00:34:420 and 00:34:504 might be a mistake.

01:01:134 (1,2,3,4,5) - A straight line would look better.

01:06:190 (2) - Might as well stack this on the end of 01:06:358 (3).

01:07:201 (4,5,6,7,8) - The almost straight but slightly off arrangement of circles bothers me more than it should.

01:24:729 (8,9,10) - I personally prefer a jump that matches the melody.

UPDATED

Arusamour

424 posts

Joined April 2014

Arusamour 2016-04-14T01:02:17+00:00

Insane (4.41 stars, 362 notes)

00:01:808 (3,4,5) - no use of consistent spacing. Also these kick sliders don't follow the chorus. That's technically not a bad thing, but when that's the only pattern that doesn't follow the introduction, it transitions ~~weirdly~~ badly.
00:02:819 (6) - No need for the sliderend hitsound.
00:04:842 (3,4,5,6,7) - Look at that shape, you can't make anything cool out of it.
00:05:684 (6) - Huge space gap??? why here?
00:08:044 (1,2) - The emphasis on the 00:08:381 (1,2,3) is vastly decreased because those 2 notes were stacked.
00:11:246 (1) - Move slightly to the left:
SPOILER
00:11:752 (2,3,4,5,6) - Make it larger.
00:12:931 (2) - Straight line or what??
00:13:606 (7) - Normal streams fit better than reverse slider. Also, you should have put 00:13:943 (1) - right underneath the reverse slider like
SPOILER
but that means you will have to recreate the stream to fit the slider.
00:17:313 (2,3,4) - place further.

Shishou

512 posts

Joined November 2014

Topic Starter

Shishou 2016-04-14T06:51:09+00:00

thanks ^^^

Janpai

1,288 posts

Joined March 2015

Janpai 2016-04-18T06:07:59+00:00

#HUGOTIRC with bhoz abanes16

DU30 for President

2016-04-18 13:17 Janpai: heeeeyyy
2016-04-18 13:18 abanes16: heeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeyyyyyyyyy aki
2016-04-18 13:18 Janpai: lol
2016-04-18 13:19 abanes16: lol
2016-04-18 13:19 Janpai: let's have IRC tinatamad ako magforum mod xDDD
2016-04-18 13:20 abanes16: oke oke
2016-04-18 13:21 Janpai: seriously 100% volume xDDD
2016-04-18 13:21 abanes16: y not xD
2016-04-18 13:22 abanes16: rak n roll xD
2016-04-18 13:22 Janpai: eh but you should decrease like 70 lmao you gonna kill my ears
2016-04-18 13:22 abanes16: D:
2016-04-18 13:22 abanes16: oke oke xD
2016-04-18 13:24 Janpai: teka lang ah xDDD
2016-04-18 13:24 abanes16: geh geh hahahaha
2016-04-18 13:25 abanes16: nag crash ossu ko
2016-04-18 13:26 Janpai: rip i feel yah bru
2016-04-18 13:26 abanes16: nag crash rin?
2016-04-18 13:27 abanes16: sayo?
2016-04-18 13:27 Janpai: nope pero madalas magcrash xD
2016-04-18 13:27 abanes16: ay
2016-04-18 13:27 abanes16: hahaha
2016-04-18 13:30 Janpai: ok here we gooo
2016-04-18 13:30 abanes16: omg
2016-04-18 13:30 Janpai: infernes nagimprove na ung jumps mo HAHA
2016-04-18 13:30 abanes16: kyaaaaaaaaa >////>
2016-04-18 13:30 abanes16: ohh
2016-04-18 13:30 abanes16: arigatou
2016-04-18 13:31 Janpai: 00:08:044 (1,2) - 
2016-04-18 13:31 Janpai: increase spacing for grand introooo
2016-04-18 13:31 abanes16: wait
2016-04-18 13:31 Janpai: IPARAMDAM MO NA MAHALAGA KA char lang xDDD
2016-04-18 13:31 abanes16: anong diff yan?
2016-04-18 13:31 abanes16: ay insane
2016-04-18 13:31 Janpai: insane :v
2016-04-18 13:31 abanes16: HAHAHAHAHA
2016-04-18 13:32 abanes16: HUGOT PA MOAR
2016-04-18 13:32 Janpai: xDDD
2016-04-18 13:32 Janpai: 00:10:909 (6) - 
2016-04-18 13:32 Janpai: Move this far from 00:11:246 (1) - 
2016-04-18 13:33 Janpai: you know di mo kailangan tipirin ang space :v sayo lahat yan walang makakaagaw
2016-04-18 13:33 abanes16: hahahaha
2016-04-18 13:33 abanes16: wait
2016-04-18 13:33 Janpai: k na? xDDD
2016-04-18 13:34 abanes16: ok na
2016-04-18 13:34 Janpai: 00:13:268 (3,4,5,6) - stream pattern is weird, 
2016-04-18 13:34 Janpai: why not making it an arch?
2016-04-18 13:35 abanes16: oke oke
2016-04-18 13:35 Janpai: tsaka mas madaling i-read ang clean streams xD
2016-04-18 13:36 Janpai: 00:16:639 (8) - 
2016-04-18 13:36 Janpai: NC here 
2016-04-18 13:36 Janpai: not here 00:16:976 (1) - 
2016-04-18 13:36 abanes16: oke
2016-04-18 13:36 abanes16: tinanggal ko na
2016-04-18 13:37 Janpai: teka lang wag ka magmadali xDDD
2016-04-18 13:37 abanes16: di naman ako nag mamadali eh xD
2016-04-18 13:37 Janpai: ah ganun ba HAHA
2016-04-18 13:37 abanes16: oo hahaha
2016-04-18 13:38 Janpai: 00:20:010 (3,4,5,6) - doesn't make a lot of sense
2016-04-18 13:38 Janpai: maybe move 00:20:347 (5) - 
2016-04-18 13:38 abanes16: sorna
2016-04-18 13:38 Janpai: to x:211 y:241
2016-04-18 13:39 Janpai: and 00:20:516 (6) - to x:279 y:46
2016-04-18 13:40 Janpai: di mo naman kailangan I apply lahat ng sasabihin ko xDDD pwede ka namang mangatwiran IPAGLABAN MO
2016-04-18 13:40 abanes16: hahahahah
2016-04-18 13:40 Janpai: 00:21:358 (3,4,5,6) - same din kanina pero bahala kana kung pano mo sila aayusin
2016-04-18 13:41 Janpai: 00:22:370 (2) - move more in right, WAG MO IPAGSIKSIKAN haha char :3
2016-04-18 13:42 Janpai: 00:23:718 (2,3) - here din, bigyan mo sila ng malaking space
2016-04-18 13:42 abanes16: ok na
2016-04-18 13:42 Janpai: 00:27:931 (2,4) - stack?
2016-04-18 13:43 Janpai: 00:28:774 (6) - NC boyzxc
2016-04-18 13:43 Janpai: 00:30:122 (6) - ^
2016-04-18 13:43 Janpai: 00:31:471 (4) - ^
2016-04-18 13:44 Janpai: wao daming NC problems xDDD dapat sa first tick ka lagi nageNC or sa red tick (before big white tick)
2016-04-18 13:45 abanes16: sorna  :(
2016-04-18 13:46 Janpai: bat ka magsosorry :v di naman ako nangangain tutulungan lang naman kita eh xDDD
2016-04-18 13:47 abanes16: kasi nagiging pabigat na ako sayo
2016-04-18 13:47 abanes16: ayoko ng nahihirapan ka :(
2016-04-18 13:47 Janpai: 00:50:684 (6,7,8,9) - Increase spacing cuz for the upcoming chorus kailangan intense xD
2016-04-18 13:47 Janpai: ako lang huhugot wag ka HAHAHA
2016-04-18 13:47 abanes16: HAHAHAHHA
2016-04-18 13:48 Janpai: 01:06:190 (2,3) -  rofl
2016-04-18 13:48 abanes16: rofl
2016-04-18 13:48 Janpai: move 01:06:190 (2) -  on x:385 y:229
2016-04-18 13:48 Janpai: para medyo maganda tingnan ung pagkakaoverlap
2016-04-18 13:49 Janpai: 01:13:268 (3) - New combozxczxc
2016-04-18 13:50 Janpai: tsak nakalimutan ko kanina gawin mong HP 7
2016-04-18 13:50 Janpai: ACTION is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/949286 GARNiDELiA - ambiguous [Insane]]
2016-04-18 13:50 abanes16: ay
2016-04-18 13:50 Janpai: para medyo balanced
2016-04-18 13:50 abanes16: oke
2016-04-18 13:50 abanes16: woah
2016-04-18 13:50 abanes16: sasuga
2016-04-18 13:51 Janpai: ha? xDDDD
2016-04-18 13:51 abanes16: nandemonay baka >///<
2016-04-18 13:51 Janpai: pwede skip ko ung light insane, I'm noob at modding insanes y'know
2016-04-18 13:51 Janpai: :v
2016-04-18 13:52 abanes16: hindi ka noob >///<
2016-04-18 13:52 abanes16: oke oke
2016-04-18 13:52 Janpai: tsaka bakit ung lower diffs minap mo ung intro samantalang sa sa insane slider art lang?
2016-04-18 13:52 Janpai: nagsawa ka naba sa kanya ;^(
2016-04-18 13:53 Janpai: ACTION is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/949285 GARNiDELiA - ambiguous [Hard]]
2016-04-18 13:53 Janpai: 00:02:482 (5,6) - a 1/1 and a circle fits more for the vocals :3
2016-04-18 13:53 abanes16: hahahaha
2016-04-18 13:54 Janpai: 00:05:179 (5,6,7) - make spacing equal, lahat tayo pantay pantay char xD
2016-04-18 13:55 Janpai: 00:08:718 - why did u ignore the drum sound hereeee
2016-04-18 13:55 abanes16: vote binay plox
2016-04-18 13:55 Janpai: it must be 1/2 , DU30
2016-04-18 13:55 Janpai: 00:12:426 (6) - direction of the slider seems weird
2016-04-18 13:56 Janpai: parang relasyon nyo, WALANG PATUTUNGUHAN
2016-04-18 13:56 Janpai: xDDD
2016-04-18 13:56 abanes16: grabe
2016-04-18 13:56 abanes16: single po ako
2016-04-18 13:56 Janpai: HAHA
2016-04-18 13:57 Janpai: 00:30:122 (3) - Bagong buhay napo (NC)
2016-04-18 13:57 abanes16: pero hindi ako mag babago para sa kanya
2016-04-18 13:58 Janpai: okay bahala ka sa buhay mo HAHA
2016-04-18 13:58 abanes16: mananatili akong malakas para ma ipag laban ko siya
2016-04-18 13:58 Janpai: HAHAHAHA
2016-04-18 13:58 abanes16: LOL wag po xD
2016-04-18 13:58 Janpai: pag di ka tumigil ipapahuli kita kay cardo HAHA
2016-04-18 13:59 abanes16: hahahahaha
2016-04-18 13:59 Janpai: 01:06:358 (4) - ito din wala ng direkyon ang buhay xDDD ihahatid koto sa tuwid na daan ng LP eh
2016-04-18 14:00 Janpai: 01:05:684 (2,3,4) - equal spacingzxczxc
2016-04-18 14:02 Janpai: ok that's all for now sana naman ok na ung effort na ginawa ko sana nakuntento kana dun HAHAHA char :v Imma post this on threadzxczxc
2016-04-18 14:02 abanes16: thank you
2016-04-18 14:02 abanes16: malaking tulong to
2016-04-18 14:02 Janpai: HAHA
2016-04-18 14:02 abanes16: ima give you kds
2016-04-18 14:03 Janpai: ang kulang nalang siguro dito ung structure medyo magulo pa eh parang pilipinas HAHA
2016-04-18 14:03 abanes16: hahahaha
2016-04-18 14:03 abanes16: hinde
2016-04-18 14:03 abanes16: yung parang feeling nya sa akin
2016-04-18 14:03 abanes16: MAGULO
2016-04-18 14:04 Janpai: MANAHIMIK KA SABING AKO LANG ANG HUHUGOT HAHA
2016-04-18 14:04 Janpai: HAHA

Shishou

512 posts

Joined November 2014

Topic Starter

Shishou 2016-04-18T06:10:27+00:00

Janpai wrote:

