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Mago De Oz - Y seras cancion

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Luvdic
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This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on sábado, 16 de julio de 2011 at 02:15:24 a.m.

Artist: Mago de Oz
Title: Y seras cancion
Tags: Gonzvlo lepidopodus The Big Simon Band Gaia Epilogo
BPM: 128
Filesize: 13129kb
Play Time: 03:02
Difficulties Available:
  1. Gonz (0,85 stars, 116 notes)
  2. Hard (4,45 stars, 315 notes)
  3. Insane (4,98 stars, 519 notes)
  4. lepidon! - Taiko Oni (4,88 stars, 768 notes)
  5. Normal (3,08 stars, 205 notes)
Download: Mago de Oz - Y seras cancion
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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Awesome Skin and SB Made by Gonzvlo!!!
Also, easy diff made by him too.
And a special thanks to Rolled for helping me with the hitsounds in the guitar solo in insane
Last edited by Luvdic , edited 83 times in total.
Gonzvlo
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Skinned~
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Antu Villegas
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Star ^^

What problem have you with the mp3? maybe I can help :)
Luvdic
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Luvdic
Just go ahead and cut the mp3 around 10 - 30 seconds after the map ended with fade out.
Then check at 01:16:032 to see if it's bugged
Antu Villegas
242 posts
Joined December 2009
Antu Villegas

ErufenRito wrote:

Just go ahead and cut the mp3 around 10 - 30 seconds after the map ended with fade out.
Then check at 01:16:032 to see if it's bugged

D: Podriamos haber hablado en español -.-"... En fin, aca está :D

http://puu.sh/1bxG

Resubido por si tuviste algun inconveniente.. Cuando probe descargarlo no pude

Offset:

- 6724

- 76103

Así creo que esta bien ^^ para mi :P

Ah, divertite acomodando todos los timings points :P
Rolled
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Rolled
Pro-tip: Asking me for hitsound advice will almost always get your map looked at.

Anywho, as I said I went in to this map expecting the hitsounds to be a wreck but I was pleasantly surprised. You don't seem like somebody who needs any help with hitsounds :P But since you did ask me for advice, these are some adjustments that I would make if the map had been mine (these are all for Insane difficulty):

00:17:974 (2) - Up until this point you had a constant pattern of sliders and claps. Not quite sure why you changed it right before the break. I see you do have some custom hitsounds in there, but I think it would be better at this point to stick with default sampleset.That being said:
Turn override off. Clap @ 2's repeat, whistle on the start of 2. Add normal clap to start of slider, remove from tail. Add clap to 00:19:380 (2). Keep whistle.

Next section sounds nice. I wouldn't change much. One thing that it is lacking is normal finish, and I think you could add it to some spots that aren't already taken by soft hitfinish (definitely don't add a lot. Just a few spots such as 00:42:349 (1)'s start.) I also like adding a whistle to 00:41:880 (2).

00:47:739 (6) tail would sound good with a finish as wel as 00:49:849 (4)l. If you want to go a bit further with it, which I recommend, add one to 00:48:911 (2) as well.

00:57:817 - This section doesn't quite match up to the rest of the great hitsounds of the map. Going soft sampleset is definitely the way to go, but I think it needs something like a steady hitsound, whistle works well, to remain constant throughout the section. It's simple, but sometimes simple is the best way to go. Starting with a soft whistle on 00:58:755 (3), and then continuing every other full beat sounds nice. Adding soft finish to 00:58:052 (2)'s start, and every similar beat (ie 00:59:927 (1), 01:01:802 (1)) is a good addition to that. Then you have room to get creative with the custom clap hitsound where ever you think it sounds nice.

The next chorus sounds nice. Wouldn't change much if anything.

The riff after the chorus, 01:38:708, works well too. Little to no hitsounds sounds great here. I do like how you added the finish in the middle to break it apart, but instead of putting it on 01:45:622 (4), i'd place it 01:46:091 (1). Putting it on the start and end of the slider works nice since it's a short slider. Just placing it on the start of it makes the finish get drowned out.

Guitar Riff: You started this off nice. It's simple but has a good effect. I went ahead with the same technique of whistle whoring you were using and mapped it out in a similar way. It's way easier just to post the .osu then it would be to explain what I did, so here it is. Note: The only thing I changed in the .osu is the guitar riff hitsounds. Everything else, including previous suggestions were left untouched.

Download: Mago de Oz - Y seras cancion (ErufenRito) [Insane].osu

Or if you want to manually edit the .osu:
Ctrl F 128122, make a note. Ctrl F 160466. Delete all in between including two mentioned. Replace:

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Okay I have to go fix a mistake. So posting this here. Minor fixes are needed after guitar solo anyway.
Luvdic
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Luvdic
I love you rolled :D

Although, i gotta say that your suggestion for 00:57:817, i dont quite like it so much or im not understanding what youre trying to say... :T
Most probably because im already way too used to the current one to change it so drastically... Ill try again for it another in time
MathiasXII
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MathiasXII
Heyyyyz~ ! I got your request :3

Well the timing is a little tedious to set in this song because the offset between beats is never the same... but it seems to stabilize around an offset though.

