Guest
home
beatmaps
rankings
community
store
help
forum
  1. Forums
  2. Beatmaps
  3. Ranked Beatmaps (Archived)
  4. Beatmap Graveyard

Takahiro Eguchi - STARGAZER [OsuMania]

posted
Total Posts
9
Elementaires
658 posts
Joined January 2013
Topic Starter
Elementaires
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on mardi 15 août 2017 at 17:20:45

Artist: Takahiro Eguchi
Title: STARGAZER
Source: SUPERBEAT: XONiC
Tags: opening playstation vita ps steins
BPM: 180
Filesize: 6482kb
Play Time: 02:00
Difficulties Available:
  1. EZ - 4Key (1,36 stars, 349 notes)
  2. MX - 4Key (4,39 stars, 1480 notes)
  3. NM - 4Key (1,97 stars, 515 notes)
  4. Stein's HD - 4Key (3,17 stars, 1080 notes)
Download: Takahiro Eguchi - STARGAZER
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
---------------
Stein's HD by Steins
Last edited by Elementaires , edited 45 times in total.
PyaKura
2,084 posts
Joined January 2013
PyaKura 
19:04 *Elementaires is listening to [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/936433 Takahiro Eguchi - STARGAZER]
19:09 PyaKura: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4814564
19:09 Elementaires: http://puu.sh/nX6Dm/a025d3ac5d.jpg
19:11 PyaKura: 01:38:963 (98963|2,99047|3,99130|2,99213|3,99297|2,99380|3) - 
19:12 PyaKura: 01:48:880 (108880|1,108880|0,108991|3,108991|2,109102|1,109102|0,109213|3,109213|2) - 
19:16 PyaKura: 01:49:213 - 
19:17 PyaKura: 01:49:880 - 
19:18 PyaKura: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4814620
19:19 PyaKura: 00:58:538 - 
19:21 PyaKura: 00:56:205 - 
19:22 PyaKura: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4814636
19:24 PyaKura: 00:12:706 (12706|2) - 
19:24 PyaKura: 00:14:039 (14039|1) - 
19:24 PyaKura: 00:15:373 (15373|0) - 
19:24 PyaKura: 00:16:706 (16706|3) - 
19:25 PyaKura: 00:18:039 (18039|0) - 
19:25 Elementaires: 00:37:205 (37205|0,37288|1,37372|2,37455|3) -
19:26 PyaKura: 00:41:538 (41538|0,41538|3,41538|2,41622|1,41705|3,41705|2,41788|1,41872|0,41872|2,41872|3,41955|1) - 
19:27 PyaKura: 00:41:538 (41538|2,41705|2,41872|2) - 
19:28 PyaKura: 00:41:538 (41538|3,41538|2,41622|1,41705|3,41705|2,41788|1,41872|3,41872|2,41955|1,42038|2,42038|3,42122|1,42205|2,42288|1,42372|2,42455|1,42538|2,42538|3) - 
19:29 PyaKura: 00:41:538 (41538|0,41872|0,42205|0,42538|0) - 
19:30 PyaKura: 00:41:538 (41538|2,41622|1,41705|2,41788|1,41872|2,41955|1,42038|2,42122|1,42205|2,42288|1,42372|2,42455|1,42538|2) - 
19:30 Elementaires: 00:41:538 (41538|2,41538|3,41705|3,41705|2,41872|2,41872|3,42038|2,42038|3) -
19:31 Elementaires: 00:41:455 (41455|1,41622|1,41788|1,41955|1,42122|1,42288|1,42455|1) -
19:31 PyaKura: 00:41:538 (41538|2,41705|2,41872|2,42038|2,42205|2,42372|2,42538|2) - 
19:32 PyaKura: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4814695

