doykyoto wrote:

m4m req yawn~ sorry for bad english. not good at english at all. hope you understand it.
ur map is ur style. i just find the pattern that can be improved
just 2 diffs, but i hope it will be worth enough for your turn to mod :p

col |0|1|2|3|

try 4k Insane first

00:05:565 (5565|2,6210|1) and 00:10:081 (10081|0,10726|1) hmm... this ln is unecessary imo .. i mean. if u want to give ln, just follow the instrument like the LNs before 00:04:920.. like the LNs at 00:01:694 (1694|3,1855|0,2016|3) and 00:02:662 (2662|3,2984|0) just consider this.. I don't think they are necessary as they can be clearly heard and the jumps there can be executed normally.

i think there is no instrument at 00:14:516 (14516|1,14597|0,14678|2) . consider to delete. consistency is a key. I can clearly hear the double pedals there. I'm using headset btw.

00:17:500 , 00:18:145 , 00:18:791 , 00:19:436 , 00:20:081 and something like that lazy to copy-paste lol. consider to give this a triple note like you did at 00:17:016 for keep the consistency. this is Insane diff. cruel pattern is not problem, but just try to make a neat pattern. cruel dont mean mess. it is just hard to play imo. i think u understand it. your time links are broken lol. If you will listen carefully, those triple notes are for strong cymbals sound. I don't just put them without reason and it is neat.

00:22:984 (22984|1,22984|2) and something like this. consider to change it to single note. or give this 00:23:468 and something like that a double note since the sound are same loud like 00:22:984 (22984|1,22984|2) Didn't change to single note but I added those clap-like sound another note to become doubles. Thanks for pointing out in this part!

00:42:662 (42662|0,42662|3,42823|1,42984|0,42984|2) hmm.. i think it will look mess if u go on to give a triple note in related sound.. but nvm, if u are sure to make it like that, that's ur choice. but if judging the sound and consistency, 00:42:662 and 00:42:984 should be the triple notes.

00:43:629 and something like this.. consider to change it to double notes since the sound is same from 00:43:468 . even 00:43:629 has louder sound than 00:43:468 . but it is still same sound/instrument its not the same, the one you selected has the snare drum while the one you compared is only a bass drum.

01:31:371 to 01:31:694 .. judging by the drum, it should like this one 01:05:887 - 01:06:210 . consider to change them to b like this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4892081 or something double notes rain like that No change, as the drum roll in the selected notes are only "toms" while the drum roll before the chorus are "snares"

last, the pattern after 01:32:178 , consider to make the cymbal sounds to be a triple notes since you did it before and 01:31:855 not going to put a fun killer here because the following notes are 1/4th. Add note will result mini jack which can frustrate many.

done for 4k Insane. sorry for changing the pattern

4k Normal

00:17:500 and another cymbal and loud drum, pls make it double since u did it before that time. it's not problem if this diff is more than 2* , just make a easy diff for the next :p yea, if u want enough.

00:42:016 (42016|3) make it double.. loud drum sound?

yeah, done yet. good pattern imo thanks~

Shinzo- wrote:

★ ★ ★ M4M ★ ★ ★

7 Key

[1 | 2 | 3 | 4 | 5 | 6 | 7]

[7K Awakened]

00:06:694 (6694|1,6694|5,6694|4) - maybe shouldn't be 3 note ? since no sound like HA ! snare

00:14:516 (14516|2,14597|6,14678|4) - what abot delete this for a little break ? also consistency with 00:11:855 - & 00:17:016 - I've been thinking about this but oh well, applied

00:18:145 - 00:18:791 - seriously you need to add note here. look at 00:19:436 (19436|1,19436|6,19436|5,19436|0) - it has simmilar sound but using 4
notes so i think it's inconsistent since some modders also mentioned about these low-cymbals. okay I give up, applied. (I actually plan to only do it at the end but oh well :v)

00:20:726 - 00:21:371 - this too (same as i mentioned above)

00:41:694 - if you hear it carefully, it's a snare sound, maybe 3 note for consistency ? nice catch!

00:42:823 (42823|4) - what about delete this ? it just a violin sound btw, no kick sound and the part that has a kick+violin isjust using 2 note (00:42:339 - ) There's a guitar strum with the violin

00:51:613 - maybe delete one of it since i almost hear nothing there there's a tom sound. Really tricky to hear though.

00:52:500 - what about https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4894053? for consistency pattern with 00:51:533 (51533|2,51533|6,51613|1,51613|5,51694|0,51694|4,51694|3) - excellent idea!

01:03:307 (63307|3,63307|6,63522|0,63576|2,63629|4) - i just recomend to Ctrl H this for pitch OK!

01:10:807 (70807|1) - move this to 01:11:129 - maybe ? as you can hear there's a violin on 01:11:129 - and 01:10:807 - not really heared even there's a violin tho, btw if you move it, you should re-arrange it. maybe like https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4894131 but you can make it diffrent as your style rearranged a bit

01:19:597 - maybe re-arrange be like https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4894142 ? since 01:20:162 (80162|3,80242|0,80242|2,80242|4,80323|1) - is kinda uhh!

01:21:129 (81129|5,81129|2,81210|1,81210|4,81291|3,81291|0,81371|4,81371|1,81452|2,81452|5) - same as before ? (reverse)

01:29:113 (89113|2,89113|0,89194|6,89194|4,89274|0,89274|3,89274|1,89274|2) - maybe you already know this ? i mean 01:29:113 - should be 3 note Very good catch! I added a note as well in the similar part at intro

01:33:307 - shouldn't be 3 note since no finish/snare (suggest delete 01:33:307 (93307|6) - ) the guitar strum here became strong

01:35:887 - same as above (also same suggestion) u know la

[7K Insane]

00:06:210 - maybe should add 1 more note since it just same with 00:05:242 (5242|1,5242|3,5403|4,5403|0) - and the others also 00:06:210 (6210|4) - is diffrent kind of sound (00:04:920 (4920|6,5565|5) - ) (suggest add on 1st collumn) the sound here isn't strong as others

00:11:371 - same as above ^ but since it's complicated. then i suggest to add it on collumn 7 and move 00:11:533 (11533|6) - to 5th collumn

00:13:791 (13791|5,13952|4,14113|5) - swap collumn ? better imo since there's no kind of 00:13:952 (13952|4,13952|3) - pattern before cool

00:15:565 - well if you apply above ^ then i suggest on this part, make it like http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4894191

00:32:016 - the LN should starts 00:31:694 - I did this because the raising sound become so consistent in this part (louder)

00:37:339 (37339|4,37500|3,37662|2) - move 1 to the left ? much better imo pretty cool stuff!

00:38:952 (38952|3) - hear it again. Should be end on 00:39:274 - and a new LN on 00:39:274 - I don't think it ends there, it feels the counter part of 00:37:662 (37662|0) - and I listened with 25%playback rate, seems no new strum in the end part of long note.

00:51:613 - same as before, delete since almost no sound here tom

00:52:500 (52500|3,52581|1,52662|2) - well this is kinda awkward so i suggest to make it like https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4894238 OK!nah it will ruin the pattern above, so make it like http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4894191 <-wot wrong link I guess?

01:05:565 (65565|1,65565|2) - uhm maybe move it to 1 7 since it has a space 01:05:645 - oh ya!

01:07:178 (67178|3) - move to 3 and 01:07:258 (67258|2) - move to 5 since well 01:07:178 (67178|3,67339|3) - this 1/2 jack is kinda annoying cool stuff!

01:11:371 - 01:12:662 - shoulld be just 1 note since it has no finish or even a snare, just like 01:07:500 - 01:10:081 - nice catch!

01:15:565 - well just suggest to 01:15:968 (75968|4,76129|2,76291|1) - move this to 3 2 3 since i just 01:15:807 (75807|4,75887|6,75968|4,76049|5) - don't really like this rearranged for more comfortable pattern.

01:16:533 - same as before (shouldn't be 2 note) just like 01:17:823 - and 01:20:403 - ok!

01:21:694 - 01:22:984 - this too ok!

01:28:791 (88791|2) - move to 1 ? if yes, move 01:30:403 (90403|2,90565|0,90726|1) - to 1 3 1 I just did the previous one you suggested

[7K Hard]

00:06:210 (6210|5) - delete ? inb4 2 note if there's a HA ! this is for the drum + vocal

00:16:936 (16936|5) - move to 7 ? the pattern will be better imo (00:16:613 (16613|2,16694|1) - no space 00:16:774 (16774|4,16855|2) - 1 space) weill
if you know what i mean I rearranged the pattern.

01:05:565 - just suggest to follow the 1/2 violin with 1/2 LN so the spread with insane will not be too far rearranged

01:08:791 (68791|4) - move to 7 for consistency pattern also better pattern rearranged

01:14:678 (74678|3,74758|1) - move to 1 4 for better patter with 01:14:113 - yeah simmilar with 01:24:920 - this part Cool!

01:19:113 (79113|2) - same as before, move to 1 Cool!

01:31:774 (91774|1) - same as before, move to 1 Cool!

01:36:533 (96533|2,96533|0,96694|6,96694|4) - well i just suggest to make it on the same collumn so it'll be diffrent with normal diff(just like 4K
Hard) Ok!

[7K Normal]

00:11:533 - add note for the HA ! ? OK!

00:14:436 (14436|3) - move to 5 so 00:13:629 (13629|5,13791|6,13952|4,14113|5) - the pattern continue ok!

00:31:855 (31855|4) - move to 2 for balance maybe

01:11:049 (71049|4) - move this to 6 or 01:11:210 (71210|3) - move to 3 for better pattern

01:20:242 (80242|3) - move to 3 (just a suggestion so it don't same with 01:19:758 - cool!

01:21:371 (81371|2) - same as before, move to 2 or 01:21:533 (81533|3) - move to 5

01:21:533 (81533|3) - should be 2 note, seriously you even make 2 note on this hard part 01:21:533 (81533|3) - wat

01:29:274 (89274|3) - same as before, move to 3

4 Key

[1 | 2 | 3 | 4]

[4K Awakened]

00:18:145 - 00:18:791 - seriously it's even same with 00:19:436 (19436|2,19436|0,19436|3) -
00:20:726 - this one too ^ applied all

the rest seems fine imo omg gj arcwin thanks!

[4K Insane]

well just suggest 00:15:726 (15726|0) - move to 2 and 00:15:887 (15887|1,15968|0,16129|1,16291|0) - Ctrl G, better pattern imo 1/4 notes are gone if ctrl g

00:16:694 (16694|1) - move to 00:16:613 - well just suggestion again since 00:16:613 - louder than 00:16:694 - nice catch!