Here's what I found. I found that the offset that's currently there is very accuarate as it is though... the offsets I'm about to give you is only for a second opinion.

I always give another offset ANYWAY just to confirm or not if your offset is correct :). So I'd recommend to take this only as a suggestion =) :

First offset: 6734... I centered the offset to the beat... it seemed to be sooner and at a stable rate... With that offset, it seems that it's always a tad sooner or later, but there's more beat that hits JUST RIGHT on the offset... but I'll agree that sometimes it may sound a little off, but I still have a small conviction somewhere that it will play more accurately this way. See how it plays =).

Second offset: 76 106 ^

ONLY GIVE KUDOS IS THIS POST HAS BEEN OF ANY USE TO YOU!

But hey, nice map !!! Have a star * =).
Luvdic
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Luvdic
Arghh your timing doesnt convince me enough... D:
Luvdic
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Luvdic
delete please ;D
narakucrimson
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narakucrimson
Y serás cancioooón! *v*

[General]
  1. Muy lindo skin! Quizás los números me parecieron un poco aparatosos, con ese stroke blanco, pero bueno, admito que a veces soy un poco exquisito de más xD Buen trabajo :T
[Normal]
  1. 58:509 (3)~ - Mmm el spacing disminuye debido al cambio de velocidad... Creo que una transición tan repentina en un Normal puede ser confuso. Quizás la forma de que fuera menos confuso sería eliminar objetos antes del cambio de velocidad, pero no quedaría bien ni por asomo. Así que lo menciono nada más n.n
  2. 02:49:829 (1,2,1,2) - Saltos en Normal, wtf? Me suena a que esto podría generarle problemas a un jugador nuevo... Considera cambiar el pattern (aunque se ve bien :))
Sobre esta dificultad, nada más :D

[Hard]
  1. 02:13:032 (2) - El DS parece estar un poco mal, es más pequeño que el anterior.
  2. 02:13:032 (2,3) - No estoy seguro de que tantos whistles suenen bien... Intenta usar algos menos.
  3. 02:57:094 (2) - Pienso que (2) debería empezar aquí, y debería tener 1/4 de largo. No creo que medidas de 1/6 para este objeto en particular suenen bien...
[Insane]
  1. Te gustan los saltos, ¿no? xD
Bien, bien. Me gustó.
Gonzvlo
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Gonzvlo

narakucrimson wrote:

[Insane]
  1. Te gustan los saltos, ¿no? xD
Él come jumps en el desayuno y streams en la cena.
narakucrimson
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narakucrimson

Gonzvlo wrote:

narakucrimson wrote:

[Insane]
  1. Te gustan los saltos, ¿no? xD
Él come jumps en el desayuno y streams en la cena.
Jajajaja me daba esa impresión si :P
Luvdic
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Luvdic

narakucrimson wrote:

Y serás cancioooón! *v*

[General]
  1. Muy lindo skin! Quizás los números me parecieron un poco aparatosos, con ese stroke blanco, pero bueno, admito que a veces soy un poco exquisito de más xD Buen trabajo :T
[Normal]
  1. 58:509 (3)~ - Mmm el spacing disminuye debido al cambio de velocidad... Creo que una transición tan repentina en un Normal puede ser confuso. Quizás la forma de que fuera menos confuso sería eliminar objetos antes del cambio de velocidad, pero no quedaría bien ni por asomo. Así que lo menciono nada más n.n Lol, me supuse que estaba bien, ya que el spacing en general ya es baja, reduciendolo un poco más no se nota mucho :T
  2. 02:49:829 (1,2,1,2) - Saltos en Normal, wtf? Me suena a que esto podría generarle problemas a un jugador nuevo... Considera cambiar el pattern (aunque se ve bien :))
El incremento en ds tampoco es mucho... además, para eso está el easy que se está haciendo
Sobre esta dificultad, nada más :D

[Hard]
  1. 02:13:032 (2) - El DS parece estar un poco mal, es más pequeño que el anterior. Lo sé... Hmm, quizá lo cambie en un futuro, mi intención era colocarlo exactamente en el medio
  2. 02:13:032 (2,3) - No estoy seguro de que tantos whistles suenen bien... Intenta usar algos menos. Check insane :T
  3. 02:57:094 (2) - Pienso que (2) debería empezar aquí, y debería tener 1/4 de largo. No creo que medidas de 1/6 para este objeto en particular suenen bien... Esa sección en realidad está en 1/6
[Insane]
  1. Te gustan los saltos, ¿no? xD
Bien, bien. Me gustó.
narakucrimson
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02:57:094 (2) - Pienso que (2) debería empezar aquí, y debería tener 1/4 de largo. No creo que medidas de 1/6 para este objeto en particular suenen bien

Pero probaste hacerlo como dije? Suena mejor, creo :P
lovhin456
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Heeyy ~ Aqui va mi mod ~

General;
- Errrm, el titulo no va todo con mayuscula (las palabras) ? Asi; "Y Seras Cancion" ?