#HUGOTIRC with bhoz abanes16

DU30 for President

2016-04-18 13:17 Janpai: heeeeyyy
2016-04-18 13:18 abanes16: heeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeyyyyyyyyy aki
2016-04-18 13:18 Janpai: lol
2016-04-18 13:19 abanes16: lol
2016-04-18 13:19 Janpai: let's have IRC tinatamad ako magforum mod xDDD
2016-04-18 13:20 abanes16: oke oke
2016-04-18 13:21 Janpai: seriously 100% volume xDDD
2016-04-18 13:21 abanes16: y not xD
2016-04-18 13:22 abanes16: rak n roll xD
2016-04-18 13:22 Janpai: eh but you should decrease like 70 lmao you gonna kill my ears
2016-04-18 13:22 abanes16: D:
2016-04-18 13:22 abanes16: oke oke xD
2016-04-18 13:24 Janpai: teka lang ah xDDD
2016-04-18 13:24 abanes16: geh geh hahahaha
2016-04-18 13:25 abanes16: nag crash ossu ko
2016-04-18 13:26 Janpai: rip i feel yah bru
2016-04-18 13:26 abanes16: nag crash rin?
2016-04-18 13:27 abanes16: sayo?
2016-04-18 13:27 Janpai: nope pero madalas magcrash xD
2016-04-18 13:27 abanes16: ay
2016-04-18 13:27 abanes16: hahaha
2016-04-18 13:30 Janpai: ok here we gooo
2016-04-18 13:30 abanes16: omg
2016-04-18 13:30 Janpai: infernes nagimprove na ung jumps mo HAHA
2016-04-18 13:30 abanes16: kyaaaaaaaaa >////>
2016-04-18 13:30 abanes16: ohh
2016-04-18 13:30 abanes16: arigatou
2016-04-18 13:31 Janpai: 00:08:044 (1,2) - 
2016-04-18 13:31 Janpai: increase spacing for grand introooo
2016-04-18 13:31 abanes16: wait
2016-04-18 13:31 Janpai: IPARAMDAM MO NA MAHALAGA KA char lang xDDD
2016-04-18 13:31 abanes16: anong diff yan?
2016-04-18 13:31 abanes16: ay insane
2016-04-18 13:31 Janpai: insane :v
2016-04-18 13:31 abanes16: HAHAHAHAHA
2016-04-18 13:32 abanes16: HUGOT PA MOAR
2016-04-18 13:32 Janpai: xDDD
2016-04-18 13:32 Janpai: 00:10:909 (6) - 
2016-04-18 13:32 Janpai: Move this far from 00:11:246 (1) - 
2016-04-18 13:33 Janpai: you know di mo kailangan tipirin ang space :v sayo lahat yan walang makakaagaw
2016-04-18 13:33 abanes16: hahahaha
2016-04-18 13:33 abanes16: wait
2016-04-18 13:33 Janpai: k na? xDDD
2016-04-18 13:34 abanes16: ok na
2016-04-18 13:34 Janpai: 00:13:268 (3,4,5,6) - stream pattern is weird, 
2016-04-18 13:34 Janpai: why not making it an arch?
2016-04-18 13:35 abanes16: oke oke
2016-04-18 13:35 Janpai: tsaka mas madaling i-read ang clean streams xD
2016-04-18 13:36 Janpai: 00:16:639 (8) - 
2016-04-18 13:36 Janpai: NC here 
2016-04-18 13:36 Janpai: not here 00:16:976 (1) - 
2016-04-18 13:36 abanes16: oke
2016-04-18 13:36 abanes16: tinanggal ko na
2016-04-18 13:37 Janpai: teka lang wag ka magmadali xDDD
2016-04-18 13:37 abanes16: di naman ako nag mamadali eh xD
2016-04-18 13:37 Janpai: ah ganun ba HAHA
2016-04-18 13:37 abanes16: oo hahaha
2016-04-18 13:38 Janpai: 00:20:010 (3,4,5,6) - doesn't make a lot of sense
2016-04-18 13:38 Janpai: maybe move 00:20:347 (5) - 
2016-04-18 13:38 abanes16: sorna
2016-04-18 13:38 Janpai: to x:211 y:241
2016-04-18 13:39 Janpai: and 00:20:516 (6) - to x:279 y:46
2016-04-18 13:40 Janpai: di mo naman kailangan I apply lahat ng sasabihin ko xDDD pwede ka namang mangatwiran IPAGLABAN MO
2016-04-18 13:40 abanes16: hahahahah
2016-04-18 13:40 Janpai: 00:21:358 (3,4,5,6) - same din kanina pero bahala kana kung pano mo sila aayusin
2016-04-18 13:41 Janpai: 00:22:370 (2) - move more in right, WAG MO IPAGSIKSIKAN haha char :3
2016-04-18 13:42 Janpai: 00:23:718 (2,3) - here din, bigyan mo sila ng malaking space
2016-04-18 13:42 abanes16: ok na
2016-04-18 13:42 Janpai: 00:27:931 (2,4) - stack?
2016-04-18 13:43 Janpai: 00:28:774 (6) - NC boyzxc
2016-04-18 13:43 Janpai: 00:30:122 (6) - ^
2016-04-18 13:43 Janpai: 00:31:471 (4) - ^
2016-04-18 13:44 Janpai: wao daming NC problems xDDD dapat sa first tick ka lagi nageNC or sa red tick (before big white tick)
2016-04-18 13:45 abanes16: sorna  :(
2016-04-18 13:46 Janpai: bat ka magsosorry :v di naman ako nangangain tutulungan lang naman kita eh xDDD
2016-04-18 13:47 abanes16: kasi nagiging pabigat na ako sayo
2016-04-18 13:47 abanes16: ayoko ng nahihirapan ka :(
2016-04-18 13:47 Janpai: 00:50:684 (6,7,8,9) - Increase spacing cuz for the upcoming chorus kailangan intense xD
2016-04-18 13:47 Janpai: ako lang huhugot wag ka HAHAHA
2016-04-18 13:47 abanes16: HAHAHAHHA
2016-04-18 13:48 Janpai: 01:06:190 (2,3) -  rofl
2016-04-18 13:48 abanes16: rofl
2016-04-18 13:48 Janpai: move 01:06:190 (2) -  on x:385 y:229
2016-04-18 13:48 Janpai: para medyo maganda tingnan ung pagkakaoverlap
2016-04-18 13:49 Janpai: 01:13:268 (3) - New combozxczxc
2016-04-18 13:50 Janpai: tsak nakalimutan ko kanina gawin mong HP 7
2016-04-18 13:50 Janpai: ACTION is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/949286 GARNiDELiA - ambiguous [Insane]]
2016-04-18 13:50 abanes16: ay
2016-04-18 13:50 Janpai: para medyo balanced
2016-04-18 13:50 abanes16: oke
2016-04-18 13:50 abanes16: woah
2016-04-18 13:50 abanes16: sasuga
2016-04-18 13:51 Janpai: ha? xDDDD
2016-04-18 13:51 abanes16: nandemonay baka >///<
2016-04-18 13:51 Janpai: pwede skip ko ung light insane, I'm noob at modding insanes y'know
2016-04-18 13:51 Janpai: :v
2016-04-18 13:52 abanes16: hindi ka noob >///<
2016-04-18 13:52 abanes16: oke oke
2016-04-18 13:52 Janpai: tsaka bakit ung lower diffs minap mo ung intro samantalang sa sa insane slider art lang?
2016-04-18 13:52 Janpai: nagsawa ka naba sa kanya ;^(
2016-04-18 13:53 Janpai: ACTION is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/949285 GARNiDELiA - ambiguous [Hard]]
2016-04-18 13:53 Janpai: 00:02:482 (5,6) - a 1/1 and a circle fits more for the vocals :3
2016-04-18 13:53 abanes16: hahahaha
2016-04-18 13:54 Janpai: 00:05:179 (5,6,7) - make spacing equal, lahat tayo pantay pantay char xD
2016-04-18 13:55 Janpai: 00:08:718 - why did u ignore the drum sound hereeee
2016-04-18 13:55 abanes16: vote binay plox
2016-04-18 13:55 Janpai: it must be 1/2 , DU30
2016-04-18 13:55 Janpai: 00:12:426 (6) - direction of the slider seems weird
2016-04-18 13:56 Janpai: parang relasyon nyo, WALANG PATUTUNGUHAN
2016-04-18 13:56 Janpai: xDDD
2016-04-18 13:56 abanes16: grabe
2016-04-18 13:56 abanes16: single po ako
2016-04-18 13:56 Janpai: HAHA
2016-04-18 13:57 Janpai: 00:30:122 (3) - Bagong buhay napo (NC)
2016-04-18 13:57 abanes16: pero hindi ako mag babago para sa kanya
2016-04-18 13:58 Janpai: okay bahala ka sa buhay mo HAHA
2016-04-18 13:58 abanes16: mananatili akong malakas para ma ipag laban ko siya
2016-04-18 13:58 Janpai: HAHAHAHA
2016-04-18 13:58 abanes16: LOL wag po xD
2016-04-18 13:58 Janpai: pag di ka tumigil ipapahuli kita kay cardo HAHA
2016-04-18 13:59 abanes16: hahahahaha
2016-04-18 13:59 Janpai: 01:06:358 (4) - ito din wala ng direkyon ang buhay xDDD ihahatid koto sa tuwid na daan ng LP eh
2016-04-18 14:00 Janpai: 01:05:684 (2,3,4) - equal spacingzxczxc
2016-04-18 14:02 Janpai: ok that's all for now sana naman ok na ung effort na ginawa ko sana nakuntento kana dun HAHAHA char :v Imma post this on threadzxczxc
2016-04-18 14:02 abanes16: thank you
2016-04-18 14:02 abanes16: malaking tulong to
2016-04-18 14:02 Janpai: HAHA
2016-04-18 14:02 abanes16: ima give you kds
2016-04-18 14:03 Janpai: ang kulang nalang siguro dito ung structure medyo magulo pa eh parang pilipinas HAHA
2016-04-18 14:03 abanes16: hahahaha
2016-04-18 14:03 abanes16: hinde
2016-04-18 14:03 abanes16: yung parang feeling nya sa akin
2016-04-18 14:03 abanes16: MAGULO
2016-04-18 14:04 Janpai: MANAHIMIK KA SABING AKO LANG ANG HUHUGOT HAHA
2016-04-18 14:04 Janpai: HAHA

kyaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa >///< salamat sa mod

Flowey

101 posts

Joined August 2012

Flowey 2016-04-20T04:16:20+00:00

Hi, from #modreqs again.

Here's a mod for Akitoshi's Extra:

Replay: http://puu.sh/ooSzT/d478a69530.osr
General Thoughts: I like it when maps get harder difficulties. It was a fun map for the most part, and I don't really have much to say about it. Below are some things that I noticed while playing.

00:00:460 (1,1,1,1,2) - I couldn't really tell what these correspond to in the music. It would probably be less confusing if they matched the vocals. It would also be a nice bonus if you made "キルラキル" using the sliders (though that may or may not be possible).

00:08:044 - I think placing a note here and creating a large jump to 00:08:212 (1) would be fun. It's a pretty intense "spike" in the music, so it would make sense to match it with a corresponding "difficulty spike" in the map.

00:32:145 (6,7,8) - A bit overmapped.

00:35:516 (1) - Looks a bit strange because the two ends of the "Π" shape aren't parallel.

00:53:381 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - (And other similar jumpy parts in kiai mode) - These are pretty boring to play through. You could probably add more triples here and have less triples in the previous section.

Shishou

512 posts

Joined November 2014

Topic Starter

Shishou 2016-04-20T04:58:33+00:00

woah thanks for the re-mod xD

Akitoshi

2,687 posts

Joined August 2014

Akitoshi 2016-04-20T05:25:25+00:00

Nephroid wrote:
00:00:460 (1,1,1,1,2) - I couldn't really tell what these correspond to in the music. It would probably be less confusing if they matched the vocals. It would also be a nice bonus if you made "キルラキル" using the sliders (though that may or may not be possible). followed instruments, it's not even confusing lol

00:08:044 - I think placing a note here and creating a large jump to 00:08:212 (1) would be fun. It's a pretty intense "spike" in the music, so it would make sense to match it with a corresponding "difficulty spike" in the map. idk that would be too harsh to players esp big jumps right after the spinner, I'll get more opinions about this first.

00:32:145 (6,7,8) - A bit overmapped. nah

00:35:516 (1) - Looks a bit strange because the two ends of the "Π" shape aren't parallel. fixed. Not rly looks different tho

00:53:381 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - (And other similar jumpy parts in kiai mode) - These are pretty boring to play through. You could probably add more triples here and have less triples in the previous section. I understand what you want to say but hey these jumps are large enough :3 and if you complaining about the less-triples it's because the instrumentals on 00:30:122 - between 00:51:695 - is so different.

Thanks for le check

asd

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Shishou

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Topic Starter

Shishou 2016-04-20T09:25:41+00:00

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squirrelpascals

984 posts

Joined March 2015

squirrelpascals 2016-04-22T04:06:28+00:00

Hi, m4m!

Akitoshi Extra

• 00:31:134 (7,1) - Use more of an offset stack here? I misread this in my test

• 00:40:235 (3,4,5) - put 4 close to 5 to space better

• 00:47:988 - I feel like something should be put here. Make 2 a slider?

• 00:49:673 (4) - move slidertail to 256 y312 to achieve better blanket

• 01:01:134 (2,3) - I feel like the double should be at 01:01:302 (3,4) - instead because of some more repetitive percussion there

Insane

• 00:00:460 (1,1) - Maybe start new sliders here 00:01:808 and here 00:04:504 ? This would be nice because of the new string notes there. Also, dont use offset stack, either overlap those sliderends completely or space them a bit.

• 00:08:381 (1,2) - Overmapped. remove triple

• 00:17:229 - strong note here. maybe make 00:17:313 (3,4,5) a stream?