00:51:613 (51613|3) - well tbh i almost hear nothing here... ( look Hard diff) :v

01:31:533 (91533|2) - same suggestion as before, move to 01:31:452 - ok!

01:35:726 (95726|3) - move to 2 or 3, cuz just... 01:35:565 (95565|3,95726|3,95887|3) - it's the only triplet in this diff moved to 2

[4K Hard]

00:16:371 (16371|0) - move to 2 for pattern (00:15:726 (15726|2,15807|1,15887|2) - )

00:38:952 (38952|1,39113|2) - Ctrl G for hand balance ok!

00:41:694 - what aout delete one of it ?

00:52:823 - 00:53:145 - please add note just like you do on 00:42:500 (42500|1,42823|3) - Cool catch! ok!

01:05:565 - same suggestion as 7K Hard, ? kayer the 1/2 LN applied the same way I rearranged

01:11:694 - 01:12:984 - 01:13:629 - missing 1 more note ? well actually it's inconsisten which should be fix fixed

01:15:565 - 01:15:887 - this one too ^ (also the others) i know you already know this but yeah still inconsistent :< fixed

01:26:533 - add on 1 plz this is still kiai, not fair with 01:29:113 - which isn't kiai also noticed that, thanks!

01:31:210 (91210|3) - same suggestion as before, move to 3 for pattern (01:30:565 (90565|1,90645|2,90726|1) - )

[4K Normal]

00:11:533 - add note for the HA ! maybe ok!

01:13:791 (73791|0) - delete for little break, also look at 7K Normalok!

Good Luck Arcwin >w<)~ That was a really good and helpful mod! Thanks >w<)b

Yooh wrote:

[7K Normal]

This diff is already Fine imo thanks!


[7K Hard]

00:37:178 (37178|5) - I think this chord is disparate here. how about other way : http://puu.sh/ocJpE/2853db3498.png OK! but didn't change the one with LN

01:03:307 (63307|2,63307|4) - move 1,4 for symmetrical chord patterns OK!

01:36:694 (96694|2,96694|0) - ctrl + H? rearrange in different pattern. thanks for pointing out



[7K Insane]

00:04:920 (4920|4) - 4th column is proper here. refer to this part. 00:02:984 - didn't notice, good catch!

00:10:081 (10081|2) - ^ ok!

00:28:307 (28307|4) - Add 7 for emphasize piano rhythm. because drum note is add after 00:27:500 - here

00:42:339 - how about this? I think this longnote is spoil circle's pattern arrangement. http://puu.sh/ocJdi/db2ddb5e62.png I'm emphasizing the synth for the LN

01:03:952 (63952|3) - I recommend use silent.wav hitsound here. or wind sound from BMS files. thanks for the suggestion~ will think of it


[7K Awakened]

00:17:339 (17339|6,17339|2) - Move 1,5 Because 00:17:500 - this part is using different drums.

00:42:984 - ~~ quad - triple, triple - quad chord pattern is little awkward I think,

I think it is good way to avoid same column's repeating when using 3,4 4,3 chord like this.

http://puu.sh/ocIwQ/2b9db5bcbd.png

01:15:807 (75807|2) - 2nd column is more better imo, invert of this part : 01:15:323 (75323|1,75403|3,75403|5) - OK!

01:32:178 (92178|6,92178|2) - same as 1st mod

Gabriel_Batara wrote:

4k Normal
1|2|3|4|
00:17:500 (17500|1) - move to 1 and add 4
00:18:145 (18145|0) - move 2 add 3
00:18:791 (18791|0) - add 4
00:20:081 (20081|2) - same as the first one
00:20:726 (20726|3,21371|3) - add 1
00:22:984 (22984|2,23145|3,23468|1,23629|2,23952|0,24113|1,24436|3,24597|2,25565|2,25726|3,26049|1,26210|2,26533|0,26694|1,27016|3,27178|2,28145|1,28307|0,28629|2,28791|1,29113|3,29274|2,29597|0,29758|1) - I think using soft audio will perfectly match with this notes. I was suggested by other modder to do that also. Seems I really need to do that. Thanks!

00:41:049 (41049|2) - start from 00:40:887 I am following the synth, not the vocal


4k Awakened
1|2|3|4|
00:43:145 (43145|0,43145|2) - add 4 with finish sound

7k Hard
1|2|3|4|5|6|7|
00:12:178 (12178|2,12339|2,12500|5,12662|5,12823|2,12984|2,13145|5,13307|5) - dont do this because there is no same sound try not using jack note these are triplets btw. They are the same sound, the different is that, the bass is overwhelmed by the snare sound (the bassdrum is continuous if you will listen carefully).

Mod my map :3

-BANGKE- wrote:

oh hello arcwin, im just mod for 4k

Iced Blade feat. Lily-an - Sora no Senritsu (short ver.)

M4M contract with https://osu.ppy.sh/s/399551

General

1. BG, MP3 : your mp3 is 191kbps, please change it into 192kbps, BG fine no change for mp3, as it is acceptable stated in the ranking criteria: "The bitrate of a beatmap's audio file must be no lower than 128kbps and no higher than 192kbps" which means between those two is acceptable
   
2. Metadata : seems fine
3. Ai Mod : clear
4. Hitsound : clear

1|2|3|4

4K Awakened

1. 00:09:436 (9436|1,9597|0) - ctrl + j this, to avoid this jack 00:09:597 (9597|0,9758|0,9920|0) - OK!
2. 00:20:968 - i hear some kick in here Wow! nice catch! Thank you!
3. 01:05:565 (65565|0) - move to 3? it will be easier to hit imo
4. 01:34:113 (94113|0,94274|0,94436|0,94597|0) - too much x.x, i suggest try this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4911804 rearranged all pattern in a different way, no more stacks. thanks!
5. rank now please

4K Insane

1. 00:20:968 - a kick in here, like in 4k awakened ok!
2. 00:48:145 (48145|2) - move it to 2, it's different pitch than 00:47:823 (47823|3,47823|2,47823|0) - and this 00:48:307 (48307|2) - move to 2 too adjusted the before chords instead.
3. 01:33:145 (93145|0) - the Ln is start in here 01:33:307 - the long notes are rearranged. Not following the secondary guitar anymore
4. 01:35:726 (95726|0) - ^ same above, start in here 01:35:887 - ^
5. 01:26:291 (86291|1,86371|2) - ctrl + h? sudden 3-note stack would occur
6. other part is fine

4K Hard

1. 00:18:145 (18145|2,18468|2,18791|2,19113|2) - too much, and actually this 00:18:791 (18791|3,18791|2) - is different pitch than 00:18:468 (18468|3,18468|2) - try this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4911886
2. phew, i cant find any problem alright~

well nice map as always arcwin <3 good luck! thanks!

ArcherLove wrote:

yaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa

mod

testtt col=1~7

[4k normal]

00:17:500 (17500|1) - how about change to 1-4 because it's symbal sound? and I think better hand position ;3
00:18:145 (18145|0) - add 1 moreee for cymbal?
00:18:791 (18791|0) - ^
00:20:081 (20081|2) - aa change to 1-4 again? same reason aboveee
00:20:726 (20726|3,21371|3) - add 1 more for cymbal? cant do all of those additions as it raises the SR exceeding 2 stars. Also the cymbal isn't that loud to be map for consistency (but I did map for it at later difficulties)

00:37:178 (37178|1,37178|2,37339|0) - better to swap this? (12 and then 3) I like this <
00:42:984 (42984|3) - move to 3?
00:43:468 (43468|2) - move to 2?
00:43:952 (43952|1) - move to 4?
00:44:597 (44597|0) - move to 3?
00:45:726 (45726|0) - move to 2?
00:46:049 (46049|1) - move to 3?
00:46:694 (46694|2) - move to 1?
00:47:178 (47178|3) - move to 2?
00:48:307 (48307|3) - move to 3?
00:48:629 (48629|0) - move to 2?
00:49:274 (49274|2) - move to 4?
00:49:758 (49758|1) - move to 1?
00:53:468 (53468|1) - move to 3?
00:53:791 (53791|2) - move to 2?
00:54:436 (54436|0) - move to 2?
00:54:920 (54920|3) - move to 3?
00:55:887 (55887|3) - move to 3?
00:56:371 (56371|0) - how about change to [23]? because the sound is kind of hard (?)
00:57:016 (57016|2) - move to 2?
00:57:500 (57500|1) - move to 3?
00:58:468 (58468|0) - move to 2?
00:58:952 (58952|1,59113|1,59113|3) - http://puu.sh/ohnOH/2d031701d3.jpg ?
00:59:597 (59597|3) - move to 2?
01:00:081 (60081|2) - move to 1?
01:01:210 (61210|1) - move to 3?
01:01:533 (61533|2) - move to 2?
01:02:178 (62178|1) - move to 4?
01:02:662 (62662|2) - move to 1?
==^== This is basically how I will map if you were me ;o please consider~ some of them is for playability, and some of them is for visual ;3 purely subjective imo (you could have just use screenshot though, it was stated in my rule). The 1/2 jack notes are reasonable in this part as well as you can hear the guitar strum has the "same" pitch every 1/2. As for the visual, it is also clear and not really confusing to execute

01:32:339 (92339|2) - either move to 1 only or move to one while 01:32:500 (92500|1) - move to 3 for nice hand pattern? I've been received alot of suggestions on this part. I rearranged a bit but following the guitar strum's pitch.

01:32:984 (92984|3) - add noootee cymball
01:33:629 (93629|3) - ^
01:34:920 (94920|1) - move to 4 + add to 1?
01:35:565 (95565|0) - add noootee cymbal
01:36:210 (96210|0) - ^ same reason as previous

[4k hard]

00:17:500 (17500|1) - add note to 4 since it's cymbal? now I can finally add that. Seems pretty reasonable for the difficulty
00:20:081 (20081|2) - ^ to 1 ok!
01:32:339 (92339|2) - ^ ok!

you sure don't want to add 3 note for some of the cymbal? haha
//after look at insane, nvm orz

[4k insane]

01:31:371 (91371|0,91371|1,91452|2,91452|3,91533|0,91613|3) - I think some of this HS feels off, check it~ (because I can't HS for shiiit ;__;) I will eventually fix the HS, thanks for the mention. Noted.