Skin;
- Vamos a molestar a Gonz :3
- El default-1 no esta bien centrado ademas es un poco mas pequeño que los demas
- El default-5 me parece que no esta bien centrado ademas parece mas pequeño tambien
- El default-8 es definitivamente mas pequeño que los demas
- La animacion que haces con el followpoint no es muy notoria cuando se juega
- El reverse arrow me parece algo raro, el algunos sliders se ve mal
- El fail-background no deberia ser 1024x768 ?
- Ohhh ese borde medio rojizo del hitcircle overlay no me gusta ;w; solo lo digo ~
- Umm, tal vez haz el play-skip un poco mas grande ?
- Podrias hacer el color del hit0 un poco mas oscuro ?
- El section-pass y section-fail tienen transparencia que no se usa, ademas me parecen un poco pequeños
- Los bordes del spinner-approach circle se ven algo mal, usa el que deje en el thread de tu mapa de Muse ? Pero hazle todos los arreglos para que quede como este
- Buen trabajo Gonz ;3 por cierto ... que piensas de las elecciones ? Hahahaha >w<

Gonz;
- 02:49:829 >> Este combo es muy largo para la diff mas facil dividelo
- 03:00:610 >> Quitale el repeat, despues haz que termine en 03:01:079 y agrega notas en 03:01:547 (agrega nuevo combo aqui), 03:02:016, 03:02:485
- 03:02:954 >> Mejor suena un finish normal

Normal;
- 00:13:509 >> Tal vez quitale el clap ~ ?
- 00:19:369 >> Quitale el clap y que solo quede el whistle
- 00:25:463 >> Agrega una nota con finish ? Ahh y bajale el volumen solo al finish si es que lo haces
- 01:29:204 >> Mejor que el nuevo combo empiece aqui
- 02:57:329 >> Este timing section no es ya que tiene el mismo volumen del anterior
- 02:57:446 >> ^
- 03:00:610 >> ^
- 03:03:891 >> Ehhh podrias mover este timing section al tick azul que esta despues del timing section anterior a este ?

Hard;
- 00:25:463 >> Nota con finish ? ~
- 02:17:485 >> Mejor un whistle ;D
- 02:24:516 >> Quitale el whistle
- 02:29:438 >> Agregale whistle

Insane;
- Perfecto !! En verdad me encanta ~


* Star ~ (ﾉ>w<)ﾉ★
Zelos
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Zelos
SPANEESH SONGZ okay

Folder Check:

Everything seems good in here!

Please note any mod request of mine is a suggestion and can be freely ignored.

Gonz:

00:59:916 (2) - i had no idea this slider does a loop, this could be lead to a slider miss since it really isn't visible at first that it is a loop.
(espescially for easy players)

02:01:079 (2) - ack it just slightly touches the HP bar, i dont know if that is an issue but waaaaaah.

02:34:829 (1,1,1) - this kind of a lot of spinners for an easy.

Gonz, I just like completely fell in love with your mapping style. I think Krisom would too.

Normal:

OOOH nothing wrong here. This kinda looked like a slow version of like lesjuh style maps in a way.

Hard:

02:25:219 (1,2) - this layout oh god no no no no no no that must be changed.

02:57:172 (2,1) - ^^^^^

Insane:

02:01:079 (1,1) - these are too close on the timing measure in my opinion.

02:04:829 (1,1) - ^^^

This was a very nice mapset overall.

If I could give this mapset the almost bubble star, I would.

But for now, here is a Zelos star.

Why is this in WIP anyway?
Luvdic
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lovhin456 wrote:

General;
- Errrm, el titulo no va todo con mayuscula (las palabras) ? Asi; "Y Seras Cancion" ?
Nop, busque por varias fuentes, y todos tienen la "s" y "s" en minusculas

Y oh por dios, tu mod psot se ve mucho mas corto sin lo del skin lol.


Normal;
- 00:13:509 >> Tal vez quitale el clap ~ ? Hmm no se, me parece que esto es una buena forma de separarlos en dos. Lo reconsiderare si alguien mas lo sugiere
- 00:19:369 >> Quitale el clap y que solo quede el whistle Pero los otros diff... >_>

- 00:25:463 >> Agrega una nota con finish ? Ahh y bajale el volumen solo al finish si es que lo haces Added en todas las diffs... Ya que de todos modos... ALGUIEN, ya insistia en que lo agregara >_>

- 01:29:204 >> Mejor que el nuevo combo empiece aqui Bien

- 02:57:329 >> Este timing section no es ya que tiene el mismo volumen del anterior
- 02:57:446 >> ^
- 03:00:610 >> ^
Hecho
- 03:03:891 >> Ehhh podrias mover este timing section al tick azul que esta despues del timing section anterior a este ? No veo la diferencia... Hmm...