• 00:32:145 (1) - start this slider here? 00:31:976

• 00:47:145 (3,5) and 00:53:718 (7,8) - b l a n k e t

• 00:51:358 (1,2,3,4) - No individual notes here. Turn the slider into a stream

• 00:52:875 and 01:14:448 and 01:17:145 - These all need something clickable. They are very strong beats

• 00:59:111 (5) - I would snap this with the stream or end it on the red tick, would be nicer to play

• 01:02:145 (1,2,3,4,5) - stream shape feels awkward

Light Insane

• 00:02:820 (5) - make this a circle at 00:02:988

• 00:04:843 (5) - overmapped. no note here

• 00:05:517 (7) - make this a circle at 00:05:684

• 00:08:382 (2,3) - overmapped. delete

• 00:09:392 (7,1) - blanket

• 00:19:673 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9) and 00:23:381 (5,6,7,8) - highscore? I don't think the repetitiveness in flow is necessary here. The vocals and guitar fluctuate here. You did use this pattern well at 00:24:729 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4)

• 00:42:932 (7,8) - make this a slider? beat isnt as strong on 8

• 00:45:291 (7) - ahh put this at x295 y129 (Stack on 3)

• 00:48:493 (9) - move to 00:48:662

• 00:49:504 - put a circle here?

• 00:51:021 (5,6,7,8) - No beats here. make a slider.

• 00:55:572 - strong beat. make clickable

I like the rest

Good luck!!

Shishou

512 posts

Joined November 2014

Topic Starter

Shishou 2016-04-22T04:38:59+00:00

Thanks for the mod

Akitoshi

2,687 posts

Joined August 2014

Akitoshi 2016-04-22T04:49:39+00:00

squirrelpascals wrote:
• 00:31:134 (7,1) - Use more of an offset stack here? I misread this in my test backforth there isn't really hard imo since yea I already added NC on 00:31:471 - and we can notice for the autostack anyway

• 00:40:235 (3,4,5) - put 4 close to 5 to space better ok

• 00:47:988 - I feel like something should be put here. Make 2 a slider? Instruments paused there atm

• 00:49:673 (4) - move slidertail to 256 y312 to achieve better blanket rounded and did the common blanket then :3

• 01:01:134 (2,3) - I feel like the double should be at 01:01:302 (3,4) - instead because of some more repetitive percussion there nah, there's double-clap on 01:01:134 (2,3) - not on 01:01:302 (3,4) -

thanks!

cxzcwqe

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Shishou

512 posts

Joined November 2014

Topic Starter

Shishou 2016-04-22T05:13:12+00:00

updated labyu

DeRandom Otaku

2,142 posts

Joined November 2014

DeRandom Otaku 2016-04-22T12:25:51+00:00

Hello ~ M4M

Map to mod : t/431074

General :

ODs of Insane , Light Insane And Hard are all set to 7 @ - @ idk why is that , change em

Insane :

00:08:549 (2) - nc from this note instead
00:20:179 (4,6) - they are stacked but 00:20:010 (3,5) - these arent.. uwu maybe u did it on purpose . just pointed it out tho
00:28:774 (1) - nc wont be needed
00:47:145 (3,5) - blanket could be better
01:12:257 - add circle

Light Insane :

00:08:550 (2) - nc
00:20:010 (4,6,8) - not properly stacked

Hard :

00:05:853 (7) - nc
00:18:830 (1) - remove nc and 00:19:336 (2) - nc from here instead
00:20:516 (4,6) - not properly stacked
01:22:033 (6) - nc starts from here

Akitoshi's Extra :

idk ... Sick diff , really loved it . nothing here -w- sorry

Sorry for le shortish mod , its mapped so well x-x
i see this getting ranked soon eue
Good Luck!~

PerfectPlay_old

PerfectPlay_old 2016-04-24T14:36:31+00:00

Hi from #Modrequest ~ I like the Map, it's really good.

Will be hard for me to find some things

Easy

01:08:549 (4,5) - Remove the Overlapp pls

Normal

01:25:403 (1) - Why is this Spinner is ending early than in Easy ?

Light Insane

00:13:269 (3,4,5,6,7) - Overlapp as fuck, Hard to play, pls remove or remap that part

Insane

00:08:381 (3) - Pls move that circle more to the left site to make the jump prettyier
00:23:044 (5,6) - This is tricky, u can keep it, but i would remove that
00:35:179 (5,6,7,8,1) - Try to make that in a curve, cause a curve is ez to play
00:36:190 (3,4,5,6) - Why not try a triangle ?
00:59:448 (6,7,8,9,1) - Wanna try a curve ?
01:01:808 (6,7,8,9,10) - Isn't that Jump a bit to hard ?
01:07:201 (4,5,6,7,8) - curve pls
01:17:988 (1,2,3,4,5) - I didn't notice, some spacing seems a bit to hard, there are more things like that in the map to remove
01:23:718 (1,2,3,4) - More to the right and try a curve
01:25:319 (1) - Why is the Spinner ending early than in other diffs ?

Extra

01:10:235 (5,6,7,8,1) - Why no curve ? ;w;
01:25:319 (1) - Spinner end is diffrent from other diffs

Akitoshi

2,687 posts

Joined August 2014

Akitoshi 2016-04-24T14:48:28+00:00

PerfectPlay wrote:
01:10:235 (5,6,7,8,1) - Why no curve ? ;w; cornered ;w;
01:25:319 (1) - Spinner end is diffrent from other diffs this was my opinion where the instrument's echo actually ended.

Thanks for checking~

Shishou

512 posts

Joined November 2014

Topic Starter

Shishou 2016-04-24T15:27:22+00:00

Insane

00:08:381 (3) - Pls move that circle more to the left site to make the jump prettyier
00:23:044 (5,6) - This is tricky, u can keep it, but i would remove that
00:35:179 (5,6,7,8,1) - Try to make that in a curve, cause a curve is ez to play Insane :^)
00:36:190 (3,4,5,6) - Why not try a triangle ? I love star pattern kekekek
00:59:448 (6,7,8,9,1) - Wanna try a curve ?
01:01:808 (6,7,8,9,10) - Isn't that Jump a bit to hard ? Insane :3
01:07:201 (4,5,6,7,8) - curve pls do you love that curve that much xD
01:17:988 (1,2,3,4,5) - I didn't notice, some spacing seems a bit to hard, there are more things like that in the map to remove
01:23:718 (1,2,3,4) - More to the right and try a curve Fine xD
01:25:319 (1) - Why is the Spinner ending early than in other diffs ?

PerfectPlay_old

PerfectPlay_old 2016-04-24T16:28:18+00:00

abanes16 wrote:
Insane
00:08:381 (3) - Pls move that circle more to the left site to make the jump prettyier
00:23:044 (5,6) - This is tricky, u can keep it, but i would remove that
00:35:179 (5,6,7,8,1) - Try to make that in a curve, cause a curve is ez to play Insane :^)
00:36:190 (3,4,5,6) - Why not try a triangle ? I love star pattern kekekek
00:59:448 (6,7,8,9,1) - Wanna try a curve ?
01:01:808 (6,7,8,9,10) - Isn't that Jump a bit to hard ? Insane :3
01:07:201 (4,5,6,7,8) - curve pls do you love that curve that much xD
01:17:988 (1,2,3,4,5) - I didn't notice, some spacing seems a bit to hard, there are more things like that in the map to remove
01:23:718 (1,2,3,4) - More to the right and try a curve Fine xD
01:25:319 (1) - Why is the Spinner ending early than in other diffs ?

Curve is nice to play, Just saying :^) keke

Mekki

Mekki 2016-04-24T16:40:19+00:00

Hello! From modreqs :3

[General]

There is currently a lack of tags in the mapset! You could add much more things like opening, ending, anime, tv size
As it seems drum-hitwhistle3.wav is unused in the mapset, be sure to delete it if it's really not used in the set!
Combo colours are not set for Akitoshi's Extra.

[Easy]

Using OD 1 seems a bit bad, be careful with low values like that, even if it's a Easy diff, it should be a bit higher, like 2.
Your rhythm from here 00:08:549 (1) - to here 00:17:819 (2) - is very bad. You ignored a lot of strong beats and used bad polarity for what song provides. I did something that'd improve much more the quality on this part, you can take a look at the puush, but keep in mind that there are more problems like that, and it'd be good if you review your mapset to fix them. Just look on which strong beats are ignored through map and try to fix that as much as you can. Example for first part: http://puu.sh/orIAu/58ef90193b.jpg
00:03:156 (1,2,3) - There is a spacing problem here, you should use a distance of 0.9x aswell as you did on previous pattern.
00:08:549 (1) - Not enough recovery time after spinner, the minimum for a easy diff with this BPM should be of 3 beats!
00:20:684 (3) - This mini overlap feels a bit bad here, though this is very nazi, it'd be good having it fixed to more visual estability!
00:31:808 (3) - Flow could be improved here, maybe you could make (3) paralell to (1) instead of making it suddenly going down.
All your combos has a 2 stanzas patterning, what means that they are NCed in every two downbeats, which fits very good with your easy diff, but some times you break them, which is not good at all. Look on what parts you could improve your comboing, keep in mind that there are I'll list just some of them :>
00:22:033 (5) - Add here and remove here 00:23:381 (1).
00:28:774 (1) - Remove it from here.
00:44:785 (1) - ^
00:47:482 (1) - ^ And so goes on... Try to fix all of them based on what I said and on my examples. Just look at downbeats, in every two downbeats you should NC.
00:29:785 (2) - This strong beat can not be ignored on a slider end. I'd suggest replacing that for two notes, as it'd represent rhythm better.
00:40:740 (1) - Let's talk about those 1/2 now, as I said before, there are much more ways to don't ignore strong beats on a Easy diff and still create a good rhythm with good polarity. Take a look at another example, I did that till the spiner before kiai http://puu.sh/orJlu/1edda38927.jpg
00:53:549 (3) - Same thing occurs here, the 1/2 feels weird, but at this part is easier to fix, you just need to short the slider to here 00:54:055 (3).
00:54:392 (4,5,1) - Pay attention to vocals here and see what you could do based on all my examples XD

Well, much things could be improved on this diff. The patterns are one of those, like, better slider shapes, better blankets and etc Rhythm is quite bad though, you must be able to fix it based on what I said, and comboing is very bad too especially on kiai. Just take a look through your map and good luck with it!

[Normal]

00:00:460 (1) - Why did you use distance of 0.9x at this part and then on other parts it is back to 0.8x? I recommend using 0.9x or even 1x for the whole map, without changes. Be sure to take that in consideration!
00:01:976 (3) - This slider could be a bit more curved to fit with your patterning style. NOTE: same here 00:02:651 (4).
00:08:212 (1) - Same on easy! For normal, the recovery time should be at least of 2 beats, 1 seems bad.
00:11:246 (1) - Comboing seems inconsistent here too, I guess you should now how to fix it already, as I said for easy too! 00:11:246 (1) - Add it here, remove it from here 00:12:426 (4) and add it here 00:13:943 (1).
00:22:033 (6) - Same about combo
00:27:426 (1,2) - This pattern could be more polished, try to making slider shapes equals to be able to blanket those!
00:56:415 (5) - Moving this slider to 00:56:246 would fit the rhythm better imo, as you wouldn't ignoring strong vocals.

Well... I'll not repeat myself again, same things of Easy applies to here. Rhythm is much better on this difficulty, but for sure comboing and patterns need serious work.

[Hard]

00:02:482 (5) - Why did you make spacing higher there? There is such no reason for doing that, and it flows very bad too.
00:04:504 (3,4,5,6,1) - Having such of a inconsistent spacing like that here for no reason seems very bad and makes your map quite unpolished, just use normal DS here.
00:13:606 (1,2) - Switch NCs here.
00:15:122 (6) - Seems like there is a missing NC here. NOTE: same here 00:17:819 (5).
00:14:617 (4,5,6) - Again, same spacing issue. Why spacing is lower there?
00:19:336 (1) - As a 1/1 it needs to be spaced more from (9).
00:24:392 (1,2) - NCs should be swaped here.
00:51:695 (1) - This would be easily confused with 1/2, you should space them more, it is the start of kiai, rhythm is 1/1 and it has spacing of 1/2.

Well, same complaints about Easy and Normal goes for this diff. It needs much polishing in patterns, as there are a lot of spacing inconsistency that doesn't seems purposital and don't fit nothing. Comboing also goes crazy, in some parts you NC in 1 downbeat, then in other there are 2 downbeats when they are still same sound. I suggest remaking all of those things, but, rhythm is a bit better here if you wanna know though.

[Light Insane]

As a Light Insane, it should be easier, honestly this doesn't have much difference than your actual Insane so it seems quite weird having this diff on the set, as it wont help in nothing on the spread.
00:00:460 (1) - Spacing is still inconsistent in this whole part till the spinner. The 1/2's are like very big with no reason (overdone patterns) and 1/1 are smaller than 1/2. That is very non sense with the aspects of song, so I'd suggest you having normal spacing there.
00:19:673 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - This pattern seems very unpolished and uncomfortable to play. There are much more ways to improve it, just don't make them too tight. NOTE: same for those 00:22:707 (3,4,5,6) - 00:24:729 (1,2,3,4) - and all other patterns that you did like that.
00:50:684 (1,2,3,1) - Those streams seems overmapped at those parts, keep in my mind that this a Light Insane so this part should be a bit easier than insane. I'd suggest a rhyhtm like that: http://puu.sh/ou4mP/1a436a0d00.jpg
00:52:538 (3,4) - Make space lower here, it flows bad and neither Insane have such high like that.