[4k awaken]

00:11:855 (11855|3,11855|1,11855|0,11855|2) - because this, why not make-
00:17:500 (17500|1,17500|0,17500|2) - 00:18:145 (18145|3,18145|1,18145|0) - 00:18:791 (18791|2,18791|3,18791|0) - 00:19:436 (19436|2,19436|1,19436|3,19597|0,19597|1,19597|2) - 00:20:081 (20081|1,20081|3,20081|0) - 00:20:726 (20726|2,20726|0,20726|1) - 00:21:371 (21371|0,21371|3,21371|2) - quads also? :3 I like it quad~ they are not as strong as the main cymbals. These are like low-weaker cymbals in this part. You'll hear that it is pretty far low-volumed than the rest. Pretty reasonable just to make it triple. Also Layering will be overused if quads.

because you also make it 00:35:081 (35081|0,35081|2,35081|3,35081|1) - quad here and 00:32:500 (32500|3,32500|2,32500|1,32500|0) - !!

00:40:403 (40403|3,40403|2,40403|0) - quad please ;o This is reasonable quad since the note before it is 1/2, considered and applied!
00:42:662 (42662|2,42662|3,42662|1) - 00:42:984 (42984|2,42984|3,42984|0) - this too~
00:45:242 (45242|2,45242|3,45242|0) - 00:45:565 (45565|0,45565|3,45565|2) - ^
if yes 00:45:726 (45726|1) - move to 1?

00:47:823 (47823|1,47823|2,47823|0,48145|3,48145|2,48145|1) - quaad
00:50:403 (50403|1,50403|3,50403|0,50726|1,50726|0,50726|3) - quaad
00:52:984 (52984|2,52984|3,52984|0,53307|2,53307|1,53307|3) - quaad
00:55:565 (55565|2,55565|3,55565|0,55887|2,55887|3,55887|0) - quaad
00:58:145 (58145|0,58145|1,58145|2,58468|2,58468|1,58468|3) - quaad, also not adding a note in between?
01:00:726 (60726|0,60726|1,60726|3,61049|0,61049|2,61049|3) - quaad

01:16:371 (76371|2) - add 1 note at 2? heheh cymbal, also a tricky pattern everyone love ;o no one loves that I believe LOL it throws off people so I didn't make this triple. Especially in this one, there are following 1/4th, pretty dangerous.

==^== only my preference

01:26:694 (86694|3,86694|2,86694|0) - http://puu.sh/ohpeh/f2a5736fd2.jpg SM LN? LN-less diff. its in the description
01:29:274 (89274|1,89274|0) - ^ or + 01:29:274 (89274|3) -
01:31:855 (91855|1,91855|0,91855|3) - ^
01:32:339 (92339|1,92339|0,92339|3) - quad?
01:32:984 (92984|2,92984|0,92984|1) - 01:33:629 (93629|2,93629|3,93629|1) - 01:34:274 (94274|2,94274|3,94274|0,94436|3,94436|1,94436|0) - 01:34:920 (94920|3,94920|2,94920|1) - 01:35:565 (95565|2,95565|0,95565|3) - 01:36:210 (96210|0,96210|2,96210|1) - quad?

!!! no to quads! I don't want it to become Aiae-quad + Tokyo Bear combined

[7k normal]

00:17:500 (17500|4) - move to 1 + add to 7 rearranged but not adding note as SR issues
00:20:081 (20081|4) - ^ rearranged
00:42:016 (42016|3) - move to 5 or 6 for better hand position ;o (for me formeeee) oooh yes!
00:42:662 (42662|0) - move to 2?
00:52:662 (52662|1,52984|0) - ctrl+J?

00:58:629 (58629|5) - move 7
00:58:952 (58952|1) - move 1
00:59:597 (59597|4) - move 7
01:00:081 (60081|2) - move 1
01:01:210 (61210|1) - move 3
01:01:533 (61533|5) - move 7
01:02:178 (62178|1) - move 3
01:02:662 (62662|5) - move 5 these 1/2 jacks are intentional not to be repetitive on the 1st phase of the same sounds. Also reasonable since the strum of guitars are same sounds.

01:32:339 (92339|2) - move to 1 + add to 7
01:34:920 (94920|2) - ^

[7k hard]

is this a 4K in 7K? I see many similiarity ... maybe want to change some but I don't know it's already good haha its pretty far from 4K Hard e_e but I see your opinion because of the triplets at the chorus (which are actually quite same as 4K Hard).

[7k insane]

00:27:178 (27178|3) - move to 2? I like better its the same as previous note clap sound

Why not make the cymbal all 3 notes? this can be a bit harder, because 7K Awk should be an X diff ;_; all cymbals are 3-notes. But if you're talking about the cymbals with long notes. That's actually already 3-notes (3 keypresses at the same time) for consistency. I do not want random 4-keypresses in my Insane difficulties unless very strong sound like SDVX sfx lol

[7k awkawkawkawkened]

not making all cymbal 4 key?
00:17:500 (17500|2,17500|6,17500|3) - 00:18:145 (18145|5,18145|3,18145|2) - 00:18:791 (18791|2,18791|3,18791|6) - 00:20:081 (20081|0,20081|4,20081|3) - 00:20:726 (20726|1,20726|3,20726|4) - 00:21:371 (21371|6,21371|0,21371|3) - same reply in what I said in 4K

01:31:855 (91855|3,91855|4,91855|6,91855|5) - add to 1 for balance o.o? rearranged.

01:32:339 (92339|2,92339|3,92339|6) - add note cymbal :3
01:32:984 (92984|3,92984|6,92984|2) - ^
01:33:629 (93629|6,93629|0,93629|3) - 01:34:920 (94920|0,94920|4,94920|3) - 01:35:565 (95565|4,95565|3,95565|1) - 01:36:210 (96210|0,96210|3,96210|6) - add for cymbal? same as previous

aaand maybe you can make pattern like this to be 5 note? ;o 01:34:436 (94436|4,94436|6,94436|2,94436|0) -

I don't know about the silent HS, is it rankable? I do not have any silent HS here o.o though thanks for the reminding the HS, I fixed them all

handgasm intensifies

Good luck!~
My map is https://osu.ppy.sh/s/416575 take a look ;3

arcwinolivirus wrote:

no to quads! I don't want it to become Aiae-quad + Tokyo Bear combined

Pikobaka wrote:

hi arcwin ! I'm just a newbie but I want to lvl up my modding skill !
M4M from your queue!

1/2/3/4

4K Normal

00:16:533 (16533|2) - move to 4
00:16:855 (16855|3) - move to 3
00:17:016 (17016|2) - move to 4
like this 00:13:952 (13952|0,14274|1,14436|0) - awesome notice! applied all

4K Hard

00:44:920 (44920|3,44920|1,45242|0,45242|2) - Ctrl + H? like a stair from 00:43:145 (43145|0,43629|1,44113|2,44597|1) - Ok!
If accept ^ ctrl+h 00:47:500 (47500|0,47500|2,47823|3,47823|1) - here againOk!
00:50:081 (50081|3) - move to 3 and 00:50:403 (50403|2) - move to 4rearranged

4K Insane

00:03:145 (3145|3) - move to 3?
01:06:210 add note to 1?
01:31:533 add note to 2?

4K Awakened

00:09:274 (9274|0) - move to 2?
00:11:694 (11694|3,11694|2) - move to 2-3 like 00:11:533 (11533|3,11533|2,11533|1) - ?
01:06:210 add note to 4?

I think I can't find a any bad point in your beatmap... and I like your note style! XD ooooh thanks for the feedback :3/

good luck arcwin

ArcherLove wrote:

arcwinolivirus wrote:

no to quads! I don't want it to become Aiae-quad + Tokyo Bear combined

shhhhhhhh :u

Column:
      _ _ _ _
4K - |1|2|3|4|

"puxtu's M4M-only contract"

A contract to be fulfilled as exchange of mod.

Song: Iced Blade feat. Lily-an - Sora no Senritsu (short ver.)
Number of difficulties modded in my map: 2 Difficulties, 4K HD MX

Note:
• do not be afraid to reject some parts of my mod. I do not bite rawr.
• If I suggest to "remove or ctrl function moves" on certain note/s, dont forget and be sure to move the hitsound on the other note beside the suggested note.


[General]
Audio: OK!
BG: /!\ this part is so distracting http://puu.sh/oxvTe/68ba5b3f40.jpg lol wot, you're so green my onichuan :^)
BPM: OK!
Offset: OK!
Preview Time: OK!

AiMod:
• No problem!

Column:
      _ _ _ _
4K - |1|2|3|4|

[4K Hard]

SPOILER

00:32:016 (32016|0) - isn't this should be a double chord? jjust like the others they have the same clap sound, suggest to add note at 3 OK

00:40:403 - why there's a 1/2 space here? the background guitar doesn't stop playing it does stop, the guitar sound became long sound

00:41:694 (41694|3,41694|2) - why there's a double chord here? since you're only layering snare with double but there's no snare here so I think single note is more suit here but it is a snare o.o

00:41:855 (41855|1) - consider to change your ln pattern like this? https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5016330 it's play nicer and smoother like this applied in a different approach, I liek the current last 2 LN better

00:43:952 (43952|3,43952|2,44113|3,44113|2) - ^ if that's applied then ctrl+h this because I know what it is for :>

00:50:726 (50726|3,51210|2,51694|0,52178|1) - yeah I think these lns are 1/1 ln mah man, they're a lil bit too long assuming you're layering the vocals (the loudest sound). So pretty much it should be like this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5016348 and no ln 00:52:984 - here because the vocal is too short for 1/1 so single/double note is the right choice. I am layering for the guitar, not the vocal. The long sound of guitar is longer compared to the vocals.

01:07:823 - try this mah man :v/ https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5016363

01:15:968 (75968|0,76049|2) - how about ctrl+j these two? better flow rearranged instead

cool stuff oniichuan thanks oniichuan

[4K Insane]

SPOILER

00:21:694 (21694|2,21855|1) - hammer pls? give more impact at the second beat 00:21:855 (21855|1,21855|0) - maybe try [34][14] hammer

00:22:339 (22339|3,27500|0) - it's hard to understand why there's a ln here :v there a bass synth on the bgm :v

00:50:726 - same goes like in your hard diff guitarzzzz

01:16:533 (76533|1,76533|0) - remove one of these, no snare no cymbal no anything for double chord fokin great catch mah man! fixed!

01:36:533 (96533|2,96533|3,96694|0,96694|1) - same as I mentioned before I really prefer my both hands iykwim :^)
very cool stuff Insane! dang thanks!