Hard;
- 00:25:463 >> Nota con finish ? ~
- 02:17:485 >> Mejor un whistle ;D Lol, solia tenerlo, pero lo quite, pero re added.

- 02:24:516 >> Quitale el whistle
- 02:29:438 >> Agregale whistle
Hecho

Insane;
- Perfecto !! En verdad me encanta ~


* Star ~ (ﾉ>w<)ﾉ★
And @Zelos: Why does everyone has something against spanish songs? ;_;

Anyways, the thing you said in hard and insane, I'll reconsider it if someone else suggest the same. And how you dare to say that my Normal is like a slow version of lesjuh's maps :(
And its on wip because its still missing the SB. ;D

And thanks to both!
Gonzvlo
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Erufen don't break anything please :3

[quote="lovhin456"]
Skin;
- Vamos a molestar a Gonz :3
- El default-1 no esta bien centrado ademas es un poco mas pequeño que los demas
- El default-5 me parece que no esta bien centrado ademas parece mas pequeño tambien
- El default-8 es definitivamente mas pequeño que los demas
- La animacion que haces con el followpoint no es muy notoria cuando se juega
- El reverse arrow me parece algo raro, el algunos sliders se ve mal
- El fail-background no deberia ser 1024x768 ?
- Ohhh ese borde medio rojizo del hitcircle overlay no me gusta ;w; solo lo digo ~
- Umm, tal vez haz el play-skip un poco mas grande ?
- Podrias hacer el color del hit0 un poco mas oscuro ?
- El section-pass y section-fail tienen transparencia que no se usa, ademas me parecen un poco pequeños
- Los bordes del spinner-approach circle se ven algo mal, usa el que deje en el thread de tu mapa de Muse ? Pero hazle todos los arreglos para que quede como este
- Buen trabajo Gonz ;3 por cierto ... que piensas de las elecciones ? Hahahaha >w<¨ Orz
[quote]

Hey Lovhin :3, trabajaré en todo es cuanto pueda :3

[quote="Zelos"]
Gonz:
00:59:916 (2) - i had no idea this slider does a loop, this could be lead to a slider miss since it really isn't visible at first that it is a loop.
(espescially for easy players)
02:01:079 (2) - ack it just slightly touches the HP bar, i dont know if that is an issue but waaaaaah.
02:34:829 (1,1,1) - this kind of a lot of spinners for an easy.
Gonz, I just like completely fell in love with your mapping style. I think Krisom would too.

Hey, Zelos :3.
I'll check those things asap.
[quote]
Luvdic
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He means never. He broke his comp, and his parents wont buy a new one.

Gonzvlo wrote:

I'll check those things asap.
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Gonzvlo
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ErufenRito wrote:

He means never. He broke his comp, and his parents wont buy a new one.

Gonzvlo wrote:

I'll check those things asap.[/quote="Gonzvlo"]
Liar.

Those things will be done as soon as possible, stop whining :3

EDIT: Meanwhile, have a kstar.
Luvdic
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Luvdic
I was obviously just kidding... :3
You would never leave us right? Lol
lepidopodus
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lepidopodus
Taiko map finished. Oni lvl. 5. I hope you like it.

Download: Mago de Oz - Y seras cancion (ErufenRito) [lepidon! - Taiko Oni].osu
Zelos
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Zelos
:o i dont hate spanish songs!

you of all people should remember that lol.

i really like this one lol.
Gonzvlo
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Done :3

Download: Mago de Oz - Y seras cancion (ErufenRito) [Gonz].osu

Luego termino el Skin Mod~
DJPop
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DJPop
~Gonz~
01:32:954 (1) - remove new combo
TIMING 17,904 - 79% ?, not 80% ?

