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Sayuri - Sore wa Chiisana Hikari no Youna (TV Size)

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Snikerdoodles
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ReneePrower
Hiya! :) It's your friend Ren from #modreqs! Let's see what's up. ^^

[Normal]
  1. 00:10:229 (1,2) - Missed blanket opportunity, imo ;w;
  2. 00:59:812 (5,6,7) - Stacks in Normal aren't recommended, especially for such a low bpm.
  3. 01:15:229 (7,9) - Some would recommend nudging one or the other so that they're not flatly placed; hiding beats isn't great for Normal.
  4. 01:17:729 (1,1) - Might want to make a slightly bigger space between the spinner's end and the next hit; for Easy and Normal, at least two white ticks' space is recommended.
[Insane]
  1. The AR seems a bit extreme for the bpm; I recommend somewhere between 8.2-8.5 instead.
  2. The spacing in this diff is very inconsistent; having jumps or increased-spacing sections is understandable, but some parts of this diff are all over the place and it's almost unreadable. A couple of major examples would be...
    - 00:12:104 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7)
    - 00:15:229 (1,2,3,4,5,6)
  3. 00:25:020 (3,4,5) - Even for Insane diffs, having nearly the same physical space between differently timed jumps is not recommended.
  4. 00:42:729 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - I think I see what you're trying to do with this pattern, but it doesn't read as interestingly as you probably hoped. Try fiddling with this to make it look less like a ladder and more like a pattern. (Unless the ladder look was intentional, in which case, it's not straight. :p I also don't recommend ladders, but it's probably okay.)
  5. 00:45:020 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Speaking of patterns, this section needs one. :p Perhaps a seven-pointed star? Really anything; the random directions are just hard to read here and don't flow well.
  6. 00:55:437 (6,3) - Hiding not recommended~
That's all for now! :D I'll be starting on that Hard guest diff soon, likely sometime tonight. :3 Glad I could help! :)
Topic Starter
Snikerdoodles
I'll be re-doing the insane, considering that the jumps did mess up the whole thing. thanks for modding


p.s: i dont think about blanketing that slider, so ye
ReneePrower

Sniker_Dawhoop wrote:

I'll be re-doing the insane, considering that the jumps did mess up the whole thing. thanks for modding


p.s: i dont think about blanketing that slider, so ye
No problem! :) I wouldn't say that the whole Insane diff is messed up. ;p Some of the jumps just don't flow well and some might be a bit extreme. But having some varied jumps in an Insane difficulty is a good thing! You just have to make sure to follow a pattern or a theme. ^_^
Crowley
please kill me irl im already dead on the inside anyways

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Nitrous
I'll be dropping a star! No need to pay back my friend! Its just the anime is damn good!
ReneePrower
We need some mods. ;-; I'm almost tempted to mod the new diffs (excluding my own obv) lol
Shishou
Hi~
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Nitrous
Updated my hitsounding :)
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Nevo
Asgore's Erased

00:05:020 (4) - I feel you should offset this note so it doesn't cover the slider head. (Your call just my preference)
00:15:020 (10) - ^
00:32:104 (5) - ^
00:38:354 (2) - ^
00:40:020 (6) - ^
There's a lot but other then that I love the mapset and song like I said it's your call :D
Maq
from modreqs

SPOILER
Nitrous' Easy
00:04:395 (1) - Make this slider symmetrical
00:25:229 (3,1) - Blanket
00:26:062 (1) - Move this a tick mark later and make it shorter by a tick
00:32:312 (3,4) - Maybe make this like this? http://prntscr.com/b5pxiy
01:16:479 (3) - Line this up correctly with the kickslider

Normal
00:07:729 (5) - NC
00:17:312 (5,6,7,8) - Maybe you meant to do this, but if not straighten out this square
00:17:312 (5) - NC
00:50:229 (5) - NC
01:00:645 (7) - Try centering this in between the 5 and 6, but still underneath them

Ren's Hard
00:18:145 (4,5) - Ctrl+G on the 4, then switch th positions of (4) and (5). I think that's a lot more comfortable to play, plus flows into 00:18:979 (1) -

Asogre's Erased
00:14:187 (6) - NC
01:17:520 (9) - Maybe just me, but move this over a tiny bit to the right so it's not on top of the (7)

Map looks awesome, really nice song :D GL with it!
Nitrous
From #modreqs ~ayy

General
  1. Try using other custom hitsounds!
  2. Tip: Turn off Grid Snap!
  3. Add RenardPower, Asgore- and -Nitrous to Tags
  4. Try using these colors:
    [Colours]
    Combo1 : 220,45,35
    Combo2 : 255,255,128
    Combo3 : 86,140,169
Nitrous' Easy
  1. The map sucks pls remove jk
  2. Also apply my updates
    osu file format v14

    [General]
    AudioFilename: audio.mp3
    AudioLeadIn: 0
    PreviewTime: 42729
    Countdown: 0
    SampleSet: None
    StackLeniency: 0.7
    Mode: 0
    LetterboxInBreaks: 0
    WidescreenStoryboard: 1

