Lissette wrote:

Hi, sorry for the delay u//u nyuu, i took ages to check it as well so >_<"

ShaggoN Knew
00:07:127 to 00:20:842 - how about silenced sliderslide for this section since shaggon is busy with studies, i'll be checking his diff stuff.. so nyuu >.< sounds a bit weird for me

Collab
00:07:127 to 00:20:842 - same as ShaggoN Knew no >_<
00:45:699 (1) - in other parts like this you didn't put this note like here 00:45:699 (1) is it on purpose? huh? o.o i don't get what you mean ;.;
01:32:842 to 01:46:985 - this section has the beat spacing shorter that the rest, is it on purpose? oops :v fixed for bitter since she doesn't have osu installed right now. (chu, depois checa caso tu não goste e talz)

Relaxing
00:07:127 to 00:20:842 - same as ShaggoN Knew no >_<
00:51:699 (5) - new combo fixed
01:41:413 (3,4) - wrong spacing ^

Pretty song/map

Star~

Louis Cyphre wrote:

[General]
- highly suggest to discrease amount of kiai stuff. ehh.. they were added based on the chorus
- well BG is kinda :-/ ohwell. i tried looking for some others, but that's the best i got.
- Set same kiai time in ALL difficulties, same starts/ends. They are a bit different. Also some of them are not snapped. fixed

[Collab]
02:08:199 (3) - i find this annoying, suggesting to make some patterns instead off 4x repeat long slider.
02:36:913 (4) - not a fan of such overlaps. Better to do something like this http://puu.sh/2FhY
ehh.. both of them are fine to me >_<

[Relaxing]
Stacky spacing X_X. Well insignificant words: but i suggest to increase spacing between 1/2 notes. Better to make difference at least by 1 grid. . . I'll keep this one D:
00:52:342 (1) - as above with long repeats. ^
Well noticed crooked sliders, you can make them much better, seems that you were a bit lazy [.] ehh... >_<" I fail in making sliders, that's a fact. *goes ask for help*

Louis Cyphre wrote:

[ShaggoN knew]
AR+1, feels kinda too slow for 140 bpm with constant 1/2 beats. Current is fine for me, buuut +1 is more fine xD so yup.
00:39:485 (4) - don't really like such slider shape. Better like this? http://puu.sh/2FgT Hm, much better, thanks. I failed at curving this one xD
00:42:056 (2) - uhh, better to change pattern Uguu D: nope >.< i love this one.
00:43:770 (6) - ^ etc ^

Nice difficulty, nothing to say else. Thanks <3

ErufenRito wrote:

01:27:699 (4) - Move to 01:27:485 -

ErufenRito wrote:

Just a few suggestions, feel free to ignore them

Relaxing:

00:37:342 - Add whistle done
00:52:342 (1) - Replace the claps with whistle please ;_; ^

Collab:

00:16:770 (7) - Take out the repeat, and then add circles at 00:17:413 - and 00:17:842 - (pretty much like what you did at 00:30:485 (5,1,2) - ) done
00:38:413 - Add circle here and 00:38:628 - here too. To not make it sound so empty hmm, kay

1. The background is 800x601. It would be much better if you resize it to 800x601 even if it's just for 1px >.<

1. HP drain 5 is not a good idea for the easiest difficulty, please reduce it.
2. 00:20:413 (3) - Add a whistle to this circle to keep the same rhythm as you made with hitsounds before (like 00:18:485 (2,3,4,5))
3. 00:34:556 (2,4) - As the pattern follows the vocal, these sliders have to follow the vocal too else, they feel late. So reduce them by 1/2 ? Moreover 00:36:270 (4,5,6) are hard too read for new players because of (4) and (5) which are 1/2 spaced, and as (4) feels late, it's confusing.
4. 00:51:699 (5) - Add a finish to this circle to keep consistency ?
5. 01:24:485 (4) - This slider sounds weird. It is too early. It would be better if you do something like that instead :
   
   SPOILER

   
   With a whistle on (4).
6. 01:39:270 (4) - It's not a good idea to stack it with the end of the slider. This difficulty is the easiest so it is made for beginners, yhis kind of stack are hard to read for them. Consider changing it.
7. 01:46:556 (1,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3) - The new combo marks in this part don't fit the song. Something like that would be better :
   1. 01:47:199 (1) - Remove new combo
   2. 01:49:985 (6) - Add new combo
   3. 01:50:627 (1) - Remove new combo
   4. 01:53:413 (7) - Add new combo
   5. 01:53:842 (1) - Remove new combo
8. 01:54:699 (1) - It would make more sense to start this spinner at 01:55:128 because of the cymbal.
9. 02:09:913 - You should add a note here. else it looks weird because the pattern ends before the vocal.
10. 02:21:270 (4) - It would make more sense if you end this slider on a main beat such as 02:22:128.
11. 02:58:556 (5) - I can hear cymbals here, Add a finish ?