~Normal~
TIMING 27,338 - remove

~Hard~
00:42:103 (1) - remove new combo
00:42:572 (2) - add new combo
00:51:478 (5) - ^
01:21:235 (4) - move right 1 grid (Lv4)
01:34:360 (4) - take a closer look, it's a bit far from (3)
TIMING 27,338 - remove

~Insane~
02:11:157 (1) - remove new combo
02:11:391 (3) - add new combo
02:12:094 (1) - remove new combo
02:12:329 (3) - add new combo
02:13:969 (1) - remove new combo
02:14:204 (3) - add new combo
02:18:422 (9) - ^
02:32:016 (9) - ^
02:35:766 (9) - ^
TIMING 27,338 - remove


+Star
Kurai
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Gonz
- Nice mapset, but I think AR3 is better than AR2 here

Hard
- AR7 ?
01:40:454 (1) - Maybe make a 1/4 long slider witha reverse here ?
01:42:329 (1) - Here too ?
02:25:219 (1,2) - Hmm, this kind of pattern are really confusing :/
02:57:172 (2,1) - This one too, moreover it's a 1/6 slider, so it's even more confusing

Insane
01:38:813 (2) - In my opinion, it's a bad idea to stack it with the end of (1)

Good job, the map is awesome, you merit this kudostar :D
Gonzvlo
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DJPop wrote:

~Gonz~
01:32:954 (1) - remove new combo Erufen add this New Combo again please, I'm following the background sound and there's little break between each "Boooom~" that's why I used New Combo's
TIMING 17,904 - 79% ?, not 80% ? Does that make any difference? :o

KuraiPettan wrote:

Gonz
- Nice mapset, but I think AR3 is better than AR2 here
Increase AR for me please :3
KBAI :3
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KuraiPettan wrote:

Hard
- AR7 ? Sure
01:40:454 (1) - Maybe make a 1/4 long slider witha reverse here ?
01:42:329 (1) - Here too ?
Id rather not. I dont want to confuse people with 3 or 5 repeats.

02:25:219 (1,2) - Hmm, this kind of pattern are really confusing :/
02:57:172 (2,1) - This one too, moreover it's a 1/6 slider, so it's even more confusing
Although a bit confusing, it doesn't combo breaks people, this is specially true for 02:57:172 (2,1). The first one i may be a bit more lenient to change it

Insane
01:38:813 (2) - In my opinion, it's a bad idea to stack it with the end of (1) Will wait for more opinions

Good job, the map is awesome, you merit this kudostar :D Yay! Thanks!
@DJPop: pretty much all your suggestions were made.
GladiOol
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(?) = suggestion

[General]
  1. You need to add lepidopodus in TAGs at the Insane difficulty.
[Insane]
  1. Great map and very sexy death streams~ <3
00:19:134 (1) - Remove New Combo (?)
01:16:547 (1) - ^ because you have no new combo here 01:21:704 (1,2) either.
01:38:579 (1) - Oh wow, too evil in my opinion. I'd change it into 2 notes.


[Hard]

01:18:657 (5) - Add New Combo (?)
01:24:282 (6) - ^
01:31:782 (5) - ^
02:57:172 (2,1) - Too evil for a hard difficulty in my opinion. It DOES break people their combo, like it did with mine D:


[Normal]

01:33:422 (1) - Remove New Combo.
01:34:829 (5) - Add New Combo.
01:35:297 (1) - Remove New Combo.
01:51:704 (3) - Add New Combo.


[Gonz]

02:46:547 (2) - Add New Combo (?) Since you got them here 02:41:157 (1,1) too. Would look nice imo~


Wow. Great map, really nice job on this one!
Starred~
braian5234
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braian5234
STAR :D
Lanttu
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Lanttu
Heheh, nothing to say about the diffs, all diffs look and play great~ *u*7

About SB though, maybe make blood.png move down more slowly? 02:56:860 feels good ending point to me, but choice is yours~

Starred~ o/ (No kudosu<3)
Luvdic
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Lanttu wrote:

About SB though, maybe make blood.png move down more slowly? 02:56:860 feels good ending point to me, but choice is yours~
Thanks xD

and @Gonzvlo: AHHH I TOLD YOU TO USE TWEENING!!!! But i love you, so dont hate me ;D
Kenezz
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Heey o/
Kenezz's Bakamod
Perdon por la tardanza... a decir verdad no encuentro nada malo por más que busque Orz

General
-Agrega Epílogo a las tags?

Gonz
-01:52:172 (1) - Es necesario el new combo?

Normal
-03:03:071 (x) - El kiai time debe terminar aqui

Hard
--03:03:071 (x) - Lo mismo que en normal

Insane
-Lo mismo que en normal y hard

Realmente tu map esta listo para ser rankeado... ya pasalo a pending!
Me gusta me gusta, en especial el Insane, y claro, los sliders de Gonz ;)
Starred!
Gonzvlo
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Kenezz wrote:

Gonz
-01:52:172 (1) - Es necesario el new combo? Hmm la verdad no. Los New Combos están mal posicionados en esta parte.
Erufen agrega esto por favor:
01:49:829 (3) - Agrega un New Combo
01:52:172 (1) - Remueve este New Combo

Gracias Kenezz. Oh, necesito un New Combo aquí: 01:32:954 (2) - ya expliqué en la respuesta al mod de DJPop porque.
Gonzvlo
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SB: http://puu.sh/1Z0G

SKIN: http://puu.sh/1Z0J

Reemplaza TODOS los archivos y borra estos: "Pause-overlay.png" y "Fail-background.png"

ugh double post, sorry.
NatsumeRin
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Red: You must fix this.
Blue: You'd better do sth with this imo.
Green: Just suggestions.

