eldnl wrote:

[General]

BG is 1365x768 Please change it to 1024x768 (I Play with 800x600 and can't see the background x.x)

[Easy]

00:01:269 (1~) are really needed so many new combos? red=left, blue=right. follow this.
00:34:372 (1,1,1) Again ? x.x ^
00:45:406 (3) 1 Grid Left changed in another way.
00:46:096 (4) 1 Grid up done.
01:04:717 (1~) I can't see the reason for so many new combos as i said before.
01:32:475 (1,2) Hidden sliders on easy difficulty ! changed 2 down a bit
02:01:269 (1~) You use this in the choir, but is it really necessary? x.x of course.

Mapset looks good

[Normal]

not think it's very difficult for a normal difficulty? no.

00:35:406 (x) Add a note ? no.

[Rin]


01:50:234 (3,4,5,6) Anti-Jump, but still look good, I suggest you change it no. it's a slow-down part.

I love your maps

Star

karenying wrote:

Easy
00:54:374 (4) - 這么短的slider這樣拉真的好嗎 路径考虑。
01:00:581 (1) - lol這箭頭 。
01:01:960 (2) - ^ ^

坑爹啊

nante wrote:

[General]
spinner-circle is wrong-highlighted and is trembling while spinning it used to work fine in the wowaka series....?
Those colour combos don't look nice... I mean it's quite random when the colour pops out. I thought you're using any pattern, but couldn't find any... combos colors follow the video and the rule as following:
Red -- Hidari (left)
Blue -- Migi (right)
Green -- somewhere inbetween, or use for Miku
Black & White -- as a common combo color.

it's not that fun if i explained all... *sigh.

so for sure i won't change the new combos...
[Easy]
00:33:684 (1) - remove new combo
00:34:719 (1) - ^
00:35:064 (1) - ^
01:32:477 (1,2) - these 2 sliders should start at full beat. Yeah, I know there isn't vocal or anything to follow, but still feels better to play emm... since the whole map is vocal-based, i keep it there and probably won't change.

1. Set Playfield Bg Color .

Zorlok_ wrote:

-Mod

-General

1. Set Playfield Bg Color what. i have a BG why i need to set color.

-Timing

-Easy

combo color spam. read creator's words, *sigh. the explanation is somewhere in this thread too.
I think it's very difficult for Easy


-Normal

Permanent combo spam. ^

01:06:098 (1) - Grid. One call up. moved slightly
02:47:477 (1) - ^ ^

-Hard


00:34:374 (1,1,1) - Can make even a triangle? changed another way
00:42:822 (1) - Trim under a stack of 00:42:305 (1) - no.
01:45:408 (1,2,3) - One call down? D: no.

-Rin


01:08:857 (1) - Trim under a stack of 01:07:477 (1) - no. it's not for stack.
02:50:236 (1) - Trim under a stack of 02:48:856 (1) - ^
03:04:374 (5) - Trim under from stream after stacked it is there.

Nice :3
Good luck~
Star~


My map http://osu.ppy.sh/s/24111 Thank you
*sigh. i'll mod. but when you mod some other one's map, could you try to understand "why this technique is used"?

pieguy1372 wrote:

General:

-I love the combo color effects <3

Easy:

01:14:374 (1,1,1) - Too far apart changed with grid level 4
02:10:926 (1,1,1) - ^ ^
02:31:271 (4) - New combo, then remove it from (1) on the next combo and put a new combo on 02:34:374 (2) no.
02:44:029 (1) - It would be nice if the "bump" occurred in the middle of the slider changed a bit.
03:06:788 (1,1,1) - Too far apart. Also, it would be nice if this was flipped or something to differentiate it from the other parts like this. changed with grid level 4

Normal:

00:05:408 (2) - New combo thanks. missed.
00:10:926 (3) - ^ this one on purpose
00:15:753 (6) - New combo and remove it from (1) on the next combo no.
00:20:581 (6) - ^ ^
00:53:684 (4) - Too close to (3) it's 2/1 long so i think ok.
00:57:477 (1) - Too far from (1) it's in 0.75x pattern, so 1.40x is not really far.
01:03:339 (3) - Too close to (2) yes changed a bit. but can't get really better since it touches the bottom of screen.
01:07:477 (1) - Too close to (3) not hard to read in fact.
01:48:857 (1) - It would be nice if the "bump" was in the middle of the slider changed.
02:29:374 (1) - While this slider follows the song, I don't like how it's just a 1/4 slider out there without anything next to it. Perhaps start it a 02:29:202 and end it where it starts currently? no.
02:29:374 (1,1,1,1,1,1) - Too close to each other, and uneven (especially when you have the next slider the same distance but closer on the timeline) follow the pitch and it's not that hard.
02:44:029 (1) - It would be nice if the "bump" was in the middle of the slider no. since this slider "bump" when the long sound is going a "circle" and fits well.
02:45:408 (1) - I'm not sure I like the shape of this slider, or how it's halfway under (1) flashback effect.
02:48:856 (1) - Too close to (3) no.

Hard:

00:05:408 (4) - New combo fixed.
00:20:926 (4) - Awkward slider..why?
00:35:408 (1) - Are sliders like this rankable? o_o Even if it is, this slider looks weird. i guess rankable and not that weird.
00:39:029 (1) - Too far from (5) IMO it's hard so fine?
00:42:822 (1) - I'm not sure I like how it underlaps (1) like that. Perhaps move it? it's just a style of stack.
00:44:029 (1) - ^ ^
02:26:098 (1,2,3) - (nazi) Not entirely symmetrical fixed
02:30:581 (1,1,1,1) - Too close to the notes before follow the pitch as i said.
02:44:029 (1) - It would be nice if the "bump" was in the middle of the slider moved a bit
02:45:408 (1) - I'm not sure I like the shape of this slider, or how it's halfway under (1) flashback effect again.
02:46:098 (2) - New combo? no. would make the colors not so good.
02:57:133 (1,2,1,2) - Confusing a bit but it's hard.= =
03:00:064 (2) - Confusing stacked like this, move it somewhere else not really

Rin:

00:06:788 (2) - New combo no. blue -- right.
00:09:891 (2) - ^ no. use all green for the shape
00:11:271 (4) - ^ ^
00:35:753 - Add a note emm..hard to add. (2 is where the vocal begins).
00:35:926 (2) - New combo video based.
00:38:167 (1,2) - Switch these notes nice idea.
01:01:960 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - What the... I'm not sure this fits, but you might be able to keep it keep
01:32:477 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - I'm not sure I agree with the decreased spacing here anyway
01:36:443 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - This is somewhat ridiculous and is a huge difficulty spike compared with the rest of the map, considering these notes aren't even touching. Perhaps turn each group of three notes into a repeat slider? i've thought about this for quiet long, and got some testers (SnowWhite, Rucker, etc.), seems fine for pros. if it's really needed i'll chage, but repeated sliders is not that great (and it's not even Hard)
01:52:995 (1) - This slowdown confused the heck out of me. Perhaps end the slider at 01:53:339 and put a note where it ends?
01:54:202 (6) - Move one level 3 grid down
01:54:546 (2) - I'm not sure this slider fits. If you keep it, though, it would be nice if the "bump" was in the middle of the slider. compared to the "Ura" before i think it fits.
01:58:512 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - I'm not sure this quite fits i think...fine.
02:01:271 (1) - End it 1/2 earlier and put a note where it ends? k, since it makes it less confusing for the next notes.
02:02:650 (1) - ^ ^
02:26:098 (4,5,1) - (nazi) Not exactly symmetrical don't really care them... fixed.
02:28:857 (1,2) - Though it fits the song, it sounds odd. I'm not sure how to fix it. Perhaps you could make (1) end 1/2 earlier and move (2) where (1) ends? no
02:36:960 - Add a note? there's not such a sound
02:31:960 (1,2) - Doesn't touch the previous group, like the other groups do. I think it would be nice if you changed it so it does. no. it from ED to GF, so no touch for sure.
02:37:908 (5) - Extend it by one repeat and move 6 closer follow the instrument, no.
02:38:339 (6) - Too close to (1), but if you do the previous suggestion it should fix itself fixed this one
02:41:960 - Add a note? no.
02:44:029 (1) - It would be nice if the "bump" was in the middle of the slider changed a bit.
02:45:408 (1) - I'm not sure I like the shape of this slider, or how it's halfway under (1) flashback
02:56:270 (1,2,1,2,3) - Confusing, especially because the other parts like this have a different pattern so it's the highest diff. spacing changed at first 1&2, then just to follow. as i see pros could easily get it at first try.
02:59:891 (1) - I was expecting this to only have 1 repeat instead of 3 I recommend either making this have 3 repeats or making the others have 1 changed notes before this.

