Yukinoshita Yukino (CV.Hayami Saori) & Yuigahama Yui (CV.Tou‬ · forum‬

Akitoshi

Joined August 2014

6th wrote:

[Normal]
00:13:490 (1,2) - This seemed really awkard to play. I suggest moving it to next white tick. It shouldn't create any issue since the player got used to tap every 3 ticks here 00:11:737 - oh, hey. Uhm, this 1/1 gap is can be noticed since AR is bit low and drums will start at 00:13:880 - if we listen to the music carefully.
00:19:140 (5) - I suggest moving it a bit to the left okay
00:28:490 (3) - Use a circle here to emphasize 00:28:880 (4) - it's fine as is. There's something bugging me on 00:28:685 - so I mapped that as a slidertail too.
02:07:062 (3) - Move it on red tick following piano here is better and easier to follow imo
02:45:243 - Looks a bit overloaded. I suggest removing reverse arrow then placing the spinner on big white tick. doing the spinner on 02:46:412 - makes less emphasize the beat itself so I decided to reverse this and do the spinner on 02:46:607 - And also it's not really overloaded xd
03:06:672 (2) - Make it straight to fit with red points idk wat is red points but okay xd

Thanks~
@Pentori I updated 1st before I edit so ye

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Title:Everyday World
TitleUnicode:エブリデイワールド
Artist:Yukinoshita Yukino (CV.Hayami Saori) & Yuigahama Yui (CV.Touyama Nao)
ArtistUnicode:雪ノ下雪乃（CV.早見沙織）＆由比ヶ浜結衣（CV.東山奈央）
Creator:Pentori
Version:Collab Normal
Source:やはり俺の青春ラブコメはまちがっている。続
Tags:Akitoshi Kibbleru Doormat oregairu zoku ending ed yahari ore no seishun love come wa machigatteiru my teen romantic comedy snafu full
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Lumin

224 posts

Joined July 2014

Lumin 9 years ago

M4M here yaaay~
You modded three diffs so do I

[Advanced]

00:05:503 (4) - I'd NC this 00:06:477 (1) - not this if you want to keep consistency on NCs
00:10:179 - here should be note imo
00:21:282 (5) - lower this a bit so 5 would adapt to this better
00:26:737 (5) - this gets out of the grid pretty much, I think you should do something about it
00:27:321 (6) - I'd lower this a bit
00:31:607 (5,6) - 1/1 slider would fit better
00:56:153 (9) - gets pretty much out of grid too
01:19:140 (6) - NC?
01:22:256 (2) - I'd make this curve less so this wouold look better with 01:21:477 (1) -
01:46:412 (3) - a lot out of grid
01:54:205 (4) - second anchor somewhere like x:360 y:124 would make this a bit prettier
03:15:633 (3) - I'd make this curve just a bit less for better blanket
03:19:919 - note here perhaps?
03:39:399 (5) - NC?
03:56:932 (6) - gets a lot out of grid
03:59:659 (6) - so strong beat but you didn't map it? why?

[Doormat's Hard]

01:48:945 (2,3) - ctrl + g would flow better imo
03:03:166 (1) - why NC??
03:09:399 (1) - ^
03:19:724 (2,3,4,5,6) - rotate this set 5 degrees clockwise and you can see a little asymmetry
03:23:036 (2) - I don't see the necessity of NC
03:33:166 (1) - leaves grid pretty much imo
04:00:243 (1) - I don't see necessity in NC
04:13:295 (3) - NC?

[Insane]

I think that NCs here are inconsistent and random, you should look into it
00:03:945 (6,3) - overlap
00:07:062 (1,2) - NC 2 because of downbeat
00:10:568 (5,1) - NC 5 ffs
00:27:321 (1,3) - I'd NC 3
00:29:269 (5) - NC, I will not mention about NCs anymore
00:49:334 (3) - you shouldn't leave strong downbeat to sliderend, plays weirdly imo
00:54:205 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5) - overmapping
01:34:140 (1,2) - 01:34:724 (1,2) - you shouldn't use same spacing because they have different spacing chronologically, might confuse
02:06:477 (1) - why NC
02:17:192 (7,8) - overmapping, this stream ends at 02:17:192 -
02:39:789 (4,5,1) - these just doesn't look good together, try to curve them better
02:46:023 (1) - I don't think that you should start this break to sliderend like this
03:02:581 (1) - I know its pretty but polish

That's all I got, hope this helps!
Good luck!

Pentori

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Topic Starter

Pentori 9 years ago

Lumin wrote:
M4M here yaaay~
You modded three diffs so do I

[Advanced]
00:05:503 (4) - I'd NC this 00:06:477 (1) - not this if you want to keep consistency on NCs fixed
00:10:179 - here should be note imo then i would need a note at 00:10:373 (6)
00:21:282 (5) - lower this a bit so 5 would adapt to this better don't know what you mean here. sorry
00:26:737 (5) - this gets out of the grid pretty much, I think you should do something about it nothing wrong with mapping near edges
00:27:321 (6) - I'd lower this a bit fixed
00:31:607 (5,6) - 1/1 slider would fit better i'm letting the clap be clickable
00:56:153 (9) - gets pretty much out of grid too
01:19:140 (6) - NC? fixed
01:22:256 (2) - I'd make this curve less so this wouold look better with 01:21:477 (1) - fixed slider 1
01:46:412 (3) - a lot out of grid
01:54:205 (4) - second anchor somewhere like x:360 y:124 would make this a bit prettier did a different slider
03:15:633 (3) - I'd make this curve just a bit less for better blanket fixed
03:19:919 - note here perhaps? theres no audible beat
03:39:399 (5) - NC? no real reason
03:56:932 (6) - gets a lot out of grid
03:59:659 (6) - so strong beat but you didn't map it? why? because im following vocals
[Insane]
I think that NCs here are inconsistent and random, you should look into it addressed most issues i believe
00:03:945 (6,3) - overlap moved it 1 pixel
00:07:062 (1,2) - NC 2 because of downbeat fixed
00:10:568 (5,1) - NC 5 ffs fixed
00:27:321 (1,3) - I'd NC 3 fixed
00:29:269 (5) - NC, I will not mention about NCs anymore fixed
00:49:334 (3) - you shouldn't leave strong downbeat to sliderend, plays weirdly imo im following vocals
00:54:205 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5) - overmapping uhm ._. care to explain
01:34:140 (1,2) - 01:34:724 (1,2) - you shouldn't use same spacing because they have different spacing chronologically, might confuse fixed
02:06:477 (1) - why NC oops, fixed
02:17:192 (7,8) - overmapping, this stream ends at 02:17:192 - fixed
02:39:789 (4,5,1) - these just doesn't look good together, try to curve them better fixed
02:46:023 (1) - I don't think that you should start this break to sliderend like this added note on white tick
03:02:581 (1) - I know its pretty but polish thats hot
That's all I got, hope this helps!
Good luck!

thanks for modding

Last edited by Pentori 9 years ago, edited 1 time in total.

Lumin

224 posts

Joined July 2014

Lumin 9 years ago

Pentori wrote:
[Advanced]
00:21:282 (5) - lower this a bit so 5 would adapt to this better don't know what you mean here. sorry i mean that move that note few y-coirdinates lower so it flows better with slider
[Insane]
00:54:205 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5) - overmapping uhm ._. care to explain overmapping means that you have mapped notes even tough there are no beats in song for example here is not stream in song but you still mapped it
thanks for modding

Pentori

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Topic Starter

Pentori 9 years ago

Lumin wrote:
Pentori wrote:
[Advanced]
00:21:282 (5) - lower this a bit so 5 would adapt to this better don't know what you mean here. sorry i mean that move that note few y-coirdinates lower so it flows better with slider
[Insane]
00:54:205 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5) - overmapping uhm ._. care to explain overmapping means that you have mapped notes even tough there are no beats in song for example here is not stream in song but you still mapped it
thanks for modding

yeah I know what overmapping means but how is it overmapping when its a held vocal note. there are no beats and its leading into the chorus therefore is a decent place to put a stream. do you mean its too difficult/out of place? 02:15:243 (1) - before the 2nd chorus I do a similar thing yet this isn't considered overmapping by you?

and for the note at 00:21:282 (5) - fixed

Doormat

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Doormat 9 years ago

Lumin wrote:
[Doormat's Hard]
01:48:945 (2,3) - ctrl + g would flow better imo i disagree; this breaks the flow at 01:49:140 (3,4) -
03:03:166 (1) - why NC?? because piano note has a slightly different emphasis to it compared to the previous combo
03:09:399 (1) - ^
03:19:724 (2,3,4,5,6) - rotate this set 5 degrees clockwise and you can see a little asymmetry that's because it's not a perfect hexagon; distance is slightly increasing in size to emphasize the build up here. might change the shape here though since you're the second to point this out
03:23:036 (2) - I don't see the necessity of NC sure; removed nc here
03:33:166 (1) - leaves grid pretty much imo moved it downwards
04:00:243 (1) - I don't see necessity in NC i did a thing
04:13:295 (3) - NC? sure

ty ty

http://puu.sh/ohCtW/b03bd8e2ba.zip

Doormat

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Doormat 9 years ago

Lumin wrote:
00:54:205 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5) - overmapping uhm ._. care to explain overmapping means that you have mapped notes even tough there are no beats in song for example here is not stream in song but you still mapped it

Pentori wrote:
yeah I know what overmapping means but how is it overmapping when its a held vocal note. there are no beats and its leading into the chorus therefore is a decent place to put a stream. do you mean its too difficult/out of place? 02:15:243 (1) - before the 2nd chorus I do a similar thing yet this isn't considered overmapping by you?

just me throwing my opinion here, but this does feel kind of overmapped; same with 02:15:243 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - . there's nothing in the music that supports having a stream like this in the beatmap. if it's a held vocal note, a slider would make more sense than a stream.

Pentori

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Topic Starter

Pentori 9 years ago

Doormat wrote:
just me throwing my opinion here, but this does feel kind of overmapped; same with 02:15:243 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - . there's nothing in the music that supports having a stream like this in the beatmap. if it's a held vocal note, a slider would make more sense than a stream.

i guess two opinions are stronger than one :c

remapped both parts and it actually feels a little nicer now, thanks for the advice

all maps updated

Deppyforce

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Deppyforce 9 years ago

hi

[Advanced]
00:01:218 ~ i think its too long 1/2 train right at the start of map here :/
00:23:036 (3) - try split to 2 circles on white insted to follow vocals better
00:29:075 - should be mapped imo since this is 'advanced' diff
00:41:153 (6) - flip the slider would flow alot better
00:50:114 (2) - not really necessary but dont overlap sliderends here would look cleaner http://puu.sh/ojCwf/4231e0e123.jpg
01:00:049 (3) - split to 2 circles? would be safer if make downbeat clickable
01:49:529 (3) - could split to 2 circles cuz the sound on the end definitly deserves to be clickable imo
02:08:620 - this obvious sound should be mappedd
02:27:516 (6,1) - blanket
03:02:581 (1) - alot of melody in background got ignored bcuz this long slider, atleast try make it like this http://puu.sh/ojCWr/4e6c4393cc.jpg
03:24:594 (1,2) - ds?
03:44:854 (1,2,3) - same about overlapping sliderends
03:59:659 - obvious sound on downbeat should be mapped

[Doormat]
00:16:802 (1) - should be this rhythm imo http://puu.sh/ojDgm/276ccf60b0.jpg to make the 'start of new phase' more intense
01:04:724 (3) - could split to 2 circles to map the start of vocal which is on red
01:21:867 (3,1) - fix blanket? the 1 is too curvy so it didnt blanket 3 properly
01:43:490 (5,6,1) - ^
01:55:958 (5,6) - ctrl+g rhythm?
02:44:464 (5,6) - should stack these imo cuz it supposed to be strongest part of the buildup
03:34:724 (1,2,3) - nazi but try make these symmetry? lol
nice

[Insane]
00:02:192 (5,1,2) - pls straight flow like this is hard to hit
00:16:607 - end spinner here? since the sound actually ends here and this is insane diff
00:31:997 (1) - this is so strong but it has low spacing? makes no sense imo
00:54:984 (1) - u supposed to be mapping the buildup here since thats the most noticable sound here dUDE
01:08:620 (3) - this note is stronger than 4 so 2->3 should be bigger than 3->4
01:23:036 (1,2,3,4) - these supposed to be jumps cuz theyre strongest part of buildup .w. if u want to stack tho stack last combo instead
01:34:724 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - the way u map this is extremely misleading and will cause ppl to think that this is 1/2 like other previous jumps, atleast add nc on 4
01:50:308 - from here on, alot of 1/4s got ignored. this is insane diff pls u should ignore the drum triplets
03:01:997 (3,4) - merge to 1/2 slider fits better with music imo
03:20:698 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - same as 01:34:724 (1,2,3,4,5,6) -
03:47:192 (1,2,3) - these arent 1/2
03:53:425 (1,2,3) - spacing should be equal since theyre same sounds

good luck

Pentori

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Topic Starter

Pentori 9 years ago

Deppyforce wrote:
hi

[Advanced]
00:01:218 ~ i think its too long 1/2 train right at the start of map here :/ eh, mapping circles on white ticks would be dull
00:23:036 (3) - try split to 2 circles on white insted to follow vocals better fixed
00:29:075 - should be mapped imo since this is 'advanced' diff i like having a circle as a clap
00:41:153 (6) - flip the slider would flow alot better fixed
00:50:114 (2) - not really necessary but dont overlap sliderends here would look cleaner http://puu.sh/ojCwf/4231e0e123.jpg fixed
01:00:049 (3) - split to 2 circles? would be safer if make downbeat clickable theres no note after the downbeat so i'll keep it this way
01:49:529 (3) - could split to 2 circles cuz the sound on the end definitly deserves to be clickable imo fixed
02:08:620 - this obvious sound should be mappedd fixed
02:27:516 (6,1) - blanket fixed
03:02:581 (1) - alot of melody in background got ignored bcuz this long slider, atleast try make it like this http://puu.sh/ojCWr/4e6c4393cc.jpg fixed
03:24:594 (1,2) - ds? fixed
03:44:854 (1,2,3) - same about overlapping sliderends fixed
03:59:659 - obvious sound on downbeat should be mapped i was mapping vocals but yeah i guess so, fixed

[Insane]
00:02:192 (5,1,2) - pls straight flow like this is hard to hit fixed? i think
00:16:607 - end spinner here? since the sound actually ends here and this is insane diff fixed
00:31:997 (1) - this is so strong but it has low spacing? makes no sense imo idk how to map, fixed
00:54:984 (1) - u supposed to be mapping the buildup here since thats the most noticable sound here dUDE iM sORRy MAn :c, fixed
01:08:620 (3) - this note is stronger than 4 so 2->3 should be bigger than 3->4 fixed
01:23:036 (1,2,3,4) - these supposed to be jumps cuz theyre strongest part of buildup .w. if u want to stack tho stack last combo instead fixed
01:34:724 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - the way u map this is extremely misleading and will cause ppl to think that this is 1/2 like other previous jumps, atleast add nc on 4 tried keeping DS the same as a previous jump to help indicate the 1/3 snaps. not sure if it helped :/
01:50:308 - from here on, alot of 1/4s got ignored. this is insane diff pls u should ignore the drum triplets added a few in
03:01:997 (3,4) - merge to 1/2 slider fits better with music imo fixed
03:20:698 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - same as 01:34:724 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - same
03:47:192 (1,2,3) - these arent fixed
03:53:425 (1,2,3) - spacing should be equal since theyre same sounds fixed

good luck

thank you so much for the beastly mod <3 i would give you more kds if i could :[

gonna have to work out how to make those notes on 1/3 snap actually playable :'(

Doormat

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Doormat 9 years ago

Deppyforce wrote:
[Doormat]
00:16:802 (1) - should be this rhythm imo http://puu.sh/ojDgm/276ccf60b0.jpg to make the 'start of new phase' more intense i'm not so sure; it breaks the consistency with the rest of the verse if i follow this suggestion. i think it's fine for now since 1/1 repeat slider captures the vocals pretty nicely already
01:04:724 (3) - could split to 2 circles to map the start of vocal which is on red drums have a pretty high emphasis here imo, and a slider captures this more nicely than two circles
01:21:867 (3,1) - fix blanket? the 1 is too curvy so it didnt blanket 3 properly think i got it now
01:43:490 (5,6,1) - ^
01:55:958 (5,6) - ctrl+g rhythm? yeah that feels nicer
02:44:464 (5,6) - should stack these imo cuz it supposed to be strongest part of the buildup b-but they are stacked ????????
03:34:724 (1,2,3) - nazi but try make these symmetry? lol think i got it now lmao
nice nice. ty~
good luck

thanks for the mod depyforc

http://puu.sh/ojP6f/f97cf2b9f1.zip

_handholding

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Joined April 2014

_handholding 9 years ago

Can you rename 'Kibbleru's Extra' to 'Kibbleru's Insane' before this OCD kills me

Pentori

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Topic Starter

Pentori 9 years ago

Kisses wrote:
Can you rename 'Kibbleru's Extra' to 'Kibbleru's Insane' before this OCD kills me

👌👀👌👀👌👀👌👀👌👀 good shit go౦ԁ sHit👌 thats ✔ some good👌👌shit right👌👌there👌👌👌 right✔there ✔✔if i do ƽaү so my self 💯 i say so 💯 thats what im talking about right there right there (chorus: ʳᶦᵍʰᵗ ᵗʰᵉʳᵉ) mMMMMᎷМ💯 👌👌 👌НO0ОଠOOOOOОଠଠOoooᵒᵒᵒᵒᵒᵒᵒᵒᵒ👌 👌👌 👌 💯 👌 👀 👀 👀 👌👌Good shit

09kami

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09kami 9 years ago

09kami wrote:
M4M

why no cancel the sound of the sliderslide?

[Kibbleru's Insane]

00:21:282 (1) - pay attention to the sound of the guitar.

01:01:802 (7) - Stack to 01:02:386 (3) - end

01:07:062 (2) - end to 1/2 red line

02:12:808 (4) - remove. overmap?

[Insane]

00:01:802 (4) - extended to 00:02:192 (5) - and remove 00:02:192 (5) -

00:04:919 (4,5) - ↑ their rhythm is the same.

00:13:880 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - there should be a better spread. 00:13:880 (3,4) - 1.8 ds 00:14:075 (4,5) - 2.1 ds 00:14:269 (5,6) - 2.4 ds 00:14:464 (6,7) - 2.8 ds 00:14:659 (7,8) - 2.8 ds 00:14:854 (8,9) - 3.0 ds

00:15:146 (1) - 00:16:607 add timing section 5% volume

00:47:971 (6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1) - increase the distance of objects . because big drum

00:58:490 (6,1) - change nc

01:00:049 (6,1) - ↑

00:59:269 (3) - nc

01:02:776 (5) - nc

01:07:646 (6,1) - why no changed streams？

02:16:023 (1) - overmap.should stop in red line

02:30:049 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - not suitable to appear in this difficulty

Grrum

886 posts

Joined November 2011

Grrum 9 years ago

Hi. Here for M4M from my queue. Hope this helps!

[General]

Hitsounds are kind of quiet. Consider using a louder/stronger custom histound for the clap and /or increasing the volume on all the timing points.

[Kibbleru's Insane]

00:07:451 (1) – The low SV sliders are so weak that it doesn't really go with the strong base spacing you have in this section. They make sense to reset the pacing so you can go into stronger jumps next, but I think you weaken the section too much, so consider not reducing the SV and keep it at .75 (which is already low)

00:31:607 (4,5) – yay symmetry along a 15 degree rotation!

02:46:997 (2) – until 02:58:490 (2) – I would have made this a break, but this is more of a personal thing

03:21:477 (1) – It's a shame the drums and the melody conflict so much. This is the strongest note in the piano, so anyone following the melody would probably prefer spacing decreases instead of increases after this. I mean I guess there's nothing you can do to satisfy both groups, I'm just grumpy I'm in the wrong one.

03:29:269 (1) – Why the NC? I don't like the 'staying consistent with 03:35:698 (1) - ' argument because the drums are strong there to warrant the NC, but here it isn't

04:13:101 (1) – hmmmmm.... You're following the piano at 04:12:127 (1,3) - . This made me expect that you would make 04:13:295 – clickable. Instead I had a giant SV shoved in my face on a weaker note. It just doesn't seem to work on this note. I don't like the SV change in general, but if you are insistent on having it, you can use this kind of rhythm, though I prefer just making it circle → spinner: http://puu.sh/olEBc/abf7dbcd4f.jpg

[Insane]

00:06:867 (6,7) – Why the large decrease in spacing? I feel like (7) is declining in strength at all in the song to justify this heavy a change.

00:04:724 (3,5) - Overlap is not ideal
01:50:308 (1,3) - ^

00:36:088 (4,5) – this spacing is quite small considering how strong of a note (5) is

00:48:360 (8) – What's this going with? It's very costly since you miss the strong note at 00:48:555 (9) - . Try making that clickable by making (7) a slider instead
01:33:166 (4) - ^ – make this two circles

01:06:672 (1,2,3,4,5,6) – are you sure the music is so strong that you want to use this high level of spacing? I'm not really feeling it. I mean, you can increase here, but maybe not by this much.

01:02:873 (6) – Are you sure there is a note here in the music? I'd prefer this to only be a 3 note stream instead of 5

01:16:023 (1) – Use SV 1.00x until 01:24:205 (1) -

02:35:503 (6) – This note is kind of strong, I would say it's stronger than 02:35:698 (7) - , so I don't like the increase in spacing into (7). Put more of the big spacing into (6) instead

03:20:698 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) – It might be helpful to make each of these NC to make it easier to read the polarity changes here
03:53:685 (2,3) - ^ similar

03:51:672 (4) – This being way in the corner is a little awkward. Is it possible to move this up and to the right somehow?

03:59:854 (2,3) – What's the benefit to overmapping this? The song is being really calm here, and I think this section isn't calm enough to reflect that. Other places like 03:56:347 (2,3) – have kind of big spacing that I'd rather you calm down. You should lower the SV too at 03:54:984 (3) – like you did for 02:58:880 (1) - , and

[Doormat's Hard]

01:12:906 (1) – This is overlapping the HUD on smaller screen sizes and is off grid. Please bring this down.

