Kuo Kyoka wrote:

sorry for late, i just bought a mouse so i can back to modding again Its fine, Sir KK! Glad that you have a new mouse

[Generals]
I need metadata check

I got the metadata from its official youtube video https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=IRK6hDce_oY

additional infos:
• http://store.payloadz.com/details/20843 ... ly-an.html
• http://amasawakobo.storenvy.com/product ... d-download


Since this map is already good enough so I gonna go though everything by small suggestion, I hope it help
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[4K Normal]
if you follow vocal and add 2 notes on here so do 00:11:210 - but it will be very hard for a normal diff so i would suggest to remove a note on 00:11:533 - I changed my mind, applied!

00:17:500 (17500|2,17662|2) - should be jack yes but the next up is also jack bass too, you might need to follow it but while only for normal diff i think this jack is not necessary. Fixed!

00:30:403 (30403|2,30726|0,31049|3,31210|1) - if you're following piano sound so maybe remove them, and the recym sound start from 00:31:694 - you can keep it, it caught a little weird for me at the moment (because you didn't follow that hihat sound like as 7K NM) since there are no more piano sound after the piano phase, I decided to do the hihats. Without those notes, it feels quite empty on that part and that feels awkward for me. But with the notes, it does represent not only the hihats, but it also emphasizes the vocal which making it more consistent.

00:42:016 - add a note on here for snare like you did on 00:40:726 - Fixed!

for ending, i think add a note on here 01:29:113 - for snare would be better than let it like the begining great idea! in the beginning its just a tom, but this time its a snare. Fixed!

01:32:339 (92339|1,92500|1) - 01:34:920 (94920|2,95081|2) - 00:20:081 (20081|1,20242|1) - consider this part Fixed as well Sir. Thanks!

[7K Normal]
00:06:371 (6371|4,6371|2) - i think follow the "oh oh" soud might fit if you let it on [26] like as 00:05:887 (5887|1,5887|5) - Fixed!

00:11:533 (11533|1,11533|2) - same reason i mentioned Applied!

00:19:436 (19436|5,19436|2) - hmm, while it's still on beginning, add note like this not really help, according to 00:19:436 (19436|2,19436|5) - too the double notes represent for the strong sounds;guitar+cymbals impact. I also did it in 4K NM.

00:37:339 (37339|2) - consider to make it to hold and end on 00:37:662 - for melody flow I've been actually thinking about this for a long time. Fixed!

00:42:016 - add a note for snare added~!

01:03:307 (63307|5) - since you follow jack for guitar so maybe move this note to 4th which for mini jack, that's would help moved~

01:11:049 - missed a note for snare Fixed!

01:15:565 (75565|0) - I think this note isn't worth, better remove it because you added 2 notes for cymbal now 2 notes for 01:15:887 (75887|5) - this (this one actually loud beat pitch) Removed~

01:15:887 (75887|5) - missing notes here too I think you meant 01:21:371 - but fixed!

01:29:113 - add a note on here for snare which help ending a little harder yep added as well!

[4K Hard]
No problems found here, perfect for me Thank you so much Sir! That makes me happy

[7K Hard]
00:42:178 (42178|6,42258|5,42339|4) - try to rearrange some patterns here, it sound fine but 00:41:694 (41694|6,41855|5,42016|4,42178|6,42258|5,42339|4) - this patterns somehow feel awkward, maybe give a weird feeling while playing, imo rearranged now sir! Thanks!
The rest are fine to me

[4K Insane]
00:31:694 (31694|1,31855|2) - it would be better if you let it on same column for hihat sound nice idea, applied!
01:16:210 - you can add a note on here to prefer the bass sound right here, it sound louder than the rest, similar with 01:21:371 - this is kinda spiky if I add a note, I think I'll just leave it single as it focuses on that 1/4 melody

[7K Insane]
00:17:823 - add a note for snare to make a different from other 2 notes bass
00:19:113 - this too
00:20:403 -
(it's fine because one note for bass, one for guitar and one for snare) (similar with 00:21:694 - but cymbal insteal of snare)
00:31:694 (31694|5,31855|4) - make them as jack so it can be prefer with hihat sound more better
01:11:210 - add a note on here for cymbal
01:12:500 - same here
01:13:952 - 01:07:339 - 01:08:791 - 01:09:920 - 01:17:662 - 01:19:113 - 01:20:242 - 01:21:533 - 01:22:823 - 01:24:274 - Your 4K Insane used 3 notes but also you added 3 notes for the begin kiai why not these too, i think it would be fit enough
01:32:662 - 01:33:952 - 01:35:242 - add note, reason i mentioned before APPLIED ALL! very helpful Sir!

