Kuo Kyoka wrote:
sorry for late, i just bought a mouse so i can back to modding again Its fine, Sir KK! Glad that you have a new mouse![]()
[Generals]
I need metadata check
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Since this map is already good enough so I gonna go though everything by small suggestion, I hope it help
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[4K Normal]
if you follow vocal and add 2 notes on here so do 00:11:210 - but it will be very hard for a normal diff so i would suggest to remove a note on 00:11:533 - I changed my mind, applied!
00:17:500 (17500|2,17662|2) - should be jack yes but the next up is also jack bass too, you might need to follow it but while only for normal diff i think this jack is not necessary. Fixed!
00:30:403 (30403|2,30726|0,31049|3,31210|1) - if you're following piano sound so maybe remove them, and the recym sound start from 00:31:694 - you can keep it, it caught a little weird for me at the moment (because you didn't follow that hihat sound like as 7K NM) since there are no more piano sound after the piano phase, I decided to do the hihats. Without those notes, it feels quite empty on that part and that feels awkward for me. But with the notes, it does represent not only the hihats, but it also emphasizes the vocal which making it more consistent.
00:42:016 - add a note on here for snare like you did on 00:40:726 - Fixed!
for ending, i think add a note on here 01:29:113 - for snare would be better than let it like the begining great idea! in the beginning its just a tom, but this time its a snare. Fixed!
01:32:339 (92339|1,92500|1) - 01:34:920 (94920|2,95081|2) - 00:20:081 (20081|1,20242|1) - consider this part Fixed as well Sir. Thanks!
[7K Normal]
00:06:371 (6371|4,6371|2) - i think follow the "oh oh" soud might fit if you let it on [26] like as 00:05:887 (5887|1,5887|5) - Fixed!
00:11:533 (11533|1,11533|2) - same reason i mentioned Applied!
00:19:436 (19436|5,19436|2) - hmm, while it's still on beginning, add note like this not really help, according to 00:19:436 (19436|2,19436|5) - too the double notes represent for the strong sounds;guitar+cymbals impact. I also did it in 4K NM.
00:37:339 (37339|2) - consider to make it to hold and end on 00:37:662 - for melody flow I've been actually thinking about this for a long time. Fixed!
00:42:016 - add a note for snare added~!
01:03:307 (63307|5) - since you follow jack for guitar so maybe move this note to 4th which for mini jack, that's would help moved~
01:11:049 - missed a note for snare Fixed!
01:15:565 (75565|0) - I think this note isn't worth, better remove it because you added 2 notes for cymbal now 2 notes for 01:15:887 (75887|5) - this (this one actually loud beat pitch) Removed~
01:15:887 (75887|5) - missing notes here too I think you meant 01:21:371 - but fixed!
01:29:113 - add a note on here for snare which help ending a little harder yep added as well!
[4K Hard]
No problems found here, perfect for me Thank you so much Sir! That makes me happy![]()
[7K Hard]
00:42:178 (42178|6,42258|5,42339|4) - try to rearrange some patterns here, it sound fine but 00:41:694 (41694|6,41855|5,42016|4,42178|6,42258|5,42339|4) - this patterns somehow feel awkward, maybe give a weird feeling while playing, imo rearranged now sir! Thanks!
The rest are fine to me
[4K Insane]
00:31:694 (31694|1,31855|2) - it would be better if you let it on same column for hihat sound nice idea, applied!
01:16:210 - you can add a note on here to prefer the bass sound right here, it sound louder than the rest, similar with 01:21:371 - this is kinda spiky if I add a note, I think I'll just leave it single as it focuses on that 1/4 melody
[7K Insane]
00:17:823 - add a note for snare to make a different from other 2 notes bass
00:19:113 - this too
00:20:403 -
(it's fine because one note for bass, one for guitar and one for snare) (similar with 00:21:694 - but cymbal insteal of snare)
00:31:694 (31694|5,31855|4) - make them as jack so it can be prefer with hihat sound more better
01:11:210 - add a note on here for cymbal
01:12:500 - same here
01:13:952 - 01:07:339 - 01:08:791 - 01:09:920 - 01:17:662 - 01:19:113 - 01:20:242 - 01:21:533 - 01:22:823 - 01:24:274 - Your 4K Insane used 3 notes but also you added 3 notes for the begin kiai why not these too, i think it would be fit enough
01:32:662 - 01:33:952 - 01:35:242 - add note, reason i mentioned before APPLIED ALL! very helpful Sir!
[4K Awakened]
i don't think this 00:20:968 (20968|0,20968|1) - for bass is worth, better let it one note only applied!
why you add note on 00:20:968 (20968|1,20968|0) - when you didnt on 00:30:242 - there's no bassdrum sound at 00:30:242 -
00:33:226 - 00:34:516 - 00:35:807 - 00:37:097 - why this part is different than 00:38:387 - 00:39:678 - etc? bass is on 00:33:226 - and hihat on 00:33:145 - , the rest are same that make sense! thank you so much! fixed
01:09:436 (69436|3,69436|1,69436|2,69516|0,69597|2,69597|1,69678|3,69758|1,69758|0,69758|2,69839|3,69920|1,69920|0,69920|2,70000|3) - this part hmm, a little hard due to 01:09:436 (69436|2,69436|1,69597|1,69597|2,69758|1,69758|2,69920|2,69920|1) - i would recomended you to rearrange some this is the best arrangement for its density, making it [2,4] or [1,3] for doubles would be more awkward and harder. If I tend to do the doubles for [1,2] or [3,4] it would be very repetitive.
01:16:371 - try to add a note on here for cymbal I actually avoided to add note as it will result mini jack in the chorus. In this way, the players can enjoy the chorus jump/handtreams without a 'fun killer' mini jack
[7K Awakened]
00:31:694 (31694|4,31855|2) - like i mentioned before Fixed~
The rest of the map fit the playbility and well-mapped Thank you so muuuuch! Sir KK~
a really good map, call me later when you done then
Thank you so much for the check, Sir KK! For once I thought the map is really dead since the map already graveyarded yesterday and I just revived it
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