potato
[General]
Rename to Collab Oni, nobody uses "taiko" in diff name anymore pls (or just Collab)
Please mark the parts each of you mapped since that is relevant to RC
About volume, to say it short it sucks. It's too loud in some and too quiet in other parts.
04:58:636 -
Remove this red bar it is wrongVolume suggestions00:21:176 - add 90% volume
01:27:208 - add 90% volume
02:40:858 - 90% volume
02:56:096 - 100% volume
03:57:048 - 70% volume and keep until 04:12:286 -
04:12:286 - 90% volume
04:27:524 - 100% volume, keep til end
[Diff]
00:01:493 (3) - 00:02:763 (7) - 00:04:033 (11) - 00:05:303 (15) - Change all of these into dons. Except that they sound weird, they don't really add much. The benefit of doing this is that 00:05:938 (18,20) - these will be FAR more noticeable as they are the first kats and fit to the bell sound.
- While we are at the bell sound, you could then 00:07:208 (22) - change this into a kat so we have 4 ongoing bell kats
- This also means 00:09:112 (28) - 00:10:382 (32) - 00:11:652 (37) - 00:12:922 (41) - 00:14:192 (46) - 00:15:462 (51) - should be changed to dons
00:15:303 (50) - I don't get why there is a don placed
here. The others make sense cause they go down to a downbeat, but this one... not. Would suggest to move it to 00:14:668 - here for consistency. OR you add one 00:14:668 - here so you build up to the harder part starting 00:16:097 - here.
00:28:239 (50) - move this 00:28:081 - here to keep rhythm consistent, this is a damn evil rhythm breaker. (00:23:001 - !!)
00:28:874 (55) - Same as above, move 00:28:716 - here and also change to a kat. More interesting to play too imo
00:32:684 (83) - Same, move 00:32:525 - here
00:34:351 (96,97) - Change to dons so you have something different from 00:33:716 (91,92,93) - . Alternatively only change 00:34:430 (97) - to don
00:35:065 - Add a don here to keep the triplet rhythm consistent, it's missing here. 00:34:985 (101) - Change to don then
00:37:763 (123) - Move this 00:37:605 - here; 00:38:874 - add note
00:42:922 - 00:44:192 - 00:48:001 - 00:49:271 - 00:50:541 - Why is there no note in all these spots? You should fill all of these simply to follow melody, drums... everything is pretty continuous in the song.
00:43:239 (15,16,17,18,19) - I don't see any reason to justify this being monocolor? Make it... non-monocolor
00:44:827 (27) - Kat for rhythm or sth
00:46:176 - Might wanna add a don here for melody as well, seems to fit. (00:48:795 (56,57,58,59,60) - )
00:49:033 (59) - Move 00:48:716 - here and 00:49:112 (60) - change to don, fits drums more and gives the downbeat more impact. It's the only one without a bell that is a kat.
00:51:255 - Add a don here maybe to have a 7-plet preparing for this more intense part!
00:53:636 (97,100) - Suggesting to swap these two (making it kdd kkd) because the melody goes up (00:56:097 (118,119,120,121,122,123,124,125) - like this)
00:55:303 (111,112) - Swap these two so you keep having a kat on the white tick. Plays nicer
00:56:652 (124) - move this 00:56:335 - here and change 00:56:732 (125) - this to a big kat so it's consistent with 00:58:001 (135) -
01:01:811 - Move this green line 01:01:890 - here so the note here comes a normal pace still. Fits as it is a strong sound.
01:47:525 (283,284,285) - 01:48:795 (290,291,292) - Why are these big notes while there are none 01:52:605 - 01:53:874 - here? Either have less big notes at the first two spots or remove notes in the other two to make space for big notes. I would suggest to do latter because the song doesn't get that intense so suddenly and there's a huge fall of density 01:57:684 - here.
01:48:478 (286,287,288,289) - Also Lno is right that these make no sense, why? 01:48:478 - There is no sound suggesting 1/6 here, there only is 01:48:636 - here. Somewhat, actually also not really. Seeing as qoot also didn't map 1/6 here, I'd just go with a 1/1 note 01:48:478 - here or remove the 1/6 notes to make it d k. You can then add a note 01:48:557 - here if you feel like it's needed.
01:52:287 (312,313,314,315) - Same story. The sound you are probably mapping to starts 01:52:446 - here so the 1/6 really makes no sense.
I'd suggest not having here 1/6 at all because again, there is no real 1/6 here; additionally not having 1/6 here will make the existing 1/6 far more noticeable (03:53:080 (88,89,90,91) - for example)
02:10:382 - 02:25:461 - why is this part so much more dense than 02:25:620 - 02:40:699 - ? The 2nd part even barely has 1/4 triplets, making the difference even bigger.
02:48:635 (62,63,64,65,66,67,68) - what is this? There is nothing that has 1/4 and you map monocolor on it which covers up the song too much, even more than having different colors. Remove notes, maybe make it a triplet at most.
02:50:540 (79,80,81,82,83,84,85) - same
03:00:858 (78,79,80,81,82,83,84) - This 7-plet also makes no sense, it's even the only 7-plet in your part. Split it up.
03:07:524 (135,136,137,138,139) - Why does this 5-plet start on a downbeat? If we were to consider the rest of the kiai it should be a 5-plet starting 03:07:207 - here. Remove 03:07:604 (136) - , add notes 03:07:286 - and 03:07:445 - .
03:11:334 (1) -
big kat please :V (03:18:953 (66) - !!)
03:30:699 (155,156,157,158) - Add some notes here, preferably 03:31:175 -
03:39:985 (200) - Move 03:39:826 - here and change to don. Consistent 1/4 rhythm, this is random.
03:57:048 - Overlapping notes due to SV! Either 03:56:413 - 03:56:731 - reduce SV here or make a softer SV slowdown starting 03:57:048 - here and going to like, 03:57:683 - .
04:03:239 (14) - change to kat to follow the melody with 04:03:397 (15) -
04:48:158 - Increase the SV from here to 04:50:063 - by 0.03 instead of 0.05, so that at the end you don't have overlapping notes (with 04:50:857 (9) - being readable as a 1/4 note belonging to 04:51:016 (1,2,3) - , confusing the player)
--> after that you can add a note 04:50:777 - here for the drums tbh
05:07:683 (148,149,150,151,152,153,154,155,156) - eeeeh this is the only 9-plet in your part, which seems weird considering that there should be more (05:09:588 - ) but there are far less notes. I'd suggest removing 05:07:921 (151) - it will fit good with 05:07:048 (143,144,145,146,147) -
05:16:731 (221,222,223,224,225,226,227,228,229) - Why does this exist? It's waaaaaaaay too much than the song gives away and is also overly complicated (aka plays weird). You do not hear to what this is supposed to be mapped to anymore, I'd split it up into triplets by removing 05:16:969 (224) - 05:17:286 (228) - these. This is also because there is not nearly as much 05:24:032 - here
05:26:175 (315,318) - Change to kats to make this stream play nicer
05:35:382 (64,68) - Trade these two, plays much more nicer (I mean come on a double kat starting on blue tick ;_;)
05:37:683 (90,92) - why are these big notes, they seem pretty random considering the rest is mapped as 1/4
05:39:350 (104) - Remove to make 05:39:429 (105,106,107,108,109,110,111,112) - more noticeable (melody does 1/4 here!!)
05:44:350 - why does the SV increase here, like there's nothing in the song except that it actually calms down.
going to watch zootopia, finishing mod after thatmod finished
good luck~