I won't list too many things, as this diff still needs to be improved too. It's much better than lowest diffs, but comboing is still inconsistent (I stopped listing them but they are bad too), and some rhythms pattern spacing etc needs to be improved!

[Insane]

00:02:313 (2) - Please please... Make spacing here normal, making it higher doesn't seems reasonable.
00:08:381 (3) - Completely overmapped, delete this note, if you check in song you'll see that there is no song on it.
00:16:639 (1) - Make this slider 1/2, having it extended to 3/4 seems bad, as beat clearly ends in 1/2.
00:30:712 (3,1) - If you want to keep them as 1/4, then spacing for sure needs to be lower. Readability would easily tell that this is 1/2, as it is not.
00:37:538 (3) - For better readability, space (3) more of (2), as (2) is 1/4 and it has same spacing as (3).
00:51:190 (9,1,2,3,4) - All of those notes are overmapped with song, song doesn't provide streams like that. Delete all those highlighted notes and just keep this one 00:51:358 (1).
00:59:533 (7,9) - Those are overmapped tho, there is no sound on those 1/4. Delete it.

This is the best diff made by you in this mapset. It has potential to be ranked, but comboing needs to be improved too, some overmap problems and patterns too. Extra seems fine, as I don't mod them, I won't touch on it, just give a quick look. Anyways, GL with map!