Um yeah that's actually a vocal mod on the highest diff.
Fubukicat
970 posts
Joined February 2012
Fubukicat
Yopoi~
je crois que c'est le deuxième mod ever que je fais en français ahue
welp

dadon
key=1/2/3/4
[General]
il te faut un fichier mp3 en 192 kbps
check l'ai mod

[MX]
00:01:715 (1715|2,1799|3) - les deux note ont le même pitch , tu peux jack ici si tu veux imho
00:07:049 (7049|2,7132|3) - ^pareil
00:20:049 (20049|2,20049|0,20382|2,20382|0) - c'est pas exactement les même sons , je propose : dadon
00:26:382 (26382|3) - move en 2 ?
00:58:882 (58882|3,58882|2,58882|0) - j'aime bien cette section :o
01:06:882 (66882|0,66882|3) - tu peux changer le pattern une fois sur deux pour un peu de variation
01:09:215 (69215|3,69215|2) - devrait être trois notes , basé sur ce pattern qui est le même : 00:10:549 (10549|3,10549|0,10549|2) -
01:59:882 (119882|2,119882|1) - tu peux mettre trois notes ici , bon sa devient tricky mais c'est pas trés dur imo
[Stein's HD]
Stweiiin~
00:04:882 (4882|0) - 2 notes ?
00:09:549 (9549|3,9549|0,9549|2) - tu peux concrétement faire du 1/4 jusqu'au bout imho
00:20:382 (20382|0) - double , vu que tu le fais pour :00:20:049 (20049|3,20049|0) - , 00:18:882 (18882|0,18882|2) -
00:20:715 (20715|3) - ^ same
00:26:382 (26382|0) - ajoute une note en 1 ? pour la drum
00:32:528 (32528|2,32528|3) - je crois que c'est mal snappé XD dat 1/16 wew
00:42:549 (42549|0) - double , pour le snare sound ?
01:24:215 (84215|2) - welcome to tricky land , mais c'est beau ;^)
01:30:799 (90799|1) - si tu follow l'instru principal , remove cette note
[NM]
00:20:715 (20715|1) - move en 3 pour le pitch avec : 00:19:382 (19382|2) -
01:19:549 (79549|2,79882|1) - Ctrl+J , vu que ces deux la sont pas exactement le même son : 01:19:882 (79882|1,79882|0,80215|1,80215|0) - (welp c'est pas obligé genre c'est même pas super grave en fait xD)
[EZ]
00:17:549 (17549|1,18882|2) - Ctrl+H sa a l'air plus fun comme sa que avec une stair simple
01:03:132 (63132|1) - move à : 01:03:382 (63382|1) - le rythme est largement plus simplea capter et vraiment catchy
01:38:215 (98215|2) - a partir d'ici vu que le son change tu peut arréter la LN et laisser un blanc , ou en commencer une nouvelle (again c'est pas obliger)

Voili voilou , Good Luck
sorry pour mon Frenglish xd
Elementaires
658 posts
Joined January 2013
Topic Starter
Elementaires

Eternalie wrote:

Yopoi~
je crois que c'est le deuxième mod ever que je fais en français ahue
welp

dadon
key=1/2/3/4
[General]
il te faut un fichier mp3 en 192 kbps
check l'ai mod

[MX]
00:01:715 (1715|2,1799|3) - les deux note ont le même pitch , tu peux jack ici si tu veux imho
00:07:049 (7049|2,7132|3) - ^pareil
00:20:049 (20049|2,20049|0,20382|2,20382|0) - c'est pas exactement les même sons , je propose : dadon
00:26:382 (26382|3) - move en 2 ?
00:58:882 (58882|3,58882|2,58882|0) - j'aime bien cette section :o
01:06:882 (66882|0,66882|3) - tu peux changer le pattern une fois sur deux pour un peu de variation
01:09:215 (69215|3,69215|2) - devrait être trois notes , basé sur ce pattern qui est le même : 00:10:549 (10549|3,10549|0,10549|2) -
01:59:882 (119882|2,119882|1) - tu peux mettre trois notes ici , bon sa devient tricky mais c'est pas trés dur imo
[Stein's HD]
Stweiiin~
00:04:882 (4882|0) - 2 notes ?
00:09:549 (9549|3,9549|0,9549|2) - tu peux concrétement faire du 1/4 jusqu'au bout imho
00:20:382 (20382|0) - double , vu que tu le fais pour :00:20:049 (20049|3,20049|0) - , 00:18:882 (18882|0,18882|2) -
00:20:715 (20715|3) - ^ same
00:26:382 (26382|0) - ajoute une note en 1 ? pour la drum
00:32:528 (32528|2,32528|3) - je crois que c'est mal snappé XD dat 1/16 wew
00:42:549 (42549|0) - double , pour le snare sound ?
01:24:215 (84215|2) - welcome to tricky land , mais c'est beau ;^)
01:30:799 (90799|1) - si tu follow l'instru principal , remove cette note
[NM]
00:20:715 (20715|1) - move en 3 pour le pitch avec : 00:19:382 (19382|2) -
01:19:549 (79549|2,79882|1) - Ctrl+J , vu que ces deux la sont pas exactement le même son : 01:19:882 (79882|1,79882|0,80215|1,80215|0) - (welp c'est pas obligé genre c'est même pas super grave en fait xD)
[EZ]
00:17:549 (17549|1,18882|2) - Ctrl+H sa a l'air plus fun comme sa que avec une stair simple
01:03:132 (63132|1) - move à : 01:03:382 (63382|1) - le rythme est largement plus simplea capter et vraiment catchy
01:38:215 (98215|2) - a partir d'ici vu que le son change tu peut arréter la LN et laisser un blanc , ou en commencer une nouvelle (again c'est pas obliger)

Voili voilou , Good Luck
sorry pour mon Frenglish xd
merci :D j'ai refais la easy car 'jaimais pas la fin
HXJ_Crafter
207 posts
Joined October 2015
HXJ_Crafter
hi
column | 0 | 1 | 2 | 3 |
screenshot Opinion || Original Draft

11/1:3 Is this a seal?
[EZ]
00:00:265 - Yeah I have a little suggestion You know, the Clap is lower than the Whistle(Drum actually) in pitch. So I suggest to move the first note 00:00:265 (265|3) - to col 0. w. Think about this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6558102

00:21:931 - try this. https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6558132 You can know, similar to 01:20:598

00:28:598 (28598|1) - move to col 0? or someone may tell u, 00:26:598 (26598|1,27264|1,27931|1,28598|1) - lol (uh, isn't that me?) I think it is careless because this part 00:37:931 (37931|1,38598|1,39264|1,39931|1) - don't have this feature. btw, 00:37:931 -

00:43:264 - I know these are right :3

00:48:264 - I am not against small jacks in this part. But, 00:51:598 (51598|2,51931|2,52264|1,52598|2,52598|1,52931|2) - this one is too hard. You may have to re-arranged a little. (jack should be put in regular pattern I think)

00:59:598 (59598|0,59598|1) - The interval of these two notes should be 1 or 2 columns right? that seems better.

01:17:598 - Why not Ctrl+H to 01:26:931 -? First to avoid repetition from 00:24:264 - ; Second to make that pattern in pitch relevancy.

01:39:931 (99931|3,99931|2,100598|3,100598|1,101264|3,101264|0) - This pattern doesn't suit here. The 3 sounds don't seems to tend to increase. Move 01:41:264 (101264|3) -will help.
11/22 where is 33? lol
[NM]
00:04:598 - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6629769 No matter why you catch this 00:04:848 - , it is not stronger than 00:05:014 - .

00:25:598 (25598|0) - This LN ends at here 00:26:598 - please.