[General]
offset:6718, you don't need the 2nd offset.

[Gonz]
01:07:181 (2) - the reverse point sounds a little strange, maybe lower the volume or change a way to put notes there.
01:52:172 (1) - reduce one repeat and use a circle at the end instead?

[Normal]
00:58:041 (2,3) - maybe you should use a slider to start this slow part... it's easy to misread it as 1/2
02:21:704 (1) - add clap at the 2nd reverse
02:22:641 (2) - ^also add clap at this..
02:57:797 (1) - a nearly silence sound at the end would be better than a "heavy" finish here imo

[Hard]
00:39:056 (4,4,4) - you should still keep your clap pace (maybe lower the volume)
01:12:338 (1,2) - consider about the spacing.. maybe this is better?

02:17:954 (1) - a little offscreen
02:29:204 (1,2,3) - use a repeat slider instead?

[Taiko Oni]
fine but seems not really a Oni...

[Insane]
00:38:353 (1) - since the volume is decreasing here, maybe decrease the spacing too, and it will follow the music better.
01:47:250 (5,6) - too harsh, a simple placement is enough...

map is really nice done.
Luvdic
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NatsumeRin wrote:

Red: You must fix this.
Blue: You'd better do sth with this imo.
Green: Just suggestions.

[General]
offset:6718, you don't need the 2nd offset.

Hmm... are you 100% sure? at around 1 min of the song were cutted around that part. I guess I'll keep using the current one until more people suggests the same as you

[Normal]
00:58:041 (2,3) - maybe you should use a slider to start this slow part... it's easy to misread it as 1/2
True...

02:21:704 (1) - add clap at the 2nd reverse
02:22:641 (2) - ^also add clap at this..
02:57:797 (1) - a nearly silence sound at the end would be better than a "heavy" finish here imo

[Hard]
00:39:056 (4,4,4) - you should still keep your clap pace (maybe lower the volume)
I have thought about that, but in the end i decided not to do that, and to focus more on the vocals

01:12:338 (1,2) - consider about the spacing.. maybe this is better?
Done

02:17:954 (1) - a little offscreen
I'm sure that it is okay

02:29:204 (1,2,3) - use a repeat slider instead?
I'll say no for now.

[Insane]
00:38:353 (1) - since the volume is decreasing here, maybe decrease the spacing too, and it will follow the music better.
I'll say no for now.

01:47:250 (5,6) - too harsh, a simple placement is enough...
Well, the spacing pattern is pretty constant if you consideer the spacing of these objects 01:49:829 (1,2) - and etc

map is really nice done.
Hmm, yay, everything is almost done now! Just a few more details on the sb
NatsumeRin
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about the timing i could say 80% sure.
if it's cut and really have a different offset from that point, it won't be >5ms
and i'm 99% sure the second offset is somewhere between 76,089 ~ 76,095
lepidopodus
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lepidopodus

NatsumeRin wrote:

[Taiko Oni]
fine but seems not really a Oni...
That's why it's lvl. 5. Most Oni maps here are above 8~9 so those are pretty hard.
Gonzvlo
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Update:

Download: Mago de Oz - Y seras cancion (ErufenRito) [Gonz].osu

Btw, that kudosu wasn't necessary, feel free to deny it.
Luvdic
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Okay, finally everything is done. And about the timing, i guess ill ask another opinion... *sighs*

WHYY TIMING?? WHY YOU ALWAYS HAVE TO DO THIS TO ME??? ;_;

edit: oh god... no.. apparently... thumbnail is gone ;_;
Kitsunemimi
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Kitsunemimi
.....Time for a quick mod!! >.<

Also, I got an offset of 6728. And 76094.

[Gonz]:
01:44:219 (3,4) - I sort of think you should avoid this thing, we're you've making the Easy get too difficult with the melody and stuff. I think it sounds better if you delete (4), make (3) one beat long, and make it have a slider reverse.\
Really nice sliders :3

[Normal]:
00:55:463 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - These set of notes get a bit tricky, so you'd want to stick with either single beat sliders only, or 1/2 beat sliders only. Especially with the first three, you can just simplify that one.
01:14:447 (1,1) - Really short pause after spinner. You can probably just delete (1)
Hmm... I felt a little iffy about the difficulty but I'm probably just in nazi mode atm.

[Hard]:
02:12:680 (1) - Ughh... I think you should move it to the white tick.
02:26:391 (4,5,6) - These are usually kinda tricky to do for Hard (especially for mousexkeyboard hybrids like me). It sounds okay even if you delete (5).
02:36:821 (4,2,3) - The same goes for these, but I'm honestly too tired to figure something out here.
02:45:610 (2,3) - The timing here can be hard to predict if you don't already know the tune of the song. Not that much of a big deal, but just wanted to point it out.