02:00:438 (4,2) – are a little close, it might be nice to give these some distance

02:31:997 (4) – Move this to 180, 116 and move 02:31:607 (3) – to to 282, 198 for better symmetry

[Advanced]

00:01:802 (3,3) – overlap is not ideal, go with a square structure: http://puu.sh/olEZR/ad4e35c181.png

00:26:737 (5) – overlapping Health Bar a bit on lower screen sizes, try moving it down
00:42:127 (2) - ^
00:50:114 (2) – I'll stop mentioning them

Map looks mostly good. Good luck!

Doormat

2,050 posts

Joined September 2013

Doormat 9 years ago

fixed all suggestions on my end.

http://puu.sh/olJwL/822c684ac3.zip

Pentori

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Topic Starter

Pentori 9 years ago

09kami wrote:
09kami wrote:
M4M

why no cancel the sound of the sliderslide? oops, forgot that default skin exists, fixed

[Insane]

00:01:802 (4) - extended to 00:02:192 (5) - and remove 00:02:192 (5) - being an insane. i think this is ok

00:04:919 (4,5) - ↑ their rhythm is the same.

00:13:880 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - there should be a better spread. 00:13:880 (3,4) - 1.8 ds 00:14:075 (4,5) - 2.1 ds 00:14:269 (5,6) - 2.4 ds 00:14:464 (6,7) - 2.8 ds 00:14:659 (7,8) - 2.8 ds 00:14:854 (8,9) - 3.0 ds ds stays the same to make a star pattern but increases for last note

00:15:146 (1) - 00:16:607 add timing section 5% volume sure?

00:47:971 (6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1) - increase the distance of objects . because big drum done

00:58:490 (6,1) - change nc fixed

01:00:049 (6,1) - ↑ fixed

00:59:269 (3) - nc nah

01:02:776 (5) - nc nah

01:07:646 (6,1) - why no changed streams？because it doesnt lead into anything

02:16:023 (1) - overmap.should stop in red line its a held note, no beat on red tick

02:30:049 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - not suitable to appear in this difficulty ? this isn't too hard

thanks for mod

pinataman wrote:
Hi. Here for M4M from my queue. Hope this helps!

[General]

Hitsounds are kind of quiet. Consider using a louder/stronger custom histound for the clap and /or increasing the volume on all the timing points. boosted the volume of soft-hitclap

[Insane]

00:06:867 (6,7) – Why the large decrease in spacing? I feel like (7) is declining in strength at all in the song to justify this heavy a change. fixed

00:04:724 (3,5) - Overlap is not ideal fixed
01:50:308 (1,3) - ^ fixed

00:36:088 (4,5) – this spacing is quite small considering how strong of a note (5) is fixed

00:48:360 (8) – What's this going with? It's very costly since you miss the strong note at 00:48:555 (9) - . Try making that clickable by making (7) a slider instead fixed
01:33:166 (4) - ^ – make this two circles fixed

01:06:672 (1,2,3,4,5,6) – are you sure the music is so strong that you want to use this high level of spacing? I'm not really feeling it. I mean, you can increase here, but maybe not by this much. fixed

01:02:873 (6) – Are you sure there is a note here in the music? I'd prefer this to only be a 3 note stream instead of 5 fixed

01:16:023 (1) – Use SV 1.00x until 01:24:205 (1) - fixed

02:35:503 (6) – This note is kind of strong, I would say it's stronger than 02:35:698 (7) - , so I don't like the increase in spacing into (7). Put more of the big spacing into (6) instead fixed

03:20:698 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) – It might be helpful to make each of these NC to make it easier to read the polarity changes here yeah I'm having issues with people saying its hard to pick up on the change to 1/3 snap. did something else to try help out. i think having 7 NCs is a little silly
03:53:685 (2,3) - ^ similar tried it for this one

03:51:672 (4) – This being way in the corner is a little awkward. Is it possible to move this up and to the right somehow? i don't see the issue with mapping the sides, i mean the grid is that big for a reason right?

03:59:854 (2,3) – What's the benefit to overmapping this? The song is being really calm here, and I think this section isn't calm enough to reflect that. Other places like 03:56:347 (2,3) – have kind of big spacing that I'd rather you calm down. You should lower the SV too at 03:54:984 (3) – like you did for 02:58:880 (1) - , and fixed

[Advanced]

00:01:802 (3,3) – overlap is not ideal, go with a square structure: http://puu.sh/olEZR/ad4e35c181.png ctrl+h'ed 00:01:218 (1,2,3) -

00:26:737 (5) – overlapping Health Bar a bit on lower screen sizes, try moving it down is this unrankable? because if its not, im not going to bother
00:42:127 (2) - ^
00:50:114 (2) – I'll stop mentioning them

Map looks mostly good. Good luck!

thanks for modding! [: good luck with exams!!

_handholding

3,109 posts

Joined April 2014

_handholding 9 years ago

a bit cheeky that you asked me to mod every diff when my map was only 30 secs long but cos im late sure

[Normal]
00:13:880 (2,3,4) - I think this would be better represented as a spinner due to the lower intensity and other stuff http://puu.sh/omKo4/e828670176.jpg
00:22:256 (5) - I would either move this to 00:22:062 OR make 00:21:477 (4) - a reverse slider. The current rhythm feels a bit forced imo when trying to match the music
01:00:438 (2,3) - Personally I would turn these into 2 1/1 sliders to put more emphasis on the reverse slider at 01:01:997 (4) but this works too I guess
01:08:620 - a circle would be ok here but Im guessing there's a good reason you skipped this beat
01:25:373 - because this is the easiest difficulty and noobier players love spinners how about placing one here? http://puu.sh/omKJZ/84b7037aca.jpg
01:48:750 (1) - delete NC
01:50:308 (4) - NC
Actually that NC pattern kinda messes things up a bit. Still I think you should do something about the NC pattern and not make 01:48:750 (1,2) a stand alone combo
02:03:945 (2) - do this? http://puu.sh/omKSF/970470f654.jpg you mapped the vocals similar like this at all the parts before
02:46:607 (1) - I kinda think the spinner should start at 02:46:412 .
03:39:399 (1,2,3,4) - The flow here is a bit awkward compared to the rest of the map
03:46:997 (3) - make this a slider and end it on 03:47:581 ? You mapped the vocal at 03:43:880 (4) with a slider but left this blank, kinda feels empty
04:10:179 (1,2) - ctrl + g the downbeat should be the start of the slider as it is the same sound as 04:11:153 (2)
04:13:685 (1) - Move this to the red tick? I dont see why not since

[Advanced]
00:09:984 (5) - this feels really empty? why not
00:10:568 (1,2,3,4,5) - I think the same DS as earlier (1.6) would play better
00:19:919 (3) - delete the reverse and make this either a 1/1 or a 3/2 slider. The reverse doesnt fit
00:21:282 (5) - imo you should make this a slider as you mapped a a similar vocal sound with a slider at 00:18:166 (4)
01:45:633 (1,2) - I would move these apart a bit. like increase the ds to 1.6 or so. The increase in ds should be fine to make the pattern look less bunched up
01:49:529 (3,4,5) - I recommend making theses a reverse slider. The note density is too high to be justified here imo
01:58:101 (5) - 1/1 slider? same as 00:19:919 (3)
02:33:945 (4) - curve this in the opposite direction for better flow
02:37:062 - Because of the pause effect in the music I really think you should make the downbeat clickable
02:21:477 - I would prefer this downbeat to be clickable as well
03:02:581 (1) - I think the SV is too low, its almost half of the original and I do think its more forced than creating a nice effect. If you really want a lower SV I would suggest 0.7 or 7.5 or so but if it were up to me I would remove the SV change all together and make use of the bigger slider by making some nice slider shapes
03:08:815 (1) - ^ same as above. Because this is the last slider a heart shape would fit nicely.
03:37:646 (3) - slider pls
03:58:880 (4,5) - If you're trying to follow the vocals then wouldnt a rhythm like this be more appropriate? The downbeat shouldnt be mapped if youre following the vocals

[Doormat's Hard]
00:14:075 (2,3,4,5,6,1) - I find pentagons frustrating and awkward to play *insert really funny joke about america here*
01:24:205 (2,1) - swap NCs? Im just thinking if players might confuse 01:23:815 (1,2) - as being a 1/2 beat stack like the others notes before it
04:03:166 (2) - ^

[Insane]
00:45:438 (3,4) - the gap feels awkward
00:50:990 - Add note here to form a triplet? pays nice imo
00:54:010 (7) - you should reduce the DS of (6,7) as it takes away from the emphasis of 00:54:205 (1) -
01:10:568 (1) - slider doesnt look pretty imo
02:08:425 (7,8) - same as 00:54:010 (7)
02:13:588 - same as 00:50:990
02:19:042 - add circle here for triplet, I think this is important as you have triplet for all the other sounds throughout the kiai time
02:24:594 (1,2) - How about changing it ever so slightly so they look like dove birds.. sorta http://puu.sh/omNj4/cbfbd7b79e.jpg
02:30:049 (1,2,3,4) - imo you should change the stack to how you made your other stream at 01:09:010 (5) -
03:33:555 (3,4,5,6) - The flow is a bit awkward I'd say. Try a sharper angle

[Kibbleru's Insane]
Oh you changed the name XD was it ok with kibbleru? In all seriousness Insane is a better name because of the way its mapped imo
02:44:756 - how come you didnt add a circle here?
03:07:256 (2) - I think it would be better to make this into a 1/1 slider and just forget about the blue tick slider 03:07:451 (3) . It does feel like a forced rhythm imo
03:42:516 (1) - I think a curved slider would fit better considering you've used them throughtout the entire map and I would think it would make a better pattern with the slider afterwards
04:13:101 (1) - O.o

GL!

Doormat

2,050 posts

Joined September 2013

Doormat 9 years ago

Kisses wrote:
[Doormat's Hard]
00:14:075 (2,3,4,5,6,1) - I find pentagons frustrating and awkward to play *insert really funny joke about america here* b-but i'm canadian how does this affect me lmao
01:24:205 (2,1) - swap NCs? Im just thinking if players might confuse 01:23:815 (1,2) - as being a 1/2 beat stack like the others notes before it
04:03:166 (2) - ^

no change; i think having the NC on the downbeat is more effective because it's a nicer visual cue that shows this stack is different from the previous ones (new combo so you can tell it's stacked differently). you could make the argument that starting the NC on the (2) also works and it does, but i like how it currently is, so not likely going to change it unless somebody else brings this up again.

thanks for taking a look!

Pentori

1,157 posts

Joined November 2015

Topic Starter

Pentori 9 years ago

Kisses wrote:
a bit cheeky that you asked me to mod every diff when my map was only 30 secs long but cos im late sure hehe ^^ thanks for that

[Normal] leaving aki's parts
01:00:438 (2,3) - Personally I would turn these into 2 1/1 sliders to put more emphasis on the reverse slider at 01:01:997 (4) but this works too I guess
01:08:620 - a circle would be ok here but Im guessing there's a good reason you skipped this beat vocals c:
01:25:373 - because this is the easiest difficulty and noobier players love spinners how about placing one here? http://puu.sh/omKJZ/84b7037aca.jpg i already have one entering the next section
01:48:750 (1) - delete NC fixed
01:50:308 (4) - NC fixed
Actually that NC pattern kinda messes things up a bit. Still I think you should do something about the NC pattern and not make 01:48:750 (1,2) a stand alone combo
03:39:399 (1,2,3,4) - The flow here is a bit awkward compared to the rest of the map
03:46:997 (3) - make this a slider and end it on 03:47:581 ? You mapped the vocal at 03:43:880 (4) with a slider but left this blank, kinda feels empty fixed
04:10:179 (1,2) - ctrl + g the downbeat should be the start of the slider as it is the same sound as 04:11:153 (2) fixed
04:13:685 (1) - Move this to the red tick? I dont see why not since fixed

[Advanced]
00:09:984 (5) - this feels really empty? why not fixed
00:10:568 (1,2,3,4,5) - I think the same DS as earlier (1.6) would play better fixed, used 1.7
00:19:919 (3) - delete the reverse and make this either a 1/1 or a 3/2 slider. The reverse doesnt fit fixed
00:21:282 (5) - imo you should make this a slider as you mapped a a similar vocal sound with a slider at 00:18:166 (4) keeping as is
01:45:633 (1,2) - I would move these apart a bit. like increase the ds to 1.6 or so. The increase in ds should be fine to make the pattern look less bunched up keeping as is
01:49:529 (3,4,5) - I recommend making theses a reverse slider. The note density is too high to be justified here imo originally it was a reverse slider but a modder pointed it out so keeping as is
01:58:101 (5) - 1/1 slider? same as 00:19:919 (3) nah this is ok here
02:33:945 (4) - curve this in the opposite direction for better flow fixed
02:37:062 - Because of the pause effect in the music I really think you should make the downbeat clickable this downbeat isn't as prominent
02:21:477 - I would prefer this downbeat to be clickable as well^
03:02:581 (1) - I think the SV is too low, its almost half of the original and I do think its more forced than creating a nice effect. If you really want a lower SV I would suggest 0.7 or 7.5 or so but if it were up to me I would remove the SV change all together and make use of the bigger slider by making some nice slider shapes but the song is about not getting loved :c and plus its honestly mappers choice
03:08:815 (1) - ^ same as above. Because this is the last slider a heart shape would fit nicely.
03:37:646 (3) - slider pls fixed
03:58:880 (4,5) - If you're trying to follow the vocals then wouldnt a rhythm like this be more appropriate? The downbeat shouldnt be mapped if youre following the vocals did something else

[Insane]
00:45:438 (3,4) - the gap feels awkward hopefully the note + triplet fixed it
00:50:990 - Add note here to form a triplet? pays nice imo ya it does, fixed
00:54:010 (7) - you should reduce the DS of (6,7) as it takes away from the emphasis of 00:54:205 (1) - fixed
01:10:568 (1) - slider doesnt look pretty imo fixed
02:08:425 (7,8) - same as 00:54:010 (7) this is a different kind of jump
02:13:588 - same as 00:50:990 done
02:19:042 - add circle here for triplet, I think this is important as you have triplet for all the other sounds throughout the kiai time nah not here
02:24:594 (1,2) - How about changing it ever so slightly so they look like dove birds.. sorta http://puu.sh/omNj4/cbfbd7b79e.jpg
02:30:049 (1,2,3,4) - imo you should change the stack to how you made your other stream at 01:09:010 (5) - theres nothing wrong with this one?
03:33:555 (3,4,5,6) - The flow is a bit awkward I'd say. Try a sharper angle fixed

GL!

thanks for modding! c:

KantanDez

255 posts

Joined February 2015

KantanDez 9 years ago

from le m4m modding queue
we meet agen (f)akitoshi(t)

Collab Normal
00:41:737 - reduce volume to 30%
01:22:256 (2) - kinda wierd,do this instead http://puu.sh/ooiYL/a4737a6d05.jpg
01:24:984 (6) - make this into a 1/1 slider
02:02:776 - make volume 30%
02:46:023 (1) - remove reverse then add a hitcircle at 02:46:412 (also nc 02:45:243 (5) then remove 02:46:023 (1) nc) u decide if u should either nc the last hitcircle or not

Adv
00:41:737 - y u no reduce volume (to 30%)
01:25:373 - add a hitcircle here then move the spinner (or make 3 a 1/2 slider)
02:46:412 - ^
03:53:425 (4) - too near 2 move down a little

Hard
00:18:166 (1) - sliders are better off in white tick and big white ticks:^) should be clickable(since it has a stronger beat ,atleast at most songs)
00:37:062 (1) - you can improve this blanket
00:41:737 - reduce volume to 30%
01:28:490 - add some sound here atleast 40%
02:02:776 - 30% volume
02:49:529 - add some volume

Insen
00:41:737 - reduce sound to 30% and you should slow down the jumps since this is a calm part of the song, the mapping should me calm too
01:41:932 (4) - put this at either the start of 1 or the end
02:02:776 - make volume 30%
02:46:510 - 02:49:529 - add spinner
03:25:179 (5) - sliders are better off in white tick and big white ticks:^) should be clickable(since it has a stronger beat ,atleast at most songs)
03:31:412 (2) - ^
03:53:685 (1,1) - remove nc

Kibsen
00:41:737 - reduce volume to 30%
01:50:114 (4) - add whistle
02:02:776 - make volume 30%
02:06:477 (2,1,2) - do this instead http://puu.sh/oomHf/0516d47a4e.jpg . just move 3

nice map/song

gud lucc
and firetruck aki with feelings

Doormat

2,050 posts

Joined September 2013

Doormat 9 years ago

Term Akatski wrote:
Hard
00:18:166 (1) - sliders are better off in white tick and big white ticks:^) should be clickable(since it has a stronger beat ,atleast at most songs) i disagree; the vocals are the emphasis of this part, which land on the offbeats (red ticks). the main beats (white ticks) during this part have less of an emphasis, so that's why they're mostly slider ends.
00:37:062 (1) - you can improve this blanket sure
00:41:737 - reduce volume to 30%
01:28:490 - add some sound here atleast 40%
02:02:776 - 30% volume
02:49:529 - add some volume

i'll leave volume suggestions up to pentori. thanks for the mod-

http://puu.sh/ooP6U/83a33779e3.zip

Akitoshi

2,687 posts

Joined August 2014

Akitoshi 9 years ago

Kisses wrote:
[Normal]
00:13:880 (2,3,4) - I think this would be better represented as a spinner due to the lower intensity and other stuff http://puu.sh/omKo4/e828670176.jpg ok
00:22:256 (5) - I would either move this to 00:22:062 OR make 00:21:477 (4) - a reverse slider. The current rhythm feels a bit forced imo when trying to match the music I stacked 00:22:256 (5) - instead
02:03:945 (2) - do this? http://puu.sh/omKSF/970470f654.jpg you mapped the vocals similar like this at all the parts before sure
02:46:607 (1) - I kinda think the spinner should start at 02:46:412 . I want to emphasize as a end at 02:46:412 - atm, gonna change this soon if other modders pointed

Term Akatski wrote:
from le m4m modding queue
we meet agen (f)akitoshi(t) oh, hey ./.

Collab Normal
00:41:737 - reduce volume to 30% Any reason to reduce suddenly from 60% to 30%? There's still instruments that can be emphasized with current volume
02:46:023 (1) - remove reverse then add a hitcircle at 02:46:412 (also nc 02:45:243 (5) then remove 02:46:023 (1) nc) u decide if u should either nc the last hitcircle or not it's fine as is

and firetruck aki with feelings die homo

Thanks!
I updated the map before I apply the mod so don't worry my friend :v

yukinonononono

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Pentori

1,157 posts

Joined November 2015

Topic Starter

Pentori 9 years ago

Term Akatski wrote:
from le m4m modding queue
we meet agen (f)akitoshi(t)

Collab Normal
01:22:256 (2) - kinda wierd,do this instead http://puu.sh/ooiYL/a4737a6d05.jpg fixed
01:24:984 (6) - make this into a 1/1 slider made it a 1/2 slider + beat

Adv
00:41:737 - y u no reduce volume (to 30%) did 40% instead
01:25:373 - add a hitcircle here then move the spinner (or make 3 a 1/2 slider) lyrics finish on 01:25:179 (3) - i think this is ok
02:46:412 - ^
03:53:425 (4) - too near 2 move down a little fixed

Hard
00:41:737 - reduce volume to 30% 40%
01:28:490 - add some sound here atleast 40% i think doormat made it 5% for a reason, leaving as is
02:02:776 - 30% volumeits already 40%
02:49:529 - add some volume same as the other explaination

Insen
00:41:737 - reduce sound to 30% and you should slow down the jumps since this is a calm part of the song, the mapping should me calm too 40% the jumps are weaker compared to the exciting parts of the map
01:41:932 (4) - put this at either the start of 1 or the end i moved 1
02:02:776 - make volume 30% 40 is good enuff
02:46:510 - 02:49:529 - add spinner sure
03:25:179 (5) - sliders are better off in white tick and big white ticks:^) should be clickable(since it has a stronger beat ,atleast at most songs) theres no important beat on this white tick
03:31:412 (2) - ^ this slider represents the vocal
03:53:685 (1,1) - remove nc rip the other modder that told me to do this

Kibsen
00:41:737 - reduce volume to 30% 40%
01:50:114 (4) - add whistle nonono
02:02:776 - make volume 30% nope

nice map/song
gud lucc
and firetruck aki with feelings

thank you <3 i'll get to your map now :]

KantoKun

1,116 posts

Joined December 2011

KantoKun 9 years ago

~~can i make a gd!!!! really like this song ;w;~~

really good XD

Pentori

1,157 posts

Joined November 2015

Topic Starter

Pentori 9 years ago

KantoKun wrote:
~~can i make a gd!!!! really like this song ;w;~~

really good XD

thanks o3o

Kibbleru

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Joined August 2013

Kibbleru 9 years ago

some streams are overmapped in ur insane diff to be quite honest, at least in my interpretation i guess
00:28:977 (2) -
01:09:107 (6) -
01:50:016 (7) -
02:30:146 (2) -

well i guess the ones in the kiai kinda fit, but u should fix the others

Pentori

1,157 posts

Joined November 2015

Topic Starter

Pentori 9 years ago

Kibbleru wrote:
some streams are overmapped in ur insane diff to be quite honest, at least in my interpretation i guess
00:28:977 (2) -
01:09:107 (6) -
01:50:016 (7) -
02:30:146 (2) -

well i guess the ones in the kiai kinda fit, but u should fix the others

hm i do agree that 01:09:107 (6) - 02:30:146 (2) - are probably excessive so i'll make them a little shorter and reduce the ds on 02:30:146 (2) -

but could these 00:28:977 (2) - 01:50:016 (7) - really be considered overmapped? they lead well into the next section. hm, if another modder mentions it i'll change it

Nickelony

402 posts

Joined January 2013

Nickelony 9 years ago

Hi! M4M here!

[Kibbleru's Insane]

01:01:997 (1,2,3,4,5) - broken flow imo, better not use stacks here.
02:23:036 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^
03:28:490 (1,2,3,1,2) - ^
01:15:243 (1,2,3,4) - ^ (optional)
02:36:282 (1,2,3,4) - ^ (optional)

Nice diff, but
Tripple stacks... Tripple stacks everywhere

[Insane]

03:48:750 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - What??? it's too hard to read. Change the placement or the combo colors like this: http://puu.sh/opdzY.jpg

btw. amazing diff!!