Shishou

512 posts

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Topic Starter

Shishou 2016-04-25T07:09:25+00:00

Thanks for the long mod

teach me pls

Asagi

1,021 posts

Joined March 2013

Asagi 2016-04-25T12:07:40+00:00

M4M stuff
IRC mod :3

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2016-04-25 13:38 Asagi: ACTION is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/949286 GARNiDELiA - ambiguous [Insane]]
2016-04-25 13:38 abanes16: i dunno
2016-04-25 13:38 abanes16: wooo
2016-04-25 13:38 Asagi: general stuff
2016-04-25 13:38 Asagi: tags, lagay mo yung name nung nsa BG
2016-04-25 13:38 Asagi: forgot her name
2016-04-25 13:39 abanes16: matoi ryuko
2016-04-25 13:39 Asagi: ye her
2016-04-25 13:39 Asagi: NC colours, sakit sa mata :v
2016-04-25 13:39 Asagi: masyadong solid yung pag kaka red and yellow
2016-04-25 13:39 abanes16: lalagyan ko ng boobs sa tag?
2016-04-25 13:39 Asagi: :^)
2016-04-25 13:40 Asagi: and yung kay aki
2016-04-25 13:40 Asagi: walang NC color
2016-04-25 13:40 abanes16: wait
2016-04-25 13:41 Asagi: le red and yellow is fine but masyadong solid pag kaka color
2016-04-25 13:41 abanes16: oke
2016-04-25 13:41 Asagi: http://puu.sh/ouQlM.png something like dis will do
2016-04-25 13:41 Asagi: medyo papataasin yung puti or somethin
2016-04-25 13:42 Asagi: back to le map
2016-04-25 13:42 Asagi: 00:05:937 (1) - 
2016-04-25 13:43 Asagi: 00:08:044 - spinner ends here kung vocal or that instru susundan mo
2016-04-25 13:46 Asagi: 00:09:055 (3,4) - ctrl+G dis would fit better dun sa guitar scratch and the downbeat
2016-04-25 13:46 Asagi: tell me if u fix or nah
2016-04-25 13:47 abanes16: oo nga no
2016-04-25 13:47 abanes16: fixed
2016-04-25 13:47 Asagi: 00:10:235 (2) - dat awkward curve
2016-04-25 13:47 Asagi: masyadong napa curve masyado
2016-04-25 13:47 Asagi: i blanket mo n lang
2016-04-25 13:48 Asagi: 00:11:246 (1) - this slider makes the flow weird
2016-04-25 13:48 Asagi: i mean, after going down, liliko sa right pero yung kasunod na notes nsa left
2016-04-25 13:50 abanes16: gawin kong paliko sa left
2016-04-25 13:50 Asagi: ill do it something like this http://puu.sh/ouQKv.jpg
2016-04-25 13:51 Asagi: works well with the previous (6) and (7) notes
2016-04-25 13:51 Asagi: tapos do some adjustment sa kasunod nun
2016-04-25 13:51 Asagi: if u gonna follow my suggestion
2016-04-25 13:52 abanes16: ginata ko^
2016-04-25 13:53 Asagi: 00:16:639 (1) - flow break + awkward slider shape
2016-04-25 13:54 abanes16: ginaya*
2016-04-25 13:54 Asagi: some suggestion here http://puu.sh/ouQTV.jpg
2016-04-25 13:54 Asagi: flow-wise asthetics wise
2016-04-25 13:55 Asagi: kahit d mo nmn totally gayahin yung suggestion but youll get the idea
2016-04-25 13:56 abanes16: ok na
2016-04-25 13:56 Asagi: 00:18:830 (5) - not sure here, i think better to follow the guitar
2016-04-25 13:56 Asagi: since guitar din nakafollow sa part na to 00:17:819 (1) - 
2016-04-25 13:57 Asagi: http://puu.sh/ouR1O.jpg
2016-04-25 13:57 Asagi: may slow down n pla na greenlines dun
2016-04-25 13:58 abanes16: ok na
2016-04-25 13:58 Asagi: 00:29:448 (1,2,3,4,5) - this is quite an overmapped here
2016-04-25 13:58 Asagi: inalis ko yan
2016-04-25 13:59 Asagi: and nothing follows it
2016-04-25 13:59 Asagi: remove it and replace with sliders instead
2016-04-25 13:59 abanes16: hai
2016-04-25 14:00 Asagi: 00:30:712 (3,1) - oh no
2016-04-25 14:00 Asagi: ppl will insta 100 on that on le first try
2016-04-25 14:00 Asagi: ilagay mo n lang dun sa tail nung previous slider
2016-04-25 14:00 Asagi: masyadong pilit kase
2016-04-25 14:01 Asagi: 00:34:167 (1,2) - 3/4 slider with dat spacing, pero pag dating dito 00:36:864 (1,2) - biglang lumiit
2016-04-25 14:01 Asagi: make the spacing more consistent there
2016-04-25 14:02 Asagi: use le distance snap
2016-04-25 14:03 abanes16: fixed
2016-04-25 14:04 Asagi: 00:42:089 (5) - i got the idea that u putting the NC on every 2nd tall white line on the slow part
2016-04-25 14:04 Asagi: but NCing this is much better
2016-04-25 14:04 Asagi: works well with the finish hitsound as the NC changes
2016-04-25 14:05 Asagi: 00:44:785 (7) - here and 00:47:482 (5) - 00:50:179 (5) - 
2016-04-25 14:05 Asagi: kea pla sakit sa tenga ng hitsounds
2016-04-25 14:06 Asagi: make the over hitsound volume into 70% at least
2016-04-25 14:06 Asagi: because thats the average
2016-04-25 14:06 Asagi: and lower the volume to 50% dun sa slow part
2016-04-25 14:06 Asagi: masakit sa tenga kase
2016-04-25 14:06 abanes16: hai hai
2016-04-25 14:06 Asagi: applies to all diff
2016-04-25 14:08 abanes16: ok na
2016-04-25 14:08 Asagi: d ko na babangitin yung hitsound vol sa ibang diff
2016-04-25 14:09 abanes16: okie
2016-04-25 14:09 Asagi: 01:05:684 (1) - blanketing dis might be better
2016-04-25 14:10 Asagi: 01:06:190 (2,3) - and dont make this overlap each other
2016-04-25 14:10 Asagi: it looks bad tbh
2016-04-25 14:10 Asagi: ah ye forgot to mention about your NCs
2016-04-25 14:10 Asagi: mukang d ka sanay mag NCs
2016-04-25 14:11 Asagi: 00:55:572 (6) - NC here
2016-04-25 14:11 Asagi: most of the time, lagi kang mag NNC don sa long white line
2016-04-25 14:11 Asagi: 00:56:583 (1) - remove, then NC here 00:57:089 (3) - 
2016-04-25 14:11 abanes16: sorry :(
2016-04-25 14:11 Asagi: 00:57:594 (1) - remove
2016-04-25 14:11 Asagi: 00:58:268 (3) - NC
2016-04-25 14:12 Asagi: pliz dont sorry
2016-04-25 14:12 Asagi: learning from mistakes
2016-04-25 14:12 Asagi: d ko na lahat i memention about sa NC
2016-04-25 14:12 Asagi: youll get the idea
2016-04-25 14:13 Asagi: 01:09:055 (6) - u forgot the finish hitsound
2016-04-25 14:13 Asagi: 01:10:151 - add note cuz the stream starts here 01:10:066 (11) - 
2016-04-25 14:14 Asagi: 01:11:077 (7) - finish hitsound here
2016-04-25 14:14 Asagi: 01:11:415 (8) - dun sa repeat, finish 01:12:426 (1) - same here dun sa head
2016-04-25 14:15 Asagi: 01:12:931 (2) - speed up usually 1 NC alone
2016-04-25 14:15 Asagi: 01:24:898 (9) - same as slow downs
2016-04-25 14:16 Asagi: get some reference on aki's diff just incase
2016-04-25 14:17 abanes16: oke
2016-04-25 14:17 Asagi: and thats le all on this diff
2016-04-25 14:17 Asagi: quite good
2016-04-25 14:17 abanes16: yay!!!!!!!
2016-04-25 14:17 Asagi: but yea
2016-04-25 14:17 Asagi: more rooms for improvement :3b
2016-04-25 14:17 Asagi: specially patterns and NC
2016-04-25 14:17 abanes16: :(
2016-04-25 14:19 Asagi: tell me i u are done fixing insane
2016-04-25 14:19 Asagi: gonna move on hard diff
2016-04-25 14:19 Asagi: brb toilet
2016-04-25 14:20 abanes16: oke
2016-04-25 14:20 abanes16: ma mimiss kita :'(
2016-04-25 14:35 Asagi: okee back
2016-04-25 14:35 Asagi: tangina may package na dumating
2016-04-25 14:36 abanes16: wao
2016-04-25 14:37 Asagi: anyway
2016-04-25 14:37 Asagi: hardo
2016-04-25 14:38 abanes16: ACTION is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/949285 GARNiDELiA - ambiguous [Hard]]
2016-04-25 14:38 Asagi: 00:00:965 (2) - blanket
2016-04-25 14:38 Asagi: deym nazi asagi
2016-04-25 14:38 Asagi: 00:01:471 (3) - delete this, nothing follows it
2016-04-25 14:39 Asagi: 00:02:482 (5) - same as this
2016-04-25 14:39 Asagi: just do some adjustment later on
2016-04-25 14:40 Asagi: medyo overmapped yung first part
2016-04-25 14:41 Asagi: 00:03:156 (1) - start from here, try to copy dis rhythm http://puu.sh/ouSQA.jpg
2016-04-25 14:41 Asagi: pretty much better and it doesnt sound overmapped
2016-04-25 14:41 Asagi: 00:05:937 (1) - dis spinner
2016-04-25 14:41 Asagi: katulad nung sa insane
2016-04-25 14:42 Asagi: u probably know what im saying
2016-04-25 14:42 abanes16: vocals
2016-04-25 14:42 abanes16: at yung tunog
2016-04-25 14:42 Asagi: san?
2016-04-25 14:42 Asagi: ah ye
2016-04-25 14:43 abanes16: nvm
2016-04-25 14:43 Asagi: 00:09:055 (3,4,5) - yung mga ganto
2016-04-25 14:43 Asagi: uhh triple stuffs
2016-04-25 14:43 Asagi: medyo na overused mo
2016-04-25 14:44 Asagi: true that it follows the rhythm but, its kinda too much for hard diff
2016-04-25 14:44 Asagi: mas maganda kung inde mo totally i follow yung buong drums
2016-04-25 14:44 Asagi: but follow the guitar instead
2016-04-25 14:44 abanes16: oke
2016-04-25 14:45 Asagi: 00:08:549 (1) - 
2016-04-25 14:45 Asagi: example dito
2016-04-25 14:45 Asagi: http://puu.sh/ouSZR.jpg
2016-04-25 14:45 Asagi: try mo i copy tong suggestion ko
2016-04-25 14:46 Asagi: and try to listen, it pretty much works well
2016-04-25 14:46 Asagi: 00:10:235 (2,3,4) - something like this is fine i guess
2016-04-25 14:47 Asagi: 00:11:836 (3) - just remove this one and its gonna be ok
2016-04-25 14:48 Asagi: d ko na masyadong babanggitin yung pattern because of the rhythm change
2016-04-25 14:48 Asagi: i recheck ko n lang mmya after ng adjustment mo
2016-04-25 14:49 abanes16: oke
2016-04-25 14:49 Asagi: 00:13:606 (5) - actually the stream starts here 00:13:437 - 
2016-04-25 14:49 Asagi: but
2016-04-25 14:49 Asagi: dont force to put stream
2016-04-25 14:49 Asagi: instead, 00:13:606 (6) - delete this and put 1/2 slider 
2016-04-25 14:49 Asagi: follow the guitar
2016-04-25 14:50 Asagi: 00:16:555 (5) - remove dis, unneccesary
2016-04-25 14:50 Asagi: 00:18:830 (5) - same as the insane, gawin mong slider
2016-04-25 14:53 Asagi: medyo magiging major and changes sa diff na to ;-;
2016-04-25 14:53 Asagi: cuz of rhythm density
2016-04-25 14:53 abanes16: kekek
2016-04-25 14:54 Asagi: 00:19:336 (1) - slow down on dis part please
2016-04-25 14:54 Asagi: popoint out ko n lang puro rhythm 
2016-04-25 14:54 Asagi: tapos recheck ko n lang pag na ayos mo na lahat lahat
2016-04-25 14:54 Asagi: for pattern modding
2016-04-25 14:55 abanes16: oke
2016-04-25 14:55 Asagi: 00:29:448 (1,2) - delete this both
2016-04-25 14:55 Asagi: then replace 1/2 slider here 00:29:448 - 
2016-04-25 14:56 Asagi: 00:29:785 - and 3/4 slider here with slight speed up
2016-04-25 14:57 Asagi: 00:31:386 (4) - tihs one is fine but 00:32:735 (3) - the second time might be bad, delete this 2nd one
2016-04-25 14:58 Asagi: 00:36:106 (7) - remove
2016-04-25 14:58 Asagi: 00:37:370 (2) - same
2016-04-25 14:59 Asagi: 00:40:740 (6) - NC 
2016-04-25 14:59 Asagi: oh ye, dat slow part, same as insane about the NCs
2016-04-25 14:59 abanes16: oke
2016-04-25 15:01 Asagi: so in kiai, better to follow the vocals
2016-04-25 15:01 Asagi: ibang rhythm medyo uhhhh
2016-04-25 15:02 Asagi: random i think?
2016-04-25 15:03 abanes16: oke
2016-04-25 15:03 Asagi: sorry about this, but parang magiging "remap" na ata yung hard
2016-04-25 15:03 Asagi: well for sake of improvement and ranking
2016-04-25 15:03 Asagi: thats a good thing i guess
2016-04-25 15:03 Asagi: takes time thou
2016-04-25 15:03 abanes16: ok lang hahahaha
2016-04-25 15:04 Asagi: anyway thats it for now
2016-04-25 15:04 abanes16: oke
2016-04-25 15:04 Asagi: ill finish modding other diffs after rechecking hard again
2016-04-25 15:04 Asagi: the fucking normal is perfect tbh
2016-04-25 15:04 abanes16: oke
2016-04-25 15:04 abanes16: woah
2016-04-25 15:04 abanes16: <3
2016-04-25 15:04 abanes16: <3
2016-04-25 15:04 abanes16: <3
2016-04-25 15:05 Asagi: just some flaws on NCs
2016-04-25 15:05 Asagi: but pretty much
2016-04-25 15:05 Asagi: its really great
2016-04-25 15:05 Asagi: 10/10
2016-04-25 15:05 abanes16: wooo
2016-04-25 15:05 Asagi: just poke me back after u adjust/remap your hard
2016-04-25 15:06 abanes16: oke
2016-04-25 15:06 Asagi: post ko na desu
2016-04-25 15:06 abanes16: oke
2016-04-25 15:07 Asagi: d mo p pla ini apply yung mga ibang mods?
2016-04-25 15:07 abanes16: aling mod?
2016-04-25 15:07 Asagi: yung mkguh
2016-04-25 15:08 abanes16: na apply ko na yan
2016-04-25 15:08 abanes16: di pa lang ako nakakapag reply xD
2016-04-25 15:08 Asagi: no reply huh
2016-04-25 15:08 Asagi: >checks his mod
2016-04-25 15:08 abanes16: hahaha
2016-04-25 15:08 Asagi: detailed shit
2016-04-25 15:08 abanes16: hahaha
2016-04-25 15:09 Asagi: d pla puta
2016-04-25 15:09 Asagi: mukang detailed lang kase ang daming sinabi
2016-04-25 15:09 abanes16: hahahaha
2016-04-25 15:10 Asagi: puro NC tlga problema mo
2016-04-25 15:10 Asagi: ganyan n ganyan din ako dati HAHAHAHA
2016-04-25 15:11 abanes16: hahaha
2016-04-25 15:34 abanes16: hindi mo pa i-uupload?
2016-04-25 15:35 abanes16: post*
2016-04-25 15:36 Asagi: ayy
2016-04-25 15:36 Asagi: limot
2016-04-25 15:36 Asagi: mya mya teka
2016-04-25 15:36 abanes16: hahaha
2016-04-25 15:36 abanes16: oke
2016-04-25 15:36 Asagi: busy watching waifu
2016-04-25 15:37 abanes16: 10nya?
2016-04-25 16:34 abanes16: poke
2016-04-25 16:35 Asagi: done?
2016-04-25 18:56 abanes16: di mo i-popost? xD
2016-04-25 18:56 Asagi: lagi kong nalilimutan HAHAHA
2016-04-25 18:56 Asagi: after recheck n lang
2016-04-25 18:56 Asagi: mmya
2016-04-25 18:56 abanes16: btw na re-map ko na yung hard
2016-04-25 18:58 abanes16: sabihin mo nalang kung i reremap ko ulit
2016-04-25 18:59 Asagi: wow
2016-04-25 18:59 Asagi: dat was a lot of improvement
2016-04-25 19:00 abanes16: hahaha
2016-04-25 19:00 abanes16: salamat xD
2016-04-25 19:01 Asagi: ACTION is playing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/949285 GARNiDELiA - ambiguous [Hard]] +Hidden
2016-04-25 19:02 Asagi: oh btw
2016-04-25 19:02 Asagi: u are not using distance snap?
2016-04-25 19:02 abanes16: uhhhh
2016-04-25 19:02 abanes16: ye xD
2016-04-25 19:03 Asagi: kea pla
2016-04-25 19:03 Asagi: sborang iba iba yung mga distance
2016-04-25 19:05 abanes16: hahahaha
2016-04-25 19:05 Asagi: uhh
2016-04-25 19:05 Asagi: usually
2016-04-25 19:05 Asagi: basic mapping of hard diff
2016-04-25 19:05 Asagi: always use distance snap
2016-04-25 19:05 Asagi: not all the time but most of the time
2016-04-25 19:05 abanes16: ohhh
2016-04-25 19:05 Asagi: check my hard
2016-04-25 19:06 Asagi: as a reference
2016-04-25 19:06 Asagi: ur pattern is good
2016-04-25 19:06 Asagi: but damn super inconsistent distance
2016-04-25 19:06 abanes16: hahaha
2016-04-25 19:07 abanes16: ilan ds mo po?
2016-04-25 19:07 Asagi: uhh depende sa SV
2016-04-25 19:07 Asagi: yung SV ko 1.60
2016-04-25 19:07 abanes16: ahhh
2016-04-25 19:07 Asagi: gamit kong DS 1.2 
2016-04-25 19:09 Asagi: yung sa map mo
2016-04-25 19:09 Asagi: try use 1.3 DS
2016-04-25 19:09 Asagi: pero syempre, d sa lahat ng pag kakataon susundin mo yung DS
2016-04-25 19:09 abanes16: okek
2016-04-25 19:09 Asagi: no need to remap tbh
2016-04-25 19:09 Asagi: just fix le distance snap
2016-04-25 19:24 abanes16: ok na sir
2016-04-25 19:26 abanes16: luminis nama kahit konti xD
2016-04-25 19:26 Asagi: sakit ng ulo ko sa taiko na to anak ng puta
2016-04-25 19:27 abanes16: hahaha
2016-04-25 19:27 Asagi: may balak kase akong kunin na achievement
2016-04-25 19:34 Asagi: anywa
2016-04-25 19:34 Asagi: ACTION is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/949285 GARNiDELiA - ambiguous [Hard]]
2016-04-25 19:34 Asagi: tapusin na dis
2016-04-25 19:35 abanes16: ACTION is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/949285 GARNiDELiA - ambiguous [Hard]]
2016-04-25 19:35 Asagi: 00:03:662 (2) - copy mo dis
2016-04-25 19:35 Asagi: 00:04:504 (3) - tapos lagay mo dito
2016-04-25 19:35 Asagi: remove mo repeat
2016-04-25 19:35 Asagi: para smooth tignan
2016-04-25 19:36 Asagi: http://puu.sh/ov3MA.jpg
2016-04-25 19:36 Asagi: 00:05:853 (6) - NC
2016-04-25 19:36 Asagi: 00:09:729 (5) - NC
2016-04-25 19:36 Asagi: 00:13:268 (3) - medyo i move mo to sa left para d masyadong magkadikit
2016-04-25 19:36 Asagi: 00:15:122 (5) - NC
2016-04-25 19:37 Asagi: 00:17:819 (5) - NC
2016-04-25 19:37 Asagi: 00:18:830 (8) - NC
2016-04-25 19:37 Asagi: 00:26:920 (8) - straight slider might be good
2016-04-25 19:38 abanes16: fixed
2016-04-25 19:38 Asagi: 00:28:690 (5,6,7) - medyo sloppy yung mga slider dito
2016-04-25 19:39 Asagi: try desu http://puu.sh/ov3UJ.jpg
2016-04-25 19:39 Asagi: 00:31:134 (4) - i move mo pa to sa left with distance snap para mag blanket dito 00:31:471 (5) - 
2016-04-25 19:39 Asagi: 00:33:156 (4,5) - oh boi unreasonable jump
2016-04-25 19:39 Asagi: i blanket mo n lang yung (4)
2016-04-25 19:40 Asagi: 00:31:471 (5) - add NC 00:31:976 (1) - remove NC 00:32:819 (3) - NC
2016-04-25 19:41 Asagi: 00:35:179 (4,5) - dis flowbreak aint good
2016-04-25 19:41 Asagi: sa left yung curve nung 4 pero yung kasunod nsa right
2016-04-25 19:42 Asagi: http://puu.sh/ov42l.jpg dis will do
2016-04-25 19:42 Asagi: 00:35:516 (5) - NC
2016-04-25 19:42 Asagi: 00:36:190 (7) - adjust mo to sa left, malapit nang dumikit don sa previous slider eh
2016-04-25 19:42 Asagi: 00:36:527 (8,1) - blanket
2016-04-25 19:42 Asagi: 00:38:212 (4) - NC
2016-04-25 19:43 Asagi: 00:40:740 (4) - NC
2016-04-25 19:43 Asagi: 00:40:235 (3) - looks too crowded, medyo i taas mo n lang to hanggang yung tail neto eh mag blanket dito 00:39:898 (2) - 
2016-04-25 19:44 Asagi: 00:43:437 (5) - NC
2016-04-25 19:44 Asagi: 00:50:179 (5) - NC
2016-04-25 19:44 Asagi: 00:51:021 (7) - mas maganda pag itaas taas mo tong note na to kesa sa ibaba nung 00:50:684 (6) - 
2016-04-25 19:44 Asagi: 00:51:358 (8) - solo NC
2016-04-25 19:46 Asagi: 00:56:077 (6,7) - slider overlap and unecessary jump
2016-04-25 19:47 Asagi: http://puu.sh/ov4f4.jpg suggestion here
2016-04-25 19:47 Asagi: 00:55:572 (5) - NC
2016-04-25 19:47 Asagi: 00:58:268 (1) - remove 00:58:437 (2) - add nc
2016-04-25 19:47 Asagi: 01:01:134 (4) - nc
2016-04-25 19:48 Asagi: 01:03:830 (5) - nc
2016-04-25 19:48 Asagi: 01:06:358 (4) - nc
2016-04-25 19:48 Asagi: 01:10:572 (6) - nc
2016-04-25 19:49 Asagi: 01:11:415 (8) - mas maganda to kung i blablanket mo dito 01:11:077 (7) - , itll match dun sa susunod na slider
2016-04-25 19:49 Asagi: 01:14:954 (6,7) - dunno man, looks forced to put it here
2016-04-25 19:50 Asagi: stack mo n lang sila then fix the distance
2016-04-25 19:50 Asagi: 01:14:448 (5) - nc
2016-04-25 19:50 Asagi: 01:17:145 (6) - ^
2016-04-25 19:50 Asagi: 01:17:988 (1) - remove 01:18:662 (3) - add nc
2016-04-25 19:51 Asagi: 01:21:190 (4) - add
2016-04-25 19:51 Asagi: 01:24:055 (4) - nc
2016-04-25 19:51 Asagi: and i think daz it

langya sumakit likod ko pag momod HAHAHAHA

Shishou

512 posts

Joined November 2014

Topic Starter

Shishou 2016-04-25T12:09:27+00:00

Salamat xD
Sabihin mo na lang pag ok na yung iMo-mod ko

Fraye

77 posts

Joined December 2014

Fraye 2016-04-26T06:16:04+00:00

In-game chat mod

13:32 flawful: 00:14:280 (3) - nc?
13:32 flawful: 00:14:280 (3) - nc agen
13:32 flawful: 00:16:976 (7) - ayy mali yung una hahaha
13:33 flawful: 00:16:976 (7) - remove nc
13:33 flawful: 00:17:819 (1) - ^ putek
13:34 flawful: 00:28:774 (3) - nc
13:34 flawful: 00:30:122 (5) - nc
13:34 abanes16: anong diff?
13:35 flawful: 00:32:819 (1) - remove nc
13:35 flawful: easy
13:35 abanes16: okek
13:35 flawful: kwek
13:35 flawful: #NcHunt
13:35 flawful: 00:42:089 (3) - nc
13:36 flawful: 00:44:785 (3) - nc
13:36 flawful: 00:47:482 (3) - nc
13:36 flawful: 00:48:830 (5) - ^
13:36 flawful: 00:54:392 (4) - ^
13:37 flawful: 00:55:572 (1) - remove nc
13:37 flawful: 00:57:089 (3) - nc
13:37 flawful: 00:58:437 (5) - ^
13:38 flawful: 01:00:965 (3) - ^
13:38 flawful: 01:02:819 (5) - ^
13:38 flawful: 01:03:830 (1) - remove nc
13:38 flawful: 01:05:179 (3) - nc
13:39 flawful: 01:07:875 (3) - nc
13:39 flawful: 01:09:224 (5) - move 1/2 tick to the right?
13:39 flawful: ^then nc
13:41 flawful: 01:13:268 (4) - nc
13:41 flawful: 01:15:459 (1) - remove nc
13:42 flawful: 01:16:302 (2) - nc
13:42 flawful: 01:17:313 (4) - move 1/2 tick to the right?
13:43 flawful: ^shorten slider by 1/2 tick
13:43 flawful: then add a circle on the nearest white tick to the left
13:44 flawful: 01:18:662 (5) - nc
13:44 abanes16: woag
13:44 flawful: 01:21:358 (8) - nc
13:44 flawful: 01:22:033 (1) - remove nc
13:44 flawful: 01:24:055 (3) - nc
13:45 flawful: that's all for le easy diff; these are all suggestions and I'm a noob so follow these guides if you want to

