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Yukinoshita Yukino (CV.Hayami Saori) & Yuigahama Yui (CV.Tou

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WORSTPOLACKEU
511 posts
Joined May 2013
WORSTPOLACKEU
Insane

00:28:815 (1,2,3,4,1) - I would angle this like by 330 degrees, it gets better flow
00:44:010 (4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,1) - Spacing feels inconsistent
00:49:270 (1) - Big white tick should have a note!
01:09:140 (6,7,1,2,3,4) - This could be executed better!
01:53:556 (2,3,4) - This flow is too linear for me and not consistent in spacing if going linear like this
02:10:309 (1) - Big white tick
02:28:426 (5,6) - space more?
02:36:023 (4,5) - space
02:41:672 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - nice place forf 1/6
03:35:633 - Stream starts here
03:36:899 - note
03:49:367 - note
04:02:614 - note!
Akitoshi
2,684 posts
Joined August 2014
Akitoshi

Hpocks wrote:

00:04:270 (1) - Here you use a angled slider but at 00:05:828 - you used another curved one. Based off of 00:01:153 (1,2,3) - , 00:07:387 (1,2,3,4) - , etc, it seems that you are putting your sliders into aligned pairs. However, at the former 00:04:270 (1,2,3) - , you go for an angled and then curved slider. How come? Shouldnt it be consistant with the pairs? Actully, looking further into the song, you do this quite a bit. Ill assume it is intentional, but in the beginning, I suggest you change it. ok then
00:14:984 - This feels strongly clickable. Obviously the spinner wont allow it, but maybe the spinner isnt right for this? it's fine as is imo, but let me hear other opinions aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa
03:05:049 (1) - Nudge to left for better angular flow fixed I think (I hope it's better now)
Thanks!

aaaaaa hitori naite iteeeeee
osu file format v14

[General]
AudioFilename: audio.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 56477
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 0

[Editor]
Bookmarks: 56477,122711,202971,256737
DistanceSpacing: 1
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 1

[Metadata]
Title:Everyday World
TitleUnicode:エブリデイワールド
Artist:Yukinoshita Yukino (CV.Hayami Saori) & Yuigahama Yui (CV.Touyama Nao)
ArtistUnicode:雪ノ下雪乃（CV.早見沙織）＆由比ヶ浜結衣（CV.東山奈央）
Creator:Pentori
Version:Collab Normal
Source:やはり俺の青春ラブコメはまちがっている。続
Tags:Akitoshi Kibbleru Doormat oregairu zoku ending ed yahari ore no seishun love come wa machigatteiru my teen romantic comedy snafu full
BeatmapID:940177
BeatmapSetID:433114

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:3
CircleSize:3
OverallDifficulty:3
ApproachRate:4
SliderMultiplier:1
SliderTickRate:1

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Pentori
1,157 posts
Joined November 2015
Topic Starter
Pentori

WORSTPOLACKEU wrote:

Insane

02:41:672 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - nice place forf 1/6 used to be 1/6 here but it was difficult to pick up on the change if reading it for the first time
03:35:633 - Stream starts here what i have works too tho
03:36:899 - note this is less of a modding issue more of a personal preference, leaving these
03:49:367 - note
04:02:614 - note!
fixed everything except the ones listed above, thanks for mod! :D
DaxMasterix
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Hi! M4M From my Queue! Make sure to select one of my maps!

GENERAL

  1. I think "(CV:) should be better IMO (Instead of CV.)
Collab Normal:
  1. 00:37:776 (4,1) - I think this should looks better like this
  2. 01:06:607 (1) - Maybe better like this
  3. 01:25:309 (1) - Move this 1 grid to the right
  4. 01:47:711 (2) - Move this to x:12 y:104 to improve the flow
  5. 03:32:127 (5) - This is touching the lifebar, can you change it a little?
  6. 03:40:114 (3,4) - Same with this, like this
  7. 03:43:815 (4) - This Slider so suddenly? I say, the only one on the diff? I recommend you to change it cuz the consistency
  8. 03:50:243 (3) - Maybe better like this
Advanced:
  1. 00:43:620 (6) - Maybe better like this
  2. 01:45:568 (4,5) - I preffer something like this
  3. 03:38:165 (4) - Why not this
Doormat's Hard:
  1. 00:18:685 (3,4,5) - Maybe better like this
  2. 02:21:412 (1) - Maybe better like this
  3. 04:05:828 (1) - Maybe better like this
  4. 04:09:334 (2,3,4) - I don't know if this is ok, Change all the consistecy you maked in your diff, maybe circle triplet would be better
Insane:
  1. 00:05:244 (5) - I think this object should be 2 circles like 00:02:127 (5,6) -
  2. 01:34:659 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1) - Why not make a star or something
  3. 01:42:257 (1) - Would be better if this slider start in a white tick, the next one
  4. 03:20:633 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1) - Same, why no make a good figure with this
  5. 04:09:530 (3,4) - Add the triple pls
Kibbleru's Insane:
  1. 00:47:711 (1,1) - I don't think this fits very good IMO
  2. 03:37:971 (x) - Why the "nothing" here
Okay! That's all! Good luck with your map :D
Doormat
2,049 posts
Joined September 2013
Doormat

DaxMasterix wrote:

Hi! M4M From my Queue! Make sure to select one of my maps!

GENERAL

  1. I think "(CV:) should be better IMO (Instead of CV.)
not my business, but the album cover lists it as (CV.) so it should be fine

Doormat's Hard:
  1. 00:18:685 (3,4,5) - Maybe better like this no, i wanted movement here to be circular like it's spiraling from left to right
  2. 02:21:412 (1) - Maybe better like this nice
  3. 04:05:828 (1) - Maybe better like this i think the current shape is fine; i wanted flow here to curve inwards
  4. 04:09:334 (2,3,4) - I don't know if this is ok, Change all the consistecy you maked in your diff, maybe circle triplet would be better i've used triples at the end of sliders before this point, but it's usually connecting one slider to another, unlike this one. i think it's fine for now, but i'm open to changing this if others feel this should be changed
thanks for mod~ http://puu.sh/oCK2V/543ed8aa15.zip
Pentori
1,157 posts
Joined November 2015
Topic Starter
Pentori

DaxMasterix wrote:

Hi! M4M From my Queue! Make sure to select one of my maps!

GENERAL

  1. I think "(CV:) should be better IMO (Instead of CV.)
^ what doormat said

Collab Normal:
  1. 00:37:776 (4,1) - I think this should looks better like this
  2. 01:06:607 (1) - Maybe better like this nah i don't like the look of that
  3. 01:25:309 (1) - Move this 1 grid to the right fixed
  4. 01:47:711 (2) - Move this to x:12 y:104 to improve the flow fixed
  5. 03:32:127 (5) - This is touching the lifebar, can you change it a little? fixed, theres quite a bit of overlap but hopefully it's ok
  6. 03:40:114 (3,4) - Same with this, like this fixed
  7. 03:43:815 (4) - This Slider so suddenly? I say, the only one on the diff? I recommend you to change it cuz the consistency fixed
  8. 03:50:243 (3) - Maybe better like this fixed
Advanced:
  1. 00:43:620 (6) - Maybe better like this i smoothened out the curve a little, the way i have now is fine
  2. 01:45:568 (4,5) - I preffer something like this okay
  3. 03:38:165 (4) - Why not this because i want to flow upwards, plus its blanketed on the other end
Insane:
  1. 00:05:244 (5) - I think this object should be 2 circles like 00:02:127 (5,6) - its ok as is because theres a lot of jumps after it
  2. 01:34:659 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1) - Why not make a star or something cos you dont really notice it when playing because of the AR, plus it plays nicer to have symmetry
  3. 01:42:257 (1) - Would be better if this slider start in a white tick, the next one it follows vocals
  4. 03:20:633 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1) - Same, why no make a good figure with this like i said with the other one :p
  5. 04:09:530 (3,4) - Add the triple pls oops, good find!

Okay! That's all! Good luck with your map :D
thanks for modding! i'll get to yours now :3
Akitoshi
2,684 posts
Joined August 2014
Akitoshi
No fix on my part since that slider isn't really weird due to putting NC at 00:38:556 (1) -
And Hey my 666th post mMmmmMmmMm
Electoz
1,886 posts
Joined May 2015
Electoz
Tbh I'm starting to see Akitoshi's diff everywhere oh come on

[Collab Normal]

  • [Akitoshi]
  1. 00:13:230 - Missing clap.
  2. 00:09:724 (5,6) - Try this rhythm instead if you're going for that piano sound.
  3. 00:11:088 - This thing stands out cuz it's the only finish that isn't clickable in 00:10:504 (1,2,3,4,5,1) . Just use this rhythm 00:11:672 (3,4) instead of 00:10:504 (1,2) .
  4. 00:35:438 - Finish isn't needed here cuz there's no cymbal sound here in the song.
  5. 00:22:192 (5,6) - The stack here isn't emphasized properly cuz the stronger beat 00:22:192 (5) is on top. My suggestion here is either Ctrl+G the rhythm or just unstack them.
  6. 00:36:997 - It's a downbeat where vocal and a strong piano sound landed here so I prefer sth clickable.
  7. 00:38:556 (1) - Ctrl+G and Ctrl+H on this one to improve symmetry.
  8. 00:43:231 (3) - Try a circle + 1/1 slider instead of this? Because a new stanza starts on 00:43:620 so it's kinda weird to have a new stanza starting in the middle of that slider.
  9. 02:06:997 (3) - Move this to 02:07:191 pls cuz the sound is so damn obvious on that beat while there's nothing landed here.
  10. 02:26:088 (4,5) - Sounds a looottt better when you move these two to 02:25:893 cuz right now it plays weird when you skipped vocal on 02:25:893 .
  11. 02:45:958 (7) - Actually I prefer the rhythm on 01:24:919 (5,1) cuz that way downbeat will be clickable.
  12. 02:42:451 - 02:43:230 - Add finish?
  13. 03:10:504 (4,5) - Prefer a slider instead of these and add a circle on 03:11:088 cuz the rhythm is start building up here so it's a bit off to just using 1/1 rhythm here.
[Pentori]
  1. 01:03:880 - Add clap?
  2. 01:08:555 - Not a good idea to leave some beats empty in kiai, even though it's in between stanzas you should still map this one.
  3. 01:13:620 (2,1) - Would be nice if these can be stacked without making things messy.
  4. 01:22:191 - 01:23:360 - Maybe add finish idk.
  5. 01:42:257 (3) - Not a fan of this one cuz this skipped many beats and vocal didn't last throughout the whole slider, this 01:43:425 should be clickable too since it's an indication for a new stanza, I would just remove the latter half of that repeat slider and map normally.
  6. 01:47:711 (2,3) - aaaa so empty map sth between these pls.
  7. 01:55:698 (5,6) - Actually I prefer the rhythm you did on 00:34:659 (5,6) - cuz that way emphasizes vocal better imo, also it's a bit weird when the vocal lands differently on 01:55:698 (5,6) - 01:58:815 (5,6) but you ended up using the same rhythm on both of these.
  8. 03:28:815 (5) - I don't hear anything landed on 03:29:010 and I think just a circle here gives a better emphasis with 1/1 rhythm.
  9. 03:41:477 - Add a circle here cuz the rhythm intensity is not dropping yet until 03:42:451 . Kinda weird to use 1/1 rhythm here when the intensity is different compared to 03:42:452 (1,2) .
  10. 03:46:932 (3) - You can break this into a 1/1 slider+circle cuz the vocal only last until 03:47:321 .
  11. 04:02:711 - Should be clickable imo
  12. 04:03:491 (4,5,1,2) - This rhythm? Because this way the finish sound on 04:04:269 (1) will be emphasized properly.
  13. 04:07:971 - Imo there should be a slider starting from here.
Idk I think I spent too much energy on Normal so other diffs might be a bit short lel