[Doormat's Hard]

00:01:802 (2) - waves like that look better imo http://puu.sh/opdOi.jpg (optional)
02:45:243 (2) - ^
02:59:464 (2) - ^
00:27:321 (3,1,2,3,4) - for a hard diff this is too hard to read.
00:45:438 (2,3) - stacking this is ruining the flow!
02:06:477 (2,3) - ^
01:23:815 (1,2) - ^ (optional, because it's not that bad)
02:44:854 (1,2) - ^ (optional)
00:56:932 (3,4,5,6) - streams in hard? I don't think that's a good idea.
01:09:399 (4,5,6,7) - ^
02:17:971 (3,4,5,6) - ^
02:30:438 (4,5,6,7) - ^
03:35:893 (4,5,6,7) - ^
01:09:789 (1) - this could look better: http://puu.sh/opegH.jpg

So far, looks fine.

That's all. good luck!

Pentori

1,157 posts

Joined November 2015

Topic Starter

Pentori 9 years ago

Nickelony wrote:
Hi! M4M here!

Nice diff, but
Tripple stacks... Tripple stacks everywhere

GOOD MEME

[Insane]

03:48:750 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - What??? it's too hard to read. Change the placement or the combo colors like this: http://puu.sh/opdzY.jpg
its actually a lot harder to read with all those follow points http://puu.sh/opeHf/1fd481720d.jpg

btw. amazing diff!!

So far, looks fine.

That's all. good luck!

thx for mod

Doormat

2,050 posts

Joined September 2013

Doormat 9 years ago

no change on my end.

the waves are fine the way they currently are
the part at 00:27:321 (3,1,2,3,4) - isn't overly complicated so i think it should be fine for the most part
for the stacks, there's a pause in between the notes, e.g. vocals stop on 00:45:438 (2) - but resume on 00:45:828 (3) -. the break in flow here is intentional because it captures this pause nicely imo.
streams aren't too long (they're only about 5 notes each) and they fit with the song's most intense moments (only used during kiai) so they feel appropriate where they are.
for 01:09:789 (1) - i wanted a downward curve because it leads into the (2) more nicely. curving it upwards makes flow here more awkward since the slider wouldn't lead into the next note

thanks for taking a look.

BigEarsMau

786 posts

Joined June 2015

BigEarsMau 9 years ago

Hi Pentori!
M4M from my queue
Can't mod Kibbleru's Insane bc I can't play it

[Collab Normal]

02:22:841 - Add a circle here to improve flow and match the rhythm
03:08:230 (1,2) - Could've been blanketed perfectly
03:46:997 (3,1) - Fix the blanket

[Advanced]

00:38:620 (1,2) - Fix blanket
00:48:555 (2,3) - ^
00:50:114 (2,3) - ^
01:22:256 (2,3) - ^
01:58:880 (1,2) - ^
02:18:945 (2,3) - ^
03:28:880 (2,3) - ^
03:40:958 (1,2) - ^
03:43:880 (4,5) - ^
03:51:672 (1,2) - ^
00:42:127 (2,3) - Blanket?
02:44:464 (5) - Ctrl+G. Might be a candidate for an antiflow/intorverted flow

[Doormat's Hard]

Clean

[Insane]

Clean too

Nice map

That's all I can find. Hope this helps
Good luck in being ranked

Akitoshi

2,687 posts

Joined August 2014

Akitoshi 9 years ago

No change for my part, two of them aren't meant to be blanket, and adding note on 02:22:841 - won't fit atm ;3;

Kibbleru

osu! Alumni

5,846 posts

Joined August 2013

Kibbleru 9 years ago

luv stacking xd

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316,220,245016,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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312,368,248133,1,2,0:1:0:0:
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Pentori

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Pentori 9 years ago

BigEarsMau wrote:
Hi Pentori!
M4M from my queue
Can't mod Kibbleru's Insane bc I can't play it

[Collab Normal]
03:46:997 (3,1) - Fix the blanket fixed
[Advanced]
03:28:880 (2,3) - ^ fixed
03:51:672 (1,2) - ^ fixed
00:42:127 (2,3) - Blanket? fixed
02:44:464 (5) - Ctrl+G. nah i want it to flow straight

fixed the blanket mods i listed, the others were either not blankets or were already blanketed fine

UndeadCapulet

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UndeadCapulet 9 years ago

From my queue:

General

Could you, like, find a bg that isn't a low quality screenshot from the anime.
And while you're at it try to find a 192kbps mp3.

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Kibbleru's Insane

00:13:490 (4) - NC here imo, it's not really connected to the jump pattern, and the NC would fit how you handle other sliders of this nature (like 00:54:205 (1) - for example)
00:40:179 (5,1) - imo this 1/1 gap is super lame, maybe use like a 3/4 slider? I think that would fit well in context. Well, I think you should fill it in some way or other.
00:40:958 (1,2,3,4) - I think DS should be increasing to fit with the guitar's pitch/volume increasing, decrease DS doesn't make sense here.
00:59:659 (5,6,7) - Jump emphasis seems random here. You should emphasize 7's strong vocal instead of 6 :s
01:49:140 (2,3,4,1,2) - Similar thing about jump distances and pitch as I mentioned before.
03:20:698 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,3,1) - Jump patterns are fun and all, but imo the piano is the more interesting part of this section... idk
03:53:425 (1) - Upping the SV on this slider would be pretty cool imo, it would fit well since you use similar effects in other parts of the map

I'm worried about you Kibboo, you're starting to rely too heavily on the back-and-forth Skystar-style jump pattern. You spammed it a lot in your Sentimental Skyscraper map, too. It's a really bad habit to get into, that jump pattern gets old really fast.

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Insane

Your entire New Combo job needs to be completely redone, it follows no logical structure or consistency at all. For example:

Compare 00:02:192 (5,1,2) - to 00:05:308 (5,6,1) - . These are the exact same rhythmic structure, so they should be NC'd in the exact same way.
00:17:971 (5,6,1) - and 00:21:088 (1,2,3) -
00:23:036 (1,2) - and 00:26:153 (3,4) -
etc. etc.

This continues throughout the whole map, the NC's are totally random. A common basic structure for NC's is to simply put them on the downbeats, because that's the basic emphasis for the song. Once you have that basic structure, you can fiddle with it how you see fit (see Kibbleru's diff for some of the common deviances from the basic structure).

You tend to skip over the triples that appear in the song. This is fine if you're trying to lower the note density for the sake of difficulty, but you also randomly add in extra triples that aren't in the song. This was especially noticeable at 00:46:218 (5,6,7,1) - , where you do both of these things right next to each other. You should try sticking closer to the song's actual rhythms.

Your spacing and emphasis is pretty weird throughout the map. For example:

02:42:127 (3,4) - This jump is larger than 02:44:659 (2,3) - , but the latter is mapped to a much more intense part of the song. Honestly, 4 shouldn't even be a jump at all, there isn't any powerful beat there, the real jump should be at 02:42:516 (5) - because of how strong the instrumental and vocals are.
02:21:477 (1,2,3) - You put the biggest jump on 2 but 3 has the strong drum beat.
01:25:373 (1) - This whole section uses jump patterns similar to the kiai (and the buildup to the kiai), but this part of the song is much less intense overall.

These things appear throughout the entire difficulty, I'm not going to point them all out. You should go through and rearrange your objects so the spacing is highest during the most intense parts, trying to emphasize things like strong vocals or drum beats.

There are also some major inconsistencies you should sort out, like how 00:54:985 (1,2) - is mapping the piano but 02:16:022 (1,2,1,2) - is mapping the drum beats, that kind of thing.

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Doormat's Hard

00:12:906 (5,1) - Swap NC fits your patterning better here.
00:27:711 (1,2,3) - I think the largest jump should be on 2, the highest pitched piano key. Same for 01:48:750 (1,2,3) - .
00:41:737 (1) - Considering how frequently you map the piano over anything else, I think you should focus on it more in this section. Same for the section at 02:02:776 (1) - . I think you following vocals here doesn't fit with the rest of the map.

Easily the best diff in the set, good work. I love everything from 03:11:347 (1) - to 03:22:256 (1) - :3

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Advanced

Similar thing about NC's, though here I can see you're trying a lot harder to fit them to the vocals instead of them being pretty much random. You still need to go through and make things like 00:19:140 (1) - and 00:31:607 (5) - be consistent, and there are a lot of those inconsistencies.

03:19:724 (2) - 1/2 slider would fit better?

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Sorry, I don't really want to look at the normal, this song is getting on my nerves :s
Good luck with your future mapping!

Doormat

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Doormat 9 years ago

UndeadCapulet wrote:
General
Could you, like, find a bg that isn't a low quality screenshot from the anime.
And while you're at it try to find a 192kbps mp3.

Doormat's Hard
00:12:906 (5,1) - Swap NC fits your patterning better here. the drums from (2,3,4,5,6) have a similar emphasis to them whereas the the new combo has a different emphasis to it due to the finish. i think this is fine the way it currently is since current combo fits the build up here more nicely
00:27:711 (1,2,3) - I think the largest jump should be on 2, the highest pitched piano key. Same for 01:48:750 (1,2,3) - . made the jumps a little larger, although i don't think it's the largest jump, due to how the current pattern is and i don't want to break it too much
00:41:737 (1) - Considering how frequently you map the piano over anything else, I think you should focus on it more in this section. Same for the section at 02:02:776 (1) - . I think you following vocals here doesn't fit with the rest of the map. actually, i think the switch to vocals here gives the map a nice contrast; it's changing from a more upbeat tune to a slower tune, so the change from piano to vocals reflects this nicely imo
Easily the best diff in the set, good work. I love everything from 03:11:347 (1) - to 03:22:256 (1) - :3

thanks for the mod and kind words~ i helped pentori find a better background and higher quality mp3 so hopefully we can get that taken care of.

better mp3 here (note: adjust all timing points by -65. i haven't adjusted my own diff yet)
new background here
updated .osu file here

Pentori

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Pentori 9 years ago

UndeadCapulet wrote:
From my queue:
Insane
improved everything you mentioned
Advanced
did the nc's again
03:19:724 (2) - 1/2 slider would fit better? theres no vocals on 03:19:919
Sorry, I don't really want to look at the normal, this song is getting on my nerves :s
Good luck with your future mapping!

seems like modding this mapset tilted you. feelsbadman

Doormat wrote:
better mp3 here (note: adjust all timing points by -65. i haven't adjusted my own diff yet
new background here
updated .osu file here

arigato doormat-san. ~~i don't see the need to change offset tho~~ jk

UndeadCapulet

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UndeadCapulet 9 years ago

Pentori wrote:
seems like modding this mapset tilted you. feelsbadman

Oh no, I hope I didn't give off that impression, I just don't like this song >.<' I wouldn't have modded your set if I didn't want to. Good luck again with your future mapping, it's hard stuff!

Pentori

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Pentori 9 years ago

UndeadCapulet wrote:
Pentori wrote:
seems like modding this mapset tilted you. feelsbadman
Oh no, I hope I didn't give off that impression, I just don't like this song >.<' I wouldn't have modded your set if I didn't want to. Good luck again with your future mapping, it's hard stuff!

oh haha oke :]

_handholding

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_handholding 9 years ago

dat bg, where do you keep finding these doormat oO

Doormat

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Doormat 9 years ago

Kisses wrote:
dat bg, where do you keep finding these doormat oO

i'm a wizard at background finding :^)

Doormat

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Doormat 9 years ago

so since capulet mentioned NC structure i thought i might as well help out with that since i have nothing better to do for the next four months lmao. i also think hitsounds could use more work, e.g. you’re not really using the finish for cymbal crashes, so here comes a nazi mod i guess

Normal

00:56:478 (1,3) – makes more sense to start the NC on the (3) instead of at the (1); 00:56:478 (1,2) – are a part of the same composition as the previous combo, and 00:57:257 (3) – has an emphasis to it that separates it from the previous combo
00:59:594 (1,2) – swap the NC here as well so that it starts on the downbeat, not before it
01:06:023 (1,2) – swap NCs here
01:08:945 (1,3) – here too
01:12:062 (1,3) – and here as well
01:18:296 (1,2) – swap the NCs here
01:21:413 (1,2) – ^same
01:25:309 (7) – you could put a NC here if you’d want to
01:40:893 (5,1) – swap these NCs
01:44:010 (5) – NC here
02:17:517 (1,3) – swap these NCs
03:22:971 (1,2) – swap the NCs
03:26:478 (3) – downbeat here should be clickable because it’s a different vocal note; i recommend changing reversing the order of 03:26:088 (2,3) – (place the slider at 03:26:088 – and the circle at 03:26:867 - ). also, remove the NC on 03:25:698 (1) – and put an NC at 03:26:867 -
03:28:426 (1) – remove this NC
03:47:906 (1,2) – swap NCs between these notes here
03:51:802 (7) – start a NC here
03:54:140 (1,2) – swap NCs here
03:57:257 (1,2) –^ same
04:00:374 (1,2) – ^same
04:03:880 (6) – downbeat here should be clickable as well in my opinion; maybe just two circles instead of a slider. 04:04:659 (1) – remove this NC and start the NC at 04:04:269 – instead
04:05:439 (3) – downbeat should also be clickable; I wouldn’t use a repeat slider here for this. maybe just use a slider + circle
04:06:997 (6) – make the downbeat clickable; could use a similar suggestion to what i suggested above. remove the NC at 04:07:776 (1) – and start it at 04:07:386 – instead
04:10:114 (1,2) – swap NCs here
04:12:062 (1) – you don’t need a NC here; you could optionally put a NC at 04:13:231 (3) –

Advanced

your NCs are all over the place here, switching from every bar to every two bars, etc. i recommend having NCs every 2 bars, which is how I structured out this nazi mod lol
00:02:322 (1) – remove NC here
00:05:439 (1) - 00:08:556 (1) - ^same
00:19:075 (1) – remove the NC here
00:21:217 (1) – remove the NC here as well
00:22:971 (4,1) – swap NCs here
00:26:088 (3,1) – swap NCs here
00:49:465 (1) – remove NC here
00:52:581 (1) – ^here too
00:56:478 (1,3) – swap NCs
00:59:984 (3) – downbeat should be clickable. remove the NC at 00:59:205 (1) – and start a NC at 01:00:373 instead
01:00:763 (1) – and 01:01:932 (1) – NC isn’t necessary at either of these points; remove them
01:08:166 (1) – remove the NC here
01:14:400 (1) – remove NC here as well
01:18:296 (1,2) – swap NCs here
01:21:413 (1,2) - ^same
01:24:140 (1,3) – ^same
01:40:114 (1) – NC not necessary
01:42:841 (1) - 01:45:568 (1) - 01:48:685 (1) - 01:52:581 (1) - 01:58:815 (1) - 02:01:543 (1) - 02:04:659 (1) - 02:07:387 (1) - 02:10:504 (1) - 02:13:620 (1) - 02:17:517 (1) - ^same
02:21:023 (3) – downbeat here should be clickable imo. remove the NC at 02:20:244 (1) – and start a NC at 02:21:412 – instead
02:22:971 (1) - 02:29:984 (1) -02:32:711 (1) - 02:35:439 (1) – all unnecessary NCs; remove them
02:36:607 (4) – downbeat should be clickable imo. remove NC from 02:37:387 (1) – and start it on 02:36:997 – instead
02:39:335 (1) – unnecessary NC
02:42:452 (1,2) – swap NCs
02:45:178 (1,4) – swap NCs here as well
03:00:374 (1) – and 03:06:607 (1) – unnecessary NCs here
03:01:932 (3,1) –, 03:08:166 (4,1) – and 03:11:088 (1,2) – swap NCs here
03:16:153 (1) – remove NC
03:17:517 (7,1) – swap NCs
03:22:971 (1) – 03:28:426 (1) – 03:34:659 (1) – 03:40:893 (1) – 03:44:789 (1) – 03:50:244 (1) – remove NCs
03:51:606 (4,1) – swap NCs
04:05:828 (1) – 04:09:335 (1) - 04:12:062 (1) – remove NCs
04:08:556 (4) – just my opinion again, but I think the downbeat here should be clickable
04:13:231 (3) – you could optionally put a NC here

Insane

00:08:556 (1,2) – swap NCs
00:10:504 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,1,2) – this section can be divided into every something every three eighth notes, so why not try something like:
1. 00:11:088 (3) – add NC here
2. 00:11:672 (5,1) – swap NCs here
3. 00:12:257 (2) – NC here
4. 00:12:841 (4,1) – swap NCs here
5. 00:13:426 (2) – NC here
00:14:984 (8) – can start a NC here to emphasize the finish
00:30:374 (1,2) - 00:33:491 (1,2) - 00:36:607 (1,2) – swap NCs here
00:47:906 (7) – start a NC here; remove the NC at 00:48:685 (1) -
00:49:270 (3) – start NC here
01:04:854 (5) – NC here
01:09:140 (6,7,1,2,3,4) - stream here looks kind of ugly. maybe you can try stacking the (6,7) over the (1), similarly to what you did for the second chorus.
01:10:504 (1,3) - swap NCs here
01:17:322 (5) - NC here
01:18:295 (1,4) - 01:20:439 (6,1) - 01:42:257 (6,1) - 01:54:724 (7,1) - 02:00:958 (7,1) - swap NCs
01:22:971 (1) – remove this NC to make it consistent with the other choruses
02:07:387 (3) - 02:10:309 (4) - start a NC at these points
02:19:659 (5,1) – should swap NCs here
02:35:439 (6) – should start a NC here
02:36:218 (1,4) – you should swap NCs here
02:37:776 (1) – remove this NC
02:38:361 (4,1) - 02:45:958 (1,2) - 03:01:932 (3,1) - 03:08:166 (5,1) - 03:11:088 (1,2) - 03:15:568 (1,2) - swap NCs
02:44:400 (1) – remove this NC to make it consistent with the other choruses
03:19:075 (1,2,3) – triple here doesn’t make sense since there’s no triple in the music here; delete the (2)
03:25:114 (5,1) – swap the NCs here
03:35:439 (1,3) – swap the NCs here to make it consistent with your other streams
03:43:815 (5,6) – reverse the order of notes here so that the circle is on 03:43:815 – and the slider is on 03:44:010 -. start a NC on the slider
03:44:789 (1) – unnecessary NC imo
03:47:127 (5) – start a NC here
03:51:802 (5,1) – swap NCs
03:53:361 (1,2,3) – these should be in 1/3 time
03:54:140 (1,3) - 03:55:698 (1,2) – swap the NCs here
03:57:257 (1) – delete this NC; it’s unnecessary
03:59:594 (5) – start a NC here; combo is long in comparison to the others
04:04:075 (5,1) – reverse the order here and start the NC on the slider at 04:04:269 –
04:13:231 (8) – you can put a NC here if you want

i’m too lazy to go and do a proper hitsound mod, so i’ll be brief here: you have a finish on some of the cymbal crashes, but chose to ignore others and it just feels weird to me. examples of where you could put more finishes include 00:16:737 -, 00:51:023 -, 00:54:140 -, 01:19:075 -, 02:15:179 -, etc. i didn’t list all of them, but the general idea is that you shouldn’t be ignoring the cymbal crashes in the music; put a finish at the parts in the music where you can hear a cymbal crash.

i also made a few changes to my diff, so here's the update: http://puu.sh/osY2H/af19d3e9fa.zip

Pentori

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Pentori 9 years ago

Doormat wrote:
so since capulet mentioned NC structure i thought i might as well help out with that since i have nothing better to do for the next four months lmao. i also think hitsounds could use more work, e.g. you’re not really using the finish for cymbal crashes, so here comes a nazi mod i guess
Normal
Cleaned up everything here
Advanced
00:56:478 (1,3) – swap NCs don't I need a NC to show SV change? i put ncs on 00:56:478 (1) - and 00:57:257 (1)
02:17:517 (1) - ^same sv change :c
03:01:932 (3,1) –, 03:08:166 (4,1) – swap NCs here sv changes
03:22:971 (1) – remove NCs sv changerino
Insane
03:01:932 (3,1) - 03:08:166 (5,1) - swap NCs sv
03:54:140 (1,3) – swap the NCs here hm cos of sv change i think i'll leave this one
fixed everything that i didn't make a comment on

i’m too lazy to go and do a proper hitsound mod, so i’ll be brief here: you have a finish on some of the cymbal crashes, but chose to ignore others and it just feels weird to me. examples of where you could put more finishes include 00:16:737 -, 00:51:023 -, 00:54:140 -, 01:19:075 -, 02:15:179 -, etc. i didn’t list all of them, but the general idea is that you shouldn’t be ignoring the cymbal crashes in the music; put a finish at the parts in the music where you can hear a cymbal crash.

added some finishes

i also made a few changes to my diff, so here's the update: http://puu.sh/osY2H/af19d3e9fa.zip

doormat daidaidaisuki C:

_handholding

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_handholding 9 years ago

Doormat wrote:
i'm a wizard at background finding :^)

You're a wizard Doormat

UndeadCapulet

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UndeadCapulet 9 years ago

doormat op o.O

_handholding

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_handholding 9 years ago

about the NCs in your advanced that doormat pointed out.

Although its normally a good idea to NC SV changes make a player cautious of the next slider being different its not necessary 100% of the time. If you look at certain sliders like 03:22:971 (1) the difference in SV is really minute, in fact they look almost the same and a player is going to assume its half the length of 03:22:192 (3) , which it is.

That being said the NC before the chorus still kinda makes sense in a way

Pentori

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Topic Starter

Pentori 9 years ago

Kisses wrote:
about the NCs in your advanced that doormat pointed out.

Although its normally a good idea to NC SV changes make a player cautious of the next slider being different its not necessary 100% of the time. If you look at certain sliders like 03:22:971 (1) the difference in SV is really minute, in fact they look almost the same and a player is going to assume its half the length of 03:22:192 (3) , which it is.