[4K Awakened]
i don't think this 00:20:968 (20968|0,20968|1) - for bass is worth, better let it one note only applied!

why you add note on 00:20:968 (20968|1,20968|0) - when you didnt on 00:30:242 - there's no bassdrum sound at 00:30:242 -

00:33:226 - 00:34:516 - 00:35:807 - 00:37:097 - why this part is different than 00:38:387 - 00:39:678 - etc? bass is on 00:33:226 - and hihat on 00:33:145 - , the rest are same that make sense! thank you so much! fixed

01:09:436 (69436|3,69436|1,69436|2,69516|0,69597|2,69597|1,69678|3,69758|1,69758|0,69758|2,69839|3,69920|1,69920|0,69920|2,70000|3) - this part hmm, a little hard due to 01:09:436 (69436|2,69436|1,69597|1,69597|2,69758|1,69758|2,69920|2,69920|1) - i would recomended you to rearrange some this is the best arrangement for its density, making it [2,4] or [1,3] for doubles would be more awkward and harder. If I tend to do the doubles for [1,2] or [3,4] it would be very repetitive.

01:16:371 - try to add a note on here for cymbal I actually avoided to add note as it will result mini jack in the chorus. In this way, the players can enjoy the chorus jump/handtreams without a 'fun killer' mini jack

[7K Awakened]
00:31:694 (31694|4,31855|2) - like i mentioned before Fixed~
The rest of the map fit the playbility and well-mapped Thank you so muuuuch! Sir KK~

a really good map, call me later when you done then

Kuo Kyoka wrote:

Hmm, if that so: according to http://amasawakobo.storenvy.com/product ... d-download, so metadata should be:

Artist: Iced Blade
Title: 宙の旋律 -the melody of the cosmos- feat.lily-an (OP Cut)
Romanised Title: Sora no Senritsu -the melody of the cosmos- feat.lily-an (OP Cut)

Remember to remove some tag if you added title then

Kuo Kyoka wrote:

Iced Blade - Sora no Senritsu -the melody of the cosmos- feat.lily-an (OP Cut) [OsuMania modding]

[Generals]
- BPM: Okay
- Offset: Okay
- AiMod: Okay
- Tags: Okay
- BG: Okay
- Kiai: Okay
- Metadata: Okay
- Folder’s problem: None
- Hitsound: Okay
- Timing: Okay
- Other: Okay

Bubbled
(How we can even breath in space so that we can make love in there?)

Congratulations!

SpectorDG wrote:

I smell PP ♥

• 
  [General]

1. Song Setup & Metadata
   Song setup has no problem and also metadata is fine . . . as Kuo Kyoka mentioned above, i can trust it and i think it's fine enough
2. Audio & Hitsounds
   191kbps audio . . . it's fine, and not contains any delayed hitsound (+5ms) and all of hitsound is above 100ms
   but your normal-hitnormal seems too loud, it's even more louder when you're playing the highest diffs . . . so, i reduce it a bit on here http://puu.sh/pNwvK/cfc4cc23d5.wav
3. BPM & Timing
   all fine
4. Background
   1366x768 (16:9) screen . . . good
   
   |1|2|3|4|
   
   [4K Normal]
5. 00:16:533 (16533|3,16694|1,16855|2,17016|3) - just my sugestion, but i think a LN will be more suitabe for excahange that drum roll sound, since the 1/2 drum and guitar invasion is already end at here 00:16:533 - so, maybe it will be more good if you try some different pattern to make different feels
6. 00:19:758 (19758|0) - delete this note ? it would be more good to feel if you do some break on here
7. 00:41:371 (41371|1) - if you following vocal, it should be end at here 00:41:694 - but i feel the bgm itself have a difference in length, so if you keep it that should be fine too
8. seriously i can't find anything more . . . very good Normal diff here
   