13:46 abanes16: wooooo
13:46 flawful: normal
13:47 flawful: 00:15:628 (1) - remove nc
13:47 flawful: 00:16:639 (2) - nc
13:47 flawful: 00:16:639 (2) - remove nc
13:47 flawful: 00:22:033 (1) - ^
13:48 flawful: 00:23:044 (1) - ^
13:48 flawful: 00:24:729 (5) - nc
13:48 flawful: 00:27:426 (4) - nc to keep the nc consistency (depends on you tbh)
13:49 flawful: 00:28:774 (1) - remove nc
13:49 flawful: 00:34:842 (1) - ^
13:49 flawful: 00:35:853 (2) - nc
13:50 flawful: 00:54:392 (5) - ^
13:50 flawful: 00:55:572 (1) - remove nc
13:50 flawful: 00:57:089 (3) - nc
13:50 flawful: 00:58:437 (5) - ^
13:51 flawful: 00:59:111 (1) - remove nc ples
13:51 flawful: 01:00:122 (2) - nc
13:51 flawful: 01:02:482 (6) - nc
13:51 flawful: 01:07:875 (5) - ^
13:51 flawful: 01:09:055 (7) - ^
13:52 flawful: 01:09:898 (1) - remove nc
13:52 flawful: 01:10:572 (2) - nc
13:52 flawful: 01:15:965 (5) - ^
13:52 flawful: 01:17:988 (1) - remove nc
13:52 flawful: 01:18:662 (2) - nc
13:53 flawful: 01:21:358 (6) - nc
13:53 flawful: 01:22:538 (1) - remove nc
13:53 flawful: 01:24:055 (3) - nc
13:53 abanes16: wooo
13:53 flawful: tiem 4 h4rD
13:54 abanes16: your actually doing it xD
13:54 abanes16: go go go
13:54 flawful: 00:04:504 (3) - nc
13:54 flawful: 00:05:179 (5) - nc
13:54 flawful: 00:05:853 (1) - remove nc
13:55 flawful: 00:20:684 (5) - nc
13:55 flawful: 00:23:381 (5) - ^
13:55 flawful: 00:26:077 (6) - ^
13:55 flawful: 00:28:774 (6) - ^
13:57 flawful: 01:24:729 (4) - ^
13:57 flawful: 01:25:235 (1) - remove aaaaa
13:57 flawful: idk how to fix map quality yet so yea ;-;
13:58 flawful: all I can do for you is nc stuff hahaha
13:58 abanes16: hahaha
13:58 abanes16: salamat
13:58 flawful: insane
13:58 abanes16: para makatikim ka na ng kds
13:58 flawful: 00:08:212 (1,1) - stack?
13:58 abanes16: woo
13:59 flawful: di pa ko tapos HAHAHA
13:59 abanes16: HAHAHAHA
13:59 flawful: 00:28:774 (6) - nc
14:00 flawful: 00:30:797 (1) - remove nc
14:00 flawful: 00:31:976 (1) - ^
14:01 flawful: 01:01:808 (6,7) - nc?
14:01 flawful: 01:05:179 (9) - nc
14:01 flawful: 01:05:684 (1) - remove nc
14:01 flawful: 01:06:358 (3) - nc
14:01 flawful: 01:09:055 (6) - nc
14:01 flawful: 01:10:572 (7) - ^
14:02 flawful: 01:11:415 (10) - ^
14:02 flawful: 01:14:448 (5) - ^
14:02 flawful: 01:18:325 (2) - ^
14:03 flawful: 01:18:662 (6) - ^
14:03 flawful: 01:19:336 (1) - remove nc
14:03 flawful: 01:19:842 (3) - nc
14:03 flawful: 01:21:190 (6) - ^
14:03 flawful: 01:22:033 (1) - remove nc
14:04 flawful: 01:23:718 (1) - ^
14:04 abanes16: ol na si leni
14:04 flawful: 01:24:055 (5) - nc
14:04 flawful: kita ko hahaha
14:04 abanes16: haha
14:04 flawful: okay na yung insane <3
14:04 abanes16: ohhhh
14:04 flawful: wala akong maayos dito
14:05 abanes16: hahahaha
14:05 abanes16: post mo na kek

GL

Shishou

512 posts

Joined November 2014

Topic Starter

Shishou 2016-04-26T06:18:37+00:00

Wooooooooooooooooo
I loooooveeeeeeeee youuuuuuuuuuuuuuu
Thanks for fixing my nc problems and thanks for modding my map

Yamicchi

1,175 posts

Joined May 2015

Yamicchi 2016-04-28T02:05:12+00:00

Hi :3 update pls.

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Pls don't fix my diff

Shishou

512 posts

Joined November 2014

Topic Starter

Shishou 2016-04-28T02:15:58+00:00

okie xD

-Zeraora

656 posts

Joined November 2014

-Zeraora 2016-04-29T05:20:52+00:00

Mod for "Yami's Insane" as requested

[Yami's Insane]

00:09:055 (3,4) - Distance between these two may confuse players. Consider increasing the distance.
00:22:370 (2,3) - Fix blanket.
00:24:055 (3,4,1) - Perhaps, you could do something like this to improve the aesthetics more.
:::::
(((Just look at the placement. Had to compress the objects on the timeline to show these three.)))
00:34:842 (3) - I suggest putting more emphasis on this circle by increasing the DS a little bit.
00:35:516 (6,7,1) - I suggest decreasing the distance bet. 00:35:516 (6,7) - so that 00:35:853 (7,1) - would have a greater distance. 00:36:021 (1) - Needs to be emphasized imo.
01:09:055 (1) - Modify the curve here to improve the flow between 01:08:886 (7,1) - .
01:17:145 (1,2) - Consider moving this upwards to improve flow.
01:23:549 (2) - imo, improve the slider shape.

Awesome map!

Shishou

512 posts

Joined November 2014

Topic Starter

Shishou 2016-04-29T05:24:25+00:00

Thanks

waiting for yami to update it

Yamicchi

1,175 posts

Joined May 2015

Yamicchi 2016-04-29T11:37:30+00:00

-Harpuia- wrote:

Mod for "Yami's Insane" as requested

[Yami's Insane]

00:09:055 (3,4) - Distance between these two may confuse players. Consider increasing the distance. For those who can play this hard, most can read this. Fixing it will cause a lot of bad overlap. I'm thinking my way out, and will change if someone help me or when I help myself :3
00:22:370 (2,3) - Fix blanket. Cool thanks
00:24:055 (3,4,1) - Perhaps, you could do something like this to improve the aesthetics more. Nahhh, it's fine
:::::
(((Just look at the placement. Had to compress the objects on the timeline to show these three.)))
00:34:842 (3) - I suggest putting more emphasis on this circle by increasing the DS a little bit. Same ^
00:35:516 (6,7,1) - I suggest decreasing the distance bet. 00:35:516 (6,7) - so that 00:35:853 (7,1) - would have a greater distance. Oh yaaa!
00:36:021 (1) - Needs to be emphasized imo. After fixing that ^, it was emphasized
01:09:055 (1) - Modify the curve here to improve the flow between 01:08:886 (7,1) - . fixed
01:17:145 (1,2) - Consider moving this upwards to improve flow. yes done.
01:23:549 (2) - imo, improve the slider shape. abanes intended to do that without purpose :< Imma fix it back.

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Awesome map!

Thanks for the mod :3

Yamicchi

1,175 posts

Joined May 2015

Yamicchi 2016-04-30T12:31:54+00:00

Alright, here's my mod :3
[Easy]
Check AIMod
00:00:460 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,1) - I think this may sounds better with the music. (The spinner ends at 00:08:044 - I forgot to mention that)

00:09:561 (2,3) - Can you change this somehow? The hitsounds and the music were really confused.
00:11:583 (4) - NC
00:12:426 (1) - no NC
00:14:280 (3) - NC
00:16:976 (7) - NC (I suggest this because you place all clickable, strong notes as slider ends, so yeah the nc has to be the next objects)
00:17:819 (1) - no NC
00:23:381 (3) - balance the slider maybe?
00:29:785 (1) - no NC
00:30:122 (2) - NC
00:30:459 (1) - no NC
00:32:819 (5) - NC
00:38:886 - I think the clap hitsound should be here, and not 00:39:224 (2)
00:42:089 (1) - NC is not necessary. Same as 00:44:785 (1)
01:02:819 (5) - NC, remove NC at 01:03:830 (1)
01:08:549 (2) - rotate this about 5-15* anti-clockwise to avoid bad overlap
01:17:313 (1) - remove NC, and NC at next slider.
01:25:572 (1) - slider starts at 01:25:403 - maybe?
[Normal]
00:09:729 (4,5) - sound weird and weren't comfortable with the rhythm. Fix it maybe?
00:12:594 (2) - ^. The sliders should be placed at 00:12:426 - And it depends on you to fix it.
00:18:830 - STRONGERRRR. (Needs to be emphasized)
00:22:033 (1) - rotate it anti-clockwise a bit to improve the flow.
00:36:864 (4) - fix blanket.
00:44::280 (6) - ^
00:51:021 (8) - ^
01:17:988 (4) - how about blanket too?
00:34:167 (1,2) - NC 1 and no NC 2
00:43:437 (5) - NC
00:48:830 (5) - NC
00:55:572 (1) - NC is not necessary.
01:09:055 (1) - no NC
01:10:572 (3) - NC
[Hard]
00:00:965 (2) - blanket blanket I love blanket <3 Please make it blanket <3
00:00:460 (1,3) - make them parallel.
00:02:651 (4) - Increase the distance a bit.
00:04:504 (1,2,3) - the rhythm is a bit uncomfortable. Please fix.
00:10:488 - If you intend to place this here, I suggest you to do the same as 00:14:533 - or don't at first and do at 2nd time. The difficult should be increase for every section of rhythm, that'd make the map better.
00:18:325 (2) - rotate clockwised it about 5-15* to improve flow.
00:18:830 (1) - needs to be emphasized by place it further or something. stack it is not a good idea.
00:27:342 - something is missing, hmmm... compare with 00:25:993 - and you'll see.
00:31:134 (4) - a bit to the right, and blanket maybe?
00:38:178 (2) - fix blanket
00:39:898 (2) - ^
00:41:246 (2,3) - make them the same, they'll look better.
00:56:077 (2) - move to the right to blanket it, I think.
01:00:797 (3) - didn't stack probably. Move it up 1 grid.
01:14:448 (1) - rotate anti-clockwised 5-15*
[Insane]
The first part should be like

00:09:224 (4) - its flow didn't good enough. Try to find a way to fix it
00:10:235 (2) - blanket
00:12:089 (5) - lower a bit, so 5,6,1 looks better.
00:31:976 (4) - turn off grid snap, then move it justttt a bit down, so 00:31:134 (5) - wouldn't be so awkward.
00:35:179 (5,6,7,8) - overmapped. Please fix.
00:35:853 (2) - Ctrl + J.
00:44:111 (3) - I suggest it to be stacked with 00:43:268 (4) - for a better jump.
00:50:010 (4,1) - more distance.
00:54:392 (1) - can be stacked with 00:55:066 (4) - try it.
01:07:201 (2,3,4,5,6) - overmapped
01:09:898 - the stream should be started here, it sounds better.
01:12:391 (1) - further from 01:12:426 - and closer to 01:13:268
01:14:448 (1) - should be emphasized. Make it further from 01:14:280 (4) - maybe?
01:23:718 (1,2,3,4) - this is like an easier Insane in this map, so I suggest decreasing the distance of this stream a bit.
[Yami's]
It's an update, not a mod lol

I'm an update

osu file format v14

[General]
AudioFilename: audio.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 51358
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 1

[Editor]
DistanceSpacing: 1.2
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 2.3

[Metadata]
Title:ambiguous
TitleUnicode:ambiguous
Artist:GARNiDELiA
ArtistUnicode:GARNiDELiA
Creator:abanes16
Version:Yami's Insane
Source:キルラキル
Tags:kill la kill op 2 akitoshi matoi ryuko [ shana yami ] maria
BeatmapID:963093
BeatmapSetID:441302

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:7
CircleSize:4
OverallDifficulty:8
ApproachRate:9
SliderMultiplier:1.69999992847443
SliderTickRate:1

[Events]
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//Break Periods
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
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[Aki-senpaii]
00:09:729 (1) - move to the left to blanket with 00:08:549 (1)
00:29:785 (4) - NC
00:30:628 (3,4,5) - move them right next to 00:31:302 (8) - and down a bit, just to avoid bad overlap
00:37:370 (3) - place it inside 00:38:212 (1) - 's slider body
00:40:235 (3,4,5) - 3,4 is too near, and 4,5 is too far? Fix it.
00:51:358 (5) - it deserves an NC.
00:55:066 (3) - move it down, to avoid overlap, and doing that doesn't affect the distance, so yeah just do it.
00:58:437 - I'm just thinking, but did you skip a beat here?
00:59:785 (1) - urgh, bad-shaped slider. Fix it
01:02:988 (2) - move it a bit down, it touched the stream.
01:06:864 (2) - ^
01:12:089 (1,2,1,2,1) - this part is a bit messy. I was thinking a way to help you, but I can't (or I was just too lazy to do it lol), so please find a way to clean it up.
I've done my mod holy sheep!