[Advanced]

  1. Use AR6 pls AR7 is too fast imo considering how your SV isn't that much different from Normal.
  2. 00:29:010 - Shouldn't be left empty cuz you already emphasized that sound all the way with 00:28:231 (3,4) .
  3. 00:33:685 (3,5) - Ew doesn't look good when that sliderhead is overlapped.
  4. 00:52:971 (6,7) - Idk if it's just me but the flow is pretty awkward here.
  5. 01:01:153 (3,4) - Actually you can Ctrl+G rhythm this cuz that clap sound on 01:01:542 will become clickable. Same applies to 02:23:750 (6,7) .
  6. 01:25:308 - 02:46:347 - Should be sth clickable like what you did in Normal.
  7. 01:49:465 (7,8,9) - Ehhh the movement with that stack is kinda awkward tbh I would just use a 1/2 repeat slider instead of these.
  8. 03:08:750 (1) - Better end this on 03:10:503 cuz the rhythm is starting to change from 03:10:698 onward so maybe add a circle there.
[Doormat's Hard]

  1. 00:57:841 (2,3) - 00:59:400 (2,3) - Idk maybe it's just me but the angle of the flow on these places is kinda bugging me.
  2. 01:48:296 (3,1) - Isn't the spacing kinda overdone here?
  3. Well tbh putting streams in Hard is pretty questionable and you know that so whatever.
Good luck~
Pentori
1,157 posts
Joined November 2015
Topic Starter
Pentori

Electoz wrote:

Tbh I'm starting to see Akitoshi's diff everywhere oh come on akitoshi is a gd machine c:

[Collab Normal] thank you so much for dividing it ♥

  • [Pentori]
  1. 01:03:880 - Add clap? fixed
  2. 01:08:555 - Not a good idea to leave some beats empty in kiai, even though it's in between stanzas you should still map this one. fixed
  3. 01:13:620 (2,1) - Would be nice if these can be stacked without making things messy. fixed
  4. 01:22:191 - 01:23:360 - Maybe add finish idk. mm nah i leave them for accented beats/cymbal crashes
  5. 01:42:257 (3) - Not a fan of this one cuz this skipped many beats and vocal didn't last throughout the whole slider, this 01:43:425 should be clickable too since it's an indication for a new stanza, I would just remove the latter half of that repeat slider and map normally. fixed
  6. 01:47:711 (2,3) - aaaa so empty map sth between these pls. fixed
  7. 01:55:698 (5,6) - Actually I prefer the rhythm you did on 00:34:659 (5,6) - cuz that way emphasizes vocal better imo, also it's a bit weird when the vocal lands differently on 01:55:698 (5,6) - 01:58:815 (5,6) but you ended up using the same rhythm on both of these. 00:34:659 (5,6) - was aki's rhythm but yeah i get what you mean. fixed
  8. 03:28:815 (5) - I don't hear anything landed on 03:29:010 and I think just a circle here gives a better emphasis with 1/1 rhythm. 03:27:257 (2) - serves the same function as this, so i would have to change both which makes the gameplay really monotone
  9. 03:41:477 - Add a circle here cuz the rhythm intensity is not dropping yet until 03:42:451 . Kinda weird to use 1/1 rhythm here when the intensity is different compared to 03:42:452 (1,2) . fixed
  10. 03:46:932 (3) - You can break this into a 1/1 slider+circle cuz the vocal only last until 03:47:321 . ya, good point. also did it to 03:43:815 (3) . fixed
  11. 04:02:711 - Should be clickable imo it would be weird if i tried to follow vocals and let this be clickable
  12. 04:03:491 (4,5,1,2) - This rhythm? Because this way the finish sound on 04:04:269 (1) will be emphasized properly. nice. i like this
  13. 04:07:971 - Imo there should be a slider starting from here. the rhythm would be too similar to the parts before it. fine as it is
Idk I think I spent too much energy on Normal so other diffs might be a bit short lel

[Advanced]

  1. Use AR6 pls AR7 is too fast imo considering how your SV isn't that much different from Normal. oke
  2. 00:29:010 - Shouldn't be left empty cuz you already emphasized that sound all the way with 00:28:231 (3,4) . but i like the gap after a clap :c
  3. 00:33:685 (3,5) - Ew doesn't look good when that sliderhead is overlapped. fixed
  4. 00:52:971 (6,7) - Idk if it's just me but the flow is pretty awkward here. fixed
  5. 01:01:153 (3,4) - Actually you can Ctrl+G rhythm this cuz that clap sound on 01:01:542 will become clickable. Same applies to 02:23:750 (6,7) . fixed
  6. 01:25:308 - 02:46:347 - Should be sth clickable like what you did in Normal. fixed
  7. 01:49:465 (7,8,9) - Ehhh the movement with that stack is kinda awkward tbh I would just use a 1/2 repeat slider instead of these. did a 1/2 slider + circle
  8. 03:08:750 (1) - Better end this on 03:10:503 cuz the rhythm is starting to change from 03:10:698 onward so maybe add a circle there. i think the note density would be too high for a slower section of the song
Good luck~
thank you electroz!! ;) awesome mod. love your work
Akitoshi
2,684 posts
Joined August 2014
Akitoshi

Electoz wrote:

Tbh I'm starting to see Akitoshi's diff everywhere oh come on Akitoshit's normal everywhere xd

[Collab Normal]

  • [Akitoshi]
  1. 00:13:230 - Missing clap.
  2. 00:09:724 (5,6) - Try this rhythm instead if you're going for that piano sound.
  3. 00:11:088 - This thing stands out cuz it's the only finish that isn't clickable in 00:10:504 (1,2,3,4,5,1) . Just use this rhythm 00:11:672 (3,4) instead of 00:10:504 (1,2) . I did something else based on your idea xd
  4. 00:35:438 - Finish isn't needed here cuz there's no cymbal sound here in the song.
  5. 00:22:192 (5,6) - The stack here isn't emphasized properly cuz the stronger beat 00:22:192 (5) is on top. My suggestion here is either Ctrl+G the rhythm or just unstack them. this was how I map the Circle > Slider 1/2 on normal diff, daz why I added some edgy sliderpoint on 00:22:387 (6) - for emphasize the vocal instead
  6. 00:36:997 - It's a downbeat where vocal and a strong piano sound landed here so I prefer sth clickable.
  7. 00:38:556 (1) - Ctrl+G and Ctrl+H on this one to improve symmetry. I re-mapped dis part due to the fix on the suggestion above
  8. 00:43:231 (3) - Try a circle + 1/1 slider instead of this? Because a new stanza starts on 00:43:620 so it's kinda weird to have a new stanza starting in the middle of that slider.
  9. 02:06:997 (3) - Move this to 02:07:191 pls cuz the sound is so damn obvious on that beat while there's nothing landed here.
  10. 02:26:088 (4,5) - Sounds a looottt better when you move these two to 02:25:893 cuz right now it plays weird when you skipped vocal on 02:25:893 . I didn't skipped lol, maybe keep this as now since it fits as is.
  11. 02:45:958 (7) - Actually I prefer the rhythm on 01:24:919 (5,1) cuz that way downbeat will be clickable.
  12. 02:42:451 - 02:43:230 - Add finish?
  13. 03:10:504 (4,5) - Prefer a slider instead of these and add a circle on 03:11:088 cuz the rhythm is start building up here so it's a bit off to just using 1/1 rhythm here. 02:58:815 (1,2,1,2,3,1,2,1) - is enough time to notice that pattern imo, and I don't think that slider there isn't fit as well.
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Makeli
932 posts
Joined October 2013
Makeli
hi!!!!!!!

kibbleru
  1. 00:02:906 (1) - kinda ehh imo that you used a smaller spacing on these sounds that are imo more powerful
  2. 00:04:270 (1) - tbh kinda semi-inconsistent to use a slider here since you didn't use one at the start. And since the sounds are the same so aaaaaaaa
  3. 00:07:387 (1) - i'm just gonna assume that you mapped the guitar with this thing. 00:08:360 - here the guitar does stuff so the extended slider is kinda ehh here
  4. 00:29:984 (3) - your wave sliders look ugly
  5. 00:59:984 (7) - tbh imo you should emphasize this with more spacing than 00:59:789 (6) - cause (7) is a snare and it has those powerful vocals and stuff
  6. 01:23:750 (1) - if this was placed at like x:194 y:122 or something along those lines this would feel a lot better to play
  7. 01:54:919 (1) - wouldn't you want to emphasize this with spacing cause of the sound on that downbeat?
  8. 02:02:711 (1) - tbh i have no idea what you're mapping here
  9. 02:24:335 (7,8,1) - why did you give this such small spacing when at 01:50:049 (4,5,1) - you gave this like a fullscreen jump and the kiai is like 666x times stronger than the verse
  10. 02:40:114 (1) - pls give the straight part a curve too looks kinda ehh right now
  11. 03:35:828 (3,4,1) - kinda random to give those kicksliders such high spacing and then the powerful downbeat doesn't even get a flowbreak for emphasis
  12. 03:37:776 (1) - this 1/1 break felt kinda awkward since you didn't have this before at all. There is also a hold sound here so 1/2 slider would've worked fine
  13. 04:13:036 (1) - why would you end this slider on a powerful sound like that?
insane
  1. 00:03:296 (3,5) - i would personally want to avoid overlaps like this. Check for other overlaps or some cramped stuff since just spacing them out and giving each circle and slider some space will make your map look so much better. However 00:04:465 (2,4) - this type of overlaps are cool!
  2. 00:06:413 (5,7) - here you should overlap these more since now it looks kinda lame tbh.
  3. 00:15:081 (1) - silence spinnerend since there is no sound there
  4. 00:19:854 (1) - imo you should emphasize sounds like this with more spacing
  5. 00:21:997 (4,5,6) - this flow felt kinda unnatural to play
  6. 00:33:685 (1) - kinda triggers me that you decided to skip that super powerful downbeat to follow the vocals. You actually do this a lot
  7. 00:45:374 (3) - give this some spacing as the vocals get more powerful here
  8. 01:09:334 (1) - nc'ing here is kinda random since NC's usually indicate that something new is happening be it a new rythm in the song or a new pattern whatever but you just have a normal stream here.
  9. 01:34:659 (1) - tbh mapping these as sliders would've been a better idea imo since as i don't think insane players are really expecting or prepared for some 1/3 stuff to appear suddenly
  10. 01:52:971 (6) - missing clap i think
  11. 02:08:945 (1) - mapping the vocals in this part where the drums are doing some cool stuff is pretty much a turnoff for me
  12. 02:30:374 (1) - remember the stream thing i mentioned earlier? Here the NC is okay because of the way you mapped it (and I think the song even kinda supports this (I still wouldn't map this like you mapped it)). Why not make both of these streams consistent with eachother?
  13. 02:36:023 (4,5) - you don't map a triple where there is actually a triple in the song and then you overmap one at 02:36:802 (6,7,1) - D:
  14. 03:06:607 (1,2) - don't let the hitcircles overlap
  15. 03:20:633 (1) - the thing i mentioned earlier
  16. 03:50:244 (1) - sharper angle would flow better
As you go trough your map try to find similar kind of things and it will make your map a lot cleaner and polished and stuff. Not saying that this is bad, this is definitely good and should be easily rankable with a few more mods.

