NatsumeRin wrote:

Red: You must fix this.
Blue: You'd better do sth with this imo.
Green: Just suggestions.

[General]
yeah hitsounds is sexy.
offset: -4 sounds cool.
00:40:550 - 00:42:778 - this break is a little short (in Normal & Easy), consider remove it? I tried to, but it keeps coming back orz

[Easy]
00:04:164 (1) - this slider reverse at a strange point = =||| are you sure it's fine.. (or at least should mute it?)
00:47:233 - add a note?

[Normal]
HP+1 OD+1 star rating is high enough orz
00:39:956 (2) - just mute the ticksound?
00:47:233 (1) - repeat once more nah
00:56:144 (4) - clap at the end?
01:06:986 (2) - clap at the beginning?

[Hard]
01:06:689 (1) - emm... change to 1/2 circles?
01:08:768 - add a note? (since you did so at 01:11:144 (1) nah
01:15:154 (7) - don't stack with 5&6


nice map. :O

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  Combo Colour 1 and Combo Colour 2 are similar.So I suggest adding a combo colour 4 to separate them
  Kiai Time should end at 01:15:150
  And the name of the mp3 file : kirakira.mp3.MP3 .......................................

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  00:02:526-00:05:794 : This part feels strange. Maybe set like this:
  SPOILER

  
  00:09:655 (2): Repeat-1 and add a circle at 00:10:398
  00:39:952 (1): Use Finish instead of Clap here
  00:51:833 (2): Finish
  01:01:338 (1): Add finish here
  01:07:279 (1): ^
  01:13:962 (the end of 1,2,3): I think use normal hitsound will be better(remove the clap hitsounds

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  00:34:754 (1): Add finish at the beginning
  00:47:229 (1): Remove new combo and add new combo on next note
  00:51:833 (3): Finish
  01:01:338 (4): ^
  01:06:388 (1): Add finish at the end
  01:09:209 (1): Add finish at the beginning
  01:13:962 (2,3,4): Use normal hitsound (remove the clap hitsounds

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  00:21:685 (4): Finish
  00:31:190 (1): Finish
  00:34:754 (1): Add finish at the beginning
  00:52:130 (3): Add finish at the end
  00:56:586 (2): Add finish at the beginning
  01:01:635 (3): Add finish at the end
  01:06:091 (2): Add finish at the beginning
  01:13:962 (2,3,4,5,6,7): Use normal hitsound (remove the clap hitsounds

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  00:36:239 (2): Use curved slider
  01:01:784 (9): Move the finish at the beginning to the end
  01:13:962 (4): Use normal hitsound(remove the clap hitsounds

1. tags: Eirene
2. and any more tags? for example: Kirari Kashiwara Narina Isurugi Chie

1. kinda overuse Rolledjump but ok insane diff OTL
2. 01:15:150 (1) - start this at 01:15:224 and add 1 note with finish here
3. KIAI keep the same with other diffs

Leorda wrote:

General
If you using a HQ video, the ancient PC will be lag as hell. So, I suggest you to change the High Quality video to Low Quality video, so the low/ancient PC will be running well

James2250 wrote:

-On a small note you might want to remove letterboxing during breaks at it looks odd with the video at the moment
-As mentioned you should capitalize it to (Short Ver.) as that is how most maps have it on the pending list
-Snap the last kiai time to 01:15:150 on every difficulty? (they change at the moment)
-Make sure the title and source aren't meant to be Kira Kira

The maps all look good, call me back and I will bubble~

blissfulyoshi wrote:

Add d2b to the tags because I believe some people refer to the band through that.

Easy:
Combo mod:
00:49:308 (1) - remove new combo to be consistent with 01:03:566 (2)? k
00:55:249 (1) - remove new combo to be consistent with 01:04:754 (3)? k

Timing section mod:
01:15:224 - It just seems a little weird that this timing section is at a different time in every diff. I am just wondering why (Note there are other timing sections like this in your map, but I'll leave it to you to decide to change them or not) not that it matters that much, but made them all the same here.

Normal:
Normal mod:
00:16:190 (3) - for me, 0.5x felt a little too slow, could you push it up to around 0.7x used 0.65 instead to make the slider a lil bit shorter than 0.7

Combo mod:
00:02:378 (1,2,3,4,1,2) and 00:07:724 (1,2,3,4,5) - make the combos here consistent
00:17:229 to 00:34:605 - ^ (each line of lyrics has the combos starting in a different place, so please try to keep them consistent)
00:50:497 (3,1,2) and 01:00:001 (1,2) - ^

Hard:
Normal mod:
00:16:190 (2) - same as Normal not here.

Combo mod:
00:20:497 (1) - remove new combo to be consistent with 00:25:249 (5) k

Eiri'nsane:
Timing section mod: Forgive me for this, Eirin D:
01:06:833 - Add kiai from here to 01:15:150 since you tend to put kiai during the screaming sections (well at they least the volume of the vocals is higher here

Nazi/Cleanliness mod:
00:46:338 (3) - since most of your sliders have very round curves, please make this curve not as sharp

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Decent map overall. I popped the map over the kiai section in Insane and the tag (It annoys me when someone maps a second season k-on song and does not put HTT in the tag because I actually use that tag) Forum pm me when you make the changes/respond. For now, Star!

OzzyOzrock wrote:

I am... really sorry. orz

Not that you'll probably want to pop your own bubble, but I'm gonna finish the taiko diff, orz.

[attachment=0:0ab65]Dai2BungeibuBand - KiraKira (Short ver.) (Tenshi-nyan) [Ozzy's Taiko].osu[/attachment:0ab65]

I didn't know how to map taiko fast when I started making this, then I saw the thread and was like, "oh crap" and finished it.

Sorry. orz

ziin wrote:

You should never be in a hurry to get a map ranked. Get a few taiko mods and pop the bubble, then request blissful/colin/james to re-bubble. Asking for a bubble is a bit different from asking for a re-bubble IMO.

James2250 wrote:

I hate to be nazi but you might as well make the audio lead-in on Taiko and Insane the same as they start at the same place

Call me back and I will rank~ (Don't kudosu this)