Gonzvlo wrote:

[General]

1. Relaxing and Collab felt really empty during the verses due to the lack of claps, I know that the "soft-hitclap" doesn't completely fit this song but you can try with customs. (or just use the default ones) I get what you mean here. Buut, since I don't have any idea of which custom hitsounds I could use, and since I think the default ones really sound weird here, I'll keep it for now
2. I feel that there are places during the chorus where the song screams "Place a Finish here!" like: 00:34:556 - " if SOMeone!" // 00:36:270 - "THREE" // 00:41:413 - "I STAnd". Add those finishes, It will help to spice the chorus a bit. (This goes mainly for Relaxing and Collab) Done
3. Relaxing seems like an easy-NORMAL so it's ok, but I still feel that adding an [Easy] would be the best for this mapset. I don't really like to name it easy. There are some maps that the easy is called Relaxing, so I'll keep this one
4. Unlike the other diffs Letter-boxing is disabled for [Relaxing], enable it. Done
5. The BG looks really odd. To be honest I don't like it, It looks like if you just grabbed some random BG and added some lyrics. Perhaps, try this one instead? You totally got what I did here ._.' I tried to find some P!nk wallpaper for it, buut I totally failed, so I got this one cuz I tought it was cute blablabla. Well, not that I don't like yours, but that kind on the left is just.. meh D: But thanks for the suggestion <3
   
   SPOILER

   
6. Lovely Mapset <3

Thank you! <3

[Relaxing]

1. 00:49:985 (X) - I expected a note here (+ Finish) It sounds quite nice, The rhythm on 1/1 is really noticeable I'll list other places where you can add circle (+ Finish) to spice up the rhythm a bit. Doone
2. 00:51:699 (X) - ^ ^
3. 00:55:128 (X) - ^ ^
4. 00:56:842 (X) - ^ ^
5. 01:54:913 - The Kiai time should end here, re-snap it ^
6. 00:58:128 - You should make this break rhythmical (Drag the beginning of the break to 00:58:556, like this), that kind of effect suits this song perfectly. Good idea, I didn't even know about this effect XD
7. 01:28:770 (3) - Lovely, but if you want to make it smoother try this I'll keep this one >_<
8. 01:46:556 - Apply the same suggestion as before for this chorus, I'll say it again those missing notes sound SO good that if you don't add them, you'll make me and the map cry ;_; (Add the notes here: 01:48:270 - 01:49:985 - 01:53:413 - ) Added again
9. 01:54:913 (1) - The rhythm of this spinner starts 1/2 later. Fixed
10. The same suggestions about the circles (+Finish) for the last chorus. Done
11. 01:54:913- The Kiai time should end here, re-snap it please :3 wut, again? XD

[Collab]

1. Like Relaxing, some Kiai ends are not correctly placed, check them and re-snap them please. color=#8080FF]Done, but only in one Kiai, since the other one you mentioned was the same of the previous one XD[/color]
2. 00:23:628 (3,4) - (3) looks odd, stack it properly. color=#8080FF]It was because of the distance/grid snap. Fixed anyways[/color]

Sorry for the delay, I've been really busy with tests these 2 last weeks. Don't worry.

Good job, Girls and ShaggoN :3 Thanks <3

Thanks a lot for modding! Uploaded. x3

Relaxing
01:28:770 (3) - Very pretty.
03:01:985 - the inherited timing section here isn't snapped to anything.

Collab
00:49:770 (3,4,5,6) - either add more notable hitsounds or remove it, please. it doesn't make sense with the music.
01:16:127 (5) - a bit nazi, but lower a grid?
There's some spacing inconsistencies around Bittersweet's parts, such as... (it's playable, but I might see if you would change it.)
01:19:127 (5,1), 01:20:627 (3,4), 01:27:056 (3,4).

02:08:199 (3) - A bit nazi, but maybe you should make this slider symmetrical.
02:28:556 (3) - This slider length doesn't make sense to me. But, maybe that's just me.
02:32:842 (3) - ^
03:01:985 - the inherited timing section here isn't snapped to anything, as well.

ShaggoN Knew
Good job!