[Overall]
Cool song with the hype feeling~ I like it, Im a cowboy now LOL. Goodluck and thanks for the contract, until next time :3/ lol mah man great stuff you used the same arcwin's format LOLOL, Thanks :3/

~ END OF CONTRACT ~

No_sync wrote:

hi!
from your M4M Queue

first time modding 7K so sorry for any error!

column 4K 0|1|2|3

column 7K 0|1|2| 3 |4|5|6

4K Normal

00:16:533 (16533|3) - Here. In 7K Normal this is a LongNote, My suggestion is:
Move to |1|,
Replace with that LongNote to 00:17:016 , I do not like it to be similar to 7K Normal also I'm avoiding SR increase

00:16:694 (16694|1) - Move to |2| ,
00:16:855 (16855|2) - Move to |3| ,
00:17:016 (17016|3,17016|0) - Erase one of those Or not, you decide... the pattern seems very good already, also no reason to remove a note here because the cymbals + synth
oops:
And... now this look hard with that LongNote. So you can Erase these if you think that too:
00:16:694 (16694|1) and 00:16:855 (16855|2).

00:18:145 (18145|0,18468|1,18791|0,19113|1,20726|3,21049|2,21371|3) -
You do something really good in 7K Normal but not here:
You put all these Notes in 7K NM -the guitar sounds? (ithink)- with LongNoteS. i like this.
Soooo...:
00:18:145 (18145|0) - Replace with a LongNote to 00:18:307.
00:18:468 (18468|1) - Replace with a LongNote to 00:18:629.
00:18:791 (18791|0) - Move to |2| and Replace with a LongNote to 00:18:952.
00:18:952 (18952|2) - Move to |1|
00:19:113 (19113|1) - DoubleNote here? or maybe is the hitsound? nice there you confuse me idk! xD
so i suggest, this note Move to |0| and Add a Note Here in |3| that will be end this guitar part!
00:19:274 (19274|3) - ^^Dont want "jack" here, Move to |2|
00:20:726 (20726|3) - Replace with a LongNote to 00:20:887.
00:21:049 (21049|2) - Replace with a LongNote to 00:21:210.
00:21:371 (21371|3) - Move to |1| and Replace with a LongNote to 00:21:533.
00:21:533 (21533|1) - I will say "Move to |3|" for better reading but that dont fit with the end
of the first section of the guitar part, plus you need move the incoming DoubleNoteS...
Sooo... i say Move to |0| And END. . . I didn't add long notes in 4K NM because it will increase its Star Rating as long notes gives additional SR and 4K SR is way more sensitive than 7Ks obviously because of columns available
OR:
Move to |3| .
00:21:694 (21694|3) - to |0|
00:21:855 (21855|0) - to |3|
If you like it you can put these DoubleNoteS in the same lane ("jackS") because you do that in 7K NM... won't do similar to 7K NM,

00:37:339 (37339|0) - Something to say here:
I think this will be a 1/4 Stairs to 00:37:662 (37662|3) - and here follow with LongNote. (just saying)
That will be Hard here so:
00:37:662 (37662|3) - I see here you forget this sound that extends to 00:41:049... (really long yes)
is a purpose? or just for the drum that exist you ignore this?
Is good. But I think is hard for a Normal so many notes, so i think this:
Idea1:
First, Erase all the Notes starting after the DoubleNoteS in 00:37:662 to 00:41:049 (before the first short LongNote)
00:37:662 (37662|3) - Replace this with a LongNote to 00:41:049. Meh...too easy.
Idea2: (following the guitar sounds? and a drum too.)
First, Erase all the Notes starting after the DoubleNoteS in 00:37:662 to 00:41:049 (before the first short LongNote)
00:38:791 - Put a LongNote Here in |2| to 00:38:952. (guitar)
00:39:113 - Put a LongNote in |1| to 00:39:274. (guitar)
00:39:758 - Put a LongNote in |0| to 00:39:920. (guitar)
00:40:403 - Put a SingleNote in |1|. (drum)
Take a Photo of ^^this Idea2 (because Idea1 is too easy to do): http://i.imgur.com/Bidv1y9.jpg I made every snare sounds = double notes, the rest like kick is single notes. Not really a problem and quite neat if you will play it. no change.
End.

00:45:565 (45565|0,45726|0,46049|1,46210|1) - hard,
maybe too hard because you have in the same lane another "jack"...
Only the position needs change. Move all these one column to the right...
00:46:210 (46210|3) - ^^Move to |0|
00:46:533 (46533|1,46694|1,47016|2,47178|2) - ^^same Move all of these One column to the left!
00:47:500 (47500|2) - ^^Move to |3|
00:47:823 (47823|3) - ^^Move to |2|
00:48:629 (48629|0,48791|0) - I think index finger can support more pain
(lol, + idont like the jack in |0| here) so: Move to |1|.

00:55:242 (55242|0,55242|3) - better reading? Move to |1|2| Center.
00:55:565 (55565|1,55565|2) - ^^Move to |0|3| all the way Left and right...
00:55:887 (55887|3,55887|0,56049|3,56371|0,56533|0,56533|3) - ^^for that...
Move all of these to the center |1|2|.
00:56:855 (56855|2,57016|2) - ^^Move to |3|
00:57:339 (57339|1,57500|1) - ^^Move to |0|
00:57:823 (57823|0,57823|3) - ^^Move to |1|2| Center.
00:58:145 (58145|2,58145|1) - ^^Move to |0|3| Left/right.
00:58:468 (58468|0,58629|0) - ^^to |1|
00:58:468 (58468|3) - ^^to |2|
00:58:952 (58952|1,59113|1) - ^^to |0|
00:59:113 (59113|3) - uhm...
maybe too hard because you have in the same lane another "jack" in 00:59:436 (59436|3,59597|3) ...
Move to |2|. since alot of modders mentioning the same problemo, I'll arrange it. thanks.

01:03:307 (63307|1) - Replace with a 1/4 StairS to 01:03:629 . . . UPS no!
xD sorry that part is really "interesting". So:
The sound of here ...uhm... Replace with a LongNote to 01:03:629. yes that will work well.

01:11:210 (71210|3,72016|3) - 7K u are here?? These, Replace with a LongNote to 01:12:178 in |3|. great job with the LNs rearranged
01:12:016 (72016|3,72178|2,72339|1) - ^^if you want leave the note in 01:12:016 ...
Ctrl+H these noteS.

01:21:533 (81533|2) - 7K u are here??x2 Replace with a LongNote to 01:22:500. great job with the LNs rearranged
01:22:662 (82662|2) - ^^because that... Move this Note to |3|
01:22:823 (82823|3) - ^^ Move to |2| or |1| you choose.

01:25:242 (85242|3) - 7K u are here??x3 This a bit short... great job with the LNs rearranged
Extend to 01:26:210.
01:26:210 (86210|3) - ^^Move to |0|

01:31:371 (91371|1,91533|2,91694|0) - 7K u are here??x4 You can Replace All these noteS great job with the LNs rearranged
for a LongNote to 01:31:855 in |2|.
01:32:178 (92178|2) - ^^Move to |0|...

This agaaaaa...in. (the guitar sounds?)
you do this in 7K Normal too. DO IT . here too.
01:32:984 (92984|3) - Replace with a LongNote to 01:33:145.
01:33:307 (93307|2) - Replace with a LongNote to 01:33:468.
01:33:629 (93629|3) - Move to |1|, Replace with a LongNote to 01:33:791.
01:33:791 (93791|1) - Move to |0|...
01:33:952 (93952|2) - DoubleNote? you confuse me again -.-" (good hitsounds ._.)
Add a SingleNote in |3|.
01:35:565 (95565|0) - Replace with a LongNote to 01:35:726.
01:35:887 (95887|1) - Replace with a LongNote to 01:36:049.
01:36:210 (96210|0) - Move to |2|, Replace with a LongNote to 01:36:371.
01:36:371 (96371|2) - Move to |3|
01:36:694 (96694|3,96694|2) - you can move these to |0|1| left! ("jackS") you decide... same reason as previous, adding LNs will increase the SR of 4K NM which will exceed to 2.00. Also I hope you use screenshot instead next time :v

7K Normal

00:18:145 (18145|6,18468|5,18791|4,19113|3,20726|6,21049|5,21371|4) - Nice.
But One is out of place i think...
00:19:113 (19113|3) - This Replace with a SingleNote...
i mean this isnt a guitar sound and if it is a drum sound, just DoubleNote like i suggest here. It is a guitar sound, listen carefully, it is pretty obvious e_e
00:19:113 (19113|6) - ^^Move to |2|...
00:20:726 (20726|0,20887|3,21049|1,21210|4,21371|2,21533|5,21694|3,21694|0,21855|0,21855|3) -
I think you need Put all of these NoteS in the Left... (you do right before)
Use the almighty Ctrl+H!
00:21:694 (21694|6,21855|6) - ^^ now if you that, Move these to |4|.
First column of the right, Next to yellow |3| lane. the pattern is fine as it is. no change.

00:22:662 (22662|0) - I think is ghost sound here. Erase it. hi-hat sound. Can be heard clearly in my headphone
+ The drum sound of this Note dont fit in piano moment...
00:23:307 (23307|6,24274|3) - ^^Same as above is ghost sound. I think that, Erase them.
00:25:242 (25242|6,25887|0,26855|3) - ^^Same as above too. Erase them.
00:27:823 (27823|6,28468|0,29436|3) - ^^Same... Please fix your headphone or speaker :v or maybe you're on a equalizer settings that you can't hear the hihat
00:30:726 (30726|3,31210|3) - Here is a clap long and slow sound? Replace this two NoteS with LongNoteS, do this:
00:30:726 (30726|3) - Move to |4| and Replace with a LongNote to 00:31:049.
00:31:210 (31210|3) - Move to |2| and Replace with a LongNote to 00:31:533. no reason to put LN here.
And:
00:32:016 (32016|3) - Here. In 4K Normal this is a LongNote, My suggestion is Replace with that LongNote to 00:32:500.
The column position is perfect!(if you see my intention here :3 nice.) pretty cool catch, applied!

00:37:662 - This is in my mod 4K of before...
is almost the same... Read 4K Normal...do this: http://i.imgur.com/X2SB3GA.jpg just no :v that's way too easy and not really neat to look at
00:41:371 (41371|3) - ^^Move to |6| ! ...or |0|

00:52:178 (52178|5) - ...better reading? Move to |6|
00:53:791 (53791|0) - ^^to |1|

01:03:307 (63307|5) - These Replace with 1/4... Nop. 4K Normal mod here... nope, will not add any 1/4 in my NM diffs.
Move to |2| or |6| , Replace with a LongNote to 01:03:629.

I dont know because i dont have experience playing 7K too much because this part:
01:03:952 - http://i.imgur.com/T0YP8gn.jpg you decide... overlayering LN in NM is not a good idea, remember that
01:06:371 (66371|4) - ^^Leave it here or Move to |5|

01:15:887 (75887|5) - If you compare the 4K Diff... there are a LongNote left here. nice catch
do this:
01:15:565 (75565|3) - Move to |5|
01:15:887 (75887|5) - ^^Move to |6| , Replace with a LongNote to 01:16:210.
01:15:887 - There is a DoubleNote here? if you like Add to |3|.
01:16:371 (76371|6) - ^^Move to |3| or |6|. no change in my pattern as it is fine as it is.