doormat
  1. 00:14:010 (2) - this whole thing is kinda ehh since linear stuff generally feels kind stupid to play and imo this doesn't really fit the map since you have a lot of sharp angles here wooo
  2. 00:47:906 (1) - emphasis pls. 00:49:465 (1) - too and 02:10:504 (1) -
  3. 01:48:685 (1,2,3) - isn't this spacing kinda umm... too big? Feels kinda like the spacing in insane
  4. 03:01:932 (1) - forgot a whistle?
  5. 04:02:517 (6,1) - why didn't you map this as a triple DDD:
some stuff repeats in the map like a few of those emphasis pls things weeee

sorry but i'm gonna end my mod here since this song kinda burned me out by being boring DDD:
and tbh i'm probably not gonna be much help on those lower difficulties
polunochnik
123 posts
Joined June 2013
polunochnik
collab normal
  1. 1. 00:27:648 (2) - delete this slider
  2. 2. 00:28:036 add slider here
  3. 3.move all stack of sladers to the left.
01:48:685 - same as previous
01:40:893(1) - why this slider suddenly different from the others?

advanced
00:27:646 (1,2) - replace by slider like 00:28:230
01:48:685 - same as previous

Doormat's hard
00:14:948(1) - move this button under button 00:14:010 (2)
01:48:685 - 01:49:854 - better to do it as well as 00:27:646 - 00:28:815

Insane
02:30:203 - this stream would be better be like the others
01:10:503(3) - again, why this slider suddenly different from the others?

Kibbleru's Insane
00:20:246 (2) - make this slider rounded
01:02:906(5) - move this button to the left, on the blue tick
01:02:581(4) - same as previous
01:49:075 - 01:49:854 - this part is better suited for jumps without triple stacks
03:41:477 (4, 1) - 3 buttons here should be better

I hope I could help!
Good luck! :)
Pentori
1,157 posts
Joined November 2015
Topic Starter
Pentori

Maakkeli wrote:

hi!!!!!!! heyaa ;^)

insane
  1. 00:03:296 (3,5) - i would personally want to avoid overlaps like this. Check for other overlaps or some cramped stuff since just spacing them out and giving each circle and slider some space will make your map look so much better. However 00:04:465 (2,4) - this type of overlaps are cool! i guess it comes down to player preference. will change if another modder points it out
  2. 01:34:659 (1) - tbh mapping these as sliders would've been a better idea imo since as i don't think insane players are really expecting or prepared for some 1/3 stuff to appear suddenly for the one during kiai time i used a slider bcos the rhythm is mostly 1/2 but here i reckon the player has enough time to pick up on the 1/3
  3. 02:08:945 (1) - mapping the vocals in this part where the drums are doing some cool stuff is pretty much a turnoff for me i think its fine. the hitsounds still capture the essence of what the drums are doing
As you go trough your map try to find similar kind of things and it will make your map a lot cleaner and polished and stuff. Not saying that this is bad, this is definitely good and should be easily rankable with a few more mods.

fixed everything mentioned other than ones stated above ^ and also went through and corrected a lot of ignored downbeats

sorry but i'm gonna end my mod here since this song kinda burned me out by being boring DDD: i still love you c; c; xd meme kek kms
and tbh i'm probably not gonna be much help on those lower difficulties
arigato anata mod my mapu des


polunochnik wrote:

Insane
02:30:203 - this stream would be better be like the others
no changes except for this one ^ which was mentioned in mkl's mod, thanks for modding!
Battle
2,862 posts
Joined February 2014
Battle
q

[Normal]
00:22:192 (5,6) - So like, this is the only time where you stack it when the 1/2 is consistent so ya. On a side note, I find this kinda awkward due to the fact that you made 6 a 1/1 to go along w/ vocals, and sacrificed the consistent beat you had, ignoring 00:22:581 - whearas in the measure just before it, you didn't make 00:21:218 (3) - a 3/2 slider to go along with vocals so it's like aaaa
00:27:646 (2) - I mean, if you really wanted to make it follow music a bit better, you could add a single tap on 00:27:646 - and move the 1/2 repeat to 00:27:841 - . It's pretty dense if you do this, but it really can't be helped since like the high pitched w/e starts on 00:27:841 - and the downbeat is completely seperated from the other stuff so ya, not like it would raise sr much at all (this is more of a structural thing so ya, this would apply to the tohers like this)
00:28:815 (4,1,2) - Maybe blanket 2 instead of having it symmetrical cuz it's all overlapping and stuff and that's gross (it's more noticeable for people who have snaking sliders or w/e that option is called off)
01:38:556 (2) - Meh, this 1/2 repeat isn't really following anything too remarkable in the bg of the song, so why not just make it a 1/1 to follow vocals better?
04:12:646 (5) - mm don't really get why you chose to use 1/2 repeat here when it could just be a 1/1 to go along with more prominent music but w/eee

[Advanced]
00:20:633 (2,3,4) - Really disagree with what you chose to follow here tbh, I don't really see what you're follow cuz like, the vocal is held, the density of this completely drops from what it was from the start (other things were fine cuz it followed vocals and stuff). I dunno, the pause just feels kinda random since there is still plenty going on in the music, and it just cuts short here
00:33:685 (3,4,5,6) - Pretty ambiguous pattern here, 3's flow looks like it's going to 5 rather than 4, and players might not really know how much delay there is to press 5 due to like, the pattern looking awk. It looks really nice visually, but play-wise, real ambiguous
00:51:607 (2,3) - Any particular reason you chose to stop flow right here?
00:54:919 (3,4) - uh, don't really think you should use 3/4 here, considering the last difficulty was extremely light density wise and introduced a few bits of 1/2, I feel like it should be like, hard's job to itrod
02:00:179 (2,3) - Meh, doesn't really seem like it's a good play to stop flow, considering the music. It makes more sense w/ 02:00:763 (4,5) - cuz the vocals but here it kinda just feels random
02:14:594 (7,8) - Don't really think that this strong vocal should be stacked, but that's like your call lol
03:02:516 - Do you really feel that it's appropriate to jump from .9x SV to .5x SV on an Advanced difficulty?
03:08:750 - ,
So like, why is it that the beginning is basically carrying all the difficulty in this difficulty cuz like, I was expecting for that kind of density to re-appear during the chorus/kiai times but it never really happened in the end. It just feels really awk for all the difficulty to be riding on the start of the song
like y

[Hard]
00:22:971 (1) - Add more emphasis to the vocal?
00:47:711 (5,1) - 00:49:270 (4,1) - Music is starting to ramp up and that's kinda nullified by the fact that these r stacked lo
01:09:237 - I dunno the stream starts at like 01:09:140 - , and this being empty is like zzz
01:40:309 (5) - aaa this slider end has like, a vocal on it yyyyy and it's like the end of the word that was started at 01:40:114 (4) - zzz (at least I assume cuz I don't speak japanese lo)
02:30:276 - z
02:46:348 (1) - I don't really get why is basically all the diffs but the normal this doesn't have any hitsound when a soft finish would go well here but o well, u should poke pentoririr to put a hitsound here lo
03:11:088 (5,1) - Why stack :/\/\/\/
03:12:452 (1) - Would be better if it were singletap then 1/2 slider or sth cuz 03:12:646 - really strong
03:15:568 (3) - CLickskskck 03:15:763 - :(((
03:34:659 (1) - smae tbhhbh ^


my song is only like 9:44 so ima stop lo
Doormat
2,049 posts
Joined September 2013
Doormat
electoz not electroz

Electoz wrote:

[Doormat's Hard]

  1. 00:57:841 (2,3) - 00:59:400 (2,3) - Idk maybe it's just me but the angle of the flow on these places is kinda bugging me. mm i think it's fine but i'll change it if somebody else brings this up
  2. 01:48:296 (3,1) - Isn't the spacing kinda overdone here? yeah, got this quite a bit; changed it back to what it was originally
  3. Well tbh putting streams in Hard is pretty questionable and you know that so whatever. they're not too frequent and they make sense with the music wherever there is one of these. they're also pretty short, being 5 notes, so i think it should be fine for the most part

maakkeli

Maakkeli wrote:

hi!!!!!!!
doormat
  1. 00:14:010 (2) - this whole thing is kinda ehh since linear stuff generally feels kind stupid to play and imo this doesn't really fit the map since you have a lot of sharp angles here wooo i think it's fine; this pattern captures the buildup here nicely imo
  2. 00:47:906 (1) - emphasis pls. 00:49:465 (1) - too and 02:10:504 (1) - actually, these notes are stacked with the previous note to put more emphasis on those spots; i think it's fine
  3. 01:48:685 (1,2,3) - isn't this spacing kinda umm... too big? Feels kinda like the spacing in insane ye fixed already
  4. 03:01:932 (1) - forgot a whistle? i blame hitsound copier
  5. 04:02:517 (6,1) - why didn't you map this as a triple DDD: i wanted to go for a similar feel to 01:23:556 (6,1) - and 02:44:594 (6,1) - so that's why no triple
some stuff repeats in the map like a few of those emphasis pls things weeee

poluno

polunochnik wrote:

Doormat's hard
00:14:948(1) - move this button under button 00:14:010 (2) they're intentionally not stacked; distance between notes in this pentagon is increasing to emphasize the buildup here
01:48:685 - 01:49:854 - better to do it as well as 00:27:646 - 00:28:815 drums are slightly different at 01:48:685 - and at 00:27:646 - which is why these patterns are different.

battle

Battle wrote:

[Hard]
00:22:971 (1) - Add more emphasis to the vocal? it already has a slightly higher DS, but i tried to make this more apparent
00:47:711 (5,1) - 00:49:270 (4,1) - Music is starting to ramp up and that's kinda nullified by the fact that these r stacked lo was intentional; refer to maakkeli's reply
01:09:237 - I dunno the stream starts at like 01:09:140 - , and this being empty is like zzz slider --> stream transition is pretty difficult for this diff, so i wanted to avoid that altogether; i think the current setup is more appropriate for a Hard
01:40:309 (5) - aaa this slider end has like, a vocal on it yyyyy and it's like the end of the word that was started at 01:40:114 (4) - zzz (at least I assume cuz I don't speak japanese lo) combos here switch between vocals --> piano --> vocals --> piano, so i think it's fine. if people think this is a stupid idea i'll change it
02:30:276 - z zzz
02:46:348 (1) - I don't really get why is basically all the diffs but the normal this doesn't have any hitsound when a soft finish would go well here but o well, u should poke pentoririr to put a hitsound here lo yeah i think pentori forgot to put a finish here
03:11:088 (5,1) - Why stack :/\/\/\/ because i'm stupid
03:12:452 (1) - Would be better if it were singletap then 1/2 slider or sth cuz 03:12:646 - really strong i think the repeat sliders here work nicely because each repeat slider is essentially the same three piano notes, but i'm open to changing this if others feel this should be changed.
03:15:568 (3) - CLickskskck 03:15:763 - :((( pianooaioaoi thoughghghuhgu
03:34:659 (1) - smae tbhhbh ^ vocalslslscs thoughghghuhgu

thanks for the mods~
http://puu.sh/oK7ls/3798a01a98.zip
Electoz
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Electoz
Battle I miss your short mods
Pentori
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Pentori