Overall
Take a star, good job!
Very nice song choice, by the way.

dkun wrote:

Relaxing
01:28:770 (3) - Very pretty. Thanks <3
03:01:985 - the inherited timing section here isn't snapped to anything. oops :v fixed that one

Collab
00:49:770 (3,4,5,6) - either add more notable hitsounds or remove it, please. it doesn't make sense with the music There was only one in (6). Changed it to a whistle, guess it sounds better
02:08:199 (3) - A bit nazi, but maybe you should make this slider symmetrical. I'm not sure what you mean here.. like this http://puu.sh/1WPe ? If yes, I'll keep it how it is now ><
02:28:556 (3) - This slider length doesn't make sense to me. But, maybe that's just me. I kinda like this one. Gonna wait for someone else's oppinion here
02:32:842 (3) - ^ ^
03:01:985 - the inherited timing section here isn't snapped to anything, as well. fixed here as well

Overall
Take a star, good job!
Very nice song choice, by the way. mhm..

Thanks a lot for your mod and star dkun <3

Thanks dkun ~
(i hope its fixed now ><)

Download: P!nk - Who Knew (Wiinter) [Collab].osu

Pra não perder o costume: Kiwii <33333

updated!
e bitter <333

esculaxo meu modd no começo,mas já tá tudo diferente mesmo,nem precisa olhar.

na época do mod eu tava sem checar o mapa, gomen guerra >_<

Hey there, its my first mod, i hope can be useful
as promised to Wiinter heres my little mod/suggestion

RELAXING

00:10:985 (1,2) - spacing same as 00:12:699 (3,4) -

01:07:556 (2,3) - spacing same as 01:09:270 (1,2) -

01:28:770 (3) - do it more symmetrical like this http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/86842


SHAGGON KNEW

looks good, nice map


COLLAB

Suggest to switch AR to 8

01:05:842 (2) - 01:06:699 (3) - symmetrical sliders

01:09:270 (1,2) - something like this http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/86826 and fix spacing of 01:10:985 (3,4) -

01:19:127 (5) - look better like http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/86828

01:22:985 (1) - 01:23:842 (2) - symmetrical sliders

01:44:199 (1,2) - spacing 0.8x

01:50:413 (1,2) - something like that http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/86825

01:53:842 (1,2,3,4) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/86830

02:45:270 (1,2,3,4) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/86834 and fix 02:46:556 (5,6,7,8,9) - spacing

02:55:128 (1,2) - symmetrical sliders

02:56:842 (3,4,5) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/86836




Nice mapset, nothing else to say, Good luck ;D

Fixed almost everything. Thanks, giO-
Download: P!nk - Who Knew (Wiinter) [Collab].osu

giO- wrote:

Hey there, its my first mod, i hope can be useful
as promised to Wiinter heres my little mod/suggestion Thanks for checking XDD

RELAXING

00:10:985 (1,2) - spacing same as 00:12:699 (3,4) - well, i didn't make the saaame, but i changed it, so yeah

01:07:556 (2,3) - spacing same as 01:09:270 (1,2) - ^

01:28:770 (3) - do it more symmetrical like this http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/86842 but if i do that i'll look more like an M than a heart >_< will keep this one


COLLAB

Suggest to switch AR to 8 would be way too fast D:


Nice mapset, nothing else to say, Good luck ;D

Thanks for modding ^-^ Updated <3

Bittersweet wrote:

Fixed almost everything. Thanks, giO-

Wiinter wrote:

Thanks for modding ^-^ Updated <3

No problem

Oh guys I love you <3 This song is so pretty ;_; It even put a tear in my eye...