Awesome map. *stars*

haha5957 wrote:

[General]
I think circle colors are too confusing (black and gray)



For easy and Normal I can't really say anything <<

[Hard]
00:07:305 (1,2,3,4,5) I think it's better when this stream curves upper side i need some space for the next combos' shape
00:09:546 (1,1,2,3) doesn't this look kinda mess? I think It's better when you move the first (1) to the right.. hehe. this is probably how i map.
00:43:684 (1,1) this makes me play 1/4 or 1/2.. as 1/1 it's too close i think with a new combo and the songs flow it should be fine. back a step i can't think of a better place to put it (it should be at the center anyway)
02:01:788 (2,1,2) I think this is too confusing even for hard though.. not a problem but I feel like this is insane check Shinxyn's Hards.../runs. well it's a bit hard, but i have a really insane Insane diff, so Hard should be a little harder than average.

[Rin]
00:27:477 (6~) I think this place isn't good why it's there is "check the video"
00:30:408 (1,2,3,4,5) I think stream first - holding at last is better to play (same for others like this) yes you're right.
00:35:150 (1,1) why not jump between these? because it would be hard to put notes after (still check the video)
01:35:064 (1,1,1) isn't it better to make it not overlapped with previous stream..? reason of overlap is... orz...check the video thanks.
02:01:271 (1~) I think this is too confusing but maybe just because I'm not pro enough should be fine imo


I tried preety hard as a new modder.. but I wonder if this will help you.

try to use your knowledge and think in the mapper's way. it's pretty hard to do but... a nice way to learn and grow

of course star

qinche wrote:

00:41:788 (1) - 呃，这段粉色的为什么不用绿色的note 用连续交替的效果然后到下一个黑-红会好，个人意见
01:03:339 (1) - 换圆slider会不会更好，vid里面也是涟漪状的 好主意
01:09:546 (1,1) - 根据vocal高低换一下吗？没想那么多。因为牵扯到排版多了些，所以不动了

路过扔星

Krisom wrote:

General-
·Add "Left and Right" to the tags, as it is the english title of this song. added.
·The spinner spin is not clearly visible when spinning or standing still. I reccomend you to add something to it so players can notice the spin animation (also yes I know this spinner has been ranked before but you should try to correct this) let's see.
·Tickrate 2 would suit better imo... maily because it would be awkward to have tick rate 2 for the slow down part, so probably no. and it would increase score a bit much btw.
·I personally find the dark combocolor hard to see when stacked, it might be me, so ask around just to make sure. changed to 96 96 96

Easy-
Nothing worht mentioning

Normal-
Nothing worht mentioning

Hard-
Nothing worht mentioning

Rin-
01:41:615 (1,2,3) - This is confusing. As (2) overlaps perfectly (3) in a way that (2) could be a 1/2 slider, and also (1) is stacking (3)'s start, I find hard to recognize (3) as a slider, curve it or move it a bit. moved 2 another way.

I don't find much stuff gameplay wise, I could go bitchy and try to find stuff but that'd be forcing it.
btw, nice wowaka-like song , I didn't knew this composer, will search more of his works~ unfortunately it seems to be his first try for this kind of style...= =

I can't pass Rin, I'm sorry , I'll leave you MAT star and star though, nice colorhaxes you have here.
i know your rule , why sorry ww

eveless wrote:

这么急着泡干嘛又没BAT

Kochiya Sanae wrote:

你终于做了一张可以明目张胆黑你的图了 恭喜