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Dai2BungeibuBand - KiraKira (Short Ver.)

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Zelos
Normal:

00:58:813 (1,2,3) - center 1 with 2 and 3 more to form a equal triangle.

. thats it. . . . . ..

nice mapset
Leorda
Ohai

General
If you using a HQ video, the ancient PC will be lag as hell. So, I suggest you to change the High Quality video to Low Quality video, so the low/ancient PC will be running well

Easy
00:06:091 (1) - Make a bit curvy? It's looks like a parallel slider
00:12:180 (1,2) - You can also make a nice pattern like this XD http://puu.sh/11pS

Normal
00:50:497 (3) - Would be nice if tail slider stack with 00:48:714 (3)

Hard
00:05:348 (5) - Not stack perfectly with tail slider on
00:04:902 (4)

Eiri'nsane
Fine

That's all. Also, you need go to the MAT saloon, not beauty saloon. Otherwise, you are ugly
aquabluu
[Easy]
00.15.150 (1) One grid down
00.18.120 (2) Three points for a straight slider? Delete the middle one
00.21.982 (1) Slight spacing

[Normal]
00.13.071 (2) Slight spacing

[Hard]
00.16.190 (2) Two sliders end to end with markedly different speeds.This seems to be the trend these days, and although it might be fine, I'm not a big fan of it. I'd change the speed to match the first slider if I were you.
00.27.625 (1) Remove new combo
00.31.390 (1) ^
00.31.487 (2) New combo here
00.43.071 (3) Two grids down

[Eiri'nsane]
...eh? What happened to the level 4 grid?
00.13.071 (4) Distance snap and place vertically above (3) (you'll have to find a way to arrange (5) and (6) though)
00.18.714 (5) Copy (3) and paste
00.19.383 (1) Unnecessary jump
00.22.873 (1) Delete reverse and put this on white tick

Star.
Kyonko Hizara
:)
ziin

Leorda wrote:

General
If you using a HQ video, the ancient PC will be lag as hell. So, I suggest you to change the High Quality video to Low Quality video, so the low/ancient PC will be running well
just a comment, IMO 800-900 kpbs isn't high quality, and you can always make your own video by downsizing this one. Video IS optional after all. People who use ancient PCs have to make some concessions due to their inability to invest in faster hardware. They just have to put a little bit more work into it, or do without.
Snowy Dream
[Normal]
00:35:348 (2) - Consider reducing an arrow and add a note at 00:35:942
01:06:239 Add a note and newcombo
01:06:388 (2) - delete newcombo

[Hard]
00:43:368 (1) - delete newcombo
00:43:665 (2) - Newcombo.
00:44:259 (1) - delete newcombo
00:45:447 (1) - ^
00:46:635 (1) - ^

[Eiri'nsane]
00:42:477 (1) -Change the newcombo colour to orange.(Red is confused .. :? )
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Nice~Good luck ;)
and..Star ☆
yongtw123
Sorry for the delay!

[Easy]
Patterns lack some luster but otherwise it's fine.

01:15:150 (1) - I suggest add a note here and delay the spinner a bit


[Normal]
I like this, very good.


[Hard]
00:17:675 (2) - this throws me off. Compare with 00:08:912 (5) and other similar occurrences. Use your judgment and fix this kind of issue throughout the map.
01:10:843 (6) - ^

Patterns can be cleaner but otherwise it's fine.


[Eiri'nsane]
I dislike the usage of putting a jump every time a new combo starts. Most of the time there's no need to do so.
I won't point out all the issues but do strongly suggest reducing the frequency of those kind of jumps...

00:00:298 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - uh...x2.0 spacing right at start? (shrug)
01:15:150 (1) - put a note here and delay spinner?

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Cool hitsounds~
The only major problem is that Insane's jumps are probably overdone.
Otherwise star~
taNa_Coppola
nice map ヽ(´Д`;)ノ
TTTTTTTTTTTT
KiraKira (Short ver.) → KiraKira (Short Ver.)

may Kira Kira ? im not sure , but you need to change title ,“ver" to "Ver"...

Sorry for late mod

Easy

00:47:229(6) - move 2 gird down (lv4)

01:15:670 - add a green line to reduce volume by 10%?

Normal

00:26:437(x) - may add a circle with finish?
01:12:031(2) - x:376 y :196 , it might be look pretty
01:12:625(4) - exchange seats with (5)

01:15:670 - add a green line to reduce volume by 10%?