[lepidon! Taiko Oni]:
I don't play Taiko at all, but normally I look through to see if there's anything that really just looks wrong. I'm sorta tired tonight, and I trust lepidon, so I'll skip this one today :3

[Insane]:
Whoaaa, going big with the spacing :O
01:38:579 (1,2) - I really don't like it when people do these. Just turn (1) into two circles.
02:01:196 (1) - I was told to make the spinners not 1/4 after regular notes. It's fine if it's on the red tick right? :<
02:04:946 (1) - ^
Holy shit I love the streamy guitar solo.
Really nice, fun Insane, it's awesome!

...That's pretty much it~ Starr~
Gonzvlo
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Kitsunemimi wrote:

[Gonz]:
01:44:219 (3,4) - I sort of think you should avoid this thing, we're you've making the Easy get too difficult with the melody and stuff. I think it sounds better if you delete (4), make (3) one beat long, and make it have a slider reverse.\ Sure :3
Download: Mago de Oz - Y seras cancion (ErufenRito) [Gonz].osu

Erufen, si no vas a usar los números, al menos usa los hits >_> Los hits están hechos para seguir el formato del lighting y de las lyrics. Los que estás usando ahora se ven HORRIBLES, exíjo que uses los nuevos hits.
Lo mismo para la reverse arrow, la que estas usando ahora no tiene la curva que debería tener.

Link
Luvdic
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Kitsunemimi wrote:

.....Time for a quick mod!! >.<

Also, I got an offset of 6728. And 76094. I hate you timing ;D

[Normal]:
00:55:463 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - These set of notes get a bit tricky, so you'd want to stick with either single beat sliders only, or 1/2 beat sliders only. Especially with the first three, you can just simplify that one.
I don't agree... that kind of pattern appears a lot in this map

01:14:447 (1,1) - Really short pause after spinner. You can probably just delete (1)
Well, AI mod thinks that it's a normal difficulty, also it sounds horrible without that circle imo


[Hard]:
02:12:680 (1) - Ughh... I think you should move it to the white tick. No...
02:26:391 (4,5,6) - These are usually kinda tricky to do for Hard (especially for mousexkeyboard hybrids like me). It sounds okay even if you delete (5). I think they are okay, I'm also a mouse keyboard hybrid
02:36:821 (4,2,3) - The same goes for these, but I'm honestly too tired to figure something out here.
02:45:610 (2,3) - The timing here can be hard to predict if you don't already know the tune of the song. Not that much of a big deal, but just wanted to point it out. I guess this one i'm willing to change if more people suggests the same... hmm...

[Insane]:
Whoaaa, going big with the spacing :O
01:38:579 (1,2) - I really don't like it when people do these. Just turn (1) into two circles. I could, but i wanted to accentuate the beginning of the guitar solo
02:01:196 (1) - I was told to make the spinners not 1/4 after regular notes. It's fine if it's on the red tick right? :<
02:04:946 (1) - ^ Hmm, well, other mappers would say that you should move it 1/4 after the regular note
Holy shit I love the streamy guitar solo.
Really nice, fun Insane, it's awesome!

...That's pretty much it~ Starr~

Gonzvlo wrote:

Kitsunemimi wrote:

[Gonz]:
01:44:219 (3,4) - I sort of think you should avoid this thing, we're you've making the Easy get too difficult with the melody and stuff. I think it sounds better if you delete (4), make (3) one beat long, and make it have a slider reverse.\ Sure :3
[attachment=0:925c4]Mago de Oz - Y seras cancion (ErufenRito) [Gonz].osu[/attachment:925c4]

Erufen, si no vas a usar los números, al menos usa los hits >_> Los hits están hechos para seguir el formato del lighting y de las lyrics. Los que estás usando ahora se ven HORRIBLES, exíjo que uses los nuevos hits.
Lo mismo para la reverse arrow, la que estas usando ahora no tiene la curva que debería tener.

Link
Ughhh...

UGHH.....

Veamos, los hits no discutire sobre cual es mas bonito o mas feo, porque para mi las dos versiones se ven bastante bien, pero después de haberle dado una jugada me di cuenta que fue una pésima idea el haberles dado el mismo color a los strokes/glow porque hace que sea más difícil de ver el puntaje que estás obteniendo, por lo que decidi usar los del anterior. Además, no sé por qué decidiste cambiar el skin de la nada si estaba perfecto (y todo el mundo lo decía, además de que ese white stroke era fapable y todo)

Y ese reverse arrow cambiado

Y ahora déjame morir en paz :(
Krisom
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ErufenRito wrote:

Y ahora déjame morir en paz :(
Jamás >:D!

