Kagamine Rin - Amagasa Tojite · forum

eveless

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eveless 2011-01-02T11:36:02+00:00

This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2011年1月14日 at 20:07:25

Artist: Kagamine Rin
Title: Amagasa Tojite
Source: RamuneP
Tags: vocaloid nuz
BPM: 120
Filesize: 2559kb
Play Time: 01:54
Difficulties Available:

Hard (4.85 stars, 297 notes)
Normal (3.02 stars, 151 notes)

Download: Kagamine Rin - Amagasa Tojite
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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Hitcircles is from s/14224 by Astom
Thanks for Fuuko let me use it o.o
and thanks Astom's pretty hitcircle

Last edited by eveless 2011-01-14T12:10:58+00:00, edited 4 times in total.

Pokie

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Pokie 2011-01-02T11:39:55+00:00

The Birthday Legend of eveless

miku

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miku 2011-01-02T11:48:29+00:00

happy eveless's year!

E姐的图做的越来越好了 www
现在都没吐槽点了 >.<

E姐加油>.<
moemoe eveless

kiririn_

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kiririn_ 2011-01-03T02:53:57+00:00

Birthday Legend

Curisu

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Curisu 2011-01-03T08:25:53+00:00

镜音双子大爱~
先star后mod rofl

Aria

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Aria 2011-01-03T09:31:19+00:00

yo, 饿姐生日快乐.
全是~~没价值的~~建议啊啊啊啊.

OverAll:
什么都没有D:

Hard:
貌似softhitnormal的声音很大@.@ 真的
00:41:745 (1,2,3,4,5) - 什么都挑不到只能nazi这个形状了么QAQ
01:06:995 (1) - 这个点要不要kiai再喷一下(喂
01:37:995 (1,2) - 这两个要不要去掉._. 这样前面那个slider潇洒一点? 不会感觉仓促什么的/.
~~01:51:495 (._.) - 可以加条绿线把这个slidertick加音量两格么....啊哈哈哈哈~~
什么有用的又找不到._.

Normal:
01:02:995 (?) - 有少个节奏么?X_X
01:09:995 (5) - 开头没压在vocal和鼓点呢(会不会有人说?(小声
01:12:995 (2) - ^
01:41:745 (3) - whistle?

神唱功饿姐

Curisu

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Curisu 2011-01-03T10:16:39+00:00

E家双份mod rofl

[NM]
00:09:245 (1) - soft whistle? (嘛只是个人想法罢了)
00:16:745 (5) - clap?
00:18:245 (2) - 如果改了上面..这个也改clap好了..
00:48:745 (1) - remove new combo
00:52:995 (3,4) - (吐槽)这个好像和1 2 转的角度不同...
00:58:995 (3,4) - ^
01:22:495 (1) - Remove finish/降低音量
(NM我神马都mod不出)

[HD]
~~不够遮(喂~~
00:07:995 (3) - 反方向?
00:18:495 (3) - remove finish
00:18:995 (1) - finish 音量+
00:29:745 (7,8,9) - 能nazi一下这形状么stress 排成直线?
00:40:495 (3) - 这个jump不合歌..真的..
00:41:745 (1,2,3,4,5) - 正五边形?

~_~

eveless

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eveless 2011-01-03T11:33:59+00:00

fixed sth

Hushu_old

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Hushu_old 2011-01-03T14:01:54+00:00

I had to put volume up very high, but its a star :]

NanaDesu

NanaDesu 2011-01-04T11:07:00+00:00

餓姐

Weez

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Weez 2011-01-05T02:07:50+00:00

General
- For all the diffs, remove the letterbox during break, they are not being used
- Increase the Audio lead-in to 1 second
- Just 2 diffs seems boring to me :/ but that's just me

Normal
01:03:616 Try this instead:

Hard
Fine here

Nice map and good luck with it

And sorry it took forever >.<

eveless

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eveless 2011-01-05T05:26:37+00:00

Weezy wrote:
General
- For all the diffs, remove the letterbox during break, they are not being usedokay
- Increase the Audio lead-in to 1 secondI think 0 is fine , and there are not apparent different between 1 and 0 in my mapset.
- Just 2 diffs seems boring to me :/ but that's just mebecause of the BPM and this is a slowly song so there are just 2 diffs , if the song which is let people relax that i think 2 diff is the maximum

Normal
01:03:616 Try this instead:
un...just different thoughts but okay

Hard
Fine here

Nice map and good luck with it
And sorry it took forever >.<

thanks

Colin Hou

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Colin Hou 2011-01-05T11:48:17+00:00

wow 阿妈嘎撒脱机特~

[General]:

put 'RamuneP' and 'nuz' to wherever you want
get a approchcircle.png
1/4三连上的normal-hitnormal有点响了 Hard里
敲响我的小军鼓喔咿呀咿呀哟~

[Hard]:

00:32:745 (6,1) - 这两个时间上换一下会很不错... 否则00:32:995 (1)违和感满塞
01:54:995 (1) - newcombo不如扔01:54:245 (5)上 233

[Normal]:

01:09:245 (4,5) - 同Hard里的违和感
01:54:995 (1) - newcombo不如扔01:54:245 (5)上 233 again

不够送分不想star了都

eveless

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eveless 2011-01-05T12:35:11+00:00

Colin Hou wrote:
wow 阿妈嘎撒脱机特~

[General]:
put 'RamuneP' and 'nuz' to wherever you wantRamuneP add in source and nuz in tags but nuz is who?.?
get a approchcircle.pngdone
1/4三连上的normal-hitnormal有点响了 Hard里懒得改了...反正也是4...
敲响我的小军鼓喔咿呀咿呀哟~
[Hard]:
00:32:745 (6,1) - 这两个时间上换一下会很不错... 否则00:32:995 (1)违和感满塞k
01:54:995 (1) - newcombo不如扔01:54:245 (5)上 233嘛最后一个是完结嘛..也没特别好看懒得改了不过normal改了>_>
[Normal]:
01:09:245 (4,5) - 同Hard里的违和感fixed
01:54:995 (1) - newcombo不如扔01:54:245 (5)上 233 againk
不够送分不想star了都不够长没分送:<

Colin Hou

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Colin Hou 2011-01-05T12:45:15+00:00

nuz is another name of 口口口口P

Sandpig

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Sandpig 2011-01-06T09:24:42+00:00

hi

(>'(oo)')> my mod <('(oo)'<)

Hard

00:12:995 (1) - 后移1/2？因为我看你的下的节奏基本都是跳过第一拍的。而且这里有一个长音
00:18:995 (1) - 这个位置用NORMAL有点重了，这首歌的重音是在24拍。后面第一拍上的重音不改也罢了，第一个音下NORMAL感觉很突然
00:29:745 (7,8,9) - 这种在段落中间的三连尝试只在前两个音用normal(最后可以用一个轻一点的finish)
00:37:745 (7) - ^
00:38:995 - 建议去掉这个normal
01:37:995 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - 不建议normal串里面插soft，这个效果等同于muted note

Normal

00:33:245 - 加个音？前边感觉挺连贯的这里突然一拍半的休止
01:10:995 (1,2) - 这里这么多词为什么用两个slider带过？

没了._.

eveless

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eveless 2011-01-06T11:47:07+00:00

Sandpig wrote:
hi

(>'(oo)')> my mod <('(oo)'<)

Hard

00:12:995 (1) - 后移1/2？因为我看你的下的节奏基本都是跳过第一拍的。而且这里有一个长音那样看想凸显出来的东西是什么前面故意跳过第一拍是因为要软后面基本以鼓为主要硬的感觉所以不跳第一拍
00:18:995 (1) - 这个位置用NORMAL有点重了，这首歌的重音是在24拍。后面第一拍上的重音不改也罢了，第一个音下NORMAL感觉很突然这首歌的鼓点在24没错可是你没懂我用normal的意思区别开来clap和normal好吗
00:29:745 (7,8,9) - 这种在段落中间的三连尝试只在前两个音用normal(最后可以用一个轻一点的finish)我觉得没这个必要
00:37:745 (7) - ^^
00:38:995 - 建议去掉这个normal为什么去掉了破坏了整体感了
01:37:995 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - 不建议normal串里面插soft，这个效果等同于muted note且不说这不是mute 就算是mute了又怎么样音效的音量大小用来体现节奏 soft和normal的转换也一样

Normal

00:33:245 - 加个音？前边感觉挺连贯的这里突然一拍半的休止如果全首都这么连贯下去有意义吗歌当然是有连贯有休止的
01:10:995 (1,2) - 这里这么多词为什么用两个slider带过？难道就一定要每个字都下节奏吗？

没了._.

Vayreceane

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Vayreceane 2011-01-06T12:55:53+00:00

Hi~
This song is so relaxing~

SPOILER

Normal
00:42:245 (2) - I don't like where this note placed... Move it to something like this?

00:50:495 (1) - End slider here
01:54:995 (4) - Add finish?

Hard
00:12:995 (1) - Move note to 00:13:245
00:13:745 (x) - Add note here
00:40:425 (2,3) - Why suddenly jump ><
01:00:495 (6) - Avoid stacking with (4)
01:09:995 (2) - Remove this note.
01:50:995 (1) - This stacking looks ugly D: imo (If you want to keep this pattern, space 01:49:995 (2,3,4,5) more... Like this I think:

01:54:245 (5) - Why don't make this new combo like you did in normal?
01:54:995 (1) - Remove new combo and add finish?

Here's a star

Good luck!

eveless

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eveless 2011-01-06T13:03:27+00:00

Vayreceane wrote:
Hi~
This song is so relaxing~
SPOILER
Normal
00:42:245 (2) - I don't like where this note placed... Move it to something like this?