00:36:931 (36931|2,37098|2,37264|0,37264|1) - Ctrl+H here because of this 00:31:598 -, And also try to avoid this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6629785 . Besides i suggest move these LNs: 00:37:598 (37598|3,42931|0) - and add a LN here: 00:40:264 -. Three LNs is not so good I think. I prefer Two. :3. Also, 00:42:431 - add a note. And 00:45:598 (45598|3) - this LN end at 00:47:931 - to the same reason as above.

01:19:598 (79598|1) - Idk if here is a sound that could be heard clearly. ;w;

01:24:598 - 01:24:931 - I notice that you add "Clap" for these two, but why one of them is single but the other is double? Sorry because I have no idea about that but I think it needs to be thought about clearly.

01:56:598 (116598|1) - move to col 2?
Last edited by HXJ_Crafter , edited 1 time in total.
Elementaires
658 posts
Joined January 2013
Topic Starter
Elementaires

HXJ_Crafter wrote:

hi column 0 1 2 3
Sorry Because I delay this for too long. ;w;
⚠ WIP ⚠
seal EZ √

11/1:3 Is this a seal?
[EZ]
00:00:265 - Yeah I have a little suggestion You know, the Clap is lower than the Whistle(Drum actually) in pitch. So I suggest to move the first note 00:00:265 (265|3) - to col 0. w. Think about this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6558102

00:21:931 - try this. https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6558132 You can know, similar to 01:20:598

00:28:598 (28598|1) - move to col 0? or someone may tell u, 00:26:598 (26598|1,27264|1,27931|1,28598|1) - lol (uh, isn't that me?) I think it is careless because this part 00:37:931 (37931|1,38598|1,39264|1,39931|1) - don't have this feature. btw, 00:37:931 -

00:43:264 - I know these are right :3

00:48:264 - I am not against small jacks in this part. But, 00:51:598 (51598|2,51931|2,52264|1,52598|2,52598|1,52931|2) - this one is too hard. You may have to re-arranged a little. (jack should be put in regular pattern I think)

00:59:598 (59598|0,59598|1) - The interval of these two notes should be 1 or 2 columns right? that seems better.

01:17:598 - Why not Ctrl+H to 01:26:931 -? First to avoid repetition from 00:24:264 - ; Second to make that pattern in pitch relevancy.

01:39:931 (99931|3,99931|2,100598|3,100598|1,101264|3,101264|0) - This pattern doesn't suit here. The 3 sounds don't seems to tend to increase. Move 01:41:264 (101264|3) -will help.

Thanks! I also changed myself some patterns thanks to you. :)
_underjoy
704 posts
Joined January 2013
_underjoy
EZ
I didn't like this difficulty. It seems pretty random and not really beginner friendly.
It's mostly about patterns not being visual/symmetrical at all (and this is very important for beginner difficulty), and usage of jumps which aren't that easy to read (f.e. [13][24]). Also, pattern with LN holding and pressing notes at the same time is really hard to execute for newbie.
I can't really give a mod for this difficulty because that would require change of mapping style, but please consider making it easier (not only in terms of star rating - I'm speaking mainly about being easy to read and using simple, pleasant patterns and not complicated chords).

NM
00:06:181 (6181|1,7514|3) - I feel this rhythm is quite tricky for a Normal, I'd delete these notes.
00:25:598 (25598|0) - is this LN for stutters? if yes, it should end 00:26:264 - here.
00:45:264 - why a triple? that's possibly the first triple in this diff and it's not even a sound that is important. I'd suggest deleting notes on 23 and adding a note on 1.
In general this diff felt okay in terms of structure, but at the same time boring because of repeated patterns on 1/1... I can't really find a solution for this, maybe change your layering a little? (mainly choruses)

Stein's HD
00:08:264 (8264|2,8264|3,8264|0,8598|1,8598|3,8598|0,8931|2,8931|3,8931|0,9264|1,9264|0,9264|3) - you use triples for snare sound, this is not snare. In addition, there's a 1/2 in background so why not use it to make sort of jumptrill? You can do [12][12][34][34] or similar stuff if you don't want to go with cheap jumptrill pattern.