01:33:952 (93952|3) - Drum sound, DoubleNote (i think i say this in 4K mod...)
Replace with a SingleNote.
01:33:952 (93952|0) - ^^Move to |4|

01:35:565 (95565|0,95726|3,95887|1,96049|4,96210|2,96371|5,96533|3,96533|0,96694|0,96694|3) -
I think i say this too... you do left before now right!
Move all these noteS with the almighty Ctrl+H!
01:36:533 (96533|0,96694|0) - ^^if you do that above... Move these noteS to |2|. I want my pattern here to be pitch consistent wise, wont do a mirror.

4K Hard

00:04:920 (4920|3,5565|3,6210|3) - so these Notes in 7K Hard are LongNoteS ...
if leave it like this are good too.

00:11:291 (11291|1) - better reading? Move to |3|
00:11:371 (11371|3,11371|2) - ^^Move to |0|1|
now...
00:11:371 (11371|3,11371|2,11533|0,11533|1,11694|2,11694|3) -
These Three DoubleNoteS sound exactly the same, i suggest Move all to columns |0|1|
and:
00:11:855 (11855|0) - ^^Move this to |2|

00:18:145 - you ignore the guitar sounds and is hard diff? ...mmm dontlikethis I will not add LN for the guitar here as it is for the Insane
see my mods 4K/7K Normal.

00:21:855 (21855|0,21855|1) - Almost the same sound... Move to |2|3| columns...

00:22:662 to 00:32:500 - Ok... for now on in this part you put these NoteS
for following the rhythm -the drums- leave it like that...
just i feel some of those dont be necessary but still works. I am certain that there are sounds in every notes here. In your case I believe that you can't hear the hihat sound, try some other speaker or headset I guess

00:37:339 (37339|2) - After this you hear the StairS?
and the LongNote have i mention in 4K/7K diffs? you choose...

00:51:533 (51533|1,51533|0) - ...??? idk Here something is rare... its just the tom sound lol, anyway remove a note to make it single note. thanks
Maybe is only One Note,
Not sound there,
or Incorrect hitsound... Just there are something here what i dont like.
(i dont think 1/6 snap too, i tried and sounds bad!)

01:03:468 - piano sound? (might) Add a SingleNote in |3|...
01:03:549 - ^^Add a SingleNote in |2|
01:03:629 - ^^Add a SingleNote in |1|
^^I dont know if these times are correct, Maybe is 1/6 Snap! won't add piano sound yet in this difficulty.

01:03:952 - sound effect... Add a LongNote in |2| to 01:05:565.
01:04:920 - sound effect... Add a LongNote in |1| to 01:05:565.

01:32:984 - you ignore the guitar sounds and is hard diff? ...mmm dontlikethis x2
see my mods 4K/7K Normal.

01:36:694 (96694|2,96694|3) - same drum sound, Move to |0|1|

7K Hard

00:18:145 - you ignore the guitar sounds and is hard diff? ...mmm dontlikethis x3
see my mods 4K/7K Normal.

00:37:339 (37339|2) - I think this will be a LongNote, Move to |1| and Replace with that to 00:37:662.

00:45:242 (45242|3) - I hear the Finish hitsound in the SingleNote not here...
Strange. It fits, in 4K Hard this will be a SingleNote, Replace with a LongNote if you like. nice catch, I removed the LN instead. thanks

00:51:533 (51533|4,51533|1) - This again in 4K Hard i say too idk why! (my ears are trash i think) xD

01:03:468 - piano sound? (might) Add a SingleNote in |3|...
01:03:549 - ^^Add a SingleNote in |2|
01:03:629 - ^^Add a SingleNote in |1|
^^I dont know if these times are correct, Maybe is 1/6 Snap! (X2)

01:03:952 - See 7K Normal Mod ... if you dont do that there. Here? :3

01:28:065 (88065|5,88307|5,88468|5,88710|5) - ...is Hard diff so maybe dont care but i see this...
The patterns you use before have a good distance between noteS, these not. really nice catch! fixed. thanks!

4K Insane

00:00:404 - LongNote? 7K Insane have one... nahh, too limited in column, I don't like it compressed after the long notel
Put a LongNote in |1|...
00:01:694 (1694|1) - ^^Erase this or Move to |0| or |2|

00:37:339 (37339|3) - sound effect? Replace with a LongNote to 00:37:662 and ... sound effect? there is no sound effect
00:37:420 (37420|1,37500|2,37581|1) - There are any sound like this here? Erase them. They are the melodic synth, listen carefully

00:51:533 (51533|1,51613|3) - That was the rare part in my mods (Hard diffs)...
and sounds good now... i suggest replace with this you do here.

01:03:522 (63522|3,63576|2,63629|1) - ! exactly this!... do this in Hard Diffs!

01:33:952 (93952|1) - ? I think is a only a Note!
Replace with a SingleNote. along with guitar
01:33:952 - ^^And maybe a triple? ... Add SingleNote in |0| too...

01:35:565 (95565|2) - guitar sound left. Move to |0| , Replace with a LongNote to 01:35:726...
01:35:726 (95726|0) - ^^ Move to |2|

last two DoubleNoteS, I like more this:
01:36:533 (96533|2) - Move to |0|
01:36:694 (96694|1) - Move to |3|

7K Insane

00:19:113 - I think this part is TripleNoteS...
00:19:113 (19113|3) - Replace this with a SingleNote.
00:19:113 - ^^Add a SingleNote in |1|...
00:19:274 (19274|1) - ^^Move to |2|

00:37:339 (37339|3) - sound effect? Replace with a LongNote to 00:37:662 and ...
00:37:420 (37420|5,37500|2,37581|4) - ...I say this in 4K Insane too:
There are any sound like this here? Erase them. same as what I said earlier

01:03:952 (63952|3) - See 7K Normal Mod ... if you dont do that there. Here? :3 x2 focus only in drum rolls, adding LN is too much

01:33:952 - I think this part is TripleNoteS x2... nope, only 2-note keypress for snare sound
01:33:952 (93952|3) - Replace this with a SingleNote.
01:33:952 - ^^Add a SingleNote in |5|...
01:34:113 (94113|5) - ^^Move to |4| same as what I said earlier

4K Awakened

Really good. I see some jackS here but i like you put these in certain positions. and...
No LongNoteS!? wow
No mod here xD lol lol wat, thanks I guess :v

7K Awakened

00:00:404 - The sound effect here...
Put a LongNoteS in |0| and |6| to 00:01:694.

01:36:533 - I think you can put ...5 notes!?... *muahaHAH...*
Add DoubleNoteS in |1| and |5|
01:36:694 - ^^Same... Add DoubleNoteS in |1| and |5|
Yes Im bad sorry :X . . .
OR:
You can move 01:36:533 (96533|0,96694|0) - to |1| And 01:36:533 (96533|6,96694|6) - to |5|.
only changing positions... won't allow long note :v the last part is fine as it is. No for 5 note keypresses

I like the song (i dont expect that when modding but well, good! )
I cant help you too much in last diffs but i like the No-LongNoteS in Awakened diffs...
Hope this help you!

1. 00:10:726 (10726|6,10726|4,10887|2,11049|0) - why dont you use the method you used previously?
2. 00:11:533 (11533|5,11533|1,11694|3,11855|0,11855|6) - might want to make this different, such as this "Z-Shaped" pattern.
3. 00:32:823 - 00:37:662 - this part is a little bit too repetitive, consider making some variations.
4. 00:37:339 (37339|2) - use LN into 00:37:662 - ?
5. 00:40:565 (40565|5) - move to 00:40:565 (40565|5) - ? the sound here are only the vocal from earlier
6. 00:45:565 - add a note on 1st/2nd column? because the cymbal (and there is (imo) no other appropriate place)
7. 00:48:145 - add a note on 1st column? because the cymbal (and it fits into the previous pattern)

1. 00:12:178 - 00:13:952 - and 01:27:016 - 01:28:791 - lets reduce the usage of minitrills like these in lower difficulties as it might confuse the "targetted players"
2. 00:14:113 (14113|0,14194|2,14274|4,14274|3,14355|5,14355|6,14436|0,14436|1) - and 01:28:952 (88952|4,88952|6,89033|3,89113|2,89113|1,89194|5,89194|4,89274|3,89274|0) - consider changing this pattern into something like these because the current one is not really comfortable (for me though)
3. 00:35:403 - for more variations, I suggest doing this
4. 00:36:855 - for more interesting stuff, I suggest doing this
5. 00:43:629 - 00:44:920 - and a few other similiar part ahead - consider adding a note

1. 00:23:145 (23145|2,23629|1,24113|1,24597|1) - and the similiar part ahead - try to move it to the previous notes' column so it creates minijacks on piano sounds. it doesnt really makes sense but it feels good

1. 00:05:081 (5081|5,5081|2,5242|5,5242|1,5403|4,5403|2,5565|4,5565|5,5565|1) - try to ctrl-h so there is a left-only jacks, variations
2. 00:06:694 (6694|5) - move to 2nd column for more left jacks
3. 00:12:984 - and some other parts (both on intro and outro) - this part doesnt really do well imo, try something like this (the right is the current one). try to do 1/2 brackets / "cobwebs"
4. 00:22:984 - same like what i've said on 7K Insane

AncuL wrote:

Please note that everything here is only my suggestions, feel free to change or to not change anything.
the keys are 1 - 7

SPOILER

[7K Normal]

1. 00:10:726 (10726|6,10726|4,10887|2,11049|0) - why dont you use the method you used previously? oh nice catch!
   
2. 00:11:533 (11533|5,11533|1,11694|3,11855|0,11855|6) - might want to make this different, such as this "Z-Shaped" pattern. rearranged
   
3. 00:32:823 - 00:37:662 - this part is a little bit too repetitive, consider making some variations.
   
4. 00:37:339 (37339|2) - use LN into 00:37:662 - ?
   
5. 00:40:565 (40565|5) - move to 00:40:565 (40565|5) - ? the sound here are only the vocal from earlier nice catch!
   
6. 00:45:565 - add a note on 1st/2nd column? because the cymbal (and there is (imo) no other appropriate place) OK!
   