That being said the NC before the chorus still kinda makes sense in a way

yeah, understandable, i'll leave it as it is now tho until another modder points out that the nc's aren't needed

Starfy

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Starfy 9 years ago

From M4M Queue

[General]
Fine

[Collab Normal]
-00:29:984 (2) - Why not place the slider lower in order to maintain a better flow?
-00:43:231 (3) - The red anchor of the slider can be placed a bit right to emphasize the shape of the slider
-00:58:815 (4) - The straight flow may be a bit weird, try to move it a bit downward to match the flow made by the slider end of 00:58:036 (2) -
-01:04:659 - I realized that this is a mappable note, I prefer placing a note here to become the connective of the rhythm
-01:13:620 (2) - I think using a simple straight slider here is a better choice because the slider length is kinda short. A curved slider makes the feeling a bit awkward
-01:14:400 (4) - I prefer ctrl+G the slider in order to maintain a better flow, just like this => http://puu.sh/otIp4/875f127df1.jpg
-01:20:439 (4) - Place it a bit upper to make the flow becomes more smooth
-01:24:919 (5,1) - I think the flow can be improved by changing their direction, just like this => http://puu.sh/otIx9/51a7411367.jpg
-02:02:711 (1) - Hmm Did you follow the DS?
-02:45:958 (7) - Cancel NC
-03:08:166 (1) - The wave slider can be improved, maybe like this => http://puu.sh/otIKN/143150945c.jpg
-03:24:530 (2,3,4) - The rhythm is different campared with 00:58:036 (2,3,4) - and 02:19:075 (2,3,4) - , why not unify the rhythm the make the rhythm becomes more consistent?
-03:31:153 (3,4,5,6) - Maybe move them a bit downward? Notes are concentrated at the top of the playfield and it will make newbie players hard to play
-03:40:114 (3) - Place it a bit more left in order to provide a more smooth flow
-03:47:906 (4) - The blanket can be improved

[Advanced]
-00:18:101 (4) - I do believe that placing it a bit lower can maintain a more smooth flow
-00:21:412 - There is a mappable note, why not place a note here?
-00:23:361 (2) - The straight is weird, why not make a traingle pattern just like this => http://puu.sh/otJX5/431006e30a.jpg
-00:46:347 - A mappable note as well
-00:54:919 (3,4,5,6) - Hmm Don't concentrate the notes at the top of the playfield if possible, it is hard to play and messy
-00:58:815 - Mappable vocal note
-01:04:659 - Mappable vocal note
-01:09:724 (1) - Place lower a bit maybe?
-01:24:140 (6) - Consider to place upward to maintain the flow, maybe like this => http://puu.sh/otKhb/cec5926e59.jpg
-01:49:465 (7,8,9) - If you decided to place a note in 01:49:854 (9) - , I suggest you convert 01:49:465 (7,8) - to slider so as to have a better playing experience and easier to read the rhythm
-01:52:971 (6) - Add a clap in the slider head
-02:25:698 (3) - A mappable note
-03:00:958 (4) - The blanket can be improved
-03:02:517 (1) - Not suggested this kind of extreme SV change in Advance difficulty
-03:31:153 - A mappable note
The role of this difficulty seems not that clear

[Doormat's Hard]
-00:03:296 (3,6) - Stack them
-00:22:387 (5) - Place the slider upper can maintain a better blow
-00:24:530 (1) - The blanket can be improved a bit

-01:48:685 (1,2,3,4) - I'm not sure about this since the the jump is a bit .. big for me, hmm maybe consider to reduce the distance a bit? Just like 02:11:478 (3,4,5,6) - This kind of distance is more appropriate imo
-This map is neat and cool!

That's all I can mod and I would like to apolagize that I can't mod all the difficulties
Good luck

Akitoshi

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Joined August 2014

Akitoshi 9 years ago

StarForYou wrote:
From M4M Queue

[General]
Fine

[Collab Normal]
-00:29:984 (2) - Why not place the slider lower in order to maintain a better flow? to stack 00:30:568 (3) - with 00:28:815 (4) -
-00:43:231 (3) - The red anchor of the slider can be placed a bit right to emphasize the shape of the slider ok
-02:02:711 (1) - Hmm Did you follow the DS? ah, maybe it happened after Pentori fixed his part, this is where I started my second part. Fixed.
-02:45:958 (7) - Cancel NC ok
-03:08:166 (1) - The wave slider can be improved, maybe like this => http://puu.sh/otIKN/143150945c.jpg curved even more a bit, not really used same x axis for grey ticks tho

Thanks!

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Pentori

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Joined November 2015

Topic Starter

Pentori 9 years ago

StarForYou wrote:
From M4M Queue

[Collab Normal] leaving akitoshis parts
-00:58:815 (4) - The straight flow may be a bit weird, try to move it a bit downward to match the flow made by the slider end of 00:58:036 (2) - it is already flowing downwards
-01:04:659 - I realized that this is a mappable note, I prefer placing a note here to become the connective of the rhythm currently its mapped to vocals
-01:13:620 (2) - I think using a simple straight slider here is a better choice because the slider length is kinda short. A curved slider makes the feeling a bit awkward sure
-01:14:400 (4) - I prefer ctrl+G the slider in order to maintain a better flow, just like this => http://puu.sh/otIp4/875f127df1.jpg but then it doesn't flow into 5
-01:20:439 (4) - Place it a bit upper to make the flow becomes more smooth fixed
-01:24:919 (5,1) - I think the flow can be improved by changing their direction, just like this => http://puu.sh/otIx9/51a7411367.jpg fixed
-03:24:530 (2,3,4) - The rhythm is different campared with 00:58:036 (2,3,4) - and 02:19:075 (2,3,4) - , why not unify the rhythm the make the rhythm becomes more consistent? fixed
-03:31:153 (3,4,5,6) - Maybe move them a bit downward? Notes are concentrated at the top of the playfield and it will make newbie players hard to play thats not really an issue. plus if i move this down then rip all my patterns
-03:40:114 (3) - Place it a bit more left in order to provide a more smooth flow if i do this then 4 overlaps 2
-03:47:906 (4) - The blanket can be improved its not a blanket

[Advanced]
-00:18:101 (4) - I do believe that placing it a bit lower can maintain a more smooth flow was making a triangle
-00:21:412 - There is a mappable note, why not place a note here? because vocal ends on 00:21:218 (3)
-00:23:361 (2) - The straight is weird, why not make a traingle pattern just like this => http://puu.sh/otJX5/431006e30a.jpg fixed
-00:46:347 - A mappable note as well same as what i said earlier
-00:54:919 (3,4,5,6) - Hmm Don't concentrate the notes at the top of the playfield if possible, it is hard to play and messy fixed
-00:58:815 - Mappable vocal note i dont here vocals? ;c
-01:04:659 - Mappable vocal note ^
-01:09:724 (1) - Place lower a bit maybe? wat 4
-01:24:140 (6) - Consider to place upward to maintain the flow, maybe like this => http://puu.sh/otKhb/cec5926e59.jpg fixed
-01:49:465 (7,8,9) - If you decided to place a note in 01:49:854 (9) - , I suggest you convert 01:49:465 (7,8) - to slider so as to have a better playing experience and easier to read the rhythm this is fine
-01:52:971 (6) - Add a clap in the slider head fixed
-02:25:698 (3) - A mappable note theres no vocals
-03:00:958 (4) - The blanket can be improved fixed
-03:02:517 (1) - Not suggested this kind of extreme SV change in Advance difficulty but its not unrankable
-03:31:153 - A mappable note no vocals
The role of this difficulty seems not that clear mostly for spread reasons, its so that players can play this song with more advanced rhythms without having to play streams or read difficult patterns

That's all I can mod and I would like to apolagize that I can't mod all the difficulties
Good luck

thanks for mod! c:

Pentori

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Topic Starter

Pentori 9 years ago

Akitoshi wrote:

StarForYou wrote:
From M4M Queue

[General]
Fine

[Collab Normal]
-00:29:984 (2) - Why not place the slider lower in order to maintain a better flow? to stack 00:30:568 (3) - with 00:28:815 (4) -
-00:43:231 (3) - The red anchor of the slider can be placed a bit right to emphasize the shape of the slider ok
-02:02:711 (1) - Hmm Did you follow the DS? ah, maybe it happened after Pentori fixed his part, this is where I started my second part. Fixed.
-02:45:958 (7) - Cancel NC ok
-03:08:166 (1) - The wave slider can be improved, maybe like this => http://puu.sh/otIKN/143150945c.jpg curved even more a bit, not really used same x axis for grey ticks tho

Thanks!

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Akitoshi

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Artist:Yukinoshita Yukino (CV.Hayami Saori) & Yuigahama Yui (CV.Touyama Nao)
ArtistUnicode:雪ノ下雪乃（CV.早見沙織）＆由比ヶ浜結衣（CV.東山奈央）
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Doormat

2,050 posts

Joined September 2013

Doormat 9 years ago

StarForYou wrote:
[Doormat's Hard]
-00:03:296 (3,6) - Stack them
-00:22:387 (5) - Place the slider upper can maintain a better blow ???? what do you mean here? no change because i can't understand what you meant. i also think the flow here is fine.
-00:24:530 (1) - The blanket can be improved a bit
-01:48:685 (1,2,3,4) - I'm not sure about this since the the jump is a bit .. big for me, hmm maybe consider to reduce the distance a bit? Just like 02:11:478 (3,4,5,6) - This kind of distance is more appropriate imo mm i think the distance is fine, but i'll keep note of this and change it if others agree that it's too much
-This map is neat and cool!

That's all I can mod and I would like to apolagize that I can't mod all the difficulties
Good luck

no comment = fixed; thanks for the mod.

http://puu.sh/otVdP/baf22290ec.zip

Hpocks

445 posts

Joined January 2015

Hpocks 9 years ago

sorry that I suck at modding. and formatting.

Collab Normal
- A Few distance snap errors according to AImod. They might be false, but they still are probably worth checking out
- If this is a collab, it might be worth mentioning who is doing what part, because that is very common for collab diffs. Considering putting it in the SB. (I cant do SBs)

00:04:270 (1) - Here you use a angled slider but at 00:05:828 - you used another curved one. Based off of 00:01:153 (1,2,3) - , 00:07:387 (1,2,3,4) - , etc, it seems that you are putting your sliders into aligned pairs. However, at the former 00:04:270 (1,2,3) - , you go for an angled and then curved slider. How come? Shouldnt it be consistant with the pairs? Actully, looking further into the song, you do this quite a bit. Ill assume it is intentional, but in the beginning, I suggest you change it.
00:14:984 - This feels strongly clickable. Obviously the spinner wont allow it, but maybe the spinner isnt right for this?
00:59:594 (5) - Nudge to the left so 00:58:815 - flows/points into it better
01:00:374 (1) - ^, but move up instead
01:18:296 (4) - Fix blanket by moving to left 1
01:25:114 - I dont see why this downbeat should have a note on it
01:48:685 - Are you sure you dont want to do a nc?
01:54:724 (3,4) - The flow between these two dont look to hot
01:56:478 (1) - You should nudge this to the left for better angular flow
01:59:594 (1) - You should move up so it has the same relationship in movement during the space as 01:58:815 (5,6) -
02:02:711 - I would considering turning down the sound a bit more here
02:49:464 - Possibly turn volume down so it sounds less protruding.
03:05:049 (1) - Nudge to left for better angular flow
03:24:529 (2,3,4) - Angle looks too sharp and ugly compared the basically the rest of the song
04:01:153 (1,2) - Shouldnt these two sliders be symmetrical
04:04:269 - This seems suddenly difficult in beats and stuff, like having a note first instead of a slider
04:06:217 - NC?

Thanks for the mod you gave me. Srry if this is lazy

Pentori

1,157 posts

Joined November 2015

Topic Starter

Pentori 9 years ago

Hpocks wrote:
sorry that I suck at modding. and formatting.

Collab Normal
- A Few distance snap errors according to AImod. They might be false, but they still are probably worth checking out no there isn't? :c http://puu.sh/ow7LS/2ffa2def8d.png
- If this is a collab, it might be worth mentioning who is doing what part, because that is very common for collab diffs. Considering putting it in the SB. (I cant do SBs) times are mentioned in the description, idk how to do SBs D:

leaving aki's mod parts, but i replied to the volume mods
00:59:594 (5) - Nudge to the left so 00:58:815 - flows/points into it better this would make this 01:01:932 (3) - slider impossible to fit
01:00:374 (1) - ^, but move up instead
01:18:296 (4) - Fix blanket by moving to left 1 should be better now
01:25:114 - I dont see why this downbeat should have a note on it because reasons
01:48:685 - Are you sure you dont want to do a nc? no, this is fine
01:54:724 (3,4) - The flow between these two dont look to hot made it hotter
01:56:478 (1) - You should nudge this to the left for better angular flow fixed
01:59:594 (1) - You should move up so it has the same relationship in movement during the space as 01:58:815 (5,6) - fixed
02:02:711 - I would considering turning down the sound a bit more here volumes are fine
02:49:464 - Possibly turn volume down so it sounds less protruding. ~~i'll change if some1 else suggests this~~
03:24:529 (2,3,4) - Angle looks too sharp and ugly compared the basically the rest of the song fixed
04:01:153 (1,2) - Shouldnt these two sliders be symmetrical fixed
04:04:269 - This seems suddenly difficult in beats and stuff, like having a note first instead of a slider i wanted to emphasize the first two beats, if another modder makes a comment on this, i'll change it
04:06:217 - NC? nah

Thanks for the mod you gave me. Srry if this is lazy

thanks for modding :]

EDIT: 02:49:464 - Possibly turn volume down so it sounds less protruding. actually yeah i'll do this change and apply it to all diffs that don't have this. good suggestion c:

WORSTPOLACKEU

511 posts

Joined May 2013

WORSTPOLACKEU 9 years ago

Insane

00:28:815 (1,2,3,4,1) - I would angle this like by 330 degrees, it gets better flow
00:44:010 (4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,1) - Spacing feels inconsistent
00:49:270 (1) - Big white tick should have a note!
01:09:140 (6,7,1,2,3,4) - This could be executed better!
01:53:556 (2,3,4) - This flow is too linear for me and not consistent in spacing if going linear like this
02:10:309 (1) - Big white tick
02:28:426 (5,6) - space more?
02:36:023 (4,5) - space
02:41:672 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - nice place forf 1/6
03:35:633 - Stream starts here
03:36:899 - note
03:49:367 - note
04:02:614 - note!

Akitoshi

2,687 posts

Joined August 2014

Akitoshi 9 years ago

Hpocks wrote:
00:04:270 (1) - Here you use a angled slider but at 00:05:828 - you used another curved one. Based off of 00:01:153 (1,2,3) - , 00:07:387 (1,2,3,4) - , etc, it seems that you are putting your sliders into aligned pairs. However, at the former 00:04:270 (1,2,3) - , you go for an angled and then curved slider. How come? Shouldnt it be consistant with the pairs? Actully, looking further into the song, you do this quite a bit. Ill assume it is intentional, but in the beginning, I suggest you change it. ok then
00:14:984 - This feels strongly clickable. Obviously the spinner wont allow it, but maybe the spinner isnt right for this? it's fine as is imo, but let me hear other opinions aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa
03:05:049 (1) - Nudge to left for better angular flow fixed I think (I hope it's better now)

Thanks!

aaaaaa hitori naite iteeeeee

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Pentori

1,157 posts

Joined November 2015

Topic Starter

Pentori 9 years ago

WORSTPOLACKEU wrote:
Insane

02:41:672 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - nice place forf 1/6 used to be 1/6 here but it was difficult to pick up on the change if reading it for the first time
03:35:633 - Stream starts here what i have works too tho
03:36:899 - note this is less of a modding issue more of a personal preference, leaving these
03:49:367 - note
04:02:614 - note!

fixed everything except the ones listed above, thanks for mod!

DaxMasterix

Former osu!catch Champion: 2013

1,562 posts

Joined February 2010

DaxMasterix 9 years ago

Hi! M4M From my Queue! Make sure to select one of my maps!

GENERAL

I think "(CV:) should be better IMO (Instead of CV.)

Collab Normal:

00:37:776 (4,1) - I think this should looks better like this
01:06:607 (1) - Maybe better like this
01:25:309 (1) - Move this 1 grid to the right
01:47:711 (2) - Move this to x:12 y:104 to improve the flow
03:32:127 (5) - This is touching the lifebar, can you change it a little?
03:40:114 (3,4) - Same with this, like this
03:43:815 (4) - This Slider so suddenly? I say, the only one on the diff? I recommend you to change it cuz the consistency
03:50:243 (3) - Maybe better like this

Advanced:

00:43:620 (6) - Maybe better like this
01:45:568 (4,5) - I preffer something like this
03:38:165 (4) - Why not this

Doormat's Hard:

00:18:685 (3,4,5) - Maybe better like this
02:21:412 (1) - Maybe better like this
04:05:828 (1) - Maybe better like this
04:09:334 (2,3,4) - I don't know if this is ok, Change all the consistecy you maked in your diff, maybe circle triplet would be better

Insane:

00:05:244 (5) - I think this object should be 2 circles like 00:02:127 (5,6) -
01:34:659 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1) - Why not make a star or something
01:42:257 (1) - Would be better if this slider start in a white tick, the next one
03:20:633 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1) - Same, why no make a good figure with this
04:09:530 (3,4) - Add the triple pls

Kibbleru's Insane:

00:47:711 (1,1) - I don't think this fits very good IMO
03:37:971 (x) - Why the "nothing" here

Okay! That's all! Good luck with your map

Doormat

2,050 posts

Joined September 2013

Doormat 9 years ago

DaxMasterix wrote:
Hi! M4M From my Queue! Make sure to select one of my maps!
GENERAL
I think "(CV:) should be better IMO (Instead of CV.)
not my business, but the album cover lists it as (CV.) so it should be fine

Doormat's Hard:
00:18:685 (3,4,5) - Maybe better like this no, i wanted movement here to be circular like it's spiraling from left to right
02:21:412 (1) - Maybe better like this nice
04:05:828 (1) - Maybe better like this i think the current shape is fine; i wanted flow here to curve inwards
04:09:334 (2,3,4) - I don't know if this is ok, Change all the consistecy you maked in your diff, maybe circle triplet would be better i've used triples at the end of sliders before this point, but it's usually connecting one slider to another, unlike this one. i think it's fine for now, but i'm open to changing this if others feel this should be changed

thanks for mod~ http://puu.sh/oCK2V/543ed8aa15.zip

Pentori

1,157 posts

Joined November 2015

Topic Starter

Pentori 9 years ago

DaxMasterix wrote:
Hi! M4M From my Queue! Make sure to select one of my maps!
GENERAL
I think "(CV:) should be better IMO (Instead of CV.)
^ what doormat said

Collab Normal:
00:37:776 (4,1) - I think this should looks better like this
01:06:607 (1) - Maybe better like this nah i don't like the look of that
01:25:309 (1) - Move this 1 grid to the right fixed
01:47:711 (2) - Move this to x:12 y:104 to improve the flow fixed
03:32:127 (5) - This is touching the lifebar, can you change it a little? fixed, theres quite a bit of overlap but hopefully it's ok
03:40:114 (3,4) - Same with this, like this fixed
03:43:815 (4) - This Slider so suddenly? I say, the only one on the diff? I recommend you to change it cuz the consistency fixed
03:50:243 (3) - Maybe better like this fixed
Advanced:
00:43:620 (6) - Maybe better like this i smoothened out the curve a little, the way i have now is fine
01:45:568 (4,5) - I preffer something like this okay
03:38:165 (4) - Why not this because i want to flow upwards, plus its blanketed on the other end
Insane:
00:05:244 (5) - I think this object should be 2 circles like 00:02:127 (5,6) - its ok as is because theres a lot of jumps after it
01:34:659 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1) - Why not make a star or something cos you dont really notice it when playing because of the AR, plus it plays nicer to have symmetry
01:42:257 (1) - Would be better if this slider start in a white tick, the next one it follows vocals
03:20:633 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1) - Same, why no make a good figure with this like i said with the other one :p
04:09:530 (3,4) - Add the triple pls oops, good find!

Okay! That's all! Good luck with your map

thanks for modding! i'll get to yours now :3

Akitoshi

2,687 posts

Joined August 2014

Akitoshi 9 years ago

No fix on my part since that slider isn't really weird due to putting NC at 00:38:556 (1) -
And Hey my 666th post mMmmmMmmMm

Electoz

Beatmap Nominator

1,899 posts

Joined May 2015

Electoz 9 years ago

Tbh I'm starting to see Akitoshi's diff everywhere oh come on

[Collab Normal]

[Akitoshi]

00:13:230 - Missing clap.
00:09:724 (5,6) - Try this rhythm instead if you're going for that piano sound.
00:11:088 - This thing stands out cuz it's the only finish that isn't clickable in 00:10:504 (1,2,3,4,5,1) . Just use this rhythm 00:11:672 (3,4) instead of 00:10:504 (1,2) .
00:35:438 - Finish isn't needed here cuz there's no cymbal sound here in the song.
00:22:192 (5,6) - The stack here isn't emphasized properly cuz the stronger beat 00:22:192 (5) is on top. My suggestion here is either Ctrl+G the rhythm or just unstack them.
00:36:997 - It's a downbeat where vocal and a strong piano sound landed here so I prefer sth clickable.
00:38:556 (1) - Ctrl+G and Ctrl+H on this one to improve symmetry.
00:43:231 (3) - Try a circle + 1/1 slider instead of this? Because a new stanza starts on 00:43:620 so it's kinda weird to have a new stanza starting in the middle of that slider.
02:06:997 (3) - Move this to 02:07:191 pls cuz the sound is so damn obvious on that beat while there's nothing landed here.
02:26:088 (4,5) - Sounds a looottt better when you move these two to 02:25:893 cuz right now it plays weird when you skipped vocal on 02:25:893 .
02:45:958 (7) - Actually I prefer the rhythm on 01:24:919 (5,1) cuz that way downbeat will be clickable.
02:42:451 - 02:43:230 - Add finish?
03:10:504 (4,5) - Prefer a slider instead of these and add a circle on 03:11:088 cuz the rhythm is start building up here so it's a bit off to just using 1/1 rhythm here.