00:09:681 (9681|1,9764|2,9848|3,9931|2,10014|1,10098|0,10181|1,10264|2,10348|1,10431|0,10514|1) - I don't feel this pattern has the right balance with rhythm, it gives accents in weird places (turning points are the accents).
I'd suggest something like trills, maybe 424231314321[34]? seems more natural and fitting for me.

00:17:431 - 00:17:514 - you should map these two notes because you accented 00:17:764 (17764|2,17848|1) - these two as well, to be consistent with what you map and what not.

00:24:931 (24931|1) - is better in 3 to make the chord switch middle columns. If you don't want this, move 00:24:598 (24598|1,24931|1,25264|1) - to 3 to correspond with 00:24:264 (24264|2) - .

00:26:264 (26264|1) - I feel like this note is not needed, there's no strong sound.

00:29:681 (29681|2,29848|2,30014|2,30181|2) - this is rather hard to execute on a HD difficulty, try this, feels more natural:


00:31:098 (31098|3,31181|2) - 00:31:098 (31098|3,31181|2) - move one column to the left, 00:31:264 (31264|1) - to 4 and 00:31:431 (31431|3) - to 2. It makes a nice flowing pattern.

00:34:264 - add a note.

00:34:931 - I suggest taking the pattern I suggested above, ctrl+H it and paste in this section. Current pattern is.... not very good, 00:36:264 (36264|1,36264|0,36431|3,36514|2,36598|1,36598|0,36681|2,36764|3,36848|2,36931|0,36931|1,37014|2,37098|3) - mainly because of this and seeming randomness of it. (it doesn't follow pitch or really anything)
00:37:264 - there should be a LN like before. It's the same.

00:39:598 - add a note.
00:44:931 - ^

00:45:598 - what happened to this section? it is so random, map it like section before please.

00:50:014 - it flows better if you add a note here.
00:50:264 (50264|1,50598|2) - ctrl+H these to make it play more comfortable.
00:50:848 (50848|0) - this note is not really important here, delete it.
00:52:681 - as above

00:53:098 (53098|3) - the first chord is more important, so I would delete this note to show which one is stronger.

00:53:431 (53431|2,53514|1) - delete these, sounds are very weak here.
00:54:014 - as above

00:54:764 - 1/4 starts here and continues also 00:55:181 - and 00:55:348 -

00:57:098 (57098|3) - like before
00:57:598 (57598|3,57598|1,57848|2,57931|3,57931|0,58098|2,58181|1,58264|0,58264|3) - please map this accordingly to the music, it feels really bad.

01:13:098 (73098|0,73264|0) - this is very weird to play, suggesting to change the pattern.
01:17:598 (77598|3,77681|2,77764|1,77848|0,78098|0,78181|1,78264|2,78348|3,78431|0,78514|1,78598|2,78681|3,78764|2,78848|1) - why did you map different sounds in the same section as before?

01:18:931 (78931|0) - begins 01:18:764 - here

01:20:264 - should be at least a double.

01:26:931 (86931|3) - it's better with a normal note.

01:37:514 (97514|3,97598|2,97598|0,97709|2,97709|0,97820|1,97820|3,97931|1,97931|3,98042|2,98042|0,98153|0,98153|2) - make this pattern 2 [34] [34] [34] [12] [12] [12]

01:38:431 (98431|2) - it starts 01:38:598 - here.

01:53:598 - what happened here? I don't know why it's different than the rest?

MX
00:00:931 (931|2) - delete, should be a double
00:01:764 (1764|2,1848|2,1931|1,2098|1,2431|1,2598|1) - very strange hand balance, fix it.
00:03:598 (3598|2,4264|2) - these should be doubles too.
00:04:098 (4098|1) - oh and delete this too
00:06:264 (6264|2) - why triple?