00:50:495 (1) - End slider here
01:54:995 (4) - Add finish?

Hard
00:12:995 (1) - Move note to 00:13:245
00:13:745 (x) - Add note here
00:40:425 (2,3) - Why suddenly jump ><
01:00:495 (6) - Avoid stacking with (4)
01:09:995 (2) - Remove this note.
01:50:995 (1) - This stacking looks ugly D: imo (If you want to keep this pattern, space 01:49:995 (2,3,4,5) more... Like this I think:

01:54:245 (5) - Why don't make this new combo like you did in normal?
01:54:995 (1) - Remove new combo and add finish?
Here's a star Good luck!

Fixed sth

banvi

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banvi 2011-01-06T13:04:19+00:00

NatsumeRin

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NatsumeRin 2011-01-06T13:14:00+00:00

我不mod，只看看

eveless

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eveless 2011-01-07T12:48:18+00:00

NatsumeRin wrote:
我不mod，只看看

...你敢MOD吗

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Orgol 2011-01-08T15:33:01+00:00

Starr

NatsumeRin

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NatsumeRin 2011-01-13T10:56:22+00:00

[Normal]
01:53:245 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - 我实在找不着词了,要不这做个放射状slider?

[Hard]
00:18:245 (3,1) - 大丈夫?
00:39:495 (1) - 为什么这里spacing突然奔放起来了(其他地方并没有)
01:05:870 - +音?
01:13:495 - 这拍还是建议补
01:53:245 (1) - 同,以及为啥颜色变了.

eveless

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eveless 2011-01-13T13:09:35+00:00

NatsumeRin wrote:
[Normal]
01:53:245 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - 我实在找不着词了,要不这做个放射状slider?改了个不知道什么东西以及combo变回去了

[Hard]
00:18:245 (3,1) - 大丈夫?很想说没问题不过还是改了
00:39:495 (1) - 为什么这里spacing突然奔放起来了(其他地方并没有)因为我觉得这句在上升还之前对应的那句却是在下降所以没有变前面的spacing...好吧我稍微改点
01:05:870 - +音?no
01:13:495 - 这拍还是建议补感觉补了不是我要的效果stress
01:53:245 (1) - 同,以及为啥颜色变了所以normal变回去了._..

happy birthday

TTTTTTTTTTTT

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TTTTTTTTTTTT 2011-01-13T14:40:09+00:00

here i am
tags 用小写好些

Normal
01:05:495(2) - add clap at the beginning

Hard
00:35:245(x) - add a circle

suggestions(imo)

00:20:745(7) - use a slider replace this circle （start at 00:20:745,end at 00:21:245）----00:21:245(1)- del
or 00:20:745(7) - use a slider replace this circle （start at 00:20:745,end at 00:20:995)
00:24:745(5) - in the same way as 00:20:745(7)
00:28:745(4) - ^
00:36:745(4) - ^
00:44:995(x) - add a circle

star...
建议都是瞎扯

eveless

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eveless 2011-01-14T05:11:29+00:00

H-boy wrote:
here i am
tags 用小写好些k

Normal
01:05:495(2) - add clap at the beginningk

Hard
00:35:245(x) - add a circle空拍.

suggestions(imo)

00:20:745(7) - use a slider replace this circle （start at 00:20:745,end at 00:21:245）----00:21:245(1)- delk.
or 00:20:745(7) - use a slider replace this circle （start at 00:20:745,end at 00:20:995)
00:24:745(5) - in the same way as 00:20:745(7)
00:28:745(4) - ^
00:36:745(4) - ^k
00:44:995(x) - add a circle

star...
建议都是瞎扯

thanks for your modding

KSHR

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KSHR 2011-01-14T05:30:05+00:00

"Amagasa" is a noun. "Tojite" is a verb.
So, I think this title is Amagasa Tojite.

star

eveless

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eveless 2011-01-14T12:15:51+00:00

KSHR wrote:
"Amagasa" is a noun. "Tojite" is a verb.
So, I think this title is Amagasa Tojite.

star

Thanks o.o

James2250

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James2250 2011-01-15T18:03:10+00:00

Makes more sense to keep kiai the same on both difficulties

Normal:
If this is going to be your easiest difficulty turn down the AR slightly

Hard:
Nice

Good job~~
Have a star

Should be fine for a bubble if any of them ever go down
(Only short mod so you don't have to kudosu)

eveless

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eveless 2011-01-16T01:59:23+00:00

James2250 wrote:
Makes more sense to keep kiai the same on both difficulties k

Normal:
If this is going to be your easiest difficulty turn down the AR slightly AR-1 now

Hard:
Nice

Good job~~
Have a star

Should be fine for a bubble if any of them ever go down
(Only short mod so you don't have to kudosu)(thinks kudosu is for helpful mod whehter it long or short so

thanks for your modding