NatsumeRin wrote:

Red: You must fix this.
Blue: You'd better do sth with this imo.
Green: Just suggestions.

[General]
offset:6718, you don't need the 2nd offset.

Hmm... are you 100% sure? at around 1 min of the song were cutted around that part. I guess I'll keep using the current one until more people suggests the same as you

[Normal]
00:58:041 (2,3) - maybe you should use a slider to start this slow part... it's easy to misread it as 1/2
True...

02:21:704 (1) - add clap at the 2nd reverse
02:22:641 (2) - ^also add clap at this..
02:57:797 (1) - a nearly silence sound at the end would be better than a "heavy" finish here imo

[Hard]
00:39:056 (4,4,4) - you should still keep your clap pace (maybe lower the volume)
I have thought about that, but in the end i decided not to do that, and to focus more on the vocals

01:12:338 (1,2) - consider about the spacing.. maybe this is better?
Done

02:17:954 (1) - a little offscreen
I'm sure that it is okay

02:29:204 (1,2,3) - use a repeat slider instead?
I'll say no for now.

[Insane]
00:38:353 (1) - since the volume is decreasing here, maybe decrease the spacing too, and it will follow the music better.
I'll say no for now.

01:47:250 (5,6) - too harsh, a simple placement is enough...
Well, the spacing pattern is pretty constant if you consideer the spacing of these objects 01:49:829 (1,2) - and etc

map is really nice done.

NatsumeRin wrote:

[Taiko Oni]
fine but seems not really a Oni...

Kitsunemimi wrote:

[Gonz]:
01:44:219 (3,4) - I sort of think you should avoid this thing, we're you've making the Easy get too difficult with the melody and stuff. I think it sounds better if you delete (4), make (3) one beat long, and make it have a slider reverse.\ Sure :3

Kitsunemimi wrote:

.....Time for a quick mod!! >.<

Also, I got an offset of 6728. And 76094. I hate you timing ;D

[Normal]:
00:55:463 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - These set of notes get a bit tricky, so you'd want to stick with either single beat sliders only, or 1/2 beat sliders only. Especially with the first three, you can just simplify that one.
I don't agree... that kind of pattern appears a lot in this map

01:14:447 (1,1) - Really short pause after spinner. You can probably just delete (1)
Well, AI mod thinks that it's a normal difficulty, also it sounds horrible without that circle imo


[Hard]:
02:12:680 (1) - Ughh... I think you should move it to the white tick. No...
02:26:391 (4,5,6) - These are usually kinda tricky to do for Hard (especially for mousexkeyboard hybrids like me). It sounds okay even if you delete (5). I think they are okay, I'm also a mouse keyboard hybrid
02:36:821 (4,2,3) - The same goes for these, but I'm honestly too tired to figure something out here.
02:45:610 (2,3) - The timing here can be hard to predict if you don't already know the tune of the song. Not that much of a big deal, but just wanted to point it out. I guess this one i'm willing to change if more people suggests the same... hmm...

[Insane]:
Whoaaa, going big with the spacing :O
01:38:579 (1,2) - I really don't like it when people do these. Just turn (1) into two circles. I could, but i wanted to accentuate the beginning of the guitar solo
02:01:196 (1) - I was told to make the spinners not 1/4 after regular notes. It's fine if it's on the red tick right? :<
02:04:946 (1) - ^ Hmm, well, other mappers would say that you should move it 1/4 after the regular note
Holy shit I love the streamy guitar solo.
Really nice, fun Insane, it's awesome!

...That's pretty much it~ Starr~

Gonzvlo wrote:

Kitsunemimi wrote:

[Gonz]:
01:44:219 (3,4) - I sort of think you should avoid this thing, we're you've making the Easy get too difficult with the melody and stuff. I think it sounds better if you delete (4), make (3) one beat long, and make it have a slider reverse.\ Sure :3

[attachment=0:925c4]Mago de Oz - Y seras cancion (ErufenRito) [Gonz].osu[/attachment:925c4]

Erufen, si no vas a usar los números, al menos usa los hits >_> Los hits están hechos para seguir el formato del lighting y de las lyrics. Los que estás usando ahora se ven HORRIBLES, exíjo que uses los nuevos hits.
Lo mismo para la reverse arrow, la que estas usando ahora no tiene la curva que debería tener.

Link

ErufenRito wrote:

Y ahora déjame morir en paz :(

Krisom wrote:

Jamás >:D!

General-
· 300g and 300k are way too similar, Add another "!" to 300g Kay.
· Why so many followpoints? They don't even seem to be animated to me, and if they are, they are pretty much unnoticeable. Do something or just leave one. Done.
· I actually kind of agree with NatsumeMoe on the first offset.
· Since it's just for a fountain, you should end the final kiai before a beat happens to avoid weird stuff pulsating on the main screen and then suddenly dissapearing. Done
· This. Add "The Big Simon Band" to tags. I could be mean and ask you to add every band that appears on the video but the video is not here so I won't be mean... ...today ;D Added + other tags too, you meanie...

SB-
· Add a dramatic "Y serás canción" pusling at 03:01:562 - for the ending? I had an idea, but the idea I had, doesn't really fits with the other difficulties (particularly because of the spinners)

Insane-
Nothing, though 02:38:906 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - Made me wonder, why 1/6? Beat sounds like a 1/4 for me here. It's justified in the other places though. Cause it is snapped to 1/6. At first I didn't notice and mapped it to 1/4'ths, but after hearing it some more, i have noticed that it sounded weird, and so I rechecked it, and finally noticed it was in 1/6

Hard-
01:20:547 (1,2,3,4) - This decrescendo has little sense to me, as the music actually gets gradually stonger, not weaker.
01:33:672 (1,2,3,4) - ^Also, these two are not the same decresendos on volume...
I wanted to have 01:21:249 (4) - louder than the others, also after some testing when i was adding the hitsounds, I have finally conlucded that this way sounds better

Normal-
01:20:312 (1) - Watch out for volume decreasing sections that came along from Hard. I'm guessing the decreasing volume section shouldn't be on the repeat. And if it should (wich I disagree with), you'd have to add one at 01:33:437 (4)'s repeat. Oh yeah, also remove this new combo and switch it to 01:21:719 (2) (pretty much like the second half of the chorus. remember to keep the new combos consistent)
Fixed the combo things...