00:21:598 - this pattern makes no real sense here, you would be better with just mapping the 1/4.
00:24:431 - map these two notes before each chord for nice effect.
00:29:598 (29598|3,29681|2,29848|3,29931|2,30098|3,30181|2) - it would be good if second part of the pattern made move similar to this but on the right hand.

00:35:264 - you didn't map these chords as triples in the segment before, and now you do it?
00:37:264 - these was a jumptrill before and now its single notes?

00:41:598 (41598|2) - if this is pitched, this note should be on 2. and 00:41:848 (41848|1) - should be a LN as well.
00:49:764 (49764|1) - move to 1 to break the anchor.
00:53:931 (53931|3,54098|3,54264|3,54431|3,54598|3,54764|3) - why are there so huge anchors when the music doesn't really encourage them?
overall I feel this pattern section could be made much better.

00:59:598 - while this is a nice breakdown, I think things like that should be left for easier diffs. Here you would want to continue with 1/4.

01:20:264 - same as before, 1/4 are better than these anchors I think
01:22:931 - same suggestion as before

01:24:264 - this is probably the biggest disappointment of the map. You mapped it like a pp mapper would :(
Fix this by doing something interesting, you have plenty of choices.

01:34:098 (94098|2,94264|2,94431|2,94598|2,94764|2,94931|2) - huge anchors again

01:38:931 (98931|1,99014|2) - ctrl+H to make it better

that's it
Bargeld
52 posts
Joined February 2017
Bargeld
pls revive thx
Todestrieb
305 posts
Joined February 2014
Todestrieb
lalalala~

0|1|2|3

MX
00:34:931 (34931|0) - The JS section starting here needs a bit of rework. It has a light left hand bias, but I'm more worried about the 2nd column, It has half of the notes. I would suggest to add more diversity for the jumps, It only consists of [01] and [03] right now (suggest something like that https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8851228).
00:42:181 (42181|1) - Move to 0. See below.
00:42:264 (42264|0) - Move to 1. See below.
00:42:348 (42348|0) - Move to 1. See below.
00:42:431 (42431|1) - Move to 2. Breaks the long index trill, and helps empathize the drums at the end (https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8851551).
00:52:598 (52598|2,52598|3,52598|0) - There is a long anchor in the 2nd column. It's mainly due because there is 2 times the same [023] hand in a row. Consider changing one of them to break the anchor and had some hand balance (Suggest: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8851307).
01:18:598 (78598|2) - Move to 0. See below.
01:18:681 (78681|1) - Move to 3. See below.
01:18:764 (78764|0) - Move to 1. See below.
01:18:764 (78764|3) - Move to 2. See below.
01:18:848 (78848|1) - Move to 0. Breaks the long index trill.
01:19:098 (79098|3) - Move to 1. Breaks the anchor in 3 and the one hand trill.
01:38:764 (98764|0,98820|1,98876|3) - Sounds like the roll is changing into 1/8? Not sure about that tho.
01:51:098 (111098|2) - Move to 3. Breaks the anchor in 2.
01:54:098 (114098|3) - Move to 0. Breaks the one hand trill a bit and improve the transition with the jumptrill.
01:54:264 (114264|0,114264|2,114348|1,114348|3,114431|2,114431|0,114514|1) - This jumptrill can be improved a bit. I would suggest something like this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8851409 or this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8851416.
01:57:098 (117098|1) - Move to 0. Breaks the 2nd column anchors.
01:59:598 (119598|1,119598|2,119764|0,119764|3,119931|2,119931|1,120098|3,120098|0) - This section could be changed into a short JS, there is a lot of 1/4 sounds. Guess It's fine as what It is now tho.
BanchoBot
w00t p00t
34,830 posts
Here since the beginning
BanchoBot
This modding thread has been migrated to the new "modding discussions" system. Please make sure to re-post any existing (and unresolved) efforts to the new system as required.
Please sign in to reply.

New reply

0
1 / 9