[Relaxing]

1. 11:199 (1,2) - How come these are differently spaced than (3,4)? I mean it sounds like the spacing should be the same
2. 37:336 (5,6) -This doesn't sound so good in my opinion. So I'll leave a variant, see if you like it
   SPOILER

   
   (6) should have a finish. You'll see a similar suggestion on the next point.
3. 48:264 (x) - I think adding a circle with a finish would be great. I know you're mapping the vocals basically but some variation could be awesome
4. 01:21:907 (5) . This is not evenly spaced with (4). I mean, suddenly the spacing becomes smaller. Is that for a particular reason that I didn't notice? :O
5. 01:23:622 (3,4) - I'd have to say the same as before for these two.
6. 01:36:264 (x) - If I suggested it before, I'll have to suggest it here too~ add a circle with a finish. Also, I don't like the claps on (5) and (6) that much. Can you remove them? :3
7. 01:43:122 (x) - Pretty much the same thing here n.n Add a circle with a finish (of course, if you like the idea)
8. 01:46:550 (x) - I'd add a circle with a finish here too. It looks pretty much like 01:48:264 (3), so it would look more consistent that way.
9. 02:27:693 (x) - Pretty much the same, add a circle with a finish, and remove the claps from (5) and (6).
10. 02:44:836 (x) - The circle with a finish thingy. You may have to move the next elements a bit, sorry for that ;_;
11. 03:00:907 (4) - This should be very delicate in my opinion, as it is the last slider. The claps don't seem to help much on that. So I'd say they are not needed, so remove them.

[Collab]

1. Maybe consider doing the same finish pattern mentioned in [Relaxing]? Just if you hadn't noticed, I really like it xD
2. 50:413 (6) - Why is this not eveny spaced? ;_;

[ShaggoN Knew]

<3 (I'd still use more finishes, but somehow I didn't want to mention them here)


It's hard to mod this in an objective way, I get too distracted by the song *w* I seriously love you for mapping this :3

Good work,have my star.

narakucrimson wrote:

Oh guys I love you <3 This song is so pretty ;_; It even put a tear in my eye... Aw, thanks. XD It's really a beautiful song. <3


[Relaxing]

1. 11:199 (1,2) - How come these are differently spaced than (3,4)? I mean it sounds like the spacing should be the same kjhgkfhg why are those spacings always wrong done
2. 37:336 (5,6) -This doesn't sound so good in my opinion. So I'll leave a variant, see if you like it
   SPOILER

   
   (6) should have a finish. You'll see a similar suggestion on the next point. oh boy.. this really sounds better D: (apart from the fact that i didn't add the whistle there) thanks
3. 48:264 (x) - I think adding a circle with a finish would be great. I know you're mapping the vocals basically but some variation could be awesome you mean on 00:48:270? if so, added
4. 01:21:907 (5) . This is not evenly spaced with (4). I mean, suddenly the spacing becomes smaller. Is that for a particular reason that I didn't notice? :O you're right. fixed
5. 01:23:622 (3,4) - I'd have to say the same as before for these two. ^
6. 01:36:264 (x) - If I suggested it before, I'll have to suggest it here too~ add a circle with a finish. Also, I don't like the claps on (5) and (6) that much. Can you remove them? :3 for some reason idk i feel it'd be weird here D: will keep without this one
7. 01:43:122 (x) - Pretty much the same thing here n.n Add a circle with a finish (of course, if you like the idea) added
8. 01:46:550 (x) - I'd add a circle with a finish here too. It looks pretty much like 01:48:264 (3), so it would look more consistent that way.^
9. 02:27:693 (x) - Pretty much the same, add a circle with a finish, and remove the claps from (5) and (6). i prefer without it, and i kinda like those claps, so i'll keep them :v
10. 02:44:836 (x) - The circle with a finish thingy. You may have to move the next elements a bit, sorry for that ;_; added
11. 03:00:907 (4) - This should be very delicate in my opinion, as it is the last slider. The claps don't seem to help much on that. So I'd say they are not needed, so remove them. yeah, you're right. removed them D:

[Collab]

1. Maybe consider doing the same finish pattern mentioned in [Relaxing]? Just if you hadn't noticed, I really like it xD added them on my parts. / chu, vê se quer fazer na tua parte também <3 e tinha uma que pegava bem na bookmark, eu adicionei ali, mas se quiser tirar, feel free x3
2. 50:413 (6) - Why is this not eveny spaced? ;_; actually it is D:

[ShaggoN Knew]

<3 (I'd still use more finishes, but somehow I didn't want to mention them here)


It's hard to mod this in an objective way, I get too distracted by the song *w* I seriously love you for mapping this :3

Good work,have my star.