    [Editor]
    Bookmarks: 5229
    DistanceSpacing: 1
    BeatDivisor: 2
    GridSize: 4
    TimelineZoom: 1

    [Metadata]
    Title:Sore wa Chiisana Hikari no Youna (TV Size)
    TitleUnicode:それは小さな光のような (TV Size)
    Artist:Sayuri
    ArtistUnicode:さユり
    Creator:Sniker_Dawhoop
    Version:Nitrous' Easy
    Source:僕だけがいない街
    Tags:boku dake ga inai machi erased ending tv size
    BeatmapID:946303
    BeatmapSetID:433539

    [Difficulty]
    HPDrainRate:2
    CircleSize:3
    OverallDifficulty:2
    ApproachRate:2
    SliderMultiplier:0.8
    SliderTickRate:1

    [Events]
    //Background and Video events
    0,0,"bg.png",0,0
    Video,0,"video.avi"
    //Break Periods
    //Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
    //Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
    //Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
    //Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
    //Storyboard Sound Samples

    [TimingPoints]
    229,416.666666666667,3,2,0,30,1,0
    229,-100,3,2,0,30,0,0
    5229,-100,3,2,0,50,0,0
    22729,-100,3,2,0,5,0,0
    24395,-100,3,2,0,60,0,0
    25229,-100,3,3,0,60,0,0
    42729,-100,3,3,0,100,0,1
    42937,-100,3,3,0,90,0,1
    62520,-100,3,3,0,90,0,0
    62729,-100,3,3,0,100,0,1
    62937,-100,3,3,0,90,0,1
    77729,-100,3,3,0,90,0,1
    80229,-100,3,3,0,90,0,1
    82729,-100,3,2,0,70,0,0
    87729,-100,3,2,0,5,0,0


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    Combo1 : 220,45,35
    Combo2 : 255,255,128
    Combo3 : 86,140,169

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Normal
  1. Keep Distance Snap consistent
  2. 00:25:645 (2) - The slider whistle sound here doesn't seem fitting
  3. 00:33:562 (6) - ^
  4. 00:44:395 (4) - ^
  5. 00:58:562 (4) - ^
  6. 01:04:395 (5) - ^
  7. 01:08:562 - Add Circle
  8. 01:17:729 (2) - The slider whistle sound here doesn't seem fitting
  9. 01:22:729 (1) - Remove finish hitsound and move spinner end here 01:27:729 -
Ren's Hard
  1. 01:22:729 (1) - Remove finish hitsound and move spinner end here 01:27:729 -
Saltgore's Insane
  1. 00:10:229 (1,2) - Fix blanket
  2. 00:11:479 (1,2) - Fix blanket
  3. 00:16:479 (5,6) - Fix blanket
  4. 00:17:520 (8,1) - Fix blanket
  5. 00:27:729 (1,2) - Fix blanket
  6. 00:38:979 (4,5) - Fix blanket
  7. 00:42:522 (2) - Unsnapped object
  8. 00:44:395 (6) - The slider whistle sound here doesn't seem fitting
  9. 00:53:145 (2) - ^
  10. Yeah just fix the hitsounds on some sliders. The Whistle on sliders doesn't really fit
  11. 01:22:729 (1) - Remove finish hitsound and move spinner end here 01:27:729 -

Maq wrote:

from modreqs

SPOILER
Nitrous' Easy
00:04:395 (1) - Make this slider symmetrical // Fixed
00:25:229 (3,1) - Blanket // Fixed
00:26:062 (1) - Move this a tick mark later and make it shorter by a tick // I don't see any problem with it
00:32:312 (3,4) - Maybe make this like this? http://prntscr.com/b5pxiy // Fixed
01:16:479 (3) - Line this up correctly with the kickslider // Fixed

Map looks awesome, really nice song :D GL with it!
Thanks for modding!
ekafjr
Hi :3
[General]

  1. Choose Combo Colors
  2. Disable wide screen support

[Asgore's Erased]

  • 00:06:062 (3,4) - weird rhythm,try use slider if you following vocal
    00:07:312 (7,8) - same ^
    00:14:187 (1) - this just my opinion,i think no need circle at here
    01:02:729 (1,2,3) - weird rhythm remove all slider and change to circle to fit a better rhythm

I'm really impressed with how the flows martches with this difficulty at the end. Good job!
Topic Starter
Snikerdoodles

ekafjr wrote:

Hi :3
[General]

  1. Choose Combo Colors
  2. Disable wide screen support

[Asgore's Erased]

  • 00:06:062 (3,4) - weird rhythm,try use slider if you following vocal
    00:07:312 (7,8) - same ^
    00:14:187 (1) - this just my opinion,i think no need circle at here
    01:02:729 (1,2,3) - weird rhythm remove all slider and change to circle to fit a better rhythm

I'm really impressed with how the flows martches with this difficulty at the end. Good job!

I've only removed the one circle that seemed excess to the rhythm. the rest pretty much follow a pattern, and the person who did this difficulty probably didnt intend to map by following vocal lines

thanks for modding
Sakary
ooohhhh
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