Akitoshi

2,687 posts

Joined August 2014

Akitoshi 2016-04-30T12:44:59+00:00

[ Shana Yami ] wrote:
[Aki-senpaii] I'm not sempie plz
00:09:729 (1) - move to the left to blanket with 00:08:549 (1) not anymore visible for each slider so not rly necessary lol
00:29:785 (4) - NC
00:30:628 (3,4,5) - move them right next to 00:31:302 (8) - and down a bit, just to avoid bad overlap have time enought on 00:29:785 (1,1,2) - to see the triples. And they are not rly overlapped with hit animations lol
00:37:370 (3) - place it inside 00:38:212 (1) - 's slider body tried
00:40:235 (3,4,5) - 3,4 is too near, and 4,5 is too far? Fix it. maybe fixed
00:51:358 (5) - it deserves an NC.
00:55:066 (3) - move it down, to avoid overlap, and doing that doesn't affect the distance, so yeah just do it.
00:58:437 - I'm just thinking, but did you skip a beat here? vocal 00:58:268 - deserves to emphasize more
00:59:785 (1) - urgh, bad-shaped slider. Fix it no why u hating it ;3;
01:02:988 (2) - move it a bit down, it touched the stream.
01:06:864 (2) - ^
01:12:089 (1,2,1,2,1) - this part is a bit messy. I was thinking a way to help you, but I can't (or I was just too lazy to do it lol), so please find a way to clean it up. 01:12:426 (1,2) - was rotated version of 01:12:089 (1,2) - so maybe I set 01:12:763 (1) - to the center of 01:12:258 (2,1) - now. they loves pp u kno

no reply = fixed thanks

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Akitoshi

2,687 posts

Joined August 2014

Akitoshi 2016-04-30T14:40:40+00:00

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he requested me via facebook for his easy

[Easy]

00:09:224 (2,3) - it fits more dood
SPOILER
00:11:920 (2,3) - how about dis, fits with ze guitar much betterino
SPOILER
00:27:426 (5) - NC
00:49:336 (3) - move to 00:49:167 - for le vocals?
01:01:808 (4) - maybe nerf this to 1/1 slider so you can put sth finished sliderheads on 01:02:482 - liek dis
SPOILER

[Yami's Insane]

00:29:785 (1) - it looks funnier with this xd
SPOILER
00:35:179 (5,6) - my ocd tells me it should be symmetrical lel
00:54:392 (1,2,3) - idk why there's triple here if the next part 00:56:920 (7,1) - is nott
01:25:235 (1) - move it to somewhere else like 48|89 because why not I love to see how ppl will choke on last note

[Akitoshit's Extra]

wao so shit plz re-map or delete now

Shishou

512 posts

Joined November 2014

Topic Starter

Shishou 2016-04-30T15:10:38+00:00

[ Shana Yami ] wrote:

Alright, here's my mod :3
[Easy]
Check AIMod
00:00:460 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,1) - I think this may sounds better with the music. (The spinner ends at 00:08:044 - I forgot to mention that)

00:09:561 (2,3) - Can you change this somehow? The hitsounds and the music were really confused.
00:11:583 (4) - NC
00:12:426 (1) - no NC
00:14:280 (3) - NC
00:16:976 (7) - NC (I suggest this because you place all clickable, strong notes as slider ends, so yeah the nc has to be the next objects)
00:17:819 (1) - no NC
00:23:381 (3) - balance the slider maybe?
00:29:785 (1) - no NC
00:30:122 (2) - NC
00:30:459 (1) - no NC
00:32:819 (5) - NC
00:38:886 - I think the clap hitsound should be here, and not 00:39:224 (2)
00:42:089 (1) - NC is not necessary. Same as 00:44:785 (1)
01:02:819 (5) - NC, remove NC at 01:03:830 (1)
01:08:549 (2) - rotate this about 5-15* anti-clockwise to avoid bad overlap
01:17:313 (1) - remove NC, and NC at next slider.
01:25:572 (1) - slider starts at 01:25:403 - maybe?
[Normal]
00:09:729 (4,5) - sound weird and weren't comfortable with the rhythm. Fix it maybe?
00:12:594 (2) - ^. The sliders should be placed at 00:12:426 - And it depends on you to fix it.
00:18:830 - STRONGERRRR. (Needs to be emphasized)
00:22:033 (1) - rotate it anti-clockwise a bit to improve the flow.
00:36:864 (4) - fix blanket.
00:44::280 (6) - ^
00:51:021 (8) - ^
01:17:988 (4) - how about blanket too?
00:34:167 (1,2) - NC 1 and no NC 2
00:43:437 (5) - NC
00:48:830 (5) - NC
00:55:572 (1) - NC is not necessary.
01:09:055 (1) - no NC
01:10:572 (3) - NC
[Hard]
00:00:965 (2) - blanket blanket I love blanket <3 Please make it blanket <3
00:00:460 (1,3) - make them parallel.
00:02:651 (4) - Increase the distance a bit.
00:04:504 (1,2,3) - the rhythm is a bit uncomfortable. Please fix.
00:10:488 - If you intend to place this here, I suggest you to do the same as 00:14:533 - or don't at first and do at 2nd time. The difficult should be increase for every section of rhythm, that'd make the map better.
00:18:325 (2) - rotate clockwised it about 5-15* to improve flow.
00:18:830 (1) - needs to be emphasized by place it further or something. stack it is not a good idea.
00:27:342 - something is missing, hmmm... compare with 00:25:993 - and you'll see.
00:31:134 (4) - a bit to the right, and blanket maybe?
00:38:178 (2) - fix blanket
00:39:898 (2) - ^
00:41:246 (2,3) - make them the same, they'll look better.
00:56:077 (2) - move to the right to blanket it, I think.
01:00:797 (3) - didn't stack probably. Move it up 1 grid.
01:14:448 (1) - rotate anti-clockwised 5-15*
[Insane]
The first part should be like

00:09:224 (4) - its flow didn't good enough. Try to find a way to fix it
00:10:235 (2) - blanket
00:12:089 (5) - lower a bit, so 5,6,1 looks better.
00:31:976 (4) - turn off grid snap, then move it justttt a bit down, so 00:31:134 (5) - wouldn't be so awkward.
00:35:179 (5,6,7,8) - overmapped. Please fix.
00:35:853 (2) - Ctrl + J.
00:44:111 (3) - I suggest it to be stacked with 00:43:268 (4) - for a better jump.
00:50:010 (4,1) - more distance.
00:54:392 (1) - can be stacked with 00:55:066 (4) - try it.
01:07:201 (2,3,4,5,6) - overmapped
01:09:898 - the stream should be started here, it sounds better.
01:12:391 (1) - further from 01:12:426 - and closer to 01:13:268
01:14:448 (1) - should be emphasized. Make it further from 01:14:280 (4) - maybe?
01:23:718 (1,2,3,4) - this is like an easier Insane in this map, so I suggest decreasing the distance of this stream a bit.
[Yami's]
It's an update, not a mod lol

I'm an update

osu file format v14

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[Aki-senpaii]
00:09:729 (1) - move to the left to blanket with 00:08:549 (1)
00:29:785 (4) - NC
00:30:628 (3,4,5) - move them right next to 00:31:302 (8) - and down a bit, just to avoid bad overlap
00:37:370 (3) - place it inside 00:38:212 (1) - 's slider body
00:40:235 (3,4,5) - 3,4 is too near, and 4,5 is too far? Fix it.
00:51:358 (5) - it deserves an NC.
00:55:066 (3) - move it down, to avoid overlap, and doing that doesn't affect the distance, so yeah just do it.
00:58:437 - I'm just thinking, but did you skip a beat here?
00:59:785 (1) - urgh, bad-shaped slider. Fix it
01:02:988 (2) - move it a bit down, it touched the stream.
01:06:864 (2) - ^
01:12:089 (1,2,1,2,1) - this part is a bit messy. I was thinking a way to help you, but I can't (or I was just too lazy to do it lol), so please find a way to clean it up.
I've done my mod holy sheep!

Thanks for the mod

Shishou

512 posts

Joined November 2014

Topic Starter

Shishou 2016-04-30T15:11:10+00:00

Akitoshi wrote:

[ Shana Yami ] wrote:
[Aki-senpaii] I'm not sempie plz
00:09:729 (1) - move to the left to blanket with 00:08:549 (1) not anymore visible for each slider so not rly necessary lol
00:29:785 (4) - NC
00:30:628 (3,4,5) - move them right next to 00:31:302 (8) - and down a bit, just to avoid bad overlap have time enought on 00:29:785 (1,1,2) - to see the triples. And they are not rly overlapped with hit animations lol
00:37:370 (3) - place it inside 00:38:212 (1) - 's slider body tried
00:40:235 (3,4,5) - 3,4 is too near, and 4,5 is too far? Fix it. maybe fixed
00:51:358 (5) - it deserves an NC.
00:55:066 (3) - move it down, to avoid overlap, and doing that doesn't affect the distance, so yeah just do it.
00:58:437 - I'm just thinking, but did you skip a beat here? vocal 00:58:268 - deserves to emphasize more
00:59:785 (1) - urgh, bad-shaped slider. Fix it no why u hating it ;3;
01:02:988 (2) - move it a bit down, it touched the stream.
01:06:864 (2) - ^
01:12:089 (1,2,1,2,1) - this part is a bit messy. I was thinking a way to help you, but I can't (or I was just too lazy to do it lol), so please find a way to clean it up. 01:12:426 (1,2) - was rotated version of 01:12:089 (1,2) - so maybe I set 01:12:763 (1) - to the center of 01:12:258 (2,1) - now. they loves pp u kno

no reply = fixed thanks

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updated kwek

Shishou

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Shishou 2016-04-30T15:12:34+00:00

Akitoshi wrote:
a
he requested me via facebook for his easy

[Easy]
00:09:224 (2,3) - it fits more dood
SPOILER
00:11:920 (2,3) - how about dis, fits with ze guitar much betterino
SPOILER
00:27:426 (5) - NC
00:49:336 (3) - move to 00:49:167 - for le vocals?
01:01:808 (4) - maybe nerf this to 1/1 slider so you can put sth finished sliderheads on 01:02:482 - liek dis
SPOILER
[Yami's Insane]
00:29:785 (1) - it looks funnier with this xd
SPOILER
00:35:179 (5,6) - my ocd tells me it should be symmetrical lel
00:54:392 (1,2,3) - idk why there's triple here if the next part 00:56:920 (7,1) - is nott
01:25:235 (1) - move it to somewhere else like 48|89 because why not I love to see how ppl will choke on last note
[Akitoshit's Extra]
wao so shit plz re-map or delete now

ur diff is not shit bakaaaaaaaaaaa >///<
Thanks for teh mod

Yamicchi

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Yamicchi 2016-04-30T23:03:07+00:00

Akitoshi wrote:
[Yami's Insane]
00:29:785 (1) - it looks funnier with this xd
SPOILER
00:35:179 (5,6) - my ocd tells me it should be symmetrical lel
00:54:392 (1,2,3) - idk why there's triple here if the next part 00:56:920 (7,1) - is nott
01:25:235 (1) - move it to somewhere else like 48|89 because why not I love to see how ppl will choke on last note

I'm sorry but no fix

) It's fine for now

Mekki

Mekki 2016-05-01T02:35:18+00:00

Why I didn't have a proper reply to my mod?

Akitoshi

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Akitoshi 2016-05-01T03:16:50+00:00

MkGuh wrote:
Why I didn't have a proper reply to my mod?