   [7K Normal]
9. 00:18:145 (18145|6,18468|5,18791|4,19113|3) - hmm, i don't really get what kind of sound that you're try to follow on here, ithink LN would be only suitable in this part 00:18:307 (18307|3,18468|5,18629|2,18791|4) - because it have some extra long sound
10. 00:20:726 (20726|6) - again this time . . . maybe it would be more fit if you use LN to expressing this kind of sound only 00:21:049 (21049|5,21210|2,21371|4) -
11. 00:30:081 - just missing an important sound here ?
12. 01:32:984 (92984|0,93307|1,93629|2,93952|3) - 01:35:565 (95565|0,95887|1,96210|2) - same as my beginning mod, this LN are still questionable
    
    [4K Hard]
13. 01:22:420 - add a note on 4th column for keep the streams alive, yea since you've too much using tri-note 1/4 with breaks, i think we need some difference feels on here
14. 01:25:000 - and 01:25:645 - yea, same reason as above, it's more better if you keep the stream still alive just for this part only . . . if you don't mind, i will suggest like this http://puu.sh/pNxLY/28b9c608af.jpg xD
15. perfect diff, nothing more to find :3
    
    [7K Hard]
16. Perfect diff already
    
    [4K Insane]
17. 00:18:145 (18145|0,18468|1,18791|3,19113|2) - and 00:20:726 (20726|0,21049|1,21371|2) - same question as my beginning mod on 7K Normal
18. 00:51:613 (51613|3) - delete this one ? i didn't hear anything here . . . it just a blank part like on this part 00:51:129 - turn off your hitsound for more sure about this :3
19. 01:16:049 (76049|2,76129|1) - how about to make this section to be have 2 notes ? since that part is have extra instrument sound like on 00:16:533 -
20. 01:32:984 (92984|3,93307|0,93629|2,93952|1) - 01:35:565 (95565|2,95887|3,96210|0) - owo)
21. Naisu!!!!
    
    [7K Insane]
22. 00:18:145 (18145|2,18468|0,18791|6,19113|3) - 00:20:726 (20726|3,21049|6,21371|0) - same question
23. 00:51:613 - delete 2 note on them or reduce it tobe 1 note only . . . well, I even didn't hear any clear sound on this part, and also it just hihat sound but even it's not clear enough to be mapped with 1 note or even 2 notes, not like on this part 00:52:581 - (this applied to both Awakened diffs too)
    
    [4K & 7K Awakened]
24. Clear and Perfect, but pls take a look my second mod on 7K Insane owo)

[ A v a l o n ] wrote:

Qualify Check

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• 
  [General]

1. Song Setup & Metadata
   Song setup has no problem and also metadata is fine . . . as Kuo Kyoka mentioned above, i can trust it and i think it's fine enough thankies!
2. Audio & Hitsounds
   191kbps audio . . . it's fine, and not contains any delayed hitsound (+5ms) and all of hitsound is above 100ms
   but your normal-hitnormal seems too loud, it's even more louder when you're playing the highest diffs . . . so, i reduce it a bit on here http://puu.sh/pNwvK/cfc4cc23d5.wav thank you for the effort of reducing its volume!
3. BPM & Timing
   all fine
4. Background
   1366x768 (16:9) screen . . . good
   
   |1|2|3|4|
   
   [4K Normal]
5. 00:16:533 (16533|3,16694|1,16855|2,17016|3) - just my sugestion, but i think a LN will be more suitabe for excahange that drum roll sound, since the 1/2 drum and guitar invasion is already end at here 00:16:533 - so, maybe it will be more good if you try some different pattern to make different feels good idea! I changed it to LN and added a note beside it since snare + guitar which I really think it fits
   
6. 00:19:758 (19758|0) - delete this note ? it would be more good to feel if you do some break on here would love to but I find it empty without the note there since there's a bass drum sound.
   