General-
· 300g and 300k are way too similar, Add another "!" to 300g
· Why so many followpoints? They don't even seem to be animated to me, and if they are, they are pretty much unnoticeable. Do something or just leave one.
· I actually kind of agree with NatsumeMoe on the first offset.
· Since it's just for a fountain, you should end the final kiai before a beat happens to avoid weird stuff pulsating on the main screen and then suddenly dissapearing.
· This. Add "The Big Simon Band" to tags. I could be mean and ask you to add every band that appears on the video but the video is not here so I won't be mean... ...today ;D

SB-
· Add a dramatic "Y serás canción" pusling at 03:01:562 - for the ending?

Insane-
Nothing, though 02:38:906 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - Made me wonder, why 1/6? Beat sounds like a 1/4 for me here. It's justified in the other places though.

Lepi-
Nothing

Hard-
01:20:547 (1,2,3,4) - This decrescendo has little sense to me, as the music actually gets gradually stonger, not weaker.
01:33:672 (1,2,3,4) - ^Also, these two are not the same decresendos on volume...

Normal-
01:20:312 (1) - Watch out for volume decreasing sections that came along from Hard. I'm guessing the decreasing volume section shouldn't be on the repeat. And if it should (wich I disagree with), you'd have to add one at 01:33:437 (4)'s repeat. Oh yeah, also remove this new combo and switch it to 01:21:719 (2) (pretty much like the second half of the chorus. remember to keep the new combos consistent)

Gonz-
Nothing


Sheesh, can I go study now?
Luvdic
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Luvdic

Krisom wrote:

Jamás >:D!

General-
· 300g and 300k are way too similar, Add another "!" to 300g Kay.
· Why so many followpoints? They don't even seem to be animated to me, and if they are, they are pretty much unnoticeable. Do something or just leave one. Done.
· I actually kind of agree with NatsumeMoe on the first offset.
· Since it's just for a fountain, you should end the final kiai before a beat happens to avoid weird stuff pulsating on the main screen and then suddenly dissapearing. Done
· This. Add "The Big Simon Band" to tags. I could be mean and ask you to add every band that appears on the video but the video is not here so I won't be mean... ...today ;D Added + other tags too, you meanie...

SB-
· Add a dramatic "Y serás canción" pusling at 03:01:562 - for the ending? I had an idea, but the idea I had, doesn't really fits with the other difficulties (particularly because of the spinners)

Insane-
Nothing, though 02:38:906 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - Made me wonder, why 1/6? Beat sounds like a 1/4 for me here. It's justified in the other places though. Cause it is snapped to 1/6. At first I didn't notice and mapped it to 1/4'ths, but after hearing it some more, i have noticed that it sounded weird, and so I rechecked it, and finally noticed it was in 1/6

Hard-
01:20:547 (1,2,3,4) - This decrescendo has little sense to me, as the music actually gets gradually stonger, not weaker.
01:33:672 (1,2,3,4) - ^Also, these two are not the same decresendos on volume...
I wanted to have 01:21:249 (4) - louder than the others, also after some testing when i was adding the hitsounds, I have finally conlucded that this way sounds better

Normal-
01:20:312 (1) - Watch out for volume decreasing sections that came along from Hard. I'm guessing the decreasing volume section shouldn't be on the repeat. And if it should (wich I disagree with), you'd have to add one at 01:33:437 (4)'s repeat. Oh yeah, also remove this new combo and switch it to 01:21:719 (2) (pretty much like the second half of the chorus. remember to keep the new combos consistent)
Fixed the combo things...


Sheesh, can I go study now? No, go to the kitchen and make dinner for me NOW.
Gonzvlo
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Krisom wrote:

General-
· 300g and 300k are way too similar, Add another "!" to 300g
Just so you know, I made new hits which are way better but Erufen refuses to use them. (Same for default numbers)
<- mad
Mismagius
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Mismagius
I won't find anything on this ;_;

Gonz
00:34:843 (1) - I know it would fuck up spacing, but move it 1 grid left then 2 down (lv4)
00:36:249 (2) - ^ but instead of that, 1 grid right and 2 up

Normal
02:45:624 (x) - I'm not sure about this, but add a note here? I messed up here because I though (2) was going to start on the white tick.

Hard
01:42:343 (1) - add finish?
01:44:218 (1) - ^ at start?

Insane
01:12:577 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - very nice pattern :O
01:48:671 (1,2) - that's just VERY confusing >.<
02:38:905 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - YES, AWESOME <33333333... oh wait it's 1/6, not 1/8 nvm :U


Awesome map, deserves my star and my love <3

EDIT: I see NatsumeRin pointed the same thing as me on Insane, the reason it's because this has reverse arrows, the other ones don't. This is just really confusing.
Gonzvlo
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Hi BD :3

Download: Mago de Oz - Y seras cancion (ErufenRito) [Gonz].osu
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