Hard

01:15:670 - add a green line to reduce volume by 10%?

Eiri'nsane

00:51:388(T) - unsnapped
01:00:893(T) - unsnapped


overall , quite well

starrrrrrrrr
James2250
-On a small note you might want to remove letterboxing during breaks at it looks odd with the video at the moment
-As mentioned you should capitalize it to (Short Ver.) as that is how most maps have it on the pending list
-Snap the last kiai time to 01:15:150 on every difficulty? (they change at the moment)
-Make sure the title and source aren't meant to be Kira Kira

The maps all look good, call me back and I will bubble~
Topic Starter
Tenshi-nyan

James2250 wrote:

-On a small note you might want to remove letterboxing during breaks at it looks odd with the video at the moment
-As mentioned you should capitalize it to (Short Ver.) as that is how most maps have it on the pending list
-Snap the last kiai time to 01:15:150 on every difficulty? (they change at the moment)
-Make sure the title and source aren't meant to be Kira Kira

The maps all look good, call me back and I will bubble~
Fixed everything... I guess. The title and source are 100% KiraKira. Actually it's Kira☆Kira, but since that star doesn't get accepter when I submit...
Snapped the Kiai on every diff except for Eirin's. He'd kill me if I was to change the Kiai.
James2250
All looks good then

Bubbled~
blissfulyoshi
Add d2b to the tags because I believe some people refer to the band through that.

Easy:
Combo mod:
00:49:308 (1) - remove new combo to be consistent with 01:03:566 (2)?
00:55:249 (1) - remove new combo to be consistent with 01:04:754 (3)?

Timing section mod:
01:15:224 - It just seems a little weird that this timing section is at a different time in every diff. I am just wondering why (Note there are other timing sections like this in your map, but I'll leave it to you to decide to change them or not)

Normal:
Normal mod:
00:16:190 (3) - for me, 0.5x felt a little too slow, could you push it up to around 0.7x

Combo mod:
00:02:378 (1,2,3,4,1,2) and 00:07:724 (1,2,3,4,5) - make the combos here consistent
00:17:229 to 00:34:605 - ^ (each line of lyrics has the combos starting in a different place, so please try to keep them consistent)
00:50:497 (3,1,2) and 01:00:001 (1,2) - ^

Hard:
Normal mod:
00:16:190 (2) - same as Normal

Combo mod:
00:20:497 (1) - remove new combo to be consistent with 00:25:249 (5)

Eiri'nsane:
Timing section mod:
01:06:833 - Add kiai from here to 01:15:150 since you tend to put kiai during the screaming sections (well at they least the volume of the vocals is higher here

Nazi/Cleanliness mod:
00:46:338 (3) - since most of your sliders have very round curves, please make this curve not as sharp

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Decent map overall. I popped the map over the kiai section in Insane and the tag (It annoys me when someone maps a second season k-on song and does not put HTT in the tag because I actually use that tag) Forum pm me when you make the changes/respond. For now, Star!
Topic Starter
Tenshi-nyan

blissfulyoshi wrote:

Add d2b to the tags because I believe some people refer to the band through that.

Easy:
Combo mod:
00:49:308 (1) - remove new combo to be consistent with 01:03:566 (2)? k
00:55:249 (1) - remove new combo to be consistent with 01:04:754 (3)? k

Timing section mod:
01:15:224 - It just seems a little weird that this timing section is at a different time in every diff. I am just wondering why (Note there are other timing sections like this in your map, but I'll leave it to you to decide to change them or not) not that it matters that much, but made them all the same here.

Normal:
Normal mod:
00:16:190 (3) - for me, 0.5x felt a little too slow, could you push it up to around 0.7x used 0.65 instead to make the slider a lil bit shorter than 0.7

Combo mod:
00:02:378 (1,2,3,4,1,2) and 00:07:724 (1,2,3,4,5) - make the combos here consistent
00:17:229 to 00:34:605 - ^ (each line of lyrics has the combos starting in a different place, so please try to keep them consistent)
00:50:497 (3,1,2) and 01:00:001 (1,2) - ^

Hard:
Normal mod:
00:16:190 (2) - same as Normal not here.