Battle wrote:

q

[Normal]
01:38:556 (2) - Meh, this 1/2 repeat isn't really following anything too remarkable in the bg of the song, so why not just make it a 1/1 to follow vocals better? i mean its not a huge issue. i did it for variance but if others complain about consistency and stuffs i'll change it
04:12:646 (5) - mm don't really get why you chose to use 1/2 repeat here when it could just be a 1/1 to go along with more prominent music but w/eee okeke

[Advanced]
00:20:633 (2,3,4) - Really disagree with what you chose to follow here tbh, I don't really see what you're follow cuz like, the vocal is held, the density of this completely drops from what it was from the start (other things were fine cuz it followed vocals and stuff). I dunno, the pause just feels kinda random since there is still plenty going on in the music, and it just cuts short here f i x e d
00:33:685 (3,4,5,6) - Pretty ambiguous pattern here, 3's flow looks like it's going to 5 rather than 4, and players might not really know how much delay there is to press 5 due to like, the pattern looking awk. It looks really nice visually, but play-wise, real ambiguous fixed
00:51:607 (2,3) - Any particular reason you chose to stop flow right here? fixed
00:54:919 (3,4) - uh, don't really think you should use 3/4 here, considering the last difficulty was extremely light density wise and introduced a few bits of 1/2, I feel like it should be like, hard's job to itrod fixed
02:00:179 (2,3) - Meh, doesn't really seem like it's a good play to stop flow, considering the music. It makes more sense w/ 02:00:763 (4,5) - cuz the vocals but here it kinda just feels random fixed
02:14:594 (7,8) - Don't really think that this strong vocal should be stacked, but that's like your call lol fixed
03:02:516 - Do you really feel that it's appropriate to jump from .9x SV to .5x SV on an Advanced difficulty? gonna remap this section
03:08:750 - ,
So like, why is it that the beginning is basically carrying all the difficulty in this difficulty cuz like, I was expecting for that kind of density to re-appear during the chorus/kiai times but it never really happened in the end. It just feels really awk for all the difficulty to be riding on the start of the song
like y

you bring up a good point here. i'll look for places during kiai to increase note density since it would be difficult to lower note density in the beginning without it feeling severely undermapped (but that being said i compressed some notes into reverse sliders). also what program does that graph o:

[Hard]
02:46:348 (1) - I don't really get why is basically all the diffs but the normal this doesn't have any hitsound when a soft finish would go well here but o well, u should poke pentoririr to put a hitsound here lo bcos im shitsounder. did u mean whistle cos i don't think a finish goes well here. anyways, i'll add whistle to all diffs

my song is only like 9:44 so ima stop lo
Battle
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Program: t/359381&start=0
Pentori
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Pentori

Battle wrote:

Program: t/359381&start=0
tyvm

also, looking better i guess

Akitoshi
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Akitoshi

polunochnik wrote:

collab normal
  1. 1. 00:27:648 (2) - delete this slider
  2. 2. 00:28:036 add slider here

Battle wrote:

[Normal]
00:22:192 (5,6) - So like, this is the only time where you stack it when the 1/2 is consistent so ya. On a side note, I find this kinda awkward due to the fact that you made 6 a 1/1 to go along w/ vocals, and sacrificed the consistent beat you had, ignoring 00:22:581 - whearas in the measure just before it, you didn't make 00:21:218 (3) - a 3/2 slider to go along with vocals so it's like aaaa fixed in a own way idk if it's better but ye
00:27:646 (2) - I mean, if you really wanted to make it follow music a bit better, you could add a single tap on 00:27:646 - and move the 1/2 repeat to 00:27:841 - . It's pretty dense if you do this, but it really can't be helped since like the high pitched w/e starts on 00:27:841 - and the downbeat is completely seperated from the other stuff so ya, not like it would raise sr much at all (this is more of a structural thing so ya, this would apply to the tohers like this)
00:28:815 (4,1,2) - Maybe blanket 2 instead of having it symmetrical cuz it's all overlapping and stuff and that's gross (it's more noticeable for people who have snaking sliders or w/e that option is called off) nerfed by the prev. mod lel
No reply = fixed
Thanks :^)

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Rtyzen
511 posts
Joined March 2013
Rtyzen
sup, m4m xd

[Advanced]
  1. 00:10:503 - Increase volume maybe idk
  2. 00:13:426 (6,1) - Distance
  3. 00:46:347 - I think there should be a note here, or move 00:46:542 (3) - here and reverse twice
  4. 01:54:140 (2) - slider shape looks weird. http://puu.sh/oKtJP/4355d12e5b.jpg
  5. 02:18:880 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - why the sudden stacks, makes readability worse
  6. 03:15:958 - should be a note here imo, the piano mapping on 03:12:452 (3,4,5,6) - changing to vocal here 03:15:568 (3) - may be confusing to play
  7. 03:53:361 (4) - Maybe NC cuz it's hard to tell this is a 3/4 slider when compared to the 1/2 sliders before it
  8. 03:59:594 (4,5,1) - Flow here is kinda bad

[Doormat's Hard]
  1. 00:13:426 (1) - Weird place to NC? Maybe 00:14:010 (2) -
  2. 00:27:646 (1,2,3,4) - Distance is too wide (compared to the rest of the map) with no sound that justifies it (1.7x is fine imo)
  3. 00:54:919 (3,4) - Rhythm is slightly weird imo, if you want the piano sound on 00:55:211 - then just make a 3/4 reverse. The sliderhead on 00:55:308 - makes it sound weird
  4. 01:48:685 (1,2,3,4) - Wide distance
  5. 02:15:958 (3,4) - Same as before
  6. 03:03:101 (1) - imo NC not necessary
  7. 03:09:335 (1) - ^
  8. 03:19:659 (2,3,4,5,6) - This is quite a bit more intense than 03:18:101 (2,3,4,5,6) - . I think reducing the distance a bit would help or the difficulty jump might be a bit high

[Insane]
  1. 00:21:218 (1) - NC should be 00:21:412 - , so either change this slider so tthat you can NC there or if you want to follow vocal make this slider longer into a 1/1
  2. 00:46:348 (1,2) - Not so close please looks and feels weird to play
  3. 01:10:406 - The first half of the chorus had so many triples(that are good and follow the music), but then second half there are no more. Maybe add a note here 01:10:406 - or 01:11:964 - to make another triple so the second half feels less empty
  4. 01:15:179 (5) - I think this should change from http://puu.sh/oKv0y/02bf25cd37.jpg to http://puu.sh/oKv10/6dbe6e940a.jpg cuz theres a few loud drum sounds
  5. 01:20:439 (3,4,5) - 1/3 jumps?
  6. 01:23:361 (7,8) - Stack during a jump breaks momentum. Also imo 01:23:653 - needs a hitcircle, so maybe you can change it to something like http://puu.sh/oKv6I/918da7318f.jpg
  7. 01:29:010 (4) - should be a triplet
  8. 01:45:568 (1,2,3) - random and unnecessary
  9. 01:49:367 - should be a note here
  10. 02:07:387 (1,2,3,4) - just something small, the circles being so close together look weird, try spacing them out a bit
  11. 02:08:555 - Loud ass sound cant ignore
  12. 02:16:348 (1) - No NC
  13. 02:31:445 - Same as before, first half of chorus so many good triples but second half all gone?? Add a note 02:31:445 - or 02:33:003 - or make 02:34:464 (3) - into http://puu.sh/oKviK/73219643e8.jpg or all of the above please xd
  14. 02:36:217 (6) - same as before, loud drum sounds = singletaps
  15. 02:41:672 (1,2,3,4) - Should be 1/3 jumps
  16. 02:44:691 - Note here
  17. 03:02:517 (1,2) - Are these not stacked on purpose
  18. 03:23:361 (2,3,4) - Overmapped
  19. 03:36:899 - Again with the lack of good triples 03:25:990 - 03:36:899 - 03:38:458 -
  20. 03:35:828 (1,2,3,4) - Stream should start here 03:35:633 (5) - (like in the previous choruses)
  21. 03:49:074 (1,1,1) - Probably dont need these NCs
  22. 04:02:614 - Note here
  23. 04:09:919 - Stream from 04:09:919 - to 04:10:503 -

nice song/map, gl with rank xd
Pentori
1,157 posts
Joined November 2015
Topic Starter
Pentori

Rtyzen wrote:

sup, m4m xd

[Advanced]
  1. 00:10:503 - Increase volume maybe idk i think the claps are sufficient
  2. 00:13:426 (6,1) - Distance
  3. 00:46:347 - I think there should be a note here, or move 00:46:542 (3) - here and reverse twice
  4. 01:54:140 (2) - slider shape looks weird. http://puu.sh/oKtJP/4355d12e5b.jpg fk it, made it straight
  5. 02:18:880 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - why the sudden stacks, makes readability worse will change if i get a 2nd opinion
  6. 03:15:958 - should be a note here imo, the piano mapping on 03:12:452 (3,4,5,6) - changing to vocal here 03:15:568 (3) - may be confusing to play
  7. 03:53:361 (4) - Maybe NC cuz it's hard to tell this is a 3/4 slider when compared to the 1/2 sliders before it it doesn't mean the player will let go earlier
  8. 03:59:594 (4,5,1) - Flow here is kinda bad oh wtf is that, must be something i forgot to finish when doing a mod, fixed