[Pentori]

01:03:880 - Add clap?
01:08:555 - Not a good idea to leave some beats empty in kiai, even though it's in between stanzas you should still map this one.
01:13:620 (2,1) - Would be nice if these can be stacked without making things messy.
01:22:191 - 01:23:360 - Maybe add finish idk.
01:42:257 (3) - Not a fan of this one cuz this skipped many beats and vocal didn't last throughout the whole slider, this 01:43:425 should be clickable too since it's an indication for a new stanza, I would just remove the latter half of that repeat slider and map normally.
01:47:711 (2,3) - aaaa so empty map sth between these pls.
01:55:698 (5,6) - Actually I prefer the rhythm you did on 00:34:659 (5,6) - cuz that way emphasizes vocal better imo, also it's a bit weird when the vocal lands differently on 01:55:698 (5,6) - 01:58:815 (5,6) but you ended up using the same rhythm on both of these.
03:28:815 (5) - I don't hear anything landed on 03:29:010 and I think just a circle here gives a better emphasis with 1/1 rhythm.
03:41:477 - Add a circle here cuz the rhythm intensity is not dropping yet until 03:42:451 . Kinda weird to use 1/1 rhythm here when the intensity is different compared to 03:42:452 (1,2) .
03:46:932 (3) - You can break this into a 1/1 slider+circle cuz the vocal only last until 03:47:321 .
04:02:711 - Should be clickable imo
04:03:491 (4,5,1,2) - This rhythm? Because this way the finish sound on 04:04:269 (1) will be emphasized properly.
04:07:971 - Imo there should be a slider starting from here.

Idk I think I spent too much energy on Normal so other diffs might be a bit short lel

[Advanced]

Use AR6 pls AR7 is too fast imo considering how your SV isn't that much different from Normal.
00:29:010 - Shouldn't be left empty cuz you already emphasized that sound all the way with 00:28:231 (3,4) .
00:33:685 (3,5) - Ew doesn't look good when that sliderhead is overlapped.
00:52:971 (6,7) - Idk if it's just me but the flow is pretty awkward here.
01:01:153 (3,4) - Actually you can Ctrl+G rhythm this cuz that clap sound on 01:01:542 will become clickable. Same applies to 02:23:750 (6,7) .
01:25:308 - 02:46:347 - Should be sth clickable like what you did in Normal.
01:49:465 (7,8,9) - Ehhh the movement with that stack is kinda awkward tbh I would just use a 1/2 repeat slider instead of these.
03:08:750 (1) - Better end this on 03:10:503 cuz the rhythm is starting to change from 03:10:698 onward so maybe add a circle there.

[Doormat's Hard]

00:57:841 (2,3) - 00:59:400 (2,3) - Idk maybe it's just me but the angle of the flow on these places is kinda bugging me.
01:48:296 (3,1) - Isn't the spacing kinda overdone here?
Well tbh putting streams in Hard is pretty questionable and you know that so whatever.

Good luck~

Pentori

1,157 posts

Joined November 2015

Topic Starter

Pentori 9 years ago

Electoz wrote:
Tbh I'm starting to see Akitoshi's diff everywhere oh come on akitoshi is a gd machine c:

[Collab Normal] thank you so much for dividing it ♥

[Pentori]
01:03:880 - Add clap? fixed
01:08:555 - Not a good idea to leave some beats empty in kiai, even though it's in between stanzas you should still map this one. fixed
01:13:620 (2,1) - Would be nice if these can be stacked without making things messy. fixed
01:22:191 - 01:23:360 - Maybe add finish idk. mm nah i leave them for accented beats/cymbal crashes
01:42:257 (3) - Not a fan of this one cuz this skipped many beats and vocal didn't last throughout the whole slider, this 01:43:425 should be clickable too since it's an indication for a new stanza, I would just remove the latter half of that repeat slider and map normally. fixed
01:47:711 (2,3) - aaaa so empty map sth between these pls. fixed
01:55:698 (5,6) - Actually I prefer the rhythm you did on 00:34:659 (5,6) - cuz that way emphasizes vocal better imo, also it's a bit weird when the vocal lands differently on 01:55:698 (5,6) - 01:58:815 (5,6) but you ended up using the same rhythm on both of these. 00:34:659 (5,6) - was aki's rhythm but yeah i get what you mean. fixed
03:28:815 (5) - I don't hear anything landed on 03:29:010 and I think just a circle here gives a better emphasis with 1/1 rhythm. 03:27:257 (2) - serves the same function as this, so i would have to change both which makes the gameplay really monotone
03:41:477 - Add a circle here cuz the rhythm intensity is not dropping yet until 03:42:451 . Kinda weird to use 1/1 rhythm here when the intensity is different compared to 03:42:452 (1,2) . fixed
03:46:932 (3) - You can break this into a 1/1 slider+circle cuz the vocal only last until 03:47:321 . ya, good point. also did it to 03:43:815 (3) . fixed
04:02:711 - Should be clickable imo it would be weird if i tried to follow vocals and let this be clickable
04:03:491 (4,5,1,2) - This rhythm? Because this way the finish sound on 04:04:269 (1) will be emphasized properly. nice. i like this
04:07:971 - Imo there should be a slider starting from here. the rhythm would be too similar to the parts before it. fine as it is
Idk I think I spent too much energy on Normal so other diffs might be a bit short lel

[Advanced]

Use AR6 pls AR7 is too fast imo considering how your SV isn't that much different from Normal. oke
00:29:010 - Shouldn't be left empty cuz you already emphasized that sound all the way with 00:28:231 (3,4) . but i like the gap after a clap :c
00:33:685 (3,5) - Ew doesn't look good when that sliderhead is overlapped. fixed
00:52:971 (6,7) - Idk if it's just me but the flow is pretty awkward here. fixed
01:01:153 (3,4) - Actually you can Ctrl+G rhythm this cuz that clap sound on 01:01:542 will become clickable. Same applies to 02:23:750 (6,7) . fixed
01:25:308 - 02:46:347 - Should be sth clickable like what you did in Normal. fixed
01:49:465 (7,8,9) - Ehhh the movement with that stack is kinda awkward tbh I would just use a 1/2 repeat slider instead of these. did a 1/2 slider + circle
03:08:750 (1) - Better end this on 03:10:503 cuz the rhythm is starting to change from 03:10:698 onward so maybe add a circle there. i think the note density would be too high for a slower section of the song
Good luck~

thank you electroz!!

awesome mod. love your work

Akitoshi

2,687 posts

Joined August 2014

Akitoshi 9 years ago

Electoz wrote:
Tbh I'm starting to see Akitoshi's diff everywhere oh come on Akitoshit's normal everywhere xd

[Collab Normal]

[Akitoshi]
00:13:230 - Missing clap.
00:09:724 (5,6) - Try this rhythm instead if you're going for that piano sound.
00:11:088 - This thing stands out cuz it's the only finish that isn't clickable in 00:10:504 (1,2,3,4,5,1) . Just use this rhythm 00:11:672 (3,4) instead of 00:10:504 (1,2) . I did something else based on your idea xd
00:35:438 - Finish isn't needed here cuz there's no cymbal sound here in the song.
00:22:192 (5,6) - The stack here isn't emphasized properly cuz the stronger beat 00:22:192 (5) is on top. My suggestion here is either Ctrl+G the rhythm or just unstack them. this was how I map the Circle > Slider 1/2 on normal diff, daz why I added some edgy sliderpoint on 00:22:387 (6) - for emphasize the vocal instead
00:36:997 - It's a downbeat where vocal and a strong piano sound landed here so I prefer sth clickable.
00:38:556 (1) - Ctrl+G and Ctrl+H on this one to improve symmetry. I re-mapped dis part due to the fix on the suggestion above
00:43:231 (3) - Try a circle + 1/1 slider instead of this? Because a new stanza starts on 00:43:620 so it's kinda weird to have a new stanza starting in the middle of that slider.
02:06:997 (3) - Move this to 02:07:191 pls cuz the sound is so damn obvious on that beat while there's nothing landed here.
02:26:088 (4,5) - Sounds a looottt better when you move these two to 02:25:893 cuz right now it plays weird when you skipped vocal on 02:25:893 . I didn't skipped lol, maybe keep this as now since it fits as is.
02:45:958 (7) - Actually I prefer the rhythm on 01:24:919 (5,1) cuz that way downbeat will be clickable.
02:42:451 - 02:43:230 - Add finish?
03:10:504 (4,5) - Prefer a slider instead of these and add a circle on 03:11:088 cuz the rhythm is start building up here so it's a bit off to just using 1/1 rhythm here. 02:58:815 (1,2,1,2,3,1,2,1) - is enough time to notice that pattern imo, and I don't think that slider there isn't fit as well.

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Makeli

932 posts

Joined October 2013

Makeli 9 years ago

hi!!!!!!!

kibbleru

00:02:906 (1) - kinda ehh imo that you used a smaller spacing on these sounds that are imo more powerful
00:04:270 (1) - tbh kinda semi-inconsistent to use a slider here since you didn't use one at the start. And since the sounds are the same so aaaaaaaa
00:07:387 (1) - i'm just gonna assume that you mapped the guitar with this thing. 00:08:360 - here the guitar does stuff so the extended slider is kinda ehh here
00:29:984 (3) - your wave sliders look ugly
00:59:984 (7) - tbh imo you should emphasize this with more spacing than 00:59:789 (6) - cause (7) is a snare and it has those powerful vocals and stuff
01:23:750 (1) - if this was placed at like x:194 y:122 or something along those lines this would feel a lot better to play
01:54:919 (1) - wouldn't you want to emphasize this with spacing cause of the sound on that downbeat?
02:02:711 (1) - tbh i have no idea what you're mapping here
02:24:335 (7,8,1) - why did you give this such small spacing when at 01:50:049 (4,5,1) - you gave this like a fullscreen jump and the kiai is like 666x times stronger than the verse
02:40:114 (1) - pls give the straight part a curve too looks kinda ehh right now
03:35:828 (3,4,1) - kinda random to give those kicksliders such high spacing and then the powerful downbeat doesn't even get a flowbreak for emphasis
03:37:776 (1) - this 1/1 break felt kinda awkward since you didn't have this before at all. There is also a hold sound here so 1/2 slider would've worked fine
04:13:036 (1) - why would you end this slider on a powerful sound like that?

insane

00:03:296 (3,5) - i would personally want to avoid overlaps like this. Check for other overlaps or some cramped stuff since just spacing them out and giving each circle and slider some space will make your map look so much better. However 00:04:465 (2,4) - this type of overlaps are cool!
00:06:413 (5,7) - here you should overlap these more since now it looks kinda lame tbh.
00:15:081 (1) - silence spinnerend since there is no sound there
00:19:854 (1) - imo you should emphasize sounds like this with more spacing
00:21:997 (4,5,6) - this flow felt kinda unnatural to play
00:33:685 (1) - kinda triggers me that you decided to skip that super powerful downbeat to follow the vocals. You actually do this a lot
00:45:374 (3) - give this some spacing as the vocals get more powerful here
01:09:334 (1) - nc'ing here is kinda random since NC's usually indicate that something new is happening be it a new rythm in the song or a new pattern whatever but you just have a normal stream here.
01:34:659 (1) - tbh mapping these as sliders would've been a better idea imo since as i don't think insane players are really expecting or prepared for some 1/3 stuff to appear suddenly
01:52:971 (6) - missing clap i think
02:08:945 (1) - mapping the vocals in this part where the drums are doing some cool stuff is pretty much a turnoff for me
02:30:374 (1) - remember the stream thing i mentioned earlier? Here the NC is okay because of the way you mapped it (and I think the song even kinda supports this (I still wouldn't map this like you mapped it)). Why not make both of these streams consistent with eachother?
02:36:023 (4,5) - you don't map a triple where there is actually a triple in the song and then you overmap one at 02:36:802 (6,7,1) - D:
03:06:607 (1,2) - don't let the hitcircles overlap
03:20:633 (1) - the thing i mentioned earlier
03:50:244 (1) - sharper angle would flow better

As you go trough your map try to find similar kind of things and it will make your map a lot cleaner and polished and stuff. Not saying that this is bad, this is definitely good and should be easily rankable with a few more mods.

doormat

00:14:010 (2) - this whole thing is kinda ehh since linear stuff generally feels kind stupid to play and imo this doesn't really fit the map since you have a lot of sharp angles here wooo
00:47:906 (1) - emphasis pls. 00:49:465 (1) - too and 02:10:504 (1) -
01:48:685 (1,2,3) - isn't this spacing kinda umm... too big? Feels kinda like the spacing in insane
03:01:932 (1) - forgot a whistle?
04:02:517 (6,1) - why didn't you map this as a triple DDD:

some stuff repeats in the map like a few of those emphasis pls things weeee

sorry but i'm gonna end my mod here since this song kinda burned me out by being boring DDD:
and tbh i'm probably not gonna be much help on those lower difficulties

polunochnik

123 posts

Joined June 2013

polunochnik 9 years ago

collab normal

1. 00:27:648 (2) - delete this slider
2. 00:28:036 add slider here
3.move all stack of sladers to the left.

01:48:685 - same as previous
01:40:893(1) - why this slider suddenly different from the others?

advanced
00:27:646 (1,2) - replace by slider like 00:28:230
01:48:685 - same as previous

Doormat's hard
00:14:948(1) - move this button under button 00:14:010 (2)
01:48:685 - 01:49:854 - better to do it as well as 00:27:646 - 00:28:815

Insane
02:30:203 - this stream would be better be like the others
01:10:503(3) - again, why this slider suddenly different from the others?

Kibbleru's Insane
00:20:246 (2) - make this slider rounded
01:02:906(5) - move this button to the left, on the blue tick
01:02:581(4) - same as previous
01:49:075 - 01:49:854 - this part is better suited for jumps without triple stacks
03:41:477 (4, 1) - 3 buttons here should be better

I hope I could help!
Good luck!

Pentori

1,157 posts

Joined November 2015

Topic Starter

Pentori 9 years ago

Maakkeli wrote:
hi!!!!!!! heyaa ;^)

insane
00:03:296 (3,5) - i would personally want to avoid overlaps like this. Check for other overlaps or some cramped stuff since just spacing them out and giving each circle and slider some space will make your map look so much better. However 00:04:465 (2,4) - this type of overlaps are cool! i guess it comes down to player preference. will change if another modder points it out
01:34:659 (1) - tbh mapping these as sliders would've been a better idea imo since as i don't think insane players are really expecting or prepared for some 1/3 stuff to appear suddenly for the one during kiai time i used a slider bcos the rhythm is mostly 1/2 but here i reckon the player has enough time to pick up on the 1/3
02:08:945 (1) - mapping the vocals in this part where the drums are doing some cool stuff is pretty much a turnoff for me i think its fine. the hitsounds still capture the essence of what the drums are doing
As you go trough your map try to find similar kind of things and it will make your map a lot cleaner and polished and stuff. Not saying that this is bad, this is definitely good and should be easily rankable with a few more mods.

fixed everything mentioned other than ones stated above ^ and also went through and corrected a lot of ignored downbeats

sorry but i'm gonna end my mod here since this song kinda burned me out by being boring DDD: i still love you c; c; xd meme kek kms
and tbh i'm probably not gonna be much help on those lower difficulties

arigato anata mod my mapu des

polunochnik wrote:
Insane
02:30:203 - this stream would be better be like the others

no changes except for this one ^ which was mentioned in mkl's mod, thanks for modding!

Battle

2,865 posts

Joined February 2014

Battle 9 years ago

q

[Normal]
00:22:192 (5,6) - So like, this is the only time where you stack it when the 1/2 is consistent so ya. On a side note, I find this kinda awkward due to the fact that you made 6 a 1/1 to go along w/ vocals, and sacrificed the consistent beat you had, ignoring 00:22:581 - whearas in the measure just before it, you didn't make 00:21:218 (3) - a 3/2 slider to go along with vocals so it's like aaaa
00:27:646 (2) - I mean, if you really wanted to make it follow music a bit better, you could add a single tap on 00:27:646 - and move the 1/2 repeat to 00:27:841 - . It's pretty dense if you do this, but it really can't be helped since like the high pitched w/e starts on 00:27:841 - and the downbeat is completely seperated from the other stuff so ya, not like it would raise sr much at all (this is more of a structural thing so ya, this would apply to the tohers like this)
00:28:815 (4,1,2) - Maybe blanket 2 instead of having it symmetrical cuz it's all overlapping and stuff and that's gross (it's more noticeable for people who have snaking sliders or w/e that option is called off)
01:38:556 (2) - Meh, this 1/2 repeat isn't really following anything too remarkable in the bg of the song, so why not just make it a 1/1 to follow vocals better?
04:12:646 (5) - mm don't really get why you chose to use 1/2 repeat here when it could just be a 1/1 to go along with more prominent music but w/eee

[Advanced]
00:20:633 (2,3,4) - Really disagree with what you chose to follow here tbh, I don't really see what you're follow cuz like, the vocal is held, the density of this completely drops from what it was from the start (other things were fine cuz it followed vocals and stuff). I dunno, the pause just feels kinda random since there is still plenty going on in the music, and it just cuts short here
00:33:685 (3,4,5,6) - Pretty ambiguous pattern here, 3's flow looks like it's going to 5 rather than 4, and players might not really know how much delay there is to press 5 due to like, the pattern looking awk. It looks really nice visually, but play-wise, real ambiguous
00:51:607 (2,3) - Any particular reason you chose to stop flow right here?
00:54:919 (3,4) - uh, don't really think you should use 3/4 here, considering the last difficulty was extremely light density wise and introduced a few bits of 1/2, I feel like it should be like, hard's job to itrod
02:00:179 (2,3) - Meh, doesn't really seem like it's a good play to stop flow, considering the music. It makes more sense w/ 02:00:763 (4,5) - cuz the vocals but here it kinda just feels random
02:14:594 (7,8) - Don't really think that this strong vocal should be stacked, but that's like your call lol
03:02:516 - Do you really feel that it's appropriate to jump from .9x SV to .5x SV on an Advanced difficulty?
03:08:750 - ,
So like, why is it that the beginning is basically carrying all the difficulty in this difficulty cuz like, I was expecting for that kind of density to re-appear during the chorus/kiai times but it never really happened in the end. It just feels really awk for all the difficulty to be riding on the start of the song

like y

[Hard]
00:22:971 (1) - Add more emphasis to the vocal?
00:47:711 (5,1) - 00:49:270 (4,1) - Music is starting to ramp up and that's kinda nullified by the fact that these r stacked lo
01:09:237 - I dunno the stream starts at like 01:09:140 - , and this being empty is like zzz
01:40:309 (5) - aaa this slider end has like, a vocal on it yyyyy and it's like the end of the word that was started at 01:40:114 (4) - zzz (at least I assume cuz I don't speak japanese lo)
02:30:276 - z
02:46:348 (1) - I don't really get why is basically all the diffs but the normal this doesn't have any hitsound when a soft finish would go well here but o well, u should poke pentoririr to put a hitsound here lo
03:11:088 (5,1) - Why stack :/\/\/\/
03:12:452 (1) - Would be better if it were singletap then 1/2 slider or sth cuz 03:12:646 - really strong
03:15:568 (3) - CLickskskck 03:15:763 -

((
03:34:659 (1) - smae tbhhbh ^

my song is only like 9:44 so ima stop lo

Doormat

2,050 posts

Joined September 2013

Doormat 9 years ago

electoz not electroz

Electoz wrote:
[Doormat's Hard]

00:57:841 (2,3) - 00:59:400 (2,3) - Idk maybe it's just me but the angle of the flow on these places is kinda bugging me. mm i think it's fine but i'll change it if somebody else brings this up
01:48:296 (3,1) - Isn't the spacing kinda overdone here? yeah, got this quite a bit; changed it back to what it was originally
Well tbh putting streams in Hard is pretty questionable and you know that so whatever. they're not too frequent and they make sense with the music wherever there is one of these. they're also pretty short, being 5 notes, so i think it should be fine for the most part

maakkeli

Maakkeli wrote:
hi!!!!!!!
doormat
00:14:010 (2) - this whole thing is kinda ehh since linear stuff generally feels kind stupid to play and imo this doesn't really fit the map since you have a lot of sharp angles here wooo i think it's fine; this pattern captures the buildup here nicely imo
00:47:906 (1) - emphasis pls. 00:49:465 (1) - too and 02:10:504 (1) - actually, these notes are stacked with the previous note to put more emphasis on those spots; i think it's fine
01:48:685 (1,2,3) - isn't this spacing kinda umm... too big? Feels kinda like the spacing in insane ye fixed already
03:01:932 (1) - forgot a whistle? i blame hitsound copier
04:02:517 (6,1) - why didn't you map this as a triple DDD: i wanted to go for a similar feel to 01:23:556 (6,1) - and 02:44:594 (6,1) - so that's why no triple
some stuff repeats in the map like a few of those emphasis pls things weeee

poluno

polunochnik wrote:
Doormat's hard
00:14:948(1) - move this button under button 00:14:010 (2) they're intentionally not stacked; distance between notes in this pentagon is increasing to emphasize the buildup here
01:48:685 - 01:49:854 - better to do it as well as 00:27:646 - 00:28:815 drums are slightly different at 01:48:685 - and at 00:27:646 - which is why these patterns are different.

battle

Battle wrote:
[Hard]
00:22:971 (1) - Add more emphasis to the vocal? it already has a slightly higher DS, but i tried to make this more apparent
00:47:711 (5,1) - 00:49:270 (4,1) - Music is starting to ramp up and that's kinda nullified by the fact that these r stacked lo was intentional; refer to maakkeli's reply
01:09:237 - I dunno the stream starts at like 01:09:140 - , and this being empty is like zzz slider --> stream transition is pretty difficult for this diff, so i wanted to avoid that altogether; i think the current setup is more appropriate for a Hard
01:40:309 (5) - aaa this slider end has like, a vocal on it yyyyy and it's like the end of the word that was started at 01:40:114 (4) - zzz (at least I assume cuz I don't speak japanese lo) combos here switch between vocals --> piano --> vocals --> piano, so i think it's fine. if people think this is a stupid idea i'll change it
02:30:276 - z zzz
02:46:348 (1) - I don't really get why is basically all the diffs but the normal this doesn't have any hitsound when a soft finish would go well here but o well, u should poke pentoririr to put a hitsound here lo yeah i think pentori forgot to put a finish here
03:11:088 (5,1) - Why stack :/\/\/\/ because i'm stupid
03:12:452 (1) - Would be better if it were singletap then 1/2 slider or sth cuz 03:12:646 - really strong i think the repeat sliders here work nicely because each repeat slider is essentially the same three piano notes, but i'm open to changing this if others feel this should be changed.
03:15:568 (3) - CLickskskck 03:15:763 - (( pianooaioaoi thoughghghuhgu
03:34:659 (1) - smae tbhhbh ^ vocalslslscs thoughghghuhgu

thanks for the mods~
http://puu.sh/oK7ls/3798a01a98.zip

Electoz

Beatmap Nominator

1,899 posts

Joined May 2015

Electoz 9 years ago

Battle I miss your short mods

Pentori

1,157 posts

Joined November 2015

Topic Starter

Pentori 9 years ago

Battle wrote:
q

[Normal]
01:38:556 (2) - Meh, this 1/2 repeat isn't really following anything too remarkable in the bg of the song, so why not just make it a 1/1 to follow vocals better? i mean its not a huge issue. i did it for variance but if others complain about consistency and stuffs i'll change it
04:12:646 (5) - mm don't really get why you chose to use 1/2 repeat here when it could just be a 1/1 to go along with more prominent music but w/eee okeke