Combo mod:
00:20:497 (1) - remove new combo to be consistent with 00:25:249 (5) k

Eiri'nsane:
Timing section mod: Forgive me for this, Eirin D:
01:06:833 - Add kiai from here to 01:15:150 since you tend to put kiai during the screaming sections (well at they least the volume of the vocals is higher here

Nazi/Cleanliness mod:
00:46:338 (3) - since most of your sliders have very round curves, please make this curve not as sharp

===========================
Decent map overall. I popped the map over the kiai section in Insane and the tag (It annoys me when someone maps a second season k-on song and does not put HTT in the tag because I actually use that tag) Forum pm me when you make the changes/respond. For now, Star!
Allright, fixed stuff.
blissfulyoshi
A little unsure about the offset, but since Sakura_Hana helped me confirm the timing, I guess I am fine.

Reubbled.
OzzyOzrock
I am... really sorry. orz

Not that you'll probably want to pop your own bubble, but I'm gonna finish the taiko diff, orz.

Download: Dai2BungeibuBand - KiraKira (Short ver.) (Tenshi-nyan) [Ozzy's Taiko].osu

I didn't know how to map taiko fast when I started making this, then I saw the thread and was like, "oh crap" and finished it.

Sorry. orz
Topic Starter
Tenshi-nyan

OzzyOzrock wrote:

I am... really sorry. orz

Not that you'll probably want to pop your own bubble, but I'm gonna finish the taiko diff, orz.

[attachment=0:0ab65]Dai2BungeibuBand - KiraKira (Short ver.) (Tenshi-nyan) [Ozzy's Taiko].osu[/attachment:0ab65]

I didn't know how to map taiko fast when I started making this, then I saw the thread and was like, "oh crap" and finished it.

Sorry. orz
Yeah, I guess you're a little late, sorry for that.
I won't upload this diff, for various reasons (main reason being the bubble), but instead I will link to it on the main page of the map. So if you're interested as a Taiko player, you can still download and play it. I will link to it before this gets ranked. Don't wanna pop the bubble for changing the 1st page yet.

Or I might upload it after I get a OK from a (good) Taiko modder (preferable, a MAT) who'd be willing to re-bubble the map. I'll see.
Mint Bunny
oops, I'm really really really really late
so have a star instead 8-)
OzzyOzrock
Not trying to be like, "COME ON, PUT MY MAP IN" but I'm pretty sure it'll get re-bubbled + ranked pretty quickly :3

Especially being that it has been bubbled before, showing that it's good, and being that taiko is mainly "looks fine"'d.

But it's however you'd like. Lol.
ziin
You should never be in a hurry to get a map ranked. Get a few taiko mods and pop the bubble, then request blissful/colin/james to re-bubble. Asking for a bubble is a bit different from asking for a re-bubble IMO.
Topic Starter
Tenshi-nyan

ziin wrote:

You should never be in a hurry to get a map ranked. Get a few taiko mods and pop the bubble, then request blissful/colin/james to re-bubble. Asking for a bubble is a bit different from asking for a re-bubble IMO.

:/ I guess you're right. I'll upload the Taiko diff when I get the chance to do so.
Topic Starter
Tenshi-nyan
Allright, I uploaded the Taiko diff.

Bye bye, my dear bubble T_T
OzzyOzrock
I'll make sure to get people to look at this :D
Verdisphena
8-)
lepidopodus
Ozzy's Taiko
- Some patterns are might be quite hard due to high BPM(202).
00:07:576 (1,1,1,1,2,1,2,3,1,1,2,3,4,1) - How about placing big notes as 'couple', like a distich?
00:48:417 (X) - Add something in here, as I can here some beat and vocal?
00:49:605 (X) - ^
00:50:199~01:06:833 - Endless patterns, let's give player short rest(a beat, I mean.). I suggested some notes to delete, choose some: 00:53:615 (1), 00:54:803 (1), 00:58:368 (1,2), 00:59:556 (1), 01:03:120 (1), 01:04:308 (1).

I'm kinda lazy to make a nice mod lol
Seems it's ok, have a star.
OzzyOzrock
Ozzy's Taiko
- Some patterns are might be quite hard due to high BPM(202). Didn't add anything TOO complicated except dddkkkd at the beginning.