[Insane]
  1. 00:21:218 (1) - NC should be 00:21:412 - , so either change this slider so tthat you can NC there or if you want to follow vocal make this slider longer into a 1/1 made it 1/1
  2. 00:46:348 (1,2) - Not so close please looks and feels weird to play
  3. 01:10:406 - The first half of the chorus had so many triples(that are good and follow the music), but then second half there are no more. Maybe add a note here 01:10:406 - or 01:11:964 - to make another triple so the second half feels less empty if u want to play triplet spam play kibb's map xd that being said, i did add some triplets to go with downbeats
  4. 01:15:179 (5) - I think this should change from http://puu.sh/oKv0y/02bf25cd37.jpg to http://puu.sh/oKv10/6dbe6e940a.jpg cuz theres a few loud drum sounds nah its leading into a slower section
  5. 01:20:439 (3,4,5) - 1/3 jumps? would be too unexpected
  6. 01:23:361 (7,8) - Stack during a jump breaks momentum. Also imo 01:23:653 - needs a hitcircle, so maybe you can change it to something like http://puu.sh/oKv6I/918da7318f.jpg not sure of this, need more people to point it
  7. 01:29:010 (4) - should be a triplet nae
  8. 01:45:568 (1,2,3) - random and unnecessary
  9. 01:49:367 - should be a note here i never had this note in other sections doe
  10. 02:07:387 (1,2,3,4) - just something small, the circles being so close together look weird, try spacing them out a bit so cute how you write the small things with smaller font eeeee c: but yeah i spaced them out more
  11. 02:08:555 - Loud ass sound cant ignore im following vocals here but if some1 else mentions this i'll changegege
  12. 02:16:348 (1) - No NC yes nc, i dont want that follow point
  13. 02:31:445 - Same as before, first half of chorus so many good triples but second half all gone?? Add a note 02:31:445 - or 02:33:003 - or make 02:34:464 (3) - into http://puu.sh/oKviK/73219643e8.jpg or all of the above please xd see what i said b4 ^
  14. 02:36:217 (6) - same as before, loud drum sounds = singletaps ^
  15. 02:41:672 (1,2,3,4) - Should be 1/3 jumps ^
  16. 02:44:691 - Note here nah
  17. 03:02:517 (1,2) - Are these not stacked on purpose oops wtf, fixed
  18. 03:23:361 (2,3,4) - Overmapped u wotm8, check what i did for other sections
  19. 03:36:899 - Again with the lack of good triples 03:25:990 - 03:36:899 - 03:38:458 - czech wat i said earlierer
  20. 03:35:828 (1,2,3,4) - Stream should start here 03:35:633 (5) - (like in the previous choruses) but this works too
  21. 03:49:074 (1,1,1) - Probably dont need these NCs good luck reading it with the follow points
  22. 04:02:614 - Note here check earlier ^
  23. 04:09:919 - Stream from 04:09:919 - to 04:10:503 - personal preference really

nice song/map, gl with rank xd
no comment = fixerino'd

thanks for moddd :-]
Natsu
8,074 posts
Joined September 2012
Natsu
Kibbleru's Insane

  1. 00:10:114 (1,2,1) - when testing the first time I got rekt by this, is kinda unexpected at the beginning :l, could you reduce the spacing?
  2. 01:01:932 (1,3,4,6) - Use finish with low volume or some special hitsound to fit this part?
  3. 02:22:971 (1,3,4,6) - 03:28:426 (1,3,4,6) - ^
  4. 01:14:594 (2,3,4) - the linear pattern is a bit uncomfortable to play x:
  5. 01:22:192 (1) - I don't get why the single NC, anyways use a slowdown here? I think will fit nicely
  6. 02:58:036 (1,2) - I'd use a shorter spacing, since this is a calm part in the song man
  7. 03:20:633 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,3) - map was so nice, but really dissapointed that you ignored the piano and mapped a plain 1/2 rhythm :c
Insane

  1. 00:05:244 (5) - you were following the piano really nice, I don't see why you didn't follow it here, 2 circles fit better than the slider, 00:06:997 (8) - same
  2. 00:07:971 (4,5) - this case is different and a slider fit the melody better, hope you can take a look at the intro and rework some rhtyhms
  3. 00:26:088 (1,2,3) - here other similar case, the music provide you something cool and unique, but you didn't represented it well, since you are leaving the main beat in the music without click action 00:26:672 -
  4. 00:27:646 (1,2) - swap NCs? I know you are placing them with the bpm, but I guess a variation here would be really nice, since the piano starting at 00:27:841 (2) - is really cool :o
  5. 00:41:672 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - another rhythm problem, you don't bring click actions to specific instruments, for example 00:41:672 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - if you were following the vocals you will do something like:

    the main song melody:
  6. 01:01:932 (1,2,5,6) - 02:22:971 (1,3,6,7) - 03:28:425 (1,3,6,7) - music have some special sound here, maybe you can add some special hitsounds? or atleast some finish sound with low volume?
  7. 01:37:776 (1) - to 01:49:854 (6) - the music is super calm, so I don't ger why the spacing and the jumps
  8. 02:02:711 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - not fitting the vocals or the piano, but a weird mix of both, which lead you to ignore some sounds, try to be more consistent with the instruments and think to which one you will bring priority over the other ones.

    gonna stop modding this diff here, rhythm is ¨fine¨, but in my opinion it can be alot better, take a look at my mod and apply to other parts if you agree with it
Doormat's Hard

  1. 00:27:646 (1,2) - swap NC to fit the piano better?
  2. 01:48:685 (1,2) - ^
  3. 03:10:698 (4,5) - I dont get this jump? probably a spacing error?, since 5 isn't a strong beat and doesn't have any special sound on it
Normal:

  1. 00:46:348 (2,3,4,5,1) - 01:06:023 (5,1,2,3) - there are some patterns like these that I consider to dense, take in consideration that you don't have an easy diff, and this one should be more new player friendly, most of it looks ok tho!.
GL :D
Pentori
1,157 posts
Joined November 2015
Topic Starter
Pentori

Natsu wrote:

Insane

  1. 00:27:646 (1,2) - swap NCs? I know you are placing them with the bpm, but I guess a variation here would be really nice, since the piano starting at 00:27:841 (2) - is really cool :o hm, yah that makes sense
  2. 01:01:932 (1,2,5,6) - 02:22:971 (1,3,6,7) - 03:28:425 (1,3,6,7) - music have some special sound here, maybe you can add some special hitsounds? or atleast some finish sound with low volume? i think this would be too difficult to represent given that there are already hitsounds on these beats and adjusting volume would also affect these
i feel the urge to remap this diff instead of fixing rhythms that destroy patterns and make it look messy. so i'll take into consideration everything you've mentioned that i didn't make a comment above ^ when remapping

Normal:

  1. 00:46:348 (2,3,4,5,1) - 01:06:023 (5,1,2,3) - there are some patterns like these that I consider to dense, take in consideration that you don't have an easy diff, and this one should be more new player friendly, most of it looks ok tho!. mm given that these high density patterns don't run on for multiple bars, it probably won't cause the player to fail since difficulty settings are quite low so i think this is fine
GL :D
tyvm [: but you skipped a diff :'c
Kibbleru
osu! Alumni
5,844 posts
Joined August 2013
Kibbleru
@undeadcapulet

there's a reason why i dont plan on ranking that map rofl.