1. 00:46:342 (4,6) - These claps don't fit the music, they will fit if you set them on 00:46:127 (3) and 00:46:985 (5).
2. 00:58:556 - Start this break here like in Relaxing
3. 02:13:556 - As this part is not based on the vocal. You should add a circle here because of the beat.

1. 01:14:413 (4,5) - Stack (4) with (1), (5) with (3) and (6) with (1) . It will look nicer. (You can disable the distance snap in this case)
2. 01:30:270 - This break is short, and as the letterbox is enable, it looks ugly to have the letterbox which appears and disappears in less than 2 seconds. Consider mapping this break ?
3. 01:38:627 (4,5) - These circles are hidden by the track of the slider, it's hard to read and it's kinda ugly. It would be much better if you change them.
4. 01:49:770 - It feels empty here, so I suggest you to add a circle here or to make a slider which starts from here and ends at 01:49:985.
5. 01:54:699 - You need to add a circle here, else the stack feels weird. (And add it a clap)

1. Nice

Aleks719 wrote:

ShaggoN Knew
00:56:949 (1) - whistle instead of finish Yup, sounds better. :3
02:20:842 (6) - add whistle Doesnt change much, but yeah why not. Ok too ^.^

ShaggoN wrote:

P.S.
Wiinchan why you're using Hchan to ask me to check mod? o_O I'm here at next pc xD

Aleks719 wrote:

Relaxing
AR -1 will be better, imo. bleh, i prefer it like this ._. i'll wait for someone else's opinion here
00:07:127 - add note + finish here, like in Shaggon's diff? k
00:37:342 (5) - add finish to the end ^
00:37:985 (6) - imo, remove note, plays not perfect for me. ^
01:19:770 (2) - add whistle to the start, to the end ok
01:21:913 (5) - add whistle to the end k
01:23:627 (3) - ^ k
01:24:913 (5) - start, reverse - whistles, end - finish added whistles but not finish
01:28:770 (3) - imo, looks a bit better~ man.. i'd rather not touch this slider >_<" but thanks anyway

SPOILER

124,228,88770,2,0,B|184:184|176:96|112:76|76:132|76:132|24:104|-40:132|4:244|100:260,1,450

01:35:627 (5) - whistle instead of clap ok
01:36:056 (6) - finish instead of clap ^
01:41:413 (3) - whistle in the end of slider instead of clap ^
01:42:485 (4) - add whistle ^
01:42:913 (5) - add finish nope >_<
01:43:127 (6) - remove note ^
01:47:199 (2,3) - add 2 whistles k
01:48:913 (5) - add whistle to the end ^
01:51:056 (3,4,6,7) - add 4 whistles ^
01:54:056 (3) - whistle instead of clap ^
01:54:485 (4) - add whistle ^
01:54:699 (5) - add clap ^
01:55:128 (1) - add whistle ^
02:05:199 (4) - add whistles to the 1st reverse and to the end ^
02:08:199 (3) - add whistle to the start and to the end ^
02:09:485 (4,5) - add 2 whistles ^
02:10:556 (6) - add note + finish nah.. i prefer it like this
02:23:842 (1) - whistle instead of clap k
02:27:056 (5) - ^^
02:27:485 (6) - finish instead of clap changed to whistle
02:28:985 (2) - 1 grid up ^
02:32:842 (3) - finishes to the start, to the end, remove clap from the end added, only in the end though
02:34:985 (4) - add clap done
02:36:056 (3) - add clap to the reverse, to the end added but only in the reverse
02:37:556 (x) - add note + clap added
02:38:628 (3) - whistle instead of clap changed
02:39:056 (4) - add whistle done
02:39:270 (x) - add note + clap ^
02:39:699 (x) - add note + finish ^
02:40:128 (5) - add nc (slider) i'll keep it like this ><
02:40:985 (x) - add note + clap added
02:41:413 (x) - add note + finish ^
02:42:056 (2) - whistle instead of clap ^
02:42:485 (3) - add whistles to the all reverses ^
02:45:485 (2) - whistle instead of clap added the whistle.. but there's no clap in there ._.
02:45:913 (3) - this slider must be 1/2 longer. End of slider here : 02:46:556. add whistle to the start, add finish to the end. done. sounds much better now, thanks
02:47:199 (5) - add whistles to the start, to the end done
02:48:270 (x) - add note + finish ^
02:48:913 (2) - add whistle ^
02:49:342 (3) - add whistles to the 1st, 3rd reverses, to the end ^
02:52:342 (2) - add whistle ^
02:52:770 (3) - his slider must be 1/2 longer. End of slider here : 02:53:413. add whistle to the start, add finish to the end. ^
02:53:842 (4) - add claps to the start, to the end ^
02:55:128 (5) - add note + finish ^
02:55:770 (2) - add whistle ^
02:56:628 (4) - add whistles to the 1st, 3rd reverses, to the end done, but there's no 3rd reverse :v
02:59:199 (2) - whistle instead of clap done
02:59:628 (3) - add whistle ^
03:00:270 (x) - add note + finish ^
03:00:913 (5) - make end of this diff same other diffs. So, end of slider must be here : 03:01:985. add whistle to the start, finish to the end. extended the slider a bit and added a note at 03:01:985 instead.