7. 00:48:145 - add a note on 1st column? because the cymbal (and it fits into the previous pattern) OK!

the rest is kinda good thanks~

[7K Hard]

1. 00:12:178 - 00:13:952 - and 01:27:016 - 01:28:791 - lets reduce the usage of minitrills like these in lower difficulties as it might confuse the "targetted players"
   
2. 00:14:113 (14113|0,14194|2,14274|4,14274|3,14355|5,14355|6,14436|0,14436|1) - and 01:28:952 (88952|4,88952|6,89033|3,89113|2,89113|1,89194|5,89194|4,89274|3,89274|0) - consider changing this pattern into something like these because the current one is not really comfortable (for me though) really neat suggestion thanks!
   
3. 00:35:403 - for more variations, I suggest doing this OK!
   
4. 00:36:855 - for more interesting stuff, I suggest doing this
   
5. 00:43:629 - 00:44:920 - and a few other similiar part ahead - consider adding a note

the rest is pretty neat thanks!


[7K Insane]

1. 00:23:145 (23145|2,23629|1,24113|1,24597|1) - and the similiar part ahead - try to move it to the previous notes' column so it creates minijacks on piano sounds. it doesnt really makes sense but it feels good

the rest is really good

[7K Awakened]

1. 00:05:081 (5081|5,5081|2,5242|5,5242|1,5403|4,5403|2,5565|4,5565|5,5565|1) - try to ctrl-h so there is a left-only jacks, variations
2. 00:06:694 (6694|5) - move to 2nd column for more left jacks
3. 00:12:984 - and some other parts (both on intro and outro) - this part doesnt really do well imo, try something like this (the right is the current one). try to do 1/2 brackets / "cobwebs" I think I prefer my spread patterns
4. 00:22:984 - same like what i've said on 7K Insane

the rest is kinda nice but i have some unknown problem while playing the kiai part

the map itself is very solid. had some fun :3 good luck on ranking this awesome map! thanks! actually helpful mod <3
sorry for not-so-decent mod

[-Star_Lenz-] wrote:

Hi Arcwin-san >w<
M4M from your queue and Can my m4m map changed as this
link : t/329319

Col : 1|2|3|4|5|6|7|8|9|

SPOILER

4K Normal

00:17:500 (17500|2,17662|2) - avoid jack 00:17:662 (17662|2) - move col 4 on purpose, same kick sound

00:20:242 (20242|1) - ^ move col 1

00:33:791 - add note same pattern 00:34:436 (34436|0) - I removed the note here as it increase the Star Rating of the song same reason with the similar suggestion below

00:36:371 - ^

00:37:178 (37178|1,37339|0) - ctrl+g that feels flow from 00:37:662 (37662|0,37662|3) - Good idea!

00:40:403 (40403|2) - move col 1 & 00:40:726 (40726|0,40726|1) - sliding one line to the left

00:53:791 (53791|1) - move col 1

00:54:436 (54436|1,54920|2) - ctrl+g ?

00:58:952 (58952|1,59113|2) - ^

01:07:339 (67339|2) - move col 2 that feels :3 cool stuff!

01:09:758 (69758|0,69920|3) - ctrl+g applied on a different approach similar to above

01:35:081 (95081|2) - move col 4

01:32:500 (92500|1) - ^ col

4K Hard
00:11:210 (11210|2) - move col 1 keep balanced 00:11:049 (11049|1,11049|3) - ok!

00:14:113 (14113|1,14194|2,14274|3) - sliding one line to the right

00:16:452 (16452|2,16533|1) - ctrl+g

00:20:403 (20403|2) - move col 1 & 00:20:726 (20726|0,20887|2) - ctrl+g & :v 00:21:049 (21049|0,21049|1) - sliding one line to the left and again :v

00:21:371 (21371|1,21533|0) - ctrl+g

00:21:855 - add note I decided not to do triples in my hard difficulties

00:24:597 - add note 00:27:178 (27178|0,27178|1) - same here only doing doubles on clap sounds.

00:29:758 - ^

00:35:403 (35403|1) - move col 1 ok!

00:37:662 - add note

01:33:791 (93791|1,93952|2) - ctrl+g that feels flow :3

01:36:694 - add note ?

4K Insane

00:17:823 - add note I decided not to add any triple notes for the snare in this part. Also the triples are in awakened difff

00:19:113 - ^ high sound drum

00:32:500 (32500|1,32500|0) - LN 2 col Single 1 col , IF in acc Singer 00:32:823 (32823|1) - move col 1 really nice suggestion!

00:33:468 (33468|2) - move col 4 ok!

00:34:758 (34758|1) - ^ col 1

01:05:565 - add note high sound

01:10:565 (70565|0) - move col 2 & 01:10:726 (70726|1,70807|0) - ctrl+g that feels flow >w< cool stuff

01:21:049 (81049|1,81129|3) - ctrl+g

01:33:952 - add note high sound

OwO oke good luck arwin-san thank you as well! modding your map now

Verniy_Chan wrote:

Hi arcwin-sama you're my favorite mapper XD oh my <3

SPOILER

Mod Via arcwinolivirus' mania M4M-only contract queue

4K = |1|2|3|4|

(Focus : Pattern , Pitch, Hitsounds)

General

1. normal-hitwhistle.wav is unused hitsounds, and it become unrankable issue, let me explain :
   from 00:22:662 - until 00:32:500 - you had used sample set hitsound soft-hit whistle and not normal-hit whistle. this's the reason your wav. file can't dettect soft hit (S:C1)
   
   in my opinion : from timing control point, change audio sampleset Soft (S:C1) to sampleset Normal (N:C1) or from beatmap folder, rename normal-hitwhistle to soft-hitwhistle, so.. it's can be used. removed normal-hitwhistle instead since its the same sound as hitnormal lol
2. And Just minor thing, maybe uncheck Enable costume colours for all diff, since it only allowed to other game mode. I don't know for mania, lel I dun know either lel! xDXD

4K Normal

OD : 7
HP : 7

1. 00:14:274 (14274|1) - add C for consistency snare on white tick like 00:13:307 (13307|1,13629|1,13952|0) - you can hear it with payback 25%thanks!
2. 00:49:597 (49597|1,49758|3) - Ctrl + G, better avoid 00:50:081 - for different pitch and mirror pattern like 00:46:533 (46533|0,46694|2,47016|1,47178|3) - thanks!
3. 01:11:210 (71210|2) - there's a lot layering pattern in collum |3|, to make it balance imo move to |2| thanks!
4. Pattern looks consistent, nice~ Thankies! ^o^

4K Hard

OD : 7,5
HP : 7,5 or 8

1. 00:14:274 - and 01:31:452 - add C for snare sound thanks!
   
2. 00:41:694 - i suggest to delete it, since there's low drum sound, and also you didn't put chord on 4K Insane thanks!
   
3. 01:07:823 (67823|1,68065|1,68307|1,68468|1,68710|1) - try to avoid this anchor, it a bit comfortable, so imo 01:08:468 (68468|1) - move to |4| make it balance and mirror pattern like 01:08:629 (68629|2,68710|1,68791|0,68791|3) - thanks!
   
4. what the... it really hard to find another pattern issue thanks I guess XD

4K Insane

OD : 8
HP : 8 or 8,5

1. 00:14:274 - add C for snare sound, same reason like 00:16:613 - 01:31:452 - thanks!
   
2. 00:37:420 (37420|1) - better remove, seem it really low/weak than 00:37:500 (37500|2,37581|1) - make space between kick 00:37:339 - and synth, you can call it break rhythm there's a continuous synth at bg, I can hear it clearly though o.o
   
3. 01:05:726 (65726|2,65807|1) - why you didn't put chord here, it was inconsistent compared to 01:05:887 (65887|2,65887|3,65968|1,65968|0,66049|2,66049|3,66129|0,66129|1) - the reason is unplayable and chord usage? considering choose a note or chord, or maybe put chord only on red tick anda white tick like this :
   
   it just suggestion, i hope i didn't break your mapping style ;w; thanks! Did 1/1 doubles 1/2 singles instead just to make difference with Awakened. But Applied in a different pattern.
   
4. 01:14:597 (74597|0) - move to |4| for hand balance moving to 4 will give 4 1/2 note stacks
   
5. 01:28:549 (88549|3,88629|2,88710|1,88791|0,88791|3,88871|2,88952|1,89033|0) - too many stream pattern from right to left, imo 01:29:033 (89033|0,89113|2) - Ctrl + G for variety pattern thanks!
   
6. 01:34:274 (94274|2,94274|0,94436|0,94436|3,94436|1) - i think it's almost same pitch, considering to add note 01:34:274 - reference : 7K Insane and other diff thanks!
   
7. Great pattern here~ Thank ya so much~

4K Awakened

OD : 8,5 or 9 (0 slider lel)
HP : 8 or 8,5

1. 00:14:274 - add C for snare sound, and also here 00:16:613 - 01:31:452 - thanks!
2. 00:57:178 - add note for low synth hat, you can check consistency here 01:02:339 - thanks! great catch!
3. 01:35:807 - ghost note, i can't hear any sound here or maybe it's very low.. anyway delete it I hear it clearly, kick sound
4. Wow.. the kiai section, if you know what i mean XD ikr? XD

Verniy_Chan wrote:

My Rating

92,75
pretty cool rating system~ thanks!
(1-100)

just for fun only, don’t take it seriously

High Quality Map, it my first time give rating above 90 XD wow thanks @@
btw can i mutual friend? done mate~! ^o^
Хорошо~ Good Luck..

Nixo wrote:

This is too good

Feerum wrote:

Nomination Check


Column: | 1 | 2 | 3 | 4 | 5 | 6 | 7 |
======================================================
Red means Unrankable stuff
Big means Important stuff
Normal are Suggestions
// means comments
======================================================

Hello arcwinolivirus
I'm here to check your Map.
Should be everything okay i can Nominate it.
So let's begin!

General

Artist: Right
Title: Right
Source: Right
Tags: Right
AiMod: Right
Background: Right
BPM/Offset: Right
mp3/Hitsounds: Right
Other: Problem with the spread found
You have here a problem and sadly i have to be strickt here. Your 7K spread is against the Ranking Criteria.
Every Keymode is treated as own Game Mode. The Ranking Criteria says following:
The lowest difficulty must be below 2.0 stars.

The Normal for your 7K spread is 2,01*. You have to lower the difficult for 0,02*
Below if will give you a suggestions what will reduce the stars below 2*. You can accept these or try it by yourself.
Important is that we get this difficult below 2,0*

Also please disable Widescreen Support in: All Difficultys except of 4K Awakened Fixed!

7K Normal

I skipped the 4K Normal because i didn't find anything that would be worth to change. Is good enough.

Okay like i already said your difficult spread for 7K is currently unrankable because of the 7K Normal.
We have to get this difficult below 2.0*

Here are my two suggestions how it could work. Hope you like one of these.