Well.. what can I say XD For someone that wasn't modding in an objective way you did reeally well. Thanks for your mod and star!

Wiinter wrote:

chu, vê se quer fazer na tua parte também <3 e tinha uma que pegava bem na bookmark, eu adicionei ali, mas se quiser tirar, feel free x3

"You go see if you want to fix your part too <3 there was one that sounded good on the bookmark, I added it there, but if you don't want to add it, feel free x3"

Was I close?

narakucrimson wrote:

Wiinter wrote:

chu, vê se quer fazer na tua parte também <3 e tinha uma que pegava bem na bookmark, eu adicionei ali, mas se quiser tirar, feel free x3

"You go see if you want to fix your part too <3 there was one that sounded good on the bookmark, I added it there, but if you don't want to add it, feel free x3"

Was I close?

haha, yay a good student x3 really close, apart from the fact "chu" is the way i call bitter XD

Kiwii, eu sucko com hitsounds e tu que fez eles desde o começo, entao o que vc decidir, por mim ta bele xD (eu sei que isso pode soar pura preguiça, mas é so meia, k? Resto é o que eu falei mesmo <3) Mas se tu achar necessario eu olho amanha xD

caralhos viu. não vou ter o trabalho de updatear por causa de um hitsound no mapset inteiro T^T

Hi, sorry for the delay u//u

ShaggoN Knew
00:07:127 to 00:20:842 - how about silenced sliderslide for this section

Collab
00:07:127 to 00:20:842 - same as ShaggoN Knew
00:45:699 (1) - in other parts like this you didn't put this note like here 00:45:699 (1) is it on purpose?
01:32:842 to 01:46:985 - this section has the beat spacing shorter that the rest, is it on purpose?

Relaxing
00:07:127 to 00:20:842 - same as ShaggoN Knew
00:51:699 (5) - new combo
01:41:413 (3,4) - wrong spacing

Pretty song/map

Star~

Wiinchan, é o som, não o spacing, olha como fica o som depois você arruma a pattern como quiser :3

Não de kudo

Lissette wrote:

Hi, sorry for the delay u//u nyuu, i took ages to check it as well so >_<"

ShaggoN Knew
00:07:127 to 00:20:842 - how about silenced sliderslide for this section since shaggon is busy with studies, i'll be checking his diff stuff.. so nyuu >.< sounds a bit weird for me

Collab
00:07:127 to 00:20:842 - same as ShaggoN Knew no >_<
00:45:699 (1) - in other parts like this you didn't put this note like here 00:45:699 (1) is it on purpose? huh? o.o i don't get what you mean ;.;
01:32:842 to 01:46:985 - this section has the beat spacing shorter that the rest, is it on purpose? oops :v fixed for bitter since she doesn't have osu installed right now. (chu, depois checa caso tu não goste e talz)

Relaxing
00:07:127 to 00:20:842 - same as ShaggoN Knew no >_<
00:51:699 (5) - new combo fixed
01:41:413 (3,4) - wrong spacing ^

Pretty song/map

Star~

Thanks a lot for your mod and star liss <3

Fixed the listed ones + some things i felt like. x3 Updated ~

[General]
- highly suggest to discrease amount of kiai stuff.
- well BG is kinda :-/
- Set same kiai time in ALL difficulties, same starts/ends. They are a bit different. Also some of them are not snapped.

[ShaggoN knew]
AR+1, feels kinda too slow for 140 bpm with constant 1/2 beats.
00:39:485 (4) - don't really like such slider shape. Better like this? http://puu.sh/2FgT
00:42:056 (2) - uhh, better to change pattern
00:43:770 (6) - ^ etc

Nice difficulty, nothing to say else.

[Collab]
01:29:949 - fill this place with notes, such short break...
02:08:199 (3) - i find this annoying, suggesting to make some patterns instead off 4x repeat long slider.
02:36:913 (4) - not a fan of such overlaps. Better to do something like this http://puu.sh/2FhY
02:41:413 - feels so empty, i'd add a note here.
02:45:699 (2,3,4) - i'd like to see something more then just such stacks.
02:57:699 (5) - same as above issues with long slider repeats.