7. 00:41:371 (41371|1) - if you following vocal, it should be end at here 00:41:694 - but i feel the bgm itself have a difference in length, so if you keep it that should be fine too I decided to keep it Sir, I'm following the synth :3
   
8. seriously i can't find anything more . . . very good Normal diff here thank you so much for the compliment
   
   [7K Normal]
9. 00:18:145 (18145|6,18468|5,18791|4,19113|3) - hmm, i don't really get what kind of sound that you're try to follow on here, ithink LN would be only suitable in this part 00:18:307 (18307|3,18468|5,18629|2,18791|4) - because it have some extra long sound its the guitar sound sir, I can clearly hear it here @@ the strumming of the guitar with pitch starts at 00:18:145 - and it has the sound length of 1/2
   
10. 00:20:726 (20726|6) - again this time . . . maybe it would be more fit if you use LN to expressing this kind of sound only 00:21:049 (21049|5,21210|2,21371|4) - same reason as above @@
    
11. 00:30:081 - just missing an important sound here ? nice notice! added
    
12. 01:32:984 (92984|0,93307|1,93629|2,93952|3) - 01:35:565 (95565|0,95887|1,96210|2) - same as my beginning mod, this LN are still questionable same reasoning as before
    
    [4K Hard]
13. 01:22:420 - add a note on 4th column for keep the streams alive, yea since you've too much using tri-note 1/4 with breaks, i think we need some difference feels on here fixed~
    
14. 01:25:000 - and 01:25:645 - yea, same reason as above, it's more better if you keep the stream still alive just for this part only . . . if you don't mind, i will suggest like this http://puu.sh/pNxLY/28b9c608af.jpg xD seems cool~! applied!
    
15. perfect diff, nothing more to find :3 thanks! >w<)b
    
    [7K Hard]
16. Perfect diff already omg thank you! @@
    
    [4K Insane]
17. 00:18:145 (18145|0,18468|1,18791|3,19113|2) - and 00:20:726 (20726|0,21049|1,21371|2) - same question as my beginning mod on 7K Normal same reason as previous, guitar strum 1/2 long sound. I even double checked it with 25% playback rate and I can hear it clearly sir @@
    
18. 00:51:613 (51613|3) - delete this one ? i didn't hear anything here . . . it just a blank part like on this part 00:51:129 - turn off your hitsound for more sure about this :3 I hear a tom sound here similar to the sound at 00:51:533 - its just a low tom. Around 4 modders mentioned about this part and they can hear the same tom as well~
    
19. 01:16:049 (76049|2,76129|1) - how about to make this section to be have 2 notes ? since that part is have extra instrument sound like on 00:16:533 - I think I'll keep it as single notes only for that melody part. Also the difference at 00:16:533 - that those double notes are snares while the selected single notes are just low toms
    
20. 01:32:984 (92984|3,93307|0,93629|2,93952|1) - 01:35:565 (95565|2,95887|3,96210|0) - owo) same reason as before ;;
    
21. Naisu!!!! thaaankks!
    
    [7K Insane]
22. 00:18:145 (18145|2,18468|0,18791|6,19113|3) - 00:20:726 (20726|3,21049|6,21371|0) - same question same reasoning as previous ;;
    
23. 00:51:613 - delete 2 note on them or reduce it tobe 1 note only . . . well, I even didn't hear any clear sound on this part, and also it just hihat sound but even it's not clear enough to be mapped with 1 note or even 2 notes, not like on this part 00:52:581 - (this applied to both Awakened diffs too) its a tom sound, and yes I agree that it should be only single note than double notes because of its not that audiblity. Changed to single notes! thanks!
    
    [4K & 7K Awakened]
24. Clear and Perfect, but pls take a look my second mod on 7K Insane owo) 4K Awakened's already a single note while Fixed the 7K Awakened's! Thanks!

Such a perfect pattern for this map, it's the first time my BN check are very short like this qwq
call me again

[ A v a l o n ] wrote:

Once question again owo
why you put "inconsistency" green lines around in this time ? 00:21:855 - to 00:22:662 - it's different placing in all diffs (except normal diff)
well, i know you use different sample, but can you just put that into same timing with consistent ? . . . i think it's no need to be different place in this time, since it just a break parts

yea, just that . . .
if you have different think, i need your explanation sir >w<)b

[ A v a l o n ] wrote:

Yup, all things are fixed and . . . bla bla bla too much talk lol
here is da Qualify

good luck Arcwin >w<)/

-SoraGami- wrote:

grats arc >w<

Rivals_7 wrote:

Gratz Master Arcwin

Aras25 wrote:

Goho owo
all hail weeb J - song
gratz arcwin senpai =w=)b

Feerum wrote:

Grats

Gravey- wrote:

Fukken congratz m8 HAHAHA =w=)b

#MarayIsAliveNotDedYet! ;w;

Kuo Kyoka wrote:

woah, congrats <3