[Advanced]
00:20:633 (2,3,4) - Really disagree with what you chose to follow here tbh, I don't really see what you're follow cuz like, the vocal is held, the density of this completely drops from what it was from the start (other things were fine cuz it followed vocals and stuff). I dunno, the pause just feels kinda random since there is still plenty going on in the music, and it just cuts short here f i x e d
00:33:685 (3,4,5,6) - Pretty ambiguous pattern here, 3's flow looks like it's going to 5 rather than 4, and players might not really know how much delay there is to press 5 due to like, the pattern looking awk. It looks really nice visually, but play-wise, real ambiguous fixed
00:51:607 (2,3) - Any particular reason you chose to stop flow right here? fixed
00:54:919 (3,4) - uh, don't really think you should use 3/4 here, considering the last difficulty was extremely light density wise and introduced a few bits of 1/2, I feel like it should be like, hard's job to itrod fixed
02:00:179 (2,3) - Meh, doesn't really seem like it's a good play to stop flow, considering the music. It makes more sense w/ 02:00:763 (4,5) - cuz the vocals but here it kinda just feels random fixed
02:14:594 (7,8) - Don't really think that this strong vocal should be stacked, but that's like your call lol fixed
03:02:516 - Do you really feel that it's appropriate to jump from .9x SV to .5x SV on an Advanced difficulty? gonna remap this section
03:08:750 - ,
So like, why is it that the beginning is basically carrying all the difficulty in this difficulty cuz like, I was expecting for that kind of density to re-appear during the chorus/kiai times but it never really happened in the end. It just feels really awk for all the difficulty to be riding on the start of the song
like y

you bring up a good point here. i'll look for places during kiai to increase note density since it would be difficult to lower note density in the beginning without it feeling severely undermapped (but that being said i compressed some notes into reverse sliders). also what program does that graph o:

[Hard]
02:46:348 (1) - I don't really get why is basically all the diffs but the normal this doesn't have any hitsound when a soft finish would go well here but o well, u should poke pentoririr to put a hitsound here lo bcos im shitsounder. did u mean whistle cos i don't think a finish goes well here. anyways, i'll add whistle to all diffs

my song is only like 9:44 so ima stop lo

Battle

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Joined February 2014

Battle 9 years ago

Program: t/359381&start=0

Pentori

1,157 posts

Joined November 2015

Topic Starter

Pentori 9 years ago

Battle wrote:
Program: t/359381&start=0

tyvm

also, looking better i guess

Akitoshi

2,687 posts

Joined August 2014

Akitoshi 9 years ago

polunochnik wrote:
collab normal
1. 00:27:648 (2) - delete this slider
2. 00:28:036 add slider here

Battle wrote:
[Normal]
00:22:192 (5,6) - So like, this is the only time where you stack it when the 1/2 is consistent so ya. On a side note, I find this kinda awkward due to the fact that you made 6 a 1/1 to go along w/ vocals, and sacrificed the consistent beat you had, ignoring 00:22:581 - whearas in the measure just before it, you didn't make 00:21:218 (3) - a 3/2 slider to go along with vocals so it's like aaaa fixed in a own way idk if it's better but ye
00:27:646 (2) - I mean, if you really wanted to make it follow music a bit better, you could add a single tap on 00:27:646 - and move the 1/2 repeat to 00:27:841 - . It's pretty dense if you do this, but it really can't be helped since like the high pitched w/e starts on 00:27:841 - and the downbeat is completely seperated from the other stuff so ya, not like it would raise sr much at all (this is more of a structural thing so ya, this would apply to the tohers like this)
00:28:815 (4,1,2) - Maybe blanket 2 instead of having it symmetrical cuz it's all overlapping and stuff and that's gross (it's more noticeable for people who have snaking sliders or w/e that option is called off) nerfed by the prev. mod lel

No reply = fixed
Thanks :^)

w

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Rtyzen

511 posts

Joined March 2013

Rtyzen 9 years ago

sup, m4m xd

[Advanced]

00:10:503 - Increase volume maybe idk
00:13:426 (6,1) - Distance
00:46:347 - I think there should be a note here, or move 00:46:542 (3) - here and reverse twice
01:54:140 (2) - slider shape looks weird. http://puu.sh/oKtJP/4355d12e5b.jpg
02:18:880 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - why the sudden stacks, makes readability worse
03:15:958 - should be a note here imo, the piano mapping on 03:12:452 (3,4,5,6) - changing to vocal here 03:15:568 (3) - may be confusing to play
03:53:361 (4) - Maybe NC cuz it's hard to tell this is a 3/4 slider when compared to the 1/2 sliders before it
03:59:594 (4,5,1) - Flow here is kinda bad

[Doormat's Hard]

00:13:426 (1) - Weird place to NC? Maybe 00:14:010 (2) -
00:27:646 (1,2,3,4) - Distance is too wide (compared to the rest of the map) with no sound that justifies it (1.7x is fine imo)
00:54:919 (3,4) - Rhythm is slightly weird imo, if you want the piano sound on 00:55:211 - then just make a 3/4 reverse. The sliderhead on 00:55:308 - makes it sound weird
01:48:685 (1,2,3,4) - Wide distance
02:15:958 (3,4) - Same as before
03:03:101 (1) - imo NC not necessary
03:09:335 (1) - ^
03:19:659 (2,3,4,5,6) - This is quite a bit more intense than 03:18:101 (2,3,4,5,6) - . I think reducing the distance a bit would help or the difficulty jump might be a bit high

[Insane]

00:21:218 (1) - NC should be 00:21:412 - , so either change this slider so tthat you can NC there or if you want to follow vocal make this slider longer into a 1/1
00:46:348 (1,2) - Not so close please looks and feels weird to play
01:10:406 - The first half of the chorus had so many triples(that are good and follow the music), but then second half there are no more. Maybe add a note here 01:10:406 - or 01:11:964 - to make another triple so the second half feels less empty
01:15:179 (5) - I think this should change from http://puu.sh/oKv0y/02bf25cd37.jpg to http://puu.sh/oKv10/6dbe6e940a.jpg cuz theres a few loud drum sounds
01:20:439 (3,4,5) - 1/3 jumps?
01:23:361 (7,8) - Stack during a jump breaks momentum. Also imo 01:23:653 - needs a hitcircle, so maybe you can change it to something like http://puu.sh/oKv6I/918da7318f.jpg
01:29:010 (4) - should be a triplet
01:45:568 (1,2,3) - random and unnecessary
01:49:367 - should be a note here
02:07:387 (1,2,3,4) - just something small, the circles being so close together look weird, try spacing them out a bit
02:08:555 - Loud ass sound cant ignore
02:16:348 (1) - No NC
02:31:445 - Same as before, first half of chorus so many good triples but second half all gone?? Add a note 02:31:445 - or 02:33:003 - or make 02:34:464 (3) - into http://puu.sh/oKviK/73219643e8.jpg or all of the above please xd
02:36:217 (6) - same as before, loud drum sounds = singletaps
02:41:672 (1,2,3,4) - Should be 1/3 jumps
02:44:691 - Note here
03:02:517 (1,2) - Are these not stacked on purpose
03:23:361 (2,3,4) - Overmapped
03:36:899 - Again with the lack of good triples 03:25:990 - 03:36:899 - 03:38:458 -
03:35:828 (1,2,3,4) - Stream should start here 03:35:633 (5) - (like in the previous choruses)
03:49:074 (1,1,1) - Probably dont need these NCs
04:02:614 - Note here
04:09:919 - Stream from 04:09:919 - to 04:10:503 -

nice song/map, gl with rank xd

Pentori

1,157 posts

Joined November 2015

Topic Starter

Pentori 9 years ago

Rtyzen wrote:
sup, m4m xd

[Advanced]
00:10:503 - Increase volume maybe idk i think the claps are sufficient
00:13:426 (6,1) - Distance
00:46:347 - I think there should be a note here, or move 00:46:542 (3) - here and reverse twice
01:54:140 (2) - slider shape looks weird. http://puu.sh/oKtJP/4355d12e5b.jpg fk it, made it straight
02:18:880 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - why the sudden stacks, makes readability worse will change if i get a 2nd opinion
03:15:958 - should be a note here imo, the piano mapping on 03:12:452 (3,4,5,6) - changing to vocal here 03:15:568 (3) - may be confusing to play
03:53:361 (4) - Maybe NC cuz it's hard to tell this is a 3/4 slider when compared to the 1/2 sliders before it it doesn't mean the player will let go earlier
03:59:594 (4,5,1) - Flow here is kinda bad oh wtf is that, must be something i forgot to finish when doing a mod, fixed

[Insane]
00:21:218 (1) - NC should be 00:21:412 - , so either change this slider so tthat you can NC there or if you want to follow vocal make this slider longer into a 1/1 made it 1/1
00:46:348 (1,2) - Not so close please looks and feels weird to play
01:10:406 - The first half of the chorus had so many triples(that are good and follow the music), but then second half there are no more. Maybe add a note here 01:10:406 - or 01:11:964 - to make another triple so the second half feels less empty if u want to play triplet spam play kibb's map xd that being said, i did add some triplets to go with downbeats
01:15:179 (5) - I think this should change from http://puu.sh/oKv0y/02bf25cd37.jpg to http://puu.sh/oKv10/6dbe6e940a.jpg cuz theres a few loud drum sounds nah its leading into a slower section
01:20:439 (3,4,5) - 1/3 jumps? would be too unexpected
01:23:361 (7,8) - Stack during a jump breaks momentum. Also imo 01:23:653 - needs a hitcircle, so maybe you can change it to something like http://puu.sh/oKv6I/918da7318f.jpg not sure of this, need more people to point it
01:29:010 (4) - should be a triplet nae
01:45:568 (1,2,3) - random and unnecessary
01:49:367 - should be a note here i never had this note in other sections doe
02:07:387 (1,2,3,4) - just something small, the circles being so close together look weird, try spacing them out a bit so cute how you write the small things with smaller font eeeee c: but yeah i spaced them out more
02:08:555 - Loud ass sound cant ignore im following vocals here but if some1 else mentions this i'll changegege
02:16:348 (1) - No NC yes nc, i dont want that follow point
02:31:445 - Same as before, first half of chorus so many good triples but second half all gone?? Add a note 02:31:445 - or 02:33:003 - or make 02:34:464 (3) - into http://puu.sh/oKviK/73219643e8.jpg or all of the above please xd see what i said b4 ^
02:36:217 (6) - same as before, loud drum sounds = singletaps ^
02:41:672 (1,2,3,4) - Should be 1/3 jumps ^
02:44:691 - Note here nah
03:02:517 (1,2) - Are these not stacked on purpose oops wtf, fixed
03:23:361 (2,3,4) - Overmapped u wotm8, check what i did for other sections
03:36:899 - Again with the lack of good triples 03:25:990 - 03:36:899 - 03:38:458 - czech wat i said earlierer
03:35:828 (1,2,3,4) - Stream should start here 03:35:633 (5) - (like in the previous choruses) but this works too
03:49:074 (1,1,1) - Probably dont need these NCs good luck reading it with the follow points
04:02:614 - Note here check earlier ^
04:09:919 - Stream from 04:09:919 - to 04:10:503 - personal preference really

nice song/map, gl with rank xd

no comment = fixerino'd

thanks for moddd :-]

Natsu

8,088 posts

Joined September 2012

Natsu 9 years ago

Kibbleru's Insane

00:10:114 (1,2,1) - when testing the first time I got rekt by this, is kinda unexpected at the beginning :l, could you reduce the spacing?
01:01:932 (1,3,4,6) - Use finish with low volume or some special hitsound to fit this part?
02:22:971 (1,3,4,6) - 03:28:426 (1,3,4,6) - ^
01:14:594 (2,3,4) - the linear pattern is a bit uncomfortable to play x:
01:22:192 (1) - I don't get why the single NC, anyways use a slowdown here? I think will fit nicely
02:58:036 (1,2) - I'd use a shorter spacing, since this is a calm part in the song man
03:20:633 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,3) - map was so nice, but really dissapointed that you ignored the piano and mapped a plain 1/2 rhythm :c

Insane

00:05:244 (5) - you were following the piano really nice, I don't see why you didn't follow it here, 2 circles fit better than the slider, 00:06:997 (8) - same
00:07:971 (4,5) - this case is different and a slider fit the melody better, hope you can take a look at the intro and rework some rhtyhms
00:26:088 (1,2,3) - here other similar case, the music provide you something cool and unique, but you didn't represented it well, since you are leaving the main beat in the music without click action 00:26:672 -
00:27:646 (1,2) - swap NCs? I know you are placing them with the bpm, but I guess a variation here would be really nice, since the piano starting at 00:27:841 (2) - is really cool
00:41:672 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - another rhythm problem, you don't bring click actions to specific instruments, for example 00:41:672 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - if you were following the vocals you will do something like:

the main song melody:
01:01:932 (1,2,5,6) - 02:22:971 (1,3,6,7) - 03:28:425 (1,3,6,7) - music have some special sound here, maybe you can add some special hitsounds? or atleast some finish sound with low volume?
01:37:776 (1) - to 01:49:854 (6) - the music is super calm, so I don't ger why the spacing and the jumps
02:02:711 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - not fitting the vocals or the piano, but a weird mix of both, which lead you to ignore some sounds, try to be more consistent with the instruments and think to which one you will bring priority over the other ones.

gonna stop modding this diff here, rhythm is ¨fine¨, but in my opinion it can be alot better, take a look at my mod and apply to other parts if you agree with it

Doormat's Hard

00:27:646 (1,2) - swap NC to fit the piano better?
01:48:685 (1,2) - ^
03:10:698 (4,5) - I dont get this jump? probably a spacing error?, since 5 isn't a strong beat and doesn't have any special sound on it

Normal:

00:46:348 (2,3,4,5,1) - 01:06:023 (5,1,2,3) - there are some patterns like these that I consider to dense, take in consideration that you don't have an easy diff, and this one should be more new player friendly, most of it looks ok tho!.

GL

Pentori

1,157 posts

Joined November 2015

Topic Starter

Pentori 9 years ago

Natsu wrote:
Insane

00:27:646 (1,2) - swap NCs? I know you are placing them with the bpm, but I guess a variation here would be really nice, since the piano starting at 00:27:841 (2) - is really cool hm, yah that makes sense
01:01:932 (1,2,5,6) - 02:22:971 (1,3,6,7) - 03:28:425 (1,3,6,7) - music have some special sound here, maybe you can add some special hitsounds? or atleast some finish sound with low volume? i think this would be too difficult to represent given that there are already hitsounds on these beats and adjusting volume would also affect these
i feel the urge to remap this diff instead of fixing rhythms that destroy patterns and make it look messy. so i'll take into consideration everything you've mentioned that i didn't make a comment above ^ when remapping

Normal:

00:46:348 (2,3,4,5,1) - 01:06:023 (5,1,2,3) - there are some patterns like these that I consider to dense, take in consideration that you don't have an easy diff, and this one should be more new player friendly, most of it looks ok tho!. mm given that these high density patterns don't run on for multiple bars, it probably won't cause the player to fail since difficulty settings are quite low so i think this is fine
GL

tyvm [: but you skipped a diff :'c

Kibbleru

osu! Alumni

5,846 posts

Joined August 2013

Kibbleru 9 years ago

@undeadcapulet

there's a reason why i dont plan on ranking that map rofl.