[Relaxing]
Stacky spacing X_X. Well insignificant words: but i suggest to increase spacing between 1/2 notes. Better to make difference at least by 1 grid. . .
00:52:342 (1) - as above with long repeats.
Well noticed crooked sliders, you can make them much better, seems that you were a bit lazy [.]

Louis Cyphre wrote:

[General]
- highly suggest to discrease amount of kiai stuff. ehh.. they were added based on the chorus
- well BG is kinda :-/ ohwell. i tried looking for some others, but that's the best i got.
- Set same kiai time in ALL difficulties, same starts/ends. They are a bit different. Also some of them are not snapped. fixed

[Collab]
02:08:199 (3) - i find this annoying, suggesting to make some patterns instead off 4x repeat long slider.
02:36:913 (4) - not a fan of such overlaps. Better to do something like this http://puu.sh/2FhY
ehh.. both of them are fine to me >_<

[Relaxing]
Stacky spacing X_X. Well insignificant words: but i suggest to increase spacing between 1/2 notes. Better to make difference at least by 1 grid. . . I'll keep this one D:
00:52:342 (1) - as above with long repeats. ^
Well noticed crooked sliders, you can make them much better, seems that you were a bit lazy [.] ehh... >_<" I fail in making sliders, that's a fact. *goes ask for help*

Will update as soon as Bitter and Shag are ready.

Download: P!nk - Who Knew (Wiinter) [Collab].osu

Did some. Thanks for the mod.


"- well BG is kinda :-/ " - so true~ *runs*

Louis Cyphre wrote:

[ShaggoN knew]
AR+1, feels kinda too slow for 140 bpm with constant 1/2 beats. Current is fine for me, buuut +1 is more fine xD so yup.
00:39:485 (4) - don't really like such slider shape. Better like this? http://puu.sh/2FgT Hm, much better, thanks. I failed at curving this one xD
00:42:056 (2) - uhh, better to change pattern Uguu D: nope >.< i love this one.
00:43:770 (6) - ^ etc ^

Nice difficulty, nothing to say else. Thanks <3

Download: P!nk - Who Knew (Wiinter) [ShaggoN Knew].osu

upadated <3 (with new bg. >_>)

I did a little IRC mod ;3

I’m nazi a bit because you are an experienced mapper.
[ShaggoN Knew]
00:19:770 (6) – stack this perfectly
02:07:128 (6) - ^
02:20:842 (6) - ^
Really nice diff, especially the hitsounds ;D.

Nice song, star

thanks a lot for the irc mod gina <3

Starrr!

★ <3

Just a few suggestions, feel free to ignore them

Relaxing:

00:37:342 - Add whistle
00:52:342 (1) - Replace the claps with whistle please ;_;

Collab:

00:16:770 (7) - Take out the repeat, and then add circles at 00:17:413 - and 00:17:842 - (pretty much like what you did at 00:30:485 (5,1,2) - )
00:38:413 - Add circle here and 00:38:628 - here too. To not make it sound so empty
01:13:770 - Add circle
01:27:699 (4) - Move to 01:27:485 -
01:37:770 (3) - Delete the circle, and then start the next slider here

Shaggon's:

Oh my god, I'm so noob, I keep thinking that these sliders: 00:42:056 (2) - starts at the other end, making me combo break ;_;
(Please, you don't have to do anything about it, cause they are perfectly fine, Lol, just wanted to comment about it xD)

ErufenRito wrote:

01:27:699 (4) - Move to 01:27:485 -

Nah >w< Fixed everything else, thanks :3

Download: P!nk - Who Knew (Wiinter) [Collab].osu

KIWII! eu te i love you =D /mamonasassassinas

ErufenRito wrote:

Just a few suggestions, feel free to ignore them

Relaxing:

00:37:342 - Add whistle done
00:52:342 (1) - Replace the claps with whistle please ;_; ^

Collab:

00:16:770 (7) - Take out the repeat, and then add circles at 00:17:413 - and 00:17:842 - (pretty much like what you did at 00:30:485 (5,1,2) - ) done
00:38:413 - Add circle here and 00:38:628 - here too. To not make it sound so empty hmm, kay

Thanks a lot for your mod. Updated ~

Edit: bitter 22k <3 *corre*

Very good speed for the map.
Star*

Hi there~~

Re-checking~ :3

Collab
this should be farther from prev object:
00:37:342 (5) -
00:52:342 (1) -
02:12:699 (1) -
02:32:413 (2) -
I know you mainly follow the vocals, but I suggest to add notes on the next white ticks:
00:13:985 -
00:27:699 -
00:55:128 -
01:12:270 -
01:25:985 -
02:41:413 -

Relaxing;
01:24:485 (4) - mmm doesn't fit that much, what about this: http://puu.sh/3Ip4
01:54:699 (1) - start spinner on next white tick, and add circle here.

Maybe use tick rate 2 for all diffs, as ShaggoN diff?
I like the new BG and colors btw ^^<3

Chequei e ta ok por mim kiwii. Mas bateu preguiça de upar diff e tal por causa de 3 notas, então~ pode add pra mim? x3

And thanks, Liz :3

Sorry, I'm late ;~;

General

1. The background is 800x601. It would be much better if you resize it to 800x601 even if it's just for 1px >.<

Relaxing

1. HP drain 5 is not a good idea for the easiest difficulty, please reduce it.
2. 00:20:413 (3) - Add a whistle to this circle to keep the same rhythm as you made with hitsounds before (like 00:18:485 (2,3,4,5))
3. 00:34:556 (2,4) - As the pattern follows the vocal, these sliders have to follow the vocal too else, they feel late. So reduce them by 1/2 ? Moreover 00:36:270 (4,5,6) are hard too read for new players because of (4) and (5) which are 1/2 spaced, and as (4) feels late, it's confusing.
4. 00:51:699 (5) - Add a finish to this circle to keep consistency ?
5. 01:24:485 (4) - This slider sounds weird. It is too early. It would be better if you do something like that instead :
   
   SPOILER

   
   With a whistle on (4).
6. 01:39:270 (4) - It's not a good idea to stack it with the end of the slider. This difficulty is the easiest so it is made for beginners, yhis kind of stack are hard to read for them. Consider changing it.
7. 01:46:556 (1,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3) - The new combo marks in this part don't fit the song. Something like that would be better :
   1. 01:47:199 (1) - Remove new combo
   2. 01:49:985 (6) - Add new combo
   3. 01:50:627 (1) - Remove new combo
   4. 01:53:413 (7) - Add new combo
   5. 01:53:842 (1) - Remove new combo
8. 01:54:699 (1) - It would make more sense to start this spinner at 01:55:128 because of the cymbal.
9. 02:09:913 - You should add a note here. else it looks weird because the pattern ends before the vocal.
10. 02:21:270 (4) - It would make more sense if you end this slider on a main beat such as 02:22:128.
11. 02:58:556 (5) - I can hear cymbals here, Add a finish ?

Collab - Wiinter's Parts

1. 00:46:342 (4,6) - These claps don't fit the music, they will fit if you set them on 00:46:127 (3) and 00:46:985 (5).
2. 00:58:556 - Start this break here like in Relaxing
3. 02:13:556 - As this part is not based on the vocal. You should add a circle here because of the beat.

Collab - Bittersweet's Parts

1. 01:14:413 (4,5) - Stack (4) with (1), (5) with (3) and (6) with (1) . It will look nicer. (You can disable the distance snap in this case)
2. 01:30:270 - This break is short, and as the letterbox is enable, it looks ugly to have the letterbox which appears and disappears in less than 2 seconds. Consider mapping this break ?
3. 01:38:627 (4,5) - These circles are hidden by the track of the slider, it's hard to read and it's kinda ugly. It would be much better if you change them.
4. 01:49:770 - It feels empty here, so I suggest you to add a circle here or to make a slider which starts from here and ends at 01:49:985.
5. 01:54:699 - You need to add a circle here, else the stack feels weird. (And add it a clap)

Shaggon Knew

1. Nice

Overall, it's a nice map *.* Good job.