Collab
Hp drain and OD higher than in hardest difficulty (7 > 6), Imo, it's not correct... Reduce hp and od in your diff? or increase in Shaggon's diff~ oops. reduced 1 tick
00:53:627 (3) - add whistles to the reverse, to the end done
...and look on to suggestions for Relaxing, most of suggestions work here too ohwell. i don't think it's needed to change/add soo many soft whistles.. specially because they don't even make much difference. will take a look again on the hitsounds though
Bittersweet
01:08:627 (7) - add whistle done
01:22:342 (6) - ^ ^
01:32:413 (1) - whistle instead of clap ^
01:35:199 (3,5) - add whistles ^
01:36:270 (6) - add finish ^
01:39:699 (1) - ^ nah D:
01:43:127 (8) - ^ kay
01:44:842 (3) - replace to 01:44:628 (1/2 earlier) nope >< sounds weird imo
01:53:413 (6) - finish instead of whistle kay
01:54:699 - add note + clap done

Phuuuuuu... star'd

Lizbeth wrote:

Re-checking~~ o.o/

Collab
00:57:913 - finish kiai here for the sake of taikoing~ done~
01:46:985 (1) - should be farther huh? o.o there's no note here D:

Relaxing
00:57:913 - same as collab~ done~
00:35:842 (3) - should be farther, look at timeline, is not the same distance between 2 and 3, than between 3 and 4, should be reflected on chart. ops >.< done

Rawr~~

GLF09 wrote:

Gay song...But i love it!
Star for your proyect

Patrick: Eu amo voce [?]

Lizbeth wrote:

01:46:985 (1) - should be farther huh? o.o there's no note here D:

Lizbeth wrote:

00:35:842 (3) - should be farther, look at timeline, is not the same distance between 2 and 3, than between 3 and 4, should be reflected on chart. ops >.< done

Lizbeth wrote:

Lizbeth wrote:

01:46:985 (1) - should be farther huh? o.o there's no note here D:

I'm pretty sure there's a slider @_@ http://puu.sh/4KIt
weird.. o-o' when i said there wasn't any note there i reopened the editor like 3 times to make sure.. waiting for bitter to fix that since she'll have to move some other stuff on her part

Lizbeth wrote:

00:35:842 (3) - should be farther, look at timeline, is not the same distance between 2 and 3, than between 3 and 4, should be reflected on chart. ops >.< done

Still not fixed, this is an example of what is correct: http://puu.sh/4KJE As you see in this image, (2,3) should be more separated then (3,4).
Oh and another thing in Relaxing: 00:39:485 (3) - this slider sounds weird, what about this: http://puu.sh/4KL4
>_< fixed.. but kept 00:39:056 (1) - in a "wrong" spacing.. there's no problem with that, right? D:
aand fixed the other thing. thanks again liz <3 *bites*
miau~

quintitem wrote:

ehhh I can't mod so just star for a nice map >w</

oh btw first kiai line in relax and collab diff is not align the timeline, fix it maybe more better? xD

Bittersweet wrote:

Somos gays <3 *-*