anyway, i guess. but it fits so good :(

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Pentori
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Topic Starter
Pentori
done remapping, mods pls
emilia
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emilia
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2016-05-17 14:27 estellia-: `okok
2016-05-17 14:27 estellia-: you ready for your mod?
2016-05-17 14:27 estellia-: only nazi and rhythm mod right?
2016-05-17 14:27 Pentori: i mean if other stuff are super obvious you can point them out too
2016-05-17 14:28 Pentori: but yah im ready ^^
2016-05-17 14:28 estellia-: oh alright
2016-05-17 14:28 estellia-: normal firsst
2016-05-17 14:28 Pentori: this is a collab diff
2016-05-17 14:28 Pentori: so just do my sections
2016-05-17 14:28 Pentori: its the 2nd and 4th segment
2016-05-17 14:28 Pentori: where the bookmarks are
2016-05-17 14:29 estellia-: uh
2016-05-17 14:29 estellia-: i can mod all sections
2016-05-17 14:29 estellia-: just that when i post they'll have to reply and change accordingly
2016-05-17 14:29 estellia-: but to make sure you dont mess up your diff
2016-05-17 14:29 Pentori: oke then
2016-05-17 14:29 estellia-: just edit it then upload it first
2016-05-17 14:29 estellia-: then get the other person to edit
2016-05-17 14:29 Pentori: yah
2016-05-17 14:29 Pentori: ik
2016-05-17 14:30 estellia-: 00:46:348 (2,3,4,5,1) - this density a little too high imo
2016-05-17 14:34 estellia-: ok uh thats really it
2016-05-17 14:34 Pentori: mk
2016-05-17 14:34 estellia-: one general comment though: often the map skips drums for the sake of vocal, which could be a little bit of a problem imo
2016-05-17 14:35 estellia-: stuff like 01:39:334 - 01:51:802 - , which are rather obvious to me
2016-05-17 14:35 Pentori: yah i realise that, but since i have a very limited amount of beats to use since its supposed to be low density, i went with vocals
2016-05-17 14:35 estellia-: hmm its not hard to balance low density and mapping drums tbh, but its also a personal opinion i guess
2016-05-17 14:36 estellia-: its just what  i think as a modder ;o honestly as  a mapper i'd think it'd be too much of a trouble to remap even some parts xd
2016-05-17 14:36 estellia-: ok moving on
2016-05-17 14:36 Pentori: no1's really pointed that out b4, so i'll keep that in mind if another modder points it out c:
2016-05-17 14:36 Pentori: okok
2016-05-17 14:36 estellia-: alright!
2016-05-17 14:37 estellia-: on advance diff
2016-05-17 14:37 estellia-: 00:24:530 (4) - ugly slider shape imo
2016-05-17 14:37 estellia-: the little jerk in the beginning can use some smoothing :v
2016-05-17 14:38 Pentori: o true
2016-05-17 14:38 Pentori: lemme fix that, just made it curve
2016-05-17 14:38 estellia-: sure
2016-05-17 14:38 estellia-: oh i notice that some parts are also missing the mapped drums: 00:58:815 - 
2016-05-17 14:39 estellia-: this is still kinda subjective, but if there isn't anything at all on that beat i suggest you can map it instead of just skipping it completely
2016-05-17 14:39 Pentori: yeah
2016-05-17 14:39 Pentori: i'll do that
2016-05-17 14:39 estellia-: ok!
2016-05-17 14:39 estellia-: 01:00:373 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - this part seems a bit overdone
2016-05-17 14:39 estellia-: in a sense where you're mapping beats that arent really present
2016-05-17 14:40 estellia-: like 01:01:932 (5,6) - doesn't actually have 01:02:127 - or 01:02:516 - , so i might suggest a 1/1 from 01:01:932 - to 01:02:321 - instead, or something like that
2016-05-17 14:40 Pentori: dont you think 01:01:932 (5,6,7) - is ok
2016-05-17 14:40 Pentori: vocals?
2016-05-17 14:40 estellia-: its ok i guess, but its kinda complicated for an advance
2016-05-17 14:41 Pentori: i'll look over re-doing 01:00:373 (1,2,3,4) -
2016-05-17 14:41 estellia-: the vocals dont really end on red tick per se tbh, they kinda drag on to blue if anything
2016-05-17 14:41 estellia-: oh uh
2016-05-17 14:41 estellia-: just do what you think is nice c:
2016-05-17 14:41 Pentori: yah oke
2016-05-17 14:42 estellia-: 01:18:296 (5) - reverse slider that takes into account red tick too instead?
2016-05-17 14:53 estellia-: woop sorry shitty wifi ;-;
2016-05-17 14:53 estellia-: did you see my previous message?
2016-05-17 14:53 Pentori: lmao
2016-05-17 14:53 Pentori: um
2016-05-17 14:53 Pentori: "just do what you think is nice"
2016-05-17 14:53 Pentori: was ur last msg
2016-05-17 14:54 estellia-: LOL lemme resend
2016-05-17 14:54 estellia-: 01:18:296 (5) - reverse slider that takes into account red tick too instead?
2016-05-17 14:54 Pentori: nice
2016-05-17 14:54 Pentori: i'll do that
2016-05-17 14:56 estellia-: nothing else tbh
2016-05-17 14:56 Pentori: kk
2016-05-17 14:57 estellia-: similar comments as mentioned before: some parts have weird rhythm sacrificing drum for vocal
2016-05-17 14:57 estellia-: but i personally think thats rather bearable in advanced diff so thats ok
2016-05-17 14:57 estellia-: so i didnt really point out those anymore
2016-05-17 14:57 estellia-: moving on!
2016-05-17 14:57 Pentori: coolcool
2016-05-17 14:59 estellia-: something to point out in hard: 01:01:932 (1,2,3,4,5,1) - this rhythm here is simpler than that in Advanced
2016-05-17 14:59 estellia-: so that was what i meant, in a sense where your rhythm is slightly overmapped
2016-05-17 15:00 Pentori: yeah i actually took a look at doormats diff to see what he did
2016-05-17 15:00 Pentori: so yeah, understandable
2016-05-17 15:00 estellia-: its good you get it c:
2016-05-17 15:00 estellia-: its only something to point out though, still nothing major
2016-05-17 15:00 Pentori: i'll change that around
2016-05-17 15:00 Pentori: mhm
2016-05-17 15:01 estellia-: rip
2016-05-17 15:02 estellia-: theres absolutely nothing wrong with hard
2016-05-17 15:02 estellia-: all the NC, flow, patterns perfect :v
2016-05-17 15:02 estellia-: even most of the blankets are fine to the untrained eye
2016-05-17 15:02 Pentori: doormat is a beast
2016-05-17 15:02 estellia-: i could give blanket mod, but thats seriously very very pointless and i doubt doormat would want to fix it LOL
2016-05-17 15:02 estellia-: yea doormat IS a beast
2016-05-17 15:02 Pentori: xd
2016-05-17 15:02 Pentori: hope senpai reads this1!11!!!!!11!
2016-05-17 15:03 estellia-: LOL
2016-05-17 15:03 estellia-: ok insane
2016-05-17 15:03 estellia-: 00:17:516 (3) - ctrlg on here would look nice, but fix the stuff after
2016-05-17 15:04 Pentori: oh yeah, cos circular flow
2016-05-17 15:04 Pentori: good point i'll change that
2016-05-17 15:04 estellia-: YE
2016-05-17 15:05 estellia-: 00:24:529 (1,3) - minor blanket fix
2016-05-17 15:05 Pentori: done
2016-05-17 15:05 estellia-: 00:29:789 (2,3) - tbh you should make this more obvious that its not meant to be a blanket so you dont get future mods about this xd
2016-05-17 15:06 Pentori: eh, just made it a blanket
2016-05-17 15:06 estellia-: oh LOL that works too xd
2016-05-17 15:06 estellia-: 00:30:763 - missing drum?
2016-05-17 15:06 estellia-: here 2 00:34:659 - 
2016-05-17 15:07 Pentori: you mean you want that beat to be clickable?
2016-05-17 15:07 estellia-: yea
2016-05-17 15:07 estellia-: at least mapped :o
2016-05-17 15:07 estellia-: drum clickables would be best ofc
2016-05-17 15:09 Pentori: most of the drums are used
2016-05-17 15:09 Pentori: this is an exception where i guess i wanted the vocal to fit in
2016-05-17 15:09 estellia-: ohh
2016-05-17 15:09 estellia-: i guess so
2016-05-17 15:09 Pentori: if its really a big problem i can change it
2016-05-17 15:09 Pentori: but i'll need more opinions
2016-05-17 15:09 estellia-: nah its not a big problem
2016-05-17 15:09 Pentori: kk
2016-05-17 15:10 estellia-: 00:36:997 (1,2,3,4) - this pattern looks a little bad to play
2016-05-17 15:10 Pentori: does it? it what way
2016-05-17 15:10 Pentori: too cramped?
2016-05-17 15:11 Pentori: the sliders are symmetric and the overlap is fine, i don't see the problem tbh
2016-05-17 15:12 estellia-: uh
2016-05-17 15:12 estellia-: i'll try and illustrate it
2016-05-17 15:13 estellia-: http://puu.sh/oUUcN/304d6e456f.jpg
2016-05-17 15:14 Pentori: lol nice
2016-05-17 15:14 estellia-: yea its like
2016-05-17 15:14 Pentori: um so the red is bad?
2016-05-17 15:15 estellia-: within 123 is kinda jagged
2016-05-17 15:15 estellia-: esp when there are sliders you want movement to be fluid
2016-05-17 15:16 Pentori: so if 2 was moved to flow better and make flow less sharp it'd be ok?
2016-05-17 15:16 estellia-: uh i guess so
2016-05-17 15:16 estellia-: perhaps something like http://puu.sh/oUUjO/b6895f2c15.jpg would feel better to me
2016-05-17 15:18 Pentori: that would work if i had that much room :c
2016-05-17 15:18 estellia-: thats tru :c
2016-05-17 15:18 Pentori: i went with
2016-05-17 15:18 estellia-: well take your time, rn it just kinda looks off to play
2016-05-17 15:18 Pentori: http://puu.sh/oUUnp/86ea46be7d.jpg
2016-05-17 15:18 Pentori: idk
2016-05-17 15:18 Pentori: ok
2016-05-17 15:18 Pentori: i'll look at it again
2016-05-17 15:18 estellia-: reverse flow a little unoptimised but its better i guess
2016-05-17 15:18 estellia-: yeaa sure c:
2016-05-17 15:19 estellia-: 00:52:971 (2,3,4) - whats with the sudedn 3/4?
2016-05-17 15:19 Pentori: idk i was bored
2016-05-17 15:20 estellia-: LOL
2016-05-17 15:20 Pentori: ill change it
2016-05-17 15:20 Pentori: lmao
2016-05-17 15:20 estellia-: ok c:
2016-05-17 15:21 estellia-: 00:55:698 (1,2) - afraid this might be unreadable
2016-05-17 15:21 estellia-: where players assume its a jump like the rest of the notes before
2016-05-17 15:22 Pentori: ok i'll change the pattern so this can go left-right
2016-05-17 15:22 Pentori: and make the ds much bigger in comparison
2016-05-17 15:22 Pentori: that'll probably do it
2016-05-17 15:22 estellia-: yea thats ok
2016-05-17 15:22 estellia-: i was thinking more of a stack but that works too xd
2016-05-17 15:24 estellia-: i hear a lot of potential triplets like 01:55:503 (2,3) - 01:57:062 (2,3) - 
2016-05-17 15:25 estellia-: do you not intend on mapping em?
2016-05-17 15:25 estellia-: cuz im sure hard covered all the triplets, or at least mostly
2016-05-17 15:25 Pentori: i kinda held back on triplets and left them for the big downbeats for star rating reasons
2016-05-17 15:25 Pentori: oh
2016-05-17 15:25 Pentori: rip
2016-05-17 15:25 estellia-: yea ;-;
2016-05-17 15:25 estellia-: well
2016-05-17 15:25 estellia-: its not a big issue either
2016-05-17 15:25 estellia-: hopefully most people will overlook it xd
2016-05-17 15:25 Pentori: lol
2016-05-17 15:25 estellia-: just pay attention to it more i guess, cuz triplets on insane is honestly more normal, and it won't bump up the SR by too much imo
2016-05-17 15:26 Pentori: ye will do
2016-05-17 15:26 estellia-: 02:30:763 (1,2,3) - mentioned before, choppy flow
2016-05-17 15:27 Pentori: mhm
2016-05-17 15:28 estellia-: 03:47:127 (1,2) - feels like its a pity missing out on mapping piano sounds ;w;
2016-05-17 15:29 Pentori: i mean i did try this with a reverse slider to represent piano
2016-05-17 15:29 Pentori: but it felt kinda off
2016-05-17 15:29 estellia-: did it?
2016-05-17 15:29 Pentori: since ure playing mostly 1/2 rhythm
2016-05-17 15:30 Pentori: here i did it
2016-05-17 15:30 Pentori: 03:53:360 (1) -
2016-05-17 15:30 estellia-: hmm it feels nice to me
2016-05-17 15:30 Pentori: because it was way more obvious
2016-05-17 15:30 estellia-: i guess so, thats why i didnt think that wass weird
2016-05-17 15:30 estellia-: tbh mapping it with a reverse sounds very nice :D
2016-05-17 15:30 estellia-: at least thats what i think after i just mapped that myself
2016-05-17 15:30 estellia-: just to keep your options open, its not too big a deal either
2016-05-17 15:31 Pentori: mhm
2016-05-17 15:31 estellia-: 03:54:919 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - wow very afraid that this would be unreadable
2016-05-17 15:31 Pentori: um yeah
2016-05-17 15:31 Pentori: i kinda copied this of HB
2016-05-17 15:32 Pentori: where he had the same spacing
2016-05-17 15:32 Pentori: yet different rhythms
2016-05-17 15:32 Pentori: and it introduced a new level of difficulty
2016-05-17 15:32 Pentori: have u tried playing this section?
2016-05-17 15:32 estellia-: that would make more sense if it was an intuitive shape
2016-05-17 15:32 estellia-: ill try
2016-05-17 15:33 estellia-: LOL CANT READ EVEN THO I SAW IT IN EDITOR
2016-05-17 15:33 estellia-: its too hard for me ;w;
2016-05-17 15:33 Pentori: wtf
2016-05-17 15:33 Pentori: hello
2016-05-17 15:33 Pentori: #1 singapore???
2016-05-17 15:33 estellia-: ;_;
2016-05-17 15:33 Pentori: lmao
2016-05-17 15:33 estellia-: im sorry im honestly not very good at the game ;____;
2016-05-17 15:34 Pentori: tsk tsk
2016-05-17 15:34 Pentori: which parts
2016-05-17 15:34 Pentori: 03:54:919 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - has spacing
2016-05-17 15:34 estellia-: well i got it after 2 tries so
2016-05-17 15:35 estellia-: ok uh
2016-05-17 15:35 estellia-: what i think is basically people will play this 03:55:503 (2) - like its on 03:55:308 - because of the vocal
2016-05-17 15:35 estellia-: esp when your distance is kinda big, people will assume its a 1/1
2016-05-17 15:35 estellia-: and the piano isnt very obvious
2016-05-17 15:35 estellia-: as you've pointed out when i said "y nt 3/4 reverse" just now
2016-05-17 15:36 Pentori: o
2016-05-17 15:36 Pentori: cant you tell by the ar tho
2016-05-17 15:36 Pentori: approach circle*
2016-05-17 15:36 estellia-: uh
2016-05-17 15:36 estellia-: im a more music oriented player
2016-05-17 15:37 estellia-: so i hit if i hear something i think is worth being emphasised by the mapper
2016-05-17 15:37 estellia-: esp when its a hitcircle the hitwindow is v small
2016-05-17 15:37 estellia-: for that piano slider it was more acceptable to me as it was more interesting at least
2016-05-17 15:37 Pentori: have u played this map?
2016-05-17 15:37 Pentori: ACTION is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/899103 fhana - Kimi to Iu Tokuiten [singular you] [HB's Insane]]
2016-05-17 15:38 estellia-: which part were u refering to?
2016-05-17 15:38 Pentori: 00:33:610 (3,4) -
2016-05-17 15:39 Pentori: you could just as well be playing this beat 00:33:781
2016-05-17 15:39 Pentori: idk, i think
2016-05-17 15:39 Pentori: i'll get people to playtest
2016-05-17 15:39 Pentori: and change if the majority can't read it
2016-05-17 15:40 Pentori: so lets move on [:
2016-05-17 15:40 estellia-: uh i guess so then
2016-05-17 15:40 estellia-: 04:04:269 (1) - this slider is bent too much
2016-05-17 15:40 estellia-: else there really isnt anything to point out
2016-05-17 15:41 Pentori: ok fixed
2016-05-17 15:41 estellia-: ye
2016-05-17 15:41 estellia-: similar issues with before like the vocal drum thing
2016-05-17 15:42 estellia-: and the unmapped triplets this time around
2016-05-17 15:42 estellia-: else its honestly not much to complain about
2016-05-17 15:43 estellia-: btw i have a suggestion for the jumps: http://puu.sh/oUVjK/0f75c60d82.jpg
2016-05-17 15:43 estellia-: try mapping it like this in the exact same rhythm you had
2016-05-17 15:43 estellia-: its kinda gimmicky, might be fun if you tried something similar ;o
2016-05-17 15:44 Pentori: oo
2016-05-17 15:44 estellia-: yea <:
2016-05-17 15:44 estellia-: aight last diff!
2016-05-17 15:47 estellia-: yea i notice similar things
2016-05-17 15:47 estellia-: the jarring unmapped drums
2016-05-17 15:49 estellia-: 00:55:698 (1,2) - afraid players will read this wrong, because of this scary distance before: 00:14:789 (2,1) - players might expect a jump, suggest stack or increase AR
2016-05-17 15:51 estellia-: 02:30:374 (3,4,1) - flow here is a little jarring
2016-05-17 15:53 estellia-: illustration: [url]http://puu.sh/oUVFB/913f44f8b7.jpg[/url]
2016-05-17 15:54 Pentori: i can't speak for kib, but isn't that alright
2016-05-17 15:54 Pentori: its  kinda back and forth
2016-05-17 15:55 estellia-: uh back and forth would make sense for jumps
2016-05-17 15:55 estellia-: the fact that the 3rd thing is a complete reversal of flow and the massive decrease in movement is kinda odd to play
2016-05-17 15:55 estellia-: i was just about to say "if the explanation isnt clear enough hmu" but i guess i could clear it now xd
2016-05-17 15:55 Pentori: ok
2016-05-17 15:55 estellia-: thats how i kinda see it at least
2016-05-17 15:55 estellia-: just fix as per how you think ;o
2016-05-17 15:56 estellia-: in comparison for example: 03:35:828 (3,4,1) - this works much better
2016-05-17 15:56 estellia-: 04:13:036 (1) - scary SV change holy, suggest reducing pls ;w;
2016-05-17 15:57 Pentori: i think thats a meme
2016-05-17 15:57 Pentori: to make people slider break
2016-05-17 15:57 estellia-: WELL FUK DAT
2016-05-17 15:57 Pentori: and not get an fc
2016-05-17 15:57 Pentori: lel
2016-05-17 15:57 estellia-: for consistency's sake, why isnt 02:47:773 - a break too like the other diffs
2016-05-17 15:57 Pentori: L O L
2016-05-17 15:58 Pentori: idk, he already mapped it tho so theres no harm of keeping it
2016-05-17 15:58 estellia-: tru
2016-05-17 15:59 estellia-: its kinda odd to me when there are inconsistencies but i guess that ok 2
2016-05-17 15:59 estellia-: welp thatss it for my mod! are you happy w it? c:
2016-05-17 15:59 Pentori: yess <3
2016-05-17 15:59 Pentori: tyvm
2016-05-17 15:59 Pentori: did you lose the first half of the chat log btw?
2016-05-17 15:59 Pentori: cos of dc
2016-05-17 15:59 estellia-: nope ;o
2016-05-17 15:59 Pentori: oke