Thanks a lot for the re-check Liz <3


Thanks a lot for your mod and star, Kurai x3

Waiting for Bittersweet~

Relaxing
AR -1 will be better, imo.
00:07:127 - add note + finish here, like in Shaggon's diff?
00:37:342 (5) - add finish to the end
00:37:985 (6) - imo, remove note, plays not perfect for me.
01:19:770 (2) - add whistle to the start, to the end
01:21:913 (5) - add whistle to the end
01:23:627 (3) - ^
01:24:913 (5) - start, reverse - whistles, end - finish
01:28:770 (3) - imo, looks a bit better~
01:35:627 (5) - whistle instead of clap
01:36:056 (6) - finish instead of clap
01:41:413 (3) - whistle in the end of slider instead of clap
01:42:485 (4) - add whistle
01:42:913 (5) - add finish
01:43:127 (6) - remove note
01:47:199 (2,3) - add 2 whistles
01:48:913 (5) - add whistle to the end
01:51:056 (3,4,6,7) - add 4 whistles
01:54:056 (3) - whistle instead of clap
01:54:485 (4) - add whistle
01:54:699 (5) - add clap
01:55:128 (1) - add whistle
02:05:199 (4) - add whistles to the 1st reverse and to the end
02:08:199 (3) - add whistle to the start and to the end
02:09:485 (4,5) - add 2 whistles
02:10:556 (6) - add note + finish
02:23:842 (1) - whistle instead of clap
02:27:056 (5) - ^
02:27:485 (6) - finish instead of clap
02:28:985 (2) - 1 grid up
02:32:842 (3) - finishes to the start, to the end, remove clap from the end
02:34:985 (4) - add clap
02:36:056 (3) - add clap to the reverse, to the end
02:37:556 (x) - add note + clap
02:38:628 (3) - whistle instead of clap
02:39:056 (4) - add whistle
02:39:270 (x) - add note + clap
02:39:699 (x) - add note + finish
02:40:128 (5) - add nc (slider)
02:40:985 (x) - add note + clap
02:41:413 (x) - add note + finish
02:42:056 (2) - whistle instead of clap
02:42:485 (3) - add whistles to the all reverses
02:45:485 (2) - whistle instead of clap
02:45:913 (3) - this slider must be 1/2 longer. End of slider here : 02:46:556. add whistle to the start, add finish to the end.
02:47:199 (5) - add whistles to the start, to the end
02:48:270 (x) - add note + finish
02:48:913 (2) - add whistle
02:49:342 (3) - add whistles to the 1st, 3rd reverses, to the end
02:52:342 (2) - add whistle
02:52:770 (3) - his slider must be 1/2 longer. End of slider here : 02:53:413. add whistle to the start, add finish to the end.
02:53:842 (4) - add claps to the start, to the end
02:55:128 (5) - add note + finish
02:55:770 (2) - add whistle
02:56:628 (4) - add whistles to the 1st, 3rd reverses, to the end
02:59:199 (2) - whistle instead of clap
02:59:628 (3) - add whistle
03:00:270 (x) - add note + finish
03:00:913 (5) - make end of this diff same other diffs. So, end of slider must be here : 03:01:985. add whistle to the start, finish to the end.

Collab
Hp drain and OD higher than in hardest difficulty (7 > 6), Imo, it's not correct... Reduce hp and od in your diff? or increase in Shaggon's diff~
00:53:627 (3) - add whistles to the reverse, to the end
...and look on to suggestions for Relaxing, most of suggestions work here too
Bittersweet
01:08:627 (7) - add whistle
01:22:342 (6) - ^
01:32:413 (1) - whistle instead of clap
01:35:199 (3,5) - add whistles
01:36:270 (6) - add finish
01:39:699 (1) - ^
01:43:127 (8) - ^
01:44:842 (3) - replace to 01:44:628 (1/2 earlier)
01:53:413 (6) - finish instead of whistle
01:54:699 - add note + clap

ShaggoN Knew
00:56:949 (1) - whistle instead of finish
02:20:842 (6) - add whistle

Phuuuuuu... star'd