[Suggestion]

One difficult spike we have at the beginning. From here 00:11:855 - my suggestion is to Map only the snare drum, means you remove following notes:
00:12:178 (12178|5,12500|6,12823|0,13145|1,13468|0,13791|6) - these here and
00:14:758 (14758|6,15081|0,15403|1,15726|0,16049|6) - . Would look like this:


This will give your Map still a pretty cool rhythm, especially when you leave 00:14:113 (14113|5,14274|3) - these single notes.
I think these flow especially good with the cymbal and the "little break" you did add after the Cymbal.

Should you accept this above you should maybe do the same here 01:26:855 - for consistency!

Hope you like it, otherwise try something by yourself to get the starrating reduced or try to catch me IRC so we can brainstorm about this.

Okay, beside this suggestion i have one more for the Kiai, the rhythm of your Pattern is pretty cool, but something is weird.
The break after you cymbal feels strange to play. Its 1 1/2 beat.
My suggestion would be a 1/1 beat break after every cymbal. This emphasize the cymbal and the melody a bit more i think and also feels pretty cool while playing. So my suggestion would be following:
Remove this note here 01:06:371 (66371|4) -
Then you add a note 01:07:662 - on 2
01:08:952 (68952|2) - This one you remove again.
01:10:242 - Then you add here one on 6.
Here 01:17:984 - you add again a note on 6.
01:19:274 (79274|4) - This one you remove
and here 01:20:565 - you add one.

This creates a pretty cool rhythm into the Kiai and also the break after the cymbal feels way better to play.
Try it and let me know if you like it! pretty cool nerf! All applied and rearranged a bit~ thanks!

4K Insane

00:27:500 (27500|2) - Maybe remove this note here? It doesn't really have any very audible sound and i think only LN begin would be better to play like you did with the first here 00:22:339 - . I can hear the hihat-like sound here clearly. There's even an hihat-like sound at 00:22:339 - but its very inaudible. Same as 00:22:500 - . Its just the hihat-like sound became audible starting at 00:27:500 - that's why I note for it for the Insane.

01:05:565 (65565|0) - Suggest to move it to 2 to avoid 01:05:565 (65565|0,65726|0,65887|0) - I think you meant 3, moved to avoid that 3-note stack.

01:09:274 (69274|3,69355|0,69516|3,69597|0) - CTRL + G here and after you did this, move 01:09:597 (69597|3) - to 3, again to avoid triple "jack". rearranged a bit

01:19:436 (79436|1,79516|2) - CTRL + G, same reason as above. applied!

Thats all here thanks for pointing out those stacks~

7K Insane

00:27:500 (27500|2) - Same thing like mention in the 4K Insane. I think LN alone is here enough same reason as before, the hihat starts to become audible here. Its very clear in my headphone @@ (not using equalizer, all default sound system settings)

Nothing more hehe. Cool diff! Thanks! >w<

4K Awakened

Okay diff is pretty cool but i don't like the HP/OD.
You have here 0 LN's. Really. Not even one. That's why i suggest to raise the OD at least to 9.
And to the HP. HP9 is pretty high for such a dense and at the end very long JS. I recommend to reduce it to 8,5. (8 would be too easy to pass with mash) fixed OD 9 | HP 8.5

Overall this difficult it okay, but the JS in the Kiai.. it's.. idk. I think you overused the 3-Noted Chords here. I see that you mapped the snare + cymbal with them but my opinion is the cymbal alone would be enough. It's really really REALLY hard to play and in my eyes really close to overmap, when not already overmapped.

This are just my two cent to it. If you don't want to change it, i will not force you.. but it's really not enjoyable :c. I got alot of feedback that this difficulty is very clean and fun. (because I was doing some shameless ads on a tournament in 4K PH and some multiplayer rooms. I asked for feedbacks and they had no problems with it, saying "its a cool and awesome map". But still thanks for the cents!

Okay, i also checked the 7K Awakened but it seems fine for me. Just please also consider here about the same OD/HP suggestion i gave you for the 4K Awakened! Fixed!

Well yeah, pretty cool Mapset. The most important thing is just to get the 7K Normal below 2.0* Already fixed because of your cool suggestion, thanks!
Call me back! calling you back now

Note: I did check EVERY Difficult. The difficulty's i didn't mention are okay how they are! roger that Sir >w<)7

Aras25 wrote:

I hate stairs and stream, but somehow not in this one
and I also got the Megitsune vibe here lol
http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5240008 my form of support u.u

Kuo Kyoka wrote:

sorry for late, i just bought a mouse so i can back to modding again Its fine, Sir KK! Glad that you have a new mouse

[Generals]
I need metadata check

I got the metadata from its official youtube video https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=IRK6hDce_oY

additional infos:
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Since this map is already good enough so I gonna go though everything by small suggestion, I hope it help
| 1 | 2 | 3 | 4 | 5 | 6 | 7 |

[4K Normal]
if you follow vocal and add 2 notes on here so do 00:11:210 - but it will be very hard for a normal diff so i would suggest to remove a note on 00:11:533 - I changed my mind, applied!

00:17:500 (17500|2,17662|2) - should be jack yes but the next up is also jack bass too, you might need to follow it but while only for normal diff i think this jack is not necessary. Fixed!

00:30:403 (30403|2,30726|0,31049|3,31210|1) - if you're following piano sound so maybe remove them, and the recym sound start from 00:31:694 - you can keep it, it caught a little weird for me at the moment (because you didn't follow that hihat sound like as 7K NM) since there are no more piano sound after the piano phase, I decided to do the hihats. Without those notes, it feels quite empty on that part and that feels awkward for me. But with the notes, it does represent not only the hihats, but it also emphasizes the vocal which making it more consistent.

00:42:016 - add a note on here for snare like you did on 00:40:726 - Fixed!

for ending, i think add a note on here 01:29:113 - for snare would be better than let it like the begining great idea! in the beginning its just a tom, but this time its a snare. Fixed!

01:32:339 (92339|1,92500|1) - 01:34:920 (94920|2,95081|2) - 00:20:081 (20081|1,20242|1) - consider this part Fixed as well Sir. Thanks!

[7K Normal]
00:06:371 (6371|4,6371|2) - i think follow the "oh oh" soud might fit if you let it on [26] like as 00:05:887 (5887|1,5887|5) - Fixed!

00:11:533 (11533|1,11533|2) - same reason i mentioned Applied!

00:19:436 (19436|5,19436|2) - hmm, while it's still on beginning, add note like this not really help, according to 00:19:436 (19436|2,19436|5) - too the double notes represent for the strong sounds;guitar+cymbals impact. I also did it in 4K NM.

00:37:339 (37339|2) - consider to make it to hold and end on 00:37:662 - for melody flow I've been actually thinking about this for a long time. Fixed!

00:42:016 - add a note for snare added~!

01:03:307 (63307|5) - since you follow jack for guitar so maybe move this note to 4th which for mini jack, that's would help moved~

01:11:049 - missed a note for snare Fixed!

01:15:565 (75565|0) - I think this note isn't worth, better remove it because you added 2 notes for cymbal now 2 notes for 01:15:887 (75887|5) - this (this one actually loud beat pitch) Removed~

01:15:887 (75887|5) - missing notes here too I think you meant 01:21:371 - but fixed!

01:29:113 - add a note on here for snare which help ending a little harder yep added as well!

[4K Hard]
No problems found here, perfect for me Thank you so much Sir! That makes me happy

[7K Hard]
00:42:178 (42178|6,42258|5,42339|4) - try to rearrange some patterns here, it sound fine but 00:41:694 (41694|6,41855|5,42016|4,42178|6,42258|5,42339|4) - this patterns somehow feel awkward, maybe give a weird feeling while playing, imo rearranged now sir! Thanks!
The rest are fine to me

[4K Insane]
00:31:694 (31694|1,31855|2) - it would be better if you let it on same column for hihat sound nice idea, applied!
01:16:210 - you can add a note on here to prefer the bass sound right here, it sound louder than the rest, similar with 01:21:371 - this is kinda spiky if I add a note, I think I'll just leave it single as it focuses on that 1/4 melody

[7K Insane]
00:17:823 - add a note for snare to make a different from other 2 notes bass
00:19:113 - this too
00:20:403 -
(it's fine because one note for bass, one for guitar and one for snare) (similar with 00:21:694 - but cymbal insteal of snare)
00:31:694 (31694|5,31855|4) - make them as jack so it can be prefer with hihat sound more better
01:11:210 - add a note on here for cymbal
01:12:500 - same here
01:13:952 - 01:07:339 - 01:08:791 - 01:09:920 - 01:17:662 - 01:19:113 - 01:20:242 - 01:21:533 - 01:22:823 - 01:24:274 - Your 4K Insane used 3 notes but also you added 3 notes for the begin kiai why not these too, i think it would be fit enough
01:32:662 - 01:33:952 - 01:35:242 - add note, reason i mentioned before APPLIED ALL! very helpful Sir!

[4K Awakened]
i don't think this 00:20:968 (20968|0,20968|1) - for bass is worth, better let it one note only applied!

why you add note on 00:20:968 (20968|1,20968|0) - when you didnt on 00:30:242 - there's no bassdrum sound at 00:30:242 -

00:33:226 - 00:34:516 - 00:35:807 - 00:37:097 - why this part is different than 00:38:387 - 00:39:678 - etc? bass is on 00:33:226 - and hihat on 00:33:145 - , the rest are same that make sense! thank you so much! fixed

01:09:436 (69436|3,69436|1,69436|2,69516|0,69597|2,69597|1,69678|3,69758|1,69758|0,69758|2,69839|3,69920|1,69920|0,69920|2,70000|3) - this part hmm, a little hard due to 01:09:436 (69436|2,69436|1,69597|1,69597|2,69758|1,69758|2,69920|2,69920|1) - i would recomended you to rearrange some this is the best arrangement for its density, making it [2,4] or [1,3] for doubles would be more awkward and harder. If I tend to do the doubles for [1,2] or [3,4] it would be very repetitive.