anyway, i guess. but it fits so good

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Pentori

1,157 posts

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Topic Starter

Pentori 9 years ago

done remapping, mods pls

emilia

893 posts

Joined October 2012

emilia 9 years ago

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2016-05-17 14:27 estellia-: `okok
2016-05-17 14:27 estellia-: you ready for your mod?
2016-05-17 14:27 estellia-: only nazi and rhythm mod right?
2016-05-17 14:27 Pentori: i mean if other stuff are super obvious you can point them out too
2016-05-17 14:28 Pentori: but yah im ready ^^
2016-05-17 14:28 estellia-: oh alright
2016-05-17 14:28 estellia-: normal firsst
2016-05-17 14:28 Pentori: this is a collab diff
2016-05-17 14:28 Pentori: so just do my sections
2016-05-17 14:28 Pentori: its the 2nd and 4th segment
2016-05-17 14:28 Pentori: where the bookmarks are
2016-05-17 14:29 estellia-: uh
2016-05-17 14:29 estellia-: i can mod all sections
2016-05-17 14:29 estellia-: just that when i post they'll have to reply and change accordingly
2016-05-17 14:29 estellia-: but to make sure you dont mess up your diff
2016-05-17 14:29 Pentori: oke then
2016-05-17 14:29 estellia-: just edit it then upload it first
2016-05-17 14:29 estellia-: then get the other person to edit
2016-05-17 14:29 Pentori: yah
2016-05-17 14:29 Pentori: ik
2016-05-17 14:30 estellia-: 00:46:348 (2,3,4,5,1) - this density a little too high imo
2016-05-17 14:34 estellia-: ok uh thats really it
2016-05-17 14:34 Pentori: mk
2016-05-17 14:34 estellia-: one general comment though: often the map skips drums for the sake of vocal, which could be a little bit of a problem imo
2016-05-17 14:35 estellia-: stuff like 01:39:334 - 01:51:802 - , which are rather obvious to me
2016-05-17 14:35 Pentori: yah i realise that, but since i have a very limited amount of beats to use since its supposed to be low density, i went with vocals
2016-05-17 14:35 estellia-: hmm its not hard to balance low density and mapping drums tbh, but its also a personal opinion i guess
2016-05-17 14:36 estellia-: its just what  i think as a modder ;o honestly as  a mapper i'd think it'd be too much of a trouble to remap even some parts xd
2016-05-17 14:36 estellia-: ok moving on
2016-05-17 14:36 Pentori: no1's really pointed that out b4, so i'll keep that in mind if another modder points it out c:
2016-05-17 14:36 Pentori: okok
2016-05-17 14:36 estellia-: alright!
2016-05-17 14:37 estellia-: on advance diff
2016-05-17 14:37 estellia-: 00:24:530 (4) - ugly slider shape imo
2016-05-17 14:37 estellia-: the little jerk in the beginning can use some smoothing :v
2016-05-17 14:38 Pentori: o true
2016-05-17 14:38 Pentori: lemme fix that, just made it curve
2016-05-17 14:38 estellia-: sure
2016-05-17 14:38 estellia-: oh i notice that some parts are also missing the mapped drums: 00:58:815 - 
2016-05-17 14:39 estellia-: this is still kinda subjective, but if there isn't anything at all on that beat i suggest you can map it instead of just skipping it completely
2016-05-17 14:39 Pentori: yeah
2016-05-17 14:39 Pentori: i'll do that
2016-05-17 14:39 estellia-: ok!
2016-05-17 14:39 estellia-: 01:00:373 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - this part seems a bit overdone
2016-05-17 14:39 estellia-: in a sense where you're mapping beats that arent really present
2016-05-17 14:40 estellia-: like 01:01:932 (5,6) - doesn't actually have 01:02:127 - or 01:02:516 - , so i might suggest a 1/1 from 01:01:932 - to 01:02:321 - instead, or something like that
2016-05-17 14:40 Pentori: dont you think 01:01:932 (5,6,7) - is ok
2016-05-17 14:40 Pentori: vocals?
2016-05-17 14:40 estellia-: its ok i guess, but its kinda complicated for an advance
2016-05-17 14:41 Pentori: i'll look over re-doing 01:00:373 (1,2,3,4) -
2016-05-17 14:41 estellia-: the vocals dont really end on red tick per se tbh, they kinda drag on to blue if anything
2016-05-17 14:41 estellia-: oh uh
2016-05-17 14:41 estellia-: just do what you think is nice c:
2016-05-17 14:41 Pentori: yah oke
2016-05-17 14:42 estellia-: 01:18:296 (5) - reverse slider that takes into account red tick too instead?
2016-05-17 14:53 estellia-: woop sorry shitty wifi ;-;
2016-05-17 14:53 estellia-: did you see my previous message?
2016-05-17 14:53 Pentori: lmao
2016-05-17 14:53 Pentori: um
2016-05-17 14:53 Pentori: "just do what you think is nice"
2016-05-17 14:53 Pentori: was ur last msg
2016-05-17 14:54 estellia-: LOL lemme resend
2016-05-17 14:54 estellia-: 01:18:296 (5) - reverse slider that takes into account red tick too instead?
2016-05-17 14:54 Pentori: nice
2016-05-17 14:54 Pentori: i'll do that
2016-05-17 14:56 estellia-: nothing else tbh
2016-05-17 14:56 Pentori: kk
2016-05-17 14:57 estellia-: similar comments as mentioned before: some parts have weird rhythm sacrificing drum for vocal
2016-05-17 14:57 estellia-: but i personally think thats rather bearable in advanced diff so thats ok
2016-05-17 14:57 estellia-: so i didnt really point out those anymore
2016-05-17 14:57 estellia-: moving on!
2016-05-17 14:57 Pentori: coolcool
2016-05-17 14:59 estellia-: something to point out in hard: 01:01:932 (1,2,3,4,5,1) - this rhythm here is simpler than that in Advanced
2016-05-17 14:59 estellia-: so that was what i meant, in a sense where your rhythm is slightly overmapped
2016-05-17 15:00 Pentori: yeah i actually took a look at doormats diff to see what he did
2016-05-17 15:00 Pentori: so yeah, understandable
2016-05-17 15:00 estellia-: its good you get it c:
2016-05-17 15:00 estellia-: its only something to point out though, still nothing major
2016-05-17 15:00 Pentori: i'll change that around
2016-05-17 15:00 Pentori: mhm
2016-05-17 15:01 estellia-: rip
2016-05-17 15:02 estellia-: theres absolutely nothing wrong with hard
2016-05-17 15:02 estellia-: all the NC, flow, patterns perfect :v
2016-05-17 15:02 estellia-: even most of the blankets are fine to the untrained eye
2016-05-17 15:02 Pentori: doormat is a beast
2016-05-17 15:02 estellia-: i could give blanket mod, but thats seriously very very pointless and i doubt doormat would want to fix it LOL
2016-05-17 15:02 estellia-: yea doormat IS a beast
2016-05-17 15:02 Pentori: xd
2016-05-17 15:02 Pentori: hope senpai reads this1!11!!!!!11!
2016-05-17 15:03 estellia-: LOL
2016-05-17 15:03 estellia-: ok insane
2016-05-17 15:03 estellia-: 00:17:516 (3) - ctrlg on here would look nice, but fix the stuff after
2016-05-17 15:04 Pentori: oh yeah, cos circular flow
2016-05-17 15:04 Pentori: good point i'll change that
2016-05-17 15:04 estellia-: YE
2016-05-17 15:05 estellia-: 00:24:529 (1,3) - minor blanket fix
2016-05-17 15:05 Pentori: done
2016-05-17 15:05 estellia-: 00:29:789 (2,3) - tbh you should make this more obvious that its not meant to be a blanket so you dont get future mods about this xd
2016-05-17 15:06 Pentori: eh, just made it a blanket
2016-05-17 15:06 estellia-: oh LOL that works too xd
2016-05-17 15:06 estellia-: 00:30:763 - missing drum?
2016-05-17 15:06 estellia-: here 2 00:34:659 - 
2016-05-17 15:07 Pentori: you mean you want that beat to be clickable?
2016-05-17 15:07 estellia-: yea
2016-05-17 15:07 estellia-: at least mapped :o
2016-05-17 15:07 estellia-: drum clickables would be best ofc
2016-05-17 15:09 Pentori: most of the drums are used
2016-05-17 15:09 Pentori: this is an exception where i guess i wanted the vocal to fit in
2016-05-17 15:09 estellia-: ohh
2016-05-17 15:09 estellia-: i guess so
2016-05-17 15:09 Pentori: if its really a big problem i can change it
2016-05-17 15:09 Pentori: but i'll need more opinions
2016-05-17 15:09 estellia-: nah its not a big problem
2016-05-17 15:09 Pentori: kk
2016-05-17 15:10 estellia-: 00:36:997 (1,2,3,4) - this pattern looks a little bad to play
2016-05-17 15:10 Pentori: does it? it what way
2016-05-17 15:10 Pentori: too cramped?
2016-05-17 15:11 Pentori: the sliders are symmetric and the overlap is fine, i don't see the problem tbh
2016-05-17 15:12 estellia-: uh
2016-05-17 15:12 estellia-: i'll try and illustrate it
2016-05-17 15:13 estellia-: http://puu.sh/oUUcN/304d6e456f.jpg
2016-05-17 15:14 Pentori: lol nice
2016-05-17 15:14 estellia-: yea its like
2016-05-17 15:14 Pentori: um so the red is bad?
2016-05-17 15:15 estellia-: within 123 is kinda jagged
2016-05-17 15:15 estellia-: esp when there are sliders you want movement to be fluid
2016-05-17 15:16 Pentori: so if 2 was moved to flow better and make flow less sharp it'd be ok?
2016-05-17 15:16 estellia-: uh i guess so
2016-05-17 15:16 estellia-: perhaps something like http://puu.sh/oUUjO/b6895f2c15.jpg would feel better to me
2016-05-17 15:18 Pentori: that would work if i had that much room :c
2016-05-17 15:18 estellia-: thats tru :c
2016-05-17 15:18 Pentori: i went with
2016-05-17 15:18 estellia-: well take your time, rn it just kinda looks off to play
2016-05-17 15:18 Pentori: http://puu.sh/oUUnp/86ea46be7d.jpg
2016-05-17 15:18 Pentori: idk
2016-05-17 15:18 Pentori: ok
2016-05-17 15:18 Pentori: i'll look at it again
2016-05-17 15:18 estellia-: reverse flow a little unoptimised but its better i guess
2016-05-17 15:18 estellia-: yeaa sure c:
2016-05-17 15:19 estellia-: 00:52:971 (2,3,4) - whats with the sudedn 3/4?
2016-05-17 15:19 Pentori: idk i was bored
2016-05-17 15:20 estellia-: LOL
2016-05-17 15:20 Pentori: ill change it
2016-05-17 15:20 Pentori: lmao
2016-05-17 15:20 estellia-: ok c:
2016-05-17 15:21 estellia-: 00:55:698 (1,2) - afraid this might be unreadable
2016-05-17 15:21 estellia-: where players assume its a jump like the rest of the notes before
2016-05-17 15:22 Pentori: ok i'll change the pattern so this can go left-right
2016-05-17 15:22 Pentori: and make the ds much bigger in comparison
2016-05-17 15:22 Pentori: that'll probably do it
2016-05-17 15:22 estellia-: yea thats ok
2016-05-17 15:22 estellia-: i was thinking more of a stack but that works too xd
2016-05-17 15:24 estellia-: i hear a lot of potential triplets like 01:55:503 (2,3) - 01:57:062 (2,3) - 
2016-05-17 15:25 estellia-: do you not intend on mapping em?
2016-05-17 15:25 estellia-: cuz im sure hard covered all the triplets, or at least mostly
2016-05-17 15:25 Pentori: i kinda held back on triplets and left them for the big downbeats for star rating reasons
2016-05-17 15:25 Pentori: oh
2016-05-17 15:25 Pentori: rip
2016-05-17 15:25 estellia-: yea ;-;
2016-05-17 15:25 estellia-: well
2016-05-17 15:25 estellia-: its not a big issue either
2016-05-17 15:25 estellia-: hopefully most people will overlook it xd
2016-05-17 15:25 Pentori: lol
2016-05-17 15:25 estellia-: just pay attention to it more i guess, cuz triplets on insane is honestly more normal, and it won't bump up the SR by too much imo
2016-05-17 15:26 Pentori: ye will do
2016-05-17 15:26 estellia-: 02:30:763 (1,2,3) - mentioned before, choppy flow
2016-05-17 15:27 Pentori: mhm
2016-05-17 15:28 estellia-: 03:47:127 (1,2) - feels like its a pity missing out on mapping piano sounds ;w;
2016-05-17 15:29 Pentori: i mean i did try this with a reverse slider to represent piano
2016-05-17 15:29 Pentori: but it felt kinda off
2016-05-17 15:29 estellia-: did it?
2016-05-17 15:29 Pentori: since ure playing mostly 1/2 rhythm
2016-05-17 15:30 Pentori: here i did it
2016-05-17 15:30 Pentori: 03:53:360 (1) -
2016-05-17 15:30 estellia-: hmm it feels nice to me
2016-05-17 15:30 Pentori: because it was way more obvious
2016-05-17 15:30 estellia-: i guess so, thats why i didnt think that wass weird
2016-05-17 15:30 estellia-: tbh mapping it with a reverse sounds very nice :D
2016-05-17 15:30 estellia-: at least thats what i think after i just mapped that myself
2016-05-17 15:30 estellia-: just to keep your options open, its not too big a deal either
2016-05-17 15:31 Pentori: mhm
2016-05-17 15:31 estellia-: 03:54:919 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - wow very afraid that this would be unreadable
2016-05-17 15:31 Pentori: um yeah
2016-05-17 15:31 Pentori: i kinda copied this of HB
2016-05-17 15:32 Pentori: where he had the same spacing
2016-05-17 15:32 Pentori: yet different rhythms
2016-05-17 15:32 Pentori: and it introduced a new level of difficulty
2016-05-17 15:32 Pentori: have u tried playing this section?
2016-05-17 15:32 estellia-: that would make more sense if it was an intuitive shape
2016-05-17 15:32 estellia-: ill try
2016-05-17 15:33 estellia-: LOL CANT READ EVEN THO I SAW IT IN EDITOR
2016-05-17 15:33 estellia-: its too hard for me ;w;
2016-05-17 15:33 Pentori: wtf
2016-05-17 15:33 Pentori: hello
2016-05-17 15:33 Pentori: #1 singapore???
2016-05-17 15:33 estellia-: ;_;
2016-05-17 15:33 Pentori: lmao
2016-05-17 15:33 estellia-: im sorry im honestly not very good at the game ;____;
2016-05-17 15:34 Pentori: tsk tsk
2016-05-17 15:34 Pentori: which parts
2016-05-17 15:34 Pentori: 03:54:919 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - has spacing
2016-05-17 15:34 estellia-: well i got it after 2 tries so
2016-05-17 15:35 estellia-: ok uh
2016-05-17 15:35 estellia-: what i think is basically people will play this 03:55:503 (2) - like its on 03:55:308 - because of the vocal
2016-05-17 15:35 estellia-: esp when your distance is kinda big, people will assume its a 1/1
2016-05-17 15:35 estellia-: and the piano isnt very obvious
2016-05-17 15:35 estellia-: as you've pointed out when i said "y nt 3/4 reverse" just now
2016-05-17 15:36 Pentori: o
2016-05-17 15:36 Pentori: cant you tell by the ar tho
2016-05-17 15:36 Pentori: approach circle*
2016-05-17 15:36 estellia-: uh
2016-05-17 15:36 estellia-: im a more music oriented player
2016-05-17 15:37 estellia-: so i hit if i hear something i think is worth being emphasised by the mapper
2016-05-17 15:37 estellia-: esp when its a hitcircle the hitwindow is v small
2016-05-17 15:37 estellia-: for that piano slider it was more acceptable to me as it was more interesting at least
2016-05-17 15:37 Pentori: have u played this map?
2016-05-17 15:37 Pentori: ACTION is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/899103 fhana - Kimi to Iu Tokuiten [singular you] [HB's Insane]]
2016-05-17 15:38 estellia-: which part were u refering to?
2016-05-17 15:38 Pentori: 00:33:610 (3,4) -
2016-05-17 15:39 Pentori: you could just as well be playing this beat 00:33:781
2016-05-17 15:39 Pentori: idk, i think
2016-05-17 15:39 Pentori: i'll get people to playtest
2016-05-17 15:39 Pentori: and change if the majority can't read it
2016-05-17 15:40 Pentori: so lets move on [:
2016-05-17 15:40 estellia-: uh i guess so then
2016-05-17 15:40 estellia-: 04:04:269 (1) - this slider is bent too much
2016-05-17 15:40 estellia-: else there really isnt anything to point out
2016-05-17 15:41 Pentori: ok fixed
2016-05-17 15:41 estellia-: ye
2016-05-17 15:41 estellia-: similar issues with before like the vocal drum thing
2016-05-17 15:42 estellia-: and the unmapped triplets this time around
2016-05-17 15:42 estellia-: else its honestly not much to complain about
2016-05-17 15:43 estellia-: btw i have a suggestion for the jumps: http://puu.sh/oUVjK/0f75c60d82.jpg
2016-05-17 15:43 estellia-: try mapping it like this in the exact same rhythm you had
2016-05-17 15:43 estellia-: its kinda gimmicky, might be fun if you tried something similar ;o
2016-05-17 15:44 Pentori: oo
2016-05-17 15:44 estellia-: yea <:
2016-05-17 15:44 estellia-: aight last diff!
2016-05-17 15:47 estellia-: yea i notice similar things
2016-05-17 15:47 estellia-: the jarring unmapped drums
2016-05-17 15:49 estellia-: 00:55:698 (1,2) - afraid players will read this wrong, because of this scary distance before: 00:14:789 (2,1) - players might expect a jump, suggest stack or increase AR
2016-05-17 15:51 estellia-: 02:30:374 (3,4,1) - flow here is a little jarring
2016-05-17 15:53 estellia-: illustration: [url]http://puu.sh/oUVFB/913f44f8b7.jpg[/url]
2016-05-17 15:54 Pentori: i can't speak for kib, but isn't that alright
2016-05-17 15:54 Pentori: its  kinda back and forth
2016-05-17 15:55 estellia-: uh back and forth would make sense for jumps
2016-05-17 15:55 estellia-: the fact that the 3rd thing is a complete reversal of flow and the massive decrease in movement is kinda odd to play
2016-05-17 15:55 estellia-: i was just about to say "if the explanation isnt clear enough hmu" but i guess i could clear it now xd
2016-05-17 15:55 Pentori: ok
2016-05-17 15:55 estellia-: thats how i kinda see it at least
2016-05-17 15:55 estellia-: just fix as per how you think ;o
2016-05-17 15:56 estellia-: in comparison for example: 03:35:828 (3,4,1) - this works much better
2016-05-17 15:56 estellia-: 04:13:036 (1) - scary SV change holy, suggest reducing pls ;w;
2016-05-17 15:57 Pentori: i think thats a meme
2016-05-17 15:57 Pentori: to make people slider break
2016-05-17 15:57 estellia-: WELL FUK DAT
2016-05-17 15:57 Pentori: and not get an fc
2016-05-17 15:57 Pentori: lel
2016-05-17 15:57 estellia-: for consistency's sake, why isnt 02:47:773 - a break too like the other diffs
2016-05-17 15:57 Pentori: L O L
2016-05-17 15:58 Pentori: idk, he already mapped it tho so theres no harm of keeping it
2016-05-17 15:58 estellia-: tru
2016-05-17 15:59 estellia-: its kinda odd to me when there are inconsistencies but i guess that ok 2
2016-05-17 15:59 estellia-: welp thatss it for my mod! are you happy w it? c:
2016-05-17 15:59 Pentori: yess <3
2016-05-17 15:59 Pentori: tyvm
2016-05-17 15:59 Pentori: did you lose the first half of the chat log btw?
2016-05-17 15:59 Pentori: cos of dc
2016-05-17 15:59 estellia-: nope ;o
2016-05-17 15:59 Pentori: oke

normal

2016-05-17 14:30 estellia-: 00:46:348 (2,3,4,5,1) - this density a little too high imo
2016-05-17 14:34 estellia-: ok uh thats really it

kibble

2016-05-17 15:44 estellia-: aight last diff!
2016-05-17 15:47 estellia-: yea i notice similar things
2016-05-17 15:47 estellia-: the jarring unmapped drums
2016-05-17 15:49 estellia-: 00:55:698 (1,2) - afraid players will read this wrong, because of this scary distance before: 00:14:789 (2,1) - players might expect a jump, suggest stack or increase AR
2016-05-17 15:51 estellia-: 02:30:374 (3,4,1) - flow here is a little jarring
2016-05-17 15:53 estellia-: illustration: [url]http://puu.sh/oUVFB/913f44f8b7.jpg[/url]
2016-05-17 15:54 Pentori: i can't speak for kib, but isn't that alright
2016-05-17 15:54 Pentori: its  kinda back and forth
2016-05-17 15:55 estellia-: uh back and forth would make sense for jumps
2016-05-17 15:55 estellia-: the fact that the 3rd thing is a complete reversal of flow and the massive decrease in movement is kinda odd to play
2016-05-17 15:55 estellia-: i was just about to say "if the explanation isnt clear enough hmu" but i guess i could clear it now xd
2016-05-17 15:55 Pentori: ok
2016-05-17 15:55 estellia-: thats how i kinda see it at least
2016-05-17 15:55 estellia-: just fix as per how you think ;o
2016-05-17 15:56 estellia-: in comparison for example: 03:35:828 (3,4,1) - this works much better
2016-05-17 15:56 estellia-: 04:13:036 (1) - scary SV change holy, suggest reducing pls ;w;
2016-05-17 15:57 Pentori: i think thats a meme
2016-05-17 15:57 Pentori: to make people slider break
2016-05-17 15:57 estellia-: WELL FUK DAT
2016-05-17 15:57 Pentori: and not get an fc
2016-05-17 15:57 Pentori: lel
2016-05-17 15:57 estellia-: for consistency's sake, why isnt 02:47:773 - a break too like the other diffs
2016-05-17 15:57 Pentori: L O L
2016-05-17 15:58 Pentori: idk, he already mapped it tho so theres no harm of keeping it
2016-05-17 15:58 estellia-: tru
2016-05-17 15:59 estellia-: its kinda odd to me when there are inconsistencies but i guess that ok 2

Hobbes2

osu! Alumni

2,251 posts

Joined March 2016

Hobbes2 9 years ago

Modded with a friend and neither of us could find anything worth mentioning...this mapset is really good.

Gave a +1SP that you would have gotten if I could actually find stuff. Good luck. when the KDS rains in i'll probably give more since I'm super late

EDIT - +2

Pentori

1,157 posts

Joined November 2015

Topic Starter

Pentori 9 years ago

Hobbes2 wrote:
Modded with a friend and neither of us could find anything worth mentioning...this mapset is really good.

Gave a +1SP that you would have gotten if I could actually find stuff. Good luck. when the KDS rains in i'll probably give more since I'm super late

EDIT - +2

thank you!

Doormat

2,050 posts

Joined September 2013

Doormat 9 years ago

sorry, my email notification didn't pop up so i didn't know i got a mod for this /w\

~~will apply mods later today!~~

Rtyzen wrote:
[Doormat's Hard]
00:13:426 (1) - Weird place to NC? Maybe 00:14:010 (2) - nc here is fine; it's the start of a new phrase. the piano here has an accent on it that differentiates it from the previous piano notes
00:27:646 (1,2,3,4) - Distance is too wide (compared to the rest of the map) with no sound that justifies it (1.7x is fine imo) i think the jump here emphasizes the piano nicely. it also acts as a nice transition between verse lines imo since the second verse line is more intense than the first
00:54:919 (3,4) - Rhythm is slightly weird imo, if you want the piano sound on 00:55:211 - then just make a 3/4 reverse. The sliderhead on 00:55:308 - makes it sound weird changed rhythm here
01:48:685 (1,2,3,4) - Wide distance same as before
02:15:958 (3,4) - Same as before also changed rhythm here
03:03:101 (1) - imo NC not necessary there's an accent on this piano note that gives it an emphasis, which is why i put nc here
03:09:335 (1) - ^ same
03:19:659 (2,3,4,5,6) - This is quite a bit more intense than 03:18:101 (2,3,4,5,6) - . I think reducing the distance a bit would help or the difficulty jump might be a bit high this was intentional; the drums are more intense during the purple combo in comparison to the green combo. spacing is increasing between notes by 1.05x or something like that in order to help emphasize the buildup.

Natsu wrote:
Doormat's Hard

00:27:646 (1,2) - swap NC to fit the piano better? k
01:48:685 (1,2) - ^ sure
03:10:698 (4,5) - I dont get this jump? probably a spacing error?, since 5 isn't a strong beat and doesn't have any special sound on it oops, yeah spacing error

sorry for being late, pentori /w\

http://puu.sh/p3Us8/3b99e65282.zip

SnowNiNo_

Elite Mapper: Aspirant

2,108 posts

Joined April 2013

SnowNiNo_ 9 years ago

M4M
waaa pp mapu ><

[Kibbleru's Insane]

00:08:945 (1) - aww move to 191 188 to stack it nicer XD
00:13:717 - mute here, sound really weird since there is no music to support
00:52:484 - yap same here
02:01:932 (4) - the sound here should be emphasized more
02:09:335 (3,1,2) - aww linear flow ;w;, hard to play
02:15:471 - mute~
03:07:678 - ^
03:54:140 (2) - NC here to emphasized the vocal

[Insane]

00:27:841 (1,2,3) - the spacing here should be decreasing not increasing since the pitch of the synth sound that you are following was decreasing
01:23:750 (9) - NC here instead of 01:24:140 (1) -
02:22:581 (7) - stack with 02:21:412 (1) - maybe?
02:37:289 - mute
02:44:789 (9,1) - same thing here

nice mapu~
GL~

Pentori

1,157 posts

Joined November 2015

Topic Starter

Pentori 9 years ago

SnowNiNo_ wrote:
M4M
waaa pp mapu ><

[Insane]
00:27:841 (1,2,3) - the spacing here should be decreasing not increasing since the pitch of the synth sound that you are following was decreasing fixed
01:23:750 (9) - NC here instead of 01:24:140 (1) - the way i have it emphasises the finish
02:22:581 (7) - stack with 02:21:412 (1) - maybe? good catch
02:37:289 - mute can be done but not rly necessary
02:44:789 (9,1) - same thing here
nice mapu~
GL~

thx for mod :3

Rizia

3,114 posts

Joined January 2012

Rizia 9 years ago

[Kibbleru's Insane]

01:23:750 (1) - according to jump pattern on 01:22:581 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - , i think this slider should be on around x336 y56
02:37:776 (2) - head stack under 02:36:997 (1) - tail? now looks not comfortable to play and read
03:20:633 (1,2,3,1,2) - ~~wtf what black magic~~
03:37:971 - add a note, 03:37:776 (1,2) - are easy to read to 1/2, because there always have similar spacing 1/2 jumps, also you didn't empty here before

[Insane]

00:11:672 (1,2,3) - angle too weird, how about move 00:12:062 (3) - to x192 y248
00:19:854 (1,2) - flow kinda weird here, try this placement
SPOILER
00:28:815 (6,7,8,9) - stack together. 00:28:425 (4,5) - to stream 00:28:815 (6,7,8,9) - not pretty good for play
00:59:399 (3,4,5) - stack better
01:25:308 (1) - finish
02:12:451 (2) - missing clap on head
02:30:178 (5,6,7,8,9,10) - add some hitsound for it, like 01:09:140 (5,6,7,8,9,10) -
03:20:893 (2,3,1,2,3) - i think follow drum on 1/2 will better

[Doormat's Hard]

01:48:685 (1,2,3) - big jumps for a hard

another best pp?