normal
2016-05-17 14:30 estellia-: 00:46:348 (2,3,4,5,1) - this density a little too high imo
2016-05-17 14:34 estellia-: ok uh thats really it

kibble
2016-05-17 15:44 estellia-: aight last diff!
2016-05-17 15:47 estellia-: yea i notice similar things
2016-05-17 15:47 estellia-: the jarring unmapped drums
2016-05-17 15:49 estellia-: 00:55:698 (1,2) - afraid players will read this wrong, because of this scary distance before: 00:14:789 (2,1) - players might expect a jump, suggest stack or increase AR
2016-05-17 15:51 estellia-: 02:30:374 (3,4,1) - flow here is a little jarring
2016-05-17 15:53 estellia-: illustration: [url]http://puu.sh/oUVFB/913f44f8b7.jpg[/url]
2016-05-17 15:54 Pentori: i can't speak for kib, but isn't that alright
2016-05-17 15:54 Pentori: its  kinda back and forth
2016-05-17 15:55 estellia-: uh back and forth would make sense for jumps
2016-05-17 15:55 estellia-: the fact that the 3rd thing is a complete reversal of flow and the massive decrease in movement is kinda odd to play
2016-05-17 15:55 estellia-: i was just about to say "if the explanation isnt clear enough hmu" but i guess i could clear it now xd
2016-05-17 15:55 Pentori: ok
2016-05-17 15:55 estellia-: thats how i kinda see it at least
2016-05-17 15:55 estellia-: just fix as per how you think ;o
2016-05-17 15:56 estellia-: in comparison for example: 03:35:828 (3,4,1) - this works much better
2016-05-17 15:56 estellia-: 04:13:036 (1) - scary SV change holy, suggest reducing pls ;w;
2016-05-17 15:57 Pentori: i think thats a meme
2016-05-17 15:57 Pentori: to make people slider break
2016-05-17 15:57 estellia-: WELL FUK DAT
2016-05-17 15:57 Pentori: and not get an fc
2016-05-17 15:57 Pentori: lel
2016-05-17 15:57 estellia-: for consistency's sake, why isnt 02:47:773 - a break too like the other diffs
2016-05-17 15:57 Pentori: L O L
2016-05-17 15:58 Pentori: idk, he already mapped it tho so theres no harm of keeping it
2016-05-17 15:58 estellia-: tru
2016-05-17 15:59 estellia-: its kinda odd to me when there are inconsistencies but i guess that ok 2
Izzywing
osu! Alumni
2,248 posts
Joined March 2016
Izzywing
Modded with a friend and neither of us could find anything worth mentioning...this mapset is really good.

Gave a +1SP that you would have gotten if I could actually find stuff. Good luck. when the KDS rains in i'll probably give more since I'm super late :(

EDIT - +2
Pentori
1,157 posts
Joined November 2015
Topic Starter
Pentori

Hobbes2 wrote:

Modded with a friend and neither of us could find anything worth mentioning...this mapset is really good.

Gave a +1SP that you would have gotten if I could actually find stuff. Good luck. when the KDS rains in i'll probably give more since I'm super late :(

EDIT - +2
thank you!
Doormat
2,049 posts
Joined September 2013
Doormat
sorry, my email notification didn't pop up so i didn't know i got a mod for this /w\

will apply mods later today!

Rtyzen wrote:

[Doormat's Hard]
  1. 00:13:426 (1) - Weird place to NC? Maybe 00:14:010 (2) - nc here is fine; it's the start of a new phrase. the piano here has an accent on it that differentiates it from the previous piano notes
  2. 00:27:646 (1,2,3,4) - Distance is too wide (compared to the rest of the map) with no sound that justifies it (1.7x is fine imo) i think the jump here emphasizes the piano nicely. it also acts as a nice transition between verse lines imo since the second verse line is more intense than the first
  3. 00:54:919 (3,4) - Rhythm is slightly weird imo, if you want the piano sound on 00:55:211 - then just make a 3/4 reverse. The sliderhead on 00:55:308 - makes it sound weird changed rhythm here
  4. 01:48:685 (1,2,3,4) - Wide distance same as before
  5. 02:15:958 (3,4) - Same as before also changed rhythm here
  6. 03:03:101 (1) - imo NC not necessary there's an accent on this piano note that gives it an emphasis, which is why i put nc here
  7. 03:09:335 (1) - ^ same
  8. 03:19:659 (2,3,4,5,6) - This is quite a bit more intense than 03:18:101 (2,3,4,5,6) - . I think reducing the distance a bit would help or the difficulty jump might be a bit high this was intentional; the drums are more intense during the purple combo in comparison to the green combo. spacing is increasing between notes by 1.05x or something like that in order to help emphasize the buildup.

Natsu wrote:

Doormat's Hard

  1. 00:27:646 (1,2) - swap NC to fit the piano better? k
  2. 01:48:685 (1,2) - ^ sure
  3. 03:10:698 (4,5) - I dont get this jump? probably a spacing error?, since 5 isn't a strong beat and doesn't have any special sound on it oops, yeah spacing error
sorry for being late, pentori /w\

http://puu.sh/p3Us8/3b99e65282.zip
SnowNiNo_
Elite Mapper: Aspirant
2,106 posts
Joined April 2013
SnowNiNo_
M4M
waaa pp mapu ><

  • [Kibbleru's Insane]
  1. 00:08:945 (1) - aww move to 191 188 to stack it nicer XD
  2. 00:13:717 - mute here, sound really weird since there is no music to support
  3. 00:52:484 - yap same here
  4. 02:01:932 (4) - the sound here should be emphasized more
  5. 02:09:335 (3,1,2) - aww linear flow ;w;, hard to play
  6. 02:15:471 - mute~
  7. 03:07:678 - ^
  8. 03:54:140 (2) - NC here to emphasized the vocal
  • [Insane]
  1. 00:27:841 (1,2,3) - the spacing here should be decreasing not increasing since the pitch of the synth sound that you are following was decreasing
  2. 01:23:750 (9) - NC here instead of 01:24:140 (1) -
  3. 02:22:581 (7) - stack with 02:21:412 (1) - maybe?
  4. 02:37:289 - mute
  5. 02:44:789 (9,1) - same thing here
nice mapu~
GL~
Pentori
1,157 posts
Joined November 2015
Topic Starter
Pentori

SnowNiNo_ wrote:

M4M
waaa pp mapu ><

  • [Insane]
  1. 00:27:841 (1,2,3) - the spacing here should be decreasing not increasing since the pitch of the synth sound that you are following was decreasing fixed
  2. 01:23:750 (9) - NC here instead of 01:24:140 (1) - the way i have it emphasises the finish
  3. 02:22:581 (7) - stack with 02:21:412 (1) - maybe? good catch
  4. 02:37:289 - mute can be done but not rly necessary
  5. 02:44:789 (9,1) - same thing here
nice mapu~
GL~
thx for mod :3
Rizia
3,114 posts
Joined January 2012
Rizia
[Kibbleru's Insane]
  1. 01:23:750 (1) - according to jump pattern on 01:22:581 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - , i think this slider should be on around x336 y56
  2. 02:37:776 (2) - head stack under 02:36:997 (1) - tail? now looks not comfortable to play and read
  3. 03:20:633 (1,2,3,1,2) - wtf what black magic
  4. 03:37:971 - add a note, 03:37:776 (1,2) - are easy to read to 1/2, because there always have similar spacing 1/2 jumps, also you didn't empty here before
[Insane]
  1. 00:11:672 (1,2,3) - angle too weird, how about move 00:12:062 (3) - to x192 y248
  2. 00:19:854 (1,2) - flow kinda weird here, try this placement
    SPOILER
  3. 00:28:815 (6,7,8,9) - stack together. 00:28:425 (4,5) - to stream 00:28:815 (6,7,8,9) - not pretty good for play
  4. 00:59:399 (3,4,5) - stack better
  5. 01:25:308 (1) - finish
  6. 02:12:451 (2) - missing clap on head
  7. 02:30:178 (5,6,7,8,9,10) - add some hitsound for it, like 01:09:140 (5,6,7,8,9,10) -
  8. 03:20:893 (2,3,1,2,3) - i think follow drum on 1/2 will better
[Doormat's Hard]
  1. 01:48:685 (1,2,3) - big jumps for a hard
another best pp?
Doormat
2,049 posts
Joined September 2013
Doormat
@rizia reduced the jump size. thanks~

http://puu.sh/pi5Bw/78f82130f9.zip
Kibbleru
osu! Alumni
5,844 posts
Joined August 2013
Kibbleru
@rizia fix all but 2nd suggestion since i prefer more how the current way looks :S


why do people insist on putting code tags behind their chat logs? so i cant click the links???


just for me so i can click links
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2016-05-17 15:44 estellia-: aight last diff!
2016-05-17 15:47 estellia-: yea i notice similar things
2016-05-17 15:47 estellia-: the jarring unmapped drums
2016-05-17 15:49 estellia-: 00:55:698 (1,2) - afraid players will read this wrong, because of this scary distance before: 00:14:789 (2,1) - players might expect a jump, suggest stack or increase AR hard to get that part wrong imo, the distance is significantly higher and the angle changes
2016-05-17 15:51 estellia-: 02:30:374 (3,4,1) - flow here is a little jarring yehaj
2016-05-17 15:53 estellia-: illustration: http://puu.sh/oUVFB/913f44f8b7.jpg
2016-05-17 15:54 Pentori: i can't speak for kib, but isn't that alright
2016-05-17 15:54 Pentori: its kinda back and forth
2016-05-17 15:55 estellia-: uh back and forth would make sense for jumps
2016-05-17 15:55 estellia-: the fact that the 3rd thing is a complete reversal of flow and the massive decrease in movement is kinda odd to play
2016-05-17 15:55 estellia-: i was just about to say "if the explanation isnt clear enough hmu" but i guess i could clear it now xd
2016-05-17 15:55 Pentori: ok
2016-05-17 15:55 estellia-: thats how i kinda see it at least
2016-05-17 15:55 estellia-: just fix as per how you think ;o
2016-05-17 15:56 estellia-: in comparison for example: 03:35:828 (3,4,1) - this works much better
2016-05-17 15:56 estellia-: 04:13:036 (1) - scary SV change holy, suggest reducing pls ;w; its not a meme but it fits imo.
2016-05-17 15:57 Pentori: i think thats a meme
2016-05-17 15:57 Pentori: to make people slider break
2016-05-17 15:57 estellia-: WELL FUK DAT
2016-05-17 15:57 Pentori: and not get an fc
2016-05-17 15:57 Pentori: lel
2016-05-17 15:57 estellia-: for consistency's sake, why isnt 02:47:773 - a break too like the other diffs
2016-05-17 15:57 Pentori: L O L
2016-05-17 15:58 Pentori: idk, he already mapped it tho so theres no harm of keeping it
2016-05-17 15:58 estellia-: tru
2016-05-17 15:59 estellia-: its kinda odd to me when there are inconsistencies but i guess that ok 2



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Pentori
1,157 posts
Joined November 2015
Topic Starter
Pentori

Rizia wrote:

[Insane]
  1. 00:11:672 (1,2,3) - angle too weird, how about move 00:12:062 (3) - to x192 y248
  2. 00:19:854 (1,2) - flow kinda weird here, try this placement cool
    SPOILER
  3. 00:28:815 (6,7,8,9) - stack together. 00:28:425 (4,5) - to stream 00:28:815 (6,7,8,9) - not pretty good for play do u mean it flows weird or its just better not to stream. cos 01:49:854 (6,7,8,9) - is the same too. stacked it tho
  4. 00:59:399 (3,4,5) - stack better
  5. 01:25:308 (1) - finish mm i used the finishes for accents tho
  6. 02:12:451 (2) - missing clap on head
  7. 02:30:178 (5,6,7,8,9,10) - add some hitsound for it, like 01:09:140 (5,6,7,8,9,10) -
  8. 03:20:893 (2,3,1,2,3) - i think follow drum on 1/2 will better but the piano is so dominating ._.
another best pp? xd
no reply/green = fixed
tyvm. all updated
PlasticMemor
204 posts
Joined June 2015
PlasticMemor
ffs i forgot m4m

i can't mod normal, i am so bad
[Hard]
00:06:802 (4,5,6) - imo 6 should overlap onto head of slider 3 to keep the same pattern you had 00:03:685 (4,5,6)
00:08:556 (4) - fix this, this is too close to the hp bar
00:14:984 (1) - lol this feels a little bit off
00:56:867 (3,4,5,6) - i appreciate this stream. don't fix this i really like it
01:02:711 (3) - there are some rhythm in slider that should be map
01:55:893 (5,6) - this could be 1 slider?
03:26:478 (4) - ctrl+G for flow
04:09:335 (2,3,4) - i would not stack these

[Insane]
00:13:523 (1) - there is a lot of beat in here
00:12:256 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - this sudden change in pattern might confuse player
00:21:023 (4) - for flow make the slider end facing down towards next slider
00:58:425 (5) - ctrl+G for flow
02:03:101 (2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5) - for this part i would consider mapping the vocals

[bnthatdoesn'tcheckmymap'sKibbleru's Insane]
03:22:192 (1) - ctrl+J please for pp
03:54:919 (1,2) - it sounds better with some circles in, it jumps from 1/2 to a tripleish rhythm
^i also find it weird that you only mapped to piano in this part?

this will be my go to pp map soon
Doormat
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Doormat

PlasticMemor wrote:

ffs i forgot m4m

[Hard]
00:06:802 (4,5,6) - imo 6 should overlap onto head of slider 3 to keep the same pattern you had 00:03:685 (4,5,6) aesthetically it looks very similar and i wanted some variation between the two to show that the next part is getting a bit more intense
00:08:556 (4) - fix this, this is too close to the hp bar not really a big deal but i moved it down a bit
00:14:984 (1) - lol this feels a little bit off distances here are increasing slightly to help emphasize the build up; it looks off because the hexagon here isn't equal spacing
00:56:867 (3,4,5,6) - i appreciate this stream. don't fix this i really like it
01:02:711 (3) - there are some rhythm in slider that should be map emphasis on vocals here by using a longer 1/1 slider
01:55:893 (5,6) - this could be 1 slider? there's a clap on the white tick i wanted to emphasize
03:26:478 (4) - ctrl+G for flow this is intentionally like this to enforce this pattern; the other choruses do something similar to this pattern and i feel that it reflects the vocals nicely
04:09:335 (2,3,4) - i would not stack these yeah, i was a little worried this might be a bit too hard actually.
thanks. http://puu.sh/pjyyE/68990e6515.zip
Pentori
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Joined November 2015
Topic Starter
Pentori

PlasticMemor wrote:

ffs i forgot m4m

i can't mod normal, i am so bad

[Insane]
00:13:523 (1) - there is a lot of beat in here theres no beats of the stuff i was previous mapping
00:12:256 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - this sudden change in pattern might confuse player maybe if they're bad
00:21:023 (4) - for flow make the slider end facing down towards next slider ok
00:58:425 (5) - ctrl+G for flow it flows down so the jump to 00:58:815 (1) - is bigger
02:03:101 (2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5) - for this part i would consider mapping the vocals too boring tbh

this will be my go to pp map soon
thx for mod
DeletedUser_3638005
DeletedUser_3638005
m4m thing

[Doormat's Hard]
  1. 00:43:815 - You could probably fill these with hitcircles 00:44:594 - like you did here 00:43:036 - .
  2. 01:40:309 (5,6,1) - Make this distance equal? If you turn the reverse sliderend a little bit to the left I think it could work without messing up the next part. I noticed that you put higher distance snap every NC but it looks prettier on this part exclusively.


[Insane]
  1. 00:08:945 (1,2,3,4,5) - I don't think that those deserve to be jumps (And especially not as spaced as this 00:11:088 - intense part). How about you make them sliders like you did in the previous parts and follow the piano notes?
  2. 02:11:672 (1) - I would move this to x:182 y:32 for the sake of flow. then you have a triangle-like shape going from 02:11:282 (2,3,1) - instead of a square-like pattern.
  3. 02:20:049 (2) - There is no beat here, I don't think this relatively calm part deserve those jumps, so I suggest you make 02:19:854 (1) - a 1/2 slider.
  4. 02:25:503 (3) - Bring this a little bit closer to 02:25:114 (2) - it's a little bit too distant even if it's distance snapped correctly, I personally think it plays better if you move it closer.
  5. 03:20:633 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1) - You could make these all new combos for readability. I know I would :>
  6. 03:29:886 - It would be better if you tried to not miss this beat as it's very intense and and goes well with the vocals.
  7. 03:39:237 - I don't think this should be a triple, there is no beat here.

[Kibbleru's Insane]
  1. 00:02:517 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - Personally I wouldn't make those jumps, but make them 1/2 sliders like you did here 00:01:737 (4) - following the piano notes, If you want to keep them though I wouldn't make them so spaced. 00:02:517 (1,2,1,2) - The spacing here is doubled on the next jump pair but nothing changes in the intensity of the rhythm.
  2. 00:16:737 (1,2,3) - About this rhythm; It appears you are following the kickdrums but the sliderhead of this beat 00:17:711 - isn't intense enough to deserve to be clicked in my opinion. Try this rhythm and tell me what you think.
  3. 00:20:828 (3) - ^ Likewise for the rest.
  4. 00:38:945 (2) - How about two 1/2 sliders here instead of the 1/1? If you do that then the sliderend then covers 00:39:140 - this faint beat and follows the tsu-dzu-keru vocals.
  5. 02:09:335 (3,1,1,2) - Personally I am not a fan of this flow, the spacing between the jumps is too short compared to the next one, and the almost linear flow makes it even more tricky/hard to play.
  6. 02:27:841 - I can't hear anything on this beat, maybe you should follow the vocals instead and put a 1/1 slider ending here 02:28:036 - ?
  7. 02:46:250 - Same for this beat. There is the after noise of that bell but it's messy and all over the place so I wouldn't justify it as a triple. How about you do something like this? Brings out the intensity of 02:46:347 (1) - . (Move 02:47:517 (3) - accordingly so it doesn't have an unappealing overlay.
  8. 03:28:620 - No beat here either. You could make this 03:28:426 (1) - a 1/2 slider so the sliderend ends on the red beat, then there's not really a problem.
  9. 04:13:036 (1) - Don't you think that this is a little too fast? For a sightread there will be a lot of 100s on this. I understand you want to emphasize on the ending beats, why don't you make them spaced jumps instead?

Good luck.
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