00:07:576 (1,1,1,1,2,1,2,3,1,1,2,3,4,1) - How about placing big notes as 'couple', like a distich? Done~

00:48:417 (X) - Add something in here, as I can here some beat and vocal? Goes with drums. Heh.
00:49:605 (X) - ^ ^


00:50:199~01:06:833 - Endless patterns, let's give player short rest(a beat, I mean.). I suggested some notes to delete, choose some: 00:53:615 (1), 00:54:803 (1), 00:58:368 (1,2), 00:59:556 (1), 01:03:120 (1), 01:04:308 (1). Deleted first two. It sort of increases in matters of tiring pain as it goes. Lol

Taiko with fixes added:
Download: Dai2BungeibuBand - KiraKira (Short ver.) (Tenshi-nyan) [Ozzy's Taiko].osu
Topic Starter
Tenshi-nyan
GAH Ozzy your update messed my map up. Well, I already found the fault and fixed it right away~

Please always use the latest version on the server when making any changes to the map.
Or so.
OzzyOzrock
oh crap

Sorry, lol.
XepherX3
D2B

double star...much much much better then my
kanpakyin
Taiko check before re-bubble!!

[Ozzy's Taiko]
00:09:284(2.3.4.5)-Feel weird..maybe add a note at 00:09:358-
00:16:561(2)-Remove this note.
00:23:615(1)-Change to don might better?
00:24:061(1)-^
00:36:388(2)-Remove Finish and clap!!It doesn't fit the music.
00:48:417(x)-add a note here.
01:14:259(3)-Remove this slider and use a note to instead of?

That's all.
wmfchris
* I prefer unique audio lead-in (0 and 3000, not 0,2007 and 3000)

Taiko mod as requested

00:24:359 - d-k-k---d...
00:27:625 - k k d d
00:47:972 - 3-1-3 pattern don't fit the lyrics
00:51:685 - why streams D:
01:01:190 - ^

Rating (-1 ~ 1)
Pattern - not bad : 0.5
Density - seems a bit overmapped : 0.5

:D
OzzyOzrock
[Ozzy's Taiko]
00:09:284(2.3.4.5)-Feel weird..maybe add a note at 00:09:358- You're right.
00:16:561(2)-Remove this note. N-no!
00:23:615(1)-Change to don might better? I don't think so...
00:24:061(1)-^ I think I did.
00:36:388(2)-Remove Finish and clap!!It doesn't fit the music. Oops.
00:48:417(x)-add a note here. Noo, following drums there
01:14:259(3)-Remove this slider and use a note to instead of? Used a bad pattern, but yeah.

Taiko mod as requested

00:24:359 - d-k-k---d... Didn't do that, but changed it a bit.
00:27:625 - k k d d Nope
00:47:972 - 3-1-3 pattern don't fit the lyrics Here, it follows the drums in the song.
00:51:685 - why streams D: Because are
01:01:190 - ^ streams cool.


Thanks to both!

And here it is.
Download: Dai2BungeibuBand - KiraKira (Short Ver.) (Tenshi-nyan) [Ozzy's Taiko].osu
Semi_Semi
hey. :)

star~
please modding
http://osu.ppy.sh/b/91852
Card N'FoRcE
Since bliss is busy and James is not doing rechecks, here i am.

- Fixed a pattern in Easy and a stack in Eiri'nsane.

Bubbled (ノ ̄∇ ̄)ノ 彡
James2250
I hate to be nazi but you might as well make the audio lead-in on Taiko and Insane the same as they start at the same place

Call me back and I will rank~ (Don't kudosu this)
Topic Starter
Tenshi-nyan

James2250 wrote:

I hate to be nazi but you might as well make the audio lead-in on Taiko and Insane the same as they start at the same place

Call me back and I will rank~ (Don't kudosu this)
Allright, I set the lead-in time on Taiko the same as in Insane (3000).
James2250
Looks good

Ranked~
Topic Starter
Tenshi-nyan
^o^
Keksi
Yo Gratz Tenshi (ö_-)
Magicphoenix
LALALALA RANK LALALALALA~
OzzyOzrock
All of a sudden, I'm dissatisfied with my diff.

But I'll use the fact that it's my first ranked one as an excuse >:3
Komeiji Yuki
Congra~Tenshi :D
Eirene
00:41:289 (1,2) - wtf is that :(
Topic Starter
Tenshi-nyan
O_o
Selee
Congrat~

pretty hitsounds >w<
Verdisphena
KIRA*
Dotsu
Congrats~

:D
ccbp
The bass drum sounds muffled imo.
I've used bass drum in my maps as well but,
hmm it seems not quite suitable to this game...
NatsumeRin
congrats~
Snowy Dream
congrats~ :D
Heatherfield
Hard is nice, but insane with AR7? wtf
that was totally messed up
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