Doormat

2,050 posts

Joined September 2013

Doormat 9 years ago

@rizia reduced the jump size. thanks~

http://puu.sh/pi5Bw/78f82130f9.zip

Kibbleru

osu! Alumni

5,846 posts

Joined August 2013

Kibbleru 9 years ago

@rizia fix all but 2nd suggestion since i prefer more how the current way looks :S

why do people insist on putting code tags behind their chat logs? so i cant click the links???

just for me so i can click links

SPOILER

2016-05-17 15:44 estellia-: aight last diff!
2016-05-17 15:47 estellia-: yea i notice similar things
2016-05-17 15:47 estellia-: the jarring unmapped drums
2016-05-17 15:49 estellia-: 00:55:698 (1,2) - afraid players will read this wrong, because of this scary distance before: 00:14:789 (2,1) - players might expect a jump, suggest stack or increase AR hard to get that part wrong imo, the distance is significantly higher and the angle changes
2016-05-17 15:51 estellia-: 02:30:374 (3,4,1) - flow here is a little jarring yehaj
2016-05-17 15:53 estellia-: illustration: http://puu.sh/oUVFB/913f44f8b7.jpg
2016-05-17 15:54 Pentori: i can't speak for kib, but isn't that alright
2016-05-17 15:54 Pentori: its kinda back and forth
2016-05-17 15:55 estellia-: uh back and forth would make sense for jumps
2016-05-17 15:55 estellia-: the fact that the 3rd thing is a complete reversal of flow and the massive decrease in movement is kinda odd to play
2016-05-17 15:55 estellia-: i was just about to say "if the explanation isnt clear enough hmu" but i guess i could clear it now xd
2016-05-17 15:55 Pentori: ok
2016-05-17 15:55 estellia-: thats how i kinda see it at least
2016-05-17 15:55 estellia-: just fix as per how you think ;o
2016-05-17 15:56 estellia-: in comparison for example: 03:35:828 (3,4,1) - this works much better
2016-05-17 15:56 estellia-: 04:13:036 (1) - scary SV change holy, suggest reducing pls ;w; its not a meme but it fits imo.
2016-05-17 15:57 Pentori: i think thats a meme
2016-05-17 15:57 Pentori: to make people slider break
2016-05-17 15:57 estellia-: WELL FUK DAT
2016-05-17 15:57 Pentori: and not get an fc
2016-05-17 15:57 Pentori: lel
2016-05-17 15:57 estellia-: for consistency's sake, why isnt 02:47:773 - a break too like the other diffs
2016-05-17 15:57 Pentori: L O L
2016-05-17 15:58 Pentori: idk, he already mapped it tho so theres no harm of keeping it
2016-05-17 15:58 estellia-: tru
2016-05-17 15:59 estellia-: its kinda odd to me when there are inconsistencies but i guess that ok 2

k map code

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Last edited by Kibbleru 9 years ago, edited 1 time in total.

Pentori

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Pentori 9 years ago

Rizia wrote:
[Insane]
00:11:672 (1,2,3) - angle too weird, how about move 00:12:062 (3) - to x192 y248
00:19:854 (1,2) - flow kinda weird here, try this placement cool
SPOILER
00:28:815 (6,7,8,9) - stack together. 00:28:425 (4,5) - to stream 00:28:815 (6,7,8,9) - not pretty good for play do u mean it flows weird or its just better not to stream. cos 01:49:854 (6,7,8,9) - is the same too. stacked it tho
00:59:399 (3,4,5) - stack better
01:25:308 (1) - finish mm i used the finishes for accents tho
02:12:451 (2) - missing clap on head
02:30:178 (5,6,7,8,9,10) - add some hitsound for it, like 01:09:140 (5,6,7,8,9,10) -
03:20:893 (2,3,1,2,3) - i think follow drum on 1/2 will better but the piano is so dominating ._.
another best pp? xd

no reply/green = fixed
tyvm. all updated

PlasticMemor

204 posts

Joined June 2015

PlasticMemor 9 years ago

ffs i forgot m4m

i can't mod normal, i am so bad
[Hard]
00:06:802 (4,5,6) - imo 6 should overlap onto head of slider 3 to keep the same pattern you had 00:03:685 (4,5,6)
00:08:556 (4) - fix this, this is too close to the hp bar
00:14:984 (1) - lol this feels a little bit off
00:56:867 (3,4,5,6) - i appreciate this stream. don't fix this i really like it
01:02:711 (3) - there are some rhythm in slider that should be map
01:55:893 (5,6) - this could be 1 slider?
03:26:478 (4) - ctrl+G for flow
04:09:335 (2,3,4) - i would not stack these

[Insane]
00:13:523 (1) - there is a lot of beat in here
00:12:256 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - this sudden change in pattern might confuse player
00:21:023 (4) - for flow make the slider end facing down towards next slider
00:58:425 (5) - ctrl+G for flow
02:03:101 (2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5) - for this part i would consider mapping the vocals

[~~bnthatdoesn'tcheckmymap's~~Kibbleru's Insane]
03:22:192 (1) - ctrl+J please for pp
03:54:919 (1,2) - it sounds better with some circles in, it jumps from 1/2 to a tripleish rhythm
^i also find it weird that you only mapped to piano in this part?

this will be my go to pp map soon

Doormat

2,050 posts

Joined September 2013

Doormat 9 years ago

PlasticMemor wrote:
ffs i forgot m4m

[Hard]
00:06:802 (4,5,6) - imo 6 should overlap onto head of slider 3 to keep the same pattern you had 00:03:685 (4,5,6) aesthetically it looks very similar and i wanted some variation between the two to show that the next part is getting a bit more intense
00:08:556 (4) - fix this, this is too close to the hp bar not really a big deal but i moved it down a bit
00:14:984 (1) - lol this feels a little bit off distances here are increasing slightly to help emphasize the build up; it looks off because the hexagon here isn't equal spacing
00:56:867 (3,4,5,6) - i appreciate this stream. don't fix this i really like it
01:02:711 (3) - there are some rhythm in slider that should be map emphasis on vocals here by using a longer 1/1 slider
01:55:893 (5,6) - this could be 1 slider? there's a clap on the white tick i wanted to emphasize
03:26:478 (4) - ctrl+G for flow this is intentionally like this to enforce this pattern; the other choruses do something similar to this pattern and i feel that it reflects the vocals nicely
04:09:335 (2,3,4) - i would not stack these yeah, i was a little worried this might be a bit too hard actually.

thanks. http://puu.sh/pjyyE/68990e6515.zip

Pentori

1,157 posts

Joined November 2015

Topic Starter

Pentori 9 years ago

PlasticMemor wrote:
ffs i forgot m4m

i can't mod normal, i am so bad

[Insane]
00:13:523 (1) - there is a lot of beat in here theres no beats of the stuff i was previous mapping
00:12:256 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - this sudden change in pattern might confuse player maybe if they're bad
00:21:023 (4) - for flow make the slider end facing down towards next slider ok
00:58:425 (5) - ctrl+G for flow it flows down so the jump to 00:58:815 (1) - is bigger
02:03:101 (2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5) - for this part i would consider mapping the vocals too boring tbh

this will be my go to pp map soon

thx for mod

DeletedUser_3638005

DeletedUser_3638005 9 years ago

m4m thing

[Doormat's Hard]

00:43:815 - You could probably fill these with hitcircles 00:44:594 - like you did here 00:43:036 - .
01:40:309 (5,6,1) - Make this distance equal? If you turn the reverse sliderend a little bit to the left I think it could work without messing up the next part. I noticed that you put higher distance snap every NC but it looks prettier on this part exclusively.

[Insane]

00:08:945 (1,2,3,4,5) - I don't think that those deserve to be jumps (And especially not as spaced as this 00:11:088 - intense part). How about you make them sliders like you did in the previous parts and follow the piano notes?
02:11:672 (1) - I would move this to x:182 y:32 for the sake of flow. then you have a triangle-like shape going from 02:11:282 (2,3,1) - instead of a square-like pattern.
02:20:049 (2) - There is no beat here, I don't think this relatively calm part deserve those jumps, so I suggest you make 02:19:854 (1) - a 1/2 slider.
02:25:503 (3) - Bring this a little bit closer to 02:25:114 (2) - it's a little bit too distant even if it's distance snapped correctly, I personally think it plays better if you move it closer.
03:20:633 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1) - You could make these all new combos for readability. I know I would :>
03:29:886 - It would be better if you tried to not miss this beat as it's very intense and and goes well with the vocals.
03:39:237 - I don't think this should be a triple, there is no beat here.

[Kibbleru's Insane]

00:02:517 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - Personally I wouldn't make those jumps, but make them 1/2 sliders like you did here 00:01:737 (4) - following the piano notes, If you want to keep them though I wouldn't make them so spaced. 00:02:517 (1,2,1,2) - The spacing here is doubled on the next jump pair but nothing changes in the intensity of the rhythm.
00:16:737 (1,2,3) - About this rhythm; It appears you are following the kickdrums but the sliderhead of this beat 00:17:711 - isn't intense enough to deserve to be clicked in my opinion. Try this rhythm and tell me what you think.
00:20:828 (3) - ^ Likewise for the rest.
00:38:945 (2) - How about two 1/2 sliders here instead of the 1/1? If you do that then the sliderend then covers 00:39:140 - this faint beat and follows the tsu-dzu-keru vocals.
02:09:335 (3,1,1,2) - Personally I am not a fan of this flow, the spacing between the jumps is too short compared to the next one, and the almost linear flow makes it even more tricky/hard to play.
02:27:841 - I can't hear anything on this beat, maybe you should follow the vocals instead and put a 1/1 slider ending here 02:28:036 - ?
02:46:250 - Same for this beat. There is the after noise of that bell but it's messy and all over the place so I wouldn't justify it as a triple. How about you do something like this? Brings out the intensity of 02:46:347 (1) - . (Move 02:47:517 (3) - accordingly so it doesn't have an unappealing overlay.
03:28:620 - No beat here either. You could make this 03:28:426 (1) - a 1/2 slider so the sliderend ends on the red beat, then there's not really a problem.
04:13:036 (1) - Don't you think that this is a little too fast? For a sightread there will be a lot of 100s on this. I understand you want to emphasize on the ending beats, why don't you make them spaced jumps instead?

Good luck.

Syph

Beatmap Nominator

848 posts

Joined August 2014

Syph 9 years ago

hi, m4m for https://osu.ppy.sh/s/427558

[Doormat's Hard]

00:47:906 - // 00:49:075 - // 00:49:464 - // 00:50:633 (4) - // try finish
02:10:114 - // 02:10:503 - // 02:11:088 - // 02:11:672 (4) - // try finish xd
02:42:452 (2) - ^
02:42:841 (3,1) - blanket
03:35:049 (2) - finish dont u love hitsound mods
04:07:387 (1) - finish

good diff xd

[Insane]

change hp to 6 maybe? since hard is 5 and kibbleru's is 7

00:13:523 (1) - probably better to map the beats here, especially since you also mapped them in advanced lol
00:47:906 (1,1,4,1,1,4) - try finish
01:03:490 (1) - rotate this like 30° and then reposition, plays a bit better
01:14:789 (2) - finish?
01:21:412 (2) - ^
01:23:750 (9,1) - swap nc's to indicate 1/2 gap
01:50:828 (2) - idk why you wouldn't do a triple here lo
02:09:529 (1,1,1,1,1) - finish? // also idk why you didnt place sliders in this part like you did previously
02:35:828 (2) - finish?
02:42:451 (2) - ^
02:44:789 (9,1) - swap nc's
03:34:854 (2,3) - finish?
03:41:282 (2) - ^

[Kibbleru's Insane]

00:08:945 (1) - move to 191|118 xd
00:14:400 (2,2) - whistle on these 2 seems pretty fitting
00:18:295 - idk if you should ignore this beat
00:21:412 - ^
00:47:906 (1,1,1,1,1,1) - try finish lo
01:14:789 (3) - ^
01:52:192 (2) - there's a sound on red tick so 1/2 slider would probably be better
01:55:308 (2) - ^
02:09:530 (1,1,1,1,1) - finish?
02:21:413 (1) - ctrl+j looks nicer imo, points to the triple that way xd
02:35:828 (3) - finish?
02:36:023 (4,1) - maybe some more distance between these
03:07:387 (3) - theres a sound on red tick ;_;
03:34:854 (2,3) - finish?
03:41:283 (3) - ^
04:13:036 (1) - this sv seems a bit too much to me lol
04:13:426 (1) - maybe better to start at 04:13:328 - ?

ok thats all, couldnt find anything in the lower diffs except for hitsounds that were already mentioned in the other diffs - _-

Pentori

1,157 posts

Joined November 2015

Topic Starter

Pentori 9 years ago

Riven wrote:
m4m thing

[Insane]
00:08:945 (1,2,3,4,5) - I don't think that those deserve to be jumps (And especially not as spaced as this 00:11:088 - intense part). How about you make them sliders like you did in the previous parts and follow the piano notes? its more of a player opinion rather than an issue. imo the music picks up here and increase volumes hence the reason i added these jumps
02:11:672 (1) - I would move this to x:182 y:32 for the sake of flow. then you have a triangle-like shape going from 02:11:282 (2,3,1) - instead of a square-like pattern. i agree
02:20:049 (2) - There is no beat here, I don't think this relatively calm part deserve those jumps, so I suggest you make 02:19:854 (1) - a 1/2 slider. i wouldn't call it calm its kiai time.
02:25:503 (3) - Bring this a little bit closer to 02:25:114 (2) - it's a little bit too distant even if it's distance snapped correctly, I personally think it plays better if you move it closer. ok
03:20:633 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1) - You could make these all new combos for readability. I know I would :> tbh its too scary without follow points
03:29:886 - It would be better if you tried to not miss this beat as it's very intense and and goes well with the vocals. the downbeat is already emphasised with the ds
03:39:237 - I don't think this should be a triple, there is no beat here. downbeat

Good luck.

tyvm

Syph wrote:
hi, m4m for https://osu.ppy.sh/s/427558

[Doormat's Hard]
i did hitsounds so i'll reply to these doormat style
00:47:906 - // 00:49:075 - // 00:49:464 - // 00:50:633 (4) - // try finish the claps pretty much do the job. dont need the finishes so they can be saved for section entrances and strong downbeats
02:10:114 - // 02:10:503 - // 02:11:088 - // 02:11:672 (4) - // try finish xd ^
02:42:452 (2) - ^ ^
03:35:049 (2) - finish dont u love hitsound mods clap does the job yes i fucking love them
04:07:387 (1) - finish quieter part of the map. plus there is already a cymbal crash in the music it doesn't need another protruding one

good diff xd ikr i'm a beast

[Insane]

change hp to 6 maybe? since hard is 5 and kibbleru's is 7 o true

00:13:523 (1) - probably better to map the beats here, especially since you also mapped them in advanced lol theres already enough jumps
00:47:906 (1,1,4,1,1,4) - try finish check above ^
01:03:490 (1) - rotate this like 30° and then reposition, plays a bit better nah the sideways flow from the other slider is retained and is smoother
01:14:789 (2) - finish? pls
01:21:412 (2) - ^
01:23:750 (9,1) - swap nc's to indicate 1/2 gap nc emphasises finish. plus the gap is easily readable
01:50:828 (2) - idk why you wouldn't do a triple here lo for a lower density
02:09:529 (1,1,1,1,1) - finish? // also idk why you didnt place sliders in this part like you did previously for extra pp claps do the job. and i mean i could do what i did earlier for consistency but tbh it doesn't really matter.
02:35:828 (2) - finish? and yeah the last 5 i've already responded to in some way or another
02:42:451 (2) - ^
02:44:789 (9,1) - swap nc's
03:34:854 (2,3) - finish?
03:41:282 (2) - ^

ok thats all, couldnt find anything in the lower diffs except for hitsounds that were already mentioned in the other diffs - _-

looks like no changes for me except hp 6

thanx for mods guise

Zero__wind

osu! Alumni

3,314 posts

Joined August 2012

Zero__wind 9 years ago

M4M from my queue

General
I think the volume of your soft-hitwhistle.wav and soft-hitclap.wav are both quite low, consider raise their volume up!
the gap between Hard and Insane may be a bit big, consider making Insane a bit easier
disable the widescreen support for Insane for consistency

Collab Normal
00:51:023 (1) - whistle+finish sounds better on head imo
01:08:165 (3) - clap at reversing point?
01:09:334 (5) - I recommend to move it to (100,112) so that the flow of 01:08:945 (4,5,1) - can be better and can also avoid the overlap between 01:09:334 (5,2) - which doesn't look so nice
01:23:361 (2) - where's hitsound
01:24:919 (5) - would be better to just get rid of the stack with 01:23:361 (2) - like this, it flows better and avoids confusion caused by the stack
02:16:737 (4) - a finish on head would sound nice with the music
03:32:127 (5) - maybe it's only me, but I think moving its ending node (reversing one) to around (128,40) will make it looks better, it won't overlap with 03:31:543 (4) - that much
03:50:244 (3,4) - there should be claps at end instead of whistles, also 03:51:802 (1,2) -
04:03:490 (4,5,1,2,3,4) - this rhythm may be a bit too hard in this diff, consider splitting it up

Advanced
I don't think you need AR6 OD6 for this 2.3-star diff, AR5.5 OD5 will be fairly enough, and it will do good to your diff spread
00:31:932 (6,2) - you may want to stack them well
02:02:711 (1) - why no normal whistles in this part? the hitsounding feels so empty
03:19:659 (4,5,1,2) - missing hitsounds
03:25:308 (5,6,1) - this flows so weird imo= = consider to rework this pattern

Doormat's Hard
00:14:010 (2,3,4,5,6) - no hitsound? I thought there would some claps
00:37:776 (3,4) - maybe you can adjust their placement a bit to make 00:38:556 (1) - stack properly with 00:37:581 (2) -
00:51:023 (1) - clap at end
00:53:750 (4) - clap on head
01:23:750 (1,2) - this stack can be really confusing considering the former 1/2 stacks 01:22:971 (3,4,5,6) - . new players may easily think 01:24:140 (2) - starts from 01:23:945 - and click too early
03:19:659 (2,3,4,5,6,1,2) - hitsounds???
03:54:919 (1) - add some normal whistles in this part plz

Insane
00:41:672 (1) - why not having some normal whistles in this slow part to go with the piano? same for the part from 02:02:711 (1) - and 03:54:919 (1) -
00:54:334 (2) - recommend to remove this circle and adjust the following pattern a bit, (like maybe stack 00:54:140 (1,1) - ) there's just nothing map-worthy in the music at this point
01:22:386 (2) - ^
02:15:373 (2) - ^
02:43:425 (2) - ^
03:48:880 (2) - ^
01:24:529 (1) - I don't really think you need to turn the sv up to 1.2 again for this slider, the kiai is already over. and remove the NC as it feels quite redudant
02:45:568 (1) - ^
02:27:451 (6,1) - don't really look so tidy
02:36:997 (1,2,3) - not a really good arrangement imo, better just use 1/1 for 1 like 01:15:958 (1) - instead
03:20:633 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1) - please use some normal whistles on them? so that they can help players undstand what you're mapping to
03:24:140 (2) - why using whistle and clap at the same time in this part? sounds quite awkward imo, also it's inconsistent with your former kiais. there are many similar ones like 03:24:919 (7,3) - , plz check them yourself
03:26:477 (7) - I'm really not a fan of these random 3/4 sliders
04:12:062 (1,4) - better avoid this overlap which doesn't look so nice

Kibbleru's Insane
04:13:036 (1) - may be too fast
first playthrough, nothing wrong
well I'm just too tired of this everyday random jumping world

that's all for me
Good luck

Pentori

1,157 posts

Joined November 2015

Topic Starter

Pentori 9 years ago

Zero__wind wrote:
M4M from my queue

General
I think the volume of your soft-hitwhistle.wav and soft-hitclap.wav are both quite low, consider raise their volume up! the hitsounds are complimenting whats already in the music and therefore i think its ok. i'm using 100% hitsound and 100% music volume and it sounds fine to me
the gap between Hard and Insane may be a bit big, consider making Insane a bit easier yea i considered nerfing it, will change it
disable the widescreen support for Insane for consistency oops

Collab Normal
01:08:165 (3) - clap at reversing point? nah
01:09:334 (5) - I recommend to move it to (100,112) so that the flow of 01:08:945 (4,5,1) - can be better and can also avoid the overlap between 01:09:334 (5,2) - which doesn't look so nice
01:23:361 (2) - where's hitsound
01:24:919 (5) - would be better to just get rid of the stack with 01:23:361 (2) - like this, it flows better and avoids confusion caused by the stack
03:32:127 (5) - maybe it's only me, but I think moving its ending node (reversing one) to around (128,40) will make it looks better, it won't overlap with 03:31:543 (4) - that much it has to overlap because low ds
03:50:244 (3,4) - there should be claps at end instead of whistles, also 03:51:802 (1,2) -
04:03:490 (4,5,1,2,3,4) - this rhythm may be a bit too hard in this diff, consider splitting it up removed a circle

Advanced
I don't think you need AR6 OD6 for this 2.3-star diff, AR5.5 OD5 will be fairly enough, and it will do good to your diff spread
00:31:932 (6,2) - you may want to stack them well
02:02:711 (1) - why no normal whistles in this part? the hitsounding feels so empty
03:19:659 (4,5,1,2) - missing hitsounds
03:25:308 (5,6,1) - this flows so weird imo= = consider to rework this pattern

Insane
00:41:672 (1) - why not having some normal whistles in this slow part to go with the piano? same for the part from 02:02:711 (1) - and 03:54:919 (1) -
00:54:334 (2) - recommend to remove this circle and adjust the following pattern a bit, (like maybe stack 00:54:140 (1,1) - ) there's just nothing map-worthy in the music at this point
01:22:386 (2) - ^
02:15:373 (2) - ^
02:43:425 (2) - ^
03:48:880 (2) - ^
01:24:529 (1) - I don't really think you need to turn the sv up to 1.2 again for this slider, the kiai is already over. and remove the NC as it feels quite redudant
02:45:568 (1) - ^
02:27:451 (6,1) - don't really look so tidy
02:36:997 (1,2,3) - not a really good arrangement imo, better just use 1/1 for 1 like 01:15:958 (1) - instead its fine
03:20:633 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1) - please use some normal whistles on them? so that they can help players undstand what you're mapping to
03:24:140 (2) - why using whistle and clap at the same time in this part? sounds quite awkward imo, also it's inconsistent with your former kiais. there are many similar ones like 03:24:919 (7,3) - , plz check them yourself yea i originally had this to make the last chorus sound more important than the others but i guess its stupid so ill change it back
03:26:477 (7) - I'm really not a fan of these random 3/4 sliders they're fine imo
04:12:062 (1,4) - better avoid this overlap which doesn't look so nice

that's all for me
Good luck

thank you for your mod c:
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