Sheesh, can I go study now? No, go to the kitchen and make dinner for me NOW.

Krisom wrote:

General-
· 300g and 300k are way too similar, Add another "!" to 300g
Just so you know, I made new hits which are way better but Erufen refuses to use them. (Same for default numbers)
<- mad

Blue Dragon wrote:

Normal
02:45:624 (x) - I'm not sure about this, but add a note here? I messed up here because I though (2) was going to start on the white tick.
Hmm if more people says the same, I'll add.

Hard
01:42:343 (1) - add finish?
01:44:218 (1) - ^ at start?
No... D:

Insane
01:12:577 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - very nice pattern :O
01:48:671 (1,2) - that's just VERY confusing >.< Teheheheee
02:38:905 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - YES, AWESOME <33333333... oh wait it's 1/6, not 1/8 nvm :U AHH... They are snapped in 1/6 I SWEAR... I always hear 9 beats in 25% in the last stream


Awesome map, deserves my star and my love <3

EDIT: I see NatsumeRin pointed the same thing as me on Insane, the reason it's because this has reverse arrows, the other ones don't. This is just really confusing. What natsume pointed out wasn't that, but the others slider looked like they were spaced differently than the others...

Lissette wrote:

-se podría crop blood.png un poco Lo hare cuando requiera hacer un full submit necesario >_>''

Insane
02:49:843 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - la parte malévola D: en fin~ yo pondría los combos (1,2,1,2,1,2.... etc etc) para que sea mas fácil de leer ^^ Okay
me encantó *.*

Hard
01:04:374 (3,4) - arregla este pequeño espacio Rofl, le habia dado mas spacing por los stacks, pero creo que exagere.

Star~

Lissette wrote:

Gonz
"beatmap by ErufenRito"? O: esperaba un "Difficulty by Gonzalo" u.u Cuando lo hice no me pareció necesario ya que solo es una guest diff pero lo puedo hacer si Erufen quiere~
02:34:843 (1,1,1) - no me gusta esto para una diff easy, por que no un solo spinner uniendo estos tres? Tienes razón, uní los 2 primeros ahora solo hay 2. (Si juntaba todos el spinners, creo que sería muy largo)

Sakura Hana wrote:

Hello dear ErufenRito, Krisom is sick, and cant play videogames for a week so im here to replace him. Aw, poor krisom, someone should go to his house and hug him (*cough*gonzvlo*cough*)

[Skin]
Is the sliderball supposed to rotate abnormally like that? i'd think it be rolling over the slidertrack not rolling over itself o.o
The slider followcircle looks like 2 approach circles, it's messed me up 3 times already, i suggest you try something else as a skin there or use the default if you cant. http://puu.sh/3nlO
And sometimes even cover some approach circles: http://puu.sh/3nmw
comboburst-0.png does it really need to have that much transparency on top of it?
Ill leave Gonzvlo to answer the skins issues, although I believe that he left the comboburst-0.png with that much transparency so that it positions itself in a spot that covers the least with the gameplay.


[Storyboard][b]
[b]zv.png has wayyyyy too many transparencies about 6 times what it has in color it must be cropped down. Youre right, comepletely forgot to delete all that amount of transparency after adding it

[lepidon! - Taiko Oni]
01:21:718 (1) - Big Don? It sounds good for me, so added. @Lepi: if you have problems with it, let me now, and i'll take it out
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Sakura Hana wrote:

Hi Sakura :3

[Skin]
Is the sliderball supposed to rotate abnormally like that? i'd think it be rolling over the slidertrack not rolling over itself o.o
Is my sliderball abnormal ;_;? Oh well, yeah it's supposed to rotate like that, I will change it if erufen agrees with you tho

The slider followcircle looks like 2 approach circles, it's messed me up 3 times already, i suggest you try something else as a skin there or use the default if you cant.
I'm quite surprised that you mention it since I'm quite picky with stuff like that. I'm pretty sure that's it's easy to notice the difference between those elements because I used a different texture for the sliderfollowcircle, plus the fact the the approach-circle's colours are different. However, I rather be on the safe side for stuff like that, This is the improved file.

comboburst-0.png does it really need to have that much transparency on top of it?
What Erufen said, but if it's really necessary I don't have any problem with cropping the file. (Erufen, feel free to do it :>)


[Gonz]
00:41:171 (3) - Since you were following the lyrics on the previous sliders i thought this one was following the lyrics too and almost tripped, i suggest switching the new combo from the next note here so it can help new players know this is a different instrument (although they'll probably get confused anyways oh well XD)
02:49:843 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - This combo can be a bit too long for an Easy, but it makes sense as well, i'd think you should probably split it into 3, 3 note combos.

]Both fixed \o/

Sakura Hana wrote:

[lepidon! - Taiko Oni]
01:21:718 (1) - Big Don?

ErufenRito wrote:

Also, you could always find a BAT for me :>

ErufenRito wrote:

Yay, all those kudosu stars worked!!!!

And thanks xD

ErufenRito wrote:

Aw, thanks everyone for your reply, I'm glad you all liked this map!