01:16:371 - try to add a note on here for cymbal I actually avoided to add note as it will result mini jack in the chorus. In this way, the players can enjoy the chorus jump/handtreams without a 'fun killer' mini jack

[7K Awakened]
00:31:694 (31694|4,31855|2) - like i mentioned before Fixed~
The rest of the map fit the playbility and well-mapped Thank you so muuuuch! Sir KK~

a really good map, call me later when you done then

Kuo Kyoka wrote:

Hmm, if that so: according to http://amasawakobo.storenvy.com/product ... d-download, so metadata should be:

Artist: Iced Blade
Title: 宙の旋律 -the melody of the cosmos- feat.lily-an (OP Cut)
Romanised Title: Sora no Senritsu -the melody of the cosmos- feat.lily-an (OP Cut)

Remember to remove some tag if you added title then

Kuo Kyoka wrote:

Iced Blade - Sora no Senritsu -the melody of the cosmos- feat.lily-an (OP Cut) [OsuMania modding]

[Generals]
- BPM: Okay
- Offset: Okay
- AiMod: Okay
- Tags: Okay
- BG: Okay
- Kiai: Okay
- Metadata: Okay
- Folder’s problem: None
- Hitsound: Okay
- Timing: Okay
- Other: Okay

Bubbled
(How we can even breath in space so that we can make love in there?)

Congratulations!

SpectorDG wrote:

I smell PP ♥

• 
  [General]

1. Song Setup & Metadata
   Song setup has no problem and also metadata is fine . . . as Kuo Kyoka mentioned above, i can trust it and i think it's fine enough
2. Audio & Hitsounds
   191kbps audio . . . it's fine, and not contains any delayed hitsound (+5ms) and all of hitsound is above 100ms
   but your normal-hitnormal seems too loud, it's even more louder when you're playing the highest diffs . . . so, i reduce it a bit on here http://puu.sh/pNwvK/cfc4cc23d5.wav
3. BPM & Timing
   all fine
4. Background
   1366x768 (16:9) screen . . . good
   
   |1|2|3|4|
   
   [4K Normal]
5. 00:16:533 (16533|3,16694|1,16855|2,17016|3) - just my sugestion, but i think a LN will be more suitabe for excahange that drum roll sound, since the 1/2 drum and guitar invasion is already end at here 00:16:533 - so, maybe it will be more good if you try some different pattern to make different feels
6. 00:19:758 (19758|0) - delete this note ? it would be more good to feel if you do some break on here
7. 00:41:371 (41371|1) - if you following vocal, it should be end at here 00:41:694 - but i feel the bgm itself have a difference in length, so if you keep it that should be fine too
8. seriously i can't find anything more . . . very good Normal diff here
   
   [7K Normal]
9. 00:18:145 (18145|6,18468|5,18791|4,19113|3) - hmm, i don't really get what kind of sound that you're try to follow on here, ithink LN would be only suitable in this part 00:18:307 (18307|3,18468|5,18629|2,18791|4) - because it have some extra long sound
10. 00:20:726 (20726|6) - again this time . . . maybe it would be more fit if you use LN to expressing this kind of sound only 00:21:049 (21049|5,21210|2,21371|4) -
11. 00:30:081 - just missing an important sound here ?
12. 01:32:984 (92984|0,93307|1,93629|2,93952|3) - 01:35:565 (95565|0,95887|1,96210|2) - same as my beginning mod, this LN are still questionable
    
    [4K Hard]
13. 01:22:420 - add a note on 4th column for keep the streams alive, yea since you've too much using tri-note 1/4 with breaks, i think we need some difference feels on here
14. 01:25:000 - and 01:25:645 - yea, same reason as above, it's more better if you keep the stream still alive just for this part only . . . if you don't mind, i will suggest like this http://puu.sh/pNxLY/28b9c608af.jpg xD
15. perfect diff, nothing more to find :3
    
    [7K Hard]
16. Perfect diff already
    
    [4K Insane]
17. 00:18:145 (18145|0,18468|1,18791|3,19113|2) - and 00:20:726 (20726|0,21049|1,21371|2) - same question as my beginning mod on 7K Normal
18. 00:51:613 (51613|3) - delete this one ? i didn't hear anything here . . . it just a blank part like on this part 00:51:129 - turn off your hitsound for more sure about this :3
19. 01:16:049 (76049|2,76129|1) - how about to make this section to be have 2 notes ? since that part is have extra instrument sound like on 00:16:533 -
20. 01:32:984 (92984|3,93307|0,93629|2,93952|1) - 01:35:565 (95565|2,95887|3,96210|0) - owo)
21. Naisu!!!!
    
    [7K Insane]
22. 00:18:145 (18145|2,18468|0,18791|6,19113|3) - 00:20:726 (20726|3,21049|6,21371|0) - same question
23. 00:51:613 - delete 2 note on them or reduce it tobe 1 note only . . . well, I even didn't hear any clear sound on this part, and also it just hihat sound but even it's not clear enough to be mapped with 1 note or even 2 notes, not like on this part 00:52:581 - (this applied to both Awakened diffs too)
    
    [4K & 7K Awakened]
24. Clear and Perfect, but pls take a look my second mod on 7K Insane owo)

[ A v a l o n ] wrote:

Qualify Check

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• 
  [General]

1. Song Setup & Metadata
   Song setup has no problem and also metadata is fine . . . as Kuo Kyoka mentioned above, i can trust it and i think it's fine enough thankies!
2. Audio & Hitsounds
   191kbps audio . . . it's fine, and not contains any delayed hitsound (+5ms) and all of hitsound is above 100ms
   but your normal-hitnormal seems too loud, it's even more louder when you're playing the highest diffs . . . so, i reduce it a bit on here http://puu.sh/pNwvK/cfc4cc23d5.wav thank you for the effort of reducing its volume!
3. BPM & Timing
   all fine
4. Background
   1366x768 (16:9) screen . . . good
   
   |1|2|3|4|
   
   [4K Normal]
5. 00:16:533 (16533|3,16694|1,16855|2,17016|3) - just my sugestion, but i think a LN will be more suitabe for excahange that drum roll sound, since the 1/2 drum and guitar invasion is already end at here 00:16:533 - so, maybe it will be more good if you try some different pattern to make different feels good idea! I changed it to LN and added a note beside it since snare + guitar which I really think it fits
   
6. 00:19:758 (19758|0) - delete this note ? it would be more good to feel if you do some break on here would love to but I find it empty without the note there since there's a bass drum sound.
   
7. 00:41:371 (41371|1) - if you following vocal, it should be end at here 00:41:694 - but i feel the bgm itself have a difference in length, so if you keep it that should be fine too I decided to keep it Sir, I'm following the synth :3
   
8. seriously i can't find anything more . . . very good Normal diff here thank you so much for the compliment
   
   [7K Normal]
9. 00:18:145 (18145|6,18468|5,18791|4,19113|3) - hmm, i don't really get what kind of sound that you're try to follow on here, ithink LN would be only suitable in this part 00:18:307 (18307|3,18468|5,18629|2,18791|4) - because it have some extra long sound its the guitar sound sir, I can clearly hear it here @@ the strumming of the guitar with pitch starts at 00:18:145 - and it has the sound length of 1/2
   
10. 00:20:726 (20726|6) - again this time . . . maybe it would be more fit if you use LN to expressing this kind of sound only 00:21:049 (21049|5,21210|2,21371|4) - same reason as above @@
    
11. 00:30:081 - just missing an important sound here ? nice notice! added
    
12. 01:32:984 (92984|0,93307|1,93629|2,93952|3) - 01:35:565 (95565|0,95887|1,96210|2) - same as my beginning mod, this LN are still questionable same reasoning as before
    
    [4K Hard]
13. 01:22:420 - add a note on 4th column for keep the streams alive, yea since you've too much using tri-note 1/4 with breaks, i think we need some difference feels on here fixed~
    
14. 01:25:000 - and 01:25:645 - yea, same reason as above, it's more better if you keep the stream still alive just for this part only . . . if you don't mind, i will suggest like this http://puu.sh/pNxLY/28b9c608af.jpg xD seems cool~! applied!
    
15. perfect diff, nothing more to find :3 thanks! >w<)b
    
    [7K Hard]
16. Perfect diff already omg thank you! @@
    
    [4K Insane]
17. 00:18:145 (18145|0,18468|1,18791|3,19113|2) - and 00:20:726 (20726|0,21049|1,21371|2) - same question as my beginning mod on 7K Normal same reason as previous, guitar strum 1/2 long sound. I even double checked it with 25% playback rate and I can hear it clearly sir @@
    
18. 00:51:613 (51613|3) - delete this one ? i didn't hear anything here . . . it just a blank part like on this part 00:51:129 - turn off your hitsound for more sure about this :3 I hear a tom sound here similar to the sound at 00:51:533 - its just a low tom. Around 4 modders mentioned about this part and they can hear the same tom as well~
    
19. 01:16:049 (76049|2,76129|1) - how about to make this section to be have 2 notes ? since that part is have extra instrument sound like on 00:16:533 - I think I'll keep it as single notes only for that melody part. Also the difference at 00:16:533 - that those double notes are snares while the selected single notes are just low toms
    
20. 01:32:984 (92984|3,93307|0,93629|2,93952|1) - 01:35:565 (95565|2,95887|3,96210|0) - owo) same reason as before ;;
    
21. Naisu!!!! thaaankks!
    
    [7K Insane]
22. 00:18:145 (18145|2,18468|0,18791|6,19113|3) - 00:20:726 (20726|3,21049|6,21371|0) - same question same reasoning as previous ;;
    
23. 00:51:613 - delete 2 note on them or reduce it tobe 1 note only . . . well, I even didn't hear any clear sound on this part, and also it just hihat sound but even it's not clear enough to be mapped with 1 note or even 2 notes, not like on this part 00:52:581 - (this applied to both Awakened diffs too) its a tom sound, and yes I agree that it should be only single note than double notes because of its not that audiblity. Changed to single notes! thanks!
    
    [4K & 7K Awakened]
24. Clear and Perfect, but pls take a look my second mod on 7K Insane owo) 4K Awakened's already a single note while Fixed the 7K Awakened's! Thanks!

Such a perfect pattern for this map, it's the first time my BN check are very short like this qwq
call me again

[ A v a l o n ] wrote:

Once question again owo
why you put "inconsistency" green lines around in this time ? 00:21:855 - to 00:22:662 - it's different placing in all diffs (except normal diff)
well, i know you use different sample, but can you just put that into same timing with consistent ? . . . i think it's no need to be different place in this time, since it just a break parts

yea, just that . . .
if you have different think, i need your explanation sir >w<)b

[ A v a l o n ] wrote:

Yup, all things are fixed and . . . bla bla bla too much talk lol
here is da Qualify

good luck Arcwin >w<)/

-SoraGami- wrote:

grats arc >w<

Rivals_7 wrote:

Gratz Master Arcwin

Aras25 wrote:

Goho owo
all hail weeb J - song
gratz arcwin senpai =w=)b

Feerum wrote:

Grats

Gravey- wrote:

Fukken congratz m8 HAHAHA =w=)b

#MarayIsAliveNotDedYet! ;w;

Kuo Kyoka wrote:

woah, congrats <3