Abanes rood

Shishou

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Shishou 2016-05-01T04:51:02+00:00

gomenasai

Shishou

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Topic Starter

Shishou 2016-05-01T04:53:15+00:00

MkGuh wrote:
Hello! From modreqs :3

[General]
There is currently a lack of tags in the mapset! You could add much more things like opening, ending, anime, tv size
As it seems drum-hitwhistle3.wav is unused in the mapset, be sure to delete it if it's really not used in the set!
Combo colours are not set for Akitoshi's Extra.

[Easy]
Using OD 1 seems a bit bad, be careful with low values like that, even if it's a Easy diff, it should be a bit higher, like 2.
Your rhythm from here 00:08:549 (1) - to here 00:17:819 (2) - is very bad. You ignored a lot of strong beats and used bad polarity for what song provides. I did something that'd improve much more the quality on this part, you can take a look at the puush, but keep in mind that there are more problems like that, and it'd be good if you review your mapset to fix them. Just look on which strong beats are ignored through map and try to fix that as much as you can. Example for first part: http://puu.sh/orIAu/58ef90193b.jpg
00:03:156 (1,2,3) - There is a spacing problem here, you should use a distance of 0.9x aswell as you did on previous pattern.
00:08:549 (1) - Not enough recovery time after spinner, the minimum for a easy diff with this BPM should be of 3 beats!
00:20:684 (3) - This mini overlap feels a bit bad here, though this is very nazi, it'd be good having it fixed to more visual estability!
00:31:808 (3) - Flow could be improved here, maybe you could make (3) paralell to (1) instead of making it suddenly going down.
All your combos has a 2 stanzas patterning, what means that they are NCed in every two downbeats, which fits very good with your easy diff, but some times you break them, which is not good at all. Look on what parts you could improve your comboing, keep in mind that there are I'll list just some of them :>
00:22:033 (5) - Add here and remove here 00:23:381 (1).
00:28:774 (1) - Remove it from here.
00:44:785 (1) - ^
00:47:482 (1) - ^ And so goes on... Try to fix all of them based on what I said and on my examples. Just look at downbeats, in every two downbeats you should NC.
00:29:785 (2) - This strong beat can not be ignored on a slider end. I'd suggest replacing that for two notes, as it'd represent rhythm better.
00:40:740 (1) - Let's talk about those 1/2 now, as I said before, there are much more ways to don't ignore strong beats on a Easy diff and still create a good rhythm with good polarity. Take a look at another example, I did that till the spiner before kiai http://puu.sh/orJlu/1edda38927.jpg
00:53:549 (3) - Same thing occurs here, the 1/2 feels weird, but at this part is easier to fix, you just need to short the slider to here 00:54:055 (3).
00:54:392 (4,5,1) - Pay attention to vocals here and see what you could do based on all my examples XD
Well, much things could be improved on this diff. The patterns are one of those, like, better slider shapes, better blankets and etc Rhythm is quite bad though, you must be able to fix it based on what I said, and comboing is very bad too especially on kiai. Just take a look through your map and good luck with it!

[Normal]
00:00:460 (1) - Why did you use distance of 0.9x at this part and then on other parts it is back to 0.8x? I recommend using 0.9x or even 1x for the whole map, without changes. Be sure to take that in consideration!
00:01:976 (3) - This slider could be a bit more curved to fit with your patterning style. NOTE: same here 00:02:651 (4).
00:08:212 (1) - Same on easy! For normal, the recovery time should be at least of 2 beats, 1 seems bad.
00:11:246 (1) - Comboing seems inconsistent here too, I guess you should now how to fix it already, as I said for easy too! 00:11:246 (1) - Add it here, remove it from here 00:12:426 (4) and add it here 00:13:943 (1).
00:22:033 (6) - Same about combo
00:27:426 (1,2) - This pattern could be more polished, try to making slider shapes equals to be able to blanket those!
00:56:415 (5) - Moving this slider to 00:56:246 would fit the rhythm better imo, as you wouldn't ignoring strong vocals.
Well... I'll not repeat myself again, same things of Easy applies to here. Rhythm is much better on this difficulty, but for sure comboing and patterns need serious work.

[Hard]
00:02:482 (5) - Why did you make spacing higher there? There is such no reason for doing that, and it flows very bad too.
00:04:504 (3,4,5,6,1) - Having such of a inconsistent spacing like that here for no reason seems very bad and makes your map quite unpolished, just use normal DS here.
00:13:606 (1,2) - Switch NCs here.
00:15:122 (6) - Seems like there is a missing NC here. NOTE: same here 00:17:819 (5).
00:14:617 (4,5,6) - Again, same spacing issue. Why spacing is lower there?
00:19:336 (1) - As a 1/1 it needs to be spaced more from (9).
00:24:392 (1,2) - NCs should be swaped here.
00:51:695 (1) - This would be easily confused with 1/2, you should space them more, it is the start of kiai, rhythm is 1/1 and it has spacing of 1/2.

Well, same complaints about Easy and Normal goes for this diff. It needs much polishing in patterns, as there are a lot of spacing inconsistency that doesn't seems purposital and don't fit nothing. Comboing also goes crazy, in some parts you NC in 1 downbeat, then in other there are 2 downbeats when they are still same sound. I suggest remaking all of those things, but, rhythm is a bit better here if you wanna know though.

[Light Insane]
As a Light Insane, it should be easier, honestly this doesn't have much difference than your actual Insane so it seems quite weird having this diff on the set, as it wont help in nothing on the spread.
00:00:460 (1) - Spacing is still inconsistent in this whole part till the spinner. The 1/2's are like very big with no reason (overdone patterns) and 1/1 are smaller than 1/2. That is very non sense with the aspects of song, so I'd suggest you having normal spacing there.
00:19:673 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - This pattern seems very unpolished and uncomfortable to play. There are much more ways to improve it, just don't make them too tight. NOTE: same for those 00:22:707 (3,4,5,6) - 00:24:729 (1,2,3,4) - and all other patterns that you did like that.
00:50:684 (1,2,3,1) - Those streams seems overmapped at those parts, keep in my mind that this a Light Insane so this part should be a bit easier than insane. I'd suggest a rhyhtm like that: http://puu.sh/ou4mP/1a436a0d00.jpg
00:52:538 (3,4) - Make space lower here, it flows bad and neither Insane have such high like that.
I won't list too many things, as this diff still needs to be improved too. It's much better than lowest diffs, but comboing is still inconsistent (I stopped listing them but they are bad too), and some rhythms pattern spacing etc needs to be improved!

[Insane]
00:02:313 (2) - Please please... Make spacing here normal, making it higher doesn't seems reasonable.
00:08:381 (3) - Completely overmapped, delete this note, if you check in song you'll see that there is no song on it.
00:16:639 (1) - Make this slider 1/2, having it extended to 3/4 seems bad, as beat clearly ends in 1/2.
00:30:712 (3,1) - If you want to keep them as 1/4, then spacing for sure needs to be lower. Readability would easily tell that this is 1/2, as it is not.
00:37:538 (3) - For better readability, space (3) more of (2), as (2) is 1/4 and it has same spacing as (3).
00:51:190 (9,1,2,3,4) - All of those notes are overmapped with song, song doesn't provide streams like that. Delete all those highlighted notes and just keep this one 00:51:358 (1).
00:59:533 (7,9) - Those are overmapped tho, there is no sound on those 1/4. Delete it.
This is the best diff made by you in this mapset. It has potential to be ranked, but comboing needs to be improved too, some overmap problems and patterns too. Extra seems fine, as I don't mod them, I won't touch on it, just give a quick look. Anyways, GL with map!

Thanks for the mod No reply=fixed
Watashi aishiteru dakara nee
baka >///<

Janpai

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Janpai 2016-05-01T10:08:09+00:00

People would be glad if you reply properly x_x

Shishou

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Shishou 2016-05-01T10:41:08+00:00

ohh, sorry

Yamicchi

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Yamicchi 2016-05-02T00:35:17+00:00

abanes16 wrote:
ohh, sorry

By answering each and every line of the mod, not only Quote them lol

Shishou

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Shishou 2016-05-02T03:40:45+00:00

[ Shana Yami ] wrote:
abanes16 wrote:
ohh, sorry
By answering each and every line of the mod, not only Quote them lol

zeliaR

430 posts

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zeliaR 2016-05-04T08:08:43+00:00

helo

[Easy]

00:58:437 (3) - remove NC
01:02:482 (5) - lagay ka naman NC dito
01:03:830 (1) - remove NC

[Normal]

00:04:336 (3) - fix blanket
00:11:920 (2) - gawin mo nalang straight slider to tapos tapat mo sa (3)
00:34:842 (8) - remove NC
00:36:864 (3) - blanket
00:44:280 (2) - ^
00:59:111 (4) - remove NC
01:22:538 (3) - ^

[Hard]

00:32:819 (1) - blanket
00:34:167 (1) - ^
00:39:224 (4) - stack mo nlang to sa (1)
00:51:358 (4) - remove nc des
00:58:437 (4) - ^
01:11:752 (1) - fix blanket
01:24:729 (4) - remove nc

[Insane]

00:34:504 (2,4) - gamitin mo yung distance snap
00:35:431 (5) - ^
00:37:201 (2) - ^
00:57:089 (1) - fix blanket
01:12:426 (2) - remove NC
01:16:302 (2,3) - ctrl+G tapos ayusin mo nalang yung hitsound
01:23:718 (1) - remove nc

[Yami's Insane]

00:29:448 (3) - remove nc
00:51:695 (1) - finish hitsound
00:56:752 (7) - too close from (6) note
00:57:089 (1) - blanket

[Akitoshi's Extra]

OD8.5 please XD
00:12:257 (7) - stack mo dito sa 00:11:583 (3)
01:25:235 (1) - pwede mo i stack to sa 01:24:224 (4) - (optional lang)

goodluck bh3 <3

Sakary

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Sakary 2016-05-04T11:26:59+00:00

if only i can move my overdose and rain diff here. lol!

Akitoshi

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Akitoshi 2016-05-04T11:38:54+00:00

Misaka 10032 wrote:
[Akitoshi's Extra]

OD8.5 please XD you guys just want extra pp aaaaaaa
00:12:257 (7) - stack mo dito sa 00:11:583 (3) set that for opposite direction with 00:11:920 (6) - so not meant to be stacked there
01:25:235 (1) - pwede mo i stack to sa 01:24:224 (4) - (optional lang) current one have more potential for choking ppl :^)

@abanes paki taasan nlng od sa diff ko ng 8.5 thanks

Shishou

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Shishou 2016-05-04T13:34:46+00:00

Misaka 10032 wrote:
helo

[Easy]

00:58:437 (3) - remove NC ok
01:02:482 (5) - lagay ka naman NC dito ok
01:03:830 (1) - remove NC ok

[Normal]

00:04:336 (3) - fix blanket ok
00:11:920 (2) - gawin mo nalang straight slider to tapos tapat mo sa (3) ok
00:34:842 (8) - remove NC ok
00:36:864 (3) - blanket ok
00:44:280 (2) - ^ ok
00:59:111 (4) - remove NC ok
01:22:538 (3) - ^ ok

[Hard]

00:32:819 (1) - blanket nah
00:34:167 (1) - ^ ok
00:39:224 (4) - stack mo nlang to sa (1) nah
00:51:358 (4) - remove nc des sabi ni asagi lagyan daw ng nc dyan eh
00:58:437 (4) - ^ ok
01:11:752 (1) - fix blanket ok
01:24:729 (4) - remove nc ok

[Insane]

00:34:504 (2,4) - gamitin mo yung distance snap ok
00:35:431 (5) - ^ nah
00:37:201 (2) - ^ oke
00:57:089 (1) - fix blanket wat
01:12:426 (2) - remove NC oke
01:16:302 (2,3) - ctrl+G tapos ayusin mo nalang yung hitsound nah
01:23:718 (1) - remove nc oke

goodluck bh3 <3

labyu bhe salamat sa mod <3

Shishou

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Topic Starter

Shishou 2016-05-04T13:39:31+00:00

Akitoshi wrote:
Misaka 10032 wrote:
[Akitoshi's Extra]

OD8.5 please XD you guys just want extra pp aaaaaaa
00:12:257 (7) - stack mo dito sa 00:11:583 (3) set that for opposite direction with 00:11:920 (6) - so not meant to be stacked there
01:25:235 (1) - pwede mo i stack to sa 01:24:224 (4) - (optional lang) current one have more potential for choking ppl :^)
@abanes paki taasan nlng od sa diff ko ng 8.5 thanks

ok my labs //slapped

Shishou

512 posts

Joined November 2014

Topic Starter

Shishou 2016-05-05T02:21:22+00:00

Hi_Hello wrote:
if only i can move my overdose and rain diff here. lol!

lipat mo kung gusto mo xD pero di ako sigurado na ma rarank ko tong map ko

Yamicchi

1,175 posts

Joined May 2015

Yamicchi 2016-05-05T06:22:05+00:00

Misaka 10032 wrote:
[Yami's Insane]

00:29:448 (3) - remove nc SV changed. Why not NC?
00:51:695 (1) - finish hitsound Okay.
00:56:752 (7) - too close from (6) note fixed
00:57:089 (1) - blanket yea

such dumb errors ;w;

I'm update's father

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